posted on 31-Aug-2002 9:11:36 PM by Lil_AZnChiCa13
Title: Awakened
Rating: PG13 thu R
Summary: Liz is new in town and meets Zan and Max, twin brothers. Both brothers fall in love with her, but then she goes to colege in Cali, and neva sees Zan and Max till 4 years afta.
Pairing: M/L Z/L
Disclaimer: Dun own nthing. Song is by Mandy Moore.
AN: My first story!!!!!~

Part One. Liz’s POV


I'll always remember
It was late afternoon
It lasted forever
And ended too soon
You were all by yourself
Staring up at a dark gray sky
I was changed

In places no one would find
All your feelings so deep inside (deep inside)
It was then that I realized
That forever was in your eyes
The moment I saw you cry

The moment that I saw you cry

It was late in september
And I've seen you before (and you were)
You were always the cold one
But I was never that sure
You were all by yourself
Staring at a dark gray sky
I was changed

In places no one would find
All your feelings so deep inside (deep inside)
It was then that I realized
That forever was in your eyes
The moment I saw you cry

I wanted to hold you
I wanted to make it go away
I wanted to know you
I wanted to make your everything, all right....

I'll always remember...
It was late afternoon...
In places no one would find...

In places no one would find
All your feelings so deep inside (deep inside)
It was then that I realized
That forever was in your eyes
The moment I saw you cry

Song by Mandy Moore

I stare at the two twin boys with a dazed expression. They are staring with the same expression back at me.

So fate has brought us back together.

4 Years Earlier.

“ Lizzie!! Neighbors are here!!!!”

Damn. This town was overly friendly. So far 4 families visited my family and me for the past 5 minutes.

We are just so damn popular.

I trudge down the stairs in my cropped top and capris to see a family of fours. Theyre were the mother and father, both talkin to my parents, wavin their hands demonstratin something.

There were 2 boys, bout 17 looking restless and bored. Well thas how I felt. Bored. Bored. Bored. Well, im looking at the backs of their heads so….

None of them noticed me yet.

I go down.

“ Ahem”

I think I startled them. One of the boys jump at the sound of my voice.

Holy shit.

They both look bak.

They are h.o.t hott!!!!!

One of them looks overly preppy tho. Striped yellow and black shirt. Khakis. Still very hott. The other one catches my eye tho.

The other one had spiked hair with his tips dyed magenta. Clad in a wife beater and baggy shorts, you could see his chest and abs very well. And he had tatoos up his arms and his eyebrow was pierced. Hott!!!!~

My Versace sunglasses slide down to the end of my nose, and I could see htem better.

“ Hello. My name is Max. “

egh. Way to formal.

“ Wassup gurl? Hows u doin? My name ova herre in Zan.”

Now thas more like it.

“ Hey. Wassup to u too. May name is Liz.”

“ Oh Lizzie!!! Your down. Well you better change into your bathing suit!”

Bathing suit?

“ The Evans are havin a pool party, and your invited!!!”

welll damn, this family works fast. Too friendly. What if I was an ax-murdeor or somthin??

“ um… ok. I guess.”

I wave goodbye to Max, and go to Zan and told him to meet me there.

And then I run up the stairs to find a bikini to knock their boxers off.

I like this town. A lot.

posted on 1-Sep-2002 10:59:56 PM by Lil_AZnChiCa13
do anyone read this fic??????? *sad*
posted on 3-Sep-2002 8:25:45 PM by Lil_AZnChiCa13
Guess what its my story so yall can do wuteva yalll want in yours. NO offense to yall, but yall make yall story all sappy. And in the tv series their love is not that great. And Liz does not have "big doe eyes"*big*
posted on 15-Sep-2002 10:11:39 AM by Lil_AZnChiCa13
Part 2


Why did it hav to be a pool party?

I look awful in a bathing suit. No I mean it. My hips stick out.

Eww. Once Max and Zan see me they are gonna be blinded. Scarred. Never gonna look at me ever again.

Eww. Gross. I wouldn’t even want to look at myself.


Okay…. Im ova it. You see I hav these weird mood swings. Im ova it.

Now lets see………. What bathing suit should I wear?

Im standing over my suitcase…. Youd think Id have time to put everything up but nooo to many nosy neighbors not that I mind…


Im standing ova my suitcase, and look thrumy dozens oif bathing suits.

I finally pick a flaming red numba. Yep….. they wil be hangin all ova me.

I go outside to go find girls already hangin ova Max and Zan. They are twins too. Figures.

Uh huh.

There is a chica all ova Max, wearing a…… One-piece!?!?? Who wears those? Ok. Now im staring at Max. Holy Shit. Look at him. Wowza. Who knew all that was under his perfectly ironed polo shirt!?

Anyway there is another chica that was all ova Zan to. Clingy much? Anyway… she is showing way to much skin. Wayyy to much. I think im gonna go blind. Anyway I look at zan and wow. Same exact build as Max, but his had tatoos all ova him. Well I dunno bout all ova………. Ack. Naughty thoughts.


They havent noticed me yet. Prolly cnat breathe cuz the 2 ::bimbos:: had their double d chests rite up in their faces.

Anyway…. I go up and go to the waters edge near Max. I sit down on the edge, my legs spread, my body leaning toward Max’s ear.

“ Havin fun?”

yep. There goes my sexy line. LOL. Im laughing my head off at the look that Max egets on his face. And the look or um glare that the chica gives me… Pricelless.

I look at Zan, but he is staring at me. Rude much?

Anyway, I get up and gracefully dive in too tehir deep pool. I swear its like 10 feet deep.

I go ova to zan, his eyes still on me, and Splash him.

Uh oh.

He moved out the way just in time. Uh oh.

I soaked the chica.

Oh shit. She looks madd.

Uh oh.

I laugh nervously, and She looks really bad with her bleached hair all wet.

“ You bitch!!!!!”

she flings herself on me,

I did not expect this.

But I can take her down.

After living in La for 3 years, I learned a helluva lot of thing.

Lets see I have a black belt in every martial arts that u can name, can flip a 175 guy ova my shoulder the works.

This lil girl will be so sry she eva messed wit me.

Ok her nail are like diggin into my skin.,


That hurts.

Okay tha treally hurts.

This bitch is goin down.

I grab her hand and fling her ova me.


Shes heavy!

What does she eat!?!?!??!?!?!?

Zan and Max stare at me, a weird expresion on their faces.

“ Ima black belt.”

“ oh.”

But hten sumthing more unexpected happens.


Oh shit.

ZAN IS GOIMNG DOWN!!!!!!~~~~~~~~

I try to splash Zan, but hit Max. and max tries to hit me, but hits thegirl that was hangin all ova him. And I finally hit Zan, but he grabs me and flings mee ova his shoulders, and Max flings the girl that was hangin all ova him and we begin to chicken fight.


Max is kinda teetering. She must be heavy to.

Lucky for Max, I weigh exactly 110 lbs.

No fat on me. All muscle. And that is exactly what Zan is and Max is too.

Id make a good couple wit one of them.


Where did that come from.

Anywya… I won!

It was so damn easy.




The girl fell and hooked on to my top, and I fell into the water topless. Oh shit.

posted on 17-Sep-2002 5:33:49 PM by Lil_AZnChiCa13
no ones answering. boo hooo. Oh well.... I liek this fic. So im gonna post more evn tho yall dun like it!!!!~~*sad*
posted on 18-Sep-2002 8:36:20 PM by Lil_AZnChiCa13
dont wry. Max will get some lovin too!!~~~*bounce*