posted on 10-Oct-2002 6:49:46 PM by mg_ros
Title: Crazy For This Girl

Disclaimer: I do no own Roswell, if I did it would still be on the air WITH ALL NEW EPISODES AND TONS OF DREAMERS, CANDIES, STARGAZERS, AND EVEN LAMP TRIMMERS!!!!! sorry….

Summary: Gee I don’t know….. lol


Dear Journal,

You’ll never guess what! There’s this new guy at our school and he is might fine!!! (insert laugh) I mean it! I mean he’s really really cute! He’s built, tall, dark brown hair, and beautiful eyes! And he’s funny too! Well I don’t really know that on the account that I’ve never even talked to guy! (insert sigh and slap on the head) I’m so damn shy I can’t even talk to him!!!!! (insert another sigh) Anyways….

Liz was interrupted from her journal by a tap on her window. When she looked up she smiled at the person who on her balcony. She opened the window and let him in.

“So you’re still writing in you journal? I though you gave that up?” he said.

“Yeah well old habits die hard.”

“Are we still on for tonight? I mean the gore fest with movies, the ultimate junk food, and Maria and Alex?”

“Of course always!”

Liz saw he kept taking glances at her open journal.

“Max, you can’t read it!”

“Why not, I’m your best friend Liz!”

“Max!!! Come on we’ve like been through this

“Okay, okay just don’t whine.”

“I was not whining.”

Max smiled.

“Yes you were.”

“Was not!” Liz argued.

Max held his hands up in defeat.

“Okay you weren’t. So tonight at 8 right?”

“Yup, 8.”


Max smiled and climbed out of the window. He always loved Friday nights. Liz, himself and their best friends Maria and Alex all got together after a horrendous week of school, teachers, and homework. They all gathered at Liz’s house for a gore fest:

Scary movies and lots of junk food!

He also loved it because he always made sure he sat next to Liz because whenever a scary part happened she would cling to him and try to hide behind him. He loved the feeling of that and that’s why he rented an extra scary movie so he could feel Liz in his arms all night.

‘This is gonna be the best night ever!’

Liz waited until she saw Max was off her balcony. She sat back down at her desk and got back to writing in her journal.

Okay journal where was I? Oh yeah….. I can’t even talk to him and I know he probably doesn’t even notice, but all that is gonna change today! (I hope) Well I can always dream that one day Kyle Valenti will ask me out.


Liz closed her journal and hid it in her closet under a box. She picked out clothes to wear to school. She wanted to look extra good because today was the day she was going to talk to Kyle! She put on a red halter top and a pair of faded hip hugger jeans that made her thighs look really good. She let her chocolate brown hair fall past her shoulders. She applied some lip-gloss and got her books organized. She heard the beep of Maria’s horn. She walked down the stairs and outside into the bright New Mexican sun.

‘Today is going to be the best day ever!’

~mg_ros *tongue*

Enjoy and I want feedback pronto!!! lol *wink*

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posted on 11-Oct-2002 9:35:51 PM by mg_ros


Hey guys! Thanks for the feedback!! Umm well I should have a new part by Sunday but I'm not sure, I've been sick and behind in work so I need to see how much free time I have!!! Thanks you guys, your the best.

posted on 13-Oct-2002 8:39:51 PM by mg_ros


Thanks for the f/b guys, turns out I got a relapse so I'm still sick *hits head on computer screen* I hate it! I'm coughing, blowing my nose, and out of my mouth comes this green ph.... nevermind don't want to gross you out to much. Well Tomorrow is Monday for me and we all know that Monday's suck!

*starts to sing*

"What's the worst day of the week that gets us all depressed

M-O-N-D-A-Y S-U-C-K-S"

LOL well I Promise that I will a new part by.... *thinks for a moment* Wednesday cause I have nothing to do on Wednesday's soooo..... your in luck cause that probably means it's be a very llllloooonnnnnggggg part!!!! Well okay so take care!!!


posted on 16-Oct-2002 10:35:13 PM by mg_ros
Sorry, I know I said today but I'm only a day behind. I promsie so much that tomorrow will be the day, it is isn't feel free to throw the rottn tomatoes!

posted on 16-Oct-2002 11:28:26 PM by mg_ros
Okay I just typed this. it may suck because I wrote as fast as my tiny petty little fingers could go.

Chapter One

Liz got into Maria’s car with a smile on her face and Maria quickly noticed it.

‘ Did Max really do it? I mean I he said he was going this morning. But the chicken always chickens out. Go Max!’

Maria tried to hide her excitement because she was just a little skeptical that Max had actually gone through with confessing his feelings for Liz, so she had to play it cool and not let on she knew anything.

“So chica, what got that smile get plastered on your face?”

Liz smile got even wider.

‘Okay Maria, here it comes….’

“Kyle Valenti.” Liz said with a sigh.

Maria tried to hide her disappointment. She was really hoping that Max would have confessed by now.

‘What a donkey-hole!’

“So …Kyle huh? You gonna talk to him today?”


“Yeah, well that outfit will sure get his attention!”

“Shut up!”

“Hey I know you wore that for him…unless you have a secret crush on someone that might have a secret crush on you and Kyle is a ploy to get that certain guy to ask you out.”

‘Whoa, hope she didn’t catch onto that!’

“What?” Liz asked confused.

Maria sighed.

“Nothing. Just me. Babbling on like an idiot.”

‘Will these two ever get together????’

Maria drove down Main St. to Cyrus Ave., to Pine St. where their school was located. She parked the Jetta and searched for the jeep. She found in it’s usual spot. Maria had to talk to Max. She had a weird feeling that Liz was serious on talking to Kyle and she knew that Kyle would be interested in Liz. Who wouldn’t be? But if she got this date:

1) It would crush Max to pieces

2) It would put a damper on everyone’s friendship

3) It would cause Maria to carry around a barf bag everywhere she went with those two.


4) Nothing, and I mean Nothing would ever be the same again….

Maria walked with Liz to the doors scanning everyone and everything for Max. Then it happened. The world as she knew had ended.

“Liz Parker right? Hey I’m Kyle.”

‘God help me!’

Liz was starting to get nervous, but she kept her cool. She wanted to drop when she heard him say her name.

‘He knows my name!!! Oh My Gosh!!’


Kyle started to sway like he was nervous.

“So, I’ve working up the courage to ask you something.”

Liz felt something bad was about to happen. Like this was a cruel joke.

‘Keep it cool Parker. If it is a joke, don’t let it faze you, Maria will just kick his ass!’

“Yeah?” Liz pressed.

‘Come on Valenti, spit it out!’

“Would you like to go see a movie with me sometime? Like maybe tonight? Double-Feature?”

Liz smiled.

“I’d love too.”

Maria knew this would happen, but not tonight! She hit Liz in the rib.
Liz wondered why she did that, but then got the wrong impression.

“Kyle, I can’t tonight. I do this thing with my friends every Friday night---”

“Oh” Kyle said in dissapointment.

Maria smiled.

‘Mission Accomplished.’

“No, no, but you can come. It’s just me and my friends. They won’t mind. Right Maria?”

‘Houston We Have A Problem!’

Not wanting to disappoint her best friend she gave in.

“No, not a problem with me!”

‘But it will be for Max.’

Liz went through the day with a big smile n her face. It was lunchtime now and she couldn’t wait to tell her best friends her happy news. She walked in and sat their usual table. She kept shifting in her seat cause she needed to tell someone else besides Maria. Then she saw Alex walk her way.

“Hey Liz. Cheerful today I see.”

“It’s more than that…” Liz gushed.

‘Max did it! I knew my best bud wasn’t a chicken.’

“So he finally asked you?” Alex said hopefully.

“Yup!” Liz replied happily.

“This is so great. I knew he would do it sooner or later!”

“I didn’t even know he knew I existed!”

“Of course he did!”

“Alex, you are so great. I just can’t wait till tonight when you get to meet him tonight.”

Liz opened her lunch and started to eat it.

“But why would I need to get to know Ma---”

Alex stopped himself and thought for a minute.

