posted on 3-Sep-2002 5:33:03 PM by mg_ros
Title: Goodbye To You

Author: Mg_Ros & Sixela

Summary: Liz makes a wish and changes her life.

Disclaimer: I do not own Roswell because if I did it would still be on the air. It belongs to Melinda Metz and Darth Katims.


Liz ran up the stairs to her room. She avoided the looks her parents had given her and the questions they had asked. All Liz wanted right now was to be alone. Alone in her room where she could cry. The last 24 hours had been hell. They found out Tess had killed Alex. But before that Max had told her that he and Tess had spent the night together and that she was now pregnant with his son. Tears escaped her eyes when she thought of it. It was her fault. All of it. Alex being dead, Max and Tess, Tess being a traitor. It was all her fault. She changed the future. She made it this way. She wished so hard she could change it back. Liz looked at all the pictures around her room, all of the candid shots of herself, Max, Maria, Alex and the rest of the gang. They were all so happy in them. She wanted it to be like that again. She wished she could go back. She slipped through her window out to the balcony. She reached in and brought out her blanket. She pulled the blanket around herself and lied down on the lawn chair. She looked up at the stars. The stars were shining so bright tonight. Then she saw it, a shooting star. And she made her wish.

‘I wish I was never shot at the Crashdown.’

~mg_ros & Sixela

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posted on 3-Sep-2002 7:14:27 PM by mg_ros
OKay I know I know this story probably sucks but this is somehthing we wanted to do to have fun. It was actually supposed to be an idea for a Roswell episode.

Chapter 1

Liz woke up on the lawn chair. Her back was killing her. She didn’t care. It didn’t really matter. She could stay here all day because it was now summer and that meant no school…

“Liz you’re gonna be late for school!” Nancy Parker yelled.

‘What? School? But school ended.’

Liz got up and went into the bathroom. She glanced at the mirror and did a double take.

“What?” she whispered.

She looked….


Her hair was shorter and she looked so much younger. She walked out still dazed and then her eyes looked at her calendar.


How long has she been asleep?

But wait something was strange about the calendar and yet it was familiar somehow. The year. It couldn’t be. No way. The year was 1999.


Liz couldn’t believe it. She waked down the halls of West Roswell High. Everything was the same but different. It was 1999. This was when it all happened. This was when she was the happiest. Was this a dream? It had to be. Then a familiar face caught her eye. Max Evans. She smiled as she saw him walk down the hallway. And she was almost positive that he saw he too. Then she felt a tap on her shoulder and turned around.


Tear formed in her eyes but she pushed them away. It was Alex!!! Her Alex!!!

“Oh my gosh”

She hugged him so tight. She hadn’t seen him in so long. She needed to keep him safe.

“Liz….air…” Alex managed to get out.

Liz pulled away and just stared at him.

“Liz? You okay? You look like you haven’t seen me in weeks.”

“I haven’t.” she whispered.


Just then Maria popped her head in between the two.

“Liz you okay? I like called you 42 times yesterday.”

“Why wouldn’t I be?”

“Well because of you know…the shooting.” She whispered.

Just then Liz’s face went blank….

‘The shooting happened?’

“I have to….go to the…bathroom. I’ll see you guys later..”

“Is she okay?” Maria asked.

“I don’t know…” Alex said.


Liz raced into the bathroom. She went into the stall and lifted up her shirt. If the shooting had been yesterday then she would have a handprint…right? She hadn’t seen one this morning but then again she wasn’t really paying attention. She lifted up her shirt and looked down. Nothing.

‘But how?’

Then it came to her. Her wish had come true….

~mg_ros and Sixela

posted on 3-Sep-2002 11:51:50 PM by mg_ros
Chapter 2

Liz slipped out of the stall and over to the sink. She looked in the mirror. She was 16 again. She was 18-year-old Liz in 16-year-old Liz’s body.

‘But wait! How can this be? This is not logical.’

Then she stopped herself. When has life in the last two years been logical? The bell rang and she made it to her Biology Class. Then she saw him. A grin appeared and so did a slight crimson on her face. She was blushing just by looking at him! She took her seat right next to him. She was so close to him. She just wanted him to turn her to face him and kiss her like there was no tomorrow. But of course that would never happen. This was Secret-Keeping Max. But wait! She knew! How would she tell him?

‘The same he told me.’

Through out the whole class Liz kept glancing towards Max. She couldn’t help it. Maybe he would notice. Yeah then maybe he would say something. All she wanted was to hear his voice.

“----the tube”

Liz shook out of her thoughts.


He smiled.

“Could you pass the tube?”

She smiled back. Though it was a little seductive.

‘Damn! Hope he didn’t see that.’

She handed him the tube and there was an instant connection. Stars and Stars and then it happened.


“ Liz, LIZ! You have to look at me. You have to look at me.”

Liz weakly looks at him, and he puts his hand over the bullet wound, we see images of Liz as a child, Max sighs and when he takes his hand away, the wound is healed

“You're all right now. You're all right.”

“ You broke a bottle when you fell, spilled ketchup on yourself. Don't say anything please.”


Liz lets go, but she keeps a straight face.

‘Oh God what if Max saw that? It didn’t happen! Can this get any worse?’

The bell rang and Liz hurried to catch up with Max.

