posted on 2-Jul-2002 9:50:52 AM by Jessica_01
Title:21 things I want out of a lover
Ratings:pg-13, M/M, A/I, & M/L-eventually
DIsclaimer I don't own anything, so don't sue.
Author's note: Ok, I wanna thnk JaneLane for giving me the idea of this story. THANX JANIE!!!

Ok, so here's the plan out of the story: Liz moves to rowsell feeling pretty down. It's her Junior year. She meets Maria and Isabel and they instantly become friends. But Isabel and Maria are always hanging with their boyfriends, Micheal and Alex. So Maria and Isabel talk to Liz and Liz tells them what's bugging her, so they send her out on a blind date.*wink*


My name is Liz Parker, and I am about to go live with my aunt Mary.

She owns this restuarant called the crashdown. It's alien invested, from what I hear.

I'm glad mom and dad are sending me away. I was getting tired of them anyway.

I'll just miss Brad. Oh Brad, the cutest sophomore their was.

I had been dating Brad ever since I could date.Every girl wanted him, and every guy wanted me, or at least I was told.

I guess you could say I loved him, I just wasn't in-love with him. I was in-love with his looks, but not him.

I've never been in love, so I wouldn't know how it feels.

I was told that when you fell in love it was really special.

My mom and dad sent me off listen to this!

It was a few days ago, This girl that I knew and trusted asked me to put a paper-bag in my locker and hold it for a while for her.

I put it in me locker. Next thing I know is I'm getting out of school suspension for the rest of the year for having drugs.

My parents wouldn't even let me explain. THey called me a problem child, and sent me off on the next plain to Roswell, New Mexico.

SO, right now I'm in this cab looking at the town of Roswell. The alien town.


What do ya'll think, should I continue?

[ edited 1 time(s), last at 24-Sep-2002 5:44:34 PM ]
posted on 2-Jul-2002 5:10:23 PM by Jessica_01
Part 1
Liz closed her journal and stuffed it into her nearest suitcase.

She paid the cab driver $17.50, and he popped the trunk and gota all of her stuff out of it.

Her aunt came to her and gave her a hug.

"How was the flight, honey?" She asked her.

"good." she replied. Her aunt went inside and yelled for somebody, then two blonds came out.

"Hi I'm Maria." one of them said. "Hi" Liz answered. "And I'm Isabel." the other one said.

"Hi." Liz said again, Her aunt told them to follow her up to where her place was and so they did.

When they got into the restuarant everybody stared and stopped talking. they walked through a door and up a small flight of stairs.

Her aunt opened the door and when she did liz's jaw dropped in awe.

"WOW." Liz said before dropping her bags.


posted on 2-Jul-2002 5:11:30 PM by Jessica_01
Ok, I know what ya'll are thinking, it's short, but I don't have much time. lolz, I'm reading 5 stories and writing 3.
posted on 2-Jul-2002 8:54:56 PM by Jessica_01
posted on 2-Jul-2002 9:29:46 PM by Jessica_01
thank ya'll so much!!! pixie, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!*bounce**wink**tongue**big**happy**bounce*
posted on 3-Jul-2002 11:36:44 AM by Jessica_01
ok, I'm gonna write a new part in about an hour, so give me that long. thanx*wink*
stalker of Pixie, m14, Lana Lane, JaneLane, Shama,bethrail4 me, and Care_behr*wink*
*bounce*jiggy jolt*bounce*
posted on 3-Jul-2002 9:12:28 PM by Jessica_01
okokok, I'm gonna write this part, but it's gonna be seriously short cause it's a lournal part.

Hi, it's Liz again.

My life is starting to get better.

I have 2 new friends, Maria and Isabel.

They are taking me to school on monday.

Daddy's sending my car to me in about a week.

It seems so wierd.

I mean, I was rich, but now I'm not.

Aunt Mary dosen't have strict rules like Mom and dad.

My curfew is 12:30. She siad as long as I had my cell phone I could stay out that late.

She told me not to tell mom or dad.

She even put me on birth control pills!!!

And she bought me a pack of condoms to carry around in my purse!!!

