posted on 23-Jan-2003 6:20:38 PM
TITLE: SCREWED UP WORLD
CATEGORY: AU
RATING: R
DISCLAIMERS: I don’t own any of them except for the human dupes
Summary: Basically it a story about the NY four and their human friends who just happen to look a little like the Roswell humans. It will have the Roswell four in it also.
Mickey = Maria
Elena =Liz
Tony = Alex
Danny = Kyle

Note: Thanks to Caryl and Monnie for beta reading for me.





Part 1
New York:

YO! Devlin what’s up? Anthony Worchoski, better known as Tony, called out to his long time best friend Mickey Devlin; known by most guys as the “She-Devil”. Mickey led a double life; during the week she was a high school student on the weekends a stripper. Tony thought she had the body to do it but wouldn’t mention that out loud or around her boyfriend Rath. Tony didn’t think that he should to think about things like that because he didn’t know if Rath could mind read or not. Rath wasn’t just any guy. He happened to be an actual alien from another freaking planet. Mickey found out because when they kissed once she had visions, and saw the crash.

In actuality, Tony and his friends were dating the other three aliens. Elena Ortecho, was with Zan he’s supposedly the leader of their home planet. Danny Vinceti was with Ava, and he was with Lonnie, Zan’s sister.

Anthony noticed that Mickey’s Irish temper was getting the best of her; she was shoving her books in her locker. “What’s the matter Rath acting like an asshole again?” Tony asked as he leaned up against his locker.

“Yes, but that’s not the point. The point is that I can do whatever I want. He doesn’t have any say in what I do. It’s my body, my life,” Mickey said, as she slammed her locker in frustration.

“ So what did he do or say this time?” Tony asked curiously as he put an arm around her and walked with her down the hall.

“ He said that no bitch of his was going to strip for any man but him. Then I decked him, told him not to call me a bitch again, and that if he didn’; like it he could just jack himself off because he wasn’t going to be getting any from me for a while.”


“ Way to go Mickey”! Tony laughed. Rath was tough but when it came to Mickey he was a total pussy. Tony couldn’t wait to tell Zan and Danny.

Elsewhere in New York:

“Rath couldn’t believe that Mickey was stripping for a bunch of horny human men. She told she made more money stripping in two nights than she ever would being a waitress. Rath didn’t care about the money. Mickey was his and didn’t need to be showing her body to anyone but him. Rath never thought he’d fall for a human but Mickey was different. She was tough and had a fiery spirit. She had long red hair, and green eyes, plus she was great in bed, which was a plus for him.

“Rath! Get out of Mickey mode and listen to what I have to say,” Zan yelled at him. Zan recognized the glazed look that Rath had. Zan knew that Rath was thinking of Mickey. More than likely, he was thinking of sex and Mickey. “ One night without sex and you’ve lost brain cells,“ Lonnie said crossing her arms and looking up at Rath. The boy was whipped. Lonnie liked Mickey, most people were afraid of Rath but she wasn’t Mickey could always put him in his place.

“ Lon can we not talk about my lack of sex? What were you saying Zan?” Rath questioned turning his attention back on the little group meeting.” We goin’ to Roswell, New Mexico,” Zan responded.

“Why we goin’ to that shity town? Rath asked.

“Because that’s where the granolith is and also our dupes. I think it’s time we met,” Zan told them. The New York Four had been pushed to go to this summit thing that neither himself, Rath, Lonnie, or Ava wanted to go to. Zan thought that maybe they could get their dupes to replace them or make them replace them. None of them wanted to leave their human lovers for Antar. The four planned on taking their human lovers with them to Roswell. Zan wasn’t leaving Elena behind with the little rat Nicholas running around the city. He knew that Rath wouldn’t leave Mickey and the girls would want their boyfriends to come to.

“So when do we leave?” Ava asked.

“ Tomorrow,” Zan said. They would leave as soon as they could get everyone together.



TBC
Part 2

Rath climbed up the fire escape at Mickey’s apartment building. He was going to tell her that they were going to Roswell to meet the dupes. When he got to her window he saw her taking off her clothes and getting ready for bed. Evidently He came at a very good time. He used his power to unlock the window, he raised it up from the out side and crawled in.

Mickey heard the rustling of the window opening and rushed to throw a tee shirt over her and find a deadly object. She momentarily sighed when she saw that it was Rath, but that movement came in went when she remembered she was mad at him.

“Are you trying to scare the shit out of me?” She crossed her arms and waited for his lame answer.

“No babe, pack your bags we leaving,” Rath barked out.

Mickey let out a little laugh before her face turned serious, “Says who?”

“Says Zan that's who? Now we leavin’ tomorrow so don’t diddle around,” Rath told her.