“Max! Max! Wait Up! Excuse Me. Excuse me.”

She ran up to Max and pulled him to the side.

He looked surprised yet calm. He looked at her with those deep eyes. She could look at them forever. But now wasn’t the time. She needed him. Not in that way! She needed his help. He was the only one that she trusted.

“Was is it Liz?”

“We need to talk.”

‘Was it the flash?’ Max wondered, ‘What was that anyway?’

She pulled in the Band Room and saw Kyle playing the drums.

“Kyle!” Liz said.

“ Hey!”

“ Hey!”

‘I don’t need this.’ Liz thought.

“Hey Max.”

“ Hey.”

Kyle turned back to Liz.

“So'd you get my message?”

‘This all to familiar, but I have to play along.’

“Oh yea, I did. I was uh, just a little....”

“Shaken up.”

“That's what it was.”

“I know, my dad told me about the gun goin' off. You okay?”

‘Oh my God! This happened. This exact conversation happened! Okay Liz just say everything you said that day and you’ll be fine.’

“Oh, yea I am, it was just load and then it was over.”

“So you guys are...??”

“Um, we're looking for a study, for our Bio midterm.”

“Oh right. Right okay, Biology. All right, I was leavin' anyway.”

“Great, um, that's good.”

“Oh, I got my costume for the crash this Friday it's great----”

“ Kyle. We've gotta study. Sorry.”

“ Right. See ya Max.”

“'re going out with the Sheriff's son?”

“Um, yea. Well, it's kind of like this, this casual...”

‘What am I doing? Get to the point!’

“Okay, Max. Can we just focus here for one minute please?”

“Liz? Are you okay?”

Liz put her hand on the stool. She was feeling a little dizzy. That didn’t matter. Max needed to know.

“Max….I know.”

Max was confused.

“Know what?”

“That you’re a…a…a Czechoslovakian.”

“Huh? Liz, are you okay.”

Liz put her hand on her head.

‘This harder than I thought.’

“Ummm well I know that you’re ‘Not Of This Earth’. There I said it. Man that was really weird. Now I know how it was for you.”

Max didn’t even hear the last part of what she said. He was still hooked on that she knew. Liz Parker the girl that he was in love with knew that he was an alien. And she didn’t feel weird around him, or so he could tell.

“How…how long have you known and how did you find out.”

“Umm okay here comes another doosey. Well as you know I’m Liz and well I’m not actually Liz.”

“What do you mean?”

This was getting stranger by the minute.

“Well I’m not from around her either. I’m not an alien but I’m not from this time. I know this is so sudden. But from where I’m from we’re really close and when I woke up here and realized I was in the Twilight Zone I knew that I needed to tell you. I can’t tell Maria or Alex. Cause now your life is in my hands and….”

Before she could finish Liz collapsed on the ground. It was black but she could hear Max calling her name, but then there was nothing.

Enjoy! Evil Laugh

~mg_ros and Sixela

*tongue* *happy**wink*

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posted on 4-Sep-2002 12:50:32 AM by mg_ros
~*Author's Note*~

Yes here it is the boring Author's Note. if you are reading my other fic "Naughty n' Nice" Then you know that on the 7th I will be leaving for a week. My other fic will have one more update but this one (since I'm having so much fun with it!) will have 2 more updates before I leave. And expect to have an update right when I get back. I have lots of ideas for this story that I know with be exciting so I hope to share them with you guys very soon. Have fun reading this and thank you for all the feedback so fast. I really hope you enjoy this story!

~mg_ros *tongue*
posted on 4-Sep-2002 4:44:51 PM by mg_ros
*Author's Note*

I know that I said that was going to post two more Chapters I looked at my schedule and I noticed that I wouldn't have time. I'm sorry. I still have to think about my other fic! So don't be mad I do thought promise a part when I return!

Chapter 3

“Liz! LIZ!”

‘God. What am I gonna do. Well she knows anyway.’

Max put his hands on each side of Liz’s face.

“Liz, you have to look at me.”

Liz’s eyes-only slightly fluttered open, but it was enough to make a connection.


Liz in a cupcake dress

*Flash, Flash, Flash

“I just wanted to keep you warm.”


“I’ve been waiting for this a long time.”


“Because if I don’t go right now… things are going to change.”

“Change how?”

“I’m gonna have to touch your hair…because it’s so soft and then I’d have to tell you that no matter what we go through it’s all worth while for me because we’re together.”

“And then?”

“And then… I’d have to do this…”


“Max, the day that you saved my life, your life just ended.”

“No, that was the day my life began. Liz, when I was in that room, and they did what they did to me. You're what kept me alive. The thought of you. The way your eyes look into mine. Your smile. The touch of your skin. Your lips. Knowing you has made me human. Whether I die tomorrow or fifty years from now, my destiny is the same: it's you. I want to be with you, Liz. I love you.”

“I love You.”


All the flashes were coming so quickly now. They stood out form each other. His sister, Michael, Alex, Maria, and a blonde girl he had never seen before then one stood out from them all. It was him, but and older him. He told Liz that she needed to make Present Max fall out of love with her.

‘I’ll never fall out of love with her.’ Max thought.

