|posted on 9-Apr-2002 3:03:41 AM by roswelllover|
Title: Baby Be Mine
Disclaimer: own nothing it all belongs to UPN and Jason Katims
Category: AU, M/L
Summary: max and Liz are popular as are Michael, Alex, Kyle, Tess, Maria, Isabel and Serena, max and Liz hate each other but seemingly fate brings them together.
Liz, tess, Isabel, Maria and Serena walked down the halls of West Roswell High in their cheerleading uniforms the rest of the student body stooped and stared, it was the daily routine the guys worshipped while the girls either envied or bitched.
The other girls left towards the school gym while Liz went to her locker, Liz was getting her books when someone came and leaned against the lockers next to her, and she knew exactly who was there
“Piss off Evan’s I have cheerleading practice” Liz said without glancing at hi.
“No need to get pissy Parker” max said while smirking
“Is there something you want” Liz asked as she narrowed her eyes at him.
“No” max said still smirking
“Don’t you have football practise, they need their captain you know” Liz said
“Yeah I do have football practise but I'm sure they won’t mind if I'm a little late, besides I think my teams getting to clingy I feel like I'm in a gay cult” max said
Liz mumbled something
“What was that” max asked
Liz slams her locker door and walks off towards the gym and max heads to football practise
What do you think, like/hate FB plz
[ edited 71time(s), last at 31-Dec-2002 11:31:28 PM ]
|posted on 9-Apr-2002 9:12:02 PM by roswelllover|
| thanxs for all the feedback here’s part 2|
After cheerleading practise the girls are packing their stuff to go home “hey guys you wanna do something tonight’ Liz asked.
“Sorry Liz I have plans” Isabel said
“It here Michael's taking me out” Maria said
“Same here, I have a date with Kyle” Serena said
“Your bailing on me and Tess” Liz said
“There our boyfriends Liz were sorry but them taking us out is like 1out of 100 chance of happening and where taking advantage of it” Isabel said
“Fine, Tess it looks like it’s only you and me” Liz said
Kyle, Michael and Alex come into the gym
“Hey” Kyle said
“Were ready to go” Serena said
The three girls picked up their bags and walked to their significant other and before they left they said goodbye to Liz and Tess
“Lets go” Liz said and they headed home
Liz and Tess had finished watching scary movie 2 and the fast and the furious on dvd and were now eating ice cream and talking
“So Liz, why do you hate max so much” Tess asked
“Where is this coming from” Liz asked
“ I don’t know just curious I mean you guys looked like you hated each other even before I first came to Roswell” tess answered as she ate a mouth full of ice cream
“I think it started in junior high, I liked him then and before then he was sweet and everything you’d want in a guy and then one day he turned up and he’d changed his attitude said ‘im the man’ and that pissed me off and so now we both hate each other, I mean none of his friends are like that why is he” Liz said
“ I don’t think so, I think he’s HOT” Tess said in a dream like faze
“OH MY GOD! I just so not here my best friend say that my worst enemy is hot” Liz shouted flabbergasted.
“There’s nothing wrong with him” Tess said
“ Nothing wrong, are you blind Tess, there’s his whole attitude and his presence that’s wrong” Liz said trying to defend her opinion.
“Ok, Tess let’s just move away from the subject of Max Evans” Liz said disgustedly.
“ So who you going to take to the prom” Tess asked
“I don’t know, there’s so many guys out three who’d probably want to go with me but I'd choose Sean I guess” Liz said
“Sean.... He seems like your type” Liz said.
“Who you going to go to prom with’ Liz asked
“I don’t know, I'll figure out something when the time comes” Tess said
“Fair enough” Liz said
2 hours later Tess left to go home and Liz went to sleep.
FB plz - I know not enough max and Liz interaction but there'll be lots of that later on
|posted on 10-Apr-2002 11:40:51 PM by roswelllover|
West Roswell High had won 64-52 against South Roswell High with max scoring the winning goal now there was a ‘after party’ at Paul Newman's house.
Everone was now at the party after going home and changing, Isabel is dancing with Alex, Maria with Michael and Serena with Kyle, max; Liz and Tess were dancing with random people
Max walked outside to get air, when he saw someone come and stand beside him
“Hi max” Tess said
“Aren’t you suppose to hate me” max asked narrowing his eyes
“Just cuz Liz does doesn’t mean everyone else has to” Tess said smiling
“Oh, just figured you being Liz's best friend you would too” max said surprised
“Nope, do you want to go sit down” Tess asked
“Sure” they moved to the garden bench and sat down
“So is there are reason you came out here” max asked
“No, just needed some air” Tess answered
“Same” max answered
“Max you free Saturday night’ Tess asked
“Yeah” max said
“I'll call you on Friday” Tess said
“Lets go back inside’ max said as he took Tess’s hand and headed back inside and danced together
Liz started getting tired so she stopped dancing and went to go find tess, she saw her in the corner making out with someone *looks like tess’s found someone* Liz thought smiling, she went to her and tapped her on her shoulder knowing tess wouldn’t care for interrupting her but tess didn’t acknowledge her and continued on so Liz called he” tess, girl you’ve given your tongue enough exercise” Liz said
Tess groaned and pulled away, Liz gasped when she saw who exactly Tess was ‘sucking face’ with Max Evans the one and only
“What the hell” Liz shouted over the music, with the rest of the partiers being oblivious to the scene around them
“Hey Lizzie” max said
Liz ignored him
“You could have picked any guy and you choose HIM” Liz said talking about Max
“Liz...” Tess got cut off by max
“Tess you don't need to explain anythin to her, she aien’t your mom” max said
“Stay out of this Evans” Liz said
“No, you know what stop being a bitch and controlling people” max said as he dragged Tess away with him
|posted on 12-Apr-2002 10:42:18 PM by roswelllover|
|Thnxs for the feedback|
There’s only 2 days until prom, Sean asked me and I said yes, I'm the captain of the cheerleading squad there is no way I'm going stag, there’s one thing that is nagging me you see not only did tess make out with max she’s NOW going out with him it’s been 2 weeks and I seriously can not get over that, I mean think about it your best friend going out with your enemy since junior high, just not working for me arrrg he’s only doing this to piss me off and you know what it’s working but I'd die before telling him that, I'm over at Isabel's preparing for the prom the good thing is her dick of a brother isn’t home god, if your out there listening I love you., well not really but .......
The girls were getting ready at Maria's house and from their dates would come and pick them up and they’d all travel in a long stretch limo to vae dinner first than go to school where prom would be held the guys rang the door bell to Maria's house and Amy opened the door and greeted them inside “come on in, the girls are nearly ready” any said
Amy went upstairs and came down a few minutes later with Isabel who was wearing a blue strapless dress with blue heels, Serena who was wearing a black off the shoulder dress with black stellios, Maria who was wearing a pale green Chinese wrap around dress with pale green heels, Liz was wearing a red spaghetti full length dress with red strappy heels and her hair put with curly strands
And tess who was wearing a light pink strapless dress tat ended at the thigh with 3 inch heels the girls went to their dates and were given their corsage Amy took photo’s and they so left but before they left “ be back my midnight” may called out giving them a look that said ‘do as I say or else’ Maria shouted a yes to her mom and rushed out the door before they were given the sex speech
After dinner they all headed to school where it was going to be held, the 5 couples went in and everyone separated and went to the dance floor.
“ Ladies and Gentleman it’s time to announce this year’s prom King and Queen” everyone gathered around the stage and one of teachers came to announce them “he’s the captain of the basketball and football team give a hand to Max Evan’s this years Prom King” the teacher announced everyone cheered for him as max made his way up to the stage and they played the crown on his head
“No for our prom Queen she’s the captain of the cheerleading squad give a hand to Liz Parker” the teacher announced, Liz groaned the year she gets Prom Queen the king had to max she stood rooted in her position until Maria pushed her al heads were turned her way “ go get your crown girl” Maria said
And Liz went up on stage forcing a smile on her face
“This is something I have to see” Kyle said
“Now it’s time for the king and Queen to have their dance” the people moved to make room for them and the light shone down on the spot, max and Liz went out onto the dance floor everyone was waiting to see what would happen since the to could never be civil with each other Edge of the ocean by Ivy started, Liz looked at max as she out her hand on his shoulder “this is the one and only time I am letting you be this physically close to me” Liz pointed out.
“ I hate this as much as you, I want this to end as fast as it can so I can go back to my date” max said as he put his arm around her and rested his hand on her back.
Liz couldn’t help but feel giddy that max was this close to her, they’d never been near each other physically as much as they were here, she scowled at her self “ shut up, he’s your enemy” Liz wasn’t showing that she was liking it though her expression was blank as they danced to the song, soon everyone around them joined in and danced with their respective other, tess and Sean danced together since their dates were already dancing tess wasn’t feeling happy for her friend though she was curing her in her head *bitch stole my crown, and has her hands on my boyfriend that'll be over soon though* tess smirked
“I'm doing this to keep my reputation up; I've wanted to be prom queen for a long time, so don't get any ideas” Liz said as they danced
“I'm not getting any ideas, and if I were I wouldn’t be thinking of them with you’ max said back
“Is that your hand on my ass” Liz asked
Liz stood on his foot” OW!, what the hell” max whispered fiercely.
Liz lifted her brow “sorry” she said sarcastically
Max didn’t do anything else as he was still recovering form his foot injury but he’d get her back before the end of the night it was now his mission too.
Prom hasn’t finished yet; I'll continue it on in the next part FB plzzz
|posted on 15-Apr-2002 9:31:54 PM by roswelllover|
| frget to mention rating is pg-13-R (for language)|
I appreciate all the feedback here’s part 5
when the song ended max and Liz pulled away from each other as fast as lightning, Liz walked back to Sean and max walked back to tess who pulled max to her to show he was taken, Liz kissed Liz and congratulated her then Maria came up to her “oh chicha your dream came true” Maria said as she embraced her.
“Thanks Ria” Liz said smiling,
Tess came and embraced Liz as soon as Maria pulled away “I'm so happy for you Liz” Tess forced out and put on a fake smile.
“Thank you Tess, that means a lot” Liz said
“Lets go dance” tess said pulling max onto the dance floor as few minutes later tess looked at max after forming a plan “ max you know you Liz can’t be prom queen cuz she doesn't like you” tess said
“Aren’t you suppose to be Liz's best friend last time I checked cuz, why yo breaking her moment of happiness not that I wouldn't like to break it but I'm curious as to why you are” max said
“I am Liz's best friend but you’re my boyfriend to and I think it's fair if we followed the rules and have a queen that you like” Tess said sweetly
“What do you want me to do” max asked
“Go tell Ms Harlin that Liz can’t be prom queen and that you nominate me to be” Tess said
“Ok” max said being the dense jock he is and went to find Ms Harlin
“Ms Harlin, I nominate Tess to be prom queen cuz you can’t have a queen that doesn't like her king and well Liz and me don’t like each other” max said
“Well that’s too bad Mr Evans because your going to have to either withdraw your position as Prom king or live with your ego, there is nothing in the rules that say prom king and queen must like each other” Ms Harlin said and walked away
‘Bitch” max mumbled as he walked back to Tess
“What’d she say baby” Tess said as she snaked her arms around Max’s waist
“She said that there’s no rule that says that prom king and queen have to like each other, if it bothered my ego as she so well put it then I have to withdraw as king” max said
Tess's smile faded* looks like fate stepped in the way Lizzie, but don’t be so sure* Tess thought “it’s ok max, maybe next year” Tess said
Across the hall Maria looked on at max and Tess in disgust “ does she ever stop being a whore” Maria thought out loud “and could max be any less dense, those two are sickening I tell you”
“ I thought you liked her” Michael said
“No, I only pretended to because she’s one Liz's Best Friends’ Maria said then saw a pissed Liz making her way to max and tess
“ I wonder what got her pissed” Maria said concerned
Liz had went to get refreshments when she heard max tell Ms Harlin that she couldn’t be Prom Queen because they didn't like each other*how dare he* Liz thought and dropped her cup in the bench and made her way to him,
Max saw Liz coming and boy did she look pissed he knew that he was the one who’d receive it and prepared himself for it
“MAX EVANS WHO THE FUCK DO YOU THINK YOU ARE!” Liz shouted and lowered her voice
“You knew how much I wanted to be prom queen and you make up some shit about me not being able to because we hate each other, well you got the hate but right didn’t you” Liz said
“Hey it was Tess's idea” max said
“DON’T YOU DARE PULL TESS INTO THIS EVANS, SHE MAY BE YOUR GIRLFRIEND BUT I AHVE KNOWN HER LONGER THAN YOU HAVE, IT WAS ALL A PLAN WASN’T IT DATE TESS, HAVE LIZ HATE TESS, WHAT WOULD YOU ACCOMPLISED OUT OF THAT HMM MAX!” Liz shouted
“FUCK YOU LIZ I HAVE MORE IMPORTANT THINGS TO DO THAN RUIN YOUR PERFECT RICH LIFE!” Max shouted back
Tess smirked as she watched the two shout at each other * Lizzie parker, if you really knew how I felt you wouldn’t be defending my honour, cuz bitch I'm not backing down until I take what belongs to me* Tess thought
“THIS IS YOUR WAY OF REVENGE ISN’T IT MAX, FOR BEFORE WELL EVANS YOU JUST MADE YOUR LIFE A LIVING HELL, CUZ AS LONG AS I’M LIVING YOU ARE SO GONNA PAY!” Liz shouted and stalked away
“I DON’T KNOW WHY YOUR SO PISSED ABOUT PARKER, YOUR STILL PROM QUEEN, AND A FRIDGID WHORE” Max shouted back
For those of you who thought Tess was gonna be nice sorry to burst your bubble but I'm afraid she’s still her Gerbil self...FB plzz
|posted on 17-Apr-2002 3:30:33 AM by roswelllover|
|Thnxs for the awesome feedback, no it’s the point in the fic where fate will seemingly step into max and Liz's lives but not in this chapter here’s part 6|
Isabel had invited Liz, Maria, Tess and Serena over to her house they were having a sleepover, meaning Liz was going to have to see Isabel's asshole of a brother for more than 8 hours of any normal day
“Guys, do you think I should hold a pool party this weekend” Serena asked
“Yeah that’d be great cuz it’s so hot now” Isabel said
“Yeah and I need to test out my new bikini” Tess said
Maria rolled her eyes, could you make me gag she thought
“It’s settled then, how ‘bout this Saturday” Serena asked
“Great” Liz said
“Dinners ready girls” Diane shouted
The girls made their way downstairs, Liz sat as far away from max as possible and they had a glaring showdown, Diane smirked she never understood her one's and Liz parkers behaviour to one another but now found amusing they were acting out their feelings for each other through anger she could tell how much her son was mitten with Liz, she didn't like tess though she seemed to clingy and she didn't like it, Liz was a good influence better than tess
Everyone finished eating and Liz and Maria stayed behind to help do the dishes but Diane waved them off and said that they were guests and that they didn’t have to do them she then called max
“But mom, why doesn’t izzy have to do them” max whined
“Because she has guests and has keep them company” Diane said handing the dishcloth to him
“But Maria and Liz offered to” max tried again
“Max you do the dishes or I'll make your shores far worse” Diane said
“Fine max” mumbled
After max was finished he had to stack them away Diane started talking to her son
“So max how was it at Michael's yesterday” Diane asked?
Liz was coming down the stairs when she heard Diane's question and answered it for max
“You were at Tess’s max remember, she told me herself that you were at her house last night” Liz said innocently
Diane gasped “is this true” she asked max open mouthed
Max glared at Liz “yes mom” max mumbled
“Maxwell Evan’s how could you lie to your mother” Diane asked
“Liz, honeys could you excuse me and max for a while” Diane said
“Yeah, Mrs Evans” and smirked at max from behind Diane and walked away
“Max, ma and your dad are going to have a talk with you” Diane said
Max walked up to his room and slammed the door *she did it on purpose the bitch set me up ‘you were at Tess’s max’ got me grounded for a week* max thought as he flopped onto his bed.
Max heard the door open ” go away!” Max shouted thinking it may be Liz coming o rub it in or Isabel to see why he had slammed the door when he saw his door shut he looked up to see tess smiling
“Hey baby” Tess said sweetly
|posted on 20-Apr-2002 10:56:48 PM by roswelllover|
|Thanks for the feedback this is the longest part I've written for this fic|
Serena had held a pool party it was Saturday and al the jocks and cheerleaders were invited
Maria was walking around in a red bikini, Isabel in a pale green, Liz in a yellow one, tess was wearing a black thong, Pam troy a ice blue thong and her other fellow worshippers wore the same
Thing, Serena was wearing a light pink bikini she headed to Kyle who was in the pool and swang her legs in the water making it splash.
After prom Liz went out with Sean more but she would consider him as her boyfriend he wasn’t her type he was great to have fun with but she couldn’t see herself going any further
Tess was annoying the hell out of Max, when he said that she could go and hang out with her friends she insisted to stay with him, when he played football with the guys she’d cheer him on and now she was standing way to close for his liking, he didn’t know why he was feeling like this he never minded when girls threw themselves at him but this was just sickening, he was really reconsidering his decision about going out with her in the first place, and her bikini looked like it was the only size in the store for her it looked like 2 sizes too small how much skin can a girl show without making a guy gag, max started looking around for a distraction and found one, Liz parker *god she’s hot* max could feel his body start responding to hers just by watching her laugh with her friends , he willed himself to calm down in case tess got the wrong idea.
Liz on the other side stopped laughing as soon as she saw max, she couldn’t help but stare at his well-built chiselled chest it was stirring feelings in her that she had never felt before, it’s one of the reasons she kept her distance from max it, made her feel things she didn’t want to feel, she’d never seen his shirtless for a long tie period and as much as she wanted to deny it she liked it, she walked to the edge of the pool and went in to cool down.
Max watched Liz as she got in the water and dived n and come up for air max knew he shouldn’t stare but he couldn’t help it Liz attracted a force within him and like a magnet it was pulling him to her.
Tess saw max looking at Liz and knew why, she wasn’t dense she just acted that way
‘Max come on lets go dance” Tess said as she pulled him towards the dance floor, which was empty
“Tess it’s 35° degrees dancing is the last thing on my mind” max said giving tess a ‘I can’t believe you suggested that’ look
“Yeah I bet I know hat’s the first” Tess murmured, but max didn't hear her
“Max can you go get me something to drink I'm really thirsty” Tess said sweetly
“Tess you have legs do it yourself” max said now getting irritated
“Maxxxxxx please I'm going to die form dehydration” Tess said
Max groaned and moved towards the refreshment table murmuring something about some of the female gender being to lazy they couldn’t even get their own drinks, but Tess didn’t hear.
It was 9:00 and everyone had gotten changed into something warmer as it had gotten colder
“Whoever wants to play 10 minutes in Heaven make your way to the closet down the hall on your right” Serena yelled before the music started again, there weren’t many people left as they had gone home because of other plans so everyone there decided to play, once everyone had made it to the room that had the closet Serena gave everyone a piece of paper and a pen to write there name on then had them be put in 2 different bowls one for the guys and one for the girls.
“I will draw your names out form each bowl and then you have 10 minutes in the closet to do whatever” Serena said
Serena and Kyle pulled the names out one by one then smirked when they saw the two names of their friends.
“Max Evans and Liz parker”
Groans could be heard from both max and Liz as their names were called out
“There is no way I'm going in there with him” Liz sad as she crossed her arms in front of her chest
“Ditto” max said
“Come one guys it's 10 minutes it won’t hurt you besides you can argue with each other if you have to were not asking you to have sex in there” Maria said as she pushed them inside and locked the door
“Maria let me out, now, Maria wait till I get out of here you are so dead” Liz yelled through the door, she looked over at max and saw him leaning against the closet wall “ you know you could be useful you know and help me here” Liz aid giving him a glare
“What’s the point they obviously want us in here so wait 10minutes not going to kill me” max said
“Kill you, no it’ll kill me cuz 10 minutes is like 10 centuries with you” Liz said
“Chill out Liz, you got PMS or something” max said
“PMS, Evan's push the damn door you’re a jock now be useful “ Liz said
“Who’s sexist now” max said
“It’s locked Liz give it up” max said trying to get through to her
“So” Liz said
“This closet is too small for my liking especially if you’re in here’ Liz said as she only had half a metre space away from max.
Max rolled his eye “do you ever shut up parker” max said
“It’s a free country there’s nothing...” Liz was cut off by Max's lips being placed on hers roughly, she tried not to respond Liz gasped as she found herself against the closet door feeling the cold wood hit her back giving max the chance to plunge his tongue inside her mouth, Max's hands were in her hair, and Liz's arms found their way around his neck.
Everyone was worried something must’ve happened to max and/or Liz, as they couldn’t hear any voices like before so Tess went and opened the door.
Max and Liz fell out of the closest onto the floor max on top of Liz, max looked up and saw everyone looking at them.
Everyone looked at them and saw their dishevelled appearances, max and Liz's hair were tousled their lips were red and swollen they could see now why they were so quiet
“Care to explain why my boyfriend and Best friend were doing that’s made them look like they had just been interrupted in make out session” Tess asked with a raised eyebrow
“I kissed her cause she wouldn’t shut up then she wouldn’t let go” max said as he got up dusted himself off leaving Liz still on the floor
Liz huffed “Jerk! You’re the one who kissed me and wouldn’t let go’ Liz said pissed; she glared at him, as she stood up on her own.
“ I know you liked it” max said smirking
“Go to hell, your worst than a dried up fruit” Liz said as she pushed past the crowed and stormed off.
|posted on 23-Apr-2002 12:33:09 AM by roswelllover|
|THANKS FOR THE AWESOME FEEDBACK IT IS GREATLY APPRECIATED, HERE’S PART 8 IT’S SHORT......|
It was Tuesday and so far Liz had managed to avoid max, if she did she didn’t know what she’d do kiss him senseless or hit him til her hearts content it was lunch and Liz was walking down the hall when she got pulled into an empty classroom she turned around to see Max Evans the one person she did not want to see
“WHAT THE HELL IS YOU TRYING TO DO EVANS” Liz shouted when she saw max lock the room.
“You’ve been avoiding me” max said
“Avoiding you, Evans you should be lucky I haven't seen you cause then I'd be off your case” Liz said not letting max get to her as she tried to make it seem like she wasn’t avoiding him.
“Oh no lizzie I love you being on my case it just turns me on” max teased
“Does everything have to Turn into sex with you” Liz said rolling her eyes
“Not when it’s to do with you” max sneered
“Whatever” Liz said as she headed to the door, when she felt her self being turned around and pushed into the wall soon with Max's lips attached to hers, Liz moaned at the intensity of the kiss, and found herself opening for him, she knew she wasn’t in the state to be around him especially after Saturday and now especially after this, max knew this taunted Liz being startled upon was not something she liked and this was exactly what max was doing after she gave up her fight physically she felt the loss of Max's body heat and opened her eyes to see the door wide open, he had just left her there, Max Evan’s know knew one of her biggest weaknesses ‘max himself’ and he’d use it every chance he gets.
I know the part of short but just making use of time FB plzz , next part (hopefully) Liz finds out what tess ‘s really like tess +Liz = fight
|posted on 24-Apr-2002 7:50:44 PM by roswelllover|
|THANKS FOR THE FEEDBACK here’s part 9|
It was Friday and Liz was glad tomorrow was going to be Saturday, se and Tess were planning on going to the mall in Santa Fe for the weekend.
She saw Tess at her locker and headed towards her “hey Tess you set for tomorrow” Liz asked
“No I'm going to Las cruses with max” Tess said
“But Tess we planned this 2 weeks ago” Liz said starting to get pissed of at Tess’s attitude
“Hmm.let me see do I want to go with my boyfriend or you” Tess said pretending to think
“I think max out weighs you Liz” Tess said smirking
“Yeah well ever since you started going out with max, he’s out weighed me!” Liz shouted
“Look Liz, I don't need you anymore take a hint, I have max now and I don’t need you to be popular anymore” Tess said as she closed her locker shut and turned around to leave.
Liz pulled her back and slapped her “BITCH, YOU USED ME, I GAVE YOU MY FRIENDSHIP AND YOU THREW IT BACK IN MY FACE WELL FUCK YOU TESS I DON’T NEED YOU OR ANYONE ELSE EITHER AND IF MAX DUMPS YOU THEN DON’T COME CRAWLING BACK TO ME!” Liz shouted the students in the hall stopped and watched on as the two closet friends fought, but now knew Tess had only used her. And they never were friends at all
“HE WON'T DUMP ME, NO ONE DOES, as for you Lizzie your going down, I’ll take what’s mine very soon” Tess said to Liz as she went to slap her but Liz caught her wrist before it hit her face
“Here this tess there is no that’ll happen because guess what it never was your's now go back to Maxie and be the whore you are and leave me alone” Liz spat out threw her wrist fiercely and walked away leaving a pissed and dumbfounded tess at how easily the tables were turned and watched after Liz, forming a plan to bring her down.
Max was in the lunch quad with the guys
“Max I heard your taking Tess to Las cruses with you” Michael said smirking
“No, I only told her I was going to go to Las cruses but she invited her self” max said pissed
“Max man I feel for you” Kyle said and burst out laughing
“Why you going out with her anyway” Michael asked
“Do you want to rather hear rumours of me being GAY no thanks” max said?
“You resort yourself to, to much torture max” Alex said
Serena, Isabel and Maria came to the bench “hey did you guys her about tess and Liz fighting in the hallway 0 minutes ago” Maria said ecstatic
“What” Michael said you mean Liz finally told that god for nothing whore to piss off” Michael said grinning like a little boy whom just walked into a candy store
“Yup, that’s my chica” Maria said
“Guys could you not talk bout my girlfriend like that” max said trying hard to sound convincing
Everyone looked at him shocked “what” Kyle said
“She may be annoying at times but she’s still my girlfriend “ max said getting up “I have P.E next I better go before I get detention for being late again” max said as she picked up his book bag and went out of the lunch quad.
“What just happened” Michael said
“I think max has finally realised what he’s got himself into” Maria answered
Liz walked in after and sat next to Maria “we heard, you ok chica” Maria said
“Yeah I'm fine, I always knew somehow she didn’t appear to be who I though she was, I think I've just found out who my friends are” Liz said smiling at the people at the bench
“You know we don’t care about the popularity” Maria said
“ We may but we wouldn’t sink as low as Tess wouldn’t and besides you’ve known us way longer we got this reputation together” Isabel said
Tess saw everyone sitting at the bench except for max, she also saw Liz but decided to ignore here and went over
“Hey guys” Tess said in her oh so annoying voice
No one said anything or made her presence known
“Do you know where max is” Tess asked them louder thinking they may not of heard
“Look tess you may be Max's girlfriend but Liz's our friend and what you did to her is so low than anything I have known some one can do so don’t talk to us anymore you are no longer wanted, do what you want now but your only allowed anywhere near us if you are with max is that clear good bye tess” Maria said venomously.
Tess huffed and glared at Liz “bitch you haven’t won yet” Tess said before storming off
“That felt so good” Maria said
And everyone else started laughing
I'm sorry I said they’d fight but I got my scenes mixed up and the actual fight doesn’t happen until LATER so this is for now at least now tess is getting what she deserves FB plzz
|posted on 27-Apr-2002 3:27:26 AM by roswelllover|
mara is a dreamer
THANKS FOR ALL THE FEEDBACK, Eccentric One I took upon your idea and I must say it turned out great, thanks for the idea it helped me write the next two parts now onto.......Part 10
It was Friday night and Max and Isabel were getting ready to go to their cousin’s house in Las cruses, phone rang and Max picked it up
“Hello” Max answered
“Hey Maxie it’s me Tess” Tess said
Max groaned “hey...Tess” Max said
“So what time are you picking me up tomorrow” Tess asked
“10:30” max said
“That late” Tess asked
“yeah” Max said
“ok....Great” Tess said
“umm...Max I have to go” max said
“oh ok, I'll seeya tomorrow then” Tess said
“yeah, bye” Max said and hung up quickly
Isabel was in her room and called Liz
“hello” Liz answered
“hey Liz, it’s me Isabel” Isabel said
“hey Iz” Liz greeted
“Liz do you want to come with me to my cousin’s house for the weekend” Isabel asked
“ohh, yay I love Uncle George’s house” Liz said
Isabel laughed “I knew you would so I'll pick you up tomorrow at 8:30” Isabel said
“yeah” Liz said “I have to go my mom’s calling me so I'll seeya “ Liz said and hung up
it’s 8:30 and Isabel had just gone to get Liz , she came back 5 minutes later with Liz.
“hello Liz” Diane said smiling at Liz
“Hi Mrs Evans, thanks for letting me come” Liz said
“any friends of Max and Izzy's friends are always welcome” Diane said smiling
“mom, me and Liz will be upstairs to get my stuff” Isabel said
Isabel and Liz went to Isabel's room
“hey Iz is Tess coming” Liz asked not wanting Tess's presence to ruin her weekend
“no, not that I know of mom would’ve told me” Isabel said
“ok good, I really didn’t need her ruining my weekend” Liz said
“I know the feeling” Isabel said and smiled
“kids we have to go now” Diane shouted t Max, Isabel and Liz who were upstairs
Liz and Isabel went out the door when they saw Max come out of his room
“what she doing here” Max asked
“I invited her Max” Isabel said as she dragged Liz away before another confrontation started
It was 9:00 and they left to go to Las Cruses
At 11:00 Tess called Max
“you have reached the Evan’s, we are in Las Cruses for the weekend please leave a message and we’ll get back to you when we get back thank you” beep
Tess hung up the phone “he left me behind !” Tess shouted to no one
“he left without me, no one leaves without me” Tess said pissed to her self
The car ride to Las Cruses was in silent only filled with small chit chat once in a while, most of the talk was between Liz and Isabel, Max was sitting behind them listening to his Discman.
An hour later they got to The Evan’s house in Las Cruses
“hello, Phillip, Diane” George said as he came out to greet his brother’s family
“hello George, it’s been along time” Phillip said as he greeted his brother
“were are my nieces and nephew” George said and looked to see Max, Liz and Isabel standing at the car
“Isabel you’ve grown up to become a beautiful young lady, so have you Liz, and Max my, aren’t you quite the young man I bet all the girls chase after you” George said
“you wouldn’t know how true that fact is” Isabel muttered
“hi Uncle George” Isabel said as she embraced her uncle
“hi Uncle George, it’s great to be back here, I love this place so much” Liz said as she thought back to when the last time she had come which was when she was 14
Nick and Kirsten walked out of their house , Nick was the same age as Max and Isabel and Kirsten was a year younger than they were
“hey Max man, glad your here” Nick said as he slapped Max on the back
“Hey nick, it’s great to see you again” max said
“ah and you fine ladies whoa re you” Nick teased winking at Liz and giving her a flirtatious smile which Liz returned, Max frowned
“Nick Evan’s you know exactly who I am, your charming personalities don’t work on me” Isabel teased
“that hurt Isabel” Nick said smiling as he put his hand over his heart
“hey Max” Kirsten greeted as she embraced her older but HOT cousin
“hey Kirsten” Max said returning the embrace
“hey Iz, Liz” Kirsten said smiling at Isabel and Glaring at Liz, Liz knew that Kirsten didn’t like her but didn’t know why.
Sally came out and invited everyone inside
Tess saw Sean sitting in a booth in the crashdown by himself
“hey Sean what you dodging sitting here by yourself , where’s Liz” Tess asked as she sat down
“she went to Las Cruses with Isabel” Sean replied drinking his blood-alien smoothie
“how’d you know” Tess asked frowning
“Maria told me when I walked in her and asked for her” Sean answered
It’s 4:00 in the afternoon and Nick and Max are playing basketball outside
“hey Max I'm surprised your not with Liz” nick said
“as you may have forgotten nick we don’t like each other” Max said
“then hook me up” Nick said as he shot the ball but missed the hoop
“I'm not you date planner Nick” Max said as he shot the ball which went through the hoop
“fine I'll do it myself, though I do think she likes me, a lot she is HOT ” Nick said
Max dodged the ball and pushed Max “sorry man” Max said
“it’s ok” nick said as he got up
Next Part - the rest of Max and Liz's weekend FB plzzz how was it
|posted on 28-Apr-2002 3:01:46 AM by roswelllover|
|Thanxs for the FB I really wanted to write this part since the idea is still fresh in my mind so here you go Part 11...|
After their basket ball game Max and Nick went back inside, their was tension between the two boys but it could only been seen if you’d look closely at the two.
