posted on 14-May-2002 9:33:19 AM by Care_Behr
AStudentWillingtoLearn-vi

Thank you to Destinee for the fantastic banner!


TITLE: A student willing to learn
AUTHOR: Me
RATING: R - NC-17
SUMMARY: This is a answer to ERASER ROOM'S 'INSTRUCTING MAX' CHALLENGE... You
can find this challenhe on the fanfic discussion board.... But basically, Max is a high school geek, who suddenly becomes popular. To guard his secret (that he is sexually unexperienced), he seeks help from the city prostitute, for some valuable lessons in love....
DEDICATION: I would like to dedicate this fic to my new found friend Michaela (m14)
and also Keri Wooden, my friend from school. And ofcourse everyone from Roswell that has provided me so much inspiration over the years and brightened up my life. Thnk you and enjoy.
DISCLAIMER: I own nothing but my imagination, although you can bet that if I did own Roswell it definately would not be cancelled. But I don't so don't sue. Deal?

[ edited 8 time(s), last at 18-Aug-2002 2:34:49 PM ]
posted on 14-May-2002 9:45:23 AM by Care_Behr
A student willing to learn

Prologue


Max Evans was your typical high school geek. Good grades, always seen beneath a tree with a book.


His body was wiriry and the focus of his face was his large, black rimmed, squared glasses.


He had no friends except for a guy called Michael Guerin who was also a loner.


Max and Michael were always together, except lunchtimes, when Max was beneath his tree and Michael was in the artroom
working on a piece of surrealism.



Max was a funny guy though, except people laughed at him, not with him.


He actually had a girlfriend in Freshman year, everything was going fine until one day at lunch.


Pam Troy called Max a gay freak, Max slammed his hands down and flicked a spoonful of Strawberry yogurt allover Susie, His girlfriend.


So that was the end of that, and Max never dated again.


Then there was Isabel, Max's sister. To
put it nicely, she hated Max.


She was the most popular girl in school and he was a social outcast.


To her, he was a freak.


No-one wanted to be seen with Max, Atleast, not until that day...


tbc???

ERASER ROOM/ WHAT DO YA THINK??? IS IT WHAT YOU PICTURED IT???

Please leave feedback, I'd really appreaciate it.

Lot's of love.
Amie.
xxxXXXxxx
*bounce*
posted on 14-May-2002 9:50:15 AM by Care_Behr
what do you mean? 'whoops never mind.' Is it crap? should I not bother? Please answer ....
posted on 21-May-2002 4:55:30 AM by Care_Behr
Ok guys first can I say.... WOW And THANK YOU... I am so flattered that you
all like this... I thought it was S**T!!!

Anyway, I've been out of town for the past four days that's why I haven't updated everything... 'M14' I will be updating all my fics very soon. Thank you for all the bumps and encouraging feedback....

I luv ya all.
Amie.
xxxXXXxxx
*big*
posted on 27-May-2002 3:49:53 AM by Care_Behr
Ok. I promise you all a new part TONIGHT! I have a serious case of writers block at the mo. but I'll give ya a part anyway. Thanx for all the great feedback and I'm sorry I'm letting people down *sad*

Lot's of love.
Amie
posted on 27-May-2002 2:03:36 PM by Care_Behr
Ok, you guys are gonna HATE me... I only have time to post a part to ONE of
my stories, now because I still need to
do sme work on his part, I'm gonna post
it tommorrow... I know I know. I promised tonight. I'M SORRY!!! But if you are interested than I'm gonna post a NEW fic, a Roswell musical. It's based on Rent, the musical, and all thesongs are to the tunes of the Rent songs.... It's called 'Spent' and I'm about to post it. So check it out and once again I'm sorry for any disappointed.


Lot's of love.
Amie.
posted on 3-Jun-2002 1:24:36 PM by Care_Behr
Firstly can I say I'm soooooo sorry this took so long, secondly I am OVERWELMED How much feedback I got fromone little prologue.THANK YOU!!! Anyway, on with the show....


PART 1
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Max sat perplexed, eyeing the note infront of him.


Who was it from?


Hope raised itself as he traced the small hearts printed at the top of the page.


He smiled as he once again read over the note.


Max.


I can't put into words how I feel about
you, so I want to show you in person.


Meet me on the football field in 10 minutes.