Then the connection broke. Liz’s eyes fluttered open in amazement. He had done it again. Saved her life. She had no idea what the hell had just happened, but she knew that he had brought her back. Liz just lied there staring at him. They both looked into each other’s eyes. Then the gaze broke. Max got up and handed his hand out to Liz. She took it and he helped her up.

“Maybe I should take you home.”

“Yeah maybe that’s a good idea.”

Max walked Liz to the Jeep and kept a good eye on her. He didn’t know what had happened but he knew that he didn’t want it to happen again. Max parked beside Liz’s balcony so her parents wouldn’t know that she was home. Max go out and ran quickly to Liz side.

“Max, I’m okay now.”

“Yeah, but still…”

“Fine. I know how you get when you make up your mind.”

Max followed her up the ladder and on to her balcony. He stood there as she sat down on the lawn chair.

“Liz, when I healed you I saw things…”


“Yeah, and I saw a lot things. And I know that you’re not lying. Your not from around here.”

“Yeah…but I don’t care. I like it so much better here, with you.”

Max smiled and his hand wiped his neck.

“Max, what is it?”

“It’s just that when I look at you. My stomach turns into a knot. But Liz I saw something. It was me, but from the future. And the things that he said. I want you to know that I would never fall out of love with you. I mean in all those flashes I felt what you felt when you saw me and were around me. And I never thought anyone could ever feel that way about me.”

He looked at Liz.

“Am I sounding like a total dork?”

“No. Max, that whole thing with Future Max…. it worked. I mean you did….fall out of love with me.”

“That’s impossible Liz. That would never happen in a million years. How do you even know that was me? I mean number 1 it looked like Isabel dressed me, number 2 the hair, I would never do that and number three, I would never put you in that position.”


Max walked up to the lawn chair and crouched right in front of her. The faces were millimeters apart.

“I would never do that to you.”

Liz’s face began to get closer to his but then out of the corner of her eye she saw someone standing in her room. Someone from her time. Liz pulled back and peered into her window.


~mg_ros and Sixela

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posted on 5-Sep-2002 1:53:37 PM by mg_ros
Okay, so I felt bad in telljg you that I wouldn't be able to post another part. So I know it's kinda short but it was the best I could do on short notice. I'll be back in a week with a brand new part. You guys can count on that.

So what you've been waiting for:

Chapter 4


Isabel smiled.

“Liz I finally got to you. I almost go through before but something happened I lost the connection. Something interfered.”

“So when I collapsed that was you.”


“Why are you here. How did you get here?”

“I dream walked you of course. Liz you need to wake up! Things at home are really bad. Max is going ballistic.”

“Wait! What are you talking about? This isn’t a dream Isabel. This is very much real. I’m back here in 1999 and I don’t want to go back to our time. Now with Max and Tess and their child and Alex being dead. I’m happy here.”

“Liz! What are you talking about?”

“Everything I said. I don’t want to go back to it.”

“Liz none of that happened! It was Tess. She did this. She must have mindwarped you or something. Liz you need to wake up. You have information that we need. Please Liz for us wake up.”

Liz looked at Isabel’s pleading face and saw that tears were forming in her eyes.

‘Was this all a dream?’

She turned around and saw Max with a confused face. The thing was what Isabel was telling the truth. What if Tess had mindwarped her and that’s why she’s here. It didn’t matter. Liz liked it here better. For one time in her life she was going to be selfish. She was going to think about her self for once.


Isabel looked up. Hope in her eyes.

“I’m not going. I’m staying here. For once in my life I’m going to be selfish. I like it here. I’m happy here. And I don’t want to leave.”

“Liz please! I don’t have much time left here. Please come back. We need you.”

Isabel was sobbing now. She knew if her friend stayed like this she would die. Something would happen in this place that would reflect to where she was now.

“Liz, please do this for me, for Max, for Alex, and Maria. Come back. You don’t what will happen if you don’t.”

Liz looked up at her. She wanted to go she really did but something kept her back, actually someone. She turned around and looked at Max. His eyes were boring into hers. How could she walk away from him, from this? She couldn’t, she wouldn’t.

“I’m sorry, Izzy.”

Isabel started to disappear.

“Liz please wa-----”

Then she was gone.

Present Day (2001)

Isabel’s eyes snapped open. She was gasping for breath.

‘This can’t be.’

Max ran up to her.

“So? She’s going to wake up right?”

She looked into her brother’s eyes preparing to tell him the worst.



“She doesn’t want to come back…”

~mg_ros & Sixela

Hope you enjoy and I'll be back in a week. Luv ya's.

*big* *tongue* *wink**happy*
posted on 16-Sep-2002 9:53:26 AM by mg_ros
I"M BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Are you ready?

If you are , give some f/b!!!

~mg_ros *big*
posted on 16-Sep-2002 11:58:17 AM by mg_ros
Hey guys. Well I just typed up one chapter that I wrote but still have another one. This one is a little short but it's better then nothing right? Thought so. I'll the second part finished either by tonight or tomorrow!!!! Enjoy!