‘Something isn’t right here.’

Liz looked at Alex with a confused expression.


“Uh, nothing.”

Alex turned around and saw Maria walk in. He sighed cause he knew she would provide him with the info he needed to know. He was deeply confused right now. Alex stood up when he saw Maria give him the secret signal to meet by the Coke machine.

“I’m gonna go get a drink, want anything Liz?”

“No thanks I’m fine.”

Alex got up and practically ran over to Maria.

“What’s going on here?”

Maria bent down and retrieved her coke. She looked up at Alex with a concerned expression.

“Kyle asked Liz out.”

Alex’s went flat.

“Does Max know?”

Maria shook her head sadly.

“Nope. It’s gonna break his heart. If he hadn’t been such a donkey and gotten over his fear and asked her we wouldn’t be in this predicament right now.”

Alex put in his change and pressed the button for a Cherry Coke.

“We just have to keep Max away form Liz until we can figure out a way to tell him without watching the guy physically die in front of us.”

“Too Late.” Maria said.

Alex looked up and over at their table. Max had already made his way to the table. Alex focused on the look on his face.

His perfect little world had gotten nuked.

~mg_ros *wink* *tongue*

*bounce* *bounce**bounce**bounce*
posted on 17-Oct-2002 11:42:56 PM by mg_ros
Thanks for the f/b guys, I really appreciate it!! I love f/b. And don't worry Max will tell maybe.....not real soon, but soon. And Chapter 2 will be up by like Tuesday the latest so keep a look out for that. I'm gonna try to make it really funny but I suck at that so bear with me k? lol luv yas!!!

posted on 18-Oct-2002 10:53:35 PM by mg_ros
OKay since you guys want this soooooo much New part will be up by Sunday!!!!! (I hope) lol

posted on 19-Oct-2002 12:06:41 AM by mg_ros
Here I made you this..... And just to tell you aliens DO NOT EXIST in this story. I need to back away from that a little. It's not a lot but the next part should be the best.

Chapter Two A

Max walked into the lunchroom. Today was going great. He had aced all his tests that he had taken in his classes so far and he knew that tonight was going to be a very good night. He was gonna tell Liz that his feelings for her were wanting to be more than just friends. He turned the corner and passed students to get to the lunch table. Liz was already there smiling about something and that made Max happy.

‘If she’s happy, them I’m happy.’

Max walked up to the table.

“Hey Liz. Happy morning?”

Liz looked up and smiled.

‘God she’s beautiful.’

“A very happy morning! You?”

“Yup. So what’s got you in this happy mood?”

Max sat down waiting to hear her gush about some test that she had aced that no one else knew the answers too, but not knowing she was going to tell one of his fears,

“Kyle Valenti asked me out.”

Losing Liz.

Max stood there in utter shock.

‘Kyle Valenti asked her out? Put a fork in me I’m done!’

Max quickly regained himself and plastered a smile on his face. He didn’t want to spoil this moment for Liz. She deserved to be happy, and if Kyle made her happy…he’d have to find another way to equal that amount.


Liz smiled, but she knew Max had something else on his mind. And she knew it had to do with her and Kyle.

“You don’t like Kyle do you?”

Max looked at her trying to fool her into thinking he didn’t.

“Why would think that?”

Liz smiled at him. She stretched her hand out touched his forehead.

“Cause whenever I say Kyle’s name,” Max’s forehead scrunched up and the all the lines showed, “your forehead scrunches up just like it did. You only do that when you think something is boring, when you’re in pain, or when you repulse someone.”

Max looked into eyes but then looked away. His heart had be racing when she touhed his forehead. He wanted to know more about how Liz really felt about him and what she really knew about him.

“You know all that stuff about me?” He asked curiously.

“ I know a lot of stuff about you.”

“Yeah like what?”


“Like you used to love Power Rangers and broke your arm trying to beat Liz up. By the way that was a nice shot Liz. She had you there Max, her whole Pink Ranger aura at full blast.” Maria said laughing while walking back to the table with Alex.

‘Leave it to Maria to spoil a good moment’

Liz started to laugh at the memory. She and Max had been over her house watching Power Rangers. They were about 10 and they wanted to fight bad guys like they did. Max thought he could beat Liz up since she was a girl so he wanted to be the villain. What he didn’t know was she had just started going to karate class. She had tried to tell him, but he kept whining that he wanted to play. When he started to chase her she wanted to show him what she could really do. She got into her stance and waited for him to make the first move. He gave he a little shove and she retaliated. She pushed him back and he fell to the floor fracturing his arm. He didn’t cry or anything, he was just pissed that a girl beat him up.

“He didn’t break his arm, he just fractured it a little.” Liz said coming to Max defense.

That was one of her favorite childhood memories with Max. There were so many, but that one made the top ten. She could still remember the first day she had met Max. Well actually she first saw him get off the bus in 1st with his sister Isabel, then she knew she wanted to meet him. When they actually did meet it had been recess time. Liz was swinging on the swings and wanted to see how far she could jump off. She jumped and landed on her butt, but when she looked up she saw Max staring at her from behind a tree in the yard. She slowly made her way towards him not wanting to frighten him away. When she finally got there she smiled and sat against the tree. Max, still not saying a word, sat down next to her.

“Hi.” She said shyly.

He still just stared at her.

“I’m Liz, what’s your name.”

“Max.” he whispered.

She smiled.

“Well from now on Max your gonna be my bestest friend okay. It’s scary here and I don’t know anyone.”

“Me either.”

“Well, now we know each other so we won’t be alone.”

Max smiled and moved his hand over Liz’s tiny one. She smiled brightly at him and enveloped his hand into hers squeezing it tight.

From that day on they were inseparable. They eventually met Alex and Maria but that wasn’t until the second grade. In first grade it was just them. Liz loved that memory. It was her all time favorite. When Max took a hold of her hand she knew she had gained his trust, and his trust was very important to her. Their whole relationship was important to her. She’d always thought that they would have been a couple by now. Since they were so close and all, but Liz gave up on giving him ‘signals’ a long time ago. No one knew that she had liked him in that way. That part of her was fast asleep. Now she was ready to move on and she was gonna move on with Kyle.

~mg_ros *bounce*

*tongue* Next Part will be "The Party" *wink*

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posted on 19-Oct-2002 11:22:05 AM by mg_ros
Just bumping and wondering if anyone could make me a banner? I would but I suck at it! And does anyone know why the board changed? I liked it the other way better.........

posted on 19-Oct-2002 11:23:50 AM by mg_ros
Sorry posted twice. whoops.


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posted on 21-Oct-2002 10:29:17 PM by mg_ros

New Part soon! I Hope By Thursday, but I'm not promising cause when I do that I never pull through and then I feel really bad so hopefully by Thursday if not Saturday cause on Friday night I got a Dance/Party to go too! *wink*

posted on 23-Oct-2002 7:06:33 PM by mg_ros
New Part on it's way but again I have a tiny bit of a problem. When I was sleeping I cut the corner of my eye and look like a pirate with my patch. Now I have drops to put in my eyes but the doctor recomended no computer for a couple days so that sets me back....sorry I'm just bad luck for getting sick and hurting my self!!! But no promises but I'll try to sneek on here like now when no one is seeing me..... I got to this quick my roomate just came it.

~mg_ros *wink* Ow.....
posted on 27-Oct-2002 6:11:23 PM by mg_ros
Okay here's the next Part, but sorry the part will be longer so I made it Chapter Three and that will be posted in a little while cause I'm almost finished with it!!!

Chapter Two B

Max went through the whole day thinking how bad tonight was going to be. He could just see it now. He’ll sitting beside Liz as usual but instead of her clinging to him throughout the movie she’ll be clinging to Kyle Valenti . He didn’t even like the guy. He seemed so fake. It was like he was using Liz or something. And he wasn’t saying that no one would want to go out with Liz, because to him she was the most beautiful girl in the world, but maybe he was just jealous. Yeah, that’s right he was just jealous because he was such a loser and he couldn’t ask Liz out first. Suddenly he heard a voice behind him.


