posted on 19-Apr-2002 9:23:23 PM by forever_A_dreamer
Title: A VACATION TO REMEMBER
categlory: m/l
rating: pg-13 - R maybe more
disclaimer: I dont own anything even though I wish I did

This is my first fic... please be nice. feedback woud be nice. Enjoy and tell me what u think. Its gets much better after the first parts so just continue thanx.

Part 1.

Liz Parker and her best friend Maria Deluca had decided to go on a vacation to a hotel in upstate New York. They decided to go to the hotel Villa Roma right after graduation. They wanted to get away from Roswell for a couple of weeks.

"I can't believe are parens are actuall letting us go on vacation alone. This is so amazing!," said an excited Maria Deluca as they headed to the airport.

"I know my parens actually thougt it was a good idea", said Liz. I hope we meet some hot guys thought liz,

It took a half an hour to drive to the airport in Roswell. Maria and Liz took their bags from the cab an carried them inside the airport and checked on their plane. They foundout that it ws on tim and tey were so excited. Maria and Liz were sitting on the chairs located near theit gate,when they heard

"Flight 152, to New York is now boarding." over the loudspeaker.

Maria got up as fast as she could and gave the lady her ticket. Liz just laughed at her friend as she followed the plane. As they started to board they heard " Have a nice flight."

"Oh My God Liz. I am soo excited I cant wait till we land," said Maria as she sat in her seat right next to Liz.

"I know Maria I hope their are some hot guys there," replied Liz.

"I know I know what you mean."

Part 2

Liz and Maria slept the whole trip to New York.

"We are going to be landing in 5 minutes," said the captin waking Liz from her slumber.

"Get ready Maria. We are going to be landing soon," said Liz to Maria tryingn to wae her up.

"Just 5 more minutes mom. I dont wanna go to school," replied a half asleep. Liz just laughed at her.

"Maria remember our vacation, New York, boys."

Maria woke up immediatley after she heard Liz. The plane landed five minutes just like the captain said. Liz and Maria got off the plane as fast as they could and got their bags from the baggage claim. The since they didn't have a car they went to the rent a car section of the airport to rent a car. They rented a blue BMW.

"Maria Im going to drive right now. I think you are a little to excited." said Liz to maria.

"Yeah I think I am too. That's agood idea," replied Maria.

Liz just laughed at her and started to drive to the resort. It took about a half an hour to get there which wasn't to bad excet Maria was all fidgety and kept asking are we ther yet.

When they exited he car at the resort they found out it warmer they thought it would be. They decided to go tothe lobb and check in and get their keys. Then they eould head to their room to change and unpack.

They walked into the lobby and sawthe line to check in. Maria walkd right up to it wit Liz following. Liz then walked into someone. He was very tall, with dark hair and the mst woderful soulfl eye she every seen. She couldn' stop staring at him he was so hot and cute.

"I'm sorry, I'm soo sorry. I didn't mean," started Liz before she was interupted by the mysterious guy.

"That's ok, I'm Max. Max Evans, " replied the mystery man. "and you are?"

"Liz. Liz Parker."


Part 3

“And this is my friend Maria Deluca,” Liz said finishing her introductions

“It’s nice to meet you Max. So do you have any friends with you on vacation?,” asked
Maria. I hope he does thought Maria.

“Actually I do,” said Max looking around the lobby. he pointed to a guy sitting on the
couch reading a sports magazine and said, “There he is over there. Michael can you come
over here a second I want you to meet some people.”

Michael walked over to them slowly. When Maria looked at him she immediately
thought, what is up with his hair. But besides the hair she thought he was pretty hot.
Maybe her and Liz might have a little fun this vacation she thought also.

When Michael finally got over to Max, Maria, and Liz he said, “Hi” not looking at the
people he was talking to.

“Michael this Liz Parker and Maria Deluca,” said Max.

Michael was dreading this vacation from the beginning. He never wanted to come but
Max forced him to because he said that they would have a fun, so he went. And now that
he was here he didn’t think that this vacation was going to be so bad especially when he
looked up to see who Max was referring too. When Michael looked up his eyes went right
passed Liz and on to Maria. He thought that she was hot with her long blonde hair and
green eyes. He thought that she looked like a pixie.

“Hi,” Michael said again this time looking straight at Maria.

Liz and Maria then replied hi in return.

Max and Michael had decided to wait for Maria and Liz to go and check into their room.
If they were lucky they might have a room near there’s.