Come alone.


Until then my love.


Love, ?



As he read the last sentence, Max realised he was late.


He grabbed the note, stuffing it in his
pants and jogged off towards the field.


When he reached the grass, he slowed down and started to feel self concsious
when he saw all the jocks and cheerleaders.


He cautiously stepped forward and his eyes were immediately covered.


He was pushed to the ground and straddled.


He felt lips come crushing down on his and a hand brushing his groin.


Cheers could be heard and when he opened his eyes he gasped.


"Michaela?" He asked.


"I thought your popularity needed a boost..... Bye Max". She got up and skipped away.


"Max wanna hang out tonight?" Kyle Valenti, Star quaterback asked.


"Sure" Max replied, expecting a joke.


"Cool, see ya at Crashdown at eight?"


"Ok".


And with that Kyle slapped him on th back and left.

"What just happened?" Max wondered, in a daze.



tbc???

What did ya'll think?

Once again sorry for the long timeyou had to wait.

NO FEEDBACK, NO STORY!!!!


Lot's of love
Amie
xxxXXXxxx
posted on 4-Jun-2002 4:23:34 PM by Care_Behr
Ok, guys I was wondering if ya'll want a Liz POV next??? Please leave your answers in your feedback!!!! Thanx.

Lot's of love.
Amie.
posted on 5-Jun-2002 5:10:01 PM by Care_Behr
Awwwwww man,,,, was it really that bad??? I suck!!! I'm sorry
posted on 17-Jul-2002 6:44:24 AM by Care_Behr
Look, I know I'm a huge disappointment with my no shows here... but I do try... I was stupid enough to take on like 12 stories t once so I have to live with the consequences... NEW PART TODAY I promise!!!

Thanx for the pic Lana, it means alot to me... and there shall be the entrance of a NEW character today!!! hmmmn who could that be?
posted on 17-Jul-2002 1:06:44 PM by Care_Behr
Ok Ok, now before you all kill me with your cyber bricks and what not. Here me out... I KNOW I promised a new part TODAY...but I might not be able to... I
know I know... I'm sorry!!! I'LL TRY!!!But if it's not out today, it will be out tomorrow!!! God I'm soooo sorry!! I am such an asshole!!!
posted on 17-Jul-2002 6:51:36 PM by Care_Behr
NO NO NO!!!! MICHIE THATS EXACTLY I NEED... PRESSURE!!!! PRESSURE ME!!! EVERYONE BMAIL ME SCREAMING... MAKE ME GET MY LAZY REAR IN GEAR!!!! MICHIE YOU ARE AN AWESOME STALKER!!! THANK YOU FOR BELIEVING IN ME SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!
posted on 17-Jul-2002 6:52:04 PM by Care_Behr
NO NO NO!!!! MICHIE THATS EXACTLY I NEED... PRESSURE!!!! PRESSURE ME!!! EVERYONE BMAIL ME SCREAMING... MAKE ME GET MY LAZY REAR IN GEAR!!!! MICHIE YOU ARE AN AWESOME STALKER!!! THANK YOU FOR BELIEVING IN ME SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!
posted on 17-Jul-2002 6:52:09 PM by Care_Behr
NO NO NO!!!! MICHIE THATS EXACTLY I NEED... PRESSURE!!!! PRESSURE ME!!! EVERYONE BMAIL ME SCREAMING... MAKE ME GET MY LAZY REAR IN GEAR!!!! MICHIE YOU ARE AN AWESOME STALKER!!! THANK YOU FOR BELIEVING IN ME SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!
posted on 19-Jul-2002 5:16:01 PM by Care_Behr
PART 2!!!

Sorry this part sucks!!!

---------

MAX'S POV

I see the Crashdown's distinct lights and approach warily.

As I walk in I cringe at how full it is.

Kyle says hi then points to the back room door.

Apparantly there's someone back there I'm supposed to meet.

I push past the herd of people who are sitting eating their greasy food or dancing to the crappy pop music.

I was always a more alternative person.

I open the door and see a note on the table.

"Outside" It states.

I go out into the alley and immediately
see a motorcycle.

Fog surrounds me as I walk to it.

I then see a figure, clad in leather climb off the bike.

They walk towards me and start to remove their helmet.

"Lana, hi" I say confused.