If mom or dad ever find out they'd kill my aunt.

I think I'm gonna like it here in Roswell New Mexico.

Ok, I know what your thinking, it's really short. But I'm busy, so I'll write more tomorrow.
Love Always,
*bounce*jiggly jolt*bounce*

posted on 4-Jul-2002 11:56:25 AM by Jessica_01
m14-ok, I wrote in there why she was with her aunt and not her parents. and yeah, her aunt is cool.
New Yorker- thanx, I'll post soon.
jiggly wiggly piggly miggly tiggly biggly stiggly jolt
posted on 4-Jul-2002 11:57:41 AM by Jessica_01
posted on 5-Jul-2002 8:34:29 PM by Jessica_01
hey everybody, ok don't get mad at me, but I'm thinking about putting this story on hold. Cause I really don't have enough time to write 3 stories and read 10, so I think that if I drop this one (Only for a little while) I'll have extra time on the computer.
p.s. b-mail me for more information
posted on 6-Jul-2002 10:13:56 AM by Jessica_01
awww, Pixie, I'm touched. I LYLAS.
p.s. if you need any information about this story and what's gonna happen b-mail me!
posted on 6-Jul-2002 5:28:16 PM by Jessica_01
hey everybody!!! how do ya'l like my signature??? when u bump somebody or something it means that u were there, or something like that.
posted on 6-Jul-2002 10:34:57 PM by Jessica_01
yeah, me too Pixie.
posted on 9-Jul-2002 9:55:39 PM by Jessica_01
"Hey liz!" Maria said to Liz. They were working at the crashdown.

"What's up?" Liz asked her.

"Oh, nothing much, just trying to get used to this new schedule."

"Oh, kewl, so how ya living girl?" Maria asked her.

"Oh, great! My aunt is so coo;! you know, she bought me condoms and she put me on birth control!" Liz said.

"Oh my God! I wish my parents were like that, but you are a virgin, right?" Maria said

"Of course." Liz replied.

"Ok, cause ya know, me and Isabel are virgins." She said.

"I know, ya'll told me, remember?" Liz asked

"Yeah, well look. Me and Isabel are really glad that the three of us are going to be best friends." Maria told her.

"I am too." Liz said. She Looked over at her section. Her section was on the left side of the restuarant.

"well, I have to go, some people just came in and set down in my section." Liz told her.

"Hi, my name is Liz, I'll be your waitress today, may I take your order?" She said sweetly while putting on a smile.

"I'll have a will smith burger, and a cherry soda." The old man said.

"I'll have the same." The old lady said.

"Ok, your drinks will be coming in just a minute." Liz said.

She went and made their drinks and set them on their table.

After her shift was over she walked over to where Maria and Isabel were and greeted them with a smile.

"Liz I'd like you to meet the gang." Isabel said to Liz.

"Ok." Liz replied while looking at the table.

"Ok, this is Micheal, Maria's boyfriend. That's Alex, my boyfriend. And that's my Brother Max." Isabel said.

posted on 11-Jul-2002 6:33:03 PM by Jessica_01
guess what? I'm not stopping this story!!! yay! lolz.
posted on 11-Jul-2002 8:58:19 PM by Jessica_01
ok, I have a new part, but I'm wondering if I should post it tomorrow or tonight, what do ya'll think???
p.s. If I get more than 5 feedbackers I'll post tonight, if not I'll post tomorrow. I'm logging out at 10:30, or at least that's the earliest.
posted on 11-Jul-2002 9:06:19 PM by Jessica_01
it depends if I get 5 fb's or more.
posted on 12-Jul-2002 11:06:08 AM by Jessica_01
I'm sorry NewYorker, I haven't had any time. I'll go read it sometime today, I promise!!!

p.s. here's the new part.............................

Liz looked at Max. 'He is so cute.' she thought.

'And his eyes, oh I could swim in those eyes.'

"Liz, I said this is my brother, Max." Isabel told her. She left her thoughts of swimming in max's eyes.

"Hi" Liz managed to say. "Hey" He responded.

