|posted on 16-Apr-2002 9:45:25 PM by Angel eyes|
|title: The Antarian Queen|
disclaimer: I don't own Roswell etc.
author's note: third season never happen,feed back helps
Kivar: We need the real queen
Nicholas: but I thought Ava was the real queen?
Kivar: are you stupid!! If she was the real queen then why doesn't the king love her.
Nicholas: he doesn't remember his past life
Kivar: that wouldn't matter he would have a connection with her! I need the real queen!!
Nicholas: well when Zan was at the harvest he had a pettie bruntte with him. Anyone thought she was the queen but Zan said she wasn't because she's human and said the blond was the queen.
Kivar: the bruntte the queen
Nicholas: but how shes human?
kivar: unless they use a human host.
Nicholas: but why not put her with the rest of the royal brats?
Kivar: because Zan fell for the wrong girl, she was princess of Zeon but her father had already chosen a husband for her. So the two married secretly.
Nicholas:So when Max married Ava it wasn't a voided mariage because he was already married.
Nicholas:but why do you want the real queen?
Kivar: because shes powerful and she was going to be my wife. My father had showed me pictures of her. I felt like the luckest man and when the day of the wedding came she was gone.
Nicholas:so you loved her?
kivar: she was the first person I ever loved
Nicholas: but how if you never met her?
Kivar: from her picture, I was amaze by her beauty she was mine until I found out she had fallen in love with Zan. Then I wanted to hurt him like he had hurted me. So I was going to use Lonnie but I ended up falling in love with her.
Nicholas: so when shall we get the queen?
Kivar: torromow, whats her name?
Nicholas: Liz Parker
Kivar: let's see how Zan likes it when I take his love!
I hope you guys liked it! It's up to you guys if you want me to contuine so leave Feed Back Please!
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|posted on 17-Apr-2002 3:51:39 PM by Angel eyes|
|Thanks to Gagnes Girl, eva33, TD DreamerBehr and Pandas2001 for your feed back!|
Liz's room/ Liz is on the phone with Maria
Liz: Maria I know I push Max to tess but I didn't think their be boyfriend/girlfriend type thing.I just wanted them to be friends you know
Maria: I know babe, but you wanted him to follow his destiny
Liz: yeah but not this fast
Maria: maybe he's doing it to make you jeaulos and he is listing to you by following his destiny
Liz: I wanted him to follow it not act on it and I'm not jeaulos!
Maria: well he doesn't know that, I hate to tell you this by you are a little jeaulos
Liz: MARIA!Anyway I don't know if I can stand looking at them anymore.She aways kisses him when I around.
Maria:what a bitch! you would think she'll be happy with you giving her Max but nooo she had to throw it at your face.
Liz:I know, it's getting late I'll see you torromow okay
maria: torromow your going to forget about gerbil and don't let her get to you
Liz: okay bye
Liz got ready for bed, brush her teeth and went to sleep.Nicholas was waiting for her to fall on sleep.
Nicholas: she asleep make sure you leave the orb by her pillow Kivar want to make sure lover boy gets it.
skin: got it
Nicholas was on Lizs balcony he went in her room and grab her while she was sleeping.Liz try to scearm but Nicholas had knock her out.
Nicholas: hurry up leave the orb and lets go!
The skin left the orb right by her pilow just like Kivar had order.Nicholas put his hand up in the air and a portal open they went through it and close back up.
Maria: hey Mikey G have you seen Liz?
Micheal: no, do I look like her babysitter?
Maria: I'll prented I didn't hear that anyways we were suppose to go out
Isabel walks to them
Is:I need to go out! with Tess coming over lately it's been hell! I can't see how Max can stand her
Maria: well you can come out with me and Liz once I can find her
Is: sure it has to better then seeing Tess glue to my brother and hearing her annoying voice
Maria,Micheal and Is enter the CrashDown
Is: boy it's slow today
Maria:yeah I heard everyone trying out the new fast food place.Wait here I going to see if Liz is in her room
Maria gos to Liz room
Maria: Liz babe get up
Maria: come on open the door it's not like you to sleep in
Maria opens the door and is shock not to see Liz in bed.
Maria: MICHEAL ISABEL!Liz is missing!
Micheal and isabel run to the room
Maria: all I found was this
she hands the orb to Micheal
Micheal: we better get Max.
Tess: are you sure she didn't just put the orb their herself
Maria:how can she!!! and I thought you were a higher spieces.