Max turned around and saw Maria standing in the parking lot.

“Hey.” He said.

“Feeling blue?” She asked.

“Yeah, it is that obvious?”

“A little.”


“I’ve got a plan that I think will have you win Liz.”

Max perked up, but then he realized that this was Maria. She was Lucy Ricardo reincarnated. She was always coming up with plans and he always seemed to be the Ethel in them.

“Uh Oh. I’m not listening Maria.”

“Pleaaassseee!” She whined.

“Jeez, okay what is it?”

“You date someone.”

“That’s your master plan?”

“Yup.” She said proudly.

“Good one Maria.” He said sarcastically making his way to the Jeep.

Maria followed him.

“Just listen okay. If you start to date someone she’ll start to see you being taken away from her and she’ll like you do. It’s the best plan I’ve come up with!”

“Yeah, you said the last time and it turned out to be a disaster. I don’t how you ever got me to go into the Sheriff’s house and try to confirm the myth that he wore thongs. I can’t believe I actually saw one!”

Maria started to laugh and snort.

“Yeah, it’s too bad you got caught. I really wanted to see that thing up close.”

“But Maria back to this Liz thing I don’t think it’ll work.”

Maria stopped laughing and put a serious look on her face.

“Max, we’ve been buds since the second grade. I’ve been buds with Liz since the second grade. Now I know that Liz absolutely hates Pam Troy. Now if suddenly you started to I don’t know…. date her it would make Liz want to pop, resulting in her wanting you all to herself. It’s the greatest plan in the whole world! Max, you got to trust me. I wouldn’t tell you this if I wasn’t positive it wouldn’t result in you and her being together. I don’t know Kyle, and I don’t want to know Kyle. He’s not good for her, but I know you are. So you in?”

Max sighed. He listened carefully to every word Maria said to him. He was moved that she felt that way and he knew he couldn’t let her down or let himself down.

“Okay I’m in.”

Maria started to jump up and down with excitement! She went up to him and hugged him tight.

“This is going to the best. Just play it cool tonight and tomorrow our plan goes into action!”

Max smiled and got into his Jeep. He turned back and looked at Maria.

“So you’re su---”

Maria interrupted him knowing exacting what he was saying.

“Yes I’m sure it will work! See you later!”

Maria walked to the Jetta where she saw Liz waiting.

I hope this really does work, cause if not I’m a Light Bulb. I’m so gonna be Screwed!


Be Back Soon, Check Back IN An Hour!!
posted on 27-Oct-2002 8:08:25 PM by mg_ros
Okay it took a little more than an hour but I still have it!!!

Chapter Three

Max had decided to carpool with Maria and Alex to Liz’s house. Halfway there he decided that it was bad idea. Alex started to play with the radio dial and Maria hit his hand hard and almost swerved off the road.

“I meant to do that. And Alex how many times do I have to tell you not to touch my RADIO!”

Maria turned the radio on and turned it to her favorite station. It was all these mushy songs about love and crap. Then a certain song came on that Max could relate to.

She rolls the window down
And she
Talks over the sound
Of the cars that pass us by
And I don't know why
But she's changed my mind

Would you look at her
She looks at me
She's got me thinking about her constantly
But she don't know how I feel
And as she carries on without a doubt
I wonder if she's figured out
I'm crazy for this girl

She was the one to hold me
The night
The sky fell down
And what was I thinking when
The world didn't end
Why didn't I know what I know now

Right now
Face to face
All my fears
Pushed aside
And right now
I'm ready to spend the rest of my life
With you

Max sighed in the back seat lying down as he thought about the song and Liz.

‘Why can’t I just tell her?’

“We’re here.” Maria called out.

“You ready Max?” Alex asked.


“Oh well you have to be. And don’t worry. You and me , we’ll stand up to the Kyle Valenti’s of the world but first we have to start off with The Kyle Valenti. So now are you ready My Little Rocky In Training?”

“No, and if you ever call me that again I’ll knock you out.”

Alex saluted.

“Yes sir.”

Max smiled and followed Maria into the Crashdown.

He saw his friend and Maria’s potential boyfriend Michael Guerin behind the grill. They always invited him to come and watch movies with them, but he would always just say he wasn’t into them. Max saw that Maria was still going to try again to persuade him.

As Max got closer he could here Maria whining.


“I can’t. I have to work.” He said.

“Gosh, you’re so not boyfriend material. I can’t even believe I was even partially interested in you!”

“Ditto!” He barked.

Maria smiled and walked up to him.

“You were interested in me?”

Michael let his guard down.

“Yeah, of course. You’re my little Pixie.”

Maria smiled and gave Michael a kiss. Max couldn’t even watch it and he kicked himself without being so forward like they were with their feelings. Max heard running from the stairs and he saw Liz standing at the bottom.

“Come on you guys! I want to start watching the movie!!”

“Okay.” Maria said.

She turned back to Michael.


“Fine.” He said in a huff, but strangely he grinned when Maria turned her head.

Max followed them up the stairs Alex right behind him.

They all sat on the ground in the living room. Maria and Michael cuddled together and so did Liz and Kyle.

Alex looked at both couples and turned to Max.

“Should we cuddle?”

Max gave Alex a look and threw and bag of chips at him.

“Ow, That hurt honey.”

“Oh I’m sorry dear. Do you want me to make it all better?” Max asked fluttering his eyes.

Then Max realized everyone was looking at him. He laughed nervously and sat down next to Liz. He took off his brown leather jacket and placed it on the couch. Liz got up and put the video. As the previews past and the movie started Max started to think about the memory that linked with this movie. Liz watched the screen wondering what the movie was. When she saw the title she looked at Max and smiled then glared at him. He smiled back evilly. He knew that Liz was afraid of Chucky and he just had to rent Child’s Play. Too bad he do that last week. Doesn’t he have great timing? Still watching the movie his mind went back to his memory.

‘ Time for a Flashback.’


An 11-year-old Liz walked to Max’s front door. She started to knock and the door opened.

“Max?” She yelled.

She walked in father. It was dark all around the house, and he knew she hated the dark.

“Max!!? Are you here?”

She walked to the stairs and started walking up them. The she heard and “vroom” sound.

“Weird” she whispered.

She walked up farther and saw something come towards her. The “vroom” sound was getting closer and closer. Then she saw a remote controlled car come out the shadows and a doll was on top of it driving. She couldn’t make out the face of the doll until it was right below he staring up at her.

“Hello Liz, wanna play?” It asked.

Liz screamed and ran down the hallway. The car started to follow her and then the car tipped over. Liz looked back and saw something fall out of the doll.

“A walkie talkie.” She whispered.

“You can not escape me! Mwaaahahahah!”

She gave the toy a look. She looked down at the doll and picked it up and threw it down the stairs.

“I am invincible! You will not even be able to touch me!”

Then she heard a loud crashing sound come from Isabel’s room.

“OW! MOTHER FU----. I mean I love my mother! Don’t you Liz?”

Liz walked into Isabel’s room and stood in the middle listening for any sound.

She heard Max giggling. It was coming from the closest. Max didn’t realize he was still holding the button to talk.

“Hey! G-I Joe doesn’t wear pink sequin dresses to war! And hey! That’s my Barbie!”

Liz started to laugh hysterically at that remark. When Max realized she was right outside the closet he opened the door and fell out on his face. Liz went over and helped him up, then she hit him in the arm.

“That was a mean trick to play on me! You know I’m scared to death of Chucky, but that was all made up with the Barbie remark!!”

Liz fell on Isabel’s bed laughing so hard.

“I was kidding. I knew you were out there!”

“Sure Max.”

Max pulled her off the bed and they ran into his room and played Super Nintendo the whole time.

* End Of Flashback

Max was smiling and started to chuckle at the memory. Everyone looked at him and his eyes went to the screen and he saw Andy’s aunt get pushed out of a window. Then he realized the stares.

“What? Like you’ve never laughed at someone getting pushed out of a window before?”

