posted on 20-Oct-2001 3:21:57 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU


Highway 285, Roswell New Mexico.

The brunette just got out of the car. “Thank you for the ride Mr. Banks. I appreciate it.”

“No problem. Take care of yourself. I hope that you find what you’re looking for. Bye!” He drives away. The young woman grabs her things and goes inside the gas station.

“Hmm…food. Yes, I need food. Let’s see, Doritos, and cookies, and water, oh I could use some candy.” She said to herself. She grabbed everything she needed and went up to the cashier.

“Woah! Enough food?” the guy grinned.

“Yeah, I’m kinda on a trip.” She explains. Hey, that was
the truth. I am on a trip, she thought to herself.

“The total is $45.60.”

“Oh, here,” she pulls out a fifty from her bag. “Keep the
change. I really don’t need it.”

“Okay. Have a good day!”

“You too!” The young woman walks out and stops to put
the food in her bag. She has with her a backpack and a
duffel bag. The wind starts blowing her hair in all
different directions. She smiles. God she loved the
weather here. ‘I could stay here forever.’ She starts
heading down the highway hoping someone will stop and
pick her up. She saw many cars pass her by, no one
helping her. She continues down and then she hears a
car coming. She looks back and sees a silver Lexus. ‘No
way. I doubt anyone in that kind of car would pick little
old me up.’ She thought. But she thought wrong. The
car stopped fifteen feet ahead of her. Her brown eyes
widen and she speeds up her walk towards the car. The
window rolls down and she hears a voice.

“Need a ride?” she heard. It was a deep voice. She looks
into his face.

“Yeah. I could use one,” she smiles. “You don’t’ mind do
you?”

“I wouldn’t have stopped if I did,” he grins. “Come on in.
You can either put your things in the back if you’d like.”
She puts her backpack and duffle bag gently into the
back. She takes a seat in the front.

“What the in the
name of God are you doing out in the desert alone?” he asks.

“Oh, I’m just traveling across the country,” she replies.

“By foot?” he asks a he drives.

“Yeah kinda,” she blushes.

“I’m Max.”

“Liz.” She shakes his one free hand.



sofia~ what do you think? stupid idea or what? *happy*
feedback is always welcomed and appreciated. thanx!
*angel*

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posted on 20-Oct-2001 10:54:55 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU


Chapter 2

“So Liz, what do you do for a living?”

“Oh, I’m in med school. It’s my last year before I start residency. That’s why I’m taking this trip.” Liz said.

“Wow. A doctor.”

“Yeah, I’m going to be a physician. And what about you?” she asked as he drove

“I’m in law school right now, but I have a feeling my
future is going to change.” Max sighed.

“Why do you say that?”

“My dad, he’s the owner of a big company in New York.
He’s passing the company down to me.”

“Oh.” Liz said. “So why are you out in the middle of
nowhere?”

“My friend and I took a road trip from NY to California.
Unfortunately, he met this one girl, and ditched me.”
Max smiled. “It’s not like I can blame him, though. She’s
totally perfect for him.”

“Yeah, my best friend was supposed to do this whole
country trip, but what does she do? Ditch me for a guy,
how typical.” Liz smiled.

“So are you originally from New Mexico?” Max asked
curiosly.

“Oh no. I came from California, but before that, I lived in
New York for most my life. I lived in Buffalo.” Liz sad and
Max’s eyes widened.

“Are you serious? I live in Buffalo.” Max said.

“What a coincidence. You live there all your life?” Liz
asked.

“Yup.”

“What did you say your last name was?” Liz asked not
being able to remember.

“I don’t think I even told you, and it’s Evans.”

“Evans,” Liz’s eyes widened. “Oh my god.”

“What? Something wrong with my name?”

“You related to Philip Evans?”

“Yeah, that’s my dad. Why do you ask?” Liz
gasped. “What’s wrong with you?”

“Philip Evans and my father hate each other.” She said
bluntly.

“What? My father only hates one man, and that happens
to be Jeff Parker.”

“Exactly.” Liz looked at him.

“Damn. This is a coincidence,” Max chuckled. He took
the next exit and stopped at a small café.

“What are we doing?”

“We are getting some lunch. I haven’t eaten since six in
the morning.”



“Jeez, Liz you really grew up!” Max said amazed at her
change.

“What?” Liz looked up from her meal.

“You don’t remember me do you?”

“Should I?”

“We went to high school together. St. Margaret’s…
remember? I was captain of the basketball and soccer
team and you were…..”

“A total geek!” Liz finished her sentence. “Oh my gosh!
Now I remember you! You used to have five million girls
all over you! Everyday in the halls.”

“That’s exaggerating a little.”

“Okay one million.” Liz replied. “But we weren’t even in
the same grade. How do you remember me? We must’ve
run into each other what, twice during high school?”

“I don’t know how I remember you. You have a face that
anyone can remember.”

“Oh is that right? Oh my! Then you must know Michael
Guerin I suppose?” Liz asked finished her meal.

“Yeah, that’s my best friend who was supposed to come
back with me.”

“Yeah, he got held up by Maria Deluca.”

“MARIA?” Max choked.

“You okay?”

“Surprised, that’s all. Michael and Maria? Who would’ve
thought?” Max grinned.

“Oh what ever happened to Tess Harding?” Liz
asked. “You were dating her all through high school
weren’t you?”

“Now you know that’s exaggerating a lot! Tess and I
went out few times. I really didn’t like her. She was
obsessive. She was a total bimbo.” Max said.

“I never really liked her either. I don’t know, she didn’t
seem like the friendliest person around.”

“Trust me, she wasn’t.”

“So where exactly are you headed? I don’t want impose
on you too long,” Liz said changing the subject.

“I’m going straight back to New York. And you wouldn’t
be imposing. I’d actually like the company.”

“Okay.” Liz smiled. ‘I’m going to fall for him again. I don’t
know if I can handle it.’ Liz saw Max paying for the
bill. “Max! You don’t have to pay for me!”

“Don’t be like that. I’ll pay, its fine.”

“But, next stop I’m paying. Okay?” Liz said getting up
from her seat.

“Sounds good.”

“Oh god.” Liz looked out the window and saw a whole
group of reporters.

“What are they doing here?” Max asked.

“I have no idea! I didn’t know you were that famous!”

“I’m not”

“Ms. Parker, Ms. Parker!” The reporters kept shouting.

“They’re shouting for you!”

“What the hell?” Liz went outside. “WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON?”

“Are you telling me you don’t know about your father’s decision?” A reporter asked. Liz gasped. She was about to fall back. Max caught her.

“My dad decision? What decision?” Liz asked.

“I’m just as surprised as you are!” Max said.
Just then a random person came up to her and handed her a newspaper. The headline said “JEFF PARKER STEPS DOWN FROM HIS COMPANY AND LEAVES IT ALL TO HIS ONLY DAUGHTER”.


I'm sorry if this is corny and lame. thanx for the feedback though! it's always appreciated and welcomed.

sofia~ *angel*
posted on 22-Oct-2001 12:04:50 AM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU


chapter 3....

The headline said “JEFF PARKER STEPS DOWN
FROM HIS COMPANY AND LEAVES IT ALL TO HIS ONLY
DAUGHTER”.

"Oh shit!" Liz covered her mouth. She dodged all the reporters and headed back into the cafe. Max ran after her. "Shit shit shit shit shit! How the hell could he do this to me?" She screamed. "What the hell am I supposed to do!?"

"Well it does say here that Jeff Parker planned this for awhile, and that he didn't like the idea of you seperating from him. I guess this must've been something to get your attention." Max shrugged.

"Oh he got my damn attention alright! What is he gonna do with it now?" Just then Liz's cell phone started to ring. "Hello?"

"Hello Elizabeth." A voice said very calmly.

"Daddy! What are you doing?"

"I know you're surprised. Just let me explain."

"How could you do this daddy? I'm in med school! Last year before residency!"

"Honey, calm down! You know everything you need to know about this company! I thought you very well. You're a smart woman. I know you can do this."

"Is this some kind of test?" Liz asked.

"No..I don't need a test for you to prove that you're capable, I already know you are. As you know I'm not as young as I used to be. I needed to pass this down to someone before I die, so I can show them everything I need to. Show them the tricks of the business."

"And you chose me? Why didn't you choose Adam, or even Kyle???"

"I wanted it past down to my own blood, I guess."

"So daddy. What am I supposed to do?" Liz sat down across from Max.

"You're going to take over the Evan's Corporation."

"WHAT????" Liz screamed. "I can't do that! That company is so much powerful than us!"

"Liz, this is important. You've got to do this. It's the only option. Liz do whatever you can to make this happen. I'm counting on you." Jeff told her.

"Daddy....I guess I have to do this. Does this mean I have to quit residency?" Liz asked with great saddness.

"Not if you don't want to, but it's going to be tough handling business with another job." He explained.

"Yeah, that's true. But daddy, I am so close!" Liz said. "But, this business is important to you. And I dont' want to let you down because even though we have our differences, I love you." Liz expressed her feelings to her dad.

"And I love you honey. I hope you know why I'm doing this. This company has been in our family for so long. I don't want it to go to another person besides my own blood."

"I understand daddy."

"I must go now. Bye sweetie. And we'll work out details after your trip with Maria. Bye!"

"Bye!" Liz hung up.

"What was that about?" Max raised an eyebrow.

"Business stuff. Dad left me the whole business. So if he dies, someone will know everything there is to know."

"What else did he say? You seemed a little suprised at something."

"Oh, he wants me, ME, out of all people, to take over a company. I really dont' know where to start. I mean, I know a lot about business and stuff, but this, this is way too much for me!" Liz blurted out. 'I don't think I should tell him I have to take over his business quite yet!'

"Well, I'll definetly help you. You can come to me for anything."

"Most definetly." Both hers and Max's cell phone rang at the same time. Max excused himself and went across the cafe where Liz couldn't hear him.


"Hello?"

"Liz! I just heard the news! What are you going to do?" Maria asked.

"I'm going to take over the Evan's Company. What else can I do?"

"This is major stuff. Evans, as in Max Evans, soon to be owner of the company, best friends with Michael!"

"Jeez! I didn't even realize that!" Liz lied. She bit her lip. She hated lying to her best friend.

"What the hell are you going to do?" Maria asked frantically. "Cuz if you do this...I know Michael will never see me again!!!!!"

On the otherside of the cafe....


"Hello?" Max said.

"Maxwell, we have a big problem!!!" Michael cried out.


sofia~ thanx for the feedback eveyrone. I really appreciate it!

posted on 22-Oct-2001 8:45:50 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU

from chapter 3....

"Hello?"

"Liz! I just heard the news! What are you going to do?" Maria asked.

"I'm going to take over the Evan's Company. What else can I do?"

"This is major stuff. Evans, as in Max Evans, soon to be owner of the company, best friends with Michael!"

"Jeez! I didn't even realize that!" Liz lied. She bit her lip. She hated lying to her best friend.

"What the hell are you going to do?" Maria asked frantically. "Cuz if you do this...I know Michael will never see me again!!!!!"

On the otherside of the cafe....


"Hello?" Max said.

"Maxwell, we have a big problem!!!" Michael cried out

onto chapter 4....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"What is it Michael?" Max said trying to act calm.

"YOUR company is on the verge of being taken over."

"What the hell do you mean MY company???"

"Your dad just handed over the company to you." Michael answered.

"Damn! Why the hell did he have to go and do that?" Max said pacing.

"You knew he was going to!"

"And what do you mean our company is on the verge of being taken over? Our company is bigger than everyone else's company. Who could possibly take us over?" Max asked with confusion.

"Try Elizabeth Parker."

"LIZ????? HER COMPANY IS TAKING OVER MINE?" Max screamed. Liz must've heard him. She looked over and looked into his eyes. She looked away very quickly.

"Liz? Since when are we on friendly terms?" Michael asked.

"Nevermind that. I can't believe this." Max said. "What am I supposed to do? Let her take over?"

"I suppose you could do that, or you could just fight her back. I mean, try and make business go up more," Michael suggested. "I dont' know. I'm just a messenger."

"Jeez, I need to think."

"Max, when do you plan to go back to New York. You know I'm still in Cali with this girl."

"I dont know when. I'm with my car. And I'm only in New Mexico."

"New Mexico? How'd you get there? Dont' you go East? Not south?"