The figure turns out to be the foreign exchange student from England that has just started at West Roswell high.

"Hey" She replies.

Her hand automatically reaches to caress my face and I tense up.

"I just wanna try something". She leans in and sweetly but firmly places her lips on mine.

I try to kiss her back but my tight muscles stop me.

She pulls away and gives me a disappointed smile.

"Just as I was told".

"What?"I ask.

"They said that you were lousy and it was true". she blurts.

"If you just wanted to insult me, ten you...."

"Max, I like you" she breathes. "I really like you.... and that's why I'm giving you this".

She passes me a small piece of paper. On it are some simple words.

'Liz Parker. Citrus Avenue'.

"What's this?" I asked.

"She can help you".

Before I can retailiate, she's on her bike and gone.

************************

I look around the street until my gaze lands on a young woman leaning into a car talking to someone.

I walk up to her and tap her shoulder.

She spins around and I'm amazed by her beauty.

That is..... until she speaks.

"What do you want Dumb Fuck?"


tbc???

NO FEEDBACK NO STORY!!!

PRESSURE ME!!!!

Lot's of love.
Amie.
xxXXxx

posted on 25-Jul-2002 5:50:52 AM by Care_Behr
aaaawwwww michie, isn't she just the sweetest? *looks at Lana, and blushes*
posted on 30-Jul-2002 9:09:38 AM by Care_Behr
Check out the fantastic banner Destinee
made for me, on page one!!! THANK YOU!!!
posted on 7-Aug-2002 5:05:40 PM by Care_Behr
quote:
sweetygurl originally wrote:
I have to admit I like the banner more than the story but I do like the story.



ummmmm.... thanks? Is that a compliment? I'm a little confused?

New part soon... I seriously hadn't realised it had been 3 weeks!!! I aplogise for the delay!!!
posted on 7-Aug-2002 5:14:29 PM by Care_Behr
Ok, Moonlily and Michie... for your incessant pestering I will update in the next few days... lol... hmmmmn If that wasn't a compliment I'm alittle hurt...
posted on 7-Aug-2002 5:19:31 PM by Care_Behr
awwwww thanx Michie...
posted on 7-Aug-2002 6:22:02 PM by Care_Behr
*sob* *sad*
posted on 18-Aug-2002 7:47:22 AM by Care_Behr
PART 3
--------

Liz's POV

I try to hide the awestruck look that decides to plaster itself on my face, I can't help it, this is the most gorgeous man I hav ever layed eyes on.

Snap out of it Liz, God, why do I get my hopes up?

"What do you want dumb fuck?"

He winces at my words and I almost feel sorry for him. Almost.

He still stands there, mouth slightly agape.

What is his problem?

"Well?" I ask.

I try to put an irritated glare on my features.

I've known for a long time now, never to trust men, ever since daddy.... and Sean... But we won't go down that path.

Men only want one thing, I've always been told. So why not stop beating around the bush and give it to them?

"Go fuck a boy, get some money and grow up!" Daddy used to shout at me. God, I was 12 years old.

My train of thought is interrupted by his heavenly voice.

Heavenly? awww shit!

"I uh... Are you Liz Parker?"

Well duh sonny Jim, I'm the only fucking whore in this town.

"Yeah". I state.

He sighs and I want to kick him.

"I need your help".

Oh you don't say.

"With what?" I say, as I feign curiousity.

"I uh... want you to teach me... how to
um... do... stuff".

I almost laugh at his stupidity,

"Well little boy, did your momma teach you to talk like that?"

More pained looks cross his masculine features.

"No.. look ok.... I'm a virgin and I've
never been kissed.... well not properly, she said I couldn't kiss and sent me to you".

I pat his back and stifle a laugh.

"There there, that wasn't too hard was it? Well.... it's gonna cost you...."

"Don't worry. My parents are loaded".

Screw you asshole.

"Fine, I take it you go to school, so at, lets say 5pm tomorrow come to this apartment".

I hand him a piece of paper with my address on it.

"Ok. see you tomorrow". He waves enthusastically as he leaves.

"Whatever".





tbc???

Sorry for the delay and I hope that part makes up for my absence.

NO FEEDBACK, NO STORY!!!

Lot's of love,
Amie.

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posted on 18-Aug-2002 7:34:07 PM by Care_Behr
hmmmmmmn no-one?