Chapter 5

Of all the things I've believed in
I just want to get it over with
Tears form behind my eyes
But I do not cry
Counting the days that pass me by

I've been searching deep down in my soul
Words that I'm hearing are starting to get old
It feels like I'm starting all over again
The last two years were just pretend
And I said,

Goodbye to you
Goodbye to everything I thought I knew
You were the one I loved
The one thing that I tried to hold on to

I still get lost in your eyes
And it seems that I can't live a day without you
Closing my eyes and you chase my thoughts away
To a place where I am blinded by the light
But it's not right

Goodbye to you
Goodbye to everything I thought I knew
You were the one I loved
The one thing that I tried to hold on to

And it hurts to want everything and nothing at the same time
I want what's yours and I want what's mine
I want you
But I'm not giving in this time

Goodbye to you
Goodbye to everything I thought I knew
You were the one I loved
The one thing that I tried to hold on to
The one thing that I tried to hold on to

And when the stars fall
I will lie awake
You're my shooting star

~Michelle Branch

After Isabel completely disappeared Liz was in shock. Isabel was telling her all these things. Could she believe her? Could she believe everything she said. Should she go back? Liz was beginning to fall down and faint but Max caught her in time. Liz still fainted and Max picked her up and lied her down on the bed. He put his hand on her forehead and a connection grew between them. Liz’s eyes fluttered open. She looked around and saw Max’s face.

“I just had the weirdest dream.” She said.

Max smiled.

“Really? Was it about?”

“ I made a wish and I was brought back…”

Liz still looked around the room. She caught a glimpse of herself in the mirror and looked at back at Max. She sat up.

“Wait it wasn’t a dream was it. Or it isn’t a dream because I’m still here. Or is it a dream and….”

“Hey, hey, hey, calm down. Your starting to babble like Maria. Should I go get one of those oils she’s always sniffing?”

Liz laughed.

“No. I guess I am acting a little Mariaish.

Liz’s tone grew serious.

“What’s happening? I mean what does all this mean?”

“I don’t know. That person we just saw. Was that Isabel? I mean the Isabel from your time?”

“Yeah it was. When she left I felt so…. I feel so selfish right now. What if they do need me and I just messed everything up? I feel like such an idiot. Like such a failure.”

Liz voice started to crack. Max cupped her face and made her look at him.

“You not an idiot. You’re the smartest person I know. And you’re not a failure and about being selfish. Liz you’ve given up so much. How can you not think about yourself for once? I don’t even know how you did it or why.”

Liz’s eyes started to water up even more, She couldn’t cry. Not in front of him. She couldn’t cry at all. She had to be strong. The words that came out of his mouth touched her so much. The way his words used to.

‘How can he not know why I did everything?’

“I did it because I love you Max. Everything that has happened to me, I did it out of love for you and for Isabel and for Michael. I’d rather be miserable in my life than to have you be in yours. I don’t how to explain it…”

Max looked at her with more love than he knew he had.

‘She did this for me? She loves me?’

Max ‘s hands were still cupped around Liz’s face. He moved closer to her. He lowered his head and brushed his mouth against hers. Liz’s lips parted, welcoming him, deepening their kiss. As fast as the kiss began it ended, both of them looking in each other’s eyes.

Since both of them were looking at each other they didn’t notice that some one was outside on the balcony see everything that just happened and feeling……


*big* Hehehe ~mg_ros and Sixela

posted on 18-Sep-2002 3:30:30 PM by mg_ros
Thanks for f/b working on a part as we speak so all I have to say is soon. And JBehrsGurl I love this song too, when I read the lyrics and heard the song I had to make a fic!


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posted on 20-Sep-2002 5:56:17 PM by mg_ros
Okay here you go. I finished it yesterday but I got lazt and forgot to send it. Sorry, but now you have it!!!

Chapter 6

Present Day

“Isabel, you have to try again.”

Isabel looked down to the floor avoiding Max’s pleading eyes. She knew if she looked at him she’d be forced to go back, but she knew even if she did go back it wouldn’t help. She didn’t want to admit it but the truth was, Liz wasn’t coming back. Still looking at her feet she solemnly replied.

“Max, she’s not coming back, she told me right to my face. She has this weird idea that Alex is dead and that you and Tess are together.”

Tess how she hated her so much. Destiny says this, destiny says that, blah, blah, blah, it’s no wonder that she suddenly did this to Liz and tried to get Max. Bitch!
They should have figured out sooner that Tess had mind warped Liz and that’s why she’s in her present state.

‘If she set’s one foot back into Roswell, I’ll kill her myself.’

Isabel tuned out her thoughts and forced her self back to reality. A reality where Max was ballistic and Liz was in a hospital bed in a coma.

“WHAT? She thinks me and Tess are together?”

Max ran up and knelt in front of Isabel.

“Isabel, you have to help me get inside Liz’s head. I know you tried to talk her into coming back, but I know in my heart that I can convince her. I just know I can, but I need your help.”

Isabel looked at Max straight in the eyes. Tears started to form but she blinked them back not wanting to make a scene. She knew emotions were weakness, and she couldn’t be weak, not now. Since Liz was like this she was the glue that kept everyone together and she knew if she let her emotions get in the way they would all crumble and she couldn’t do that. She needed to help Liz anyway she could.

“Okay.” She whispered.

Max pulled her into a tight hug.

“Thank you.”

Isabel slightly nodded and took Max’s hand in hers. She concentrated and clutched the picture Max had supplied of Liz in her other hand. Then she felt something. She was in but she wasn’t where she was before, and to make matters worse:

Max wasn’t with her.