"I made a detour. I decided to go off on my own. Anyways, this is bad. Listen I'll call you back. I gotta go do something. Later Michael."

"Don't do anything crazy Maxwell. Later." He hung up.


"Maria, I don't know what to do. I mean, I have to take over Phillip Evan's company. How the hell am I supposed to do that?"

"Well, first of all hon, it's not Phillip's company anymore, it's Max's. And second of all, that company is on the verge of being taken over. All you have to do is sign some papers, and his company is yours."

"Sign some papers? Daddy didn't tell me that! And you know this is going to make Phillip Evans more angry with daddy."

"Well last I heard, Jeff and Phillip were actually at a baseball game together. Like seen in public, having fun, chilling out."

"WHAT???"

"LIZ????? HER COMPANY IS TAKING OVER MINE?" Max screamed. Liz heard this.

"Oh my god!!!!!"

"What what what?"

"Max just found out that I'm taking over his company. Oh god."

"What do you mean Max just found out? How do you know, and WHERE ARE YOU?"

"Whoops, I've said too much already."

"Elizabeth Parker, speak up or I'll never speak to you again for the rest of my life!" Maria cried out. "What is this about?"

"MaxpickedmeupasIwashitchhikingdownhighway285and nowwe'rekindagoingonvacationtogether," Liz said so quickly.

"You and Max are on a vacation together????????" Maria screamed.

"Uh huh." Liz sighed. " Sh..dont' tell Michael anything about me and Max. Max is walking towards me, I gotta go. Bye."

"Call me soon." She hung up.
Max sat across from her with a weird look on his face. He kept staring at her.

"WHAT?" Liz screamed.

"Shhhhhhhhhh! Some people are trying to eat lunch here!" A couple said.

"Why didn't you tell me?"

"I wanted to, but I just didn't think it was a good time." Liz made up an excuse.

"This is bad."

"You're telling me. All I have to do is sign some papers, and your company is all mine," Liz sighed.

"WHAT?" Max yelled.

"You didn't know?"

"I knew the company was on the verge, but that's way deeper than I thought. Jeez. And I'm supposed to pull out of this. Yeah right dad."

"I'm not going to sign if that's what your wondering."

"Why not? It's all in your hands now." Max looked at her.

"I'm not ready for this. Here I am, a 23 year old med school student about to go into residency, taking over the Evans Company. I dont' think so! I'm young, I need to live right now. This is way too much for me."

"What are you going to do then?"

"Well I'm gonna go on this vacation, if you come with me, great, and if you don't, I completely understand. I accidently blurted out to Maria that we're kinda on this vacation together. I specifically told her not to tell Michael. It'll get all messy for her and him." Liz said.

"I think this little road trip will be good for the both of us. Hey all the reporters left. What say you and I hit the road again?" Max got up.

"Fine with me." They both got back into the Lexus and started their journey on a unknown destination. Whatever they were doing, they were gonna do this together. "Max," she said a few hours later. They decided to have a quite few hours with no speaking of business.
"Yea?"
"Do you want me to drive?" she changed her question quickly.
"Oh no. It's fine."
"Sure?"
"Yeah." He glanced at her quickly reassuring her.
"Max?"
"Yea?"
"I heard some interesting news from Maria that you might want to know."
"Oh?"
"Yeah. It seems as if our parents aren't enemies anymore after all." Liz said
"WHAT??!?!?!?!?!?!"


sofia~ thanx for all the feedback! you guys are awesome!!!!!
*angel**bounce*
posted on 23-Oct-2001 5:19:08 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU

chapter 5

"WHAT????" Max cried out almost crashing the car.

"Watch out!" Liz said taking the steering wheel.

"You could've found a better time to tell me. And what the hell are you talking about? Our dads being friends?" Max asked regaining his control of the car.

"Well, from what I heard from Maria, dad and your dad went to a baseball game together. Maria said they were looking like they were good friends or something. They were seen in public, having fun, and relaxing." Liz explained.

"My dad and your dad at a baseball game? I didn't even know my dad liked baseball!" Max chuckled. "I don't get it. When did this all happen?"

"That's what I'm wondering." Liz's cell phone rings. "Hello?"

"Hi honey!"

"Mom! What a surprise!"

"I just wanted to call and say hello. I haven't talked to you in such a long time."

"I'm glad you called mom. I wanted to talk to you about daddy."

"Oh dear." Her mother said.

"You know what he did right?"

"Me and Diane are still in shock."

"What do you mean you and Diane?"

"Diane Evans. Remember I told you about her a few months ago. I met her at a business party and we just started talking."

"Oh my! I didn't know you were talking about Diane Evans!" Liz said and looked at Max. He looked at her with some interest.

"Honey how's your vacation going? How's Maria? Let me talk with her."

"Oh the vacation is going very nicely. Maria's okay, she's um...a little pre-occupied right now. I'll tell her you say hi though."

"Oh no worries."

"Mom, how could dad leave me the business? I was so close!"

"It was his decision. I couldn't do anything about it, as much as I fought with him."

"What am I supposed to do with the Evan's company????"

"You're not alone. You have all your business associates."

"Not my associates, they're daddy's associates."

"We'll it won't be that bad. Plus you'll have Max Evans right where you want him." Her mother added in.

"Max Evans? What does this have to do with Max?" Liz emphasized on this name. Max tilted his head to look at her again.

"Oh you remember him. He was your high school crush. Oh I remember you in high school. You were crazy about him."

"I was not! It was nothing!" Liz said.

"Sure. Honey really, I have no idea what they were thinking when they decided to do this."

"They? Who's they?"

"I mean him. I have no idea what he was thinking when he decided to do this." Nancy Parker tried to correct herself.

"Okay mom. Oh, listen, I'm on my way to Dallas. You'll be in town right?"

"Yes of course. I'll cancel all my plans, which is fine with me! I could use a break. Maria's coming I assume?"

"No she isn't. She's not even here with me," Liz admitted. "But I am bringing along a friend, okay?"

"Of course honey!"

"Bye Mom!"

"Bye sweetie." Liz hung up her phone.

"Seems like our mothers are now best of friends." Liz blurted out.

"Are our parents alright?"

"Yea I'm sure it's nothing."

"Well I can surely belive our mothers being friends, but our fathers? I'm still in shock. Dad has been trying to remove your company for so many years."

"Or so we think." Liz said.

"What are you talking about?"

"My mom, she said something how she had no idea THEY were thinking when THEY decided on doing this. Something is up."

"You dont' think our families are setting us up are you?" Max raised his eyebrows.

"I..I..don't know! Maybe." Liz said. She was giddy inside. 'Liz Evans.....hmmm has a good ring to it. I mean, I guess I'll never get over my first love. No one does right? He's just so perfect. Oh god! What am I thinking?'

"Liz? LIZ?" Max was trying to get her out of her trance.

"What what what?"

"Liz I was trying to call you for the past minute or two."

"Sorry I spaced out a bit."

"Hey we're in Clovis right now. And its getting dark outside. Do you just wanna crash at a hotel?"

"Sure. Remember my turn to pay."

"You're not paying for my hotel room!" Max said as he took the next exit. He turned left and went to a Holiday Inn. "You don't mind Holiday Inn do you?" He parked the car.

"No."


"Hi we'd one room please," Liz said. Max looked at her, he mouthed 'What are you doing?' She mouthed back 'Just having a little fun!'

"Are you newley weds?" The lady asked. "You look so happy."

"We sure are," Max grabbed her and pulled her closer to him. "Just got married today."

"Well, we do have the honeymoon suite available." She smiled.

"We'll take it!" Liz squealed. She hugged Max. "Don't give our real names."

"And what should I put the room under?"

"Beth and Max Deluca." Liz answered. Max had his hands around her waist. Liz leaned back on him.

"Okay. You're room is number 500, it's on the fifth floor."

"Okay thank you." Liz grabbed the key before Max could. She grabbed her back back and made a run for it.


sofia~ thanx for the feedback!!!

*angel*
posted on 24-Oct-2001 6:13:30 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU


chapter 6

"Liz!!!!" Max ran after her. People stared at them.

"Newly weds," the lady at the counter said. Everyone just smiled.

"Oh my god. Look at this room!" Liz cried out.

"Yea, never thought I'd be in this room for awhile," Max smiled.

"No kidding. Awww..look at the bed. It's has rose petals all over it," Liz made her way to the bed. She dropped her things and jumped on the bed. She looked at Max and laughed.

"Hey I'm gonna go for a shower." Max said.

"Okay. And I'll be right here." Liz said laying down.

"Great." He closed the bathroom door.

"Let me see what's in the fridge. Ooooohhh! Champaign!" Liz smiled. "Are those fresh strawberries? And a chocolate dip? Kinky." Liz said taking out the strawberries and chocolate. She decided to wait for Max for the champaign. A few minutes later she sees Max coming out out of the bathroom in his boxers. 'Damn, is he trying to kill me here?' She thought. She quickly looked away. He glanced in her direction. She was laying on her stomach, her feet kicking in the air and she was dipping strawberries into chocolate and putting it in her mouth.

"Hungry much?" Max asked.

"No not really. These strawberries are really good. Here try some," she dipped the strawberry in chocolate and held it out to him. He tried to grab it but she stopped him. He took a bite out of the strawberry.

"These are good."

"Oh oh. There's champaign. I think I need a drink. Don't you?"

"Yeah I could use one." He walked over to the cold champain and took the cork off. He poured some into two wine glasses and handed her one. Few hours later, Liz was drunker than she's ever been, and Max was no better off. They finished one bottle of champaign and a large bottle of wine.

"Maxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx."

"Lizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz."

"Max, there *hiccup* something *hiccup* you should *hiccup* know." Liz said. She was trying to get over to where he was but having a very hard time.

"What is it?" He asked.

"I *hiccup* had a big ol' crush *hiccup* on you *hiccup* in high school," Liz said as she got to the bed and fell on top of him.

"Wowwwwww. That's so funny. Because I had a crush on you too!" Max laughed. They both start laughing. "Lizzzzzz...I'm gonna kish you now."

"Okay Maxxie...kiss meee." Liz smiled. He kissed her hard on the lips. They tumbled with each other.

(I don't write nc-17, but use your imaginations. we all know what happens)

The next morning Liz gets up first.
"God damnit. My head my head!!" Liz screams.

"Jeez, you don't have to scream so loudly." Max covers his ears.

"What the hell happened last night?" Liz asked.

"I dont' remember anything." Max looks at her.

Liz looks down at herself and covers herself up quickly. "Oh god." She looks around and sees their clothes everywhere. "Max look." Max gets up from lying down and sees the same thing as she does.

"Ahh jeez." Max lays back down. "My head hurts like hell."

Liz gets out of bed and crawls to her things so that Max doesn't see her. She puts on a robe she finds and heads to her duffle bag. She pulls out a bottle of asprin. She takes out four pills and gets water. She hands some water to Max. "Here." They both take the pills.

"What time is it?" Max asks.

"Around 12:30 pm." She hears Max groaning. He gets out of bed and puts his boxers on. He slams the bathroom door and she hears the shower running.

"This was not the way I pictured my first time," Liz groaned. She sat on the terrance and started crying. She looks inside and sees a empty bottle of champaign and a empty bottle of wine. She groans again.

"The shower is free if you want it," Max tells her after a few minutes.

"Thanks." She takes her things and heads inside the bathroom. 'Jeez. Oh my god. I'm gonna throw up.' She heads straight to the toilet and throws up.'I think I'm gonna be sick!!!!!!!!'


sofia~ hehe. thanx for the feedback y'all. I hope you like this part.

posted on 26-Oct-2001 8:50:23 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU

chapter 7

"Are you okay?" Max finally asked in the car.

"No, but thanks for asking," Liz rolled her eyes. She crouched up into a ball.

"What's the matter with you?" Max asked.

"I'm not feeling all that great okay? I've never had that much to drink in my life." Liz stated.

"Oh."

"And how are you feeling on this fine day?" Liz said sarcastically.

"Peachy keen." Max replied.

"Jerk." she mumbled.

"Sorry." he replied. He kept on driving. "I think we'll be in Dallas by the end of the day, or sooner."

"Good. I can't wait to see my mother." Liz looked out the window. "Oh god. Max, pull over. Pull over!" Liz cried. Max immediatly pulled over. Liz climbed out of the car and threw up. After a few minutes Liz threw up again. She tried getting back in the car, but she fainted. Max finally got out of the car and layed her down in the back. A few hours later she woked up dazed and confused. "What happened?" She rubbed her eyes.