Nick went into the kitchen got himself a soda and sat down the couch in the lounge, Liz came downstairs to go to the kitchen to get something to eat when she saw Nick sitting in the lounge room and, alone she walked over to him “hey Nick” Liz said giving him a smile
“Hey Liz” Nick said grinning back up and shifted to the side to let Liz sit down
“Thanks” Liz said as she sat down “so what you watching” Liz asked
“You” Nick answered still looking at Liz, Liz giggled and flipped her hair and gave Nick a smile, Max was standing against the door frame of the lounge and rolled his eyes at Liz's obvious flirting but watched on to see how far it went.
Nick smiled back and started running his hands through her hair “you know, your hot” Nick said
“Yeah I get that a lot ” Liz said giggling
“You are, your not like the girls here you know” Nick said now trailing his finger down her arm, this making Max's blood boil ‘what’s it to you max if he touches her’ he scowled at himself
“Oh and why do you say that” Liz said still smiling
“Your mature, unlike the girls here which I'd say look like there 13” Nick said as he brought his finger back up to her bare shoulder.
“Thank you” Liz said
Nick was about to kiss her, when max saw what was about to happen he knew they had gone far enough “Liz could you stop mauling my cousin” Max said as he walked in
Nick groaned “cus you know you have the worst timing”
“It’s what I was born to do” Max said smirking
Liz just glared at max “hey at least I'm not dating a bleached blonde haired hussy!” Liz shouted
“Yeah well she was your best friend if I recall ” Max shouted back as he saw her walk away
“Max you see there's a difference between was and is, if you had passed English you’d know” Liz said before running up the stairs.
“Geez max wasn’t that harsh” Nick said
“You don’t know anything about Tess so just don’t” Max said as he walked away to go outside.
Nick had no idea what had just transpired, he shrugged and went back the game.
The next day the whole Evan’s Family decided to the national fair for the day instead of staying home.
When they got to the fair it was quite full there were a lot of people, the 5 teens separated from their parents and went to the rides max, Kirsten and Isabel went to the gaming stalls while Nick and Liz went on the rides they had all agreed to meet up in front of the food stall at 12, Nick and Liz saw Max, Kirsten and Isabel waiting for them on a bench Kirsten had teddy bear and Isabel had a blown up Alien “hey what do you guys have here” Nick asked
“Max won them for us “ Kirsten grinned
“In what” Nick asked
“Basketball and darts” Isabel answered smiling max and Nick always competed with each other every time they were in each others presence “did you have fun Liz” Isabel asked
“Yeah” Liz said smiling
They ordered something to eat and sat down at the bench a girl came by “hey, I'm Tracy” Tracy introduced herself to max
“Hey I'm max” max said “you want to sit down” max said then shifted over
“Thanks” Tracy said and sat down, max liked her she was the complete opposite to tess she had light brown hair that rested at her shoulders and tanned skin , it’s what he needed a complete opposite to tess for a change.
Tracy then looked around and meets their confused looks “I'm Tracy” she introduced
“As if we didn’t hear her first time” Liz muttered
“Hi, I'm nick Max's cousin; this is Liz our guest, Isabel Max's sister and Kirsten my sister” Isabel and Kirsten both said hi except for Liz.
TBC I know short part but that’s all I have time for FB plzz next part will be out soon,I know the flirting it suxs
|posted on 29-Apr-2002 3:39:10 AM by roswelllover|
|I'm glad you all liked it, just a note the next part will be out tomrrow and it'll be long and very interesting |
|posted on 30-Apr-2002 7:53:43 PM by roswelllover|
|THANKS FOR THE FEEDBACK, heres a long part since my last part was so short so I'm making up for it and I'm so sorry I couldnt post yesterday my net connection wasnt working. ...|
“Hi it’s nice to meet you” Tracy said smiling at them, and eyeing Liz wondering who she was to Max as she had ignored her presence
“I was wondering if it’s ok if I hung out with you” Tracy said sending her flirtatious smile to Max
“Yeah, sure” Max said smiling back, while Liz rolled her eyes
“Do you want something to eat, drink” Nick asked
“No I'm fine” Tracy said
After a while Tracy was getting bored and put her hand on Max's thigh and smiled at him when he looked at her, Liz looked on when she saw her hand travel upwards “god I think I'm gonna be sick, this is a public place Evan’s go fuck her somewhere else” Liz said glaring at both of them.
“Lets go, were not wanted here” Max said getting up and taking Tracy’s hand in his and left
“Finally I can now eat without having the urge to throw up” Liz said and popped a fry into her mouth
Isabel rolled her eyes, while Kirsten glared at Liz, nick looked at Liz, Kirsten and Isabel and shook his head ‘you can never understand girls’ he thought to himself.
It was 4:00 in the afternoon and everyone decided to go home.
“I had a great time” Tracy said smiling
“Yeah so did I, it was nice meeting you” Max said
Tracy then kissed him; there they were in front middle of the car park engaged in a kiss when Isabel interrupted them. “Come on Max, say goodbye to Tracy before mom and dad come back” Isabel said
Pulling on her brother' shirt
Tracy and Max said their goodbyes and everyone left to go home.
After they had finished dinner Phillip, Diane, George and Sally were getting ready to go out for the night leaving the 4 teens at home, Nick had gone over to Jake’s house as he had called and told him to so Liz had offered to do the dishes, Diane then told Max to help her as he was a guest in the house too
“Oh but mom” Max whined
“No buts Max you are a guest in this house and you will help Liz it’s not going to kill you” Diane said
“Ha, would you know the likes of that happening” Max muttered
“What was that Max” Diane asked
“Diane leave Max alone he doesn't have to do t then Kirsten can” Sally said
“Sally , you will not spoil Max, he will help Liz he’s gotten out of doing chores to many times using his charms but they don’t work anymore” Diane said facing Max
Max groaned “fine” Max said
“Mom, dad, go have fun” Isabel said pushing Diane, Phillip, sally and George out of the house
“Izzy you seem quite keen to have us out of the house what do you have planned” Phillip asked narrowing his eyes
Isabel chuckled “nothing dad, just go before you miss your movie”
“Behave” Diane said to everyone
“We will” Max, Liz and Isabel shouted back
“Kirsten, that means you too” Sally said right at the door
“Yes mom” Kirsten said
After being reassured that their children were going to be fine and hadn’t planned anything illegal they left, Kirsten and Isabel had retreated to their rooms while Max and Liz had to do the dishes.
Max was complaining about how much him having to dry the dishes was unfair
“Evan’s shut up ok this couldn't be my ideal Saturday night either, and what makes it even worse is the fact that your here but we are so just stop complaining, geez and you think I don’t stop talking” Liz said and turned back to washing the dishes.
“If you only had kept your big mouth shut, I wouldn’t be in this position what is with you and volunteering” Max asked.
“What is it with you and dating whores, could that girl have been any similar to Tess” Liz retorted back
“Why you jealous” Max smirked
“ Ha you wish, me jealous of them” Liz said and returned to her dishes and ignored him, soon the dishes were done and Max and Liz sat on the couch
“That was so tiering” Max said
Liz rolled her eyes and groaned then switched on the TV and started channel surfing she turned to the movie channel
“I've seen this, will you change the damn channel it has 109 channels there has to be something else” Max said
“Shut up Evans and just watch” Liz said
“Here give me the remote parker” Max said
“No” Liz retorted back
Max got up and went to Liz's side of the couch
“What the fuck you going to do Evan’s” Liz said
Max lunged at Liz and started ticking here, Liz was tossing from side to side trying to avoid his ticking fingers she pushed him and got free and ran Max recovered and ran after her
Kirsten or Isabel couldn’t here since both of them had their stereos on full volume.
Max was catching up with her as being captain of the football and Basketball team he had to be the best runner Liz saw a corner on both sides then dodged the one on the right and went to the left hallway Max knew and did the same thing and was on full pursue after Liz, Max then caught up with her he caught her arm and turned her around Liz lost her balance and they both tumbled onto the floor Liz looked up at Max as Max looked down at Liz, Liz looked up at Max's eyes and got sucked into his deep amber pools and found herself inching forward to Max's lips, Max meet her half way and the first contact of their lips electricity coursed through both of them and Liz shivered at the passion of the kiss, the remote was long forgotten and their hatred feelings were pushed away they soon came up for air, Liz looked at Max and saw what had just happened , Max let her push him off her and she turned to Max and glared at him “take the remote it’s yours” and threw it at him and walked out of the room Max shook his head trying to clear his dizzy state and headed to the lounge, Liz went to her room and out a CD into her CD player and laid down on her bed as she was still left with the feelings of the intensity of the kiss.
Hope it was long enough, I hope you like it as much as I enjoyed writing this part don’t forget the FB.
|posted on 2-May-2002 12:50:27 AM by roswelllover|
sorry I now that it says part 12 and 11 but it doens't make a difference there's no part missing I'll clear all tht up later Thanks for the awsome FB Next part will be out 2mrrow unless of some other reason
|posted on 3-May-2002 2:17:12 AM by roswelllover|
|emmie- Kirsten’s jealous of Liz, her life, she thinks Max is hot but doesn’t have a crush on him|
Eccentric One- no it’s just me, I wrote part 11 instead of 12 srry
if I forgot anyone I apoligize
THANKS for you feedback, I know I've already thanked anyone but I never expected so much I am soo GRATEFUL here’s part 13
Max sat on the couch surfing through the 109 channels but actually thinking about what had happened he made Liz parker lose, but the memory of her sweet luscious lips and her silky strawberry scented hair was burned into his mind he could still taste her lips on his max stopped his train of thought ‘this is Liz parker, you do not have feelings for her’ max scowled at himself for even thinking such a thing.
The next day Isabel, Max, Liz, Phillip and Diane had arrived in Roswell 2 hours ago, Tess is in the crashdown when she sees Liz.
“Look your girlfriends back” Liz told Sean
“Yeah I know” Sean said as he got up to go to her, Tess got out of the booth and headed to the Evan’s house.
“Hey Liz’ Sean said when he reached the backroom.
“Hey Sean” Liz greeted with a smile
“How was Las Cruses” Sean asked as he sat down on the couch
“OK, I only went for Isabel but it was great to go back and see them all again” Liz said as she busied herself.
“What did you do” Liz asked
“Nothing, went out with the guys hung out with Tess” Sean answered
“Tess” Liz looked at him incredulously
“Yeah she’s not so bad” Sean said
“Yeah that's if she wants to be in your pants” Liz said “look I gotta get back to work” Liz said
“Ok, I'll call you” Sean said as he got up from the couch
“Yeah” and went out of the back room.
Tess walked up to the Evan's house and rang the doorbell, Diane answered
“Hello Tess, come in” Diane said trying to be friendly at her son’s girlfriend
“Hi Mrs Evans” Tess greeted sweetly as she walked into the house
“Max’s up in his room” Diane said and left Tess to go to the kitchen
Tess walked up to his room and walked into the opened door and saw Max putting his shirt on just freshly showered “hey” tess said closing the door
“Shit” max muttered when he heard Tess’s voice behind him
“So, what happened about Saturday” Tess asked folding her arms in front of her chest
“Sorry Tess but my mom said Family only” Max answered without thinking
“Is that so then what the hell is Liz, Family” Tess shouted
“No, look my mom said it ok, I don’t know why she gave Isabel an exception but she did” max said as he picked up his clothes off the floor
“And you expect me to believe this” Tess shouted “I’m not blind or dumb”
“Look tess I've had a long day ok, and I don’t want to be here right now so if you don’t believe me then you can damn well just leave” Max said frustrated
it’s all I have time for plus I think I've had a brain shutdown so I'll leave you with this FB plzzz
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|posted on 8-May-2002 2:03:29 AM by roswelllover|
|I"M soooo sorry that I don't have an update but I wil ahve one on saturday so look for an update then|
thanks for all the bumps
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|posted on 9-May-2002 2:05:18 AM by roswelllover|
I’M BACK!! I couldn't wait until Saturday so I've posted early
this part dedicated to emmie for all the bumps -(4 times) lol and mermaidgirl (twice) angeleyes(once) and to everyone else who were waiting for an update thanks for all the feedback hope you like.
I’ll try not to make you wait so long in the future but no promises
you’re gonna enjoy this.......
“NO! I’M NOT LEAVING UNTIL YOU TELL ME, I’M YOUR GIRLFRIEND I DESERVE AN EXPLANATION MAX” Tess shouted
“in that case were through tess, I have had enough of you and this relationship” Max said frustrated he was tired and he wanted to be left alone not here arguing with Tess.
“Max you don’t mean that, I forgive you” Tess cried out as she rushed over to max and laid her hand on his chest
Max stepped back “NO tess I'm serious you are possesive, manipulative and I don’t like you , I feel like I'm suffocating in this relationship now I've told you nicely but you won’t listen now get out of my damn house” Max said
Tess shook her head “NO! max no, that bitch fed you with lies didn’t she, don’t belice her max she’s only out to get me” Tess cried if she lost max, she’d lose everything
“Get away from me Tess, it’s not Liz it’s you I’ve tried to work things out but I can’t stand this anymore this......this slave labour I want out Tess” Max said
“I LOVE YOU MAX” Tess shouted
“I DON’T LOVE YOU TESS, you don’t love me, I don’t need attachments” Max said as he opened his door.
Tess sighed she’d think of a plan “You’re making a big mistake max and I’ll be there when you come crawling back” Tess seethed.
Max slammed the door and sighed as he ran his hand through his hair “at least now she’s out of my hair” Max said to himself.
Max turned on his CD player and the sounds of Linkin Park filled the air.
After being cooped up in the house for 4 hours max decided to head to the Crashdown.
Max came in and sat down at a booth and Maria walked up to him “Hey max how was Las Cruses” Maria asked
“Great, where’s Liz” Max asked.
“she’s out back , why” Maria asked
“oh no reason, I'll order something later” Max said
Maria nodded and left to wait on the next table
Max got up and headed to the back room he opened the doors to see Liz going through her locker, when Liz heard the doors open she looked up to see max
“what are you doing here, it says employees only Evans can’t you read oh that’s right you didn’t pass English” Liz said
“you're ignoring me” Max said
“and how do you figure that I only got her 7 hours ago “ Liz said
“no, only that as soon as you saw me you snuck into the back room” Max smirked
“Get over yourself Evans” Liz said as she shut her locker door and tried to make her way pass amx ubt max caught her arm and pulled her back
“ your ignoring what happened in Las Cruses” Max said
“NO I'm not ignoring what happened in Las Cruses because there is nothing to ignore, it was a mistake max you violated my space you asshole, I could charge you with sexual harassment” Liz said firmly
“you wouldn’t, I know it means more to you than your saying” Max said trying to get a reaction out of Liz.
“GET OUT! max, I will never so much as feel more than hate towards you no leave before I have you banned from the Crashdown” Liz said glaring at him.
Max didn’t budge, liz was about to move and get her manager but Max put his hands up in surrender “ I'm Leaving Parker” max said as he backed out of the back room.
then Max sat down at Liz’s section and Liz walked up to him 3 mins after "what do you want” Liz asked in a tone that said she didn’t want to be there.
“Is that a way to treat a customer Liz, I could get you fired for not obeying the rules” Max said smirking
“shut up Evan’s there’s no way I can be fired, are you only here to taunt me or are you going to order something, I have other customers to attend to” Liz said getting irritated
“Fine, I'll have a cherry cola, and space fries” Max said “And don’t spit in my food” max added
“I won’t be so sure if I were you” Liz said and walked away.
yay He dumped Tess, it feels so good to have done that (lol)
|posted on 13-May-2002 12:50:36 AM by roswelllover|
|emmie,anglebaby6977, LiLEvEe,- thanks for the FB, and emmie for bumping thanks |
MandyRoswell, JaneLane, Pegleg, LegalAlien,abbs007,Mary N OO8,Qtygirl411-I knew you’d like the part Thanks for your FB, I was going to have max still date Tess but since the demands of having her gone were a lot she’s gone a lot sooner than I intended to but my fic will still work out thanks again.
mermaidgirl-thanks for the FB I like the idea of the whole jealousy concept too but I'll see if itll work through in this fic thanks for the idea. I'll think about it
m14-thanks for the FB, I something like that in my mind about helping Liz and Max sort their feelings out Ill try not to let you down
here’s PART 15
Liz groaned and sat down on a stool finally glad that the rush hour was finished
“what’s up chica” Maria asked as she put her tray of dishes on the table top and sat down next to Liz.
“nothing, just tierd from the rush hour and then Max” Liz said as she ran her hand over her face wearily.
“you didn’t tell me how Las Cruses was” Maria asked
Liz groaned again as the thoughts of Las Cruses filled her head “I'm guessing not great” Maria said
“yeah, no” Liz said
“Kirsten still being a bitch to you, I thought she’d grow out of it as soon as she’d hit puberty guess I was wrong” Maria said trying to lighten up the mood.
“Yeah there’s that” Liz said not wanting to go any further
“and come on Liz this is me your talking to” Maria said giving her a pointed look.
Liz was in thought having a conflict with her inner self ‘I mean it’s ok for me to tell her it meant nothing, he started it, he violated your space’
‘but you liked it, why’d you kiss him back’
‘shut up, I did not kiss him back’
‘why did I kiss him back’ Liz thought she sighed and gave up there was nothing wrong it was innocent kiss, a mistake that will never happen ever again this is Max, her rival enemy since junior high, but what if old feelings of him were starting to suppress you had a crush on him remember you could be playing with fire Parker’
“Liz, hello, earth to Liz” Maria said waving her hand in front of Liz
“oh sorry” Liz said once she was broken out of her thought ‘I'm not a freak I don’t need therapy for talking to myself’ Liz said reassuring herself again
“LIZ!” Maria shouted for the second time to get her attention
“yeah” Liz said
“are you okay Liz” Maria asked concerned
“Yeah” Liz answered
“so you gonna answer my question or not” Maria pushed knowing that this must be a big deal to have Liz space out like that.
“I guess, everything would of been fine if it hadn’t of been for Max” Liz started
“what did max do, please don‘t tell me you two had sex” Maria said
“MARIA!” Liz yelled
“sorry, it’s just you look so torn, I couldn’t help but think” Maria said
“HE KISSED ME MARIA” Liz said
“so, he’s kissed you, even so heated you feel out of the closet what makes this any different” Maria said, thinking back to Serena’s party
“this wasn’t just any kiss, like full on mouth to mouth, we were making out Maria, can you believe the asshole did that” Liz said
Maria smirked “you two are worst then horny bunnies” Maria said
“MARIA!, I don’t need this from you” Liz said pissed
“what do you want me to say that he’s to blame Liz, kissing involves two people Liz, not one” Maria said “besides it didn’t mean anything, so why are you worrying right” Maria asked
“Yeah course, nothing it will never happen again” Liz said “Thanks Maria it feels great to have that off my chest” Liz said
“I'm here for you no matter what always” Maria said smiling
After locking up and saying goodnight to her parents Liz headed to her room she shut the door behind her and headed to the bathroom when a figure appeared at her window outside her balcony
“YOU!” Liz shouted
“YOU!” Liz shouted
“shut up will you, I don’t want to have an encounter with you father” Max whispered loudly
“What the fuck are you doing here....at 12 o clock midnight in my room, if you try anything I will scream which will wake up all of America” Liz threatened.
Max rolled his eyes “I have better things to do then rape you” Max said frustrated
“what do you want” Liz said putting her hands on her hips
“Will you talk to me without having to bite my head off” Max said
Liz looked at him as if he’d grown another head “fine” Max said knowing it would impossible for her to be nice to him.
“you have 1 min and time is passing by Evans” Liz said
In that moment max took two long strides to Liz and fused his Lips with hers fiercely he walked to her bed backwards and fell on it with him landing on top of Liz, Liz still in shock didn’t respond but started to protest as she felt his hard chest against her she tried to push him off but him being to strong for her it was impossible for her to get out of this one, Max felt Liz try to push him away but he wasn’t going to give in this time, he had come to her room hoping to talk to her rationally but looking at her al fired up he just couldn't help but Kiss her, he stopped fighting this pull to be with her it was now Liz’s turn to do the same, max sucked and tugged at Liz’s lower lip and groaned at the taste of her strawberry flavoured Lips he moved down her neck suckling on her skin to find her skin taste Like vanilla he smiled a her choices she was nothing Like tess, rough and clingy she was her own independent self and he was finding himself falling for her, Liz was about to give in when she heard max whisper “ only wanted to Kiss you” against her ear sit up and leave through her window al while Liz felt the wind hit hr hot face and she sat up in shock staring at the window that Max had gone through.
Meanwhile Max descended down Liz’s ladder with a grin on his face, it wasn’t what he had intended to do, but it was much better than his original plan he got into his blue convertible and went speeding through the streets of Roswell back home.
this is a bonus for you guys two parts in one post (lol) so don't expect to many of them.
|posted on 14-May-2002 2:27:03 AM by roswelllover|
|Thanks so much for your FB see how far you get with just a little message now you have a new part within a day lol sorry just trying to be in a better mood as I'm pissed off with physics at the moment, anyways|
Mermaidgirl-your suspicions are correct Tess isn’t out of the picture just yet
emmie- thanks for the FB, yeah I love the whole love-hate thing between max too and want to be together that’s why I'm so torn when I start to write a new part for this fic
Michael and Maria are making out in the car at the drive in when Maria pulled away
“Maria” Michael whined and tried to pull her down again
“NO Michael, damn I just remembered, Michael we gotta help Max and Liz get together” Maria said the wheels starting to spin in her head.
“We are not going to talk about Max and Liz on our date ‘Ria” Michael said sitting up.
“Look Michael there our friends and they don’t see that they have feeling for each other there just too blind enough to see it” Maria said
“Maria don’t play match maker with Max and Liz that’ll just cause havoc on everyone’s lives, let them sort it out themselves” Michael said and moved to kiss her neck, Maria moved away
“Michael, if you don’t do this it will be the end of our date” Maria threatened, Michael groaned “fine, what‘s your plan” Michael answered.
Liz had been bitch mood to everyone ever since school had started it was lunch and Liz wasn’t looking forward to seeing Max.
“Liz, chica what's with the foul mood” Maria asked as she walked up to Liz
“huh, oh don’t know I got a B on my history essay” Liz lied
“ oh chica, you’ll do better next time” Maria said
“yeah” Liz answered as Maria hooked her arm with Liz's and they headed to meet the others for lunch
Tess walked down the halls of West Roswell High and heard Pam troy and her gangs conversation and couldn’t help but eavesdrop
“Can you believe it, I mean she has Sean already worshipping her just like the rest of the school, but have you seen Max that guys seems to look like he’s falling under her spell, if she takes Max than it’s all over” Pam said to her friends
“I heard he dumped Tess, I mean she’s so much better than Liz, why he dumped her I don’t know” Tori said
Tess grinned at least she hasn’t lost everyone because of Max and Liz “Hey” Tess walked up to them.
“Oh hey Tess” Pam said with a smile.
“so I heard you’re bitching about Liz, mind if I join” Tess said
Liz walked back to her locker because Maria had dragged her away she couldn't go to her locker, she was glad she didn’t see Max at Lunch actually none of the guys were there as they had to go to a football meeting and Liz was thankful for that she opened her locker and started to take the contents that she needed about of her locker.
“Hey” She felt Max's body move in behind her and his warm breath on her neck
Liz shivered “Are you cold” Max smirked
Liz could tell he was smirking “Take that smirk off your face Evans, don‘t mess with me” Liz gritted out she didn’t want to be here.
Max moved to her ear “I like you Liz a lot now I need you to listen to yourself and give in, I'm not going to take let you hide behind that bitch attitude anymore, cause Liz Parker I'm coming for you” Max said huskily and ran his hands down her arm which caused Liz to shudder again but this time Liz caught his hand and pulled it away from her.
“I wouldn’t be so confident if I were you, your charms won’t work on me ,if you come any where near me from now on you will wish you never did is that understood” Liz said firmly
“your stubbornness won’t get you anywhere Liz, you’ll just halt the progress of your feelings, you can’t control your feelings Liz your threats mean nothing to me” Max said calmly and walked away, leaving a more pissed off Liz than before.
FB plzzzz ok it won’t be a matter of time before Max and Liz are together I hope it won’t take long and emmie don’t worry you won’t miss their banter even when there together just a future note (lol)
Remember FB =new part FASTER
|posted on 16-May-2002 2:22:23 AM by roswelllover|
ok, you guys should be happy that I've updated again, I'm suppose to be studying for my upcoming exams and here I am writing another part (bad me lol) tsk tsk tsk I just can’t tear myself away from this fic though I swear fan fiction is an addiction but a good addiction
thanks everyone who left FB, see you got another part faster again and it’s VERY LONG
this part dedicated to everyone who left FB thanks a lot guys hope you enjoy this part just as much as I loved writing it and my heart was literally flooding with so much love (lol sorry)
m14- whoa thanks, glad you like this fic I didn't think it was as good before
and everyone thanks, and guessing that you leaving FB must mean you like my fic which is a good thing for me well enough of my ramblings and without further ado...............part 18
The girls had all meet up for cheerleading practise as the Roswell comets had a game on Friday, they were talking when Tess arrived in the gym and all went silence
“May I ask what your doing here” Maria asked ferociously
“cheerleading practise” Tess answered
“Oh no your not” Liz said standing up “I’m captain and I say we have a vote who is in favour of having Tess say yes and who isn't say no, Maria” Liz said
“no” Maria answered
“Serena” liz asked
“No” serena answered
“Isabel” Liz said
“No” Isabel said
“Pam” liz asked
“Yes” Pam answered
and the votes went on with 3 yes’s and 4 no’s
“We have spoken Tess, so I suggest you bring your uniform back tomorrow” Liz said
“Bitch, you may be able to stop me from being a cheerleader but I will win” Tess said still believing she’d have a chance
“Run to Max tess oh whoops you can’t can you because he grew a brain and dumped you” MAria said
“Tess huffed out of the gym
“Why did you have to be such a bitch to her Liz” Tori said
“If you have a problem Tori I suggest you go after her and come back with your unfirm tomorrow too” Liz said
And tori said nothing and stood back
“good” Liz said “now lets get started”
The guys had changed and were heading home after football practise, Maria stopped Max
“MAX!, we need your Help there’s something wrong with Isabel” Maria said
“shit where” Max said and sped off after Maria
Liz had gotten changed and was waiting in the girls changing room after Maria said she’d needed to talk, she heard the doors open and lock then Max rush over
“Where’s Isabel” Max asked looking around frantically worried about his sister.
“what do you mean where’s Isabel, she’s gone home and what the hell are you doing in the girls changing room” Liz asked
“she’s where, but Maria said something happened to her” Max said heading to the door and pushed it to find it locked
“Shit, Michael, Maria Let me out you two are dead if you don't open this now” Max shouted
“What you mean let you out” Liz said and tried to push the door open but it wouldn’t budge
“MARIA DELUCA OPEN THIS NOW!” Liz said knowing this was al Maria's idea
“No you two won’t be let out until you can be civil to each other” Maria’s voice floated across to them
“Maria is this some sick joke” Liz asked
“No, we are sick and tired of you two bickering when we know you have feelings for each other now sort them out and let people be at peace” Maria said again.
Liz kept on shouting at Maria threatening her to open the door but nothing was working
“so this is the girls locker room” max said aloud, looking around the never before seen room
“Yes this is the girls locker room now you can make up some sick twisted fantasy” Liz said pissed at the days events “I can’t believe this have had enough shit for a day now I have this to top it off” Liz said and sat down on the bench.
“Look Liz life doesn’t revolve around just you” Max said
“It’s silence Maria, you know second time they could kill each other” Michael said
“Oh no, I'm not falling for that again we thought that before remember and we caught them making out I am not going to interrupt them is their having sex” Maria said
Isabel groaned “Thanks Maria just the information I needed” Isabel said
“Can I ask you something” Max asked
“yeah, just nothing personal and don’t go all sentimental on me” Liz said
“what do you see in Sean” Max asked
“didn’t I say nothing personal, why you getting jealous Evans” Liz said
“Answer the question Liz” Max said and sat next to her, Liz felt the proximity of his presence waver on her which was making her dizzy, she wouldn't deny it he did effect her and he was now but she was hiding it.
“He’s a great guy” Liz said
“Is it serious” Max pushed
“No” Liz answered falling into Max’s trap, Max moved closer and Liz saw him but didn’t stop him
“Liz” Max whispered
“Yeah” Liz whispered back
“Don’t fight it anymore” Max said and leaned down and kissed her, this one much intense then the others as Liz gave in willingly this time, she opened for Max and he plunged his tongue in a explored every recess of her mouth and made love to her tongue, Liz moaned at the feelings Max was arousing in her, she felt this need to feel Max’s lips on hers again and consequences be damned she was going to fell them again.
Liz moved so that Max was tying on top of her without releasing the contact of their lips, Max was loving the fact that he was able to taste her lips again and moved down to her neck, Liz had her head thrown back giving Max all the access he wanted to her neck, Max sucked Kissed and bite at the sweet kin that was revealed to him leaving her marked by him, Max groaned at how responsive and willing Liz was and a certain part of his atonomy(sp) came to life as they continued their passion , Max moved his lips back to Liz’s he kissed her with a hunger unknown to both of them, Liz, had her fingers buried in Max’s hair tousling it even more, Liz then came up for air and looked up to see Max’s flushed look, eyes still black with desires and his hair tousled as if a hurricane had gone past them.
“We shouldn’t have.....” Liz started
“No you are not going to regret this” Max said firmly
“Were two different people max” Liz said
“Different how” Max said pushing for an answer.
“We have been at each other’s throat for over 4 years” Liz said
“And that stops us how” Max asked
“Don't do this Max” Liz whispered
“Don't do what, Feel Liz, don’t have feelings for you” Max answered
“You can’t have feelings for me what you have is LUST Max” Liz shouted and got up from the chair, having Max so close to her wasn’t helping the situation.
“DON'T WALK AWAY FROM THIS DAMMIT” max shouted
“YOU CAN’T STOP ME” Liz shouted back.
“Liz” max said defeated “just look me in the eye and tell me, tell me that you don’t have any feelings for me other than hate or lust tell me that and I will stop pursuing you” Max whispered
Liz nearly had tears in her eyes at Max’s dejected voice and couldn’t speak, Max was about to ask her again thinking she hadn’t heard got cut off by Liz
“I can’t do that” Liz whispered back with her back to him.
“Why” Max asked
silence was meet again with Liz’s voice “because I can’t deny this anymore” Liz whispered feeling defeated and tired.
Max walked up to her and snaked his arms around her waist and put his chin against on her shoulder
“Can we try and make this work” Max whispered
Liz nodded seeing that her breath had caught in her throat the instant she had felt Max’s body against hers, Liz laid her hands against Max’s and leaned back into him, Max was over joyed in the inside she had finally given in he just hoped that she’d grow to Love him just as he did now.
“Thank you” Max said against her ear and kissed her neck, Liz turned around and embraced him fully now in tears “I'm sorry.......I was such a bitch to you.........I’m...I’m so....sorry” Liz said
Max stroked her hair and waited till she calmed down after she did Liz pulled back.
“I’m sorry for crying on you” Liz said chuckling embarrassed as Liz Parker never cried in front of someone.
Max tilted Liz’s chin up and looked at her “Don't be sorry, you can cry on me anytime’ Max said smiling
Liz chuckled and hit him on the arm.
“Come here” Max said pulling her back into the embrace
“You never told me why you really hated me” Max asked as they had sat down on the bench holding onto each other.
Liz giggled at the memory “What’ Max asked his heart warming at her smile.