Max suddenly formed by the jeep that was parked in the alley. He looked around his surroundings and knew where he was.

“Liz’s Balcony.” He mumbled.

He slowly walked over to the ladder and climbed up. He didn’t know what time it was here so he didn’t know if Liz was in her room or not. When his head made it to the ledge he peeked over and saw Liz in her room, but she wasn’t alone. The person she was with looked familiar but he could only see the back of the person’s head. He watched both of them closely as he slowly pulled the rest of his body onto the balcony. He tiptoed to the window not wanting to make a sound. As he got closer the face of the guy got clearer and clearer. Then he saw who it was. It was him.

“What?” He whispered to himself.

Then he saw the most heart-wrenching thing. Liz and well…. himself…. his younger self…were kissing.

Max slowly backed away. Heartbroken. As he walked backward away from the window he hit the lawn chair making a nails on a chalkboard sound.

Liz looked into Max’s eyes. She was so lost. She wanted it to stay like this forever.

‘This was why you stayed Liz. Okay so stop feeling guilty and live.’

Liz didn’t believe it though. She was still guilty as ever, especially after that kiss. She felt like she betrayed Max in a way.

‘He slept with Tess, Liz. How can a kiss compare to that?’

Again it didn’t matter. She felt in her soul like it was a lie. All of it, Alex being dead, Max being with Tess, and Tess heading back home to Antar. It all seemed wrong. Like she was told to think all of this. She couldn’t quite grasp how it could all happen like this. He life was supposed happy. She was supposed to be with Max.

‘But here you can be Liz.’

The voice was starting to get on Liz’s nerves. It didn’t even sound like Liz. It sounded squeky and like a gerbil. It was so familiar but she couldn’t quite put her finger on it. Who did she know who sounded like that.


Then it came to Liz.

‘Tess, you Son Of A Bitch!’

The sound of something or someone on the balcony pulled Liz out of her ‘so called thoughts’. She moved her eyes away from Max’s. In the corner of them she saw a figure of a man watching her, not even paying attention to Max. She slowly moved her eyes to see who the figure was. She got up off the bed and away from Max. Her eyes were still locked on the figure. Her eyes were watering up and getting blurry so she really couldn’t see whom the person was. But she knew who it was. She felt him here. She felt him come.

She moved closer to him.

“Max?” she croaked out.

She ran toward him and flung herself into his arms. Crying on his shoulder. She didn’t really know why she was crying but she couldn’t help it.

‘It had to be a lie; Max would never do that to me. I know it!’

She pulled her head away from his shoulder. He blood shot eyes looked into his sparkling/pleading ones.

“Max? Why are you here?”

He looked down at her. He kissed her mouth and put all of his emotions into it and let him self be truthful with her.


Liz collapsing in his arms in the Crashdown


Watching the ambulance roll Liz away.


Watching Tess walk down the hallway to Liz’s hospital room planning on killing her

Tess fighting with Max, Michael, and Isabel


Tess leaving saying

“Revenge is going to give me a cavity.”


Max being at Liz’s bedside day and night singing, talking about what’s been going on, telling her to wake up because he loves her so much


Maria breaking down, Michael consoled her while Alex and Isabel stayed strong for everyone and for each other


Isabel telling Max that Liz isn’t going to wake up


Them right now

Max broke away breathing heavily. He looked down at Liz and she started to sob again in his shoulder. A tear ran down his face and he buried his head in her hair.


Liz lifted her head and turned around. “Past” Max was standing there, avoiding contact with either of them. Liz stepped back a little bit. Both “Present Day” Max and “Past” Max were at each of her sides.

“Present” Max stepped closer to her.

“You have to choose between us Liz.”

“He’s right.” “Past” Max piped up.

Liz looked from one Max to the other debating on whom to go with.

‘Pick the Max from this time Liz, he’s everything you want and dreamed about.’

‘‘‘Shut up! Shut up! Shut up! That isn’t me talking’’’

‘Course it is Liz I’m you. I’m your subconscious, duh!’

‘‘‘No! I don’t believe you. Your Tess and your trying to mess me up!’’’

‘Liz listen to your self. You know you want “Past” Max, he’s everything you ever wanted. Now you can have him.’

She could have him? He was everything she wanted, but what about Max from her time? She looked at him once more. He sucked in all his breath. He wasn’t gonna breath until she gave him an answer. She knew she loved him, but something was telling her not pick him, she really felt it was someone. She looked at “Past” Max and he was smiling at her with love in his eyes. All she wanted to do was melt. She closed her eyes, concentrated on what her heart was “supposedly” telling her and made her decision. She opened her eyes and looked at both of them and smiled. She walked up to “Present” Max and quickly brushed her lips against his. He let out his breath. She looked up at him.

“I made my decision.”

He started to smile but then she pulled back and went towards “Past” Max. His face fell completely.

She looked over at “Past” Max and smiled.

“I’m gonna stay here.”

The words to Max felt like a punch in the stomach. All hope was lost for him. What Isabel told him finally hit him.