"You passed out. You're sick."

"This I know. I thought it would pass, but obviously it hasn't."

"We're just about in Dallas," Max informed her.

"Oh good." Liz layed back down.

"Listen I'm sorry about earlier this afternoon. I was being a jerk."

"It's okay."

"No it's not. I shouldn't have treated you so coldly in the hotel room. I was just as confused as you were." Max told her.

"Hey it's okay!" Liz reassured him. "Everyone has their way of dealing with a hangover."

"I guess so. Okay so do you have the directions?"

"Oh right. Um...take exit 55. Then take a left at the stop light. Then......take the first right. The house number is 4111."

"Okay." He answered. He went the directions she told him to and stopped at the house. "Nice place."

"Yea. It's pretty comfy too." Liz opened the door. Max helped her get out in case she got dizzy or something. "I'm good Max. I just need something to eat."

"All right."

"Honey!!!!!!" they heard. Liz saw her mom heading straight towards her. She grabbed her daughter and gave her a huge hug. "Oh my baby is all grown up! Look at you! More beautiful then the last time I saw you."

"Mom..." Liz blushed.

"So who is this handsome friend of yours?" Nancy looked at him. She squinted and gasped. "Max Evans? You're on a road trip with Max Evans?"

"Yeah. It's a long story."

"Well come on in! Do you have any bags with you?"

"I have a duffel bag. I dont' know about Max."

"Yeah I do." He opens the trunk and takes out a small suitcase. They follow Nancy into the house. "Mrs. Parker your house is beautiful."

"It's Nancy to you Max. Don't need to be so formal. And thank you. I decorated it myself."

"Mom, you have anything to eat? We're starving!" Liz smiled. Her mother always had food around.

"Of course! I made your favorite. Lasagna and garlic bread."

"Sounds good." Max said. They headed into the kitchen.



"So Liz, Max, wanna let me in on your little secret?" Nancy asked.

"What secret?" Liz almost choked.

"What in the world are you doing together?"

"Oh that. Well you see, I was hitchhiking in Roswell and Max picked me up. We didn't recognize each other since it's been awhile since I saw Max last."

"Oh. So I assume Max knows about..."

"The company taking over? Yes I do," Max finished. "I honestly think my father is crazy. What will him stepping down accomplish?"

"Same here." Liz added. She looked at her mother. "Why is daddy doing this? I mean he's not that old! He's what, 48?" Liz said eating her lasagna.

"Well....." her mother said. Liz stared at her.

"What are you not telling us?"

"I can't tell you. Your father is already angry at me." Nancy looked down.

"Mom, it can't be that bad."

"Yeah or so you think."

"Then what was that about Jeff Parker and my father having a relaxing time at a baseball game?" Max inquired.

"Oh that. I don't know really. They were trying to work out their differences," Nancy shrugged. "Ever since Diane and I were spending a lot of time together, Jeff hated Phillip more and more. I dont' see why though. Your father is a very nice man. They were so upset at Diane and I. We hadn't done anything wrong. The more upset he got, the more upset I got at him."

"Jeez. So this whole thing is about you and mom being friends?" Max put down his fork.

"Kinda. Then I gave Jeff an ultimatum."


sofia~ thanx for all the feedbackkkkkkkk!!!!! it's greatly appreciated. I'm so glad you all like it!!!!!*angel**bounce*
posted on 28-Oct-2001 5:39:20 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU

"Oh god, I'm gonna be sick!" Liz rushed out of the room into the nearest bathroom. She threw up all of her lasagna. Her mother rushed in and tried to help her.

"Liz honey?"

"She's kinda sick. Last night we had a little too much to drink." Max said.

"Oh dear. Liz sweetie, let's take you to bed."

"I feel so weak."

"Max can you..."

"No problem." He picked her up and took her where Nancy led him. He set her down on the bed and covered her with all the covers. She was very cold.

"I'll be right back," Nancy said. Max sat next to Liz by her bed and rubbed her forehead. She came back in few minutes with a thermometer. "Liz open your mouth." Liz did as she was told. A few minutes later the thermometer beeped. "Hmm...103.5. Well we should let her rest." Nancy said.

"Yeah we should." They go downstairs and start talking again. "Nancy, you were talking before about an ultimatum."

"Oh right. I gave Jeff an ultimatum. I told him if he doesn't stop his foolish ways, I'd leave him. I mean he thinks that I shouldn't be friends with Diane because of his little feud with Phillip. For heaven's sake they went to college together! I told him that he couldn't break the new friendship Diane and I have. I literally told him our marriage would be over if he didn't make amends with Phillip Evans. This has been going on for long enough and it needs to stop."

"Dad and Jeff went to college together? Now this is a interesting twist."

"Not only that, they were best friends.They took the same business courses, studied together, did everything together."

"Woah." Max was definetly surprised.

"So then we had a little get together. Phillip and Diane, me and Jeff. Diane and I yelled at these two idiots for their irrationality. So eventually they started talking. Me and Diane left the room. After two hours we hear them laughing. So we assume that they reconciled. I honestly didn't think they were going to give you two their companies. And I had no idea that Jeff Parker was about to take over the Evans Company. What exactly were they trying to accomplish?" Nancy started taking the plates. Max helped her bring everything into the kitchen. "Oh Max. You dont' have to help. You're a guest."

"No no. It's quite all right. I'm used to doing this at home. Mom always made me help out in the kitchen." The phone started ringing.

"I'll be right back. Hello? Diane! What a surprise."

"Hi Nancy. I'm in town. Can you believe it? I managed to fit time in my schedule to come visit you."

"Oh my! Do you need to be picked up from the airport?"

"I'm not at the airport."

"Where are you?" Nancy asked very confused.

"On your front step." Nancy gasped. She put the phone down and ran to the door. She opened it and hugged her best friend. "Jeez, you can let go of me now."

"Diane! Don't do that to me! Ever!" Nancy said. "Come in! Oh my! I've got a surprise for you." Diane put her things down and walked with her towards the kitchen. Diane then saw a tall, brown haired man washing the dishes.

"Max??????????" Diane almost fainted. She scared the crap out of him.

"Mum!!" Max turned around almost splashing her with water. "You scared the crap out of me!" Max dried his hands and went over to his confused mother and gave her a big hug!

"Max, what are you doing here? I didn't know you knew Nancy."

"I didn't. I just met her today." Max let go of his mother.

"I'm confused even more now." Diane said sitting down on in a chair.

"He came with me." they heard a small voice.

"Liz, dear, are you sure you should be out of bed? It's only been like an hour."

"I'm find mom. Hi, I'm Liz." Liz shook Diane's hand.

"Oh Nancy, she's more beautiful than you told me."

"That was my reaction too."

"I picked Liz up on the highway," Max blurted out. "She was trying to get across country on foot." Liz blushed, obviously embarrassed. Max grinned.

"Shutup. Well it was Maria's car, and she was pre-occupied with Michael."

"Maria and Michael?" Nancy laughed. As did Diane. "Who would've thought."

"Well this is a happy reunion," Diane said. "Max I should be very angry with you!"

"What did I do?" Max asked innocently knowing what his mother was going to yell at him for.

"It's been what, 4 months since you called me! You're father and I have been so worried!" Diane hits him lightly.

"Why dont' we go in the living room and make ourselves comfortable?" Nancy suggested. The four go into the living room and sit down.

"Now start from the beginning," Diane said.

"I was hitchhiking on highway 285 in New Mexico, because I had no car. So I see this Lexus come up, and it was Max. So I go in and we start talking. We stop at a cafe and then it finally dawns on me that I went to school with Max." Liz laughed.

"Then we see all these reporters and they were asking Liz all these questions about Jeff and his decision."

"I was so confused! Then someone handed me a newspaper and I almost bursted into tears!"

"No actually you were just reallly pissed off." Max corrected her.

"Whatever. Then daddy calls me and tells me everything. I received the biggest shock of my life! I was to take over the Evans company! I got off the phone. Talked with Max. Then Maria calls me and Michael calls Max."

"Michael tells me that there's something wrong. And tells me that I'm about to lose my company to Liz. I was also shocked."

"We're just really confused about this situation. Then we head towards Dallas. And now we're here," Liz said. Liz delibretly didn't tell their mothers about hotel incident.

"That's quite a story." Diane said. "Are you two going to do the whole road trip together?"

"Yes." They both answered.

"Well it's always good to have old flames reunite." Diane said.

"Old flames?" Liz's eyes widened.

"Yeah weren't you two in love in high school?" Diane asked very curiously. "From what I heard you two were anyways."

"Well not exactly," Liz said. Max just looked at her with a surprise.



sofia~~~~ thanx for the feedback. I appreciate it.

posted on 28-Oct-2001 9:56:12 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU

Chapter 9

"What do you mean "not exactly" ?" Diane questioned her.

"We barely knew each other. We talked like twice and that was because I managed to collide with him." Liz said embarassedly.

"Oh. Well maybe it was something else." Diane doubted Liz. She knew something went on with them. There had to be. Look at them. They're perfect. "So how long are you two staying here?"

"However long Liz wants to." Max answered.

"I was thinking a few more days and then we can head up north."

"Sounds great."

"Well I don't know about you guys, but I am so tired." Liz yawned. Everyone agreed. They all went into seperate bedrooms and went to bed. Liz stayed awake. She couldnt' fall asleep. 'Why am I getting so sick? I mean, I drank, but is this a side effect? I doubt it. Oh my gosh! What if I'm pregnant?' LIz gasped. She shot up from laying down to a upright position. 'And we didn't use protection! I haven't been on the pill for over a week! Oh my gosh! I think I'm gonna throw up!' Liz rushed to the bathroom and threw up. 'Definetly pregnant.'

"Liz?" Max walked in. " You okay? Oh no. You threw up again?" He went beside her and rubbed her back.

"I think I'm pregnant." She threw up again. Twice after that.

"What?" Max looked at her.

"We probably didn't use protection. I haven't been on the pill for a week." Liz explained. She got up from the crouched position and washed her face.

"Are you sure?" He rubbed his head.

"I'm pretty sure I am. I mean this can't be a normal side effect for a hangover."

"We'll go to the doctor's tomorrow," Max told her.

"You're not angry?" Liz looked at him.

"Why should I be? We were both drunk. There's no one to blame." He told her. "I am a little worried about having a baby, but it's normal."

"Max is having a baby?" a voice said.

"Oh jeez." Liz said. "No Mom. Max is not having a baby, I am!" Liz cried out. Tears started forming in her eyes.

"Oh my baby!" Her mother gave her a hug. "I'm going to be a grandmother! Who's the father? Do I know him?"

"He's standing in this bathroom," Liz managed to say.

"Max? Max is the father? When, where, how?" Her mother let go.

"Can we go somewhere else besides the bathroom?" Liz asked. They all went into Liz's bedroom.

"When, where, how?" her mother repeated.

"Yesterday, Clovis, we were drunk." Liz admitted.

"Now there's an interesting story to tell your baby one day." Her mother tried lightening up the mood.

"Mom!" Liz smiled.

"Well I'm glad that Max is the father. What better man could you ask for?"

"Nancy..."

"Well welcome to the family I guess..." Nancy said.

"Wait a minute! Max and I aren't like together together." Liz said. "We were drunk, had sex, and I got pregnant."

"Well you two are going to raise the baby together right? You will not leave my baby alone right Max?" Nancy asked in a stern voice.

"I wouldnt' dare to leave her alone or my child. I take full responsibility in my actions ma'am." Max felt intimidated by her.

"Good!" Nancy said. "We'll get you to a doctor tomorrow and see what they say." Nancy tucked her daughter and kissed her on the forehead. "It's going to be okay. I promise." Nancy left her daughter alone closing her door on the way knowing her and Max had to talk.

"Do you mean it?" Liz asked softly. "About staying with me?"

"Of course I do Liz." He grabbed her hand. "We're in this together."

"I feel relieved. I thought you would do a dissapearing act on me like other guys probably would."

"I'm not like other guys." Max looked at her.

"This I know." Liz had a urge to kiss him. He was so close to her. His hand fit so well in hers. She looked into his eyes. She felt like she could drown in his eyes. She brought her free hand up to his cheek. "You're too good to be true Max Evans."