Maria and Liz were standing in the line for in order to check into the room when Maria
said,”Liz we are going to have so much fun this vacation. You with Max and me with
Michael. Even though Michael seems a little closed off but I will change that.”

“I know what you mean Maria but I feel like such an idiot. I can’t believe I couldn’t even
talk to Max in the beginning. I was so embarrassed.”

“Don’t worry hunny, I can tell he loves you already.”

While Mara and Liz were on line and Max couldn’t help but stare at Liz. She had the
most wonderful long dark hair. It looked so soft. He just wanted to run his fingers through
it and her eyes were so beautiful. He could see what she was feeling in her eyes. Her skin
also looked so soft. He wanted to touch her skin just like her hair. I think I am in love
thought Max to himself.

Max was brought out of thoughts when Liz came over to Michael and him.

“Um Max we have room 125. How bout you guys?,” asked Liz to Max.

“Oh we have room 124,” said Max. I can’t believe she is going to be so close to me for
two weeks. Oh God thought Max, How will I survive.

Meanwhile Liz was thinking almost the same thing. Oh my god he is going to be in the
next room as me for two weeks. I can’t believe this. I must be the luckiest girl in the
world. Wait till Maria finds out she will freak.

Liz walked over to Maria and told her about the rooms.

“This is so cool guys. We get to be in the rooms next to each other for two weeks. This is
so amazing,” said Maria to Max and Michael. “How about we go to our rooms and
unpack and then we can go down to the pool together. It’s really hot in here.”

“Yeah thats a good idea,” said Max.” We’ll see you later guys. Bye Maria.... Liz.” God
I’ll miss her even though ill probably only be gone for a half an hour thought Max. What
have I got myself into.

“Yeah, bye,” said Michael rudely.

Maria and Liz said bye to both of them both wishing they didn’t have to leave each other.


Part 4
Maria and Liz rushed around the room trying to unpack as quickly as they could. Liz was so nervous. She really liked Max. He had these incredible eyes and she felt as if she could see into his soul.

"Oh My God!! MAria!!,"said Liz "we have to hurry up"

"I know Liz. This trip is going to be so much fun."

"Maria Im going to get changed,ok?"

"Ok Hunny. Hurry up. I need to get changed too."

After Maria and liz got dressed upin their bathing suits with their shorts and tank tops on over them Max and Michael knocked on the door. Liz rushed to the to find Max standing their with the most beautiful smile on his face. He is so handsome she thought.

"Hi Liz are you guys ready," asked Max.

Liz didnt hear him she just kept staring a him day dreaming. God I would love to kiss those lips and wrap my arms around him, Liz started to think when Max started to yell "Liz!"

"Oh my god. I am sorry Max, what did u say?"

"I asked if you were ready?" Max said laughing.

"Yeah were ready" said Maria coming out of the bathroom.

They all started to walk down to the pool together. Max and Liz walked next to each other and Michael and Maria behind them.

When they got down to the pool Michael and MAria took off their shorts and shirts and jumped in the pool. Meanwhile Liz decided to lay down on the chair and rest for a while.

"Hey Liz aren't you going to go in the pool yet?," asked Max

"No not yet I think I am just going to sit here for a little while and try to get a tan or something."

"Well do you mind if I stay with asked Max." God your beautiful he thought.

"No Max I would love if you stayed".

Max took off his shirt and layed down. Wow! look at his body Liz thought. Its so perfect. God I think I am going to faint.

"Liz are you okay" asked Max

"Yeah I am fine just a little hot."

Liz then took off her tank top and shorts. This time it was max's turn to stare. She is even more beautiful then I thought he thought. He saw her struggling trying to put on the sun tan lotion on her back so he asked " can I help you Liz?"

"Yeah I would really appreciate it. Thank you so much."

Liz layed down on her stomache so Max could put it on her back. He put some sun tan lotion on his hands and started to rub it on her back. He massaged her back with the lotion as he was moving from her sholders to right above the bottom of her bathing suit. Liz started to get aroused. Oh that feels so good she thought. Liz the moaned out loud and Max heard her. Oh God did she just moan or did I imagine it he thought. I prob just imagined it.

When he stopped Liz moaned again and he couldn't take it. When she got up she started to say thank you he kissed her passionaltly on the lips, but before they could pull away Liz pulled him back and rubbed her toungue agaisnt his lips asking him to open up. He did but he slipped his tongue in her mouth instead. He massgaed her toungue causing her to moan in the back of her throat. That caused him to get even more turned on but he pulled away because they were getting to far..