‘She’s Not Coming Back’

~mg_ros and Sixela

posted on 21-Sep-2002 3:57:13 PM by mg_ros

Okay so school has been completely sucky but has given me the inspiration to write. This chapter was 9 pages on my computer so I hope it makes up for all the times it was so short. I'll try to have more chapters like this but it might take me a couple days but I have a lot of time on my hands besides going to school *happy*. Okay so I love the f/b and I can't believe you love this story I've had so many people e-mail me telling me how they "absolutley love this stroy and think it's the best" is it really that good because I rate myself as a pretty sucky writer. Well anyways sorry for the long Author's Note , these things can get really, really boring. LoL.

~mg_ros *big*
posted on 22-Sep-2002 9:19:11 AM by mg_ros
2crzy4roswell I can't wait till you post your fic I'll be the first to read it! And sorry but you can't have 'present' Max and console him I already have someone for the job....*evil laugh* and it might not be who you think it is! Question:

Do you guys mind that I haven't brought in Maria, Michael, or Alex yet? I haven't really had enough time so I pretty much kept the characters a low number but if you want thme in I'll put them in asap!!!

Okay keep the f/b coming! Luv Ya Guys!!!

posted on 6-Oct-2002 3:58:17 PM by mg_ros
Hey! Long time no see huh! okay well I'm going to conclude this story probably in the next two weeks and also 'Naughty n' Nice' come read my other story "Welcome To The Roswellian Hellmouth" and I also have an idea for another story so look for me!!!! *happy*

posted on 6-Oct-2002 4:40:57 PM by mg_ros
AlienDreamer101 maybe this will cheer you up!

Chapter 7

Max still couldn’t believe what he was hearing.

‘ She’s not coming back.’ he told himself again.

“But why?” He asked.

He didn’t know why he had asked it, but it had just come out.
He wanted to know why she didn’t want to be with him. It hurt him a lot to think that she didn’t care about him in the same way anymore, but that wasn’t possible. They had kissed and she just had to still love him.

“I don’t know. I just….I want to go back, but I can’t.”

“But if you want to then come back. Everyone is waiting for you there. Maria, Kyle, Isabel, your parents, Michael, Alex….”

Liz head snapped up and tears formed in her eyes.


Max smiled.

“Yeah. He misses you Liz. He jokes have gotten cornier.”

Liz smiled a little and laughed.

‘Alex….’ She thought.

Of all the things I've believed in
I just want to get it over with
Tears form behind my eyes
But I do not cry
Counting the days that pass me by

Liz knew she should go back with her Max but that little nasty voice kept nagging her. She looked at Max and thought real hard. She wanted to be with him so bad, but could she leave this place?

I've been searching deep down in my soul
Words that I'm hearing are starting to get old
It feels like I'm starting all over again
The last two years were just pretend
And I said,

She wanted to wake up and see all of her friends again. She couldn’t help but think he hadn’t said Tess’s name.

‘Was everything she saw true? Everything I saw? Everything that came from him?’

She made up her mind. She was going home!

Isabel still didn’t know where she was. It was dark and gloomy and ….wait….something moved in the shadows.

“Who’s there?”

Isabel went around in a circle observing her surroundings. Lucky for her she could see better in the dark.

“I asked a question. Who’s here?”

She could make out the figure. It was short, skinny, and had …clown hair? Then it came to Isabel. Her enemy was in Liz’s head. She was making Liz want to stay where she was so she wouldn’t wake up.

‘That bitch’

“I know it’s you Tess. Show your face you little clown haired gerbil!”

Isabel’s anger was taking over. Tess had caused them enough pain. She wouldn’t let her do it again. Now, Isabel Evans was going to get her revenge. The figure stepped out of the shadow. There was a smirk on her face.

“You can’t wake her up Izzy. She’s to far now. Even if she wanted too, she wouldn’t be able to.” Tess said in her squeaky voice.

“We’ll see about that.” Isabel snarled.

“Isabel, haven’t taught you anything. I always get what I want, and this my friend is what I want. And it’s soooooo sweet.”

“Let’s get one thing straight you ho. I’m not your friend, and I get what I want too.”

“What are you gonna do about it?”

Isabel smiled.

“Why are you doing that?”

“What?” Isabel asked innocently.

“That! That smile, you have a plan!!!”

“Maybe I do.”

“ Well, what is it?”

Tess was getting scared and Isabel liked it.

Isabel closed her eyes and conjured up an image of Tess. She concentrated until she was in her mind. She looked for clues onto where she was.

‘Where, where, where?’

Then in a flash Tess’s location flashed to her, and she wasn’t that far away.

Liz was gonna go home, not because that’s what she told herself but because she wanted to. She had to let go of this place. She took one last look around. She looked at past Max and knew she could never be with him. Well she could since he was still Max but she would die she knew that. And she knew she wanted to live the rest of her life with Max and all her friends so she had to wake.

“I want to wake up.” She whispered softly.

Max’s eyes widened.

“What?” he asked.

She looked up into his eyes.

“I want to wake up now.”

I know , I knwo not alot but promise this will be a 10-12 chapetr story, I'm still not sure but I promise it'll be longer next time!!!


posted on 6-Oct-2002 8:12:04 PM by mg_ros
goddessgurl5000 originally wrote:

PS: I really think that it's an insult to gerbils to be compared to Tess.