"As are you Liz Parker." Max closed the space between their faces and kissed her on the lips. He scooted even more closer to her, his one hand in her hair, his other hand on her stomach. She returned his kisses with extreme passion. She pulled him down so that he was on top of her. "Max.." she moaned as his kisses went down to her throat.

"Liz...*kiss*..you taste *kiss* so good." Max kept planting kisses all over her neck.

"Don't stoooooooooopppp ohhh goddddd. Right there." Max hit her spot. The side of her neck. "You're driving me insane."

"Continue moaning and you'll drive me insane." Max replied.


sofia~
posted on 29-Oct-2001 5:39:45 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU


The next morning....

Max wakes up to find a brunette sleeping on his chest. That was a memorable night, definetly. He brushed away some of the hair from her face and she smiled. She opened her eyes to find Max watching her. "Hi." She said softly.

"Hi."

"You sleep okay?"

"Best in days actually," he replied. "You?"

"Same. I wasn't sure if yesterday was just a dream." She smiled. "Well we should get up. We have to see the doctor." Liz gets up. She feels shy around him so she takes part of the bed covers with her to the bathroom. Twenty minutes Liz comes out of the bathroom, showered, and ready to go. Max takes his shower and they both go downstairs to find Diane and Nancy drinking coffee.

"Good morning," Max said.

"Well good morning father-to-be." Diane said. She gets up and hugs his son. "I'm glad to know you're going to take full responsibility. Now I know I've raised a good son." Liz smiled. She grabbed two cups from the cabinet and poured coffee for the both of them.

"Well I made a doctor's appointment for you Liz. It's in about an hour." Nancy told her.

"Okay."

Everyone eats their breakfast in silence. They go to the hospital and meet with the doctor. Liz was so nervous. Max on the other hand was very calm. His hand was intertwined with Liz's hand. That calmed her down a bit.

"Ms. Parker? Mr. Evans?" The nurse called out. Liz and Max went in. Nancy and Diane followed closely behind.

"Hi Liz. I'm Doctor Greene. What we need to do is run some tests," she told Liz.

"Sure." Liz agreed.

"Would you like the others in the room?"

Liz looked at Nancy, Diane and Max. They knew she wanted to be alone. They all left. Max kissed her lightly before he left. After the doctor took the tests, they all came back in.

"How'd it go?" Max asked.

"It went fine. I'm a little nervous though. Actually a lot nervous!" Liz smiled. "I'm even shaking!" Everyone saw her hand shaking.

"Ms. Parker, I've got some good news or bad news depending on how you look at it." The doctor comes in.

"Yes?" Liz's eyes widen.

"Well it seems that from these tests that you......"



sofia~ thanx for the feedback. this part is a bit shorter than the rest. sorry.

posted on 30-Oct-2001 12:11:40 AM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU

chapter 11

"Well it seems that from these tests that you......are not pregnant." The doctor said. Liz stared at her.

"I'm not?"

"No, after you told me the symptoms and how you drank a little too much. We can only assume it's the flu or alcohol poisoning. We didn't see anything wrong with your body or the blood." Liz looked really pale. "Ms. Parker, are you alright?"

"I'm not pregnant." Liz said with tears forming in her eyes.

"Oh honey," Nancy hugged her distraught daughter. "It'll be okay."

"Yeah. I don't know why I'm acting this way. I mean I should be relieved!" Liz started crying.

"Well I'll leave you alone now." Dr. Greene left the room.

"Can I be alone with Max?" Liz asked.

"Sure honey. We'll be outside if you need us." Diane nodded in agreement with Nancy.

"Max...."

"Shh.." Max took her in his arms. He too had tears in his eyes. A part of him wanted this child. "It'll be okay Liz."

"You're not gonna leave me are you?"

"No of course not. Why would you say that?" He wiped the tears from her face.

"Because you told me you were going to be here for me and the baby. I thought maybe you were just....staying...cuz of the...baby." Liz looked down and away from his face.

"No Liz. I proved to you last night I wasn't going to leave." Max told her.

"This wasn't the way I wanted my first time. I wanted it to be special." Liz blurted out. She was bawling.

"You were...." Max asked very surprised, well not really. Liz wasn't the type that would sleep around.

"Yea, before Holiday Inn I was Virgin Liz." Liz tried to smile.

"Jeez. I feel like a jerk." Max backed away. Liz got up from the bed.

"No it's not your fault. I drank too. I am relieved though. I wouldnt' want to make a child from a careless act, you know?"

"Yeah I do. Are you okay now?"

"I will be. I will be." Liz took his hand. They went outside where their mothers were.

The next few days went by pretty quickly for Liz and Max. They spent their time with their mothers. After a week, they were ready to hit the road again. They hadn't made love since the night before the hospital trip. They wanted to wait.

"Bye mom." Liz hugged her mom. "Thank you for everything."

"Don't thank me young lady. I am your mother. This is what I do." She held on tightly to her daughter.

"Take care of yourself Max." Diane said fixing his collar.

"Yes ma'am." He hugged his mother. "I'll promise to call more often."

"Yeah, you may want to call your sister too. She's pretty pissed off at you."

"Oh boy. Isabel." Max laughed.

"Diane." Liz stood in front of her mother's best friend. "I am so glad to have met you."

"Likewise Liz. You are welcome into my home anytime."

"Max," Nancy said, "I've got something to give you."

"Nancy..."

"No I insist. It was Liz's grandfathers. Since I have no son to pass it on, you'll have to do," Nancy gave him a watch.

"It's wonderful. Thank you for your hospitality." Max hugged her.

"Take care of Liz for me."

"It's good as done." Max said. "Come on Liz."

"BYE!" Everyone said. Max and Liz climbed into the car after putting their things in the back.

"It's been fun, hasn't it?" Liz said. She looked out the window thinking about the last week.

"Yes it has. Liz, are you okay?" Max asked worridly.

"Yea Max, I am. I'm a little disappointed you know? I kinda liked the idea of being a mother." Liz replied sadly. "But it's good that I'm not. I'm 23 years old. I guess that's a little young."

"True. Okay onto a happier topic. Where do you want to go?"

"I've always wanted to go to Colorado." Liz replied.

"Sounds like a plan. My family owns this cottage there. I haven't been there in years."

"Oh sounds real cozy." Liz said.

"It's very secluded. We'll get our privacy. No reporters or anything." Max grinned.

"That would be nice. Max...."

"Hmm?"

"Thank you. If I haven't said it already. Thank you."

"For what?" He asked in surprise.

"For doing this. For staying with me."

"Liz at this point, I'd do anything for you." He squeezed her hand.


sofia~ so there it is. alcohol poisoning. jeez. lame I know. I couldn't think of anything better! I didn't want her to be pregnant...yet..anyways...but I didn't know how to explain why she was getting sick. *happy*

*angel**bounce* thanx for the feedback.
posted on 30-Oct-2001 6:45:55 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU

chapter 12

Though they decided that maybe jumping into a relationship was too fast, they both knew what they felt towards each other. They’re feelings for each other was growing deeper and deeper. Liz dozed off an hour later. Max concentrated on driving because if he didn’t, he knew he’d crash the car. Liz woke up several hours later. She looked at Max. He looked very tired.

“Pull over.” Liz ordered.

“Are you sick again?”

“No! I’m driving.” Liz said. He pulled over and they made the switch. She followed the same road Max was taking before. In a matter of minutes he was fast asleep. ‘Hmm…where the hell are we?’ She then saw a sign saying Amarillo, 10 miles away. ‘Amarillo? We’re still in Texas I assume.’ She looked at the clock and saw that it was 5:45pm. ‘I’ll drive til it gets dark and then we’ll stop.’ She drove past Amarillo and back into New Mexico. Few hours later Max woke up from his sleep. “Hey.”

“Hey.” He rubbed his eyes. “Woah, it’s dark.”

“Good observation Sherlock. Have a good sleep?”

“Yeah. I definetly needed that. Thanks.”

“No problem. I can’t just let you drive the whole way. We’re in New Mexico. We should be getting into Colorado soon. Where is this cottage?”

“All the way up in Boulder. Think we can make it without stopping?” Max asked.

“Sure. I can pull an all nighter, the question is can you?” She challenged him.

“But of course. I had to in college, it can’t be any different.” He replied back. He heard her stomach grumbling. “Hungry much?” he asked.

“Yes. I’m starving. I’ll just pull into that café over there. It looks nice enough.” Liz said. She pulled into the café and parked. “Let’s go.”

“How many?” a lady asked.

“Two.” Max replied.

“Right this way. Oh just to let you know, there is this real rowdy couple sitting near you.”

“Oh that’s fine.” Liz said. “If I can handle Maria, then I can handle anything.” Liz told Max.


“Ria, why are we here again?”

“I’m hungry spaceboy!” She replied.

“Well you could’ve eaten at that other restaurant.” He said.

“Mikey, Mikey, Mikey, I don’t eat seafood!” She shook her head.

“You don’t know what you’re missing.”

“Oh shutup. This place is cute.”

“Yeah, okay.” He rolled his eyes.

“Don’t you roll your eyes at me mister!”

“Shhh! Can you keep it down?” a voice said.

“Sorry.” Michael replied. “Please excuse my girlfriend’s rowdiness.” Michael grinned.

“Michael!” Maria said embarrassed.

“MARIA?” they heard.


Liz sat down and looked around the café. She saw someone very familiar yelling at someone not so familiar. “MARIA?” Liz yelled.

“Maria?” Max asked confused.

“Liz?????????????????” Maria got up and ran to her best friend. “What in the world???”

“What are you doing here???” Liz asked.

“You first.”

“Max and I just stopped to get something to eat.”

“Oh Max and you.”

“Yes. Now answer my question.”

“Michael and I decided to leave California. We’re going somewhere up north. Boulder or something. Something about a cottage. Who was I to interfere with a romantic time at a cottage somewhere in Colorado?” Maria grinned.

“Maria Deluca?” Max Evans got up. He almost choked from shock.

“Max Evans. Wow, looking good Max.” Maria hugged him.

“Maxwell? What the hell are you doing here, and hugging my girlfriend?” A voice said behind them.

“Michael!” Max jumped.

“And who is this?” Michael pointed to Liz.

“And you say I’m rude.” Maria smirked.

Liz looked at Michael and circled him. “He’s gotten taller. Better hair. Still rude. Same attitude.” Liz said outloud. “Still cute.”

“Hey leave my man alone.” Maria wrapped her arms around Michael’s waist. “Find yourself another man, oh sorry you already did.” Maria grinned.

“Again, who are you?”

“Elizabeth Parker. Just call me Liz,” Liz raised her hand to shake his hand. Michael’s eyes looked as if they were going pop out.

“Liz Parker? The bitch that’s supposed to take over your company?” Michael looked at Max.

“Yea…that would be me.”

“What the hell are you doing with her?” Michael glared at Liz.

“Let’s sit down.” Max said. They went over to a four person table. “I picked her up.”

“Picked her up?”

“I was hitchhiking, he picked me up.” Liz said.

“And you realized this is the person who was to take over your company?”

“Yeah, we found out later that day.” Max replied.

“What can I get you?” a waitress came.

“Spaghetti with meatballs,” Maria answered.

“Same here,” Liz said.

“BBQ chicken and breaded shrimp,” Michael answered.

“Same here,” Max replied.

“Okay.” She said and left.

“And you’re not pissed off?” Michael questioned him.

“Why should I be? She’s not signing those papers any time soon. My company isn’t going to be hers anytime soon.”

“Oh dear, they haven’t heard,” Maria said rubbing her head.

“Heard what?” Liz and Max said at the same time.


Sofia~ thanx for the feedback. y'all are too kind.
*angel*
posted on 30-Oct-2001 11:44:17 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU


chapter 13


"So is it working?" a gentleman asked another.

"From my sources, they are getting along great." he responded. "More than great. They seem to be *very* close." he laughs.

"Good. Good. The plan is working great. In no time these two companies will be bigger than any company in history. Well next to Microsoft, but..we're working up there." he laughed.

"Poor Liz and Max, they think Liz is taking over the company." the other gentleman smiled as he sat in his leather chair in the board meeting room.

"Well I was hoping they would grow closer in high school, but it just didn't seem like they were heading in that direction I wanted them to."

"Yes same here. I was hoping with Liz and Max together, I could take over your company, with all of her help. They seemed to have stayed clear from each other. It certainly can't be because of the age difference. I know Max too well. He had a eye on her. But anyways, now that we are working together, I can tell our plans together are going to work more.