Max turned his attention back to the screen. Then he looked towards Liz.

Even though she was wrapped up in Kyle’s arms Liz was still cold. She reached over and grabbed Max’s jacket. She pulled it on and hugged herself with it. She could smell the scent of Max on it and it always made her feel warm. She looked over at Max and smiled. She wished she were in his arms. It was weird, but she had thought Kyle was more romantic than this or something. Maybe this whole thing with Kyle was a way to make Max jealous. Maybe she just wanted to see how he would react. And so far she saw nada. She knew Max never felt that way about her, but she still wished. And for now she’d just have to settle for Kyle so she cuddled closer to him.

Max ripped his eyes away from Liz. He couldn’t take it that she was doing this to him, but he knew it wasn’t on purpose. He saw Alex’s cell phone next to him and dialed his own number. His phone started to ring. Everyone looked at him. He stood up and made his way out the door to “answer his phone call”.

Max walked down the stairs and onto the sidewalk. He walked past all the shops that closed and sat on a bench. He heard foot steps behind him so he turned around.

I have a smile
stretched from ear to ear
to see you walking down the road

we meet at the lights
I stare for a while
the world around disappears

just you and me
on this island of hope
a breath between us could be miles

“Hey.” The voice said.

“Liz what are you doing out here?”

“I was curious to see why you ran out like that.”

“Had a phone call.”

He picked up his phone and showed her.

let me surround you
my sea to your shore
let me be the calm you seek

“Oh well. Are you gonna come back to the movie?”

“No, ummm Isabel wants me to get her something. And you know her it’s life or death.”

Liz smiled.

“Right Ummm….Call me? Later. Okay?”


Liz smiled and walked back to the Crashdown still hugging Max’s leather coat around herself.

oh and every time I'm close to you
there's too much I can't say
and you just walk away

When Max saw Liz walk away he had this strange feeling that after tonight things were going to change between them and for the worse. He looked as she walked away from him wishing he could have told her the truth and said more.

and I forgot
to tell you
I love you
and the night's
too long
and cold here
without you
I grieve in my condition
for I cannot find the strength to say I need you so.


Crazy For This Girl by Evan and Jaron
I Love You by Sarah McLachlan


posted on 27-Oct-2002 8:17:05 PM by mg_ros
Whoops!! Sorry!


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posted on 28-Oct-2002 9:04:01 PM by mg_ros
Thanks you guys!!! And here's a happy bump! New aprt soon, still on Pre-Writing!!!

posted on 15-Nov-2002 7:41:53 PM by mg_ros
Sorry I haven't been here to update but today is your lucky day folk because yes I again I am sick and have an emormous amount of time to write!! *happy* okay maybe not a smiley for me but hey! So here you go!

Chapter 4

Liz had done a lot of thinking since last night and this morning and she had finally come to a decision. It hadn’t taken her a long time to notice the problem at hand, but she didn’t want to make Maria so happy that she would start in on the whole ‘I told you so’ thing. Liz walked into school looking and feeling good and determined to find Maria. She went down the hallway and waited by Maria’s locker. She finally saw her coming and a smil went across her face.

“Hey.” She said.

Maria walked up to her and did the combination to her locker.

“Hey.” She said.

Maria took a closer look at Liz’s face.

“Why you so smiley all of a sudden?”

“Because I have great news!”

“What the----” Maria said looking past Liz.


Liz turned around and saw Max and Pam Troy looking pretty chummy together. Her smiled turned to a grimace as she really noticed whom he was with.

‘Great!’ she thought.

Maria had to turn away.

“I’m BLIND! I’m BLIND!” she cried.

Liz turned around.

“Can I be blind too?”

Maria looked up at Liz.

“Okay please tell me good news!” she pleaded.

‘Well I don’t like Kyle because he’s such a dull donkey.’

“I really like Kyle and I’m thinking of going out with him again.”

Maria’s body sagged.

“Yippe!” she said sarcastically.

“Yeah,” Liz said turning back to look at Max and Pam. “ Yippe!” she mummbled.

Liz pulled her backpack over her shoulder and walked down the opposite way in the hall.

‘Please let this day end!’


Okay so I thought maybe God would give me a break and I’d fall and break my arm or leg or get really sick. Either way I’d have to be sent home. Do you know how tough it is to look at someone you’ve yearned for like…since the day you met them and see them with someone else? I mean Max totally has the right to be with anyone he chooses, but PAM? PAM TROY? ‘Ms. I’m a Slut of the Universe’ was Max’s choice? I mean hey there are better people in this school than Pam Troy! Okay I’m know I’m jealous, but Maria and Alex feel my pain… even Isabel! She just got home from her aunt’s house yesterday and now she comes to school seeing her own brother making goo-goo eyes at her rival. She thinks he’s gone insane. So do the rest of us. We try to turn away from it, but can you? Everywhere you look there they are! Believe me I’ve tried looking elsewhere! Maybe it’s a joke, yeah, that’s all it is!

Liz looked up from writing in her journal at the lunch table. She glanced over to the line and again saw Max and Pam.

Okay, maybe not. I know this though. Something is very fishy and It’s Not The Fish Sticks For Lunch Today!!!!! UGGGGGGGHHHHHH!!! I wanna KNOW!!!

Liz closed the cover of her journal and slammed it. Alex, Maria, and Isabel all looked at her.

“What?” She said innocently with a shrug.

Alex shook his head.


Isabel poked at her lunch and sighed. She looked up at her friends eyeing everyone of them.

“Okay I’m like away for what 2 days? How could let my misguided brother does such a thing? He’s only hurting himself having to look at that retched dogfaced thing!”

Maria slammed her palms on the table.

“Okay, Okay it was me!” she cried.

Liz, Isabel, and Alex looked at her.

“What? He was like ‘ Maria help me with the----you know.”

Isabel and Alex understood, but Liz was still in the dark.

“With the what?”

“Homework.” Alex said quickly.


“Yeah Max needed help with his homework so he asked Maria and she said that Pam was really good at the homework so he asked her.” Alex breathed.

Liz was skeptical, but took the answer not believing a word he said.

“Okay….” She said.

She looked up and saw Max sit down at Pam’s table. She saw they just accepted him. They were all laughing with him and she knew that Alex, Maria, his sister, and Michael who just sat down at the table meant nothing to him anymore. And it hurt… he was changed and there was no changing him back.

She sighed and left as quickly as she could when the bell rang.


She walked down the hall as the last class of the day was over. She went to her locker, as usual, put her stuff in the locker, closed it up, and walked down the hallway to her car, as usual. Kyle stepped in front of her, unusual.

“Hey Parker.”

She forced a smile.

“Hi Kyle.”

“So I had a great time last night.”

Liz shook her head up and down repeatedly.

“Me too.”

“So I was thinking tonight…”

“Uh Kyle…”

Just then she heard Max and Pam talking.

“So tonight, movies?” Max asked.

“Yeah sure sweet thing!” Pam squealed.

Liz grimaced.

‘Sweet-thing? He hates being called cutesy names!’


She looked up and saw Kyle was still standing there.

“Right…tonight. Sure, how about the…movies?”

Kyle smiled.

“Yeah, I had fun with your friends last night. I know you might not want to go out alone so you can bring them if you want.”

Liz smiled.

“Wow. Thanks. That means a lot coming from a guy.” She said sweetly.

She looked behind her and saw Max take a glance in her direction. She tore away and looked back at Kyle.


“No problem. Umm I should go, my parents will kill me if I’m a second late, but umm call me okay?”


Liz walked to the doors and walked outside to her Explorer. She opened the door, sat in the seat, and banged her head on the steering wheel.

“Life sucks.”

She lifted her head and turned the car on. She flipped the radio on to her favorite station and drove out of the parking lot. She was singing along with the radio then the song ended and another song came on. She started to sing along with it.