Me too, but people have been using it so long...I don't know it just stuck! lol

posted on 10-Oct-2002 7:02:39 PM by mg_ros
I'm writing the final chapter as we speak and also don't frown there will be an epilogue!

posted on 15-Oct-2002 7:38:01 PM by mg_ros
hi guys, new part is almost ready!!!!

posted on 23-Oct-2002 6:58:56 PM by mg_ros
New Part soon!

posted on 30-Oct-2002 4:49:42 PM by mg_ros
Final Chapter coming soon!!!

posted on 8-Nov-2002 11:48:32 PM by mg_ros
Okay guys guess what!!! I am officially almost done with the chapter!!!! Only maybe 15 minutes and it will be done! I'm gonna have an epilogue in a couple days so stick around and thanks for all the feed back, I luv you guys!


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posted on 9-Nov-2002 1:09:22 AM by mg_ros
Okay so I'm like an hour 15 late but hey I made it long jst for you and I know you will love!!!! So here it is the last Chapter of Goodbye To You!

Chapter 8

Max still couldn’t believe the words that had just come out of Liz’s mouth.

“Could you just say that one more time.” Max uttered.

Liz smiled and looked into his glimmering eyes.

“I said I want to go home. I wanna be with you Max. I wanna be with everyone again.”

Max smiled and let out all his breath again. He pulled Liz closer to him.

“I was so afraid you wouldn’t come back with me.” Max murmured in her hair letting some tears of happiness fall out of his eyes.

“So was I.” She said burying her head in his chest and holding him close.


Isabel wanted to try something she had never done before. She didn’t know if it was possible or not, but it was now or never and Liz’s life was at stake. Isabel closed her eyes focusing her mind on a run down motel in Vaughn, New Mexico. It was only 90 miles away from Roswell and she didn’t know if what she was going to do would be able to take her that far. She imagined herself right in front of room 119. She opened her eyes to see that she was there. It had worked!!! Her experiment with astral projection had worked. She couldn’t believe it.

‘I guess they were right. If you set your mind on something you can do it!’ Isabel thought smiling.

She looked at the door.

‘It’s now or never Izzy.” She whispered to herself.

She clenched her hand into a fist and knocked on the door.

“Who is it?” A squeaky voice replied.

Isabel smiled. She was gonna play around with her a minute.

“Room Service.” She said in a French accent.

“I don’t need room service!” Tess said angrily.

“But Madame, I have something important here. A package to be exact.”

“Leave it at the door.”

“But I was told to give it to you in person. It small, I think maybe a jewelry box. It is from a man.”

Isabel heard Tess come closer to the door.

“Do you know who the box came from.”

“I don’t know, but there is a card.”

“Read it to me.”

“Don’t you want to read it yourself?”

‘Gee-whiz just come out here you ‘Cleavage Popping, Mini Skirt wearing, Clown haired Slut!’

“No, you read it!”

‘Okay Izzy, think fast, think fast!!’

Dear Tess,
I have thought about you since you have left Roswell. I yearn for you to come back. I’ve always believed in destiny and now I picture you in it forever.

‘ Gag me please!!!’ Isabel thought saying things she never wanted to say.

I give to this…box in hope that you will know my…. Ever dying question to ask you. Please come back and be my *cough, gag * queen.

Love, Max

“Oh my god!” Tess squealed as she flew open the door. “I knew it! I knew I ----”

Tess looked up and saw Isabel standing there with a smirk on her face and a glare that could kill.

“Hi Tess.” Isabel said smiling.

Isabel clenched her fist behind her back and launched it right at Tess’s face. She fell the ground with a satisfying thud. Isabel bent over her body and slammed her fist right into Tess’s nose. She heard it crack and felt the warm blood ooze over her fingers. Tess yelped in pain, but Isabel wasn’t stopping. She was going to pay for hurting everyone, for persuading her to trust the conniving bitch, to ruining Max’s life, and making Liz be stuck in a coma. She threw another punch and hit Tess’s mouth.

‘Man this feels so good!’

Isabel stopped a moment and looked down the homicidal manic before her.

“How do I wake up Liz?” She asked, her voice stern and calm.

“I’ll never tell you!” Tess yelled wincing in pain.

“Tell me you bitch or I’ll make you wish you never met me!”

“Okay! Okay!” Tess exclaimed giving up.

Isabel still sat over her not letting her get away.


“It’s all up to her. She has to be the one who does it and it has to be before midnight tonight. Now get off me you wench!”

Isabel looked down at the pitiful creature below her and had no other choice to do the thing everyone who knew her wanted to do. She wasn’t going to kill her…yet. She was going to make her feel was Liz was feeling right now, you know as in being in a coma. She placed both hands on each side of Tess’s head and concentrated into making her sleepy. Isabel could feel it working. Blood and adrenaline was pervading her body. She could feel Tess getting drowsier and drowsier. She was going to have to let go before something else happened.

‘Only a little more….’

Then Isabel pushed the drossiness a little farther and felt nothing. She opened her eyes and let go of Tess’s limp head.


Isabel felt for pulse and felt nothing. Then Tess’s body collapsed into a pile of ash.

“Severed you right, but the poor cleaning lady is going to have pick up after the mess you made!”

Suddenly Isabel felt a tug from her real body and was pulled out form the hotel. Her astral body then disappeared and reformed in the one she left behind in the hospital. She turned around to find no one was there. It was still just her, Max, and Liz. A shiver went up Isabel’s spine and she knew something was going to happen, but she didn’t know what exactly. She looked at her watch. It was 11:55 and she only had five minutes to get Liz home and it dawned on her that it might not happen.