Max: Stop it's not the time for this,Liz is missing and you two are fighting.
If looks could kill Tess would be dead. Max is looking at Tess
Max: if your aren't going to be here to help then get out! I have no time for your game!
Tess has a mad look on her face but keeps quit.
Micheal hands the orb to Max
Micheal: this is what Maria found by Lizs pillow.
Max holds the orb and it starts to glow and a male figure appears.
Kivar:Zan do you remember me? probably not.At the moment you guys are probably looking for someone, whats her name... oh yeah Liz Parker. I must say shes a beauty just like I remember her.I sure but now you know who I'm
Zan why do you have a connection to this human? Could it be you too have met before? Yes you have met, you'll see when the time comes what I'm talking about or maybe sooner I'm sure your not stupid! We'll be meeting soon real soon...
Thanks again for the feedback! part 2 up by torromow
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|posted on 18-Apr-2002 2:01:16 PM by Angel eyes|
|Thanks emmiejay,abbs007,JetBlack and Katmcken for the feed back! |
Max just let the orb fall out of his hands.The only person he ever loved was missing and she was with his enemy.Max got tears in his eyes,Maria walk up to Max and gave him a hug.
Maria:It's okay Max we're going to get Liz back
Max:It's not that I know we will but I could of been their
Maria:you couldn't have know
Micheal was just sitting on Maxs bed thinking about what Kivar had said.Then it just hit him
Micheal:I been thinking, Kivar said she was a beauty just like he remember then he said you guys have met before and that she was one of us
Is: but their were only four pods
Tess: Max aren't we going to go to the movies?
Max:Whats wrong with you? Do you think I want to go to the movies when Liz is missing
Tess:WELL I'M LEAVING!!
Tess was opening the door to leave and turn around to see if Max would come after her.But he was to busy talking to the group that he didn't hear what Tess said. Tess got so mad she left and slam the door behind her.
Max: did you hear something?
Micheal: no, must be the wind
Max: anyway why would Kivar want Liz?
Is: maybe he knows she's your weakness
Max:no he would of tooken her sooner
Micheal: maybe we should go to the pod chambers and look around
Max: yeah we should
Maria:Liz's parents are probably going to call to check on things.I'll stay at the crashdown. Tell me of you find anything.
Max gets his keys to the jeep and leave to teh pod chamber.
Max: did you guys find anything?
Max put his hand his pod
We don't have enough materials to make princess Aurora pod my queen.
My son made me promise to send Aurora
We can put her in a human host, It will be just like the pod but she won't came to her full powers unless her cells are awaken somehow,because her cells will turn like the humans.
GREAT! then my Zan won't be able to find her and this way we'll be able to put Ava and him together.We're send the orb and the book telling them they have to be together.
:End of Flash:
Max: I jsut had a flash
Micheal: what was it about?
Max: Liz is one of us.I need to try to get an other one
MAx started touching anything in the chamber then got an other flash.
We'll put her book and orb right under Avas pod. When she older she'll have the a feeling and come find it.
Well make sure she doesn't get a feeling and find it!
But my queen then she won't be able to find the book and orb we made for her.
It's better she doesn't remember my son. This way we'll be able to make him follow the destiny we have chosen for him.
:End of flash:
Max: Tess's pod
Max ran to Tess pod right under it was a secret spot he found the book and the orb.Max put the orb in his hands and it started to glow a figure a appeared it was .......
I'll post part 3 torromow, thank againfor the feedback!It's keeps me going
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|posted on 18-Apr-2002 8:33:17 PM by Angel eyes|
|Hi you guys, Thanks SweetLilDreamer,Wild Child Uk, nickeygurl13, Gagnes Girl, pandas2001 and TD DreamerBehr for you feed back! torromow I post part3. Right now I wirting part4 thanks again for the feed back!|
|posted on 19-Apr-2002 2:20:50 PM by Angel eyes|
|Part 3 |
IS: It's our mom
Aurora you are princess of Zeon you and my son were in love with each other
Max:I can't believe it
we were attacked by Kivar, Zan sended you to Zeon in hope Kivar wouldn't get you. It was no good kivars second hand Nicholas attacked your ship and kill you.Kivar met my son in the war room Zan wanted peace but kivar wouldn't have it.Nicholas appear holding your dead body, My was desvastated he coludn't go on with out you, you were his other half. KIvar ended up killing Zan and everyone I love we sended you to Earth to hope you will return and save us.
