posted on 16-May-2002 11:08:59 AM by Maria_ang21
Author: Maria_ang21
Category: Everybody.
Rating: R (for some strong language)
Summary: Takes place after "Who Died And Made You King." When a
mysterious girl comes to Roswell, things and people start to change
and nobody knows why until Liz gets into a confrontation with this new
girl. They later find out that not everything is what it seems.
Disclaimer: I am in no way affiliated with the writers, directors,
cast and crew of Roswell. Although I wouldn't mind being affiliated
with the cast especially Jason Behr and Brendan Fehr. I don't own the
show or any of the characters. I do, however, want to share this
fanfic with all the Roswellians out there. Roswell will always be my
favorite show no matter what other shows come along. I hope you like
this story. I'm new at this so bare with me.


A teenage girl and an older woman having a conversation on a bus.

Older woman: So where are you headed?
Teenage girl: Roswell. How about you?
Woman: Well I'm headed to see my family in Albuquerque. Why did you
leave your home?
Girl: I just wanted to forget.
Woman: Forget... a boy?
Girl: Yeah I guess you could say that.
Woman: So why Roswell?
Girl: Excuse me?
Woman: Well you could've gone to some place exotic. Why did you
choose Roswell?
Girl: Well... (turns and looks out the window) I have a feeling
Roswell is going to show me a whole new world.
Woman: You're right.

The girl turns around slowly. The woman was no longer human.

Girl: Oh my god!

The woman attacks the girl.

The girl wakes up frightened.

Man: Are you alright?
Girl: (breathing heavily) Yeah I guess I just had a nightmare. (turns
and looks out the window again).

Max and Michael at their apartment.
Max: How do you feel?
Michael: Good.
Max: You know, I'm sorry if I hurt you when I took the royal crest
back.
Michael: Hey you did what you had to do Maxwell. You're the king and
I'm not. It's as simple as that.
Max: Michael...
Michael: Max, there's a reason I've been avoiding this conversation.
Max: Why?
Michael: Can we just drop it?
Max: Okay, fine. Come on let's go.
Michael: Go where?
Max: To the Crashdown.

They get in Max's car and drive away.

The bus stops. The teenage girl gets out and the bus leaves. The girl
looks around. "So this is Roswell, I wonder what it has in store for
me. I just hope the same thing doesn't happen to me like in Arizona."
All of a sudden the girl gets dizzy. "Whoa, where did that come from?"

At the same time in the Crashdown Cafe. Liz and Maria are getting the
plates, silverware and glasses ready for today's work.

Maria: So what are you doing tonight?
Liz: (picks up a glass and cleans the counter) Well I don't... (drops
the glass and it shatters on the floor).

Liz looks like she's in some sort of hypnotic state for a few seconds.

Maria: Liz what's wrong? Liz?
Liz: (breathing heavily). Someone's here...
Maria: Who's here?
Liz: I need some air. (goes into the back room and goes out the back
doors).

Max and Michael walk in and see the glass on the floor.
Michael: What happened?
Maria: Liz was talking to me, then she stopped and dropped the glass.
But then she said that someone was here.
Max: Where is she?
Maria: She went out the back to get some air.

Max goes out the back to see if Liz is okay. He sees her and puts his
hand on her shoulder. Liz turns around and pushes him away.

Liz: (looking relieved) Max.
Max: Liz what's wrong?
Liz: I'm not sure, I was fine one minute and then the next I was
feeling like something or someone just arrived in Roswell and it's
going to change all of our lives.
Max: Are you sure? What exactly happened?
Liz: I was talking to Maria because she asked what I was doing
tonight. All of a sudden I got this feeling that our lives are going
to change drastically. That's when I dropped the glass. Then I felt
that I couldn't breathe so I came out here to get some air.
Max: Was it something alien?
Liz: I don't know.
Max: Why did you say that someone was here?
Liz: I don't remember saying that.
Max: Maria told us you did.
Liz: I have to go clean up the glass before my dad comes back.

Liz enters the Crashdown with Max trailing behind her.

Maria: Are you okay?
Liz: Yeah.
Maria: What happened?
Liz:I don't want to talk about it. If my dad asks tell him I wasn't
feeling good and I went to lay down.
Maria: (looking worried) Are you sure you're okay?
Liz: Yeah, I just have a headache. I'll be down later.