Uh huh, life's like this
Uh huh, uh huh, that's the way it is
Cause life's like this
Uh huh, uh huh that's the way it is

Chill out whatcha yelling' for?
Lay back it's all been done before
And if you could only let it be
you will see
I like you the way you are
When we're drivin' in your car
and you're talking to me one on one but you've become

Somebody else round everyone else
You're watching your back like you can't relax
You're tryin' to be cool you look like a fool to me
Tell me

Why you have to go and make things so complicated?
I see the way you're acting like you're somebody else gets me frustrated
Life's like this you
And you fall and you crawl and you break
and you take what you get and you turn it into honesty
and promise me I'm never gonna find you fake it
no no no

You come over unannounced
dressed up like you're somethin' else
where you are and where it's at you see
you're making me
laugh out when you strike your pose
take off all your preppy clothes
you know you're not fooling anyone
when you've become

Somebody else round everyone else
Watching your back, like you can't relax
Trying to be cool you look like a fool to me
Tell me

Why you have to go and make things so complicated?
I see the way you're acting like you're somebody else gets me frustrated
Life's like this you
and You fall and you crawl and you break
and you take what you get and you turn it into
promise me I'm never gonna find you fake it
no no no

Liz switched off the radio and sighed.

“Well that was refreshing.”

She parked in the alley next to the ladder to her balcony. She slipped out of the car and climbed up. She saw her guitar lying on the lawn chair. Max, Alex, Maria, and Isabel all bought her that guitar when she turned 14. They had all put their allowances together that they had saved up for a year. Isabel picked it out because it was sparkly and blue and she knew that was Liz’s favorite color. Liz sat down and put the on her lap. She put the strap around her and started to strum the chords. She moved and sat against the wall and just played and sang.

Inside my skin there is this space
It twists and turns
It bleeds and aches
Inside my heart there's an empty room
It's waiting for lightning
It's waiting for you
And I am wanting
And I am needing you here
Inside the absence of fear
Muscle and sinew
Velvet and stone
This vessel is haunted
It creaks and moans
My bones call to you
In their separate skin
I make myself translucent
To let you in, for
I am wanting
And I am needing of you here
Inside the absence of fear
there is this hunger
This restlessness inside of me
and it knows that you're no stranger
you're my gravity
My hands will adore you through all darkness aim
They will lay you out in moonlight
And reinvent your name
For I am wanting you
And I am needing you here
I need you near
Inside the absence of fear


Complicated by Avril Lavigne
Absence Of Fear by Jewel


posted on 15-Nov-2002 9:16:52 PM by mg_ros
sweetygurl originally wrote:
ok I thought it would be funny to see how liz would react to seeing max with someone else but PAM TROY!!!!!! girl what were u thinking?

Well I am lightheaded.....


posted on 21-Nov-2002 10:49:17 PM by mg_ros
Thanks for the feedback guys!

Hopefully I can get all my fics new chapters by Sunday. I haven't updated my fic "Welcome To The Roswellian Hellmouth" in the longest time, but I feel that I should give you another chapter really soon, also I just watch Will & Grace and I feel really sad :( So give some feedback to cheer me up and remember:

The more the feedback, the more the chapters!!!!

posted on 1-Dec-2002 4:34:21 PM by mg_ros
Hey guys! I made it!!! I know I said it was going to be earlier but with Thannksgiving and with the board being down I had much more time!!! The part is not that long , but hey I'm posting *happy*

Chapter 5

“Pleeeeeaaaaaasssssseeeee!!!!” Liz pleaded on three-way with Maria and Isabel.

“Fine, but I’m only there so I can spy on my brother!” Isabel said.

“Well, I don’t like Kyle so I don’t know.” Maria said rolling her eyes to herself at the thought of Kyle Valenti.

“Maria just do it for me. If you do I’ll tell you a secret.”

Maria thought for a second in silence.

“Okay. But I’m only doing this because of the you and Max situation.”

“You think I care?” Liz said even though she did.

“Uh huh. Lizzie we’re your best friends, we know when you’re lying.” Isabel said shuffling through her clothes.

Liz looked down at the floor.

‘Damn they’re good’

“Fine, maybe I do care, but it’s only because he’s dating ‘ Miss. Silicon U.S.A. .’”

“Ouch.” Maria said, “Chica, I just want to say I’m sorry again.”

“Maria, for the four-hundredth time, it’s okay!” Liz said, lying.

“Yeah right.” Isabel muttered.

“I heard that!” Maria yelled into the phone.

“I know Maria, you were meant too.” Isabel rolled her eyes, “ Liz, why don’t you just give Max a call.”

“Oh yeah what’s his number again, 1-800- I’m- Dating- A- Skanky- Ho?

“Meow.” Maria said laughing.

Isabel started to laugh.

“Okay, so when do we meet at the movies?”

“I think Kyle said to meet around eight o’ clock.”

“Cool. Meet you guys there. Bye.” Isabel said hanging up.

“So Liz, are you sure you want to go through with this?” Maria asked.

“Maria, I think it’s time for me to be audacious.”

Maria sat there trying to remember what audacious meant. After a minute it came to her.

“Oh…okay. See ya babe.”

“See ya.” They hung up.

‘Hell what am I saying, I should be as prudent as possible. Damnit! I can’t believe I’m still using those S.A.T words!’


Maria stood outside the movie theater waiting for the gang to come.

‘They better get here quick! It’s so damn hot out here!!! Comeeeeeee onnnnnnnnnn!!!!’

She waited a little longer until she saw Isabel and Alex head towards.

“Hey guys!”

“Hey Maria!” Alex said standing next to Isabel.

“Hey Maria, is Liz here yet with Kyle?”

Maria looked at her like she had three eyes and twelve arms.

“Does it look like she’s here? I’ve been waiting her all by my self and do any of you care? NO! I stand here with my tan tang top and khaki skirt, while you come with your red halter top and denim skirt!”

“What does that have anything to with you standing her by yourself?”

“Nothing, I just really like that outfit.”

“Ugggghhhh! Maria!!!” Isabel said strangling the air in between herself and Maria.

“Hey look, here comes Kyle and Liz.” Alex said.

‘Thank the lord!’ he thought.

Kyle and Liz walked up to the rest of the gang.

“Hey, you guys ready?” Kyle asked.

“Yeah.” They all said in unison.


They all stood in the lobby trying to figure out what movie to see.

“How about ‘The Ring’?” Isabel asked.

“What about ‘Die Another Day’?” Alex suggested.

“Hey what about ‘Harry Potter’?” Maria said.

They all looked at her.

What? It was a suggestion.”

Kyle turned to Liz.

“Do you want to see some chick flick or something? I don’t mind.”

‘Okay Liz use the brain that God gave you. Now if I were Pam I’d be wearing a real skanky out fit, squeaky my way down through Main Street, amd I would want to see a ”chick flick” so if you want to be good Liz, you’ll watch another movie so you won’t seem like your spying on the guy you’ve been in love with since the first grade.’

“No, that’s okay. We can see whatever you want.”

“How about ‘Die Another Day’?”

“Sure.” “Yeah” “Cool” Everyone said.

Kyle went up to the booth and got the tickets. Liz scanned the room for any sign of “The Mouse”…ummmm Pam, she meant Pam. She saw that they were on the ticket line too. She saw that Kyle was done so she duck under his shoulder. She was sure that they hadn’t seen her, but she still had to be sure.

Kyle looked down at her.

“Liz, what are you doing?”

“Ummm, there are some people here that I really don’t want to see.”

“Oh, okay than. Umm Liz.”

She looked up.

“Yeah Kyle?”

“Ummm the other night when we were at your house watching the movie, I know I probably seemed dull and talked way too much about sports , but it was only because I was shy, if you can believe that, and I wanted to tell you tonight is not going to be like that. Tonight is going to be the best night ever.”

Liz smiled.

‘I believe you Kyle, strangely I believe you.’ She thought to herself.

They all walked into the theater, sat in the middle row and waited for the fun to begin.