She was taken even more a-back. His voice, was so sexy.

"Liz, you ok?" Maria asked her. She managed to look over at Maria quickly.

"Yeah, I'm fine." She said.

"Ok, are ya'll ready?" Isabel asked her.

"Ready for what?" Liz replied.

"Were going out to the field like we always do on wednesday night."

Maria told her.

"You are comming, right?" Isabel asked her.

"Yeah, um, let me go tell me aunt." Liz told them.

"Aunt mary, I'm going out, be back later, love you." She didn't hear any response so she just hurried down the stairs.

"Ok, I'm ready." Liz told them.

"Um, Liz we have to ask you a favor." Maria and Isabel asked her.

"Sure, what is it?" Liz replied.

"well, we don't have enough space in micheal's truck for all 6 of us, but me and Isabel want to be with micheal and Alex, so can you go with Max in his car?" They asked her.

"Um, is it ok with him?" Liz asked, while looking over in his direction.

"Yeah, we talked to him when you were upstairs." Isabel answered.

"Ok, well then let's go!" Liz told them.

"Um, there's one problem." Max told Liz after everybody had left.

"What's that?" Liz asked him sweetly.

"My car is at my house, it's about 2 blocks away, you don't mind walking, do you?" Max asked her.

"No, it's fine." Liz told him. She was glad she wore her tennis shoes and shorts, and not a skirt.

"Ok, so are you gonna be going to west roswell high?" Max asked her.

"Yeah, do you go there?" Liz asked him."

"Yes, it's a great school, I mean, if you like school." Max said while smiling. His teeth were so white.

They walked in silence the rest of the way there.

"There's my house." He told her. SHe looked in awe. His house was a mansion practically.

"Wow!" She said. "Your house is beautiful." She told him.

"Well, it's my mom and dad's but thanx." He told her.

"Your welcome." She said.

"And there's my car." He said when they were finished walking his long walk-way.

He had a dodge viper car. "Oh, I love your car!" SHe said while he opened the dor for her to get in."

"Thanks, it was my 16th birthday gift." He told her.

"What kind of car does Isabel have?" Liz asked him.

"A ferrari, you see it up there?" He pointed to a black convertible in the garage.

"Oh my god, her car is beautifful!" Liz said.

"So, Liz what are you interested in?" Max asked her.

You, she thought. "Well, I love biology, and I really love Softball." She said.

"Oh, I love biology too, it's my fav. subject."

He told her. "I love baseball too, I'm on the team, hey are you gonna try out for softball?" He asked her.

"Um, I haven't given it much thought, I was on the team back in New York." She replied.

"Oh, cool. I hope your on the team, cause the was it works down here, the baseball and softball players load up in one bus to go on games out of town, and we have to sit boy to girl." He said

"The coach is wierd like that." He replied. "Oh, was Maria, or Isabel on the team?" Liz asked him.

"Actually, yeah both of them is on the team, you are good at it right? what is your possition on the field?" Max asked her.

"Well, people told me I was good at it. I'm pitcher." She told him.

"Really? so am I!" He told her.

"That's cool, you know the reason I like to be pitcher is because when I am the pitcher I'm in total control of the game. I love that feeling." She told him.

"You've got a great way of thinking." He told her.

"Thank you." She replied. "So, what classes did you sign up for?" He asked her.

"Engennering cars and P.E." She told him.

"Oh my god, we are so alike!" He told her. "I signed up for the same thing." He added.

"What a coinsidense!" She said while looking over at him.

"Ok, were here." He told her. THe sun had already gone down. It was about 8:45.

She got out of the car and walked over to Maria and Isabel.

"Hey, why'd ya'll take so long?" Isabel asked her.

"We had to go get his car." Liz replied. "I seen your ferarri." Liz added.

"You did?!" Isabel asked her. "Yes, girl I love that car!" Liz replied.

"Thank you." Isabel said. "Your welcome." Liz responded.

They had blankets layed out on the ground and all the guys were laying on them.

"Hey you guys, scoot over and let us sit down." Maria told them. They got up.

Isabel and Maria went and started dancing to the music that was playing from Micheal's truck.