“I had a crush on you back in Junior High but then I think that dissolved once you started to get that ‘I'm the Man’ attitude” Liz answered.
“My attitude, you were the one who suddley became whore of the year” Max teased
“who you calling whore Evan’s” Liz said teasing back knwoing none of the words they said meant
“I guess our hatred was out of jealousy huh” Maxi said
“yup, it grew when we started saying things at each other and I think after that point I didn't thin you had emotuins” Liz said “But I was wrong” Liz added looking up into Max’s eyes.
“We both said things we didn’t mean,lets put that in the past now ok” Max said putting the strand of hair that had fallen onto her face behind her ear
“That’s fine with me, what time is it” Liz asked feeling tierd formt he emotinla stress.
Max looked at his watch “5:25” Max answered.
Maria, Isabel, Kyle, Alex and Micheal decided to let Max and Liz out seeming that had been and hour since they had locked them in and opened the door when they steped in the gasped at what they saw.
whoa that was long (4 pages on word )but once I started I couldn’t stop and my fingers and mind ran WILD you should thank them (lol)
tell me what you think about the part and I hope I didn’t let anyone down FB = part 19 on Friday and it doesn’t even have to say anything it can be blank and I'll post another part (ok I'm getting carried away now bye gotta go STUDY!)
P.S hope it wasn’t too sappy but I'm a dreamer at heart and couldn’t help it
|posted on 18-May-2002 2:00:34 AM by roswelllover|
|ok, here I am, I posted today cuz I actually had to study yesterday you know b4 I fail and everything but needed a break so I’m posting another part, thanks for ALL the FB |
this part is dedicated to m14 , you have made my fingers very happy (lol) and thanks for the FB.
I don’t really like this part, it’s not that great but I figured something is better than nothing I think it’s the exam stress that’s getting in the way of my fanfic writing anyway enjoy as much as you can it’s not long....
and another thing my other part wasn’t long I re-read over it and I just realized that but hey it seemed fairly long to me......
Maria, Isabel, Kyle, Alex and Michael decided to let Max and Liz out seeming that had been and hour since they had locked them in and opened the door when they stepped in the gasped at what they saw.
stepped in the gasped at what they saw, Max and Liz sat cuddling on the bench and everyone’s jaws fell to the ground until Maria got over her initial shock
“OH MY GOD you two are finally together!” Maria shouted jumping up and down and pulled the couple apart to crush Liz in a fierce embrace.
Liz chuckled “Ok Maria Let go, I need to breath” Liz said
Maria pulled away “I’m so happy for you two” Maria said and then pulled Max into the same embrace, Max chuckled “well looks like Maria approves of this ” Max said.
“So I guess this means no more bickering from both of you” Michael said receiving a hit from Maria “What, look congratulations ma, Liz but seriously this has to be a good thing right......wait this isn’t some joke is it” Michael asked sceptically.
Max wrapped his arms around Liz’s waist “No, it’s not a joke we stopped denying how we felt and decided to work this out” Max answered looking at Liz and never leaving his eyes away from hers
“Well it’s about time you two we were wondering when you’d stop being so damn blind” Isabel said with a smile and embraced her friend and her brother.
“So you guys aren’t freaked out or anything” Liz asked
“Nope, this nothing to be freaked out about, we knew it was bound to happen sometime” Kyle answered.
“Thanks, it means a lot that we have you on our side too” Liz said
“Come on let's go celebrate it’s on Max” Kyle said
“Hey” Max shouted to the others retreating voice.
“that went well” Liz said as she picked up her bag
“yup well I think I expected that from them as being supportive of us I guess we were the only ones who were dense and blind huh” Max said as they started walking to his car.
“I guess so but at least now we figured it out” Liz said as Max put his arms around her shoulder and Liz cuddled against him.
They reached the Crashdown and all entered and sat in a booth and ordered their food when they saw Pam, and the ‘Pam’ clan walk over to them.
“So Liz got sick of Sean already that your with Max now” Pam said in her sugar coated voice that can make anyone scream in annoyance.
“What do you want Pam” Maria asked
“Nothing of your interest, so Max is this what you dumped Tess for” Pam asked
“Pam, it’s none of your business why don’t you take your fan club and yourself back to the sewer where you belong” Max answered not wanting to have any conversation with them.
“Suit yourself Max, you’ll regret it” Pam said walking out of the Crashdown in a huffy.
“The whole schools going to know about this before 3rd period” Isabel said
“Were prepared just like always” was Liz’s answer.
It was 7 and everyone decided to go home, Max walked Liz up to her apartment “So are you free tomorrow” Max asked
“Why” Liz asked smiling
“I just thought we could go out on our first date” Max said smirking
“where” Liz asked
“dinner, movies the usual first date stuff” max said
“You better not treat me like your other girlfriends:” Liz warned
“how can I, your different” Max said smiling
“good” Liz answered
“So it’s a date” Max said
Liz nodded “What time” Liz asked
“I'll pick you up at 6” Max answered
“ok, I'll seeya at school then” Liz said turning to go
“Wait!” Max shouted back Liz turned around and Max planted his lips on hers to give her a passionate, yet gentle loving kiss, not as heated as the other ones they had shared, Max pulled back and smiled “I really needed to do that” and kissed her on the lips tenderly before leaving, leaving a speechless Liz behind.
it’s short I know but I'll post the Next part out on Monday or maybe sooner, you’ll just have to hope it’s sooner
NOTE: next part Tess finds out about Max and Liz’s relationship, look for the next part to find out about her reaction
|posted on 21-May-2002 10:50:10 PM by roswelllover|
|Thanks for the FB....I've found time to write and post this part so here it is Part 20 you guys are sure getting demanding aren’t you (lol) I don’t mind though I can take all the FB thanks again.|
After Dinner Liz had gone into her room, to finish her history assignment at 8, Sean arrived at the Parker’s apartment he knocked o the door, Nancy opened the door.
“Hi Sean come in” Nancy said inviting him inside
“Is Liz home” Sean asked
“Yeah she is, she’s in her room” Nancy said, Sean thanked her and headed to her room, he knocked on the door.
“come in” a voice shouted from the other side of the door
Sean opened the door , Liz looked up to see who it was and her face smile faded away. “Hey Sean” Liz greeted.
Sean walked over to Liz and kissed her, Liz waned to gag how on earth could she have ever stood to kiss him before, somehow Liz cursed Max he’d ruined it for everyone else, she’d never be able to accept kissing just anyone they’d have to be Max’s lips, Liz pulled away.
“Sean” Liz warned
“What” Sean said It’s been a 3 days since you arrived and I haven't even seen you let alone kissed you so don't give me that tone” Sean said.
“Sean there’s a lot that’s happened in those 3 days though” Liz said “Sean we can’t.....I can’t.....this thing we have isn't working” Liz finally said.
“Who's the new guy” Sean asked knowing there was something up.
“Sean, if there was another guy or not this thing isn’t even a relationship, I mean we have nothing in common, your probably only dating me to be popular and you know it was just a spur of the moment thing” Liz answered.
“It’s fine, I knew it wouldn’t work out anyway, but seriously Liz who’s the guy” Sean asked smirking when he saw Liz biting her lip.
“Max” Liz whispered softly.
Sean’s eyes widened, he didn’t expect that one “Max, you mean the Max Evans the one you have hated since junior high the same Max you said you had no feelings at all for , Max” Sean said in disbelief.
Liz laughed at his obvious bewilderment “Yes Sean, the same Max, ironic huh” Liz said
“You kidding whoa, where are the pigs flying” Sean said looking out Liz’s window, Liz hit him on the arm “This isn’t funny” Liz shouted chuckling.
“ well Liz can we still be friends” Sean asked
Liz nodded" I'd Like that” Liz replied
“Your wrong you know about me only going out with you to be popular, I guess it was just a spur of the moment thing” Sean laughed “Evans should be one lucky happy guy” Sean said
“Why would you say that” Liz asked
“Cause your one in a million” Sean answered.
“Is this your way of sucking up to me” Liz teased
“What’s there to suck up for’ Sean answered.
Max saw Liz and made a beeline for her, she was shuffling through her locker.
“Hey” Max said as he leaned against the locker next to her.
“Hey” Liz greeted back and kissed him.
“This is weird, your usually here in the morning trying to ruin my day” Liz said
“Nope I don’t find this weird at all I mean here I am with the hottest girl in school what could be so weird about that” Max said kissing her neck.
“Yeah go Evans” Were yelled at him as the new revelation about the new couple had made it's way before that very morning by one very pissed Pam Troy. when either of them had walked into school that morning they were the talk of the day but like always Max and Liz had gotten used to it so they didn’t care
“Will you ever be able to stop mauling me every second ” Liz said
Max pulled back “Hey I resent that I'm your boyfriend it’s my job to pleasure not maul” max said
“Pleasure this is not pleasure, I'm trying to find my damn history book while your relieving your sexual needs ” Liz snapped
“You know you love it” Max said moving back to her neck and sucking on her bare skin.
“It’s the reason why I’m never going to find my history book” Liz said frustrated “I swear your lips should be banned” Liz said as his tortuous mouth moved to he sweet spot causing her to moan.
“Look at them Maria, no maybe not, This is all your fault, if you hadn't of put then together in that damn locker room they would be biting off each others heads rather than moaning like they are now I prefer there banter better than there moans my poor virgin ears” Michael said
“Virgin huh” Maria scowled “Shut up, let’s go” Maria said dragging Michael to their new class.
Liz had reluctantly found her history book after many protest against an eager and now pissed Max, it was Lunch time and Liz knew Max would still be sulking.
She walked to Max’s locker to find him hunting through it, Liz walked up to him and snaked her arms around his waist and laid her head in his back, Max ignored her and kept looking for his books
“I’m sorry “ Liz whispered “I was grumpy you have to understand I didn’t mean it, you don’t maul me, I love it when you show your affection” Liz said and kissed his shoulder.
Max turned around and looked at her “It’s ok you don’t need to be sorry I was just being a kid” Max said.
“I'll meet you and the others in the lunch quad I need to go to my locker but I felt really guilty and had to tell you’ Liz said sympathetically.
Max kissed her on the lips “Go on, I'll seeya then” Max said, with Liz noddnig a yes.
LIz was getting her spanish text book out of her locker when she herad the voice of her worst enemy
“Hey lizzie” Tess spat out sweetly.
Liz ignored her.
“Bitch, who the hell do you think you are stealing my boyfriend” Tes shouted, the students in the hall way stopped and watched n.
“Tess why don’t you just leave now and save the embarassment” Liz said still not looking at her.
“oh no, your not winning this time!” Tess shouted.
“Tess, he dumped you get over it, even a gerbil wuld” Liz said.
“SO we moved down to elementary school you know Liz Max likes em old not 7 but if you want to play name calling then we can” tess said
“All I want you to do is leave me alone” Liz said
“That’s not going to happen though until you tell me what the hell your doing with him, he’s mine, your some alien aren’t you, your using some power to control him” Tess said
“The only alien here is you” liz said
“Give him back bitch” Tess said
Max, Sean, Kyle, Michael, Maria, Serena, Isabel and Alex were waiting for Liz at the lunch quad when a guy came running through the doors.
“YOU HAVE TO SEE THIS, TESS AND LIZ ARE HAVING A SHOWDOWN!” He shouted and ran out.
“Shit” Max cursed and jumped off the bench and ran towards where he could see people moving to while the others followed behind.
“He’s not some kind of object he’s a human who doesn’t need a possesive little pansie like you, he’s not your and never will BE!” Liz shouted trying to make Tess get some sense, but deciding to just walk away she did but of course Tess being her bitch self turned her around and slapped her.
“That’s for last time” Tess said glaring at her.
“That’s it, I have told you time and time over again to never touch me, talk to me or even be in the same line of vision as me but since you jump the doctor your hearings gone and so will your head after I’m finished with you” Liz shouted.
Liz hit Tess and Tess pulled back “AH Bitch you broke my nose” Tess screamed holding her nose with her hand.
Liz was about to hit her again, when she was stopped by a pair of strong arms holding her waist.
“She’s not worth it babe” Max whispered against her ear. Liz slumped back against his chest and sighed
Tess was about to strike when she was pulled away by Sean “ Tess, stop “ Sean shouted.
“she broke my nose” Tess shouted.
The others turned to the crowd “There’s nothing to see her anymore” and moved them away, Sean had dragged Tess away from Liz wanting her to calm down and take her to the nurses room.
Max saw Liz’s right cheek had gone red and stroked it, then leaned down and gently kissed it “She won’t hurt you again babe I’ll amke sure of that” Max said
“You ok chica ” Maria asked
“Yeah, just tierd” Lzi said.
The bell had gone to signal the end of lunch half an hour later, The others had sat and talked as Max had held Liz, tes was taken to the hosiptal to get an x-ray on her nose, Sean had told them it was really bad but none of them had cared as they knew it was Tess who had started it, they moved to theri classes, Max had made sure Liz was okay and then they split up to go tho their classes knowing they had chemistry together last period.
how was it, I had to injure Tess some how, and breaking that nose of her’s nose was all I could come up with FB plzzz I need it to write the next part,
|posted on 21-May-2002 11:34:49 PM by roswelllover|
|thanks michaela for the FB|
nah your not suppose to be sad about tee's nose being broken I loved that part (lol)
I'll have the next part up son jus pondering over what to write though
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|posted on 23-May-2002 3:43:31 AM by roswelllover|
|Thanks for all the FB|
Michaela thanks for the suggestions as you ‘ll know I used one of them but I used it in Part 23 (lol)
Michelle- thanks for helping me put some of this part together.
Tess came back from her X-ray and the doctor had told her it wasn’t broken but just fractured, She went to the principal’s office after.
“Miss Harding , Mr Harding what can I do for you” Principal Blake asked, knowing it must be bad by teh looks of her nose and not visible back eye even with the make up.
“Principal Blake, yesterday Liz Parker fractured my nose, I'd like to press charges” Tess said
“Press charges, isn’t that too serious” Principal Blake asked
“Mr Blake I should feel safe in my own public school, and then I go home from school with a fractured nose, I want Liz Parker to pay for what she‘s done ” Tess said
“Okay, we'll need to talk to Liz” Principal Blake said
After Liz was pulled out of class she went to Principal Blake's office
“Principal Blake “ Liz asked standing at the door, she saw Tess and suppressed the urge to laugh at her face.
“come in Miss Parker, sit down” Principal Blake said
“Liz came and pushed her chair away from tess and sat down.
“Liz Miss Harding here has decided to press charges against what you did” Principal Blake said
“WHAT!” Liz said in disbelief
“You fractured my nose, I'm not letting you get away with that” tess said
“Miss Harding let me deal with this” Principal Blake said
“How about you talk to your parents about this tonight and then we will proceed from then” He said
Liz nodded “Is that all” Liz asked
“yes” Principal Blake said “You may leave now, there’s a few things I need to talk to Tess about” He said
The whole school knew about tess pressing charges, they had glared at Tess and the ones who had witnessed everything had gone and told the principal what had happened , Liz was called back to the principal’s office along with Tess
“Miss Parker, there is some good news the charges have been dropped” Mr Blake said
“WHAT!” it was this time for Tess to be shocked
“I have had a number of students come in and tell me what really happened Tess, and by the looks of it it’s your fault your nose is fractured” Principal Blake said
“I have nothing else to say but I suggest you leave this room one at a time I don’t want a repeat of yesterday” Principal Blake said, Liz left first and meet Max at his Car as it was after school.
“What took you so long” Max asked taking Liz into his arms.
“Tess was going to charge me for assault but The charges were dropped, students had gone and told Principal Blake what had happened and I was let off” Liz said resting her head on his chest.
“So things worked out, I can‘t believe she would do such a thing ” Max said stroking her hair.
“Well you‘ve just gotten to know the real Tess Harding ” Liz said chuckling
“Come on I'll take you home” Max said as they got into Max’s car.
When they got to the Crashdown, Max turned to Liz “ So I'll pick you up at 6” Max said
“Yeah” Liz answered.
Max and Liz leaned forward and placed their lips on each others and opened as their tongues dwelled with one another ,their kiss was long overdue since the chaos that day, Liz sighed in contempt and pulled away.
“I’ll seeya then” Liz said getting out of the car
Max drove home, to get ready for his first date
FB plzzz ok it’s Max and Liz’s date next part lots of loving (LOL)
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|posted on 28-May-2002 3:22:58 AM by roswelllover|
|And yet again you guys blow me away with the amount of FB, thank you it’s so great to see so many ppl enjoying this fic, sorry for not posting soon, this part had it’s difficulties so it took me a while to put it together.|
I have nothing against Star Wars episode II, attack of the clones loved the movie in fact, I went to go see it yesterday and well surprise surprise that it just ended up in my fic LOL it was a great movie especially liked Anaikn skywalker(Hayden Christensen) I think I spelt that wrong anywayz onto the fic............ for those who notice....there date was set at 6 but I changed to 7 just something for those who noticed it if not it doesn't really matter....
It was 6:30 and Liz had gotten home exhausted she had taken a shower which had revitalised her, she had gotten ready for her date.
Across the town, Max was getting ready he had showered, shaved and was now changing into what he had picked out and grabbed his keys it was 6:55 and boy was he looking forward to tonight.
Max reached the Crashdown and got out of his blue convertible and walked up to the doors, he opened it and saw Liz who was previously sitting on the stool waiting for Max, making her way towards him.
“Hey” Max said
“Hey yourself” Liz said Back.
“Whoa, you.....Words cannot explain how you look” Max said while looking at her, all that she had on was eyeliner, lipstick and lip gloss her three favourite make up accessories. She had picked out to wear a black lace tank top, and hip hugging beige pants accessorised with long earrings that stopped at her neck (think JLO) and boots with a inch heel, her hair out, hippie style (think Graduation), Liz looked simple yet stylist, like always.
“Well you don’t look so bad either” Liz said taking a look at him, he had opted to wear a Black button down shirt that clung to him which was wrecking havoc on her, with dark blue jeans showing off his powerful thighs ‘parker stop’ Liz coached herself as she felt her mind thinking of things she wasn’t suppose to.
“Well we better go if we want to make it to the movie” Max said
“What, no flowers, chocolates” Liz asked not moving.
“You told me not to treat you like my other girlfriends, so here I am” Max said
“Jerk, your not exactly scoring points for another date” Liz glared at him and followed him he opened the door to the passenger side for her, Liz smiled
“Looks like your learning” Liz said
Max closed the door when Liz got in and opened the door to his side, he pulled something out from behind the back seat and handed it to Liz.
“There beautiful” Liz said looking at the bunch of white roses handed to her “You cease to amaze me” Liz said and kissed him she had tears in her eyes at the gentle thought no one had ever given her flowers on a date before let alone her favourite ones.
“Not as beautiful as you” Max said wiping her tear away.
“Don’t get all sappy Evans” Liz teased
“Who you calling sappy” Max teased back as they pulled out of the car park.
“How’d you know” Liz said indicating to the flowers
“Maria told me” Max answered.
‘Oh that figures” Liz said “What movie are we going to see” Liz asked changing the subject.
“I was thinking we could go Star Wars the attack of the clones ” Max said
Liz rolled her eyes “your such a guy, you don’t take a girl to watch an action movie” Liz said as she huffed and turned to the window.
“Were you expecting to date a girl cause last time I checked I was a guy ” Max said, Liz ignored his retort and kept staring outside the car window.
Max parked his car and then got out of the car to go over to Liz’s side but she bet him to it.
“I can open the door myself” Liz said and slammed it.
“Hey that’s a really expensive car” Max said
“I bet it is ” Liz answered still glaring at him.
“Liz will you get over it okay no need to ruin the rest of our date, I'm sorry for pissing you off but could you stop being such a bitch” Max said
“ I‘m being a bitch.... Oh no it was your jerky attitude that pissed me off in the first place” Liz said.
“Can we just go in” Max said tired.
“Well might as well, I'd rather sit in a dark room than see you” Liz said walking off to the ticket booth, Max followed after her and asked for 2 tickets for the attack of the clones.
When they go into the theatre they sat at the back just in time as the movie started, half way through the movie Max started feeling guilty about the way he acted towards Liz he turned to her to see her fully engrossed in the movie and smirked and ‘she said you don’t take a girl to a action movie my ass’
“Liz” Max whispered, the theatre wasn’t that full they were the only ones sitting at the back and the rest were sitting up front.
“Not now Max, I watching the movie” Liz whispered back, never taking her glance off of the screen, she knew she was being hard on Max but he’d deserved it, he had been a jerk and not all about the damn movie he picked everything that happened after it.
“Liz, please will you listen to me” Max whispered again.
“I’m listening’ Liz said turning around to face him.
“I’m sorry” Max started “God I'm so sorry I was such a jerk to you it’s just this is hard for me, I mean your the first girl that I have semi- good intentions for” Max said causing Liz to grin “A girl which these felling could develop into more, this whole romantic, sentimental thing isn’t something I've grown to do, can you forgive me” Max said honestly.
“Oh Max, of course I can forgive you, I'm sorry I was too hard on you I guess when you started the whole remarks thing it’s a habit hard to break” Liz answered truthfully.
“So can we start again, I don’t mean right from the start just from where everything went wrong” Max said
“That would be great” Liz said.
“You can go back and watch the movie” Max said
“No” Liz sad shaking her head “Anakin is cute, but I rather look at you” Liz said grinning.
“Well I'm glad you think that” Max said and kissed her on the lips, he intended it to be a gentle kiss which Liz changed as she licked Max's lips with her moist tongue asking him to open which Max instantly granted.
Max and Liz pull away once the need for air gets necessary they lay their foreheads against each other and breathing heavily.
The movie had finished and Max and Liz made their way outside Max with his arms around Liz’s shoulder.
“That movie wasn’t so bad I got to see romance, cute guy and action in one” Liz said grinning
“Liz please could you stop rubbing it in that Anakin skywalker is cute he’s a damn Jedi and a padema Jedi at that” Max said
“Oh your just getting jealous” Liz teased, they reached the car, Liz waited “Aren't you going to open the door for me” Liz asked
“Last tie I tried I was told you could do it yourself” Max muttered as he opened the door
“What was that Max” Liz asked
“Oh nothing” Max said and then walked to his side, once inside Max turned to Liz
“Mind if we go to Buckley's point” Max asked
“And what are our implying by that Max Evans” Liz teased with her eyebrow raised.
“Well I'll just have to surprise you won’t I” Max teased as he pulled out of the car park.
They reached Buckley’s point and Max parked the car, they seemed to be the only ones there as it was a school night the sky was a blanket of stars and it was a full moon.
“It’s so beautiful tonight” Liz whispered looking above them as Max had lowered the convertible top down.
“I know” Max said looking at Liz not the sky.
“So what’d you bring me up here for to talk, make up, take my innocence” Liz teased.
“Liz” Max warned.
“I was kidding don’t get so uptight” Liz said.
Max rolled his eyes and dismayed the conversation “What time are you expected home” Max asked his gave suddenly wondering to Liz’s luscious lips.
“It’s a school night so I'm expected home at 10” Liz answered all of a sudden getting excited as she saw Where Max's gaze was, she decided to have some fun and she licked her lips slowly and looked at Max under hooded lashes.
Max groaned and saw the innocent way she was looking at him as he tongue peaked out and licked her succulent lips deliberately slowly.
Max couldn't take it any longer as he lunged at Liz and attacked her lips, Liz had opened her mouth allowing Max's tongue to intertwine with hers almost as immediately as he had placed his lips on hers and sucked on it, Liz whimpered when she couldn’t get closer because of the gear shift in between them, she lifted herself off the passenger's seat and lowered herself onto Max's lap without losing contact with his lips, Max moved down to Liz’s neck and Liz leaned back giving him full access to her new exposed skin she moaned when he nipped at her sweet spot he continued suckling , kissing and biting her neck loving the fact that he was the one causing Liz to be so responsive.
Liz finally registered through her passion filled mind that they were moving forward to fast and with all her willpower pulled away, Max and Liz laid their forehead against each others their eye’s closed and breathing heavily, after gaining control Liz opened her eyes and looked at Max grinning “we’ve broken the first date rule” Liz said
“Yeah and how’d that” Max said
“Were not suppose to make out until our second date” Liz answered.
“And since when do we play by the rules” Max said
“Your right” Liz answered “we need to slow down as much as I love what you do to me, we’ve only been together for a week and I'm afraid well jump into something to early” Liz answered.
“It’s only been a week” Max asked teasingly.
“Your not funny” Liz answered hitting Max on the chest and moved back into her seat “We better go, 10 minutes till my curfew” Liz said.
“Do your parents know where you are” Max asked as he turned the ignition on.
“No, they had some meeting thing to go to and didn’t ask me where I was going all except that they expect me home by 10” Liz answered.
“So they don’t know about me” Max asked.
“No, not yet” Liz said
“Yet, I think that yet should be ever” Max said
“Look Max, I know my parents didn’t really like you before but your not the same guy” Liz said “actually I was wondering what had happened to that guy all of a sudden when he came back on our way to the movies” Liz said.
“Liz we went over that do you need to bring it up again” Max said.
“Oh no I won’t be letting it go for a while” Liz answered causing Max to groan.
They pulled up into the Crashdown car park and saw that the lights were on, Max shifted in his seat if Liz’s parents knew she was dating him all hell would break lose, he’d never been afraid of anything except for his and Liz’s parents.
“I’ll seeya tomorrow then” Liz said
“Yeah” Max answered leaning over and kissing Liz, Liz smiled
“I had a great time, thanks for a great night, although some things may have gone wrong” Liz said
“So is that a yes there will be many more” Max said grinning.
Liz laughed and nodded “Yes Evans it’s a yes for many more dates to come” Liz said taking the flowers from the back seat and opening the car door.
“Bye Max said.
“Bye” Liz waved back.
It’s so cold my fingers were numb by the time I finished typing this fic, I've already started to write ten next part out don’t know when it’ll be out though. But don’t forget the FB keep it coming .
|posted on 30-May-2002 8:08:01 PM by roswelllover|
thanks for all the FB just a note I'd like to know how I should continue do you want Max and Liz to have a relationship like Micheal and Maria or dreamer way......
I am a dreamer but it all depends on you but if you choose dreamer there will be some bickeiring but not as much........
|posted on 1-Jun-2002 4:57:54 PM by roswelllover|
|It’s a long weekend and it’s raining so I'll be updating a lot of my fics here’s part 23 tht doesn’t mean you don’t leave FB though...|
Michaela-here’s your suggestion put to work...LOL.
Thanks to everyone that left FB.
Thanks to narly, emmie and Michaela for responding to my question I've decided to take on the dreamer way, it’s a lot easier writing that way.
This part dedicated to my loyal reader’s thanks for sticking by..........
I have my doubts about this part though...
West Roswell High had won 74-42 against Albuquerque, The guys had walked off the field and were headed to their locker rooms to change and go to the victory party held at Kyle‘s afterwards. Max was stopped by Liz as he was about to enter the guys locker room.
“Nice goal” Liz said entwining her arms around his neck.
“I try” Max grinned.
Liz rolled her eyes at his ‘I'm the best attitude’ “I shouldn’t of asked, your shower awaits Max and do me a favour wash that attitude away with it” Liz teased and untwined herself around him.
“What about my victory kiss” Max said pouting.
“You don’t get one” Liz said.
“Aw come on Liz” Max said.
“I’ll meet you in out here in 20” Liz said and left.
Max soon left to shower and change.
Liz and Max meet up.
“Have you lost the attitude” was the first thing Liz asked.
“Yes” Max answered.
“Good” Liz said rewarding him with a kiss.
“Happy” Liz asked pulling away
“Very” Max grinned and took her hand in his and walked to this car.
They arrived at Kyle's, his front lawn was filled with cars and so was the street, Max pulled up in a empty space and they walked inside, when they stepped inside they were greeted with an already drunk Kyle.
“hey Maxxxxx, Lizzzz here enjoy yourselves” Kyle slurped out.
Max and Liz took the cups of alcohol they were handed and walked further inside.
They danced and mingled with others and 20 minutes later Liz had drowned down 5 full filled cups of beer, Max and Liz were dancing when Liz attacked him by placing her lips on his in a passionate kiss her tongue mingled with his and he could smell the strong smell of alcohol, they pulled apart when the need for air became a necessity, Liz pulled at his arm “Lets go somewhere” Liz said without thought Max followed after her, Liz led him to one of the un occupied rooms and closed the door behind her and attacked Max again this time Max fell on the bed at the full force Liz had attacked him with her tongue sort out for his and made love while Liz sucked on his bottom lips bruising it, her tiny hands found the buttons of his shirt and undid the 3 buttons to reveal him to her.
Through his passion state of mind, Max realised that Liz had undid his shirt buttons as the wind hit his bare torso that was left uncovered.
“Liz” Max said comprehending that she was drunk and didn’t want to take advantage of her during her vulnerable state.
“Liz stop” Max said when his protest had no affect on her and she kissed his exposed chest.
Liz looked up “Did I do something wrong” Liz asked her eyes filling up with unshed tears.
“Baby no, your drunk and you have no idea what you’re doing” Max said sitting up and buttoning up his shirt.
“I know what I'm doing Max” Liz said
“Yes you do but you won’t when you wake up tomorrow with a massive hang over and then realize you gave your virginity to me” Max said as he stood up and put some distance between him and Liz for both their sakes.
“I’d never regret sleeping with you” Liz said her voice with emotion.
“Liz please understand you don’t know what your talking about” Max said as he opened the door.
“You coming” Max asked, Liz nodded dejectedly.
They had walked back amongst the crowds and were dancing but not as close Liz looked up at Max
“I need to go pee” Liz blurted out and dashed for the nearest bathroom.
Max shook his head at his girlfriend’s odd behaviour but knew it was the alcohol talking.
“Hey” Michaela greeted.
Max turned to look at who spoke and his eyes widened in surprise “Michaela” Max shouted over the music and his surprise to see her.
“The one and only” Michaela chuckled as Max crushed her in an embrace.
“When’d you get back form Europe” Max asked his childhood friend.
“Yesterday but I wanted to come see my best star and football team play tonight” Michaela explained her presence as they danced.
“Do you want to go outside” Michaela asked, as the loud music was unbearable.
“Yeah let’s go” Max said leading her to the glass doors.
Max and Michaela walked outside to Kyle’s backyard and sat down on the bench.
“How long are you here for” Max asked.
“2 weeks, I only came to visit” Michaela answered “So I’ve heard” Michaela said.
“Heard what” Max asked confused.
“About you and Liz” Michaela grinned.
“Oh” Max said as realisation hit him.
“How’d it happen” Michaela asked.
Max shrugged “it just did”
“Fair enough” Michaela answered “It was only a matter of time” she added.
Max groaned “I’ve heard that so many times” Max said.
“Cause it’s the truth” Michaela said “Speaking of Liz where is that girlfriend of yours” Michaela asked looking inside.
“She had to go use the bathroom” Max said
“Oh, What’s happened to Tess” Michaela asked wondering where the hussy herself was since she usually turned up at all parties.
Max chuckled when she bought her up “your going to love the news I have to tell you” Max said.
“Humour me” Michaela said.
“Liz broke her nose yesterday:” Max answered.
“I always knew she had it in her” Michaela said ‘Why” wondering why Liz had broken her best friends nose.
“Uh well I sorta dated her before Liz and then she got pissed at Liz saying she stole me from her and Liz lost it” Max explained simply.
“Did I just hear you right you dated that hussy” Michaela said in mock disbelief.
“Yes and the worst decision I ever made at that” Max said.
“I’m glad you realize that” Michaela said teasingly.
“ Yeah I know” Max said shaking his head.
“Um Max” Michaela said looking behind Max.
“Yeah” Max asked looking at Michaela and seeing the weird look on her face.
“Your girlfriend looks like she’s about to jump James right about now, the poor guy” Michaela said chuckling.
With that Max turned around and cursed when he saw Liz straddling James and James looked scared out of his mind he jumped up from the bench and ran towards Liz and James, Michaela ran after him.