"Most certainly. I'm just sorry it took us this long to reconcile. After college, I was pissed off at you. You just took off!"

"Yes and that was a bad move on my part." he replied. "But we're in the present now."

"The only two people that know about our plan is Maria DeLuca and Michael Guerin. I've told Maria and Michael to tell Max and Liz false statements. Hoping that it will cause them more time to spend with each other."

"Are you sure you can trust Maria? That girl blabs everything out, or so I heard, from Michael." He laughed.

"Well let's just hope they don't tell. That's what I'm counting on. Plus from what your telling me about Max and Liz, they should be gettin closer and closer each day. Nancy tells me that they're going to your cottage in Boulder?"

"Ahh, our nice cottage. Not really a cottage, it can fit about thirty people, but yes, that's where they are going. I gave Michael and Maria the key. I told them to get out there before Max and Liz do. Hopefully nothing happens before then." Phillip Evans rests his head.

"I think we shall let fate take over now. It was fate that put Liz on that road for hitchhiking."

"No Jeff. It was you and I who put Maria and Michael together causing Liz to hitchhike across country," Phillip laughed.

"True true. I propose a toast," Jeff Parker lifts up his wine. "To Max and Liz, may they end up together happy."

"To Max and Liz!" They click their glasses.


sofia~





posted on 31-Oct-2001 12:45:08 AM by firegoddess16
hey everyone! thanx for feedbacking me! I greatly appreciate it! I'm having trouble with deciding in which direction I should have this story go in. if anyone can give me ideas on what I can add...I would appreciate it. I have so many ideas but the way I'm writing this story, they all just get tossed away! *happy*

I would appreciate any ideas!!!!! my email is angel4ever016⊕hotmail.com. you can either email me, bmail me or write ideas on this thread!! thank you!!!


sofia~
posted on 31-Oct-2001 8:00:52 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU


part 14

"Heard what?" Max repeated.

"You guys look surprised. I mean eveyrone's heard of the rumors. They are rumors right?" Michael asked. He was a very good actor, Maria thought.

"What rumors?"

"Oh you know how the press likes to make everything so huge. I didn't think it was true, but seeing as you two are together...." Maria rambled.

"What? Me and Max aren't together together," Liz said. "Not yet at least."

"Oh good, so you aren't married?" Maria raised her eyebrow.

"Where'd you get a idea like that?"

"My mistake Beth and Max DeLuca." Maria laughed. Liz and Max stared at them.

"How..how..how'd you hear about that?" Liz managed to ask.

"Oh we have our ways," Michael said. "It was all over the news. I guess the hotel people knew who you two were."

"I feel like an idiot now," Liz said embarrasedly.

"Hey, I think everyone knew you two wanted to keep your "private" life private." Maria winked at Liz.

"Oh I think I also heard that these two people in the same hotel in the honeymoon suite were having loud monkey sex. Didn't you hear that Maria?" Michael looked at Maria who was craking up.

"Loud monkey sex?" Max said. "That's how the press put it?"

"No, that's how the hotel management put it." Maria said.

"Jeez we must have been really loud." Liz said.

"What do you mean must have? You don't know if you were?"

"Well, we kinda don't remember that night too well." Max answered.

"Here we are. Two BBQ chicken with breaded shrimp, and two spaggeti with meatballs." the waitress handed their food. "If you need anything, just let me know."

"You don't remember? Well, Ms. Perfect Parker must've gotten drunk." Maria grinned.

"Yeah shutup! This wouldn't have happened if you didn't leave me for Michael!" Liz said.

"I couldn't just leave him."

"Michael ditched Max too.Yeesh, you two are so bad."

"Dad gave you the key to the cottage didn't he?" Max asked out of the blue.

"Yea so?"

"Great! It'll be a foursome!" Maria squealed. Everyone looked at her. "Not that way! Jeez, get your minds out of the gutter! I'm kinky, but I'm not thaaaatt kinky!" Everyone laughed.

"Well the cottage is big enough," Michael said.

"What, that thirty people cottage? That's not big enough!" Maria said sarcastically.

"Thirty people?" Liz looked at Max. He shrugged.

"Like I said, I haven't been there for a while."

"A while? Jeez, you can't even remember how big it is. I'd say it was more than a while." Maria said.

"Shutup."

"So what are you guys doing in Colardo? Isn't New York east?" Michael said as he ate his meal.

"Liz wanted to go to Colorado."

"And your cottage came up how?"

"Michael!" Maria whaked him in the shoulder. "Probably wanted to save money."

"Why? They're both rich!"

Max's cell phone went off.

"Hello?"

"Where the hell are you? What are you doing? Why haven't you called me!?!?? I've been worried sick."

"Hey. I'm sorry! I was going to call you tonight. I just ran into Michael. And Maria."

"Maria, maria who?" she asked.

"DeLuca."

"Maria Deluca? What are Michael and Maria doing together. Didn't they like hate each other in high school. Cuz if I can remember correctly, they fought and fought and fought, and fought."

"Jeez. Where was I when this happened? Michael and Maria, getting it on in the Eraser room in high school. Wow!" Max said. Michael and Maria choke. Maria spits out her soda that she was drinking and Michael chokes on his food. Liz looked at Michael and Maria.

"Maria, why didn't you ever tell me you had a thang for Michael?" Liz smiled.

"What?" the voice said on the phone. "What happened. I didn't say that!"

"I'm joking. I was trying get a rise out of Michael and Maria, after what they put me and Liz through."

"Liz? Who is this Liz? I demand to know who this Liz is!"

"Calm down!"

"Liz who? And if this is the same Liz you were drooling over in high school, then God help me."

"It's that Liz."

"What are you doing with Liz?" the voice shreaked.

"We're on a road trip together. That's all!" Max was getting irritated.

"Oh." the voice calmed down.

"Since when are you all up in my business?"

"Since you haven't called me in like months!"

"Wait...like I'm perfect. You never call me either."

"So. Big brothers are supposed to call their little sisters!"


sofia~ that was my attempt to make the story more funny. hehe. please tell me if it was lame. I dont' know how to do comedy! hehe.




posted on 1-Nov-2001 10:13:43 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU

Chapter 15

"So what's actually going on with you and Max?" Maria said in the car. Maria and Liz decided to go in Maria's car, while Max and Michael went into Max's.

"Nothing." Liz lied.

"Liz, I can tell when your lying."

"It's complicated."

"Oh is it? You saw him again about a week and half ago after five years, and it's already complicated?"

"Things happened." Liz purposely gave short answers.

"Such as..."

"Sleeping together," Liz answered. "And not remembering the whole night."

"Yeah I can see how things got complicated after that."

"It's not that Maria. It's just...that was my first time." Maria's eyes widened.

"Your first time? I assumed you had done it with Kyle."

"No. Kyle and I...we wern't much of anything. And then Sean...eww...why did I date him? He was stupid. Max was my first Maria."

"Isn't that what you wanted anyways?" Maria carefully followed Max.

"In high school. I wanted Max to love me. I wanted to share things with him."

"You still can."

"Things are different. We're different people."

"I see how he looks at you, Liz. And let me tell you, his looks tell that he is so infatuated with you."

"His eyes tell nothing." Liz sighed.

"You love him don't you?" Maria said pulling up to a cottage.

"I guess I do."

Meanwhile...as Maria and Liz talked.....Max and Michael talked.

"So what exactly is going on between you and Liz?" Michael asked.

"What do you mean?"

"Are you two together?"

"No." He said rather quickly.

"Maxwell.."

"Michael. We slept together. And we don't even remember what happened."

"So...."

"It's complicated ok?"

"How complicated could it be?" Michael asked as Max drove.

"I see her after five years. And we sleep together the same night."

"I see." Michael was confused.

"The next day, Liz got sick. I mean real sick. That night we thought she was pregnant."

"Liz is pregnant?"

"No. The doctor's said she wasn't."

"And that's why it's so complicated."

"Yea. I mean my old feelings for her are returning and they're returning fast."

"You may love her again?"

"I don't know. All I know is that these feelings I have towards her are really familiar."

"Gee Max, you don't say. You had a thing for Liz since you were sophmore."

"Yea I know. And if she ever found out..."

"Would that be such a bad thing? Cuz I swear from the looks that she was giving you, it looked like she was gonna jump you any second." Michael smiled.

"That night we made love again," Max blurted out.

"After you guys figured out that she may be pregnant?"

"Yea." Max said pulling up to a cottage. "Not a word to Maria."


"Not a word to Michael." Liz said as she got out and got her things from Max's car. "This place is beautiful. Look at the moon. It's shining so brightly you can see all the snow."

"Yeah it is beautiful." Max said as he looked at her. She didn't notice. Michael and Maria did. They smiled. Their plan was working perfectly. Michael needed to talk to Maria. After all, he just found out some interesting news about his best friend. "Liz, did you bring enough clothes?"

"Yea. I had lots of clothes at mom's house. I just packed some of it. Don't worry." Liz smiled. Max opened the cottage and they all stepped in. Maria's and Liz's mouth dropped. "Oh..my...god." Liz said. Max and Michael smiled.

"Wow!" Maria dropped her things. They all took of their shoes so they wouldn't get the floors all muddy. Liz grabbed Maria's hand and started walking through the house.

"We're gonna get lost in this place. Oh my god! Look Maria," Liz pointed to the stair case. Maria laughed. Typical. Liz gets a amusement out of the spiral staircase. Max and Michael take amusement out of Maria's and Liz's excitement.

"Man, it's as if they're in a new world." Michael said. "I'd thought Liz would be used to this kind of stuff."

"Liz's family doesn't like flaunting their money." Max said.

"Oh."

"Yea." They then heard two screams. They laugh again. "They saw the master bedroom and bathroom."

"They're like teenagers again."



"AHHHHHHHHHHH! OH MY GOSH!!!!" Liz screamed. She looks at the master bedroom. That bed looked big enought to hold like five people. And the bathroom. What more could she say? The jacuzzi was huge!!!!

"Oh wow!" Maria came in after she heard Liz's scream. The room was a light blue. The carpet was white. The furniture was all cherry wood. Liz opened the curtains and saw the most amazing view. The view of the mountains. She saw the moon light hitting the slopes. She saw pine trees everywhere making the place more magical then it already is. After about twenty minutes of looking around the girls went to find the guys. They saw them asleep in the couches. Liz and Maria smiled. Maria saw two blankets on the shelf and tossed on to Liz. Liz covered Max and just as she was about to leave he grabbed her hand. He opened his eyes and looked at her.

"Thanks. But I'm still awake," Max grinned.

Michael grabbed Maria and pulled her down to him. They started making out.

"Get a room," Liz rolled her eyes.

"Gladly," Maria and Michael ran upstairs to find the nearest room.

"So what do you think of the place?" Max asked.

"This is so amazing! It's gorgeous."

"Yeah it is. Isabel and I loved staying here."

"Isabel. I haven't seen Isabel for five years. She was mine and Maria's best..."

"Friend. Yeah I know."

'Ding dong.' the door bell rang.

"Who could that be?" Max asked. He looked down at his watch. It read 2:15am." He went down the hall and opened the door. He was suddenly pushed by a certain blonde.

"Get out of the way!!! It's freezing out there! Alex! Are you coming?"

"Yea yea yea, I'm coming," Alex said. He was having a hard enough time with her bags, all four suitcases. "Izzy, couldn't you have packed lightly?"

"That is lightly!" Isabel said. Max took some suitcases from Alex. "Max!" Isabel just threw herself at her brother. Max dropped the suitcases and hugged his sister.

"Good to see you too Izzy," Max grinned. "Why are you here?" he asked after he hugged her.

"I asked daddy if I could stay here and he's like sure. I asked him if anyone was going to be here, and he said no. But we came and we saw two cars parked. I'm surprised as much as you are."

"Hey Max." a voice said.

"Hey Alex." they shake hands.

"Max? Who is...oh." Liz stops in the middle of her question. Isabel starts grinning like an idiot and runs to Liz. They hug each other tightly. "Oh my god. Isabel, it's you. It's really you."

"Lizzzzzzz! Oh I'm so happy to see you." Isabel has tears in her eyes. "This is Alex."

"Hi Alex. I'm Liz." they shake hands.

"Where's Michael?"

"Getting it on with Maria." Max snickered.