Liz walks upstairs and goes to her room. Maria, Max and Michael sit
in a booth.

Maria: Max what did she tell you?
Max: She said that she got this feeling that someone or something
just came to Roswell and it will drastically change all of our lives.
Michael: Alien?
Max: She doesn't know.
Maria: Now I know why she had that worried look on her face.
Max: She also said that she doesn't remember saying "someone's here."

At that moment the doors of the Crashdown Cafe open. They all look
back and see...

To be continued...

Sorry about that but I want to keep you in suspense.
Well I need some feedback. Tell me what you think of this story. Be
honest. If you don't like it tell me I won't break, I promise. I just
want to have fun with this. So far I've written more than this but I
want to keep you coming back for more so I won't write it all at
once. I have written almost 20 pages front and back. That's the most
I've ever written. I didn't know I had it in me. I think I found a
new hobby.

Maria A. Gaspar

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posted on 16-May-2002 11:15:15 AM by Maria_ang21
Author: Maria_ang21
Category: Everybody.
Rating: R (for some strong language)
Summary: Takes place after "Who Died And Made You King." When a
mysterious girl comes to Roswell, things and people start to change
and nobody knows why until Liz gets into a confrontation with this new
girl. They later find out that not everything is what it seems.
Disclaimer: I am in no way affiliated with the writers, directors,
cast and crew of Roswell. Although I wouldn't mind being affiliated
with the cast especially Jason Behr and Brendan Fehr. I don't own the
show or any of the characters. I do, however, want to share this
fanfic with all the Roswellians out there. Roswell will always be my
favorite show no matter what other shows come along. I hope you like
this story.

Fanfic: The Truth Part Two

At that moment the doors of the Crashdown Cafe open. They all look
back and see...

Kyle standing at the door of the cafe.

Kyle: What's up guys?
Max: We don't know yet.
Kyle: Why what happened?
Max: Liz had this weird feeling that something's going to happen that
will change our lives.
Kyle: You know about five minutes ago I felt like I was going to
fall. I got really dizzy, I honestly thought I was going to pass out.
Maria: That's when it happened. Why didn't I feel anything?
Max: (looking serious) Because you weren't healed by an alien.
Michael: So you think this is an alien thing?
Max: Yeah. We have to be real careful from now on. We don't know
whether this alien is with us or against us. We don't even know who
this alien is.
Michael: We have to tell Isabel.
Max: You're right. I'm going to check on Liz first.

Max goes upstairs. He knock on the door but there is no answer. He
gets worried and opens the door. Liz is asleep on her bed. He watches
her for a moment thinking about how much he loves her. Max closes the
door and goes back downstairs. Maria gets up from her seat.

Kyle and Maria: How is she?
Max: She's asleep. Come on Michael we have to go tell Isabel. Maria
if something else happens call me on my cell phone.
Maria: Okay.

Michael and Max walk toward the door.

Maria: Hey!

Michael and Max turn around. Maria walks toward them.

Maria: Be careful.
Michael: We will.

They both leave the Crashdown and Maria walks to the booth and sits
down next to Kyle who was sitting by himself.

Kyle: Maria are you okay?
Maria: I don't know, I'm worried about Liz (she pauses for a moment)
and Michael. What if Liz is right, what if someone from their home
planet has come to kill them?
Kyle: Relax Maria. I'm sure everything is going to be okay.

Deep down Kyle knew something was wrong. He could also feel it. He
himself became worried about his friends.

At Isabel's apartment. Isabel is cleaning her house.

Jesse: Isabel I have to go to the office. I have to get started on the
Anderson case.
Isabel: Okay.

Jesse kisses her on the cheek and leaves. Isabel resumes cleaning the
house while listening to music. When she finishes she takes a shower
and gets dressed. Then there's a knock on the door. She walks towards
the door.

Isabel: Jesse did you forget something?

She opens the door and is surprised to see Max and Michael standing
there.

Isabel: Max, Michael what are you doing here?
Max: Something's happened.

Max and Michael walk into the apartment and Isabel closes the door.

Isabel: What? Tell me Max, what happened?
Michael: Well Maria and Liz were at the Crashdown...
Max: Liz said she felt like someone or something arrived in Roswell
that was going to change our lives.