When Max reached Liz, James looked even more afraid then he had “Max an I swear I wasn't hitting on her” James explained.
“James I saw everything don’t worry” Max said easing his fears.
“Liz, what the hell are you doing” Max said pulling her off of James’s lap.
“Don’t touch me and some nerve you have asking me what the hell I'm doing, what I was doing was being appreciated by someone else, you could've just told me you didn‘t want me anymore dammit instead of flirting with the first girl that speaks to you” Liz said with venom with her voice as she wrenched her self away from Max.
“Liz” Max said.
“No, no more” Liz said crossing her arms in front of her chest.
“Liz what are you talking about” Max asked confused.
“She is what I'm talking about god if it isn’t one whore after another, if you don’t want your nose broken I suggest you stop flirting with my boyfriend” Liz shouted glaring at Michaela.
“Liz, its Michaela ” Max said trying to reason with her.
“Oh great this is even better it’s your ex-girlfriend” Liz said throwing her hands up in the air.
“Oh god I think I'm going to be sick” Liz said and ran to the bush where she threw up.
“God I'm so sorry she’s drunk and has no idea what she’s saying” Max said apologizing to Micheala as he ran to Liz.
“Max hey don’t sweat it I understand, take her home, you’ve both had enough for tonight” Michaela said.
“thanks” Max said throwing her a smile, Max picked Liz up “I’ll seeya later” Max said over his shoulder and carried Liz back to the car through the hurdles of people, he saw Maria’s jetta and knocked on the window breaking Maria and Michael making out.
“What’s wrong” Maria asked worried by the look on his face.
“Liz got drunk can she stay at your house for tonight you can call her parents and tell them” Max said.
“Yeah sure here take the keys to my house, my mom’s gone for the weekend so she won’t be home, I'll be home by 12, 2 the latest” Maria said.
Max grabbed the keys “Thanks” and ran back to his car, and drove to Maria’s.
Max arrived at Maria’s and pulled into the drive way, he opened the door to Liz’s side and carried her sleeping form inside where he laid her down on a bed in one of the rooms that seemed to look like Maria’s, he had put the kettle on give her caffeine to drink, he poured the coffee into a cup and took it back to the room, Liz had woken up still I her drunk like state.
“Here drink this’ Max said, Liz laid back down after doing what Max asked her to.
“Get some sleep” Max whispered and Liz didn’t argue as she was too tired to Max sat next to her and stroked her hair until he to fell asleep after her.
It was how Maria had found him and hour later; she shook Max to wake him up.
“Max wake up” Maria whispered not to wake Liz.
Max woke up groggily.
“You should go home” Maria said.
“Can I in the other room, I'll just tell my parents that I'm going to stay at Michael's” Max said and got up, Maria nodded.
He walked into the lounge room to see Michael sitting on the couch “Hey” Max said sleepily.
“Hey so you staying” Michael asked.
“Yeah, just going to call my parents” Max said.
Max called home and told them about his arrangements, Maria gave him extra blankets and a pillow for Max to sleep on the couch.
After the havoc Max slept on the couch while Liz slept in Maria's room and Michael and Maria slept in the guestroom until morning they would sleep peacefully.
FB plz so what’d you think good, bad suxed could do better even a bump, blank post watever I need to know ppl read thsi fic som how I’m a FB junkie and if I don’t get my dsoe of it I don’t know what’l happen LOL thanks
micheala- since I'm used one of your ideas I decided to use you as a character in the next 2 parts and since you always seem to mention wanting to be with Max I hope this gives you some semi peace although I'm doubting it will cuz It wouldn’t for me either LOL hope you liked.
|posted on 4-Jun-2002 4:00:09 AM by roswelllover|
Thanks for teh FB, here’s a new part
Liz woke up and groaned as her head felt like a truck had run over it she sat up groggily.
“Here drink this” Maria said walking in with a glass of Aspirin dissolved in Water.
“Oh My God my head” Maria moaned.
‘Well chica it what you get for drinking last night” Maria said sitting next to her on the bed.
“Oh go, Maria did I......what did I do” Liz asked her eyes wide thinking up the wost possible case scenario of what she could've done.
“Liz, Relax but you might want to ask Max that” Maria answered.
Liz nodded but still not assured.
“Hey” Max said entering the room, showered and changed.
“What are you doing here” Liz asked.
“Nice to know I’m wanted” Max said teasingly.
“That’s my cue to leave call me if you need anything” Maria said getting up and leaving the room.
“NO...I” Liz was cut off.
“I was joking it’s okay.....I stayed the night” Max explained.
“Max.....did I... did anything happen last night” Liz asked fearing to hear the worst.
Max sat down on the bed next to her took her hand caressing it.
“You have nothing to worry about....your still a virgin” Max grinned.
“I remember bits.....I remember you and OH MY GOD Michaela how could I.........I was such a bitch to her” Liz said as she put the pieces together.
‘Liz... Liz...Babe Calm down” Max said hating her frantic movements.
“Michaela understands Liz she knew you were drunk” Max explained.
Liz rubbed her head “God I am never going to take alcohol again” Liz muttered, then looked up at Max “Thank you I know that if you wanted you , you could’ve taken advantage of me but you didn’t., I know I can trust you” Liz said her eyes full of trust.
“You don’t need to thank me Liz.....I don’t know but I think you bring out the better side of me” Max pronounced.
“Oh I think I'm liking this” Liz grinned.
“Breakfast will be ready soon you should go take your shower” Max said ” and don’t worry about your parents Maria called them last night and told them you were staying the night at her house.” Max added.
Liz nodded and they both stood up Max smiled at Liz and left the room.
After her shower Liz walked out to the aroma of coffee and pancakes, she walked into the kitchen to see Maria , Michael and Max had already seated , Maria looked up when she heard Liz enter.
“ morning Liz’ Michael said.
Liz smiled at him, said good morning and sat down next to Max.
“You nearly killed Max last night Liz you should’ve seen his face” Maria said “And on Max I've never seen Max like that before” Maria teased.
“Maria” Max groaned.
Liz looked at Max and gave him her smile of gratitude.
After Breakfast Maria and Michael had washed the dishes and they now sat on the couch.
“SO what do you want to do today Maria asked.
Max and Liz shrugged.
The door bell rang and Maria went to answer it.
“Michaela hey when’d you arrive in Roswell” Maria asked embracing her.
“I came on Thursday, it’s nice to see you again.....are Liz and Max here by any chance” Michaela asked.
“yeah they are, come in” Maria said ushering her in.
They walked into the lounge room to see Liz, Max and Michael waiting for Maria to come back “hey guys look who I found” Maria said entering the room.
“Michaela” Liz said jumping off the couch and embracing her, she’d gotten to know her but wasn't as close to her as she was to her other friends.
“How's the hang over Liz” Michaela asked chuckling, Liz pulled away and blushed.
“yeah about that I'm sorry about last night, I was like a total drunk and well everything I said came out fucked up” Liz answered.
‘It’s okay Liz I understand” Michaela said smiling.
“Where’s Maxie” Michaela asked.
“right here Michaela and I'd wish you wouldn’t you that name anymore” Max said.
“old habits die hard” Michaela grinned.
“I can see that” Max answered.
“Michaela we were deciding on what were going to do today want t join” Maria asked
“Sure” Michaela said.
I know this part was bad, but it needed to be there *sighs*
next part a new guy arrives in WRS what will be the fate of Max and Liz’s relationship now
the whole suspense thing isn't working for me........
don't forget the FB
|posted on 8-Jun-2002 8:27:11 PM by roswelllover|
|ohhh what happened no FB ...sniff sniff I think I sacred ppl away.......well I would've had writers block but I had written this part 3 days ago and *sigh* I'm psoting now .thanks to those who did leave FB.....heheh THANKS............|
it had been 2 weeks since the part incident, Michaela had gone back to Europe much to Max’s dismay, Max and Liz had been caught up in their make out session in Max’s car that they’d forgotten about school, they had heard the bell and were now rushing to their classes, Liz entered her English literature class hen her teacher ushered her to her desk.
“Liz, Principal Blake wants to see you” The teacher said.
Liz walked out of the class and went to the principal’s office when she got there she noticed there was new student sitting there.
“Liz, come sit down” Principal Blake said and Liz sat down “As valedictorian I have requested for you to show Jeremy Whites around school he has just been transferred from California, for the rest of the year is that fine Miss Parker” Principal Whites asked.
“Yeah that’s fine” Liz answered.
“Great you can get started, he’ll be in your classes for the first day until his time table is ready welcome to West Roswell High Jeremy enjoy your time here” Principal Blake said.
Jeremy and Liz stood up and walked out. “So Valedictorian huh Whoa” Jeremy said.
Liz shrugged “it’s nothing I do well in my school work that’s all” Liz said.
“Your modest aren’t you” Jeremy said smiling, he liked the girl she was what he would describe beautiful with chocolate brown hair that cascaded down her shoulder like a waterfall her eyes were windows to her soul, he found her appearance sexy and he was no matter what going to find out what those luscious lips tasted like and maybe more.
“Here’s our first class we have English Literature first” Liz said and they entered the class.
After English Lit, They had Bio next Liz was glad she’d get to see Max, she and Jeremy walked in.
“Miss Parker, ah so you must be Jeremy , Liz you’ll now be working with Jeremy at the back table, Mr Evans can handle himself” Mr Seligman said.
Liz nodded sadly, she turned around to see Max and he didn't look happy, she mouthed him ‘I'll talk to you later’ and walked to the back.
Jeremy had noticed Liz and the guy exchanging looks he didn’t know what they were but his mission was to get Liz and no one was going to get in his way.
Throughout Biology Liz felt Jeremy move closer to her, his arms were always trying to touch here’s he’d accidentally dropped his pencil and felt his hand on her calve, she wasn’t liking what he was doing but she had a duty to do and she’d have to do it.
After Biology finished Jeremy turned to Liz “I have to go somewhere I'll seeya in out next class” Jeremy said.
“Bye” Liz said and moved to Max who was ‘apparently’ gathering his things slowly.
“Hey” Liz said retting him with a kiss.
“Hey , I missed you” Max said.
“So did I” Liz said.
“who was that” Max asked.
“Jeremy Whites, new kid from California” Liz answered.
“And should I be jealous” Max teased.
Liz tensed “No....No why should you’ Liz shuttered out.
Max’s smile fell off “I was only joking Liz, what’s wrong” Max asked.
“Nothing I'm fine c’mon let’s go” Liz said leading him out of the classroom.
It was Lunch and her fears about Jeremy had worn off he had been a sweet guy to her apologising for making her feel uneasy Liz had felt comfortable with him, they walked to his locker
“Liz would you maybe want to go out sometime” Jeremy asked.
|posted on 14-Jun-2002 11:40:50 PM by roswelllover|
“I’m flattered really but I’ve got a boyfriend” Liz answered.
“why wouldn’t you, your a smart beautiful woman he must be one lucky guy” Jeremy said,
“You deserve to be treated like a Queen Liz, Which I'm sure he does” Jeremy said hoping he was scoring points.
“So is this your charming manner” Liz flirted
“If you put it that way yes, am I scoring any points” Jeremy asked grinning.
“If I was single yeah you would” Liz answered.
Jeremy stepped forward “Liz, I do like you a lot are you even sure this boyfriend of yours is what you want” Jeremy asked eyeing Liz’s lips that looked all to arousing.
“Jeremy” Liz warned, she saw the way he was looking at her, the way Max would look at her.
Without being able to wait any longer Jeremy took the steps needed and crushed his lips to hers all in one motion, plunging his tongue into her mouth when Liz gasped at the feel of his mouth on hers, she pushed against his chest until the feel of his silky tongue stroking hers made her weak and give up ,but being caught up in shock she kissed him back.
Across the hall a figure stood frozen watching the couple, Max had waited for Liz and when she hadn't come to her locked he’d gone to the lunch quad where they were she still hadn’t arrived so he’d gone back and now he stood but to his horror he saw Liz’s and the new guy Liz had to help kissing , ‘I can’t believe she’s doing this to me’ Max thought and stalked off.
Liz couldn’t deny Jeremy was a great kisser almost as great as max but not quite kissing Max gave her butterflies in her stomach every time , her knees would go weak., at the thought of Max Liz pulled away, breathing heavily putting distance between them.
“I shouldn’t have kissed you back, I have a boyfriend a loyal boyfriend at that a great boyfriend" Liz ranted off shaking her head.
“Liz” Jeremy said.
“I’m sorry, it was a mistake Jeremy” Liz said.
“Is that really how you feel” Jeremy pushed for an answer.
“Yes” Liz answered.
Max walked into the Lunch quad, though what Liz did was breaking his heart but he was going to wait, wait for her to tell him, he wouldn’t jump to conclusions like other overly jealous boyfriends who over reacted he’d wait till she’d tell him the truth and forgive her what ever it maybe.
Maria saw hi enter and that he was tense “couldn’t find Liz” Maria asked.
‘oh yeah I did with her tongue down the new guys throat’ Max wanted to say “No, no luck” Max answered as he plopped himself on the bench.
Liz walked into the Lunch quad, she’d told Jeremy it wouldn't be uncomfortable if he’d come along after the event so he understood and left.
“She didn't know how she was suppose to react around Max, she’d cheated on him well not exactly but she’d kissed another guy who wasn’t her boyfriend she didn’t even know why she’d kissed him back but she was thankful Max hadn’t seen anything or no one had the halls had been empty, she wasn’t going to upset Max by telling him what he didn’t know wouldn't hurt him.
It’s short I know but I have a major history and English assignment I have to do and I'm being thoughtful by even considering you and posting a new part
don’t forget the FB....a girl can get tired of school work you know [hint] LOL
|posted on 14-Jun-2002 11:46:01 PM by roswelllover|
|hey forgot to mention THANKS for the FB guys and the bumps|
|posted on 18-Jun-2002 7:41:27 PM by roswelllover|
|okay, I have torn myself away from my school work to post another part, I figured it was mean to leave it where I had sorry.......thanks for the FB and thanks for Bumping m14and kelly, lol it was actually Jeremy that kissed her first she just kissed him back but I don’t think it makes a difference she still kissed him.....rite|
emmie-yeah max is testing Liz, and by the looks of this chapter it won’t be good.
I was going to end this fic 3 parts ago but since so many of you’s ( ignore my grammer) like this fic....I've thought up more idea's and whoa there are many parts to come........
Michalela I thought about what you said ‘get writing’ in your words and well I have...see
Putting on a smile when she approached the gang at the bench, upon seeing Max the guilt came crashing down , how could she have done that to him, shaking her head , she walked up to the table “Hey guys” Liz greeted cheerfully.
A chorus of Hey's were heard, as they all looked up from their conversations to greet Liz, Liz sat down next to Max.
“Sorry for being late, I got caught up” Liz explained .
‘yeah in some guys tongue’ Max thought, he was going to act normal, he still didn’t know the facts yet ‘yeah what facts do you need you saw it the proof in front of your eyes’ the other side of his mind said. ‘but your eyes can be deceived’ the innocent side of him said.
Max was going through a conflict with himself, he wanted to forgive Liz if it was something to forget but he couldn’t do that if Liz didn’t do the other step up and tell him.
“So how is the new guy, quite a hottie I see” Serena said.
Max tensed upon hearing about the new guy and Serena’s remark.
Liz sighed ‘she didn’t need this form anyone even if it was a joke’ so Liz shrugged “Nothing really, he’s nice” Liz answered.
“That’s all you have for us” Maria asked in disbelief
Kyle, Michael, Alex and Isabel saw that Max had tensed as soon as the subject rose up and didn’t want to comprehend what may happen if Maria and Serena proceeded so Isabel stepped in “What have you got planned this weekend Maria” Isabel asked.
“Oh, no there is no way anyone’s changing the subject, what’s his name Liz, where’s he from” Maria asked.
“Maria, you have a boyfriend, you don’t want Michael beating the poor guy up cause of your 20 questions” Kyle said.
“Nope, Michael's mine but I just need to know for reference” Maria siad
“His name’s Jeremy Whites and he’s transferred from California for the rest of the year” Liz answered.
‘he’s a damn colour’ Max thought
“ohhhhhhhh he sounds interesting” Maria said.
Everyone rolled their eyes at Maria's antics.
The rest of Lunch time the whole table was filled with light conversation, Jeremy long forgotten but not by Max, Max had chipped into the conversations to show he was listening and that he was fine. when in fact he wasn’t.
After Lunch, Liz and Jeremy hadn't acted weird around each other, Jeremy knowing that being friends with Liz for now will be the only way for him to get closer to her, and Liz thinking it had only been a misunderstanding.
Their day had been fun, but during classes on his way to English Max had seen Liz and Jeremy going to their last class for the day, Liz laughing with Jeremy being carefree, like she used to with him, Max felt Liz slipping away every moment he saw her with Jeremy and somewhere in his gut he knew that this wasn’t going to end as happily ever after as he thought it would.
After the last class, Liz had bid farewell to Jeremy and made her way t o her locker where she saw Max, showing him the smile she only reserved for him or maybe now Jeremy too.
“Hey” Liz said walking up to him and kissing him, she could feel the uneasy feeling she got when she kissed him but rubbed it off as paranoia.
“Hey” Max said uncomfortably, knowing that whatever happened between the next minutes would be the fate of their relationship, they were alone and if she didn’t tell him then he didn’t know if he’d be able to handle his heart breaking for the second or third time that very day.
“So where did you go during lunch” Max asked bringing the subject up.
‘oh no, why did you have to bring this up Max’ Liz thought.
“I got caught up in my Trig class” Liz answered shuffling through her locker.
That was all the answer Max needed his heart was now breaking bit by bit.
“What happened” Max asked pushing her forward to answer him, he was pissed now at himself for being so weak to now lose Liz, at Liz for cheating on him and at Jeremy he had stepped into anther Man’s territory, he was the one who caused everything.
Liz didn’t know what to say, she’d expected Max to drop it but he hadn’t he was pushing her for an answer, her fears rose as she thought Max suspected something but if he didn’t she didn’t want to ruin her relationship with Max if he didn’t.
“I was stuck with a question and Mrs Hanagan was helping me out” Liz answered.
“I saw you” Max answered dejectedly dropping the bomb on Liz, looking at the floor.
“What” Liz asked, wondering if she heard wrong.
‘I saw you at lunch I came looking for you.......and.............I saw you” Max answered looking up at her his unshed tears glistening in the light.
sad moment I know sniff I had a hard time writing this but I have and yet another cliff-hanger........tehehe okay well your just gonna have to leave FB then.
and you guessed right Jeremy is a jerk, I get a bitter taste just saying his name.........
and the good thing is will be assignment FREE.....LOL when I do start writing the next part
just want to add a lill shameless plugging
if you like 19th century stories with a twist go read Prisoner in Life by dreamer_to_the_end
and m14's don't put your spell on me
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|posted on 18-Jun-2002 7:50:08 PM by roswelllover|
|whoops dble post|
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|posted on 20-Jun-2002 12:44:47 AM by roswelllover|
|well I wrote this part after I wroteteh last one but didn't post it....wnted you to WIAT....|
here it is thanks for the FB.....I'm gushing
‘I saw you at lunch I came looking for you.......and.............I saw you” Max answered looking up at her his unshed tears glistening in the light.
Liz’s mind was running frantic, he’d seen her. seen her with Jeremy, seen them kiss. Liz looked at him her eyes as wide as saucers.
“By the looks on your face I'm guessing you have no explanation” Max said, burying the hurt and suppressing the anger.
“Max” Liz said moving towards him.
“No, don’t touch me” Max said stepping back, Liz looked hurt but knew she deserved it.
“So your not even going to try and explain” Max asked.
“I.....I'm sorry Max” Liz said tears forming at her eyes “I...god I don't even know why I did it” Liz explained.
“You know I would've forgiven you if you would've just told me the truth” Max said calmly.
“I didn’t want to hurt me” Liz answered softly.
“Hurt me, Liz you’ve already hurt me by sticking your damn tongue in his mouth!, so save it okay you don't know how much seeing you and the jerk in a lip lock Liz and then find out my girlfriend can’t even be honest with me!” Max shouted, attracting attention around the school hall.
“Max please” Liz said softly
“Is this how it’s always going to be Liz, a new guy comes to school and your ready to leave me” Max said.
‘Max, no” Liz said.
“You have no right to talk Liz, it’s your turn to listen” Max said his words piercing through her.
“What the fuck did I do, am I not good enough for you, are the sparks suddenly gone what!” Max answered. “Don’t answer that until tell you too”
“I’m better off dating Tess!” Max shouted “She may act like a whore but she isn’t one” Max added.
“WHORE, I didn’t sleep with the guy Max, I kissed him, it’s a free country okay, I know what I did was wrong and I'm resenting it but is there a need for you to do this!” Liz shouted
“Yes there’s a need for me to do this, you cheated on me” Max shouted.
“ I kissed him Max BIG DEAL , get over it okay I said I was sorry and your not listening to me” Liz shouted, she wasn't going to let Max make her feel bad about what she did, she knew what she’d done was wrong but he was out of line.
“You know what I can’t even stand talking to you anymore” Max shouted.
“Yeah run Max, I don’t need you, I was without you anyway go back to your whore!” Liz shouted back.
well my whole fighting scene sucked......I'm bad at breaking up scene's, it’s really short too.....really short
your really going to hate Liz now....
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|posted on 22-Jun-2002 1:55:03 AM by roswelllover|
|I'm gonna explain Liz and Max in my story.......|
Liz is acting like this because she isn’t used to commitment, as living a rich life all her life she’s gotten whatever she’s wanted, she’s had guys fall at her feet even with Max and Jeremy but with max he developed more for Liz and it got to much for Liz although she wants more form Max she can’t help living the way she’s bought up.
Max at the beginning of the story was the ‘im the man’ type of guy until Liz changed him which means he’s soften he’s also got rich parents and lives in a rich lifestyle but unlike Liz, Max fell for Liz deeper and it’s what made him change.
a note to everybody I'm a DREAMER so just bear with me in the mean time your not going to like the next few parts as Max and Liz will be separated for a while now onto part 29
Thanks for the FB
Max got to his car and punched the side of his door, swearing at the pain that rushed through him, he ran his fingers through his hair in frustration ‘the nerve of her to shout at me, free country she can now go fuck him for all he cared’ but he knew that no matter what if he ran away and moved away from Roswell, Liz Parker would always be in his heart leaving a big wound.
getting in he turned on the ignition and speed away from WRH, the place where he now left half his heart, the place where his heart broke, the place where everything happened, the place where the guy who destroyed them attended.
Liz slammed her locker shut, and stormed to her car ‘who did he think he was, she wasn’t married to him, she could do as she pleased' but his comment about Tess had thrown Liz off the line, no one compared her to Tess and she wasn’t going to let anyone start now.
Getting in her car and pulling out of the parking lot in full speed she speeded home.
What they didn’t know was Tess had heard and seen everything after coming back from home as her nose had healed she’s panned on seeing what the over sicking lovey-dovey couple were up too, and to her surprise what she had seen had been like she’s won the a million dollars ‘there was trouble in paradise already, Max had caught Liz making out with a another guy, I knew that slut wouldn’t be able to stay with Max, and god that look on her face when he said I was better, maybe I do have a chance with Max’ and with that she got in her father’s flash car Max’s house where she’d ‘comfort’ Max.
When Liz reached her house, she rushed up the Crashdown stairs and stormed pass her mom.
“What's wrong Liz” Nancy asked.
“leave me alone Mother” Liz spat out slamming her bedroom door.
Nancy walked up to her daughter’s door “Liz” Nancy said.
“Leave me Alone!” Liz shouted turning her radio on, to drown out her mom’s voice.
“Is it Sean” Nancy asked Liz hadn’t told her parents that she was dating Max knowing she was dating Sean was good enough, if they found out she was dating Max she would be prohibited going out ever.
“No mom” Liz said.
“Talk to me Liz” Nancy said.
“Look mom please I need to be alone” Liz shouted, Nancy walked away in defeat, she had to come out sooner or later.
Max entered his empty house, he was thankful his house was empty, Isabel had gone over to Alex’s and his parents were on some sort of meeting, walking into the lounge room he turned the stereo on and opened the alcohol cabinet that his dad kept in the lounge room , filling the empty glass up to the brim with vodka he sat down on the couch and turned the TV on, he wanted to drown out his sorrows and forget about Liz and if drinking would be the only way then so be it, he hardly drank if he did he only did a little but he didn’t care now, if he died in some stupid accident or not, his life was now shit worth living or not.
Tess parked her car opposite Max’s house, she knew no one appeared to be home as Isabel had gone somewhere probably with Alex and The Evans were on a business trip, smirking smugly she stepped out of the car and pulled her short tee down to expose a little more cleavage and smoothing her small mini skirt she shut the door and looked t her reflection once she approved she walked up the drive way to the door and rang the bell.
As the music was loud and as the TV Max didn’t hear the door bell ring, and continued to drink his strong vodka.
Tess waited at the door, and figured he hadn’t heard as she could hear the loud music, she was about to go to his bedroom window which she knew he kept open but saw that the door was slightly ajar hardly enough to see that it was open, smiling she pushed it open, well now she’d really be able to surprise Max, walking in and shutting the door behind her she smiled when she saw half a bottle of Vodka sitting on the table in the lounge and Max sitting on the couch with a glass in his hand ‘so Max was the drinking type, it's going to make this seduction even easier.’
Max sat on the couch, oblivious to Tess’s entrance, he jumped when he felt hands run don his chest.
“Hey Max” Tess purred in his ear.
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|posted on 22-Jun-2002 5:45:36 PM by roswelllover|
|thanks for the FB.|
“Hey Max” Tess purred in his ear, kissing his jaw.
“Shit” Max said jumping up.
Tess moved around the couch to Max twinging her arms around his neck and pressing herself against him.
Max tried to step away, Tess knew that it wasn’t going to be easy the alcohol wasn’t working yet.
“Max” Tess said fingering the material of his t-shirt “I heard what happened with you and Liz, you don't deserve her, you deserve more, I heard what you told her about me and it’s true Max I'd never cheat on you you'd’ be my only one” Tess said sweetly, and stepped on her toes and Kissed him forcefully.
max pushed her away, after his fuzzy state of mind registered that it was Tess.
GET THE HELL OFF ME TESS!” Max shouted, looking at Tess in disgust.
“JUST CUZ I BROKE UP WITH LIZ DOESN'T MEAN YOU CAN JUMP ME” Max shouted “NOW GET OUT OF MY HOUSE BEFORE I CALL THE COPS FOR TRESPASSING!” Max shouted at her.
“But Max-” Tess was cut off.
“No buts Tess, Get out” Max yelled.
Tess huffed “Fine, but you know what no one will ever be better than me not that slut no one” Tess said glaring at Max and straightening her clothes before waking out of his house.
Max ran his fingers through his hair “How’d that happen, god, he just wanted to be off woman for a while they were starring to be a burden, dating just wasn’t cutting out like it used too” Max thought to himself.
Lol okay it’s REALLY short but I gotta rest your fears somehow don’t I........
|posted on 26-Jun-2002 12:48:14 AM by roswelllover|
|well people I'm back LOL, I decided not to torture you guys without a new part so here it is part 31 and thanks for the FB,|
The next day Max walked through the school hallway with a mild hangover although drinking aspirin helped it wasn't as good, he knew vaguely about what happened after Tess had left he'd pondered over the thought of making Liz pay for what she did but he wasn't self- centred he may act it but he wasn't one, he wasn't like that besides Liz didn't like him so making her pay or making her jealous wouldn't work, if something was too happen which he doubted would it would be up to fate.
He could fell the student body's eye's boring holes into him, he knew they were talking, they'd practically broke up in front of an audience and if Tess was amongst them nothing would slip away from her and her little sewer friends.
Liz could feel eyes, and some death glares from the entire school as she had walked through the school hallway, she didn't care lass of what people thought it was her life what concern was it to everyone else's, Last night her mom had left her alone only coming back an hour later when Liz had refused to eat dinner or come out of her room, "Honey I'm sure whatever Sean did is forgivable" Sean why does she act like she knows me, and I'm not even going to correct her she can fell all high and mighty about 'I know my daughter better than other mothers' when she knows jack shit, I'm a pissed off woman today and anyone who gets in my way won't ever see daylight again.
Walking to her locker, she was met by Jeremy.
"Hey" Jeremy said walking up to her "is it okay that I you know hang out with you" Jeremy asked.
Liz smiled at him "It's fine" Liz said.
"I've kind of been glared to death this morning" Jeremy said "What's happened do they do this to all new students" Jeremy asked.
"No, um me and my boyfriend broke up" Liz said.
"I'm sorry, was it because of me" Jeremy said in mock guilt.
"Oh no, it just happened" Liz answered.
"Maybe I shouldn't hang out-" Liz cut him off "no, who cares about what the school thinks" Liz said
"are you sure" Jeremy asked smiling smugly in the inside 'it had worked now it was time for plan B get Liz to go out with him'
"Yeah I'm sure" Liz assured, through their conversation, girls glared at her as what looked like to the outsiders as flirting.
"How could she give up such a great guy" Holly said to Catlin
"I know, look at her flirting, if I was her I wouldn't even look twice at another guy max would be it for me" Catlin said.
"Have you seen Max today he looks so miserable, maybe we can comfort him" Holly said in excitement as her and Catlin walked faster towards Max's locker.
Liz had been with Jeremy all day and wasn't tense now that she wasn't dating anyone she didn't have to worry about Max, Jeremy turned out to be a nice guy she just hoped he wouldn't turn out like max and pull the 'were a married couple we are bonded for life' on her, it was lunch and she was headed towards her locker.
Throughout the day, Max and Liz had been able to avid each other by lunch the entire school knew of the shocking break up, by lunch Maria, Serena, Michael, Kyle, Alex and Isabel knew of the news as Isabel and Michael weren't the happiest.
"She cheated on him Maria what explanation would she have for that" Michael said, his best friend was hurting and it was because of one Liz Parker.
"C'mon Michael you have to give her a chance we've only heard of the side where the whole schools involved Max and Liz haven't told us.
"We don't need Max and Liz to confirm it, I found Max on the couch last Nigh Maria, drunk, have you seen him this morning he's miserable, Liz is my best friend, was , whatever I'm not sure right now but he's my brother and I'm going to be there for him, I can't side with Liz in this one she hurt Max too much this time" Isabel said.
"Isabel" Maria said exasperated
"Maria, don't just let it go okay, it's there choice we'll just-" Serena, Kyle, Maria, Michael, Isabel and Alex all saw Liz walking down to her locker laughing with Jeremy beside her.
"She has an explanation all right, I'm leaving going to go find Max, someone who is worth my time" Michael said walking away.
"I can't stay here" Isabel said running after Michael to hunt down Max, Alex running after her.
"Great, you know it would be better off if they hated each other affectionately not hating each other and meaning it” Kyle said.
“Hey guys” Liz greeted “This is Jeremy white, Jeremy this is Maria Deluca, Kyle Valenti and Serena Aberman” Liz introduced.
“Hey” Jeremy said
“Hi” everyone muttered.
“Where are Michael, Isabel and Alex” Liz asked confused.
“They needed to go somewhere” Maria answered.
“Okay” Liz answered.
Alex had caught up with Isabel and Michael, they entered the lunch quad and spotted Max and his jock friends laughing on the grass secluded away from the rest of the school.
“Hey” Isabel said approaching them.
“Hey, Iz, Michael, Alex” Max greeted he could see the sympathy in Alex and Isabel eyes.
“That’s our que to leave, you still coming to practise after school Evans” Jake asked
“Yeah, cya” Max waved and they left.
“Look if your here to pity me you can just leave” Max said he could see the sympathy in Alex and Isabel eyes.
“Were not her to pity you Max, your my brother what am I suppose to do, don’t push me away Max” Isabel said.
“you weren't there for me before what makes you think I need you now Isabel go back to Liz” Max said.
“Max your my brother, were related by blood ” Isabel said
“I know I'm your fucking brother Isabel okay I don't need you to shove that in my face I don't need anyone and I don't need this!” Max yelled.