Liz went and sat down on the blanket by herself.

"Hey, would you like to dance?" feedback, no story
posted on 12-Jul-2002 1:00:23 PM by Jessica_01
Lana, ur so funny!!! I'm gonna get to work on it right now just for you, but first I'm gonna go check up on "A new day" for NewYorker.
posted on 18-Jul-2002 12:26:58 PM by Jessica_01
um hey everyone. I hate to tell ya'll this, but I'm gonna take a break from the job for a week or so, I cant explain what's happening, It's just I'm going through something right mnow. Plz have faith in me.
posted on 20-Jul-2002 3:05:22 PM by Jessica_01
thank ya'll, deeply appreciated.
posted on 22-Jul-2002 8:42:55 PM by Jessica_01
ok, I am back in the games!
but I have a new perspective,
ok, I'm not gonna write this
story anymore. by myself.
*everybody wants to kill jessica*
but if anybody wants to start writing
this story with me just b-mail me if ya'll don't,
I'm gonna drop it.
I'm sorry for the inconvience
but whoever decides that they want
to write it with me, just b-mail me.
I personally want newyorker to
write it, I mean I dunno
why, but I'd feel really great if you
started writing it with me newyorker,
it would make it better. but hey,
b-mail me newyorker.
p.s. also, I would feel comfortable if you wrote too, m14.
posted on 23-Jul-2002 3:11:40 PM by Jessica_01
hey everybody, um the job is open to anyone that wants to start writing this story with me, and if nobody does, then it's going down the drain!
posted on 24-Jul-2002 5:16:03 PM by Jessica_01
hey, thanks michaela, but newyorker cant, and so I'm waiting for somebody to b-mail me and tell me they can, but nobody has, so I guess I'l give it a week. thanks again michaela.
posted on 24-Jul-2002 7:28:50 PM by Jessica_01
Liz looked into Max's eyes and took him by the hand.

"I'd love to dance with you." She said.

The song was 'I shall believe' By Sheryl Crow.

Come to me now
And lay your hands over me
Even if it's a lie
Say it will be alright
And I shall believe

"Your beautiful, Liz. Your really beautiful." Max told her.

She just smiled. "So are you Max." She replied.

I'm broken in two
And I know you're on to me
That I only come home
When I'm so all alone
But I do believe

"So, Liz do you like roswell so far?" He asked her.

"I love it." She said.

That not everything is gonna be the way
You think it ought to be
It seems like every time I try to make it right
It all comes down on me
Please say honestly you won't give up on me
And I shall believe
And I shall believe

"Liz, I really want to kiss you right now." He told her.

"Go for it." She replied.
Open the door
And show me your face tonight
I know it's true
No one heals me like you
And you hold the key

As he kissed her she saw images, like him as a little boy.

She saw him healing a bird's wing that had been broken.

Never again
would I turn away from you
I'm so heavy tonight
But your love is alright
And I do believe

She saw him in junior high throwing a football to another boy.

She saw him with a girl that looked like a younger version of isabel running through the dessert together.

That not everything is gonna be the way
You think it ought to be
It seems like every time I try to make it right
It all comes down on me
Please say honestly
You won't give up on me
And I shall believe

Then she saw him as he was now kissing a blonde headed girl.

The girl looked like a girl who had come to the crash down.

Her name was tess.

I shall believe
And I shall believe

Sorry that was so short, I'm just really busy.
posted on 24-Jul-2002 7:30:56 PM by Jessica_01
oh, and remember,

posted on 24-Jul-2002 8:49:28 PM by Jessica_01
michaela, no! I want us to do a whole new story!!! but thanx anyways!
posted on 25-Jul-2002 7:01:30 PM by Jessica_01
Ok, I just wrote a big part, but my computer screwed up on me, so I'll have to write it all over again.

Ok, I am gonna keep writing all of the stories I am writing now, and I'm gonna start a new one. If you'll look at my signature then you'll see the stories that I'm working on. It dosent have the one that I'm gonna write but it will in a few days. I am not gonna stop any of my stories. Me and m14 have a story called 'I shall believe' but we made a new name for it. it's 'J_Behr_Chicks'

p.s.Now I'm just gonna write this story as it comes, so enjoy!!!