"Hey!" Maria said coming down the stairs. "We heard that. And no we were not getting it on."

"Uh huh." Liz rolled her eyes. Liz was waiting for Maria's reaction. A second later Maria screamed.

"OH MY GOD! Isabel Evans you get you butt right here." Maria said. Isabel walked over and hugged Maria.

"Maria. Same old Maria." They let of the hug. "This is Alex."

"Hi. I'm Maria."

"I'm Alex, Isabel's boyfriend."

"Izzy." Michael said. "Aren't you going to hug me?" Michael pouted.

"Michael." Isabel hugged him. "So you and Ria huh?"

"Yeah." he scratched his head. "Alex, good to see you again." They shake hands.

"Likewise. Isabel, this place is absolutely gorgeous." Alex finally got the chance to look around. His mouth was wide open.

"Hey, that was Liz and Maria's reaction too. Although they were screaming all over the place." Michael laughed.

"Shutup." Liz and Maria said.

"Well, I'm gonna take my things, and go to bed. I am sooooo tired!" Liz said.

"Don't take the first bedroom on the left. That's the bedroom I always sleep in. Max's bedroom is the one across. You can sleep there." Isabel winked at Max. Liz turned from pink to red.





sofia~ phew...this was a long part. hope y'all like it. thanx for the feedback.

posted on 2-Nov-2001 9:54:00 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU


chapter 16....

The next morning...

Liz woke up and was frozen. She was so cold!!!!! "Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!" She screamed forgetting where she was.

"You can say that again." Maria said coming in her room. She was wearing jeans and a warm sweater.

"Where am I?" Maria started laughing. "What?"

"We're in Boulder hun."

"Oh. Now I remember." Liz said. "I'm gonna take a long hottttt bath!" Liz said. She walked into the bathroom, closed the doors, and turned on the bath tub. She brushed her teeth and then shut off the water. She put her foot in. Perfect. She put some of the liquid stuff she always uses in the water. It makes her skin nice and smooth. She steps in and sits down. "Ahhhh. Now this is what I call relaxing." She closed her eyes and started thinking of Max. Mmmm Max. She smiled. All of a sudden the door opened and Max stepped in. Liz was almost asleep that she didn't even notice Max coming in. Max didn't notice Liz either. Max was too tired and started to brush his teeth. Liz opened her eyes when she heard water running. She almost jumped out of the tub. Almost. She smiled. Nice ass. Max turned around when he started getting hit with water. He stared at her not knowing what to say.

"Um...sorry. I didn't even notice you in here," he quickly turned around.

"No worries Max. There isn't anything you haven't seen." Liz smiled. What was she doing?

"Uh well..I'll get let you finish your bath." Max was about to leave.

"You can stay and do whatever you need to."

"I was going to take a shower, actually."

"By all means...take one." Liz grinned. The shower was right across the bathtub. Max stared at Liz. Liz stared at Max. And Maria comes walking in.

"Oh my bad. Sorry." Maria left.

"I promise I won't look." Liz grinned. "It's not like I haven't seen any part of you."

Max looked down obviously embarrased.

"Max...I'm joking. Dont' take a shower if you dont' want to. I was kidding around." 'No I'm not.' "I'm almost done. I just needed to warm myself up."

"Okay." He left the bathroom in a hurry.

"That was fun." Liz smiled. After eight more minutes in the tub, she dried herself and put her clothes on. "The bathroom is all yours." She told Max.

"Yeah thanks." She went downstairs and heard two different voices.


"So, Liz was almost pregnant?!?!" Maria said.

"Yea. And they had sex again that night."

"Hmm..." What hmmmm? Liz thought. "I just walked in on them in the bathroom." Maria shifted the way she was sitting on the chair.

"And what exactly were they doing?" Michael raised an eyebrow.

"Oh the usual, staring at each other, although Liz was in the bathtub and you could practically see her naked." Liz grinned. "It was a moment."

"Yeah, well. They better get together quickly."

"Yeah I know. If joe and shmoe ever find out that they're going slower than snails, it's the end of us."

"Joe and Shmoe?" Michael asked knowing who she was talking about.

"Code names stupid." Maria rolled her eyes.

'Code names? What the hell is going on?' Liz wondered.

"Well, we just can't let Liz and Max know. It'll be the end of us. This whole thing is supposed to bring them together and all. The whole merging thing."

"MERGE???????? WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TWO TALKING ABOUT? AND I DEMAND SOME ANSWERS RIGHT NOW!" Liz screamed on the top of her lungs. Michael and Maria looked shock.

"Oh no." they both said.

sofia~

thanx for the feedback. I'm glad y'all are enjoying it.
posted on 4-Nov-2001 6:46:35 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU

chapter 17

They sat in silence for a few minutes. Liz was furious. What the hell were they talking about?

"I"M WAITING!!!!!" Liz screamed again causing Max, Isabel, and Alex to rush down from whatever they were doing.

"What's going on?" Max asked.

"Well, it seems to me that Maria and Michael are working for a Joe and Shmoe trying to merge us. And I believe Joe and Shmore are daddy and Phillip."

"Merge? I thought it was a takeover."

"Yeah me too. So it's ending up that we're merging our companies. I'm not taking over." Liz explained. "Want to explain yourselves?"

"No not really," Maria mumbled. There was no way of getting out of this situation.

"Fine, you want it that way." Liz went to a phone and dialed her fathers phone number. "Jeff Parker please."

"Okay okay, we'll talk." Michael said. Michael and Maria were definetly afraid of what Jeff and Phillip would do to them. Eveyrone sat down at the dining table.

"We were set up by Jeff and Phillip." Maria started. "They are the reason why Michael and I are together."

"What does this have to do with merging?" Liz was obviously getting impatient.

"Calm down Liz. They're trying to explain," Max said.

"They told us to ditch Liz and Max. So we did. I have Liz the idea of going by herself back to New York."

"I made sure that Max would find Liz on the way." Michael said.

"How?" Liz asked.

"We have our ways. Anyways, when we found out that Max had picked up Liz, we reported that to Jeff and Phillip. And we were supposed to get to the so called cottage before you two had." Maria said.

"We got a little side tracked," Michael smiled.

"And what about this merging thing?" Liz asked still very angry.

"Oh right that. It was a hoax. It was never a takeover. It's always been a merge. Jeff and Phillip just wanted you two to get close."

"How close?" Isabel raised her eyebrow.

"Very close. Very very very close." Maria said. "But I told them it would be no problem seeing how Liz and Max had some sort of relationship in high school."

"You two were dating?" Isabel asked.

"No! I barely knew Max."

"Mmmm hmmmm. Liz everytime I saw you, you were either staring.."

"Okay. That's enough Maria." Liz said obviously embarassed.

"No, I'd really like to hear what she has to say." Alex opened his big mouth. Liz looked at him with a desperate looking saying no no no no.

"Me too," Max grinned.

"Well, everytime I saw Liz, she was either staring at Max or day dreaming about Max." Maria smiled. Liz grew even more embarassed.

"Maxwell wasn't any better. "Liz this and Liz that." Michael said. Max turned red.

"So it was obvious that our job wasn't going to be very hard." Maria said.

"So this thing was a setup? Why those two sneaky fathers of ours!" Liz said.

"I can't believe them."

"Oh I can." Isabel said. "Dad was hoping Liz would become your girlfriend all through high school. He was hoping Liz would spill all of Mr. Parkers secrets." Liz looked shocked. Max looked shocked.

"I am so...so....so....I can't even describe how I'm feeling," Liz said slamming the chair into the table. She walked off in anger. "And to think, my best friend had something to do with this," they all heard her mumble.

"I'll go talk to her." Max said.

"That would be wise." Michael said.

"Shutup. You aren't getting out this easily. Neither are you Maria. Neither are our fathers. Wait til I get my hands on them!" Max rushed out of there.

Max went into Liz's room and found her laughing. She was laughing so hard that tears were forming in her eyes. This was causing Max to laugh.

"Why are you laughing?"

"This whole thing. This whole plan of theirs. It's just so funny. They're making such great efforts." Liz laughed. "I can't believe they did that to us. To think, Phillip Evans wanted me to date you so I can give him the family secrets. How ridiculous does that sound?"

"What for you to date me or for you to give him the family secrets?" Max calmed down a bit.

"To give him the family secrets. I mean us dating isn't that ridiculous, is it?" Liz looked hopeful.

"No. So Parker, you were holding out on me in high school eh?" Max sat down next to her. Liz slapped him on the arm.

"So were you Evans! So were you! You could've come up to me and asked me out."

"Yeah, but then my reputation would've been ruined as player of the class of 1993." Liz hit him again.

"That was mean." They both laughed.

"What are we going to do with our little matchmakers downstairs?"

"Grill 'em."

"You know. Forget about this. Let's go skiing." Liz grabbed Max's hand. "Please???" Liz make her sad face that Max couldn't resist.

"With that face, how can I resist?" Liz smiled and hugged him.

"And you're going to teach me!!!"

"Oh no."


sofia~~~~ thanx for the feedback.


posted on 5-Nov-2001 7:26:48 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU


"Liz?" Maria came into her room. It was empty. "Max?" she went into his room, it was also empty. "Hmm."

"What's going on?" Michael asked.

"Max and Liz aren't here."

"Yeah they're probably still pissed at us. I bet they just went to cool off or something."

"Yeah I suppose your right."



"Noooooooo!!!!! Liz, not like that!!!! You're gonna fall on your...." Liz fell on her ass.

"Aww man! I've been trying this for hours and I still can't get it!" Liz looked like she was about to burst into tears.

"Liz, you don't become perfect over night." Max grinned. He helped her up.

"I'm finished with skiing." She starts to take off her skis. And heads back to the lodge from where they got it from. Half hour later, they head back to the cottage. Max is ahead of her. She picks up some snow, and makes it into a ball and hits Max right in the head. He turns around and she runs behind a tree.

"Liz. I'm gonna get you." He runs towards her and starts throwing snowballs at her. She throws them back and they launch a full war at each other. Soon they're back at the 'cottage' and still throwing snow at each other.

"What's going on?" Isabel asked coming from inside with her jacket and gloves on.

"ISABEL!" Liz starts throwing snowballs at Isabel and Alex who comes out and is totally unprepared.

"HEY! That wasn't fair!" Alex and Isabel throw back. They're all having such a good time throwing snowballs at each other. Michael and Maria come out.

"Can we join?"

"Hmmm? How about a no? First *hits her with a snowball* you sneak behind my back and work with my father. Second *Hits her again* you set this whole thing up. Third * Hits her a third time* I am soo mad at you!" Liz continues to throw snowballs at Maria. Max throws them at Michael.

"Jeez. We said we're sorry!"

"Well you shouldn't have gone along with it!" Liz said pretending to be very angry.

'My god she's a great actress.' Max thought. Then he felt snow on his face. "Hey!" Isabel laughed. Max starts chasing Isabel as Liz continues to hit Maria who's trying her best to hit her back, but is not very successful. Michael's trying to hold back his laughter. Liz sees this and starts hitting him with snowballs.

"You think this is funny? Well you got a lot coming to you." Liz starts throwing massive amounts of snowballs at Michael. "There! You spiky haired no good traitor!"

Maria runs towards Liz and takes her down. "I'm sorry."

"No you aren't!" Liz pushes her down into the snow. Liz gets up but then Maria trips her.

"Oopss." Maria laughs.

"Maria!"

"Now how can you be mad at your best friend?" Maria asked helping Liz up.

"Easily!" Liz said trying not to smile.

"I see it! You're trying not to smile. Lizzzzzzzzz, I did it for your own good!"

"Izzzyyyy, get back here!" Max screamed.

"Haha. Max you're getting too old." Isabel said. The next thing she knew she was being tackled by Alex.

"But I'm not." Alex said kissing her silly.

"Alex....! You're supposed to be on my side. Mmmm..." Isabel smiled.

"Get a room!" Max rolled his eyes.

"Hey man, I'm sorry. It wasn't my idea."

"Michael."

"Seriously. I tried backing out. You know your father. He was all serious on me. He scares me sometimes, Max."

"Yea yea yea, whatever. I forgive you I guess."

"It was for your own good you know."

"Yeah okay."

Inside the house later when everyone took hot showers to warm themselves up....everyone sat down in the living room area. Alex and Isabel were cuddling together as were Michael and Maria. There left Max and Liz who were at opposite ends staring at each other.