“Fine” Isabel yelled back and sat down next to Sean Alex followed suit.
“When are your parents coming home Max” Michael asked changing the subject he knew his Best friend hated it when people felt sorry for him it’s what caused him to push them away.
Max shrugged “They said they’d be here around ten at night” Max answered.
“You holding a party” Max asked.
“Nah, it’s Friday I know but I'm really not in the mood to clean up and organise a party” Max said.
“How about we spend some best friend time and go to the arcade” Michael asked “Sean, Alex you guys can come too” Michael asked.
“Michael you spend too much time with Maria, your even starting to sound like her” max chuckled.
“I’m glad you find this amusing Maxwell but what will it be” Michael asked.
“Yeah sure” Max answered ‘he wasn't going to let a break up worth Liz ruin his life, Liz wasn't worth mourning and pining over’
“Sean, Alex” Michael said turning to them “Sorry Isabel only a guys thing” Michael said, Isabel nodded.
“Yeah sure, I’ll bet your asses at pool this time round” Sean said.
“Sorry gotta date with Iz” Alex said smiling at his girlfriend
“Well Sean meet us at the arcade at 6 then we’ll work on that bet of yours” Michael said.
this mite be sorter cuz I wrote the second half of this then lost it (as I advise ALWAYS save your work) and so I had to type again *sighs* FB plzzzzzz or else I'll be wondering if my spending time to re-write part 31 was worth it..........
|posted on 1-Jul-2002 12:14:11 AM by roswelllover|
emmie- lol 'someone plz beat Jeremy up' that has just lit a light bulb in my head along with the rest of your ideas lol thanks for the FB, gotta put things to work.
narly21, Loralee0607, ps_dreamer, LizParkerEvans4evax, Qtygirl411, MelodyCrsh47, mermaidgirl
clueless-thanks for the FB
m14- lol, it's nothing it's great reading your fics lol, thanks for the FB and Bumps
clueless,MelodyCrsh47,emmie, m14- thanks for the bumps
dreamer_to_the_end-lol 'who does she think she is the queen geez' lol I'm guessing that's a yes thanks for the FB.
partyinrosgirl- I'm gushing lol thanks for all the compliments and thanks for the FB
abbs007-no no party, must've missed it but max said he wasn't having one, I knew that if I Max had a party they wouldn't sort things out like I wanted them too, thanks for the FB
the status of Jeremy and Liz's relationship will be told in the next chapter.
“Liz can I talk to you “ Serena asked.
“Yeah sure” Liz said confused.
walking over to a secluded corner Serena turned to Liz “What the hell is going on” Serena asked.
‘What do you mean Serena” Liz asked.
“Jeremy, it’s too soon Liz” Serena said.
“Don't tell me what to do Serena” Liz answered firmly.
“Do you even care what shit Max must be going through” Serena asked.
“No I don’t care what that asshole thinks” Liz spat out.
“What happened Liz, cause all I've heard so far is that you cheated on him to he dumped you cus he didn't; want you anymore and I know the last one isn't true, I don't think both of them a true” Serena said.
“It’s not your business Serena” Liz said irritated
“two of my friends are hurting for what because both a rich asses who don't listen to their feelings except their delusional brains” Serena yelled.
“You can’t judge me Serena, if I was your friend you’d back off” Liz said then turned around to walk away.
“Our groups falling apart Liz” Serena whispered out.
“Well deal with it, cus I have my problems too” Liz said walking off back to Jeremy, Maria and Kyle.
“Where’s Serena” Kyle asked.
“I don't know do I look like her secutary(sp) to you” Liz snapped.
“Sorry” Kyle muttered before walking off towards the direction Liz had come form.
Isabel, Michael, Max Sean and Alex sat on the grass, talking.
“Geez I feel like a animal at a zoo with everyone looking at me” Max said shivering at the looks he was receiving from half the female population of WRH.
“What animal” Isabel asked smirking.
“Funny Isabel” Max said sarcastically.
“Hey man your available your going to receive those looks from every girl until one of them gets you” Sean said.
“Well I guess that’s gonna be for a long time, I've given up dating for a while” Max said.
“You Kidding!” Michael and Sean yelled.
“No I'm not Kidding” Max said.
“Are you gay” Sean asked.
“I've put of f dating Sean not girls” Max said sarcastically.
“Man Liz has ruined you for everyone” Michael said
“This has nothing to do with Liz, I need to find my self before I commit myself to a girl” Max said
‘What's Maria giving you” Michael asked narrowing eyes.
Max rolled his eyes “I’m not the one who sounds like Maria, Michael” Max retorted.
Michael sat back, backing off.
either more tomrrow but if not, then VERY soon.
|posted on 1-Jul-2002 9:12:37 PM by roswelllover|
|thanks for the FB|
lill self bump pathetic I knw where did evryone GO!!!!!!
|posted on 2-Jul-2002 9:46:20 PM by roswelllover|
“So what are you now a couple” Maria asked, of course she loved Max like a best friend but Liz needed her and if that meant hurting Max in the process then she’d have too.
Liz shook her head "were just friends" Liz answered.
"Oh" Maria said as if a big secrets had been let out.
“It’s what everyone’s assuming, let them think I really don’t care cuz I have nothing to hide” Liz said.
“Then whey did you and Max break up” Maria asked
“He had this idea that we were married, I hate possessive guys” Liz answered.
“He never acted possessive” Maria aid
“Maria, who’s side are you on, I don’t need you pinpointing that Max was the victim here” Liz said.
Maria sighed her stubborn friend was never going to realize the truth.
Serena and Kyle had soon joined Max and the others as they didn’t want to have another encounter with pissed, selfish Liz.
Max and Liz had still been able to avoid each other throughout the day but knowing that max had football practise and Liz had cheerleading practise they were bound to see each other sometime.
Jeremy had decided to tag along what guy wouldn’t give up the chance to see hot and sweaty Liz in minimal clothing, He opened the gym door to se, 5 girls stretching in crop tops and cheerleading skirts but no sign of Liz.
“What the hell are you doing here, if your looking for the football team there on the field” Isabel spat out bitterly getting up from doing her leg stretches this guys wasn’t the person she wanted to see.
“Uh no I came to see the cheerleading practises” Jeremy answered.
“Well we don't allow audiences if you want to see come to the game on Friday” Isabel answered.
“Isabel stop giving him the third degree” Liz said walking into the gym.
“Yeah and ho are you to tell me what to do” Isabel said.
“Look Isabel your here to practise if you like it or not, now go practise” Liz said firmly.
“You suddenly get all bitchy and think you have the right to boss me around, you can’t kick me out just because I'm Max's sister I know how to play this game Liz if you try to bring me down I'll bring you down with me” Isabel said walking towards Serena.
Liz ignored Isabel and walked towards Jeremy “Hey, sorry about that but what are you doing here” Liz asked
Jeremy shrugged “got nothing else to do on a Thursday afternoon” Jeremy answered sitting down on the bench.
“C’mon captain we have an hour, I'm not staying behind just because you were socialising” Serena shouted
Liz sighed and walked back, they started their practise, they needed to get it perfect there was going to be the third to last game tomorrow before football season finished.
The guys all come back form the field sweaty and tired, coach had made them practise harder than before as they needed to kick Las Cruses high’s ass in the next game the only team unbeaten by West Roswell High the guys headed towards the guys locker room, Max saw the gym door and without any reason to looked through the glass window of the door to see Liz talking to Jeremy, his heart sank ‘She’s gotten over me fast enough’ with that thought Max turned around he was going to have fun tonight, first night of may to come.
and peeps when u have time go check out my new fic -My Life As Liz Parker viewthread?page=1&forum=dreamer-fanfiction&id=179342
|posted on 2-Jul-2002 10:07:21 PM by roswelllover|
|bump I've fixed the title|
|posted on 28-Jul-2002 2:59:43 AM by roswelllover|
|thank you so much for caring and bumping|
I appreciate it a lot, for the reason for my absence if because my computer had gotten a virus, I've lost everything so it'll be a while before I can get new parts to my stories but I've managed to do this one so here's part 34 I've lost count.
After Changing Max, Michael and Sean had headed home coming back and meeting at the arcade where Sean joined them 10 minutes later.
"Man C'mon I've spent $20 in coins already can we go before I lose everything" Michael said.
"What's the rush it was your idea to come here wasn't it" Max said as he played foosball against Sean leading 12-9.
"Yeah well that's cuz you've kicked all our ass's tonight Maxwell and by the way that was only cuz we felt sorry for ya" Michael said folding his arms in front of his chest.
"He kicks.... He scores" Max shouted in a singsong voice causing both Sean and Michael to groan.
"I have to agree with Mikey here I for one have had enough... I have a great idea" Sean said smirking.
"Let's hear it Harrison, I'm up for anything tonight" Michel said.
"So why'd you bring us here Harrison" Michael asked, they'd drove from the arcade to end up at Toby's Garage.
"This my friends is the car" Sean said taking the blue covers off the car.
"Oh man...wow Harrison this is like every guys fantasy after sex" Michael said circling the car like a vulture circling his prey.
"IS this THE blue Viper the one and only in Roswell, New Mexico the one that everyone has wanted to have their hands on" Max said
"Yeah Evans it's the same car" Sean answered chuckling at looks on both Michael and Max's faces.
"and how did you know about it" Max asked.
"It’s my boss Toby's me and Kyle are the only two guys who have access to these keys" Sean said jingling the keys in the air.
"And we my fellow football players are going for a ride" Sean said unlocking the door and opening the diver's side.
"Are you for real" Michael said with excitement.
"Oh yeah, this baby is a chick magnet and I for one need to get laid...and soon and this girl will be my tool, so you guys coming or what" Sean asked.
"Whoa were in, who'd give up an opportunity like this" Michael said as he jumped into the passengers seat while max got into the back.
"There's a hi-fi system in this thing, pinch me am I hallucinating"Michael said, Max rolled his eyes at how much Michael sounded like Maria.
"My dad has got to get me one of these" Max said "my convertible needs and upgrade"
"Well hot shot not everyone's dad's a wealth lawyer" Michael retorted.
"Max ignored him, Sean started the ignition while Max shuffled through the CD's and picking a 2002 latest remix CD and popped it into the CD player, with the sounds of Incubus's 'Are you In' fading behind as they left the Garage in high speed.
"You know what there are a number of things a car is better than a chick" Michael said.
"I'd love Maria to hear this one" Max smirked knowing the fiery personality of Maria would seriously piss her off.
"But she won't be hearing is she Maxwell" Michael said before continuing on with his conversation "Anyway cars a re better than chicks reason 1 they don't boss you around or ask for anything, cars are hassle free" Michael said.
"Yeah but you'd be sexless" Sean chipped in.
"Geez man is that all you think about" Michael said.
"Were guys, that's what we were put on this god-forsaken planet for in the first place, we have hormones and we have a reason to be horny and to need sex" Sean explained.
Max shook his head as he sat at the back enjoying the sounds of jimmy eat world as they played on.
After joyriding in the desert the guys decided to head to Buds 24/7
"Can I drive back" Max asked.
"Here" Sean said throwing the keys to Max who made his way to the drivers side.
As they arrived at Buds 24/7 the place was packed not that full but full enough if it was Buds 24/7 what would normally be a few cars was full with several what was filled with a few people was filled with 10-20
"Looks like everyone decided to come here" Michael said looking around as they saw an empty spot to park the car.
“Yeah and this is a bonus man look at the chicks swooning our car” Sean said ecstatic.
“Our Car” Max asked as they individually got out of the car.
“Shut up Evans, have a little fun” Sean retorted as he saw 3 girls approach them.
“Sean dude sorry to rain on your parade here but I'm outta here, if Maria so much as finds out about this I'm screwed” Michael said walking away in the opposite direction.
“He is so whipped” Sean answered before the 3 girls approached them.
“Hi” a blonde greeted seductively smiling a full blown smile and moving her hips putting Sean in a trance, Max rolled his eyes as he saw her as another Tess.
“This yours” a brunette asked eyeing the car and then looking Max over flirtatiously.
“Yes” Sean answered his eyes glued to the blonde's figure.
“Mind my friends manner but I’m Heather, this is Sara and Lauren” heather, the third girl answered
Sean broke out of his trance as Max elbowed him in the ribs to introduce themselves but rolled his eyes and decided to do it himself “I’m Max and this is Sean” Max greeted.
As he introduced himself, in his line of vision he saw Liz talking to Jeremy as they leaned against her car, Liz holding what he knew would be her favourite Vanilla milkshake.
‘What the hell is she doing here, probably showing the asshole around town” Max thought as he watched his ex-girlfriend again with his now worst enemy, as though Liz could sense him she looked up to meet his eyes for a second before Max turned away.
“Who's your friend” heather asked looking in the direction Michael stood.
“That’s Michael Guerin” Sean answered.
“Max, Sean it was nice to meet you but I think I'll go up and meet your friend Michael “ Heather said smiling before heading in Michaels direction.
“how about I buy you a drink” Sean asked Lauren.
“I’d like that” Lauren said smiling.
“You two want anything” Sean asked Max and Sara both saying no.
“You have a girlfriend” Sara asked after Sean and Lauren left leaving them to be alone.
“NO” Max answered.
“Well I aren’t I lucky then” Sara flirted closer to Max revealing more of her amply-filled V neck “you seem to be someone I’ve been looking for tall....” Sara whispered against his ear “Lean, mature, sexy and single” Sara finished her hot breath tickling Max’s neck, though Max could see how hard Sara was flirting and that she was using the oldest tricks in the books of flirting he made no advancements to move away as it healed his ego knowing he hadn’t lost all his charms of getting a girl.
Liz watched on at the flirting that proceeded between her ex-boyfriend and what she would say a college whore if Liz had the power to kill with death rays, Sara would probably be dead by now ‘Who the hell does she think she is, She has got to be worse that Tess, I mean she’s twice his age and she’s gone past the just friends territory” Liz thought as she clenched her fists that laid beside her.
Sara was stepping forward when she lost balance ‘accidentally’ causing her to fall forward and for Max to catch her in time, his arms sliding awkwardly around her waist as her weight sagged against his chest.
“are you okay” Max asked
“yeah, I’m fine, I think” She murmured, her head rested on his shoulder “Thanks to you” She smiled battling her eyelashes at him, Max’s eyes drifted up and he saw Liz’s eyes boring holes into Sara’s back.
“I can’t believe she did that, it’s like the oldest trick in the book, arrrg” Liz growled as her blood boiled, her jealousy suppressing further.
“What the hell, he can do whatever he likes if that means he’s going out with that whore I really don’t care” Liz thought as the other half of her became stubborn and she engaged herself in a battle with herself.
“Then why are you pissy and jealous’ the other side of her shouted out in her mind
“Shut up” Liz shouted in her mind.
“Uh Liz you okay” Jeremy asked after waiting a few minutes after asking her a question and not receiving an answer
Liz broke out of her thoughts and apologised to Jeremy for spacing out on him.
Jeremy nodded in understanding knowing full well what she was thinking as he eyes were glued behind him which happened to be Max, her ex he watching her watching Max and some girl her eyes turn black in hatred and anger and saw he clench her fists which in result had deformed her finished milkshake cup he knew that he had to leave before the only obstacle in Liz's life who stood 10 meters away wove back into her life again.
“I’ve had enough, how about we go somewhere else” Jeremy asked.
“Fine with me where do you want to go last before I have to be home” Liz asked “How about the Roswell Central Park” Liz suggested.
“That’s fine” Jeremy answered ’anywhere but here’ he added on.
Upon seeing Liz leave Max sighed he’d seen a glimmer of hope that she’d be jealous but nothing she left jus like she had arrived.
“Hey Max buddy can I talk to ya” Sean asked walking back with
“Yeah, sure” Max said, Sean and Max walked further so they would be out of earshot from the girls.
“Max man can you do me a favour, me and Lauren are going to head somewhere else could you take the car back to the garage” Sean asked.
“Yeah, at least someone can get good out of this night” Max answered.
“Thanks man, I owe ya one” Sean said
After Lauren and Sean had left Lauren and Heather had left having an early class in the morning, Sara hadn’t left without giving max her number and a peck on the cheek and brushing her body against his.
“What was that about Maxwell you two looked pretty cosy” Michael asked with a smug smile.
“yeah Michael it was one way I never did anything and it’s not like I'm gonna call her anyway” MAx answered screwing up the piece of paper she had handed to him. “and besides what about you, Liz was here and it’s going to get to Maria that you were speaking to another girl who was standing rather too close to you” MAx said with a raised eyebrow.
“That was nothing I told her I was with someone and she understood we became really god friends” Michael answered
“Yeah I could see that” Max mumbled “I’d love to her what Maria has to say about this” Max said.
“Are you always looking for an opportunity to get me killed” Michael answered.
“Oh no I couldn’t live without my best friend” Max mocked.
turning the radio on, the sounds of new found Glory’s ‘My friends over you’ blared the stereo.
Michael chuckled “Now this is something I can agree with cuz you my friend are over Liz”
Max looked out the window watching the darkness of the night speed past by thinking just how wrong Michael was.
That’s it guys I’m finished back with some more later hopefully.
FB plz lots and lots.
|posted on 2-Aug-2002 1:22:55 AM by roswelllover|
|I'll have an update up soon today just keep an eye out for it.........|
|posted on 2-Aug-2002 2:27:24 AM by roswelllover|
|ps_dreamer- thanks for the Fb, and Liz will know just how much of a jerk Jeremy really is.....soon.|
clueless(x5)-thanks for the FB and the bumps
angelbaby6977,MelodyCrsh47, Gaby7tvm, Abby- thanks for the FB
Michaela(x3)- no I wouldn't do that to you guys Michaela I'd probably hurt myself in the process, thanks for the FB
Joanna (x4)- I agree with you we will never understand guys thing with cars just like they'll never understand us as they seem to complain, Liz will realize Jeremy's a big loser soon and I'm guessing so will the rest of you even more than u already thinks so now. thanks for the Fb and the bumps.
mermaidgirl- yes this fic will have a happy ending I can't stand writing anything but happy endings, it's what is great about the world of fanfiction there can always be a happy ending. thanks for the FB
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Half the population of West Roswell High and Las Cruses had come to watch their team play head to head in the semi finals, blue and yellow banners were hung form the spectator stand supporting their favourite football team.
The west Roswell high school crowed roared and cheered as their star player ‘Max Evans’ scored the 3rd goal in the game.
The players all huddled around the coach as the first half of the 60 minute game ended for a break.
“Great job Evans, but I'm afraid I have some bad news like I told you this afternoon, we have a new player-” The coach started but to be cut off by Max.
“What new player” Max asked dumfounded as he had been late to the meeting before the game that afternoon.
“We have a new Player and even though we only have one more game left his father who’s the manager of this team has insisted his son to play in the next game and the second half of this one, he’s made a decision to have Max off while his son plays, so I'm sorry but I'm taking you off for 20 minutes”
“What” Max asked pissed, he played his best out there why would he be benched.
“Jeremy Whites your on next” the coach called on.
Max’s jaw clenched in anger and his eyes grew black in hatred, he glared at Jeremy as he walked to the bench where the coach would sit, he couldn’t believe it first it was Liz now he was taking over his football position.
Max didn’t care, Jeremy may have arrived but he Max Evans had been in this town since he was born and he had attended West Roswell High for 4 years no one could take what was rightfully his.
When Max reached the bench he realised Liz was sitting on the right of the coach, he sat down on the coach’s left not wanting to sit next to Liz while she cheered for Jeremy.
The crowed shouted when they were told of the switch that their star player was being benched, with that support from the crowed Max smiled he was sure that no one would take over his life not even new boy Jeremy.
The game resumed, the coach had gotten up and stepped forward towards the line and shouted out to his players as they missed the ball, this leaving a gap between Max and Liz, Max cursed when Las Cruses scored another goal and with them 27-27he couldn’t believe how many goals had been scored in just 10 minute, he was fidgeting knowing he should be out there helping his team, the students continued shouting for #12 ‘Max’s number’ so they could win and have a interesting game, fortunately for WRHS Kyle was a meter in near the score line with one Las Cruses player after him, in his excitement Max stood up anticipating what would happen next the cheerleaders all stood up, the crowd was shouting as they watched Kyle head closer Max gravitated towards Liz, The crowed went wild when Kyle scored the goal ending their tie 27-27, Max and Liz jumped into each others arms in excitement, suddenly realising they pulled away and looking away, lucky for them the coach called Max back on to play the rest of the second half, Liz closed her eyes after Max ran onto the field and remembered the feeling if being in his arms again and sighed, her being apart from him was bringing her to realisations she never once considered before.
West Roswell High had won with Max scoring three more goals in the second half the schools hero once again and with Michael scoring one it was a joyous time as they had made it into the finals, while Jeremy stood at the side glaring at his worst rival.
it’s short I know but lots of FB plz, I won’t be able to post next week until the weekend cuz I have a really busy week next week but keep on bumping.
|posted on 6-Aug-2002 2:31:15 AM by roswelllover|
|lol u guys are really demanding and I gotta love you guys for it, thanks for bumping heaps it feels great to know this fic is wnated|
big thanks to
for the bumps
I'll ahve a new part out if not today then soon if today then it's a BONUS but till then keep on bumping
|posted on 8-Aug-2002 2:28:25 AM by roswelllover|
|DrEaMPrYnCeZz- it’s kinda easy to miss this story lol I guess the title’s not very eye catchy anyways thanks for the FB|
ps dreamer, clueless, Abby, Michaela, Joanna, ForeverDreaming8602, angelbaby6977, emmie, katmcken, JDreamer, -thanks for the FB and the continuous Bumps from a lot of you.......lol.......
and anyone else I left out thank you
well here I am and yet u guys got me to write a new part when I wasn’t suppose to and instead was suppose to do her assignments, lol don't worry I don’t mind, if u don’t tell I much rather do this than do my assignments but thank you for pulling me away from my massive workload, well I knew it the hate thermometer is increasing as I get further into the story with Jeremy , this part was hard to write but I have to fill up the space for what I have planned further on.....
Max walked out the changing room hoping to keep away from Liz to reduce the tension they’d created between themselves with the field incident, he wished for everything to go back to how it was but that wasn't reality, reality was harsh and cruel and now he was going to endure the pain, without noticing he bumped into the one and only annoying parrot Tess.
“What do you want Tess” Max bit out after noticing her standing in front of him.
Tess shook her head “You know something Max I don’t know what it is with guys but you sure are dense, I was Liz’s best friend for a year Max, she doesn’t care about anything or anyone besides cold hard cash, she was bought up that way and she’s going to stay that way, do you really think it’s going to work” Tess asked
Max started waving his hand in the air, and turning around as if looking for something.
Tess looked at him funny “Max what the hell are you doing”
“there seems to be a annoying insect somewhere which doesn’t seem to be going away” Max remarked with a smirk.
Tess just tossed her shoulder length curly blonde hair, ignoring the comment.
“Her life consists of numerous boyfriends, shopping sprees, lots of attention royalty and popularity, under any of those categories did I mention steady boyfriend” Tess asked.
“look don’t come to suddenly as if you the ‘Love doctor’ okay you have no idea Tess, you may no Liz for a while but that’s all a while so don’t throw this fucking information in my face and get off you high horse, just like Jeremy you think you can bring your ass in here and flaunt it around making you automatically worthy, but your not you take what is not yours and I hope you die a painful death” Max said truly saying how he felt.
“What was wrong with us Max” Tess sighed giving up. “we were good together, before our feelings for Liz” Tess continued.
“Oh so this is where the sudden sympathy and advice is coming from, w never were good together Tess, you were only a poor substitute I wouldn't wish hell to anyone but you Tess re the most deserving to be down there along with Jeremy it's an amazement that the you and Jeremy aren’t together you’d cause havoc at this school all together, but instead your hear pissing the ones who are trying to mend their lives, take a hint Tess Go away” Max said.
“You better watch out Max, because from now on your life won’t be so much of a fairytale as you thought it was” Tess spat out bitterly before turning on her newly bought heels and storming out the school twin doors.
“Yeah well my life never was a fairytale” Max mumbled to himself.
“I tried reasoning with him but arg... he’s got his fucking head in the clouds” Tess said as she and Jeremy had decided what to do.
“I saw them today on the field, they’d accidentally jumped into each others arms I could see the longing in Liz’s eyes and the other night I think she’s getting deeper” Jeremy answered.
“we need to do something , you want Max down and I want Liz we are the only two who can make their life hell” Tess said
“What do you suggest” Jeremy asked.
Max had been in a foul mood since yesterday after his talk with Tess, he had mopped around the house, drowning himself in sad depressing music which irritated Isabel beyond the point she threw his CD out the window, and sitting in front of the T. V. Diane had noticed the change in Max’s attitude for a long time but lately t had gotten worst and more open he hardly opened himself to her, she missed the mother son relationship she dreamed for when he was younger he’d never talked to hr and it hurt her to think she may be losing her son.
“Max, stop it okay she isn’t worth it” Isabel said after watching him and taking enough of his attitude.
“Iz” Max said in a tone that said he didn’t want to hear what she had to say.
“She, as in Liz Parker” Diane asked not meaning to overhear their conversation, Max had always been close to his older sister, she was happy that he had someone to go to.
Max and Isabel looked up at the sound of Isabel's voice.
“Um....yeah” Isabel answered after a few minutes of silence was meet not wanting to hurt her mom’s feelings.
Diane noticed the tension in the room “It’s okay...I'm sorry for overhearing” Diane said.
Max looked at his mom’s expression and knew she’d been hurt, he knew he never really talked to his mom in fear of disappointing her in the way he was.
“Mom, it’s okay, can.....I Uh talk to you” Max asked.
Isabel smiled, “I’ll just go see how dad’s going” Isabel said getting up from the couch and walking to her dad’s study room.
Max got up from his laying position on the couch and turned the TV on.
Diane sat down next to her son, for the first time she could see the signs of restless nights of sleep shoeing on his face.
“Max., what’s been going on” Diane asked with concern.
you know about me dating with Lip Parker, and a few weeks ago I caught her kissing someone else and we broke up, she thinks she’s done nothing wrong” Max said.
“And I'm guessing by the looks of you and the way your living that's he was more than some girl” Diane said.
“I....I don’t know” Max said “Tess came to me, yesterday and said that Liz isn’t going to change, that since she’s been bought up around money she’s the same, but I was too, I was bought up the same way” Max said.
“Yes, Max you were but her Parents are hardly home they have a maid, do you see a maid taking acre of you here” Diane asked.
“No” Max answered.
“She’s never felt any affection except the general form her parents, I know her parents they're good people but they're caught up in the wrong situation for some money can do a lot of damage”
Max sat quietly taking in what his Mom had said.
“But Liz’s different” Diane said, with that Max’s head shot up.
“Liz, has a level -head and I know somewhere down the line that heart of hers will let her make the right choice”
“It hurt when she didn’t even say sorry” Max said softly showing his true meaning.
“Love hurts Max, if it didn’t then you wouldn’t learn form the mistakes people make, were all human Max we deserve second chances” Diane said.
“hat if She doesn't want a second chance” Max asked.
“Then she never loved you , your grandmother was a real fan of love and soul mates she would of love to hear you talk about Liz, but know this Max your grandmother is still watching over you and to know you’ve fallen in love at such a young age will do her proud, just give her time honey” Diane Said.
Max leaned over and hugged her “Thanks mom, I don’t know where I would be without you”
That said Diane's heart filled with Love, knowing her Son did need her calmed her worst fears.
Liz sat on her blanket covered balcony floor her arms around her knees, looking at the night sky, thinking, it was a time of thinking that was all she could see to do lately think about everything she did, she had no one else to go to, the one person that understood her she had shoved away like waste, what could Kathy really do for her, a maid paid to look after a daughter of wealthy parents, she couldn’t go to her and talk to her about the deepest secrets of who she was. After yesterday's situation Liz missed the warmth of Max’s boy, the spine tingling kisses she would get from his loving lips, the phone calls till midnight of never ending conversation, the lack of company got to her, when she was with Max he was always there with her, comforting her , loving her, now she was alone.
She didn’t want to pursue anything with Jeremy he was just a friend to her nothing more, nothing more to what the whole school had figured out to be, it didn’t feel right to be with Jeremy.
The conclusion she came to last night upon sitting at the same spot as now was that she Liz parker was wrong and something she knew she had figured out a long time ago but was afraid to admit it was Liz Parker was missing Max Evans.
well a great ending to the part lol well I though so anyway, I bet many of you are jumping for joy that Liz has something figured out yay but anywayz lot’s of FB and also know I went to great lengths to edit the stories I hope all parts are like this now on, stories with spelling error just ruin the part, I know I have heaps in mine, but ill try harder promise that’s is it’s not rushed.
next part will be VERY WORTH YOUR WHILE but plz FB lot’s and Lots’ of FB I'm saying this now and I'll probably end up with 2. ( I swear I've been cursed the opposite always happens to me)
|posted on 12-Aug-2002 1:13:20 AM by roswelllover|
|emmie, angelbaby6977, ps_dreamer, Tea, Roswelllostcause- thanks for the FB|
DrEaMPrYnCeZz-I hated the eppy too, I wouldn't’ be able too write a fic based on it ...... thanks for the FB
Michaela-thanks for the Fb I'm glad I could make you smile during a sad moment .
clueless(x2)- thanks for the FB
ForeverDreaming8602(x3)-lol it think Max mentioned something about Tess and Jeremy being good together in my last part thanks for the FB.
Dream Seeker-(x3) I think it was kinda obvious about Jeremy and Tess teaming up lol
Thanks for the FB.
Alizaria(x2)- lol those little bumpy things are so addictive aren’t they lol cute lil fellows.............Thanks for the FB
I'm back *Waves hello* and with the part you’ve been waiting for, well I'm happy I didn't’ need up with 2 FB’s lol but I'll stop ranting I know your all anticipating to read so I'll just yeah...go.
It was Friday the last Football game between Roswell and Albuquerque had been played, Roswell had won taking the trophy that had belonged to Roswell for the last 4 years, Max the captain of the team had taken it with pride, The stadium was packed with people with blue and yellow banners as they played on the West Roswell football field, being the champions of last year.
Photographs had been taken with the team, coaches and the cheerleaders for the front page of the West Roswell High school paper.
Having to give a speech Max had thanked the supporters, their coach and the team for the effort of winning the 2002 Football inter school championship.
Liz had watched on as the hero of the game gave no modesty in thanking himself for the amount of goals he had scored, Max wasn’t self absorbed, with a smile and her heart fluttering with love she watched on besides the other cheerleaders, nothing else registering her mind all except Max, the sound of his voice, the way his mouth moved, the look of pride in his eyes, everything else moved in slow motion for Liz, because for once the word ‘LOVE’ went through her mind.
As Max was going to get changed he encountered Jeremy, Max not wanting to say anything to his enemy who was now facing him was about to brush past when Jeremy's words stopped him “It’ not my fault you can’t keep what’s your’s, you should learn too, you never know when someone might come and take it all” Jeremy said with a smirk before talking off, Leaving Max pissed.
After the guys had changed all the cars had left to go to the ‘After Celebration party at the Coach’s house, which the coach had given into when provoked by the guys during practise. But Max was in no hurry to get there as he changed slowly taking a relaxing warm shower for his hard earned work, he needed something to calm him down after what Jeremy said he didn‘t think he‘d ever make friends with the asshole.
Liz had gotten changed and as now talking to Jeremy as they stood at her locker. Jeremy decided today would be the day he would show Liz hows he felt without actual words of course, but he had waited too long, Liz would have to be the longest he waited for a girl but in the end it would be all worth it, but what Jeremy didn’t know was Liz’s second thoughts on her and Max’s break-up and inside Liz was dying without Max in her life.
As Liz leaned on her locker while she talked about the game, Jeremy as about to lean over and kiss her when Liz stepped out of the way.
“We can only be friends” Liz answered.
Jeremy couldn’t believe the 5 words that had come out of her forbidden but anticipating lips.
“What” Jeremy asked?