Max was crying, he new their was something special about Liz.Isabel felt bad for Max kivar had taken Liz just like he did before.
Is:are you going to be okay Max?
Max: yeah I just need Liz back I'm lost without her.
Micheal: we better get going
Max picked up the and open it, inside was a picture of Liz, on the next page was a picture of Liz pregant. Her book was written in english.He had guess it was like that cause she was put in a human host.He wish they would of did that for them.
Max: They did an offtopsy on Liz's body it turns out
Max voice grew into a whisper
Max: she was two weeks pregant at the time.
Isabel went and hug her brother it was getting harder for him.
Max: Is, we were going to have baby
Is: I know Max
Micheal couldn't say anything he felt bad for Max
Micheal: I sorry Maxwell
Max: It's okay we better go
Maria: Hi Mr.Parker yeah anything fine here, Liz oh she's real busy. Were pack tonight, okay I tell her for you okay bye .
Maria looked around the place was empty. She let everyone off earlyandclosed. Max Micheal and Iasbel walk in
Maria: did you guys anything
Micheal: yeah a book and a orb tell ing Liz about her past life
Max: I'm not feeling that well I going to walk home
Is: are you sure you want to walk?
Max walk out of the crashdown with a very clueless looking Maria.
Maria: Why is Max leaving we need to get Liz back and he's going home
Micheal: he needs some time.He he just found out that Nicholad killed Liz just to get to him and at the time she was two weeks pregant with his child.
Maria: wow,poor guy
Kivar: Why did you hit her!
Nicholas: I had to or she would of scearmed
Kivar:she starting to wake
Kivar looked very mad
kivar: she even calls for him in this life
Nicholas: did you think she'll call your she doesn't even know.
Kivar: Max is'nt here Liz
Liz: who are you?
Part 4 torromow
|posted on 23-Apr-2002 1:48:32 PM by Angel eyes|
| Thanks for the feed back! |
Sorry I haven't posted a new Part, The parts I saved on my disk got ease by my friend.=| So right now I'm wirting the new part. Once I check it and make sure theirs no mistakes I'll post the new part.
Thanks agian for the feed back!
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|posted on 29-Apr-2002 2:41:21 PM by Angel eyes|
|Sorry for taking long I jsut been busy,thanks to nickey for the feedback!|
Kivar: Me and Max aren't friends
Liz:then your he's enemy
Kivar:well I'm so glad you figure it out
Nicholas walks in Liz's room
Nicholas:why hello Liz
Nicholas:I'm so horronr you remember me
Liz;how can't I not
Kivar:now that everyone knows each other.I just wondering Liz Maxie boy boy doesn't know your the key to his past now does he
Liz:I'm not a key, much less a key to his past
Kivar:well see this right here, we're going to give you a shot.It's going to help you
Liz:help me with what
Kivar:help you remeber my dear Aurora
Liz:okay I know your not all their in your head
Kivar:Liz,Liz,Liz, your the key and I'm going to open the door to Max's past and once I give you the shot all your memorys will flooding back to you
Liz:well I don't want a shot
Nicholas:oh dont worry Liz your going to be fine I'm sure it will hurt for a little bit
Nicholas grabs Liz while Kivar holds her down
Liz:Nooo! get off of me
Nicholas:their, see that didn't hurt
kivar:now Liz in less then 15 minutes you'll be hit with visions.Their going to awaken a side of you that be waiting to show itself
Kivar:Nicholas go see how thing are doing on Earth
Nicholas:I'm on my way
Kivar:Your so beauitful
Kivar was about to kiss Liz when she moved her face
Liz:sorry I have a boyfriend already
Liz:glad you liked it
Kivar:whats one little kiss going to do to you?
Liz:from you probably kill me
Kivar:we're going to be husband and wife soon.Your going to have to kiss me
Liz:what makes you think I would want to marry someone like you...
Kivar grab Liz and kissed her.Liz pushes Kivar away and spits in his face.
Liz:WHAT ARE YOU DOING YOU ALMOST KILLED ME IF I HADN'T PUSH YOU ALWAY!
Kivar is mad like hell
Kivar:soon you'll be wanting me
He leaves the room
Liz is screaming sure I will
Nicholas:so how did it go
Kivar:not so good waht makes the little queenie thinks she can talk to me like that?