Liz felt so good in Max’s arms. It was like when they were together, holding each other, it felt like a force field was formed and nothing could penetrate it. Then she remembered about ‘Past’ Max. She lifted her head and turned around to see no one there.

“Where did he go?” She asked.

Max lifted his head and scanned the balcony and Liz’s room.

“I don’t know.”

She turned back to him and threw herself back in his arms

“ God Max, I just want to go home.”

“I know. I want to also, but I don’t know what to do.”

Liz closed her eyes she tilted her head up for her lips to meet Max’s. Max lowered his head helping her brush her lips over his. Her lips parted welcoming him in and deepening their kiss. Liz opened her eyes only to realize they weren’t on her balcony anymore. They were in a room that she didn’t recognize. Candles were burning everywhere and the sweet aroma filled her nostrils. She noticed a bed with white rose petals covering it. She smiled and looked up at Max.

“How did we get here?” Max asked looking around the room.

“I was thinking…. fantasizing about this room…and now we’re here.” Liz said in amazement.

Max smiled.

“And what were you fantasizing about Miss Parker?”

“Wouldn’t you like to know?” She said teasing him.

Liz leaned in and started to kiss Max. They were long slow kisses that made her whole body tingle with warmth. Liz was moving closer into Max and gasped as he leaned back on the bed, pulling her down over him. Her hair fell down over their faces forming a tiny private curtain. All she could feel was Max and didn’t mind it. Nothing else seemed to matter. Then her sensations went wild when Max began kissing her neck, his lips and tongue were moving toward the hallow base of her throat. The whole world disappeared. All her senses were filled with Max, only Max. The way she felt right now was the way she wanted to feel for all eternity. She felt Max’s hands slide down to her sides then back up combing through her hair. This was the reason she wanted to be home. It was the most important reason. Liz closed her eyes again and let all the sensations run through her body.


Liz opened her eyes and squinted as a bright light flashed on them. She heard voices then felt a warm hand touch hers. She smiled and opened her eyes to find Max standing over smiling. He leaned down and kissed her forehead.

“Welcome Back.” He whispered.

Isabel sat up and moved next to Max.

“Welcome Home Liz.”

“It’s good to be home.” She said smiling.

Out of the corner of her eyes she could see Maria, Michael, Kyle, and Alex run in.

Alex headed up to her first.

“Hey Liz glad I'm so relieved you’re o----”

Liz sat up and lunged at Alex engulfing him into a giant hug.

“Liz….air…..suffocating….Liz!…..Alex needs to breathe now!!!”

Liz let go.


She was trying to keep the tears from coming, but had no luck.

“I missed you! I missed all of you.”

Maria came up and hugged Liz.

“Hey chica.” She said crying.

“Right back at you.”

Liz looked up and saw Kyle.

“Get over her Kyle.”

He smiled and walked over. He kissed her forehead and gave her a hug too.

“The Buddha is glad that you’re okay.” He said.

Liz laughed.

“Well tell him thank you.”

Kyle backed away. Everyone was at each side of Liz’s hospital bed, well everyone except for Michael. Liz looked over at him.

“So Michael, you going to come over here, or just stand there in the corner?”

Michael walked up to Liz’s side.

“I’m glad your okay, but I feel responsible for all of this.”

Liz was confused.

“What do you mean?”

Michael sighed.

“Tess was like supposed to be my little sister or something close to that in our past life and I guess I was kind of supposed to watch over her or something. Then this happened to you and I feel responsible because I wasn’t watching Tess close enough to know she was going to do this.”

Liz pulled Michael’s hands on hers and cupped her other one over it.

“Michael, it’s not your fault. No one knew this was going to happen. And I don’t blame you for this.”

Michael half smiled.

“ I feel a little better and I'm glad your okay.”

“We all are.” Max added enveloping his hand into hers.

“Thank you. I can’t believe I almost said Goodbye To You, to all of you. Now that I think about it I know I would have never been able to. I would never been able to get through this without you. Thank you for everything, for trusting me with your secret, letting me in, and being apart of this family. It means a lot and I want you to know I love you guys.”

The six of them stood around Liz’s bed. They each looked at each other. They had all come a long way and had trusted each other throughout their journey together. It was the 7 of them now, and it always would be……

I didn't hear you leave, I wonder how am I still here
I don't want to move a thing, it might change my memory
Oh I am what I am
I'll do what I want
But I can't hide
I won't go
I won't sleep
I can't breathe
Until you're resting here with me
I won't leave
I can't hide
I cannot be
Until you're resting here with me
I don't want to call my friends, they might wake me from this dream
And I can't leave this bed, risk forgetting all that's been
Oh I am what I am
I'll do what I want
But I can't hide
I won't go
I won't sleep
I can't breathe
Until you're resting here with me
I won't leave
I can't hide
I cannot be
Until you're resting here with me.


posted on 9-Nov-2002 9:53:02 AM by mg_ros
Why thank you, Thank you very much. I means a lot to me that you read my stories and give feed back, it's like.... this really good feeling inside you , you know? So thank you for letting me feel that and I'll probably starrt a new Fic soon so heads up!!!