"God, I feel like I'm in high school again." Maria laughed.


Sofia~
posted on 10-Nov-2001 2:40:22 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU

chapter 19....

The next morning....

"Liz, hon. What are you going to do about Max?" Maria questioned her. "He's going to be worried."

"I don't know. I just have to get out of here. I need to be alone." Liz quietly said so no one would hear her. It was 4 in the morning and Liz was leaving.

"Well, I shouldn't let you do this. But I'm going to anyways." Maria said. "This is wrong. You and him belong together."

"Maybe we do. Maybe we don't. He just confuses me more. I mean after we slept together the second time it was though he was staying because of the baby. And now...he hasn't even touched me, not even a single gesture." Liz sighed.

"Men. They can be such morans sometimes."

"Here." Liz took out a package from her duffel bag.

"What's this?"

"Your birthday gift." Liz smiled. "You thought I'd forget didn't you? I got it before I left, and I was going to give it to you after I saw you in New York, but seeing as you are here with me...." Liz rambled. She had gotten her a picture frame of herself and Maria at a party they went to together. "Oh and there's a little something inside of the frame. Dont' open it until I leave okay?"

"Lizzzzz!" Maria said. She hugged her best friend. They walked out of Liz's bedroom very quietly and went downstairs. Everyone was asleep, or so they thought. Liz put on her shoes, grabbed her things and took off. She got into Maria's car, turned it on and left.

"Damnit." Liz hit the staring wheel. "Why did I leave?"

"You wanted to get away I assume." a voice said. Liz jumped from her seat almost crashing the car.

"Damnit."

"You already said that."

"How the hell did you get in here?" Liz asked angrily.

"I heard you were gonna leave."

"From????"

"Who do you think?"

"Damnit!" Liz hit her stearing wheel again.

"That's three times. Does she dare and say it once more?"

"Don't tempt me! I was supposed to get away from this!! Be on my own!! Nooooo you had to come and follow me."

"Yeah and Maria's actually gonna let you go across country by yourself! Are you nuts?"

"Well she did it once."

"Yeah well she knew that a certain someone was going to pick you up. I still dont' know how she and Michael set the whole thing up." He asked. He was still laying down in the back of Maria's jeep.

"I don't think they actually explained that to us. I'm still angry with you!" Liz said. "Do you even have your stuff with you?"

"What do you think? Maria told me you were going to leave after you told her last night."

"Damnit. I can't really trust her can I? I should've told Alex or something. At least I can trust him."

"You shouldn't be driving when you're angry. It's not a good idea. You could get into a car accident."

"Don't tell me what to do! The only reason you stayed with me in the first place was because you thought I was going to have your baby! And now that I'm not, I don't know why you're staying with me!"

"Jeez Liz. Is that all you think of me? You think I stuck by you because you might have been pregnant? You thought that those words that came out of mouth that night weren't real? Those words I said at the hospital? You though that I didn't mean any of it?" Max sat up straight. He was getting angry.

"You're a guy. What am I supposed to think? How do I know you're not the same guy in high school? The same guy that went from one girl to another girl? The player? The guy who slept with every girl in the school?"

"Every girl in the school?" Max was getting even more irratated. "That's exaggerating. I didn't sleep with every girl. I didn't sleep with you did I?"

"No you didn't. But you just about did the half the girl population in our school Freshmans, sophmores, juniors, and seniors. Who knows you could've been a pervert sleeping with a 14 year year old." She squeezed the stearing wheel as tight as she could. Her knuckles were turning white.

"So I fooled around in high school. At least I had a social life." Max replied.

"I had a social life. I had friends that I could count on. Friends who would be there for me whenever I needed them. You were surrounded by a bunch of jocks who had a brain size of a pea and the memory of a fish."

Max sat quietly for a few minutes. He was shocked. Where did all her anger come from? "I didn't sleep with any girl in high school." He said.

"What?"

"I fooled around. I never slept with any of them."

"What why?"

"There was only one person I had ever wanted to be with."

"And who would that be? Tess?" Liz snickered.

"I only wanted to be with you Liz. I had fallen in love with you then, and I have fallen in love with you all over again."


sofia~ thanx for the feedback. I hope you all like this new part.
posted on 10-Nov-2001 5:26:55 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU

from chapter 19.....

"I only wanted to be with you Liz. I had fallen in love with you then, and I have fallen in love with you all over again."

chapter 20

She heard those words and she stopped the car at the side of the road. Coincedentally, there was a perfect spot to park where she could over look the city and watch the sunrise. She looked at him. He looked back at her. She turned the car off. She got out of the car. She waited for him to get out. He also got out. She took his hand and locked it with hers. She led him to the front of the car and sat on the car. "Liz..."

"Shhhh...." she put a finger to his lips. He sat down next to her and took her in his arms. They sat in silence for twenty minutes just taking in the view. "Beautiful." She finally said.

"Yea, it is." He responded. They sat in silence for another twenty minutes.

"I love you too you know." She blurted out. There was no better time. They were alone. And she meant it. "I don't think I ever stopped. You were my first love, and my only. I never thought a guy like you would look at someone like me in high school."

"But I did see you. I watched you everyday. Loved you even more." He held her tighter. His back was resting up against the windshield. Liz was sitting in between his legs. He was holding her by her waist. She leaned her head back onto his shoulder.

"I'm sorry about what I said in the car. I was angry."

"Yea. I'm sorry too." He have her a sweet kiss on her cheek.

"You do realize we're falling into our crazy father's plan, don't you?"

"Uh huh. What exactly are we going to do with them?"

"Nothing." they heard two voices. Liz and Max got up from the position they were in. They slid off the jeep and turned around to see Jeff Parker and Phillip Evans.

"Daddy? Mr. Evans?" Liz asked confused. "What are you doing here?"

"Yes do share." Max crossed his arms.

"Now now, don't get angry with us." Phillip said.

"Angry? Dont' get angry? We're passed that. We're furious with you two!" Max cried out. "What you did was...manipulative...and deceiving...and just plain wrong."

"Are you saying you don't love Liz?" Jeff raised his eyebrow.

"No, you're putting words in my mouth. I never said that." Max said.

"How did you know we were here, at this exact point?" Liz questioned.

"We had Alex put a microchip and a hidden camera in Maria's jeep." Jeff admitted. Liz's mouth dropped open.

"Oh my god! Dad!!!! What in the world are you doing?"

"Maria and Michael played their parts so well." Phillip added in.

"This is unbelievable!!!" Max said.

"Calm down Max." they heard another voice. It was a female's voice.

"You too Liz." another woman's voice.

"YOU WERE IN ON THIS!?!?!?!?!? MOTHER!" Max screamed.

"We're sorry we're sorry!" Nancy said.

"I am never talking to the either of you ever again!" Liz said angrily. "Mom, how could you do this? It was just wrong. What the hell were you thinking?"

"I was thinking that my daughter needed someone who would take care of her. Kyle was no good for you, and Sean, he was hitting you. I didnt' want you hurt anymore." Nancy said. Max's eyes grew wide.

"And Max, you were no better off either. You started seeing that Tess girl again. She was a whore of pete's sake. And that Courtney girl....you could do better. And Liz is perfect for you."

"Don't butt into my love life! It's none of your business!!!" Liz screamed. "I am 22 years old. I am going into residency to be a doctor!!!!"

"I don't need your help Mother. My love life is also off limits to you." Max turned his back to his mother.

"Where is it?" Liz asked her father. "Where is the microchip and video camera? Where did he put it? When I get my hands on Alex Whitman...he's a dead man!" Liz screamed. She went into the car and started searching frantically. She was shaking. She was so angry. She felt a pair of hands grab her waist.

"Liz." Max said.

"Let go of me!" Liz freed herself from Max's grasp. She grabbed her cell phone. Punched in Maria's cell phone number.

"Hello?" Maria said.

"You fucking bitch." Liz said.

"Liz?"

"How dare you do this to me! How dare you!!!!!! And getting Alex to put a microchip and video camera in the car?? You were supposed to be my friend. What kind of friend does this??? You told Alex that I was leaving. You told him and he magically had a microchip and video camera lying around. They were part of this weren't they? THE WHOLE TIME THEY WERE PART OF THIS CONSPIRACY!?" Liz screamed.

"I'm sorry Liz. This was for the best. You and Max belong together."

"Says who?"

"Says just about everyone in the goddamn nation!" Maria screamed. "Your mom and dad, and Max's parents went through a whole lot to get you together."

"We didn't ask them to! Maria Deluca, I cannot believe you helped him. What a friend you are!" Liz hung up. Tears were running down her eyes. "What if this whole thing didn't work? What then? What were you planning?" Liz asked calmly as possible.

"We don't know. We were taking this one step at a time."

"One step at a time my ass! You were taking five steps at a time." Liz said.

"Liz calm down." Max said. "They were only trying to do what was best for us."

"Meddling with my luv life doesn't count as trying to do what was best for me."

"If they didn't do this, we wouldn't have seen each other again. Fall in love." He said. "Is that what you want? Us not to be together?"

"No, it's not what I want. They could've just said, 'Liz I want you to meet this guy. Go out with him a few times. See what you think.' " Liz said.

"You still would've yelled if we went with that approach!" Jeff said. "You are so stubborn sometimes. I don't know where you get it from."

"Oh really?" Nancy said.

"Okay okay. You get it from me. You still wouldn't have listened."

"Well we'll never know now." Liz said.

"We're sorry. Terribly sorry." Diane and Nancy said.

"We'll do anything to make it up to you." Jeff said.

"Anything?" Liz questioned. "You promise?"

"Yes. We promise."

"I want you to.........."



sofia~ okay this was a looooooooongggg part....at least I thought so.

posted on 12-Nov-2001 11:17:02 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU


"I want you to take the business back." Liz said bluntly. "I don't want it. Keep it. Give it to someone else. Merge by yourselves! I want to be left alone. I want to live my own life. I want everyone to stay out of my luv life...well not Max...but every one else! TAKE THE BUSINESS BACK. I DON'T WANT IT!"

"Liz...we can't do that."

"A deal is a deal," Liz said.

"Exactly. We resigned. Everything is left to you and Max."

"I can't believe this. You just said that you'd do anything I wanted. And you can't even do this little thing?" Liz said getting angry.

"I'm sorry honey." Nancy said.

"All my dreams and my hopes, all down the drains. I suppose I could try this whole business thing." Liz sighed falling into Max's arms. "But...this doesn't mean I'm not angry with you all."

"Okay so when do we need to be in New York?" Max asked holding Liz's waist.

"In two months I would say." Jeff said.

"Okay. Well, Max and I plan to go wander the rest of this country BY OURSELVES! DO YOU UNDERSTAND?? ALONE! WITH NO ONE ELSE! I'm gonna find that bug and take it out." Liz muttered the last part.

"The video camera is behind the clock...and the microchip is placed inside the glove compartment." Diane answered.

"Thank you from saving me all that trouble." Liz said. "And I actually mean it." Liz said sincerely. She walked around for a few minutes thinking to herself. She couldn't leave here being mad at her parents and Diane and Phillip. Of course she had the right to be royally pissed off. She looked at Max. He was laughing with his parents. He seemed to have gotten over this situation pretty fast. Then she saw him look at her and give her one of his smiles. Should she forgive her parents? It was wrong of them wasn't it? She wouldn't have met Max again. Max.....oh she could go on and on about him.

"Mom, daddy?" Liz said.

"Yeah?" they turn their heads.

"I forgive you." She said bluntly. "Next time I won't be this kind. What you did was just...."

"Wrong, idiotic...stupid."

"No, I was going to say weird and crazy, but those work as well." Liz smiled. That was probably the first smile of the day. She hugged her parents. And then Diane grabbed her for another hug. "Okay...we are going to be going now."

"Yeah we should take off." Max agreed with her. They all said their goodbyes.

"Soooo where do we go from here?" Liz asks Max.

"I don't know. Where do you want to go?" Max asked.

"I'm not talking about destination Max. I'm talking about us." Liz grinned as she drove on.

"Let's just take it day by day." Max said.

"Day by day." Liz repeated. "I can do that."


sofia~ that part had to be soo lame. I dunno. I like a forgiving LIZ and MAX...dont' ask me why.

posted on 27-Nov-2001 10:56:36 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU

chapter 22???

"Liz, promise me you'll answer me this question." Max said in a serious voice.

"Okay Max. I promise." Liz said not knowing what he was going to ask.