Nicholas:well it won't be to long now, she'll remeber everything and hate you more
15 minutes Later
Liz is screaming in pain from all the visions.
Her and Zan getting Married.The pain watching Zan get marry to Ava.Finding out she pregnant.Zan telling her she has to go back to Zeon so she'll be safer.Nicholas attacking her ship and Nichaols killing her.
Hope you guys liked it, new part tomorrow
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|posted on 30-Apr-2002 12:45:28 PM by Angel eyes|
Nicholas:well I see you remeber everything
Liz:get away from me
Nicholas:Aurora,Aurora or should I say Liz? I'm sorry I killed you like I did but it was for our own good Kivar needed you dead or Zan would of won
Kivar:Nicholas I need to talk to Liz
He leaves the room
Kivar:now Liz tomorrow were bringing Maxie boy up here here along with the other royal brats.He probably won't know it but it's a trap and you will see your belove die
Liz:he won't fall for it
Kivar:I think he will, he do anything to save my Liz
Max:I have to do something,I can't just sit here
Is:maybe Kivar will make a mistake
Micheal:I don't think he would make an mistake maybe Nicholas will
Max:you right! we should go to Lizs room and see if Nicholas left anything
Max:look in her bed under the covers and under the bed
Is:I'll look on her balcony
Micheal: I can't find anything
Max: can't looking
Kivar:did you put the portal opener where I told you
Nicholas: yes, on the balcony where I was standing
Kivar:good it shouldn't be to hard to find
Is: I found something
Max:what is it?
Micheal:I have no clue maybe if we....
A portal opend
Max:Nicholas must of drop it or something.Let's go in
Is:I don't know Max
Micheal:the sooner we leave and get Liz back the sooner we come back
Is:I can't believe I doing this!
They walked into the portal
Thanks to Pandas for the feedback! Part 6 tomorrow
|posted on 1-May-2002 4:11:21 PM by Angel eyes|
|Thanks Roswellostcause for the feedback!|
Nicholas:they found the potral opener,they should be getting here any minute now.
Kivar:good,make sure your their when Zan gets here
Nicholas:I was just wondering when should Lizs power come?
Kivar:well the shot should help a little but I need to mate with her so her cells will awake
Nicholas starts to laugh
Kivar: whats so funny?
Nicholas:I'm sorry but so you think shell let you touch her?She's hate you!
Kivar:don't you think I know that. Thats where Ava comes in
Kivar:Ava hate Aurora for how shes puts it "stealing for husband".
Nicholas:how will she get here?
Tess:She's already here
Kivar:Ava my dear lovely as always
Kiar:I'll explain later now make sure MAxs and the royal brats get here
Nicholas:I'm on my way
Is:Max were are we?
Max:I don't know Is
Micheal:I think we should of left Maria a note, she's going to kill me
Is:I really don't think you shold be worrying about MAria right now
Max:Is is right we need to find out where we are first
Nicholas:well I can tell you if you like
Nicholas:yes and your name is Max and Isabel and Micheal
Nicholas:talking to me like that won't get you closer to Liz
MAx: show me where shes is
Nicholas:follow me, oh by the way this is Antar
Micheal:It looks like Earth
Nicholas:yeah jsut with cleaner air
Kivar:what taking Nicholas so long?
Tess:I don't know, I been thinking those brats weren't going to tell they were leaving or going to bring me with them!
Liz:let me out!Max please stay away from here
Tess:Damn her!She's always calling for Max
Kivar:Ava its ok she wont be calling for Max for long
Max:how much longer?
Nicholas:a little while longer
Micheal:why are we listing to him for all we know it could be a trap
Max:as long as he gets me to Liz
Micheal:we should watch it for now
Kivar:I can't wait til I mate with Liz
Kivar: oh please like you never thought of doing it with Max
Tess kept qutie
Kivar: I thought so
Micheal:I can see the palace
MAx:keep a look out we don't want any surprise's.
Liz:what happing to me?
Liz's hands started to glow
Its has to be from the shot. My powers are returning.
Next Part tomorrow
|posted on 2-May-2002 1:05:13 PM by Angel eyes|
|WoW! I come back to all these wonderful FB! Thanks Brook,Kim56Emotion,pandas2001,nickeygurl13 and maia for the FB! |
Back in Kivars room
Tess:I know your going kill Micheal and Isabel but you can't kill Max
Kivar:yes I can
Tess:Kill MAx and I won't mind wrap Liz
Kivar:you B****, FINE! Max's lives
Max:Nicholas why are you helping us?