*tongue* mg_ros
posted on 2-Dec-2002 10:44:46 PM by mg_ros
StardustDreamer,AlienDreamer101,roswellluver,cglenn, sweetygurl,LPorter, and buffylicious

Thanks for the feedback, I love you guys!!!! *big*

( sorry if I missed anyone *sad* )

~mg_ros *tongue*

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posted on 17-Dec-2002 4:38:46 PM by mg_ros
Okay so shoot me! I know I haven't been here but it's not just you guys. I've been deluged with work from my teachers and I just can't say:

"So I can't, I have a fan fic to write!"

So I hope you can understand. I go on vacation friday so then I'll start pumping up the chapters and making more cliffhangers! lol

Luv you guys lots,

posted on 25-Dec-2002 9:49:21 PM by mg_ros
New part Tomorrow


posted on 30-Dec-2002 12:05:41 PM by mg_ros
Hey! I had a new part done 2 days ago but I couldn't get on the board for like ever!!! I don't know if it was my computer or the server here but anyways.....

New Part!!!!!!!!

Chapter 6

Max waited on line with Pam. He liked Pam. She wasn’t that annoying. The only thing was…. she wasn’t Liz. It didn’t matter how many girls he went out with. It wasn’t Liz and no one ever would be. Then he saw it. He saw Liz duck under Kyle’s shoulder. He saw her smile at him as he said something then he saw them walk into “Die Another Day”.

They stepped up in the line and he looked at Pam. She was pretty, and she was nice…. to some people, and could be funny…once in a while. But she would have to do. He needed to get over Liz. She obviously didn’t see him the same way he saw her. So now it was time to move on….

‘ What are you saying Max, you couldn’t live a day without Liz Parker you donkey!


Max stepped into “Die Another Day” even through the numerous complaints coming from Pam.

“But Maxie Poo, this isn’t for me! Let’s see something else.” She squeaked, “How about we see “Two Weeks Notice”. We can sneak in” she said in a singy songy voice.

Would Liz like to see “Two Weeks Notice”? She did slightly resemble Sandra Bullock and one of her favorite movies was “Speed”. What is it you’re thinking man? Get over Liz! Think about Pam!

Then he saw Liz sitting in the middle row next to Kyle watching the screen. She looked like she was thinking something profound.

She always has that look in science class.

Before he could think anymore Pam pulled him into a seat in the front row. The room got dark and the movie started.


‘ Okay Liz just because you just saw Max enter the theater and look at you doesn’t mean you should panic.


Whew! Got that out! Just watch the movie and look like you’re thinking about something really profound like you do in science!

The movie was beginning to start but Liz couldn’t help looking up the front row to where Max and Pam were sitting. She looked to her left at Maria who was glaring at them like a wild animal ready to kill. She looked to her left and saw Kyle watching the beginning with James Bond putting a bomb in a case full of diamonds. She saw Pam snuggle close to Max and had the sudden urge to throw a Junior Mint at her. Maria must have been thinking the same because she could see that she was pouring at least the whole box of Junior Mints in her hand.

I'm gonna wake up, yes and no
I'm gonna kiss some part of
I'm gonna keep this secret
I'm gonna close my body now

I guess, die another day
I guess, die another day
I guess, die another day
I guess, die another day

Liz started to giggle. Maria looked at her and slyly grinned. Kyle looked over and saw the mound in Maria’s palm. He reached over and took one. He looked around the room and coincidently saw Max and Pam, the only couple in the front row, and threw it at Max’s head. It hit him and Liz and Maria both ducked down and started to laugh. Kyle laughed and took another one, this time aiming at Pam. Max turned around, but then didn’t see anything suspicious so turned back around to the movie.

I guess I'll die another day
(Another day)
I guess I'll die another day
(Another day)
I guess I'll die another day
(Another day)
I guess I'll die another day

Sigmund Freud
Analyze this
Analyze this
Analyze this

I'm gonna break the cycle
I'm gonna shake up the system
I'm gonna destroy my ego
I'm gonna close my body now

Uh, uh

Liz looked at Kyle.

“Do you even know who those people are?” she whispered.

He looked at her.

“I know one of them is Pam Troy and I pity the fool who would even think of going out with her.” He whispered back.

I think I'll find another way
There's so much more to know
I guess I'll die another day
It's not my time to go

For every sin, I'll have to pay
I've come to work, I've come to play
I think I'll find another way
It's not my time to go

I'm gonna avoid the cliche
I'm gonna suspend my senses
I'm gonna delay my pleasure
I'm gonna close my body now

Liz smiled and took a Junior Mint from Maria’s hand. She played with it a little in her hand so it would melt. She aimed at Pam’s head and threw it. Much to Liz’s pleasure the Junior Mint got stuck in her hair without her knowing it. Liz snorted and turned to Maria.

“I think this is the best time I’ve ever had at the movies!”

Maria took some of Alex’s buttery popcorn and threw at Max. Then she turned to Liz and smiled.

“I think I know what you mean.”

I guess, die another day
I guess I'll die another day
I guess, die another day
I guess I'll die another day

I think I'll find another way
There's so much more to know
I guess I'll die another day
It's not my time to go

Uh, uh


I guess, die another day
I guess I'll die another day
I guess, die another day
I guess I'll die another day

Another day [x6]

Liz could see that Pam was going to be one pissed off woman when she sees what happened to her without even knowing it. Junior Mints, Popcorn, and wait what’s that? Gum? Liz looked at Isabel and saw she was smiling. So now due to the five of them Pam Troy was a walking candy stand. Liz went back to watching the movie. Hallie Berry just came out of the water and Pierce Brosnan was starting to talk to her. Her eyes diverted from the screen yet again to Max and Pam. Pam was snuggling closer to Max. She twisted his head towards her and kissed him right there. Liz felt like someone just stabbed her in the heart. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath. She stood up and made her way out of the row.

“Where are you going?” Maria asked.

Liz turned back.

“To the bathroom.” She lied.

Liz walked up the side to the doors. She walked through the lobby and out to the street.


Max was watching the beginning of the movie when all of a sudden he felt something pelt him in the back of the head. He didn’t mind it at first but then he felt it again. He turned around to see if he could find who was doing it, but it looked normal. He felt Pam snuggle close to him.

‘ Couldn’t she just get off me just a tad?’ he thought to himself.

He tried to go back to watching the movie but the whole time he felt as if someone was staring at him. Maybe his plan was working and Liz was jealous, but who was he kidding. She would never feel that way about him. The movie was getting good and then he saw Hallie Berry pop out of the water and walk up the beach. He felt someone turn his and head and then he was looking straight at Pam.

“This movie isn’t fun…but I know something that is.” She said getting closer.

She got closer and closer to kissing him and to anyone it probably looked like they were, but then Max pushed Pam off.

She looked at him confused.

“What?” she squealed.

He breathed.

“You’re going a little to fast for me Pam. Just take it down a. …couple notches.”

She sat back in her seat and pouted.

Max turned his head to see if Liz saw that, but then he saw she was gone.


Liz had walked all the way to the Roswell Middle School from the movie theater. She walked into the playground and sat on the very same swing she was on when she saw Max that day in First Grade.

“This is where it all started.” She whispered then she began to swing.

This is the place where I sit
This is the part where
I love you too much
Is this as hard as it gets?
'Cause I'm getting tired
Of pretending I'm tough
I'm here if you want me
I'm yours, you can hold me
I'm empty and taken and
Tumbling and breakin'
'Cause you don't see me
And you don't need me
And you don't love me
The way I wish you would
The way I know you could

Liz stopped the swing and jumped off. She wandered over to the tree where she and Max first talked to each other. The day they trusted each other. That was the day she fell in love with him…

I dream of worlds
Where you'd understand
And I dream a
Million sleepless nights
I dream of fire when
You're touching my hand
But it twists into smoke
When I turn on the light
I'm speechless and faded
It's too complicated
Is this how the book ends,
Nothing but good friends?

'Cause you don't see me
And you don't need me
And you don't love me
The way I wish you would

She wondered what was happening now. If Maria or Kyle or Isabel and Alex even noticed she was gone. If they noticed she wasn’t going back. Liz stood up and walked the rest of the way home.