“Friends, your a great friend Jeremy, but that’s all I can be” Liz answered.
“A friend, what about all those fucking signals you kept sending, and the flirting correct me if I'm wrong but on earth if a girl flirts with you then it means she likes you” Jeremy answered.
“Yeah you see Jeremy it was just innocent flirting and that must’ve happened at the beginning when I was lost and confused so don't tell me that nowadays when a girl flirts with you it means she wants to get in your pants cause here on earth it doesn’t work that way” Liz answered.
“Stop being so damn frigid” Jeremy exclaimed.
“Frigid, fuck you, I don’t even know what I fucking saw in you, that must be nothing your just like the rest of the half population of indecent jerks on this planet” Liz yelled, finally seeing a side of Jeremy that the out-voted die of her had first thought him to be.
Stepping in front of Liz, Jeremy trapped Liz between him and her locker, “I waited for you and I'm not just going to leave because you’ve suddenly gotten Frigid” Jeremy said.
“Get out of my way” Liz said with fire in her eyes.
“And how do you suppose you’ll make me” Jeremy asked, placing his hands above Liz’s head and resting them against the cold yellow, old metal of her locker.
“I know why there’s a sudden change in attitude, that asshole of a guy is what’s holding you back, guys like him are what ruin it for guys like me, don’t you get it Liz, he’s over you, maybe you shouldn’t have stuck your tongue down my throat that’s what your mistake Liz, you let yourself be put in this position and I’m not letting go of it” Jeremy said.
“Asshole, how dare you blame me for something you did, your just a waste of space, Max has more than you’d ever know, you can’t be him and won’t ever be him, Max has more class than you ever will so don’t you dare use innocent people and blame them just cause dicks like you can’t get it” Liz answered defending Max.
“Well then I guess whores are counted as class” Jeremy answered.
Max walked upon Jeremy and Liz and knew that this situation wasn't some deranged make out position. But that Liz was in trouble.
“Let her go” Max said in authority.
“Look what we have here, here to save Liz are you, you had your chance move on Evans” Jeremy said.
“You really don’t seem to understand do you coming from where ever the hell you did, you don't own anyone now let her go” Max said stepping in closer.
Liz hadn’t been so glad to see anyone in her life so much, she could’ve taken Jeremy out, I mean there is a button of self destruction on all guys which comes in handy when they tried to abuse us.
“Are you challenging me Evans” Jeremy asked?
Liz took her que and kicked Jeremy in the groin, she really didn’t want to be stuck with a testosterone fight on a Friday night, Jeremy stumbled to the floor in pain “Fucking bitch” Jeremy yelled out.
Liz ran out of the way towards Max. “I didn’t have to challenge you” Max answered once Liz had gotten safely to his side he turned to her concerned
‘Are you okay” Max asked.
“Yeah I'm fine” Liz answered.
Max nodded then turned around and walked away, Liz didn’t need his help anymore and standing next to her was just too much to bear.
Liz had watched Max leave; she saw his figure get smaller and smaller as he walked down the hallway her heart led the way.
“Max!” Liz yelled, Max turned around to find Liz running down the hallway after him, Liz jumped into his arms with tears coursing down her face as she wrapped her arms around his neck and held on fiercely “I’m so sorry” Liz whispered.
lol I'm not that mean here’s the rest..................
Part 37 continued...............
Enclosing his arms around her small frame, he hugged her back and closed his eyes feeling I content as he heard the soft-spoken words from her delicate lips.
Pulling away her cheeks still wet from her fresh tears and looking up into Max‘s deep amber eyes “I’m so sorry, I was wrong...I...I love you” Liz whispered.
Max cupped Liz’s face in his palms and looked at her with admiration in his eyes “You don’t know how long I've been waiting fro you to say those word, I love you too” Max answered just as softly before leaning in and kissing her sweet lips that felt like forever since he’d felt them against his. The kiss was slow and gentle as they sealed their love for each other, this kiss wasn’t like their other passion filled ones this one was unhurried and tender as their tongue danced the slow song of love and their hearts beat in sync with each other in the place where it had all started, all ended and where they had just expressed there love, in their High school.
Liz pulled away as the need for air became a necessity, her eyes still closed she licked her lips and opened her eyes slowly as looked at Max here eyes glassy from the love she felt that soared from Max.
Liz smiled as she felt dizzy the familiar effect Max always had on her after kissing her and thought to herself ‘no one could ever make her feel like Max Evans did’
“We still need to talk” Max whispered his head against Liz's.
‘I know” Liz answered just as softly.
“Do you really want to go to the after party” Max asked leading his down and entwining his fingers with Liz's?
“No’ Liz answered, the warmth spreading to her heart.
“My parents just left to go to a meeting after my game, we can go to my house and have the house to ourselves to talk” Max said giving Liz options.
Liz smiled and nodded her head yes “The sooner the better” Liz answered as the couple walked down the hallway hand in hand.
Once they reached the Evan’s house, the lights were out and the driveway was empty, Liz looked at the big house after seeing it after a long time as she’d stopped coming after her break-up with Max, the ride from school was filled with comfortable silence as the never ending blanket of random dots twinkling above passed by over their heads.
Using the spare key Max unlocked the door and opened it revealing pitch darkness, Max turned the light on and their eyes took a while before they adjusted to the sudden brightness in the room.
“Do you want anything to drink” Max asked as they entered the silent house?
“No, I'm fine” Liz answered.
Walking to the couch they sat down suddenly the uncomfortable silence surrounded them as neither one of them knew how to start the conversation.
“Uh” they both spoke at the same time and they chuckled at the abrupt nervousness.
Max smiled “you can go first”
Liz flashed him a smile to thank him and tried to come up with the words of apology.
“I realised only a little while ago how much you really mean to me and it’s taken me a long time to come to this conclusion because the stubborn side f me didn’t want to admit it, but I was wrong, it was wrong of me to kiss Jeremy in the first place, even if it was initiated by Jeremy but I realise that no I want a second chance and I'm hoping you can give me one, I've realised now that being wealthy doesn’t bring all the happiness in life...I’m sorry for hurting you” Liz said she knew that Max had forgiven her but she needed to let Max know that she was going to apologise and ask to be forgiven.
“Just you knowing you were wrong was all I wanted Liz, I forgive you I do, I love you but I want us to have an honest relationship we don't hide anything from each other thinking it will stop us from hurting because it could make I worst” Max said stroking Liz’s hair as the silky strands brushed against his fingers.
“And I didn’t mean anything I told you, if it hurt you, you know how stubborn I can be and when it comes down to me being wrong I jump to defend myself and hurt others” Liz said her big doe eyes looking at Max with apology.
“It didn’t” Max said erasing Liz's fears.
“I don’t think I deserve you” Liz said kissing the inside of Max’s palm as it laid against her cheek.
Max shook his head no, “lets not get started on that, you know this conversation will never end if we do” Max said with laughter in his voice.
“We have to tell my parents about us” Liz said
“Liz we can’t, I know your parents hate me, there’s no way they’ll let you have a relationship with me” Max said.
“Max, do you know my mom still thinks I'm going out with Sean, it hurts them not knowing how much you mean to me’ Liz said cupping Max’s face, she needed him to understand.
“Are you sure, I don’t think I could stand not seeing you” Max answered?
Liz heart fluttered with love, he just kept on surprising her.
“They won’t stop us Max, once they get to know you” Liz answered.
“Good, cause I'd die without you” Max said.
“I love you” Liz pouted.
“No matter how many time you say it I'm never going to get sick of hearing it, I've waited so long to hear you say them” Max answered before attacking her lips needing to kiss her sweet succulent tender lips again.
hehe okay this time I mean it I hope I didn’t confuse people and you just end up skipping the last part I hope not, anyway it’s here our dreamer couple has reunited wohooo lol but you’ve gotta say I deserve FB for this part, sniff I loved this part well after the whole Jeremy bit I think it’s one of my favourites I don’t know maybe second anyway I think this chapter was good but that’s me .................anywayz got have FB this was a long part whoa.......sorry for the soap-operaish bit in the beginning but I had to have something to get stubborn Max and Liz together if they wouldn't do it on their own, if you have other suggestion please share lol I can fix it up.
that’s all from me gotta jet it’s taken me a while to write this part....... don’t forget the FB
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|posted on 17-Aug-2002 3:02:04 AM by roswelllover|
|just to let ya know the new part will be out tomrrow thanks for the FBs and the Bumps|
|posted on 17-Aug-2002 9:43:32 PM by roswelllover|
|I hope no one missed the rest of part 37 if u did, ah sorry I felt like being in a teasing mood that day but I can promise that that was the last time, once is enough lol, thanks you so much for the FB u've made my day really I had such a bad day and then I come and read my Fb's and it made my day better lol THANK YOU SO MUCH TO EVERYONE WHO READS THIS FIC ................568 that's like the most posts I've ever gotten lol|
Dream Seeker-(x4)thanks for the FB
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ps_dreamer-(x1) yes they do have to deal with their parents but that's happening soon, Liz's parents hate Max and since Max is Diane and Philips son they don't get along so well for that reason being they know about Max's status at school and because the fact that Liz and Max's family are the only two richest families in Roswell so there's competition. I hope that answered ur question, Thanks for the FB.
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emmie- there will be a time and place for Jeremy to get what he deserves lol, thanks for the FB
Well since there’s so may demands for my return I have come with a small part, check out my banner as well on the first page if you can thanks.
Liz pushed the white button in on the white doorframe, as the bell rang inside the house announcing someone at the door, waiting at the door Liz hoped it wouldn’t be Isabel, since Isabel wasn’t on speaking terms with her but it would be either Max or Isabel since Diane and Philip hadn’t gotten back from their trip. She heard footsteps run down the stairs and then the door open to be faced with Isabel.
“What are you doing here” Isabel asked confused with a bitter tone, Liz took it, she deserved it anyway Isabel had her reasons.
“I-” Before Liz could finish a third person had joined them.
“Stop intimidating my girlfriend Isabel” Max said from behind Isabel before taking Liz’s hand and tugging her inside.
“Girlfriend” Isabel asked confused, as she looked on as Max warp his arm around Liz's waist gently.
“Yeah...we uh kinda got back together again last night” Max answered squeezing Liz's hand in his as he spoke.
Isabel squealed and jumped into a hug with Liz, Liz not expecting the taller girl to accept her so quickly was shocked, Max on the other hand had let go of Liz’s waist before being crushed to death by Isabel “Oh My god I’ve missed talking to you so much, I'm so glad you two are together again” Isabel squealed.
Max laughed knowing it must‘ve been hard for his sister to choose between him and Liz but since she was his sister she had sided with him.
“Could you hit me over the head before I do something stupid ever again” Liz whispered to the older girl.
Isabel smiled “I’ll more than hit you over the head” Isabel answered smiling.
“Do you forgive me” Liz asked?
“Course I do, life has been hell without you Liz. I think it’s time we had our weekly girls night out, what do you think Liz” Isabel asked.
Liz looked over at Max knowing he had things planned for them this weekend. “Not this weekend Isabel what about next week” Liz asked.
Isabel pouted and turned around to look at Max “I know it’s your fault, fine next week, I'll organise what we need for it” Isabel said giving Liz a hug before disappearing down the hall her voice drifting behind her.
“I didn’t think she was going to leave” Max said taking Liz's hand and leading them to the lounge room where the TV was turned on.
“Neither did I” Liz laughed, “I guess it’s better to have her this way then to have her glaring at me” Liz answered as they sat down on the couch.
“I’m sorry about that I didn't mean to have her turn against you” Max apologised as Liz cuddled into his side laying her head on his shoulder.
“What are you apologising for, she’s your sister what else is she to do, I shouldn’t even had Maria with me what I did was wrong and I was too stubborn to realise that before. You don’t have to apologise for anything” Liz answered as she looked at Max, her doe eyes meeting his warm soft loving ones.
“I think we should move away from the subject of our break up, I think I should get my kiss that was so rudely interrupted by my sister” Max said grinning.
“And what makes you think I was planning to” Liz teased.
“You expect me to sit her while your sitting so close to me and not get a kiss I've waited nearly a month Parker I think you should start healing my wounds” Max answered looking serious.
“You want me to heal your wounds” Liz repeated sitting up and kneeling in front of Max.
“Yeah, you know those ones you left while I saw you kissing that son of a bitch nearly a month ago” Max pouted.
“Awe then we should do something about that then huh” Liz said wrapping her arms around Max’s neck “we wouldn’t want you hurting any longer”
“No we don’t” Max said softly her lips painfully close to his teasing him with her warm breath as she spoke.
“Let Liz take away your pain” Liz said softly before descending her lips to Max's in a passionate kiss, tongues swirling with one another, going the same place they had yesterday fingers tangled in each others hair, tangled limbs and harsh breathing they continued like hungry lovers not able to get enough of each other as they kissed fervently, hands flying everywhere.
Hearing the silence downstairs Isabel walked down the stairs, making as much noise as she could hinting that she was about to enter the room. “You two better be decent when I get down “ Isabel shouted half way down the stairs.
Breathing heavily, lips swollen from their fervent kisses and their hair in disarray Max and Liz pulled away as the sound of Isabel’s voice broke them apart.
Isabel walked in slowly “Are you guys decent” Isabel asked.
“It’s okay Isabel” Liz answered knowing that it wasn’t as bad as the last time they had gotten caught a few months ago.
“Oh thank god” Isabel rushed in.
“Was there something you wanted Isabel” Max asked, frustrated, all he wanted was some alone time with his girlfriend was that too much to ask, in his family yes it was?
“Uh yeah could you two move over there’s a ricki lake make up special on soon” Isabel said sitting down with her 99% fat free banana smootie and the latest cosmopolitan magazine.
Max groaned “and were going to my room ” Max said getting up from the couch, pulling Liz up with him.
“Could you tape it for me Isabel” Liz shouted knowing that America’s most famous fashion expert was expected to be on it.
“Yeah sure, but Max, Liz if I hear anything that’s not normal, I'm coming up there” Isabel stated, causing Max to groan and mumble something about inconsiderate siblings.
It was short lol, but it’s something better than nothing lol keep up the FB I know that since I got so much FB you deserve a longer part but next part will be longer.
Don’t forget the FB plz
|posted on 19-Aug-2002 12:25:25 AM by roswelllover|
|okay guys well as Michaela said I think the banner cannot be seen lol so just don't worry about tht for the time being|
|posted on 19-Aug-2002 1:49:11 AM by roswelllover|
|I've fixed the problem with the banner hopefully it can be seen if not plz tell me|
|posted on 24-Aug-2002 10:12:54 PM by roswelllover|
|Well here I am back again with another part so soon *sighs* but that’s gotta be good rite lol, but I've got a killer headache, and I don’t know where the pain killers are so I've gotta deal with it so if this part kinda sounds off blame the killer headache. now with the Thank Yous oh and I’m glad u guys well I hope that it was a lot of u liked my banner lol|
AngelBehr1947- thanks for the FB and glad this fics ur fave as amongst others as well.
ps_dreamer-Liz’s parents don’t like Max but Max’s parents love Liz as I've said in apart long ago I think hope I clarified that for u if u still have questions don’t hesitate to ask, I can be confusing, thanks for the FB
clueless, emmie, Alizaria, ForeverDreaming8602, Dream Seeker, Tea, angelbaby6977, salonica, mermaidgirl, Christine- thanks for the FB and/ or bumps
Lana -Welcome to Baby Be Mine and thanks for the FB.
Michaela - round of applause Michaela lol, I know how u felt about being behind with the stories I don’t think I've caught up with them all yet, lol and no probs with the long FB’s there really appreciated form me lol thanks for the FB and the bumps
okay ,okay I'm leaving now.......
It was Sunday and Liz only went home when she had too which was 10pm the rest of the times were spent with Max, they’ d watched a movie that they’d rented out last night and today Liz had arrived to see Max shooting hoops in his drive way.
Hey” Liz said as she walked up to Max and wrapped her arms around his waist as he’d stopped at the sound of Liz’s voice.
“Hey” Max said as he leaned down to kiss her holding her with one arm around her waist as he held his basket ball in the other.
“What are you doing” Liz asked.
“Isn’t it obvious, I thought that the basketball would give it away” Max teased?
Liz hit him gently in the ribs with her elbow “I meant why” Liz asked.
“Oh umm...well I decided to use my time wisely since Isabel’s taken over the couch and the TV again, and I couldn’t keep my mind off you while I was sitting down” Max answered.
“Awe that just scored you brownie points” Liz teased as she leaned up and kissed him softly before pulling back.
“I love you” Max said with puppy dog eyes.
Liz grinned and kissed him again, this time it lasting longer than the one before, Liz pulled away.
“How about we play” Liz asked.
“Huh, play” Max asked confused.
‘Play basketball” Liz said taking the ball out of Max’s lock and showing it to him.
“Oh basketball” Max said.
“Liz raised her eyebrow giving him the look of what else she could possibly mean. “You want to play basketball with me, the captain” Max said.
Liz smiled always was quite the egotistic guy “yeah I do, you know for fun” Liz said.
“Okay but I'll try not to hurt you” Max grinned moving after Liz.
They started the game playing fairly with Max winning 6-0, that was until Liz decided to play against the rules, As Max dribbled the ball past her she brushed her arm against his a** in which Max forze
And Liz took her opportunity to take the ball of him and scored.
“Hey no fair” Max pouted
“It’s not like I did it on purpose” Liz lied and Max brushed it off as an accident and hey continued to play until Max had the ball and was about to shoot Liz walked in fornt of Max and linked her arm around his neck and in a instant had her lips on his in which Max found himself kissing her back up until Liz had taken the ball off of him and had pulled away only to see her runaway with the ball chuckling and scoring again with her trailing 6-4.
“Two can play at this game” Max mumbled as he know realised Liz’s tactics of the game and had started playing again but this time Max had looked out for Liz and had dodged her and was now lading 8-4.
When they played the next round and Liz was dribbling the ball up to her basket, Max caught her form behind around her waist and pulled her back and started tickling her and Liz released the ball form her grasp when Max had found her ticklish spot. They soon landed in a heap on the lawn with Max hovering above her, as she laughed frantically while Max continued tickling her.
“Stop...Max...stop” Liz protested as she writhed under hi.
“Say your sorry” Max said as he stopped his tickling and held Liz’s hands above her head.
“Never” Liz answered chuckling.
“What was that” Max asked
“Nev-” Liz was cut off as Max started tickling her again.
“Okay.... Okay...I'm sorry” Liz apologized in between laughing and Max stilled his movements and looked down at the beauty beneath him and couldn’t help but lean down her kissable lips as she looked up at him with her soft brown doe eyes and looking flustered nothing had looked more beautiful to him than Liz did at that moment. Their kiss passionate, Max’s fingers laced in Liz’s sprawled hair while Liz’s arms that Max had released moved up and down Max's shirt clad back.
“Max you dog, you’ve already got someone else to make out with” Kyle said as he and Alex were surprised to see Max making out with a girl on his fornt lawn after the way he’d been acting the last few weeks like a lost dog.
“Glad to see you moving on man” Kyle said, hearing Kyle’s voice Max and Liz pulled away, breathing heavily form their ardent kisses, Max looked down to see hurt flicker by in Liz’s eyes at Kyle’s comment even though it wasn’t true.
Getting up Max pulled Liz up with him and they straightened themselves while Kyle and Alex’s eyes widened at who the girl really was.
lol well I liked that part *sigh* it did great to my dreamer heart lol
That’s what I though but maybe not anywayz plz leave Fb
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|posted on 28-Aug-2002 12:51:41 AM by roswelllover|
|thanks so much for the Fb but I have exams on next week and I won't be able to update until next friday....that's not too long is it....lol|
but I promise it will be friday............
|posted on 4-Sep-2002 6:41:03 PM by roswelllover|
|well I’m bck.....but am posting earlier than had planned too lol not like ur complaining rite....but I’m going away until Sunday night so here’s the part I promised u all.......... see I do keep my promises.|
AngelBehr1947, ps_dreamer, salonica, LizParkerEvans4evax, clueless, angelbaby6977, Leigh, emmie, Alizaria, marteloise, moa, Christine, Anya, ForeverDreaming8602, mermaidgirl, wild_child_uk-thanks for the Fb and or bumps, it’s great to see pages of FB after having stressful exams thanks.
Dream Seeker, Michaela- -thanks for the Fb and the Bumps and the good lucks I needed them lol
and an enormous thank you to Dream seeker, Michaela and clueless for the constant bumps
now, I think u’ve all earned a long part since I made u wait, so here’s a longer part , well hopefully it’s longer............ for ur patience ..............
“Glad to see you moving on man” Kyle said, hearing Kyle’s voice Max and Liz pulled away, breathing heavily form their ardent kisses, Max looked down to see hurt flicker by in Liz’s eyes at Kyle’s comment even though it wasn’t true.
Getting up Max pulled Liz up with him and they straightened themselves while Kyle and Alex’s eyes widened at who the girl really was.
Kyle stood frozen while Alex tried to stifle a laugh at how much hot water Kyle had gotten into.
Max had his arms wrapped around Liz’s waist, telling he that he was there.
“Uh.... Hey Liz” Kyle greeted, while Max glared at Kyle’s outburst. “Its Liz” Kyle said looking at Max, as Max kept looking at him.
“Sorry about that I guess I can be kinda of a jerk” Kyle apologized although he didn’t know why but taking a look at Max’s face told him he’d have to apologize if he wanted to live.
“Kind of” Alex muttered behind him.
Kyle turned around and glared at Alex and turned back to Liz. “Okay I can be a jerk a big one, but I didn’t mean it, things always fly out of my mouth you know all the time, ask Serena” Kyle said trying to defy himself.
Liz smiled at Kyle’s obvious discomfort “It’s okay Kyle, I understand” Liz answered she knew she’d acted like a bitch it was reasonable for them to have treat her like one.
“When'd you two get back together” Alex asked speaking for the first time “Or are you just-” Alex cut himself off no knowing if he should finish.
“Were together now, since Friday” Max answered.
“Oh” Kyle and Alex both responded at the new knowledge.
“Hey Max is your sister home” Alex asked.
“Yeah she is” Max answered and Alex walked to the door and closed it behind him.
“Kyle, I'm sorry for being a bitch and I know that Serena will be hard one to convince of that since I hurt her...and a lot but I...I've realised now that being bitchy doesn't make things okay and just because I'm rich doesn’t make me have the fright to boss everyone else around and to have my own ways, I was a bitch to all of you and I'm sorry” Liz apologized sincerely, it wasn’t Kyle that needed to apologize but her, to everyone she’d acted immaturely and in the process had hurt all her friends.
Kyle heard the sincerity in Liz’s voice, and he knew that the reason why Max and Liz had gotten back together was because Liz had realised that she too was like everyone else.
“You’re right I wasn’t so hard to convince of that but Serena won’t be, she hasn’t forgiven you of the things you’ve done but she did believe that somewhere in your life you’d realise that you do make mistakes” Kyle answered.
“So does that mean I'm forgiven” Liz asked.
“Yeah you are, although I think we had that evened up after my little outburst don’t you think” Kyle answered smiling.
“Okay, were even” Liz smiled, hugging Kyle in return, she’d gotten 2 of her friends back 4 to go.
“I’ll leave you guy too it them, Alex was being pansy about coming over to your place so he bought me along, I'll seeya guys tomorrow and please don’t do it on your front lawn, the everyone will find out before school even starts if troy comes around here” Kyle said before waving at them and heading back to his car.
“Now where were we before we were rudely interrupted by the pansy and the foot and mouth disease” Max said as he kissed his way down her jaw?
Liz pulled away laughing and lead Max over around the house to the back.
“What” Max asked confused, he didn’t know why she was laughing.
“ I won” Liz said out of the blue.
“Excuse me, did I hear you right” Max asked as he laid down on the soft grass and pulled Liz down with him.
“Yeah” Liz answered as she laid her head on his chest and turned around to face him. Before her lips descended down to his.
“You won” Max answered as he pulled away.
Kiss...”good I'm glad ”...kiss...
Liz pulled away. “Why are we out here, not that I mind but why” Liz asked, it was a normal New Mexico day, which meant it was a hot New Mexico day?
“I don’t think we want to be in there, Alex and Isabel are in there” Max answered simply ”And why not enjoy the sun” he added.
“I think were starting to get sappy” Liz said.
“Is that bad” Max asked?
“No” Liz answered.
“Liz its Sunday don’t make me think, I'm confused and when someone‘s confused they have to think” Max groaned.
“So what am I supposed to do sit here and be bored” Liz answered tracing circles on his chest.
“I said I didn't want to thin, I didn’t stop you from doing anything else” Max answered.
“I guess I should go home, I mean if it’s going to feel like I'm talking to a wall, I might as well go-” Liz was cut off when max tilted her face up and placed his lips on hers frustratingly, they were supposed to make up for the days they were apart and it was Sunday they talked a lot yesterday today was for other things.
The sound of coughing broke them apart and Max and Liz looked up to see who it was.
“What is it interrupt Max and Liz day” Max mumbled as he was yet again interrupted.
“Yup there’s flyers everywhere” Alex retorted with a smirk
“What is it” Max asked.
“Cranky” Alex said.
“Mom just called and Alex and me are going shopping which you apparently had forgotten to do” Isabel looked at Max sceptically.
Liz sat up and Max followed suit. “Uh...sorry” Max apologised and Isabel rolled her eyes.
“Yeah whatever just thought I’d let you know where I had gone not that you would've realised anyway but is there anything you two want” Isabel asked.
Liz shook her head “No” Max answered.
“Okay well be gone for a while but I expect to be to a peaceful house am I right” Isabel said
“Isabel who put you in charge to be my mother” Max groaned as the constant watchful eye had finally taken it’s toll on him.
“Uh Liz Iz told me about well about it...and just to let you know I forgive you didn’t hate you in the fist place but if you were worried them I forgive you” Alex answered.
Liz grinned “Thank you” Liz answered.
“Just remember that people live in this house” Isabel shouted as she and Alex walked away.
When Isabel and Alex had left Max got up and pulled Liz up with him.
“I don’t think I'm in the mood to enjoy the rest of today with how it’s turned out” Max answered as they entered the kitchen.
“It’s not that bad” Liz answered.
“Max looked at Liz in which she gave in laughing “Okay maybe it was a tad bit out of the ordinary but seriously it’s better than the last few weeks, am I not right” Liz said.
Max stopped in the lounge and wrapped his arms around Liz’s waist “Yes, this weekend was better than the last few weeks much, much better” Max said as he leaned his head on hers.
“I have to agree” Liz said, Max pulled away and kissed her temple and pulled her up the stairs to his room.
“Where are we going now” Liz answered?
“Somewhere where I doubt we will be interrupted” Max answered
Once in the safety of his room, Max grabbed Liz around the waist with his free arm and kissed her like there was no tomorrow the pent up frustration finally releasing as Liz walked blindly backwards and fell on Max’s soft bed from the impact of Max’s surprise attack.
Grabbing a pillow from beside her head Liz swung it at Max’s head I, which he ended up falling beside her, Liz, laughed when she saw the surprise in his eyes.
Max heard Liz laughing and turned to look at her with her glowing face and his pillow held in her hands.
“What the hell” Max said.
“I feel like playing today” Liz replied innocently.
Max blinked after hearing what Liz had said “you want to play” Max said mimicking Liz’s words for the second time that day he was surprised.
“I think you need to get an appointment to get your ears checked out” Liz answered biting her lip to keep from laughing from seeing the look on his face.
“What is it with you and playing today” Max mumbled but was hit with his pillow again.
“Okay that’s it” Max said as he grabbed his second pillow and swang it at Liz’s shoulder not wanting to hurt her pretty soon, pillows were flying everywhere and the sound of laughter surrounded the room as they both ended up falling back onto the bed from exhaustion and breathing heavily.
“Are you happy now” Max asked as he ran his hand over his face?
“Very” Liz answered, as he breathing became normal again.
“Now can we do something I want to do “ Max said as he moved to hover above Liz?
“I don’t know” Liz answered shrugging innocently.
“Well then I’m going to have to show you aren’t I” Max said his mouth inches away from hers and his lips descended down to hers and their tongues mingled in pure ecstasy but fortunately for them this time there were no interruptions.
That’s it the last parts was kinda rushed so it’s sound kinda weird but I tired to make it long... tried and this is as much as I could now so enjoy the new part and leave lots of FB
|posted on 11-Sep-2002 3:03:32 AM by roswelllover|
|just dropping in to leave a little note to pay a tribute to those that lost their live on September 11th, and agreeing with Dream Seeker, let's never forget!.|
|posted on 13-Sep-2002 11:54:09 PM by roswelllover|
|Dream Seeker-Happy Belated Birthday this can be a belated birthday present , and unfortunately no nookie|
Thanks for all the FB's and the bumps here’s the new part.....
Liz had gone home late, not wanting to be parted from Max; she had enjoyed the time they had spent together. She had arrived at school earlier than Max and decided to wait for him in the parking lot, when Max’s blue convertible parked beside her, Liz remained leaning against the side of her car, smiling as Max looked at her and smiled back, a smile she had noticed he had only reserved for him.
“Hey” Max said after getting out of his car and walking over to Liz and greeted Liz with a kiss.
“Hi” Liz answered bringing her arms up and entangling them around his neck, bringing him flush against her.
“Are you ready” Max answered as he bought his hands up and entwined his fingers with Liz’s as he bought her arms form around him?
“Yeah, I think its time for the world to see Max and Liz again” Liz smiled and headed towards the school entrance hand in hand.
Once Liz and Max had entered with smiling faces, and looking like they had the few weeks before their break-up, the looks received from the proportion of the student body hadn’t surprised them, as some had the look of confusion, some with envy, some who couldn’t care less about them, the rebels, the ones who woe black, listened to heavy metal music and hide in a dark corner camouflaging into it, they were the ones the popular group did not care about.
When their lockers were in sight, they saw, Maria, Michael, Serena and Kyle standing there it was ironic how all their lockers were together probably by one of there doings.
“Hey” Max greeted as he and Liz made their presence known, Serena looked up at the sound of Max’s voice and wasn’t surprised to see Liz by his side since Kyle had told her, looking back at Kyle she slipped out of his embrace and walked away giving him the option to stay or follow her.
Liz’s eyes reflected the pain that her friend hadn’t even so much as taken a glance at her and had walked away, letting go of Max’s hand she started to go after Serena but was stopped by Kyle “I tried talking to her Liz, but she won’t budge she’s even refused to talk about it with me, now, just give her time okay, right now Serena needs to think” Kyle answered before going after his girlfriend knowing full well that Serena had given him the option, and he choose to go after her.
Max grabbed Liz’s hand again knowing she was hurting inside the turmoil of her friendship with Serena was killing her, Serena was the closet she had to a sister besides Maria and Isabel since Serna understood what it was like for Liz, and no matter what he knew he would hell her through this.
Liz looked up at Max when she felt him squeeze her hand in support, and thanked him with her eyes at his action.
“Hey Max, hope your ready for Phys Ed this morning” Michael reminded.
“Jee Michael I didn’t realise that” Max answered sarcastically.
Fortunately for Liz the bell rang signalling time for homeroom, she’s try to talk to Serena at lunchtime, or else after school.
What Liz couldn’t stop was Jeremy Whites being in her classes, 3rd period and she had biology, bio with Max and the person she had been allocated with, the asshole himself.
Entering the room, Liz saw Max waiting, the only one in the room.
“How come your so early” Liz asked, after greeting him with a kiss and placing her hands around his neck.
“We had a room change today, I was right next door for English” Max answered his hands on top of hers.
“Oh I guess that’s a good thing since now we have some time to spare” Liz said grinning.
“Max pulled Liz closer as he wrapped his arms around her waist and grinned back “I guess so” He answered as Liz’s lips descended down on his and wrapped themselves in a passionate embrace, as soon as their tongues meet, the sound of another student entering pulled them apart, looking up they grimaced as they saw Jeremy smirking as he kept his eyes them.
“My My isn't it the lovely couple” Jeremy answered, seating himself down on the stool at the last row of the class.