Nicholas:I have my reasonsSo you can watch Kivar take your Lizzie to bed
Micheal:It's a trap Max
Is:we have to do something
Max:throw him a enegryblast then we'll put our powers together hopefully that will be enough to kill him
Micheal fire a enegry blast,Nicholas went flying to the wall
They put their powers together , Nicholas started to scream and he finllay explode
Micheal:that took alot of my enegry
Max:now that were here at the palace we have to be extra careful, who knows what kivars trap is.
Is:do you think Kivar will find out soon about Nicholas?
MAx:I hope not
Inside the Palace
Kivar:whats keepin Nicholas so long? We can't wait for him tess you better start the mind wrap
Tess:Wait!what do you want me to male her see?
Kivar:Make Max appear have him tell her to do what I saythe sooner she listens the sooner I let her go
Tess:are you sure she'll fall for that?
Kivar:JUST do it!
Tess closes her eyes.Liz was sitting on the floor thinking
How did my powers come back so soon?On Earth they were taking longer,its from the shot and could it be too because I'm on Antar? I'm going to act as if I have no powers and when kivar comes in he won't know what hit him.
Liz looks up and Max comes runing in
FakeMax:Liz are you aright did he hurt you in anyway?
Liz:I'm alright,but how did you get past kivar?
FakeM:don't worry about it, I don't have musch time Micheal keeping a look out.Just do what Kivar says the sooner you listen the sooner he'll let you go.
Liz:why don't we leave right now then?
FakeM:NO!well what I mean is Kivar will be back any second now and I don't want him to catch us, hes powerful
Liz isn't dumb she new it wasn't Max she could feel.So she just played along
Liz;okay well you better go before he comes
FakeM: okay bye
Tess opens her eyes
Kivar:did it work?
Tess:yeah I think so
Kivar:you think so
Kivar:great, well I'm going in
Kivar walks into Lizs room
Kivar:Liz I been thinking since were going to get married.Why don't we just have our honey moon right now...
Last part tomorrowThanks again for the FeedBack!
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|posted on 2-May-2002 1:05:47 PM by Angel eyes|
|Oops! I double post|
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|posted on 3-May-2002 12:53:50 AM by Angel eyes|
|Thanks marteloise and nickeygurl13 for the feed back!Well here it is the Last part hope you enjoy. |
Liz:sure let's get startedyeah like I really want to do it with you
Kivar was about to kiss her ....
Liz:why don't we get a better room this one to small don't you think
They started to walk out when Liz blasts Kivar and sended him flying against the wall.
He fired his own own energy blasted.Liz dodgue it
Tess:Kivar whats going on?Oh hi Liz
Liz:TESS!I knew it
Tess:I guess you where going to find out anyway
Tess fire an enegry blast at Liz and sent her flying
Tess:I always wanted to do that
Liz gets back up just then Kivar and Tess fire at Liz.She put up a shield. Just then Max,Micheal and Isabel come runing in and boy where they surpised.
Kivar turns around but Max has him against the wall
Is:Tess we trusted you
Tess:sure you did, always becareful with what you see.
Micheal and Is had about enough of Tess, they combined they're powers and hit Tess she fell onto the floor.tess looked bad she had blood all over her.
Liz:Let me finish her, This is for Alex and this is for me
A bright green enegry ball went flying towards Tess her body hit the wall then fell to the floor,Tess was dead.
Max was hitting Kivar with his energy blast.Kivar looked bad.Kiver would fire he would either miss or Max put his shield up.Max though what Kivar could of or would of done to Liz it made his blood boil he fire at Kivar and Kivar fell to the floor.
Liz:it's finally over
Max:are you okay, he didn't touch you?
They started to walk away.When Kivar used the last of his energy and fired at Liz
Kivar:If I can't have no one can...
Max was fast and put a shield up.He then fire an energy ball and kivars body went silding on the floor.Kivar was finally dead. Max kissed Liz longing
Max:I been wanting to do that
ONE YEAR LATER
I now pronounce you husband and wife you may kiss the bride.
Max and Liz Kissed passionately and everyone cheered.Liz took her place as The Queen of Antar and Max took his place as King.
I hope you guys enjoyed reading my fic.I going to post a new one called I Will Always Love You so check it out.
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