This is the place in my heart
This is the place where
I'm falling apart
Isn't this just where we met?
And is this the last chance
That I'll ever get?
I wish I was lonely
Instead of just only
Crystal and see-through
And not enough to you

'Cause you don't see me
And you don't need me
And you don't love me
The way I wish you would

'Cause you don't see me
And you don't need me
And you don't love me
The way I wish you would
The way I know you could

What Liz didn’t notice was someone was watching her the whole time. From when she was on the swing till now when she started to walk home. They had followed her after they noticed she had left and wasn’t going to return. When they saw she was far enough down the road they got back into their car and followed her.

~mg_ros Enjoy........... *tongue*
posted on 3-Jan-2003 12:22:42 PM by mg_ros
Since we're having this huge snowstorm in my area now, I can't go anywhere, not like I was since I don't back to school till a week, but maybe I can get a new part and quench your thirst (damn sprite commercials!) to know who this mysterious person stalking Liz is!!!! Well she isn't gonna see M..............shit!!!!!! GTG!!!


P.S You're not gonna know, it could be me!!!!!!!!

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posted on 4-Jan-2003 5:19:18 PM by mg_ros
Hey!!! Thank you for all the bumps. My computer blew up and I'm sneaking on the labtop!! shhhhh!!! So now I'm bored cause I know I'll get repremanded for this by my big sis!!! I'm gonna write a new part along with my Roswellian Hellmouth story!!! sooooooo keep bumping I love it when you guys do that!!! Luv ya lots!!

posted on 19-Jan-2003 1:27:16 PM by mg_ros
I'm Back!!!!! New part by today!! You guys so deserve it! Luv ya's lots!!!

posted on 26-Jan-2003 10:03:15 AM by mg_ros
Sorry, I know I said new part but then something suddenly came up, but definatly today!!!!!

posted on 26-Jan-2003 10:18:54 AM by mg_ros
Thank You roswelllover for this!!!


posted on 26-Jan-2003 9:55:23 PM by mg_ros
New Part! Now long, but you wanted it!


Chapter 7

Liz walked in to her room and landed on her bed, resting her head on her soft pillow. She closed her eyes and tried to fall asleep so she could dream about her life different than the way it was. As she was finally drifting off she heard something outside on her balcony. She opened one eye to see a dark figure coming up the ladder. Liz sat up and made her way to her window. As she climbed through the figure came into view. She was surprised to see them.

“What are you doing here, Max?”

Max looked up at her face.

“Liz, I can’t let you be with Kyle. I can’t let you just be with another guy.”

Liz was confused.


Max looked down at the floor then back up to her.

“Because I feel things for you.”

Liz started to blush.

‘He feels things for me?’ Liz thought to herself.

“What kind of things?”

Max took her hand into his.

“I love you, Liz. I’ve always loved you.”

Liz smiled.

Max let out a sigh of relief and pulled Liz closer to him. Their faces were inches apart. Then Max moved closer, touching his lips onto hers. He planted a soft kiss on her lips and pulled back a little. He looked in her eyes and he could see that she wanted more, as did he. This time she closed off the gap between them and they were kissing under the stars. To Liz it felt like heaven. She was with Max. Max loved her. It was all she wanted. All she dreamed… dream… was it? Liz heard a knock at the door of her bedroom.

“Liz.” She could hear someone say.

A couple seconds past, but she was still kissing Max. Her went arms around his neck, pulling him closer to her.

“Liz can I come in?”

Before she knew it her eyes fluttered open to realize everything she had just experienced was a dream. It was all it was ever going to be…a dream.

“Please Liz.” The voice pleaded again.

“Come in.” she said sleepily.

The door opened to reveal her friend Maria. She came in and sat at the edge of her bed.

“What happened today chica?”

Liz turned towards Maria, hugging her pillow.

“What are you talking about?” She asked innocently.

Maria narrowed her eyebrows. Something she always does when she knows you’re lying.

“Come on Liz. What happened? Was it Max and Spam?”

Liz didn’t answer.

“Liz, I know you like him. You have to tell him girl. I mean hi I’m Teflon babe, but you, I know you and Max stick together. You always have. Even before me. And I don’t you to end up like Michael and me. I mean yeah we have our steamy moments, but I know you and Max have that look into my eyes soulmate thing.”

Liz sat up.

“Maria, Max and I… we just… we don’t belong together.”

Maria face fell to a frown.

“Don’t say that.”

“It’s that truth. I know it. If I was the apple of his eye, so to speak, don’t you think he would have said something?”

Maria took her friends face and held it close to her own.

“Liz, listen to me. How will you ever know if you don’t the courage to ask yourself. It’s turning into a woman’s world you know. It’s time for all of us to take a stand. It’s one step for the woman, and one giant leap over the dominant mankind.”

Liz started to chuckle.

“Leave it to you to have a ridiculous speech at bay.”

Maria smiled.

“You should go talk to him.”

Liz nodded.

“Good. See you in the morning! I want details!” Maria said closing the door behind her.

Liz looked over to her balcony.

“Time to make the dream a reality.” She said whispering to herself.


Liz walked from the Crashdown all the way to the other side of town. She finally stopped at the corner of Murray Lane and Main. The house on the corner was Max’s. She took a deep breath and walked to his window like she had so many times before in the past. She could see he was asleep, but she really needed to talk to him. She opened the window and hopped through. She closed the window and walked to the side of Max’s bed. She poked him and then pulled her finger away fast. He was still asleep.

“Max, wake up.” She whispered to him.

She lightly shook him.

“Max, I need to talk to you.”

She was about to shake him harder, but as she came closer she tripped on a shirt that was lying on the floor and fell lightly on top of him. She lifted her body slightly. Her head was right above his. She felt like she should kiss him. Maybe then he’d wake up like Sleeping Beauty and he’d fall in love and live happily ever after.

Before she could finally move off him Max turned to face the other side of the bed. Since she was on top of him, she was now beginning to be under him.

“Max.” she whispered in his ear.

“Liz.” He murmured in his sleep.



Max’s face was right on hers. She couldn’t believe he was actually kissing her in his sleep. It was only probably because she was there right now, but she didn’t care. She couldn’t help but give in. She lied waiting for him to do anything. His kissing went from her mouth to down her neck.

“Max.” she softly moaned in his ear.

“Liz.” He moaned back, his face in her hair.

Then Max realized something was different. It sure as hell didn’t feel like he was holding onto a pillow. He opened his eyes slightly to see Liz lying under him, breathing heavily.
His eyes widened.




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posted on 27-Jan-2003 9:45:56 PM by mg_ros
Thank you Qtygirl411,dreamer3082,Kittens,buffylicious,moonieADT,
roswellluver,TruLuvsAdvocate,Jessica_01,Eccentric One,
DevilishCas and anyone I missed

I really love the feedback!!! Luv you guys!!

posted on 1-Feb-2003 2:36:32 PM by mg_ros
Thanks everyone! New Part out soon!

posted on 8-Feb-2003 10:31:58 AM by mg_ros
New part today!!!! Yay!!!!

posted on 8-Feb-2003 8:26:41 PM by mg_ros
Almost done.................

posted on 8-Feb-2003 9:05:19 PM by mg_ros

Chapter 8

“Liz!” Max said surprised.

“Hey Max.” Liz said sheepishly.

Max quickly backed away from Liz. He couldn’t believe what had just happened. He had been asleep in his own bed dreaming about being with Liz and then magically she was there. But this couldn’t be magic there had to be a reason she was there. Maybe it was the one he was hoping for.

“What are you doing here Liz?” He asked.

She opened her mouth to say ‘she was here because she loved him’, but nothing came out except:

“I was scared.”

“Scared?” Max asked.

“Yeah, I um…heard a noise.”

Max tried to process this.

“You heard a noise so you came all the way across town.”

Liz looked around the room and then just nodded.

Max grabbed his keys off the dresser.

“I’m taking you home. Come on.”

Max was thankful when Liz came in that he was wearing sweat pants. He didn’t know what he’d do if he had been wearing just boxers and a Tee. Since he already had the sweat pants and a T-shirt on he grabbed his fleece pullover since Liz still had his jacket and was wearing it.