"Max, can you take me home?" Liz asked him

"Um sure." Max said

When they got to Liz's house she yelled for her aunt mary, but har aunt didn't answer.

"Do you want a drink?" Liz asked him

"Um, what do you have?" Max asked her.

"Tea," Liz said with a gleam in her eye.

"I'll have a glass of wine." Max said while grinning.

"Let's go into my room." Liz said.

When they got inot her room liz turned on the lights and her radio and walked out onto her balcony.

"Here." Liz gave him his glass of wine. She put the bottle on the glass table on the balcony.

"mmm, this is good wine." Max told her.

"Well, aunt mary said I could have some if I wanted." Liz said.

"Ooh, I love this song." Liz said.

I will never find another lover sweeter than you, sweeter than you
I will never find another lover more precious than you, more precious than you
Girl You are Close to me you're like my mother,
Close to me you're like my father,
Close to me you're like my sister,
Close to me you're like my brother
You are the only one my everything and for you this song I sing

"Liz Parker, would you like do dance?" Max asked her.

"I'd love to." She said

All my life I pray for someone like you
I thank God that I, that I finally found you
All my life I pray for someone like you
I hope that you feel the same way too
Yes, I pray that you do, love me too

"You are the most prettiest girls I've ever met." Max told her.

She blushed.

Said I promised to never fall in love with a stranger,
You're all I'm thinking of I praise the Lord above,
For sending me your love, I cherish every hug,
(Oh so much,.. baby baby!)

"I think I'm falling in love with you, Liz parker."

All my life, I pray for someone like you,
I thank God (thank god I found you)that I, that I finally found you
(Oh!) All my life(life!) I pray for someone like you
I hope that you feel the same way too
Yes, I pray that you do, love me

"Liz, I am falling in love with you."

You're all that I've ever known, your smile on your face, all I see is a glow,
You turned my life around, You picked me up when I was down,
You're all that I've ever known, when you smile your face glows,
You picked me up when I was down
You're all that I've ever known, when you smile your face glows,
You picked me up when I was down & I hope that you feel the same way too,
Yes I pray that you do love me too

"Mee too, Max. Me too."

All my life, I pray for someone like you,
I thank God that I, that I finally found you
All my life I pray for someone like you
I hope that you feel the same way too

no feedback no story!!!
posted on 25-Jul-2002 7:35:39 PM by Jessica_01
thanx!!! um, what's an avatator, or what you said?
posted on 25-Jul-2002 8:25:51 PM by Jessica_01
you go to the icon's and it's under the one's made my the board members.
posted on 26-Jul-2002 12:16:19 PM by Jessica_01
hey michaela, do you wanna write this with me? if you want to sure!!! you can have the guys part, lolz. Just you'll have to b-mail me or get on msn and im me cause I have to tell you what I'm gonna do with this story, cause I have it all planned out.
posted on 27-Jul-2002 4:08:57 PM by Jessica_01
well, newyorker, I'll just explain on here, you can access it on the same computer. you just have to have a different e-mail address from your other name. It's really easy.
posted on 30-Jul-2002 11:39:09 AM by Jessica_01
ok, I hate 2 sat this, But with all the stories I'm writing I'm gonna have to end this story. Would ya'll rather me write an ending? or would ya'll just like me to stop?
posted on 30-Jul-2002 2:18:03 PM by Jessica_01
uh, ur gona make me write it long?*sad*
lolz, I'm just playin wit ya.*wink*
Of course I'll write it long.*big*
(as long as I can)*tongue*
posted on 30-Jul-2002 8:52:22 PM by Jessica_01
ok, I'll write that big part tomorrow, k?
posted on 4-Aug-2002 9:18:45 PM by Jessica_01
okokok, I know I said I'd write a long part, but I cant right now. your gonna have 2 wait cause everybody just stopped writing stories with me so I'm gonig through a hard time. especially when this is the month that my mom died.