Mickey was pissed there he went again trying to tell her what to do. “Rath, do you have a clue to what our fight was about…hmmm. It was about you trying to tell me what to do. Ain’t no man telling me what to do. You got that. Now Zan may be you leader but he ain’t mine so don’t go telling me we're leaving because Zan said you guys are leaving.”



“I figured you go because you're my woman and you're supposed to stand by me and shit.” Rath never seen her so pissed, well actually he had but he was horny and she was sexy when she was so mad that her chest would heave in and out and stuff like that.

“Yes, I’ll stand by you, but I won’t be told what to do.You know I hate that!” She could see the lust in his eyes and knew that he wasn't listening to a word she said.

“So are you goin’? Rath’s eyebrow was raised and in a quizzed sort of way.

“Are you askin’?” She just wanted him to ask because he wanted her to go. Not demand her to go or tell her to go because Zan said so.

“Fine, will you go to freakin’ Roswell, New Mexico with me?" He noticed her staring at him like she was waiting for something else. What did she want him to beg?

Rath smiled, walked up to her and circled her waist with his arm. He brought her to him looked in her eyes, and addressed her, “Mickey, will you please go to Roswell with me. I’ll be lonely without you.” He added as he kissed her neck, secretly smirking at how corny that sound.

“Maybe, if you promise to be good.” Mickey grinned knowing Rath was hardly ever good but she couldn't help but give in as he worked on a pleasure zone. It made her realize that she would be lonely without him. No matter how bad he acted she loved him and deep down she knew that he loved her, even though he never admit it. One thing was for sure she'd always give into him. She hated it that he ruined her for other men. This was her last thought before he took her to a place like no simple earth man could the land of complete and utter ecstasy.


TBC...

I was wondering if anyone could beta read this. The one I had when I started writing the story but she's no longer in the fandom.

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posted on 25-Jan-2003 2:47:10 PM
I'm working on the 3rd part today. I have the fourth part to Dangerously Exposed done and I'm waiting for Ripley to send it back. Thanks Luv Rug I'll send you the part once I finish.
posted on 26-Jan-2003 12:35:35 AM
Luv Rug, I just sent it to you through b-mail.
posted on 26-Jan-2003 11:35:40 PM
Thanks to Luv Rug for beta reading this. Here's the next part.

Everyone was waiting for Rath and Mickey to show up. Zan couldn’t believe that he never came home last night no wait a minute he could it was Rath. Rath never did what he was told unless it was Mickey and even then it was after a ton of verbal usage. It was 11:00 at night so they should be there well unless Mickey killed him for being an ass.

“Elena, can you call Mickey and tell her to tell Rath to get his ass here?” Zan asked.

“Sure baby, but I’m not getting the blame for pissing her off, that’s all on you.” Elena told him knowing that her best friend didn’t like to be told what too do. Just as she was about to dial up her friends number Rath came walking in dragging a reluctant Mickey behind him.

“I’m not so sure I want to go now. I mean why the hell are we going to a freakin’ desert.” Mickey asked. She was a city girl and the idea of being out in a small desert town full of dust and pretty much nothing wasn’t appealing.

“ We’re goin’ because are dupes are there,” Rath explained.

“ Dupes? You mean like duplicates? So there’s more than one of you?” Elena couldn’t believe what she was hearing.

“Yep, there are more of us. We’re goin’ to see if they want to go to this summit instead of us we think they have what the Skins are after anyway.” Zan told her taken her hand in his.


“And what if they won’t go or give it up?” Danny asked he didn’t want Ava to get hurt.

“We make them,” Rath stated as if it were that simple.

Mickey looked at him like he’d lost his mind, “ Yeah and what if they’re more powerful then you. Do you think you can make them then?

Before Rath could comment Ava spoke up, “ Look even if they don’t go at least we can warn them about the granolith any ways. Besides I still don’ t see why any of us needs to go home period. It’s not like they’d be welcoming us with open arms.”

“The summit isn’t just about us goin home its about Khivar gettin’ his hands on the granolith. I don’t trust Khivar or any one else from the alliance at the moment. All they want is control they don’t give a shit about us.” Zan wasn’t about to walk into no trap he knew better.

“ Well, besides the granolith I know one thing Khivar wants and that’s Volandra.” Tony said with spite. He knew all about Lonnie’s past life affair with Khivar, Lonnie told him about it. He also knew that she was still drawn to him whether she wanted to be or not and he was afraid that if Khivar got his hands on her then he would loose her forever.

“ That was the past. I’m not Volandra any more. I don’ t want Khivar, I want you.” Lonnie tried to assure him, but that the fact was she was trying to assure herself as well. She still felt Volandra inside of her and lately it was stronger.