He led Liz to his window and climbed out and helped her do it as well. He didn’t want his parents to know Liz was here in the middle of the night, in his room no less, and start interrogating him about it. He walked towards the Jeep and got in. When Liz was seat belted in he started it.


The drive home was in silence and Liz didn’t know what to do or even say. She was completely embarrassed about what had took place and she couldn’t even imagine what could be going through Max’s head right now, but she still felt she needed to apologize.

“I’m sorry.” She blurted out breaking the silence.

“It’s okay.” Max said not looking at her.

“So…what were you dreaming about?” Liz asked playfully.

Max face turned a mixture of red and a pale. The Jeep started to trail off the road and was heading into the park.

~“Can I drive?” Liz asked.

“No.” Max said sternly.

“Then would you?” Liz said pointing towards the park.

“Whoa!” Max said as he swerved the Jeep back onto the road.

Liz breathed and laughed.

“Someone should warn Pam about your temper.”~

“Shut up, Liz.”

“You’re telling me to shut up?”

Max didn’t say anything, his eyes were still fixated on the road and his knuckles were gripping the steering wheel so hard they were turning white.

“Jeez, I guess I can’t mention the P-word in front of you. Is it a law? Underlings can’t mention the ‘oh holy name of Pam’? Oops!” Liz said getting annoyed.

“You don’t know anything. You don’t know how I feel. So just drop it. I feel good around them. Like I’m not being judged.”

“And we judge you? When did you want to be ‘Mr. I Want To Socialize’? Remember P.S.S.C.? The Public Speaking Sucks Club? You were president. When did you die and make me in charge?”

“I didn’t. I got new friends. So what if I don’t hang out with you guys 24/7. And so what if I have a girlfriend? Maria has Michael. Isabel has Alex. You have Kyle. And where did that leave me? So Pam liked me and I liked her back. And I like it.”

Liz wiped a tear from her eye. She wanted to know when everything got so screwed up. When everything got so complicated. When Max got so mean. When they were little she always got scared and went to Max. He protected her. She even believed he loved her. But he was happy now, and she had to deal even if it wasn’t with her.

~“Max, you know what, as long as you’re happy.” Liz said.

“Thank you,” Max said, “I am happy. I’m happy with my life. I’m with the way my life has turned around. I’m happy with…with…with…”

“Pam?” Liz suggested.

“I know her name. Yes, I’m happy with Pam.”~

“Good.” Liz said scrunching up into a ball in her seat while looking out her window.

“Good.” Max said shifting around in his seat.


The rest of the drive was left in silence. The both of them wanted to apologize to each other but didn’t know how. Max finally pulled into the alley so Liz could easily get into her room by her fire escape. As soon as Max stopped the Jeep, Liz jumped out and ran to the ladder and quickly climbed up. She ran into her run and plopped right onto her bed crying.

Turn out the light
Just say goodnight, to yourself
May I remind you
When you find you, you're all alone is when you've got to be strong
Cause that's when they call you, in the night
He's got your picture in his mind
He's got your number on a paper at his disposal anytime

Max felt like he had ruined his whole life. He didn’t know why he had said all those things he did and got so angry. He wanted to kill himself for being like that to Liz. He’d never want to be like that to her, to verbally abuse her. He knew he really didn’t, but it still sort of felt like it. He was sleepy and cranky and maybe that was part of it too, but it still didn’t make up for what he did.

Is it really true
Could you save yourself for someone who, loves you for you
So many times we just give it away, to someone who
Someone who you
Met in bar
The back of a car
And for a moment you felt important but not in your heart
My self esteem, it's been low, go ahead and count it's been lower than low
I know the feeling of it stealing life out from under me

Liz wiped her eyes. Her vision was blurry, but she managed to get to the phone. She dialed a familiar number, but it was still strange, and waited for the receiver to pick up.

I want to learn, how you save yourself for someone who, loves you for you
So many times we just give it away to someone who, couldn't even remember your name
Could you save yourself for someone who, loves you for you, loves me for me
Give it away to someone who someone who will cherish your name

Max drove around trying to free his mind. He knew he had to tell Liz, but he needed to get away from everyone and clear his head.

Cause I want to learn, can you save yourself for
Someone who will love you for you so many times we
Just give it away, someone who, couldn't even remember your name
You save yourself for someone who, loves you for you,
Loves me for me
Give it away to someone who, someone who will
Cherish your name
Cherish your name

Liz talked on the phone for a while. She couldn’t believe how this person was making her feel better. She’d know them for a while, but to talk to them one on one was a different story. It felt good. It was just what she needed to get to sleep after this horrific night.

~mg_ros *happy*

edited to say:

Quotes in ~~ Are from the movie Twister. I thought it went good with the scene between Bill and Jo so I wanted to include it.

Also the song is "Save Yourself" by Sense Field

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posted on 8-Feb-2003 9:33:24 PM by mg_ros
Qtygirl411 originally wrote:
that wuz soo sad!! please fix this I hate to see both of them hurting soo much! please kill pam and kyle...I mean I could do it but im not the writer so please let them acidentally crash into each other and die or something...and please have Max stop being so mean...o right and have Liz get some balls and just tell max...ok maybe not balls cuz that would probably be unappealing to Max if the were to umm "Bump uglies"



That was sooooo funny! I'll be sure to put that in somewhere, not the "bump uglies" thing, but the Kyle and Pam thing. And don't blame them! Blame Maria and MAx!!!!!! LOL

posted on 14-Feb-2003 5:04:24 PM by mg_ros

Thanks for all the feedback. You see I've been debating whether or not to put out a certain storyline. Now the one I really like so far ends in frequent cliffhangers. Yeah, Yeah, I know what you're thinking:

"You already give us cliffhangers you wench!"

Okay, maybe not the wench part. You see I don't want to end this story yet and I'm sure you don't it to end with Max and Liz together so soon. Bejesus I'm sounding Mr. Katims himself:

"A happy couple is a boring couple."

Sorry to say it, but for this fic the devil has a point. I don't want them to be happy just yet....but they will! In the end yours trully will come out with the most spectacular ending. I already have it in my head and guess what a picture too! Ha! But you guys do need to tell me if the cliffhanger thing is okay. Cause if not I'll come up with a new stroyline.
KK that's all for now. Tell me what you think and post more feedback! Luv ya's lots!



posted on 15-Feb-2003 1:05:52 PM by mg_ros

Umm today I don't think I'll be posting. I was watching Power Rangers this morning and the yellow ranger was one of my favorites (Thuy Trang). Well I went to see if she was going to be in any upcoming projects and I just found out she died two years ago in 2001. She was in a car accident. And I know that she was one of my childhood heros and she was a Power Ranger from 1993-1995 but I'm still on the verge of tears and I'm not in the mood to write so sorry, but it's sad for me. So today my best friend is feeling my sympathy and going to the movies with me.

Thuy Trang

December 14,1973 - September 3, 2001

R.I.P. Thuy, you'll be remembered

Also just to add, Thuy died because she wasn't wearing her seatbelt, so please if you drive always wear your seatbelt, it will save your life, because unlike Thuy, the person who hit her lived because they were wearing one.

Luv always,

mg_ros aka Natty

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posted on 17-Feb-2003 8:13:33 PM by mg_ros
Jessica_01 originally wrote:
ooh, I'm sorry to hear papa jsut recently died, and so I kno how it is to loose someone that u were in love with.......well u take ure time, we'll be waiting on ya! and we'll be here when u get back! or I ll be here ne wayz!!!


I'm really sorry to hear that. My prayers are with you. And thank you, this blizard in the northeast really hit us bad so I'm gonna be off for a couple of days cause we have a state of emergency. I have like about 3 feet of snow in my yard and my car is all under it too!!!! anywayz I'll try to get a new part in so keep a look out again and thanks for understanding...I luv you all!

posted on 22-Feb-2003 1:24:20 PM by mg_ros
New part today, working on it as we speak!

~mg_ros *happy*