"What did Sean do to you?" Max asked. Liz remained silent. She drove and remained silent. "Liz?"

"I don't want to talk about it."

"Liz, answer me this."

"NO!" she cried out. "I dont' want to relive the memories, the pain."

"Liz just tell me!"

"Max..dont' push it."

"Liz..I'm only trying to help."

"Well this wont' help me. It's over. He's in jail. He's gone. He won't ever bother me."

"Did he go to our high school?"

"No. He was Maria's cousin." She told him. "I dont' even know why I dated him. I guess after Kyle, I was lonely and desperate. I needed that feeling of being with someone again. It was great the first few weeks. He treated me great! But then he started being very violent."

"How so?"

"He pushed me down stairs, he took his belt and whipped me. He did much more. He told me that if I ever told anyone, he would kill me personally." tears were rolling down her face. She had to pull over again. She didn't want to crash. "He was out of town one weekend, and Maria came over. She saw the brusies and the whip marks. She questioned me about them. I tried lying, but I couldn't. I just broke down in front of her. We went to the police. They were waiting for him the day he came home. I remember his face when he looked at me. He mouthed "I'm going to kill you." I was so scared Max." Liz broke down again. "I still have nightmares. The marks are almost gone." She cried even more.

"Shhhh...no one is going to hurt you now. I wont' let them. You hear me? No one will ever hurt you." He took her in his arms and tried soothing her.

"He promised me the same thing. They all did. They all hurt me. They all broke my heart." Liz pushed him away. "You'll do the same. Everyone always does. First Kyle, then Sean, and then you will."

"No Liz. I am not like them. I love you. I will always love you. I will never push you away." he told her. "Come on. Let me drive." Max got out of the car. He went to the other side to help her out. He took her to the back and had her lay down.

"Don't leave me. Please dont' leave me." Liz told him.

"I'm not going anywhere." Max reassured her. He closed the door and took the driver's seat. He drove off hoping to find a station so they can eat.


sofia~
posted on 30-Dec-2001 8:41:18 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU

chapter 23...I think. NEW CHAPTER!! FINALLY!!!!!! go me! lol.

2 months later......

"So I sign here and here?" Liz asked.

"And here, here, here and here," Jeff answered as his daughter signed the contracts.

"Good gracious, I didn't think it would take this long." Liz sighed.

"May I present....PARKER-EVANS CORPORATION!" Phillip yelled. There were cheering and there was clapping. Everyone seemed to be happy. Liz looked at her parents and then her new partner, Max. He gave her his million dollar smile. Liz was so utterly happy with Max. Her fears about him leaving her all disappeared into thin air. She knew that he would never hurt her like she had been in the past.

"Liz? Liz?" a voice said.

"Hmm? What?" Liz fell out of her trance.

"Hey. Are you okay?"

"Yeah I'm fine." Liz smiled. "Thanks for asking Isabel."

"I was a little worried there. You were spacing out for awhile."

"Yeah I tend to do that a lot lately." Liz smiled. Liz looked at everyone at the party. There were so many people, she suddenly felt nervous. She saw Maria and Michael chatting up a storm with Max. She saw Alex just hanging around. Her parents were laughing and enjoying themselves with the Evans'. She suddenly felt a chill crawl up her body. She had goosebumps everywhere. She turned around to see a shadow at the terrace. She excused herself from Isabel and walked closer to take a better look. The shadow started walking further away. She knew she should stop but she walked closwer and closer. She went outside and saw no one.

"I told you I'd come after you!" she heard someone whisper in her ear.

"No! Let go of me!!!" Liz screamed.

"You're mine Liz. You'll always be mine." He tightened his grip on her.

"MAXXXXX!!!!!!"

"He can't here you. There are so many people in there." He slammed the door to the party shut. "No one can hear you my precious."

"Sean let go of me!" Liz screamed. "MAXXX HELP ME!! SOMEONE HELP!!!!!"

"Now don't do that." He held her tighter. His hand ran up her right thigh and his other hand up her stomach.

"STOP! Please stop!" Liz said crying.

"You'll pay for what you did to me," he yelled and slapped her in the face. She then kneed him in the groin and punched him to the ground. She went to the door and started banging on it.

"Max!!! Max!!!!!" She yelled. She continously banged until someone opened the door. Liz felt a hand reach from the backside. She turned around and kicked him in the chest. She shut the door and ran straight to Max. "Max!!!!" She flung herself onto him. Everyone stared at her and then stared outside.

"Liz! Liz, what happened?" He held her.

"He's back. He's back." She repeated. "He's back." She started crying even more.

"Liz?" Maria said. Maria then saw him. She saw her cousin. She went over to him and kneed him. "How's that for a family welcome. You are not wanted here Sean. No one invited you. Just leave her alone. Leave us all alone!" Maria cried. Just then, security came and arrested Sean.

"You're mine Liz! You'll always be mine!! I'm going to get you! I will make you mine permenantly!" He screamed.

Liz buried her face in Max's neck. "He's back. He's back."

"I'm so sorry Liz. I'm sorry I wasn't there to protect you. Baby, I'm so sorry." Max held on to her.

"You promised. You promised me." She shoved him. "You promised me you wouldn't let him hurt me! You promised!!!!!" She ran. She ran past her family, she ran past everyone. She ran down the stairs of the new company building, and ran out the building.



sofia~~ that's not the last of Sean. trust me. sorry it's taken me soooo long for a new part. thanx for the feedback. it is always appreciated! ALWAYS!!!!!
posted on 25-Jan-2002 7:31:09 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU

chapter 24. yayyyyyyyy new part! thank you all for the feedback!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


"LIZ!!!!" Max ran after here. "Liz!!!!!" He headed outside. He saw her running away. He chased after her. He was running until he hit something, more like someone. "I'm sorry." Max tried helping the person.

"Stay away from her." the voice said.

"Who are you?"

"Stay away from my Liz. She's mine. She'll always be mine. You can't steal her away from me. Stay away or I will come after you."

"Is that a threat Sean?" Max asked.

"No, it's a promise. If she comes running back into your arms, I will come kill you, you and everyone else that she loves dearly, one by one."

"Even your own family?"

"Even Maria if I have to. That dumb clutz doesn't know anything." Max punched Sean. Sean rubbed his cheek. "That was a bad mistake Evans." Sean pulled out his gun. "Give me one good reason that I shouldn't kill you. Why I shouldn't blow your fucking brains out? You took her away from me."

"She was never yours in the first place you dumbass!" Max said.

"What the fuck did you just say?" Sean's hand was on the trigger. "One more word and I'll shoot you."

"Go ahead!" Max dared to say.

"Nooooooooo." they both heard. Their heads turned around and saw Liz standing there.

"Liz, go! Get away from here!" Max yelled.

"Sean, put the gun down!" Liz screamed.

"Liz, just run!"

"It's too late for your protection Max." Liz said. "Sean, don't do this. Do YOU want to end up in jail again? Put the damn gun down."

Sean did as he was told. He walked over to Liz. "Are you ready to go precious?" He nibbled at her ear.

"Sean...can I say my proper goodbye to Max?" Liz gave him her famous pout.

"Fine. I'll be waiting over there. If you make a move on her, I'll kill you! She's mine. She always has been. Look who she chose now!" Sean laughed as he walked away.

"Liz, what the fuck are you doing?" Max whispered. Liz started laughing. Max looked at her all confused.

"Begging is not going to get you anywhere." Liz said loud enought for Sean to hear. "You moran, I'm trying to help you here. Dont' worry. I've got Sean right where I want him." Liz whispered.

"Liz, this is too dangerous."

"Max, I know what I'm doing."

"How, how the hell do you know?"

"Max, I'm an undercover cop." Liz said. "I have no time to explain. I will call you when I get the chance." Max nodded. "I love you."

"I love you too. Be careful, please be careful." Max said he bent down to kiss her. He kissed her and she slapped him. She mouthed 'I'm sorry.'

"Don't you dare kiss me Max Evans! You are no longer privaleged to kiss me. That's Sean's job now. Goodbye Max. I hope to never see you again!" Liz stormed off looking very angry. She went over to Sean and walked off with him.


sofia~ so what do you think? good bad stupid?????
posted on 3-May-2002 10:27:38 PM by firegoddess16
Title: Hitchhiking
Rating: Pg-13 or pg-14
Summary: where’s the fun if I tell you what the story’s about? lol!
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters from the show.
Couples: ML and others. CC AU

chapter 24 revision. I didn't like the old chapter 24. it just really changed the plot around and it was just bad.

NEW CHAPTER 24....


"LIZ!!!!" Max ran after here. "Liz!!!!!" He headed outside. He saw her running away. He chased after her. He was running until he hit something, more like someone. "I'm sorry." Max tried helping the person.

"Stay away from her." the voice said.

"Who are you?"

"Stay away from my Liz. She's mine. She'll always be mine. You can't steal her away from me. Stay away or I will come after you."

"Is that a threat Sean?" Max asked.

"No, it's a promise. If she comes running back into your arms, I will come kill you, you and everyone else that she loves dearly, one by one."

"Even your own family?"

"Even Maria if I have to. That dumb clutz doesn't know anything." Max punched Sean. Sean rubbed his cheek. "That was a bad mistake Evans." Sean pulled out his gun. "Give me one good reason that I shouldn't kill you. Why I shouldn't blow your fucking brains out? You took her away from me."

"She was never yours in the first place you dumbass!" Max said.

"What the fuck did you just say?" Sean's hand was on the trigger. "One more word and I'll shoot you."

"Go ahead!" Max dared to say.

"Nooooooooo." they both heard. Their heads turned around and saw Liz standing there.

"Liz, go! Get away from here!" Max yelled.

"Sean, put the gun down!" Liz screamed.

"Liz, just run!"

"It's too late for your protection Max." Liz said. "Sean, don't do this. Do YOU want to end up in jail again? Put the damn gun down."

Sean did as he was told. He walked over to Liz. "Are you ready to go precious?" He nibbled at her ear.

"Sean...can I say my proper goodbye to Max?" Liz gave him her famous pout.

"Fine. I'll be waiting over there. If you make a move on her, I'll kill you! She's mine. She always has been. Look who she chose now!" Sean laughed as he walked away.

"Liz, what the fuck are you doing?" Max whispered. Liz started laughing. Max looked at her all confused.

"Begging is not going to get you anywhere." Liz said loud enought for Sean to hear. "You moran, I'm trying to help you here. Dont' worry. I've got Sean right where I want him." Liz whispered.

"Liz, this is too dangerous."

"Max, I know what I'm doing. Trust me," Liz assured him. "Tell my mom and dad I love them. And I love you." Liz whispered.

"Liz! How can I keep contact with you?"

"I'll keep contact with you. Bye Mr. Evans," Liz said loud enough for Sean to hear. "I suggest you don't come after me if you know what's good for ya."



"So Sean, where we going?" Liz chewed on her gum.

"Oh, not that far. I still gotz to get my revenge on your family." Sean groaned. "They will suffer as much as I have."

"I totally understand ya babe." Liz said looking out the window. She touched her purse and felt her gun. She smiled.

"What're you smiling at beautiful?"

"You should've seen Max's face. It was priceless. He's like a helpless puppy that I can't help but adoring."

"Yeah well get over it. Your mine."

"Of course. I wouldn't want it any other way," Liz smiled with a smirk on her face. 'This is going to be way to easy.' "Hey Sean, can we stop at that hotel? I'm tired from all this crap."

"Anything you want babe." Sean pulled into the nearest hotel. Liz got out and let Sean walk a few steps ahead. She pulled out her gun and hit him in the head. Before he had the chance to get his gun, she grabbed it from him.

"Look who's the idiot now Sean." Was all Liz said before kicking him in the face and knocking him out.


Sofia~

please dont' hate me because it took forever to get a new part out. I promise the next part will be out reallllly sooon. (as soon as I figure out where this story is heading.) I wanna let y'all know that I write this spontaneously. no thoughts beforehand. I just type and type. lol. oh well. if it sux, let me know. but I really do appreciate all the feedback I've gotten. *big* *angel* *bounce*

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posted on 3-Jan-2003 11:23:06 PM by firegoddess16
Hey everyone! Wow, it's been SOOOO long since I even looked at this!!! OMG! I just finished reading my story...lol, and I'm not sure if I'm going to finish it or not. what do you all think?!?

sofia~