Liz kept Max from remarking back, as Max clenched his fists afraid of what he may end up doing, if it wasn’t for Liz standing above him he would’ve had Jeremy up against the wall already.
Liz touched his shoulder and shook her head “don’t” she whispered against his ear “don’t get your self-worked up over him, he isn't worth it” Liz whispered again, and caressed his back where her fingers were lingering.
Placing her lips against his she placed a chaste kiss hoping it would last the rest of the day before she disentangled herself from his arms and sat next to Max.
“Don’t you think your in the wrong place Liz” Jeremy asked, just as Mr. Seligman walked in and heard in which he glanced over at Liz.
“Yes Liz, don’t you think you’re in the wrong place” He asked, Liz sighed.
“I'm have personal issues with the person I was sitting next to” Liz answered.
“Do you care to elaborate” Mr. Seligman answered, known for his nosiness in his student’s life?
“No Mr. Seligman I don’t, if you rather I go to the principal then I'll be glad to” Liz answered strongly, Max gave Liz’s hand a squeeze from where their hands were linked under the table, she could see that he was trying to contain his laughter.
“No Miss Parker that will be fine lets just hoe your personal problems don't get in the way of you learning biology” He answered.
“You should’ve seen his face” Max chuckled as he told the story of Liz’s bravery.
“I was pissed, I didn’t exactly think about his feelings, I mean what right did he have to ask me to elaborate” Liz answered as they sat on their bench, it was a marked territory.
Liz looked up from where she had been sitting next to Max to see Serena walk and sit next to Kyle who were across from them.
“I’ll see you guys later; I need to go talk to Serena” Liz said apologetically.
“It’s okay” Max answered offering her a smile of reassurance, in which the whole group gave, and with that Liz stood up, her lunch left untouched and headed across the quad towards her friend.
“Uh... Serena, can I talk to you” Liz asked?
Kyle and Serena looked, up, Kyle kissed her and got up knowing what Serena had requested silently and headed across the quad to the group were Liz had come from.
Liz sat down next to Serena.
“I know your sorry about what happened, I guess I forgive you since we were both bought up the same way, I know you were just angry and you took it put on us but it hurt Liz no matter how much I try to see it from your point” Serena said, saving Liz from the speech.
“I know that Serena and I'm so sorry, I hurt you and Max so much, I know we said we’d be together through thick and thin but my stubbornness can blind me” Liz answered.
“I wasn’t just angry at the fact that you insulted me but I didn’t even know who you were anymore, I mean 14 years of friendship should’ve had me know, but you never were the person you were 3 weeks ago, Jeremy drove you to be someone else and that’s what hurt Liz to not know how I could help you is what hurt, it meant that our 14 years of friendship meant nothing” Serena whispered.
“Serena, you were not the only one wondering who I was, I don’t think I even knew myself, I was selfish, I was stubborn and a very big jerk” Liz answered receiving a chuckle from Serena.
“So friends” Liz answered holding her hand out.
Serena smiled" Friends” and took her into a hug.
“Now lets go back, I think the groups missing us” Liz answered as they got up from their spot, Liz was finally relived she was finally getting things back on track.
When they approached the table, the space next to Max still vacant, and the rest of them shifted to make room for Serena.
“It’s good to see you two finally talking”: Maria said.
“Yeah things are finally going to go back to normal” Michael said yup he knew they would, the group was finally back together.
“Oh do you guys know what Pam and Tessie were wearing today, Oh...My...God it’s like they planned it or something” Maria said, talking up a conversation.
“Maria you know they do” Isabel answered.
“Have anyone of you guys started studying for finals yet” Kyle asked.
“Finals you’ve got to be kidding me there like in 3 months Kyle” Maria answered.
“I will, probably next month” Liz answered.
“I can’t with school homework and sport practises I hardly have time” Max answered.
“I haven’t even though that far” was Michael's answer.
“I guess it’s kinda early, but I don’t think we need to study I mean sure I will but my dad says there’s a chance I could get a football scholarship” Kyle said.
“Yeah and Maxwell doesn’t even need to worry mean jeez your like multi skilled academics and sporting how the hell did you get so lucky I sometimes wonder” Michael said agitated.
Max just smiled and added in what Michael had forgotten to say and I have the perfect girlfriend a guy could ever ask for.
as always don’t forget the FB
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|posted on 25-Sep-2002 4:34:58 AM by roswelllover|
I tried to post this out as soon as I could so here I am.
Thanks for the Fb and the BUmps it really did help when I was struggling to write this part but the bumps inspired me to keep thinking hard and guess what it helped and this part was written with breeze thanks
“Here wear this it will totally suit you” Serena said pulling out a black tank top and tight black pants for Liz, Wednesday morning Maria had found out about the hottest thing on Friday night the opening of the new club Sputnik found just outside Roswell. And here they were getting ready to go out and have a night of fu on Friday maybe the last Friday night she’d have fun if she Liz Parker was considering about going to any ivy league school.
“You don’t think it’s too...Black” Liz asked looking at the outfit picked out for her, her and Serena always shared clothes, but Serena’s was always up to date.
“You do realise your asking me this question” Serena said giving her a ‘I don't believe you even asked me that’ look.
“Black is good” Liz said smiling “I’ll just go change” Liz said disappearing into the bathroom.
Liz came out of the bathroom several minutes later brushing down the creases on the top as she walked out “Stunning” Serena said catching Liz’s attention.
“You think” Liz asked looking down at herself.
Serena shook her head no “I know so, Max is going to die when he sees you” Serena answered.
Liz looked up before answering “You know your right, you don’t look so bad yourself” Liz answered smiling.
“I know” Serena gushed sarcastically.
“Your so lucky you now, you don’t have to worry abut make up at all the whole natural look makes you attractive unlike for the rest of us” Serena said as she saw Liz applying lip gloss after her eye liner.
“You don’ either, you just worry about what Kyle and the others might think when really you don’t need it either, I heard Michael saying her rather kiss Maria then the layers of crap” Liz answered chuckling.
“Yeah that’s Maria she really does over do it when really she too has the natural beauty I can’t believe Michael said that tough” Serena said also chuckling.
“Oh he said that but when he found out I had heard he swore me to secrecy to not tell Maria unless he wanted his ass kicked to planet Mars” Liz answered.
“Serena, Liz the guys are here” Celia called out, just like Liz’s parents Serena’s too hardly found anytime for her daughter and had to be bought up by someone else , but Liz’s mom did come home at night and was there but hardly paid attention to Liz’s life, just 2 months left and they’d be free.
“Lets go we better not keep our men waiting” Serena said before they walked down stairs to meet their boyfriends.
They walked down and found that Celia had left them to be alone, Liz made a beeline for Max.
“Hey” Liz said greeting Max with a kiss, who was shocked to see her the less.
“Hey sexy” Max whispered against he air kissing her jaw.
Liz linked her arms around Max’s neck “I can say the same thing about you too, I see you wore my favourite shirt” Liz grinned playing with the first button of his dark green tight fitting shirt that had been undone.
Max swooped down and captured Liz’s lips with his in response briefly knowing they’d have to go soon if they wanted to live from Maria’s wrath.
“Should we go” Serena asked.
Liz nodded then Max lead them as they wrapped their arm around each others waist.
They went speeding down the long stretched road driving to their venue, there were quite few cars on the usually abandoned road since the new club was like people wanting to go to Vegas, it was the only club in Roswell and it was the only under 21 club in New Mexico.
Max and Liz sat at the back while Serena sat in the passengers seat next to Kyle, the stereo blaring loudly and the car speeding fast.
Liz was semi laying against Max's chest as Max had pulled her towards her closely, they had all the room in the world but though it looked Liz was nearly sitting on his lap. it had been 10 minutes since they’d left Serena’s and through out the tortuous ride Max had tried to control his lust for Liz, her exposed skin was like an invitation to him to lap up on as much as he wanted, but for him 10 minutes was too much cause that’s all he lasted before his anticipating lips moved down for his attack and started trailing hot kisses down Liz’s partially exposed back , it had been too much for him with her sitting so close to him and tonight she had looked way to good to pass up.
Liz sighed as she felt Max's open mouthed kisses trailing down her back before he moved back up and stared sucking on the side of her neck that wasn’t covered Liz made a helpless sound at the back of her throat as he hit her sensitive spot in which he continued loving any response she gave him.
The car came to a halt “Were here” Kyle’s voice broke Max out of his lust induced haze, here, already he couldn’t believe they’d arrived so fast.
Liz sighed in disappointment from the loss of Max's mouth on her skin when he pulled away so they could get out, getting out of the car, Max linked his hands with Liz and they walked behind Serena and Kyle when they spotted Maria, Michael, Alex, Isabel, Sean and his date Mel, one of the least arrogant and non Pam worshipper out of the Pam clan, how she was considered to be amongst their group was a mystery.
“Hey guys Maria said way to excited.
“Hey” Serena greeted for the rest of them.
“Are we going in” Michael asked agitated he hated dancing, but being Maria’s boyfriend meant the opposite he’d be dancing till he was twinkle toes and he knew which is why he snapped at the rest of the group.
Walking up to the entrance and going in they saw the place was filled with people and they were all they knew it looked as if the place was filled with VIP’s from West Roswell High.
“We’ll meet outside at 11 when we need to go” Maria said before dragging a unwilling Michael with her to the dance floor, Alex and Isabel haded towards the non alcoholic bar leaving Max, Liz Sean and Mel.
“Lets go” Liz said pulling Max towards the dance floor where it seemed the least crowded in which Max followed willingly, dancing with Liz...lose, body’s touching, fast music this was like going to Las Vegas and actually winning, Max being a guy it was acceptable. he’d danced with her before but only twice the first time she had hated him and was their prom King and Queen dance the second time had been when she had to much to drink and the third time they never got to dancing.
As the got out he dance floor Liz eased herself into Max's arms and they danced together, Max caressed Liz’s lower back as they moved in sync to the beat of Baby by Ashanti.
Liz sighed as she happily moved closer into Max’s arms.
As the beat changed too something faster Liz smiled and pulled Max closer and moved with the music rubbing against him as she danced. her hands flung above her enjoying her favourite song moving her hips in a rhythmic movement.
Max watched with lust in his eyes he couldn’t love the woman in front of her more than he did now, she was being herself carefree and enjoying herself.
Liz’s arms came down from above her and he movements slowed down as she wrapped her arms around Max’s neck and pulled his head down and softly kissed him. His hands slid to her lower back to hold her closer as she deepened the kiss slowly, she ran her tongue along his bottom lip. Max pulled out of his trance and started kissing her back deeply. He nibbled gently on her bottom lip and eased her lips apart with his tongue and twinned it with hers. He rubbed his tongue along hers feeling her hands creep under his shirt and glide along his ribs caressing him. He made a sound deep within his throat as Liz’s fingers wrecked havoc on him. Liz smiled against his lips as she heard him moan moving her hands to his back Liz stroked his taunt skin as their tongues dwelled together. Max pulled away and rested his forehead against hers as he tried to get his breathing to even down, he soon realised Liz hadn’t stopped stroking his lower back and moved his arms round and bought her hands out from under his shirt back to her side.
“Your gonna be the death of me” Max whispered huskily against her ear.
Liz looked up “I wouldn’t want you to die now would I” Liz teased as her fingers started to creep back under is shirt, loving the feel of his silk like skin she couldn’t stay away.
Max took her hands and pulled her towards the an exit he could see leading out the back of the club away from the mass of people. “If were going to make out I want to do that without bumping and grinding with others” Max said as he pulled her through the crowd.
They stepped outside and found that it wasn’t as bad as it was inside but it was just as bad walking around the side of the club Max found what he wanted totally isolation and pulled Liz to him and leaned her against the wall, Liz waited no longer and pulled his lips down to meet hers.
Max sank one hand into her hair and the other moved to wrap around her waist. Liz played with the hair on the nape of Max’s neck, . He ran his lips down her neck knowing how much she loved it when he did Liz threw her head back as far as the wall would let her when Max’s lips began their attack, she cried out when he sucked on her neck just where he’d found her sensitive spot only days within their first date. Sucking like his life depended Max continued loving the whimpering noises Liz made. Liz felt like her knees would give out but Max's body had her pinned against the wall holding her up, Liz’s fingers were still threaded through Max’s hair if they stopped Max was most likely to look like we walked out of a hurricane.
Moving away from her neck, Max kissed his way back to her red swollen lips and pulled her bottom lip into his mouth and sucked on it hungrily, Liz’s whole body felt numb and weak from his kisses she wondered how she’d feel when they would finally reach third base. Kissing his way up to her earlobe Max sucked and nipped at it, his fingers had found themselves dancing along Liz's lower back trailing her fingers down to Max’s shirt Liz undid the bottom three of his buttons and bought her fingers to rest against his scorching hot abdomen.
Liz found herself in control once her fingers massaged his aching skin her lips sucked fiercely as they continued their animalistic passion. Moving her hands further up she undid the last 2 buttons holding his shirt together until his shirt was hanging by his sides exposing his tanned torso, Liz’s hands sprawled across the newly exposed skin and her lips moved down his throat until she found his pulse throbbing rapidly under her lips, Liz continued to the side of his neck where she proceeded to suck on his glistening skin, she’d fallen in love with him and his body was oh such a bonus extra in which she loved too.
Liz’s fingers started to explore the contours of his chest running up and over bumps and curves on his chiselled chest. Liz pulled away and looked at his chest in awe “To have a body like yours should be a sin” Liz whispered breathing deeply.
“It must be since your the devil incarnated” Max answered breathing harshly.
Liz didn’t respond verbally instead showing her actions as her lips came crashing down on Max’s, Liz was plunging her tongue into every crevice of his mouth exploring and tasting her much devoured mouth. Liz ran her hands up and down Max’s chest loving the feeling they gave her as her hands glided over the contours of his built chest.
As Liz nipped at Max’s lower lip Max’s fingers crept down to the hem of Liz’s tank top before they slipped under the cotton material, Max felt Liz soft skin against the palm of his hand his fingers moved across her skin leaving trial of fire.
Liz pulled her mouth away from Max’s as the need for air became a necessity.
As Liz tried to catch her breath in huge gulps Max placed chaste kisses against her jaw and chin down her neck to her bare collarbone and started sucking on it leaving love bits over her letting anyone know who’s she was.
“Max” Liz cried out as she clung to him, through everything his shirt had still managed to stay in place, Max moved up to suck on her neck again he knew he was giving her a lot of hickeys but he didn't care he was addicted to her sweet skin and he didn’t think he’d be able to stop.
The shrill ring of Liz’s cell phone and the vibrating they could both feel from the front pocket of her pants.
Liz and Max both groaned as they were pulled away from their kisses, Liz reached down to her phone and answered and wish she hadn’t once she heard the voice of the caller.
lol mean I knw *don’t hurt me yet* it’s Wednesday night and there’s too many things on TV lol yes I'm leaving u here to go watch TV I knw sad excuse lol and I am so sorry but never fear I’ll maybe have a new part out 2morrow or it’ll have to be in a weeks time cine I’m leaving to go on holiday, since my 2 week school holidays had started so lets just hope I find the time to 2morrow plz LEAVE FB it mite get me to drop everything else and write you the rest part 43.
|posted on 28-Sep-2002 2:46:46 AM by roswelllover|
here's the last post until next week before I go, Thanks so much for the FB and Bumps, enjoy the part
Liz and Max both groaned as they were pulled away from their kisses, Liz reached down to her phone and answered and wish she hadn’t once she heard the voice of the caller.
“Elizabeth” Nancy greeted, Liz cringed as she heard her mother’s voice what on earth did her mom want at this time.
“Hi mom” Liz said looking up to see Max’s face, he too was wondering why her mom was calling so late.
“Where are you Liz” Nancy asked.
“Out why” Liz answered.
“I rang home and you weren’t home” Nancy said.
Liz placed her hand on Max’s jaw and smiled up at him. Max moved to nuzzle her neck where he started to kiss her neck he knew that the sooner Liz got off the phone with her mother the better.
“I’m here now” Liz said wanting the conversation to finish soon as well.
“Honey you didn’t tell me you were going out, I got worried, please tell me that Max isn’t anywhere you are” Nancy asked.
Liz got pissed how dare she, she didn’t even know Max and was making accusations.
“No mom Max isn’t here” Liz answered with a bitter tone, Max pulled away from her neck and paid attention to Liz hearing Liz’s side of the conversation he knew it couldn’t be good, Max looked up into Liz’s face and saw her smile at him before she linked her fingers with his.
“Look mom was there a reason you called me” Liz asked.
“No, just have a good time with Sean” Nancy said happy her daughter was still dating a appropriate guy rich and just like them.
Liz hung up without saying bye she was pissed to say the least, Max could feel the anger rolling off of her and see her jaw tighten in fury.
“Liz” Max said pushing her chin up with his finger to make her look up at him.
“What happened” Max asked.
“She has some nerve to make accusations at you I don’t even know why she has these....these issues against you, I pretended to hate you cause I was afraid of the way I felt about you so I hid behind making it look like hate ,but her, god you’ve done nothing but be the best boyfriend and a great guy and she spouts off and tells me to keep away from you” Liz said.
“Liz” Max said tenderly pulling her into an embrace, Liz’s head laid against Max’s chest and she should hear Max’s heartbeat under her, it soothed Liz’s hatred a little.
“I hate it, I love you and I have to hide it from my own mother” Liz said quietly.
“Liz I can be the less likeable guy a times she might have a reason” Max said gently.
“Less likeable ha, I basically walked over you and you still forgave me your should, you, your one of a kind Max stop beating yourself over the way you acted during our hatred times” Liz said as she laid her palm against Max's heart.
“Lets forget about them, well be free in two months remember, we came here to have fun so we will” Max said against her hair.
Liz nodded “I’m a little thirsty anyway” Liz said.
“We can get something fro the bar” Max said.
Liz nodded “we better fix you up before we go” Liz said pointing to his shirt and buttoned up his shirt from bottom to top ever so slowly making sure to brush her fingers against his skin.
Max threaded his fingers through his hair to make it look less like he’d just come back from a make out session Liz ran her hands down her top and pants also making sure to look presentable, Max wrapped his arm around Liz’s waist and they walked past other couples doing a lot more than they’d just done as they reached the entrance they saw that the club was now less full and then the song Boys by Britney Spears flooded the room Liz pulled Max inside moving her hips to the beat as she made her way through a few people who blocked the entrance, turning around to face Max they walked onto the dance floor Liz moving their arms to the beat.
“I thought you said you were thirsty” Max whispered as he moved closer to her.
Liz grinned “I guess dancing seemed more appealing to me” Liz answered as she bumped her hip
“How about I go get you something to drink, what do you want” Max asked as he spotted Kyle and Serena besides them dancing and knowing she’d be fine without him for a whole with them just a few feet away.
“Cherry cola” Liz answered still yet dancing.
Max as able to stop her enough to lean down and place a chaste kiss on her lips before puling away and heading towards the bar.
Liz turned around just as lollipop porn by Crazytown started she felt two pairs of arms snake around her waist, she froze they didn’t give her the feeling when Max did it, she knew it wasn’t Max. Turing around her eyes widened and jaw tighten when she saw Jeremy smirking.
“Evans still hasn’t realised he shouldn’t leave you to be by yourself” Jeremy said still smirking as he forced her to dance with him with his death grip, he’d seen the way she had been dancing with Max since she arrived he’d also seen them when they’d slipped out of the club to the back.
“Still pinning over something you can’t have I see” Liz spat out.
“Oh I wouldn’t say that” Jeremy said his hands going lower and his hands rested at the swell of her ass, Liz tried pushing at his chest but his lean body was no match for her.
“I suggest you leave before Max comes and kicks your ass” Liz said with confidence.
“Evans.....kick my ass, right” Jeremy said getting to close for Liz’s liking.
“You want this but your just afraid to hurt the asshole” Jeremy said his tongue seeking out and tasting her skin on her neck, Liz pulled away as if she was burnt, she looked around frantically seeing if anyone could help her but Jeremy had somehow bought them to the centre of the dance floor where no one seemed to care.
“I don’t want you I never did stop being a psychotic stalker!” Liz yelled in fury.
“You didn’t seem to think the same thing a few weeks ago I swear your the one who had been kissing me too” Jeremy said.
“Let it go, things happen I was stupid to even think about giving up someone like Max, he’s twice a person you will ever be” Liz shouted in his face, out in anger why were so many people trying to ruin the first best thing in her life, she wasn’t the guy just didn’t get it.
“Evans better learn to keep his woman or he’s gonna end up losing them, hope to see you again Liz” Jeremy said before capturing her lips in a kiss, Liz didn’t respond not this time, she wrenched her lips away from his and glared at him, releasing her waist he left smirking, he didn’t want a death wish he knew that much and he knew Max fucking Evans was going to come back, he wasn’t scared he was going to have fun before he finally encountered Max Evans and kick his ass.
Liz stood still breathing in and out stopping from screaming going to let anybody, no one if it was the last thing she did.
Max walked behind her and wrapped his arms around her and kissed her back, Liz jumped but sighed when she heard his voice “Hey here’s your drink what’s wrong” Max asked asking about her jumpiness.
Liz took the can from him and smiled up at him “Lets go I think I've danced to much” Liz said.
Max nodded and took her hand leading them away and to where they spotted the leather couch that had been accompanied was now empty.
Max sat down pulling Liz to sit on his lap, Liz had gulped down half the can and make looked at her
“What I was thirsty” Liz defended.
Max just chuckled and started stroking her hair as he handed his half full can of cherry cola to put on the table in front of them. “So are you going to tell me what’s wrong” Max asked.
“Liz sighed “She wasn't going to lie to him even if it as stupid.
“When you left I had an encounter with someone” Liz started Max could sense the anger in her voice.
“Who was it” Max asked confused wondering who could piss her off so much.
“Jeremy Whites, decided he wanted to teach you a lesson it was nothing though, but I'm pissed off at how everyone wants to take the best thing from me” Liz said lying her head on his chest.
“I hate it I feel like the rest of the worlds against us being together” Liz sighed.
Max was pissed “Jeremy” Max sad through clenched teeth, Liz had felt when Max’s body had tensed at the mere mention of him being anywhere near her.
“Max” Liz turned around to face him.
“He was just being a jerk, he didn't try anything” Liz kissed his jaw trying to sooth the anger.
“What time is it” Liz asked.
“10:50” Max answered.
“It’ll probably take us 10 minutes to get out of the club, lets go” Liz said as she got off his lap and pulled him up.
It had only taken then them a few minutes to get out of the club, Max at on the bonnet of his car and pulled Liz into his embrace, he knew she was tired, usually they'd go up to Buckley's point after but tonight she would go straight home to rest.
“You really did tire yourself out today huh” Max whispered.
Liz nodded against his neck.
‘Maybe it’s your coming of old age” Max teased grinning.
“Max your jokes aren’t really funny” Liz said smiling as she hit him on the shoulder.
“Well I tried” Max said sighing.
Liz pulled away her eyes twinkling in laughter. “But I don’t love you for your jokes” kiss “I love you for you” Liz said before kissing him.
“umhmmm I'll stick to making lame jokes if I'm rewarded like this every time” Max said against her lips.
“You continue making lame jokes and you’ll end up single” Liz teased.
“Would that be so bad” Max answered sarcastically.
Liz pulled away and was about to step away from him to make her point but was pulled back in “You’ve proved your point, I'm whipped and you know it’ Max said.
Liz grinned “How much did that hurt your ego” Liz asked jokingly.
“Just about how much it boasted yours” Max answered.
Liz laughed and kissed him again “I know and I still love you my love slave” Liz answered.
“Love slave?” Michael smirked.
Max groaned when he sighted the rest of his friends that had now walked up to them, Michael would never let this go now.
“Shut up Michael” Maria retorted.
Max smirked “Yup Love Slave” Michael let it go knowing exactly what he meant by the tone in his voice.
well that’s it hope you liked it, don’t forget the FB!
|posted on 13-Oct-2002 1:37:29 AM by roswelllover|
|ps_dreamer(once), LizParkerEvans4evax, AngelBehr1947, angelbaby6977, Emotions23(twice), *~*Lizzie*~*, Dream Seeker(x14), clueless(x4) thanks for the FB and bumps.|
Alizaria(once)- Liz has already injured the asshole I think it’s Max’s turn, thanks for the FB.
marteloise- the answer to why Nancy hates Max will be answered hopefully in the next part after this one. Thanks for the FB
Thanks for keeping this fic bumped while I was gone, I would’ve had a part out sooner if things hadn’t become so busy, but here’s a new short part
It was Friday night and the gang were out, tonight they'd decided to play pool, the guys knowing if they played the girls against the guys would be a bad idea since they'd loose by the girls cheating, Max already having experienced it so they decided to play pool, Maria and Michael were already out since Maria tried playing only failing in losing as with Isabel, but Michael not liking to lose who'd about how Maria couldn't play such a simple game of pool, and Alex saying he forgave Isabel since not everyone was a pool player. This left Kyle and Serena, Max and Liz , Liz and Serena had shown to be just as good as the guys, Max and Liz together made a better team now Liz was up next only two balls left on the pool table the number 8 and number 7, Liz had sunk the 7 which Kyle's face had shown the disappointment and Max had sunk the 8.
"We kicked your ass, well Kyle how does it feel to officially lose" Liz smirked knowing how much Kyle had been boasting just before the game.
"Liz babe I think we've bruised his ego enough" Max said grinning as he came up behind Liz and snaked his arms around her waist.
"My ego, Evans is Liz played against you you'd be the one with the bruised ego" Kyle retorted.
Max smiled "It's why me and Liz won't be playing against each other" Max answered.
"You are so whipped Evans, what happened to cool guy I don't lose Evans" Kyle teased.
"We should go this place is closing soon" Serena said as she saw the waiters putting the chairs up on the tables, and it was nearly 10 closing time.
"That's exactly what's wrong with this town everything's closed by 10" Kyle said.
"Won't be long before we'll be out in the streets till dawn Kyle" Michael answered.
Liz and Max walked back home since walking was longer so Isabel and Alex had taken Max's car, Liz and Max walked along the deserted streets of Roswell hand in hand as they laughed and talked.
"You were quite the pool player" Max said as he wrapped his arms around Liz's waist to bring her closer to him. They had stopped before the door to Liz's house.
"uh huh, not all girls are hopeless" Liz answered grinning.
"You proved that tonight" Max said his lips slightly touching hers as he talked teasing her.
Liz linked her arms around Max's neck and pulled him close, while Max slowly pushed her against the wall beside the door.
"Stop talking" Liz said before their lips met and Max’s tongue hungrily demanding for entrance, which wasn’t hesitated by Liz, their lips entangled with one another, while Max's hair was buried in Liz’s hair and Liz’s fingers were mused in Max’s. Liz pulled away when she heard the outside lights turn on.
"You better go" Liz said still breathing harshly
"I'll see you tomorrow" Max said
Liz nodded Max kissed her briefly before pulling away their hands lingering until neither could reach the others any longer.
Liz waited for until Max's retreating disappeared before taking her keys out and opening the door.
When she walked into the hallway on either side passing by the guest room then about to pass the big lounge room that was never used Liz saw her mom sitting n the couch with not such a pleasant look on her face.
"So you went out" Nancy asked.
"Yeah" Liz answered wondering why she cared all of a sudden.
"With" Nancy asked.
"Serena" Liz answered rolling her eyes, wondering what was up with the 20 questions.
"Liz I may be old but I'm certainly no stupid, here had me and your father gone wrong in bringing you up" Nancy asked, Liz wanted to retort something about not bringing her up at all, leaving Priscilla to bring her up, that her parents were hardly home.
"There are plenty of boys how would go out with you Liz, why, why did you choose the one person we told you to stay away from Elizabeth how could you disappoint us Elizabeth what went wrong, why are you with that, that Evans boy" Nancy said angry.
I've finally gtten a prt out, hope you liked thngs will be pretty downhill from here for a lil, Fb plz
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|posted on 20-Oct-2002 1:49:45 AM by roswelllover|
|Thanks for the FB and Bumps, this part’s longer sorry for taking so long ut I was way too busy last week up until the weekends so I finally have an update.......|
"Your mother isn't absolutely stupid Elizabeth" Nancy said venomously.
Liz's shock wore off, she wasn't ashamed of what she had with Max far from it, now it was finally time to stand up to her stubborn mother.
"Yes mom it's true, I'm seeing Max and I'm not going to stop" Liz said.
"So this isn't some revenge on me and your father for not giving you enough time" Nancy said no expression being expressed at all.
"Revenge, I can't believe you I don't care les that you didn't give me the time of day because Max makes up for it, I've never felt so loved when I'm with him, it's you that's missing out here" Liz retorted.
"Love, is that what you call it nowadays love, you think your in love with him, what's he got on you Elizabeth" Nancy asked her eyes piercing into Liz's
"Max would never blackmail me with information just to get me to go out with him, how could you know what love is mom you've never felt it before!" Liz yelled she was furious she couldn't believe her mother.
"Felt it, Elizabeth in our world Love is not concerned only money is we bought you up that way, we taught you that and you throw it in my face, by seeing him" Nancy snapped.
"His name is Max, use it mother" Liz said viciously glaring at the woman said to be her mother, the woman that conceived her not her mother a mother brings up their child a mother is there for her child all her life not to be bought up by some maid, Pricilla was more her mother than the woman that sat before was.
"To use his name would mean I respect him" Nancy replied bitterly.
"What are your reasons huh mom, why do you hate Max so much, you don't even know him why are you so quick to judge" Liz asked she was angry but her mother should have reasons for hating Max right no one just hated someone without reasons.
"We told you them all through out your life Elizabeth" Nancy said.
"No, you've only ever told me to keep away from him, but never have I asked why until today" Liz said.
Nancy grew quite.
"You don't even have a single reason to hate Max do you, you've been giving lectures through out my life when you don't even know who Max is, and why you hate him!" Liz was yelling now, her mom's silence had suppressed her anger even more.
"His family's wealthy too Elizabeth you seeing him could be a threat to us, how do you even know he's not using you to help his family bring me and your father down, anyone would do anything to see us lose" Nancy said bitterly.
"Neither Max nor his family would be so, arggg. They would never do that you on the other hand would, Max's mom is the warmest person I have ever known, a threat you say, screw your money mom, I'd be poor and I'd still be seeing Max because Max DOESN'T care about that, there are no words to describe Max and you know why that's because I'm in love with him, that's what love is you cant find a single word to describe the one you love. I... I can't even look at you anymore without feeling disgusted at who's daughter I am" Liz said glaring at her mom and speaking the truth.
"All you did was conceive me but you don't even have the right for me to call you mom, Nancy, your money doesn't mean anything to me, I feel sorry for dad to be married to a cold hearted witch like you, I HATE YOU!" Liz yelled before stalking out of the room and running out the door her feet taking her to the only place of comfort.
Max awoke form the harsh rapping on his bedroom window, sitting up in bed he rubbed the sleep out of his eyes and looked at the window to find Liz standing outside looking upset and furious.
Getting up hastily only in his boxers Max rushed over and opened the window.
"Liz" Max said as he helped Liz get in through his window. Wondering why she was here at midnight.
When her legs securely touched the floor beneath her Liz hugged Max tightly, she was safe now, she felt safe in Max's arms. This was her home.
Pulling away Liz attacked Max's lips she needed to feel them on hers, she needed his kisses, they were like a drug they made things in life seem better, Max hadn't expected it and was shocked but it was something Liz would do but the state Liz was in made him hesitant. But never being one to deny Liz anything Max found himself kissing her back, somehow he felt as though this is what Liz needed
"Liz, baby what's wrong" Max asked as they both came up for air.
"My mom, she found out about us..." Liz answered.
Max's eyes grew wide his suspicions were true "and the thing is she doesn't have a reason to hate you...Max I hate her" Liz said looking into his deep amber eyes, Max could see she was angry it wast their reflected in her eyes along with a tinge of hurt, and he knew that it was the result of her mom not supporting her, though Liz made herself seem tough Max knew her a lot better than she did herself and Liz Parker deep down did get hurt easily.