“Look we don’t have that much time left. We need to get goin’. The summit is in a week and we need all the help we can get.” Zan didn’t want to get into a long discussion on the past not when they had so little time left before all hell broke loose.

“Okay so how are we goin’ get there?” Elena asked, none of them had any vehicles.

“ Don’t worry about that we’ve got it covered, “Rath said with a grin.


Three days latter they arrived at the city limits of Roswell, New Mexico Rath looked up and saw the welcome the welcome sign with an alien and smirked. Mickey was reading a magazine beside him in the passenger seat. The others were in the back asleep. They had stolen a black SUV back in New York.

“ Yo, dude we here,” Rath announced to Zan who was also asleep.

“ This town is a dump,” Zan replied as he leaned forward too look around.

“Yo, bro can we get some grub? I’m hungry.” Danny asked from the very back seat.

“Your always hungry.” Ava replied with a playful shove.

“I’m a growing boy. I need nourishment.” He whined and then laid his had on her shoulder and gave her puppy dog eyes.

Lonnie laughed, “Growing boy my ass.”

“Growing in other areas besides height.” Tony muttered silently with a grin.

“Grow up.” Elena demanded as she looked back at her friends.

“That’s one way of putting it.” Zan added. Elena slapped him in the stomach at the comment.

Rath heard some sirens and looked out his window to see a sheriff’s car, “Yo, 5-0.”

Everyone admittedly straightened up as Rath pulled over to the side. He looked at his window and saw a skinny man in his late 40’s with a cowboy hat walk up to him, “Drivers license’s and registration.”

The man looked into the vehicle and got a surprise of his life, “ Michael is that you? Maria?”
Sheriff Valenti couldn’t believe what he was seeing he aimed his flash light to the back and saw the others including his son. They all had a New York punk look too them.

“ Is there a costume party I don’t know about?” He could hardly contain his laughter.

Rath looked at him a little confused. He didn’t know what was going on but he kept up his guard prepared to take the man out.

“Look you’re not in trouble, but I think you should try to keep it with in the speed limit, especially with all the stuff that’s been going on with the FBI and the alien hunters. We wouldn’t

Rath figured he must know their duplicates, “ Yeah, yeah a costume party. We figured we needed a break from all the you know alien hunters.”

“Well, go on. Just be careful. Oh, Kyle and Tess try not to stay out to late.” He said looking at towards the very back to where Danny and Ava sat.

As the Sheriff left Rath looked back and the smiled with a surprised look on his face, “Damn, they got 5-0 on their sides.”

“ It seems like it. Why did he call me Maria?” Mickey asked confused.

“ Yeah and me Kyle. That’s such a sissy name.” Danny commented in disgust.

“ We don’t know. Why don’t we go get some chow and then we can figured it out.” Zan said as equally confused as they were.

Rath continued to drive around when he spotted a spaceship on the side of a building with lights flashing. It read the Crashdown, “ Well it looks like there open.”

“Well, let’s try it then.” Zan said. He didn’t care where they ate he was getting hungry as well plus he wanted out of the vehicle. It looked like an interesting enough place, but on thing came to mind, ‘tourist trap.’


TBC…


posted on 31-Jan-2003 6:18:45 PM
Okay that is like my favorite picture of Jason besides when he's dressed as Zan. Anyways thanks for the feedback again. I decided to go ahead and post this. I've had it done for a couple of days but I haven't seen Luv Rug around on the boards.

Part 4

Maria Deluca was alone in the Crashdown, well not technically, but she might as well be considering her present company who barely spoke a word to her all night. The person in question was her semi-boyfriend Michael Guiern. Right now he was more towards the direction of non-existent boyfriend. She thought they were on their way to a descant relationship granted it wasn’t lovey-dovey, but when has there’s ever been; at least they had a relationship in their terms. Then he goes and pulls away from her again, this hot and cold game was really getting too her. Especially now with this new waitress who was hanging all over him and wouldn’t take a hint that he’s not interested.

Just when she thought she was going to get to go home early a she heard the bell ring above the door. “Yo, is the grill still open.” A familiar voice belted out.

Maria turned around and received the shock of her life. Not only was there a punk version of her SpaceBoy, but of herself as well, and the rest of her friends. This was too much for her to handle maybe she could understand why Michael had a double he told her about the sets, but her. Why did she and the rest of her non-alien friends have doubles. She could feel the blood rush to her head as she started to feel faint.

“Michael!” she yelled right before she fainted.

Rath couldn’t believe his eyes. His expression had the look of a kid in a candy store, “Two Mickey’s” he said with a grin.

Mickey heard his comment and knew what was going through that pervert little head of his. She grabbed his chin and yanked his head towards her in order to make I contact with him, “ One Mickey Rath. One!”