"Liz I am sor.... ," Max started but she interrupted him.

No Max I wanted it as much." Liz said."Max I really like you and that kiss was amazing." No it was more like every cell came to life and wanted to reach out and touch his she thought. I am never going to make it through this vacation.

"I know Liz I never felt like this before. I really like you too. I hope we can get to get each other better during this vacation." said Max. I love you he thought.

"Liz I am so happy for you. Now all I have to do is figure out a way to get through to Michael. He is pretty hot you know." said Maria. And he has a hot ass she thought to herself.

"Yeah I guess" she said while staring at Max.

"Oh my god Liz I have a great idea I heard their was a talent show tonight. I think we should go in it and sing or something it would be soo much fun."

"I dont know Maria. I dont think I am really into that stuff you know."

"Dont worry Liz you will be great. NOw all we have to do is find a song." said Maria. "We can also suprise the guys"

"Yeah it does should like a good idea but we better pick a good song because I dont want to make a foul out of myself"

"Don't worry chica I will figure everything out and make everything perfect.

Maria and Liz went over to the guys and told them they would be right back. The girls ran to the lobby where the sign in for the talent show was and signed in. They then ran back to pool to the guys and jumped in the pool splashing Michael and Max. The girls laughed.
.
After about a half an hour in the pools the guys and the girls decided to go back to their rooms and get ready for dinner. They decided that they would go and sit next to each other.

In the girls room Maria and Liz were trying to think of a song they could sing and dance to to the guys.

"Um how about "I Will Love You" by Ginny Owens." suggested Liz.

"No thats too slow Liz" said MAria. "How about "Come on Over"."

"No I dont really like that song. Oh I know how about "Walk on Water" by Milk INc. Its fast and I think its perfect.

"Yeah I like it Liz. We found the song Liz." said Maria.

They then started to sing it around the room practicing.

"There was a time when nothing would last.
There was a time I held onto the past.
I walk on water just to be with you.
Walk on water just to be you.
Split the oceans cross the seas.
walk on water if you believe......"


The talent show is next. Yeah[ "Liz I am so happy for you. Now all I have to do is figure out a way to get through to Michael. He is pretty hot you know." said Maria. And he has a hot ass she thought to herself.

"Yeah I guess" she said while staring at Max.

"Oh my god Liz I have a great idea I heard their was a talent show tonight. I think we should go in it and sing or something it would be soo much fun."

"I dont know Maria. I dont think I am really into that stuff you know."

"Dont worry Liz you will be great. NOw all we have to do is find a song." said Maria. "We can also suprise the guys"

"Yeah it does should like a good idea but we better pick a good song because I dont want to make a foul out of myself"

"Don't worry chica I will figure everything out and make everything perfect.

Maria and Liz went over to the guys and told them they would be right back. The girls ran to the lobby where the sign in for the talent show was and signed in. They then ran back to pool to the guys and jumped in the pool splashing Michael and Max. The girls laughed.
.
After about a half an hour in the pools the guys and the girls decided to go back to their rooms and get ready for dinner. They decided that they would go and sit next to each other.

In the girls room Maria and Liz were trying to think of a song they could sing and dance to to the guys.

"Um how about "I Will Love You" by Ginny Owens." suggested Liz.

"No thats too slow Liz" said MAria. "How about "Come on Over"."

"No I dont really like that song. Oh I know how about "Walk on Water" by Milk INc. Its fast and I think its perfect.

"Yeah I like it Liz. We found the song Liz." said Maria.

They then started to sing it around the room practicing.

"There was a time when nothing would last.
There was a time I held onto the past.
I walk on water just to be with you.
Walk on water just to be you.
Split the oceans cross the seas.
walk on water if you believe......"


The talent show is next. Yeah





"Romeo and Juliet came from two different worlds. Max and I have them beat. We come from two different planets. So why do I feel like hes more human then anyone I've ever met."-Liz (Promo)

[ edited 6 time(s), last at 5-Jun-2002 9:09:23 PM ]
posted on 4-Jun-2002 8:53:44 PM by forever_A_dreamer
I wanna thank everyone who started to read this early on and just let u know I decided to continue it and ask people to read it now.
posted on 5-Jun-2002 6:38:54 PM by forever_A_dreamer
ur welcome and thanx for leaving feedback.. I will write a new part soon

quote:
Romeo and Juliet come from two different worlds. Max and I have them beat. We come from two different planets. So why do Ifeel like he's more human then anyone I've ever met?"- Liz (Promo)