posted on 29-Jun-2002 4:15:03 PM by Kat7581568
Title: Breakfast at Tiffanys
Disclaimer: Neither the song or the charecters belong to me
Rating: PG- PG 13
Genre: M/L

You'll say we've got nothing in common
No common ground to start from
And were falling apart
You'll say the world has come between us
Still I know you just don't care

And I said "What about Breakfast at Tiffany's?"
She said, "I think I remember that film
And as I recall, I think, we both kind of liked it"
And I said "Well that's the one thing we've got

I see you, the only one that knew me
And no your eyes see through me
I guess I was wrong,
So what now? It plain top see were over
And I hate when things are over
When so much is left undone

And I said "What about Breakfast at Tiffany's"
She said "I think I remember that film
And as I recall we both kind of liked it"
And I said "Well that the one thing we've got"

You''l say we've got no common ground
No common ground to start from
And were falling apart
You'll say the world has come between us,
Still I know you just don't care

And I said, "What about Breakfast at Tiffanys?"
She said "I think I'll remember that film,
And as I recall we both kind of liked it"
And I said "Well thats the opne thing we've got"


And I said what about Breakfast at Tiffany's
She said " I think I remember that film
And as I recall we both kind of liked it"
And I said, "Well thats the one thing we got."

Liz sung along to the music as her old 63 blue convertable just flew by a sign that read "Welcome to Roswell"

Sorry its so short but I have to go before I get electricuted. Thanks. Hope you enjoy. Please leave feedback to tell me if I should continue.

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posted on 29-Jun-2002 5:33:52 PM by Kat7581568
I'm sorry I couldn't post more. There was a storm. I'm just gonna make a few changes, and unlike my other fics I will finish this one *wink* I'll update later or maybe tomorrow. Can't tell yet matters how long my bff makes this shopping spree. And remember LEAVE FEEDBACK.*happy*
posted on 29-Jun-2002 9:39:36 PM by Kat7581568
*Part One A*

Liz smiled. She had just entered the supposed alien capitol of the world. But that was just what the sign said.
'The only aliens here are from Mexico' she thought.

But she was used to the tacky nick names. After all she had driven all over the U.S. with her mom Nancy. Since she was four it seemed like all she did was get in a car and drive away. Her mom had gone nuts after her father died. She decided to leave packing up and dragging Liz with her. But Liz never complained. She was a good girl. But now she was alone. Her mother died three months before and she had taken the last three months to emancipate herself.
But that was all behind her now. She had a new start, a new beginning. She smiled as her car slowly cruised what she guessed was the main street. She had just passed the high school where she would go to school.

Then she saw the tacky muesum that every small town has this one though was different it was entitled the UFO Center. But then she saw what she wanted it was undoubtly a restraunt which was what she needed cause she was starving she had't eaten since Albuquerqe.

Sorry its short but I don't have a lot of time tonight. Thanks for the feedback.
posted on 30-Jun-2002 11:18:25 AM by Kat7581568
just to let those who think this is going to be like the movie honestly its not. Breakfast at Tiffany's is one of my favorite songs and when I started the fic I was basically thinking of the song not the movie. but I might have a few scenes that are some what like the movie I haven't decided yet. Kay? Thanks for the feedback. *wink*
posted on 30-Jun-2002 11:56:54 AM by Kat7581568
Part 1~B

Liz parked her car across the street and walked slowly to the dinner. She looked in the glass, it was full of teenagers in letterman jackets. Liz checked her watch.

'School's out' she thought.

She walked in. A few heads turned to look at her but not many. It wasn't till she started to cross the restraunt to that people started to stare.

'Do I have an extra boob I wasn't aware of' she thought as she ignored all the stares. She slowly made her way to a booth in the back. Once she sat down the stares stopped and a perky waitress arrived.

"Hi my name is Maria. I'll be your waitress to day. What can I get you to drink?" she said in one breath.

"What?" Liz asked not understanding any of it.