Zan, walked up towards the Mickey looked who was on the floor and bent down to read her name tag, “Hey, bro this the Maria chick that the 5-0 was talking about.”

Michael was in the back room pantry doing inventory, when he heard Maria yell his name. She sounded panicked he quickly made it out front to see what was the matter. He was about to go through the dinning room door when he heard voices talking about Maria. He opened the door to see punk version of Max leaning over Maria.
“ Stay the hell away from her,” he barked. Instincts kicked in and he raised his hand and used his powers. Zan went flying towards the rest of the group. Rath, Mickey and Elena helped him up.

“She just fainted,” Elena explained to the Rath look alike. They watched as Michael picked Maria up and carry her towards the back. They followed him and watched as he placed her on the couch.

“Yo, we ain’t the enemy, “ Ava told him softly.

“You’re the second set, right.” Michael responded. He knew about the second set of aliens but he was surprised to see a second set of humans. He wanted to know who they were and what they were doing here.

“ Dupe you know about that?” Rath questioned his dupe.

“I know about the second set of aliens, but not humans, so who are they?” Michael demanded.

“Well, they are our boyfriends and girlfriends. We don’t know why there are two sets of them as far as we know and they know their human. Is she your girlfriend?” Lonnie asked wondering if all the Roswellians were paired off like they were. If so then it was really strange.

Michael looked over to Maria, “ It’s complicated.”

Maria hearing the conversation spoke up, “ Tell the truth Spaceboy. Your just afraid of commitment or commitment to anything or anyone from this planet, at least.”


“This is so weird.” Maria commented.

Liz heard a lot of commotion from downstairs. She was studying for a history test and the noise was beginning to bother her. She began to wonder what Michael and Maria were doing to her parent’s restaurant. Then she remembered last December during the wave and wasn’t so sure she wanted to walk in on that scene again. Her best friend basically scarred her for life. She reached the bottem steps and saw Michael talking to a group of people by the couch and Maria was just staring at them. “ What’s going on?”

“Liz, you’re not going to believe this,” Maria’s voice had excitement in it. She ran over to her best friend and pulled her over to the crowd of people. Maria was right she didn’t believe what she was seeing.

“Oh, my god. How?” Liz couldn’t believe what she was seeing. Not only was there another Michael, Max, Isabel, and Tess but there was also another her, Maria, Kyle and Alex.

Zan looked at the plain version of Elena and was starting to have the same thought as Rath when Elena said, “ Don’t even think about it.” It wasn’t what she said, but how she said it. He knew if he thought about it he’d be in the doghouse for a very long time like Rath.

“ Hey, I’m Elena Ortecho are you with his dupe?” Elena was referring to Zan.

“ Liz Parker, what about destiny?” Liz wasn’t ready to get into a long story about her and Max.

“ Destiny? We don’t give a damn about it. We do what we want. It’s our life not there’s.” Zan told her as he took a hold of Elena’s hand.

“Yeah, it’s a life we’re trying to forget.” Lonnie stated as she wrapped her arm around Tony’s shoulder.

“We love each other, but in a brother and sister type way. We grew up together. We watched out for each other.” Ava added.

“Well then maybe you can teach your duplicates a thing or two.” Maria retorted glaring at Michael.

“You know me and Isabel aren’t trying to get together. The reason I called off our relationship had nothing to do with that but the fact that your in danger and I may not be able to protect you.” Michael just wished that she would understand. He loved her but he was afraid of hurting her and not just her emotions.

“Never mind. I’m going to call up the others I’m so sure they’ll be interested in seeing their doubles.” Maria’s voice sounded defeated. She went to get her cell phone from her locker and started calling the rest of the gang. She told everyone that they needed to get to the Crashdown as soon as possible or as she put it pronto.

Meanwhile when Maria was talking on the phones the others Liz was getting to know a little bit about the dupes she was really interested in knowing her own and how she and Zan met. Rath on the other hand decided to have a talk with his dupe about Mickey’s double. “ Yo, bro can we talk in private.”

Michael nodded his head and him and Rath went out into the dinning room area. Michael went to lock the door, and turn the close sign over before they started to talk. Michael grabbed a chair and so did Rath they both sat face-to-face starring at each other face to face. Finally Rath said something, “Bro are you stupid or somethin’?”

TBC...
























posted on 6-Feb-2003 10:18:26 AM
I'm stil working the next part. It's taking a little more time. I've been under a lot of stress and it's been making me sick, so I haven't really felt like writing, but I have started it.
posted on 8-Feb-2003 10:23:04 PM
I'm going to try to finsh the next part tomorrow. I've been starting to feel better. I just haven't felt like writing lately, so hopefully it will be up in a day or two. Again I appologize for keeping you guys waiting.