"Liz, it'll be okay" Max said gently pulling her into an embrace and caressed her back, Liz held onto Max in a death grip but he didn't care, he was worried just how much Liz's mom could have said to upset her so much.
'I have a feeling it won't be' Liz thought then proceeded to tell him her conversation with her mom.
Max felt guilty for being the reason Liz and her mom had fought.
"Max..." Liz said as she saw the guilt upon his face she needed him to understand not distance himself from her. "Please don't do this, I need you now, I can't lose you either please stop feeling guilty for something you shouldn't feel guilty for" Liz whispered it was her mom's problem not hers.
"I'm sorry its just I'm the reason you two fought Max answered.
"That's her problem Max we have finals soon and I'll be damned if I let my mom ruin the rest of my life by failing them okay and that goes for both of us whatever she decided I don't really care in 2 months we'll be gone from Roswell starting our own lives okay" Liz said.
And that conversation bought more fears to Max, they both hadn't talked about hat universities they would be applying for, they had stayed away from the subject but Max wanted to go wherever Liz was going and that would be Harvard, but Harvard wouldn't take him, yeah he was academically good as well but not the best enough for Harvard. But Max didn't say anything as he didn't want to put anymore stress upon Liz than she already did, putting on a fake smile Max nodded his head letting her know that he agreed too.
"I guess your going to be staying her tonight" Max said
"If it's okay I...my dad's on a business trip which means my moms home and I'm not ready to face her yet" Liz answered.
"Liz you know you can stay the night, like I'm going to let you wander the streets at 12 in the morning." Max said.
Liz smiled "I guess"
Shifting back Max settled into his bed, Liz crawled up after him and settled herself into his chest and took in his scent surrounding her. Pulling the sheets over them Max, wrapped his arm around her small frame and kissed her temple and Liz started falling into deep slumber as she burrowed deeper into Max's chest. "I wish I could make it better for you Liz but it's out of my control. But you'll always have me Liz that I promise" Max whispered softly before closing his eyes and following Liz to a place he could make it all better for Liz, his dreams.
not sure when I'll get the new part posted but finals are coming up soon and gotta study for them too (finals eh )but I promise that if this gets enough FB for my muse to be inspired then it will be my first priority to update
|posted on 26-Oct-2002 3:34:51 AM by roswelllover|
|Thanks for the FB and bumps|
Liz's eyes slowly opened, the intense sunlight coming from Max's window waking her up.
"Good morning" Max whispered gently against her ear, smiling Liz turned in his arms so she could face him.
"How long have you been up" Liz asked.
"Not long" Max answered.
"Why didn't you wake me up, your mom might walk in" Liz said in concern it the last thing she needed was getting caught by Max's mom.
"It's okay, my mom never comes in, in the morning" Max answered softly stroking her rumpled hair.
Liz's features softened after being reassured "what time is it" Liz asked.
Max's eyes averted to his digital clock reading the red light.
"Five past eight" Max answered looking back down at Liz.
"I'm sorry about last night" Liz mumbled against his chest.
"Don’t be sorry Liz" Max said, Liz pulled away and looked up at him "Remember I'm not like most guys I'm not going to judge you" Max said softly but also teasingly.
"I know your not and it's hard for me, I can usually deal with these things" Liz sighed.
"I know and you keep things bottled up inside"Max said tilting her chin up to make her look at him
"But always know Liz Parker that I will always be here for you" Max whispered their faces inches away from each other.
"Morning breath" Liz whispered smirking when Max pulled away.
“I forgot” Max said before untangling himself from Liz, getting up from the bed and helped Liz up after him.
"I'll see you later" Liz said her arms wrapped around Max's waist.
"Where are you going?" Max asked confused.
"To the holiday inn" Liz answered.
"Why" Max asked still confused.
Liz rolled her eyes "I can't exactly live in your room" Liz answered seriously.
"Liz, there's no way I'm letting you stay at the Holiday Inn" Max said. "Look, we can talk to my mom okay, ask her can we please at least try and your staying for breakfast" Max said in a serious tone.
"Okay, your mom won't let me stay in your room; it's going to be Isabel's" Liz said in assurance.
"Yes Liz I know that but it’s better than the holiday inn; at least in know your somewhere in the house" Max said.
"C'mon you need to take a shower and get dressed before your mom comes looking for you, I'm just gong to go see Isabel, " Liz said before kissing him on the cheek and walking down the hallway towards the familiar room. Not bothering to knock Liz opened the door to find Isabel doing her hair.
"Liz, what are you doing here...at 10 past 8 I the morning" Isabel asked.
"Liz smiled "Hi to you to" "I had a fight with my mom and came here, I was in Max's room" Liz answered.
"Figures, so it was that bad huh" Isabel asked.
"Yeah, she found out about me and Max dating and well was totally pissed off" Liz said.
"Whoa, did she say why she hates Max" Isabel asked.
"She doesn't have a fucking reason" Liz answered.
"I asked her why and she couldn't answer me, she hates Max for no reason at all" Liz said.
‘’Whoa" Isabel said still shocked she'd thought that Mrs parker had a really good reason fro the feelings she had towards Max, she knew it wasn't the family since Mrs Parker had liked her but Max was another story.
"Anyway, do you have anything I could borrow...? To wear" Liz asked.
"Liz are you kidding this is practically half of yours" Isabel said pointing towards her wardrobe.
"Your mom won't get freaked out if she finds me here will she" Liz asked as she shuffled through drawers.
"She's not here, my mom and dad had an urgent meeting to go to in Phoenix so they left early this morning, they left a note" Isabel answered coming up beside Liz to help her.
"Even better" Liz said.
"Here take this and go before my brother goes through withdrawal from you missing for to long" Isabel said lightly pushing Liz towards the door.
"Isabel you know Max isn't that bad" Liz said.
"Right and pigs fly" Isabel said before Liz was fully out the door.
Liz smiled and headed back towards Max's room.
"You've already showered" Liz said shocked to see that he had showered in 10 minutes.
"I doesn't take that long" Max answered.
"Our kidding me, life as a guy is so much easier" Liz said to herself, Max smiled before walking up to her
Liz took in his smell, freshly showered and still smelling like her Max. "I have some good news" Liz said.
"What is it" Max asked.
"You're mom and dad are out of town, Isabel told me they left to go to Phoenix" Liz said
"Beats explaining to them why you’re here so early in the morning" Max said smiling.
"Yeah, I'm gonna go take my shower now, word of warning don't go see Isabel Liz said walking towards the opened bathroom.
It was 4 in the afternoon and Max and Liz had been lying on the couch since 3 watching 2 minutes of something on each channel, Finally coming to something Max left it on ESPN his favourite channel.
"You're lucky this happens to be my favourite sport" Liz said as a local basketball game was showing.
"Basketball’s your favourite sport" Max asked shocked.
"Yeah reason umber one being I won against you and plus I prefer you playing basketball then football, but since you're so into sports you play basically everything you have time for you're sexier when you play basketball" Liz grinned.
"Are you insulting me" Max asked pretending to be hurt?
"No, I'm just voicing my opinions" Liz answered still smirking.
"Well I find you sexier when your doing biology" Max answered.
Liz grinned "Well then I'm just going to have to take a career in science then" Liz said moving closer to Max's lips.
"Yup you will" Max said huskily before their lips were merged together, the thirst for each other apparent as their tongues searched for each others and their fingers fished themselves devilishly in each others hair, even the sound of the doorbell didn't pull them apart, nor did the remark Isabel threw at them as she walked past them to get the door after several rings but they pulled away when Isabel called out for him.
Getting up and walking towards the door, Max was faced with the deputy sheriff the new deputy sheriff of Roswell "Are you Max Evans"
"Yes" Max answered.
"We received a call from a Nancy Parker, I'm afraid I'm going to have to hold you in custody for kidnapping Liz Parker"
"What!" Both Isabel and Liz yelled, Liz had walked up behind Max and had wrapped her arms around him from behind when she heard her mother's name she knew it wasn't good.
"I'm Liz Parker, as in Max Evans's Girlfriend Liz Parker" Liz explained and emphasised every word she spoke she couldn't believe he mom could be so stupid to do such a thing but since he was the new deputy sheriff he didn't know anything about anyone in Roswell.
"I'm sorry but I've received a complaint, which means I'm going to have to take you in" Sheriff Cooney said.
Max turned around to face Liz "It's okay Liz I can't exactly get charged now can I, sheriff Valenti knows us, just don't do anything stupid okay" Max whispered before placing a chaste kiss on Liz's lips.
"Liz just nodded as she felt Max released himself from her hold and walk towards the door.
Max looked over and saw his sisters concerned face walking over to Isabel Max hugged her "it'll be okay Izzy I'll be out before you know it" Max said in assurance and confidence.
Extracting himself from Isabel Max walked over to Sheriff Cooney, the sheriff knew from the scene he had witnessed that the boy wouldn't be any trouble only had trouble with his girlfriends family, he wouldn't need handcuffs.
When Max had gotten to the station, there had been no point after talking to sheriff Valenti Max had been realised, Sheriff Valenti had explained that it was one of Nancy's ways to get rid of Max but I this case dating Liz and Liz going to Max hadn't been a case of kidnapping, Max didn't even know why Liz's mom had tried to, even he knew it wouldn't work.
After watching Max leave Liz had taken off to her house, she needed to talk to her mom not talk more like lash out at her mom she couldn't believe the lengths she would go to just to make her life miserable.
After a simple yet friendly greeting to Priscilla Liz asked for her mom and headed towards her room, after today the only time she would see this place was when her dad was home.
"Liz" Nancy greeted her daughter pretending to act as if everything was okay, she knew why her daughter was her she could tell by the rage she saw in her daughter's eyes.
Liz glared at her mother and stopped a meter away from her; she was going to make this short.
"What are you doing here honey" Nancy said.
"Don't," Liz seethed "You know why I'm here, what's wrong with you mom, are you seriously crazy you know that your little scheme wouldn't have work but you still do stupid things to embarrass yourself, I'm not going to let you screw things up for Max and I'm not letting you screw things up for myself just because of my mother, from no on you have no daughter Nancy.... There is no way I can forgive you for the things you’ve done in my life, and you know what it won’t hurt knowing that I don’t have a mother because I never had one, there’s only 2 months before you won’t have to see me or Max, but since your not patient I suggest you suffer, goodbye mom, and congratulations I hate you so much more than I’ve ever hated anyone else on this planet” Liz said, and as she thought there was no reaction out of her mom, Liz glared at her mom once more before turning around and walking away and still Nancy did nothing to stop her.
I might post more on Sunday/Monday if I can, FB plz.
|posted on 28-Oct-2002 1:38:25 AM by roswelllover|
|Thanks for the FB, ps dreamer, clueless and dream seeker here's the part I said I might post hope you like.|
It had been 3 days since Max had been accused of kidnapping Liz by Nancy, after going back to Max's after she had spoke to her mom, Liz had found Max had come home, she knew that it wouldn't be serious but there could've been a possibility in it becoming more. When Diane and Philip had come back home Max and Liz had told them of Liz's situation and to why she had currently been living in their house, Diane had no objections to Liz staying at their house as long as she slept in Isabel's room, they had also found out about What Nancy had tried doing to Max and had sympathized to Liz for her mothers behaviour no one why Nancy reacted such a bitter way towards Max. For Liz it hadn't interrupted her life, now that she had started studying for finals though Diane thought that the mess she had with her mom would distract her but it hadn't and she was sure it wouldn't.
Diane and Philip had gone out for business matters and Isabel had left to go study at Alex's leaving Max and Liz at the house, with their notes and books scattered over the floor of the lounge room as they had planned to study but so far had only succeeded in focusing on each other. Trying to study while they had the house to themselves prepared to have been a challenge for Max and Liz.
"Max" Liz said out of the blue, placing her notes on the floor. She had tried with her notes in front of her she had tried to focus on the task in hand to study for chemistry but she had only achieved on reading the same three lines over and over again as all that was whirling in her head was the fact that there was an empty house which meant they were...alone.
"Yeah" Max answered his head popping up from the book he had unsuccessfully tried studying from.
"Do you really want to study" Liz asked as she looked up at Max.
"Liz does anyone really ever want to study" Max answered.
Getting up off the floor Liz crawled over to Max and straddled him in his sitting position "Max, you are aware that we are alone in your house, and were...studying" Liz said as she wrapped her arms around Max's neck.
"Liz, I'm aware of that, I was aware of that. That's all I've been aware of, but we have our finals" Max exclaimed.
"I know that but Max when do we eve get the house to ourselves" Liz asked.
"Once in a while" Max mumbled.
"Exactly and when can we study" Liz asked.
"All the time" Max answered.
"So would you rather study or do this" Liz asked before she leaned closer and firmly planted her lips upon, Max not being one to stop anytime granted her permission when asked and their tongues met in duel fighting their hunger and pent up passion fuelling their kisses. For now there would be no studying.
"Nancy where's Liz" Jeff asked he'd come home just 2 hours ago, and he was wondering where Liz was, he felt guilty for the fact that he hardly saw his daughter, Nancy had said that for Liz to live a happy life all she would need was money, she had told him that with Liz money mattered more than love from her parents and he had gone by what Nancy had said. He threw himself in his work occasionally seeing his daughter who was happy. But after a business trip that had driven him insane he wanted to see his angel.
"Your daughter" Nancy snickered "Your daughters probably shacked up somewhere at the pitiful boys house" Nancy answered.
"Nancy your not making sense" Jeff said confused what pitiful boy?
"Our daughter's staying at the Evans house" Nancy answered not daring to speak the boy’s name, the boy who stole her daughter away. "With Max" Nancy added.
After explaining her side of the story to Jeff which in Her case made everything sound as worst than it really had been "He's taken her away, he's changed her to something I don't even recognise anymore" Nancy said a cold expression on her face.
"Nancy what's wrong with Max Evans" Jeff asked.
"Don't you ever speak that disrespectful boys name in this house" Nancy yelled "And you are not going to spoil Elizabeth, why couldn't you ever try brining her up, why couldn't you just buy her, whatever the damn well she wanted" Nancy said.
Jeff knew Nancy was cold hearted, she hadn't been when she was younger when he had first meet her, when he had fallen in love with her but when Nancy had turned from the loving wife and other to a cold hearted woman he didn't know but he knew who the source was, Nancy's mother, his dreaded mother in law.
Bringing his hand up around her waist, Max's fingers sneaked under the hem of Liz's tank top and danced along Liz's skin and caressed her skin softly, Liz had been right he would rather be doing this then studying. Kissing along the side of her jaw and down the column of her neck as Liz's head flew back exposing her neck further for him to explore, Max kissed his way down to side of her neck started suckling on the sensitive skin she exposed for him to do as he wished. Finding his way back up to Liz's lips their hands everywhere, Liz's fingers found themselves pushing the hem of Max's shirt for her fingers to explore his toned chest freely. The sudden ring of the doorbell bought Max and Liz out of their passionate haze. Breathing heavily they bought tried to calm down their breathing hearts before Liz got up of Max and Let Max stand up and get the door, while trying to make herself look more presentable.
While Max walked across his lounge room he too tried to make himself look presentable but the sudden stop in front of the mirror hanging in the hallway proved to him otherwise, running his fingers through his fingers Max walked down to the door and opened the door to find Jeff Parker.
"Hi Mr Parker" Max greeted uncomfortably not knowing how to act in front of Liz's father from what he suspected Jeff Parker hated him too. But the smile he received from him in return surprised him a lot.
"Hi Max, is Liz home" Jeff knew it was a stupid question to ask since he could see what he knew he had interrupted.
"Max smiled in return and knew how obvious he was with his swollen lips and wrinkled clothing and his breathing looked as if he'd run down to open the door. "Yeah she's in the lounge room" Max said as Jeff walked into the house and Max closed the door behind him, Walking behind in front of him, Max led Liz's father to the lounge room where Liz was cleaning up their scattered notes.
Liz looked up upon hearing footsteps and saw her father behind Max. "Dad" Liz said in surprise, her father had come ...to see her it was confusing as to why, she figured it was probably to get her to forgive her mom.
Jeff smiled at his daughter and he knew that Nancy's words were wrong as he could see how happy she was standing next to Max, he hoped he wasn't too late to change anything.
"Hi Lizzie" Jeff greeted using her childhood name, Liz's eyes watered up as she heard her father call her by her childhood name, she missed him, her father turning 13 had been hard for her, her father had become distant afterwards.
"Dad what are you doing here" Liz asked confused.
"Can we sit down this might be long" Jeff asked, receiving a nod form Liz as she and Max sat down on the couch besides each other and he sat down on the one seater.
"Before I go any further I want you to know that your mother did not send me here" Jeff started "In fact I've come to see my daughter, I've missed you Liz and it's all my fault, I was never there for you. I'm not here to ask you to make amends with your mother I've come to her your side" Jeff said.
Upon asking her Liz had told him her side of the story correcting everything Nancy had said wrong, Jeff was now sure that Liz and Max were right for each other and didn't know why his wife would want to destroy such a good thing.
"Liz I'm so sorry, your mom she...even I don't know the reasons to why she does what she does, see Liz when I first met your mom she had everything you did, she had everything she ever wanted but she didn't have a mother nor a father, your grandad had died when she was 12 leaving your grandma to bring your mother up, your grandma wasn't the nicest person she was just like our mother is now cold. Your grandma had died when you were 2 years old. I guess the reasons to why she does this to you is because she's picked up her mom's parenting traits" Jeff finished he knew it was half the reason the other half he wondered also, he knew there was a secret Nancy as keeping from him.
"It still doesn't give her the reason for what she does, if it happened to her she should know how I feel" Liz answered.
"I know sweetie, but to be honest even I don't know your mother anymore" Jeff said sadly."To be honest with you Liz, Max" Jeff said addressing both of them "I wasn't thrilled with the idea of my lizzie going out with you Max, I heard about your reputation but people change...Max I don't have anything against you, why should I, I look at my daughter and I see her the happiest I've ever seen her ever in my life and I know it's because she has you though Liz's mother had said that all Lizzie ever needed as the money she was I see now hat you have done to my daughter, you've taken her heart, I just want you to know that I...I approve of your relationship, I know you were a different person before Liz but that's what's so special about Liz she changes people.....Some people" Jeff said correcting himself.
"Oh dad" Liz said getting up from the couch and running to her dad, she was never one to cry, never in front of anyone but what he father had said she couldn't help it she had missed this for 5 years of her life, she had missed her father.
"Liz I want you to know that I'll be here for you, your mom was wrong and I worked to bring you the best life but don’t need to other people can take care of my businesses" Jeff said hugging his daughter.
"I missed you daddy" Liz whispered and pulled back "but I'm not going home, I can't face mom yet" Liz said.
Jeff gave her a soft smile 'It's okay you can stay here, plus Max will take care of my little girl for me, while I try working on your mother" Jeff said.
Liz smiled "It's good to have you back dad"
"It's good to be back Lizzie, it's good to be back" Jeff muttered as he looked over Liz's shoulder at Max, and giving him a smile, Liz wasn't his little girl anymore.
"I better go I understand you have finals to study for" Jeff said.
"Yes I do" Liz answered.
"And I suspect you'll be doing just that" Jeff said giving Liz and Max a pointed look.
'Yes dad" Liz answered smiling.
Jeff stood up and walked over to Max and held his hand out for him to shake in which Max did "take care of her for me won't you" Jeff said.
"You know I will" Max answered shaking the older mans hand.
After bidding farewell, Jeff left the young couple to go home, home to Nancy.
That’s all until 6 weeks, I too have my finals now and I wanna pass which means I actually have studying to do (sighs) but don't let that stop you from leaving Fb (smile) I tried making it long to make up for the time in advance. Have a happy Halloween everybody and a Happy anything else that comes up while I'm gone
|posted on 12-Dec-2002 1:55:33 AM by roswelllover|
|Hey , I'm back......whoa. it’s been a long time since I updated|
thanks for the Fb for the part I posted ...........a while ago! the unanswered question to Nancy’s behaviour will remain unanswered, I'm not sure if I’ll write about it or not, but I’ll see, it’s a whole different story to her attitude which could go on forever or maybe not.
thanks to ps_dreamer (x2), Emotions23(x13), clueless(x6) and a big thanks to Dream Seeker(41 times!) for bumping this fic while I was gone, thanks to you guys I was able to find this again.
Dreaming in Purple- thanks for your FB, it was nice to hear your view ,I'm glad to hear that my writing’s improved but although not as good.........about Tess and Jeremy ah yes the evil team, there in this part, unfortunately making an appearance with everything else happing to Max and Liz I almost forgot about them, thanks for reminding me thanks again.
It had been a week since Liz last saw her mother, not that she regretted her decision to stay at the Evans's, she was more than glad to, she was treated just like the family. Being on the receiving end of Diane's affection made Liz feel loved, especially with not having a mother figure in her life made Liz realise what mother’s love really felt like, she envied Isabel, she had a loving mother something she hadn’t felt until now.
Liz was enjoying the time she spent with her dad, it was like she was four all over again, a time when she had been her dad’s princess his pride and joy, they got to know each other again. They had even promised to have lunch once every week just to stay in contact with each other and not miss anything important in each other’s lives.
With only 4 weeks left until their finals Max and Liz’s study sessions were exactly that study sessions with occasional making out and stolen kisses but besides that they were prepared quite well, but the thought of picking schools still loomed over them, with everything going on neither felt it was the right time to bring up the uneasy subject.
Diane and Philip had decided to go out for the day which they seemed to do a lot lately letting Isabel, Liz and Max study at home in peace. Like usual Isabel studied in her room with the exception of having Alex over as well, and Max and Liz had yet again taken over the lounge room floor with Liz and Max sprawled on the floor their legs tangled with each other’s not losing contact with each other.
“Max” Liz said looking up from her notes, capping her pen and dropping it to the ground, the thought of picking universities was driving her crazy, if both were going to ignore it she was going to take the first step forwards.
“Yeah” Max asked looking up and twisting his head to look at Liz.
Liz moved closer to Max and entwined her fingers with his before finding the courage to finally end their apprehension.
“Max, we need to talk about what we’re going to do after Graduation” Liz started softly.
Dropping the things he had in his hand Max gave Liz his full attention, it was a serious subject, and they were finally going to resolve it. Max knew Liz needed his support and attention.
“Max what schools did you apply for” Liz asked
“Max we need to know, If we chose different schools then we’ll deal with it but before that I need to know” Liz explained she knew they both had dreams and abilities that would take them far, Max with his sports and she had her academics which meant different schools unless fate was on their sides they’ll be going to different schools.
“I received a basketball scholarship from Stanford, a football scholarship from UCLA and I applied for UNM, I haven’t decided what I'm going to choose yet” Max answered. “What about you”
“I received a scholarship from Harvard, Stanford and Boston” Liz answered. She hadn’t decided either, she preferred Stanford better Harvard had been her mom’s dream, a dream her mother hadn’t accomplished she didn’t need that reminder by going there being forced to follow her mom’s dreams, although Harvard was great she had never dreamed of going there and Boston was to far for her, coming home would be a task if she went that far, she’d gone through the possibilities and although she was positive she wanted to go to Stanford, she also didn’t know what to do.
“So what are we going to do” Max dreaded this conversation the schools she’d mentioned besides Stanford were to far, they’d probably get one holiday a year and for him spending a day without her was proven to be difficult, he’d have to spend 365 days without her if they went their separate ways. For Max he didn’t acre what he chose, he loved both sports it’s why he dedicated his time to them the most, but Basketball did mean a lot to the people he loved, Liz preferred basketball, his dad had played basketball at university, his mom had told him numerous times she preferred him playing basketball more cause the injuries he obtained from football worried her as he grew But when he’d gone to his parents for advice they had told him that though they were his parents this was one of the many decisions in his life he’d have to make himself and since then he still hadn’t.
“I don’t know Max, to be honest I've thought through this a hundred times and I've come to the same thing, Stanford has always been my dream, Harvard hadn’t been an option it could’ve been if my mom hadn’t pushed me so much but it isn’t. I want to go to Stanford” Liz answered the reality of saying it out loud made it more real to her now, she told Max her decision now it was Max’s turn.
Max wanted to thank the heavens above as he heard Liz's answer it was as if fate had planned for them to both struggle with their decision but to have come to the same one, no one could make him change is mind now, he was going to Stanford.
With his decision made Max leaned down and took Liz’s lips in his, the weight had been lifted off both their shoulders, while Max kissed a confused Liz he couldn't help but grin at knowing he really wouldn’t be spending months of his life without Liz, pulling away Max eyes shone with happiness something Liz couldn’t understand at a time like this but Max was quick to assure her.
“I'm going to Stanford Liz, no buts, no arguing I made this decision way before I even realised” Max answered happiness laced in his voice as he spoke causing Liz to smile, they had put themselves through stress for no reason, it looked as if fate was on their side.
Once again Max swept down and captured Liz’s lips within his, this time his kiss was more passionate more demanding, Liz was happy to oblige, she was happy. They’d once again proved to the world that together her and Max could overcome any obstacle thrown at them. Cause Max and Liz together were a match made in heaven.
“Look I don’t think there’s any use in us barging into their lives okay, frankly I really don’t care about Max and Liz’s little perfect fairytale life” Tess spat out as she entered the room, Jeremy had called, she was tired for days they had been planning and through all this she realised she had, had enough making Max and Liz’s life miserable was no more fun, it bored her and she was going to pull out, Jeremy could do it himself, she knew it wouldn’t work, god knows how may times she’d tried and failed.
“I’m moving away” Jeremy said, his dad had given him the, ‘why can’t you ever do anything good in your life’ speech and blamed him for Max winning their football games. Now they were moving to another city to start at another school to go and ‘try’ and take the place of the star player.
“So no plan” Tess asked hopeful.
“Oh no, I have 3 days before I go, I have something to say to Max Evans before I leave” Jeremy answered. “But don’t worry I don’t need you anymore, I don’t think you’ll be helpful anymore anyway with your change, some people take losing a lot better than other people huh”
“Yeah well I have 4 weeks to see them, then I graduate and it’s seeya later Roswell which means no more Max and Liz, my new life will be a lot better without them thank you” Tess answered she lost, had lost numerous times, not that she liked losing but Max and Liz both proved to be a pain in the ass to her, she couldn’t wait to leave Roswell.
“Glad to see you have your priorities sorted, I'm sure you know the way out Tess, it was nice knowing you” Jeremy yelled as he left the room.
So I'm going to have to deal with Jeremy one more time ebefre he makes no other apperance happy to know I won’t have to write him anymore, I have deveolped foul feeling towards him.
|posted on 31-Dec-2002 11:30:11 PM by roswelllover|
hope everyone had a great Christmas
sorry for not posting earlier but after coming home at 4 in the morning from a party and waking up at noon I've finally found the time to post!.
thanks for the Fb and bumps greatly appreciated.
Max sat on his bed, his history book in his lap and a yellow highlighter in his right hand. Alone in the empty house. He had managed to get through more than he would whole studying with Liz granted he was by himself which proved to tell him why.
Liz had left in the morning to study at Serena’s after Serena insisting she spend just as much time with her best friend as she spent with her boyfriend. Quoting exactly what Liz had told him earlier.
“Max honey one your friend’s come over” Diane called to Max. Max wondered who it could be, for Michael, Maria and Alex finals were important, for Michael if he failed, Maria vowed if he didn’t study he’d be single before graduation and Maria would be at Michael making sure he did study or at Serena’s with Liz, Alex because of his father’s pressure to become a lawyer. Serena was with Liz, which left Kyle, who’d be studying to keep up his 6.5 average.
Running down the stairs Max hadn't been prepared for the person who had been invited into his house as he reached to bottom of the stairs.
There in front of him sat the intimidating Jeremy Whites, his foe.
“Ill leave it to you boys, Is there anything you need” Diane asked the question directed to both of them.
“We’ll be fine Mom” Max answered his tone expressionless, tyring to contain his own anger.
After knowing his mom was safely out of the room he turned and glared at his unexpected and uninvited guest “what the hell are you doing here” Max spat out.
“Testy Maxwell very testy aren’t we, nice control you have there I gotta say thought you’d throw me out right in front of your mom wouldn’t want to disappoint your mom though huh” Jeremy retorted sarcastically standing up.
Max stood there while Jeremy waited for some sort of verbal anguish but nothing. Max had the urge to let Jeremy become friends with his wall, the events that occurred between him and Liz suppressed anguishing him more.
“Cat got your tongue” Jeremy said with a smirk.
“Actually I rather not waste my breath talking to you” Max answered.
“So life must be great huh, you have Liz back, your friends are all together, you have your sports what else could possibly be wrong” Jeremy said before continuing “But I for one have had the time of my life, first arriving at this school only to be shown around by a sexy goddess herself not only do I break up a happy couple she had refused to make it her fault, what’s priceless is the fact that you won’t get to know what’s it’s like to spend a night with a lust crazed willing goddess herself” Jeremy continued hinting at and pushing Max’s buttons the right buttons in order for him to pursue his course of being one on one with the wall, Jeremy sure wanted that.
“She gave herself willingly to me and you won’t ever now how that feels maybe all the girls in your life a great maybe I should try Isabel, mayb-” Jeremy was cut off his speech as Max’s fists collided with his jaw.
Gathering the collar of Jeremy‘s shirt, Max shoved him against the wall “Stay away from my sister, stay away from my friends, stay away from me and most of all stay away from Liz is that clear if I see you so much as looking at her you won’t be seeing daylight again. Are you some sick psycho who wants to get beaten up your asking for this and I'm not falling into that trap, now get out of my fucking house” Max said shoving him every time he spoke.
‘Maybe you should reconsider that Maxwell, I mean if it wasn’t for you Liz would sill be home with her parents, she wouldn’t be fighting with her mom. Did you know that Liz’s Mom liked me, she did she loved me, more than I can say for yourself. You’re not a threat Max Evans because if I didn’t whisk her away there are plenty of guys out there who will” Jeremy smirked.
“No, you couldn’t ‘whisk me away, and no will” Liz spoke from behind him as she walked inside. Her tone commanding. “Look Jeremy, get this unless you want to be beaten up, badly by the star football player I suggest you leave, now” Liz said.
Max having let go a long time ago. Jeremy headed towards the door not before not lashing another lame insult at Max “Needing a woman to do you’re work, I wish you a lot of luck Max Evans cuz you’re gonna need it”
“Max” Liz whispered gently she’d heard Jeremy blaming him for her, and her mother’s outfall. And knowing Max she knew he took a lot of guilt upon himself, and she knew that right abut now he’d be beating himself for not knowing that.
“Max. You know he’s wrong”
“Do I” Max whispered, Maybe Jeremy had been right, maybe he was to blame for Liz being mad at her mom.
“No, Max you didn’t run things, you made things for the better. Don’t you see Max I saw what really is my mom, it was because if what we had that made me see that she isn’t the type of mother a girl’s supposed to have in her life. Please Max please don’t start pulling away now” Liz pleaded as she wrapped her arms around his waist.
“It’s okay, I'm sorry you’re right, I wouldn’t have pulled away from you though. Liz, I couldn't make you go through that either” Max answered softly instinctively his arms going around Liz‘s waist, Liz’s plea haven gotten through to him.
Liz sighed in relief. “I’m glad” Liz smiled.
“What’ya doing home anyway” Max asked.
“Kyle came over, that was reason enough for me to come back” Liz chuckled.
“That answers it” Max answered smiling.
“Yeah, plus me and Serena bonded enough to last till Graduation.” Liz said.
“I'll have you all for myself then huh” Max said smirking.
Liz sighed sarcastically “Yeah I guess”
Happy New Year!
Another one or two parts before the story finishes, just giving a heads up warning .
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|posted on 20-Jan-2003 12:56:08 AM by roswelllover|
|I've been slacking in the Updating department haven't I. But I'll be updating soon. Soon is all I can promise since I'm having some trouble sitting down and writing the rest of the story I have half of it done. So don't fear it'll be out soon.|
Thanks for the bumps. Greatly appreciated.