Maria slowly repeated what she said whne the bell above the door rang. Liz slowly became aware of people approching them as she ordered a cherry coke.

"Your in our seat." a voice growled form behind her.

Liz turned around slowly to see a teenager with a scary hair cut, a tall curvy blonde, and a dark haird man standing behind them both.

"Is that so?" Liz asked with a smirk.
"Then be my guests and join me" she said continued to mock him.

The teens looked around but found that the place was full.

"Fine" the blonde haired girl said as she sat down next to Liz.

"My name's Isabel. This is my friend Micheal, and my brother..."

"Max" he broke in with a small smile holding out his hand.

She slowly shook his hand
"Liz... Liz Parker."
posted on 6-Jul-2002 5:51:58 PM by Kat7581568
Part 2

"Hi." she smiled at him.

"Hi." he chocked out.

"Yeah well..... uh me and Mikey have some where to be." Isabel said when she saw the sparks flying.

"Where?"Max said with a glance.

"Oh nowhere special. Just around. Have fun!" she said hurriedly pushing Micheal away from the table and out the door.

"Does she always push him aorund like that." she siad with a smile.

"Yeah." was all he could get out. He was to busy looking at her smile.

'She's beautiful when she smiles.' he looked over at her and saw she was blushing before he relized he had said it out loud.

"Sorry." he said quickly getting up to leave.

"No!" she said a little to quickly.

"Sit with me for a little while. I'm new in town and I don't know anyone here. Please?" she practically begged.

Max knowing he couldn't say know to those choclate eyes sat down.

"Okay" he said shakily. They sat there for a moment before Max broke the silence.

"Where are you from?"

"Uh all around, I guess you could say." she answered trying to avoid the question.

"Oh, well if you need a guide around you could always come to me. I'd love to show you around."

"Okay I'll take you up on that. Just right your number down and I'll call you." she said

"Good." he said writing his number down.
"See you then"

"See you then" she said watching him walk out of the restraunt. Or more like watching his butt. *wink*

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posted on 15-Jul-2002 10:19:05 PM by Kat7581568
Part 3

Liz looked at the mirror. All she saw was her face. Nothing new. But there was something new, something she had never seen. She couldn't help but wonder what it was. She left her motel room quickly jumping into her car to meet Max at the Crashdown. She couldn't wait. Not only was Max hot, but he seemed to be everything else she was looking for. A quick fling, maybe a little love , that's all she wanted. That's all she expected

She walked into the Crashdown looking towards the back booth. He was right there. She smiled when he noticed her. He looked so adorable, so cute. His ears, his moth, his eyes every thing was perfect.
"Hi!" she said

"Hey, ready to go on your tour of the town?" he asked

"Sure am."

"Kool." he said excited. 'Something about her, its something special.'

He guided her out of the crowded restraunt towrds the center of town pointing out it land marks as they went.

"That's the UFO muesum, thats town hall, oh and our park is three blocks that way." he said pointing over his sholder.

"The Library, the ice SCREAM shack, and the movie theather. Now this is my sisters favorite part of town." he said with a laugh.

Liz could easily see why. They had enter an area that had many trendy shops. The stores seemed to have everything, from chruch clothes to sex toys, and beepers to engagment rings. Then she saw something that caught her eye.

It was a small jewlery shop that held mostly hand made beaded necklaces from what she could see in the windo.

Max saw her adoration of particular necklace in the window and said "Come on, lets go in"

She smiled at him and followed him in.She picjed up the necklace and examined it. It was beautiful. Theather cord with a jade and silver ortament on the end.

"Try it on" he said. So she did. It was beautiful.

"I wish I could get it." she said with a sad voice.
"Come on lets finish my tour of the town." she said dying to get away from the necklace.

"Wait a second." he went over to the shop owner and gave her some money. He came back over and slipped the neclace on Liz.

He turned her towards the mirror and said "It's your"

That's when she noticed it. What the change was. It was the same look that Max had on his face. It was