When Max and Michael finished telling Isabel what had happened she
replied.

Isabel: And you think this is related to us? Maybe she was
daydreaming and overreacted to it.
Max: Kyle said he felt it too. He said he thought he was going to
pass out.
Isabel: What are we going to do?
Michael: Can you dreamwalk into Liz's mind?
Isabel: Yeah, but she has to be asleep.
Max: She is. Before we left I went to check on her and she was asleep.
Isabel: Do you have a picture of her?

Max reaches into his wallet and pulls out a picture of Liz and hands
it to Isabel. Isabel takes the picture.

Isabel: I'll be back.

She goes to her room and closes her door. She sits on her bed and
puts her finger on Liz's picture, closes her eyes and concentrates on
making contact with Liz.

Max and Liz sitting on top of Max's car, looking at the sky.

Liz: Do you ever wonder if one of the stars we see is actually your
home planet?
Max: No, my home planet is here with you.

Max leans over and gives her a kiss.

Liz: What was that for?
Max: Just to remind you how much I love you.
Liz: Well I already know how much you love me. Max, I was wondering
when exactly did you notice me?
Max: When we were kids I saw you playing with Maria and Alex. That's
when I knew you were going to change my life, and you did. Without
you I would be nothing. You forgave me after what I did, you even
tried to help me contact my son and you got arrested for it. You
brought me back to life Liz, in more ways then one.
Liz: I did it because I love you.

They share a passionate kiss and are violently pulled away from each
other. A group of guys are surrounding them. Max was being held by
four of them and Liz is being held by two. A woman walks out from
behind them.

Woman: Hello Max.

To be continued...

Well that's it for now. Let me know what you think of it.


posted on 16-May-2002 11:20:18 AM by Maria_ang21
Author: Maria_ang21
Category: Everybody.
Rating: R (for some strong language)
Summary: Takes place after "Who Died And Made You King." When a
mysterious girl comes to Roswell, things and people start to change
and nobody knows why until Liz gets into a confrontation with this new
girl. They later find out that not everything is what it seems.
Disclaimer: I am in no way affiliated with the writers, directors,
cast and crew of Roswell. Although I wouldn't mind being affiliated
with the cast especially Jason Behr and Brendan Fehr. I don't own the
show or any of the characters. I do, however, want to share this
fanfic with all the Roswellians out there. Roswell will always be my
favorite show no matter what other shows come along. I hope you like
this story.


Fanfic: The Truth Part Three

Woman: Hello Max.
Max: Tess. Where's my son?
Tess: Why are you so worried about him now? You didn't give a shit if
he lived or died! You chose this bitch over your own flesh and blood,
over your queen!
Max: You wanted to turn us into Kavar! Did you think I would let you
do that?
Liz: You killed Alex you murderer! I'll kill you! Let me go!

Liz struggles to get away from the men that are holding her but fails
miserably.

Tess walked up to Max.

Tess: I loved you but did you love me? No, you chose an insignificant
human over your own kind, your queen, your destiny.
Max: I told you from the beginning Tess that I didn't love you, that
I loved Liz and I will always love Liz.

Tess hits Max violently with her fist.

Tess: Shut up!
Liz: Stop it!
Tess: Max I'm going to give you a choice, come back to our home
planet with me or die for your love for that bitch.

Max looks at Liz, she knows what he is going to choose.

Liz: Max, don't. Do what she says, don't do it Max.
Max: I choose to die for my true love.
Tess: (angrily) Stand him up!

Tess formed a ball of power in her hand

Tess: Say goodbye Max.

She throws it directly at him, he goes flying into the air, lands on
the ground and doesn't get up.

Liz: (screaming) Max!

Tess looks at her accomplises and says

Tess: Let's go!

The men let Liz go and she runs toward Max with tears in her eyes and
fear in her voice.

Liz: Max say something.

Liz kneels down next to him. Max moves slightly.

Max: (barely able to speak) I love you Liz.
Liz: Don't do this to me Max, don't leave me.

Max stops moving and is gone.

Liz: No! Max!

To be continued...


Well that's it for now. That was a real tearjerker. Let me know what
you think. If I don't get responses I probably won't write it anymore.