Title: The Angry King
Rating: R to NC-17
Disclaimer: Roswell is still not mine
Time Frame: EOTW
Summary: Max goes crazy after he finding Liz in bed with Kyle.
Author's Note: feedback and suggestions are greatly appreciated
Chapter 1 The Next Day
Max had been up all night making sure that he had a plan ready to get back at Liz for what she had done to him. He had to be really smart about it because if he wasn't then Liz would see right through him, and then she would have the upper hand, and there was no way in HELL that he was going to let that happen. Liz had been his soulmate, his anchor, but she had destroyed that the night that he had caught her sleeping with Kyle. She had destroyed Max Evans, and now it was his turn to destroy her. He hated that it had come to this, but this was all her fault, not his.
He finished getting ready, and ran to the Jeep so that he could head to school. He pulled up in the school parking lot, and hopped out of the Jeep heading towards the doors to West Roswell High School, and said to himself "I't's time."
As he walked dow the hallway, he spotted "Plan A", which was Kyle Valenti. He watched as Kyle was talking to his jock friends about something he was bragging about. "Probably about Liz," Max thought. Then he decided that it was time to make his move. He walked up to Kyle and said "Kyle, I need to talk to you right now." "What's up Evans?" Kyle asked Max as he was looking at him suspiciously because he had a sense there was something up with Max. Something he couldn't quite put his finger on. " It's about uh.. Czechs" Max stated as he looked to Kyle hoping he would get the hint. "Oh, okay. Follow me", Kyle said to Max as he lead him to an empty classroom. As he was walking in the classroom he starting feeling an odd sensation, the all of a sudden, he was being thrown across the room. "What the hell is wrong with you Evans?" "It's payback time Valenti for what you did to me" Max said to Kyle as he was holding his arm up at Kyle letting the power build back up. "You see, I am the king, and what I say goes, and I say you DIE!" Right after he said that he let go of all the power that he had been building and shot it straight into Kyle. Kyle was thrown into the wall from the force, and where the power blast had hit him, it had destroyed everything in it's path. Max ran over to Kyle to see if he was still breating. When he checked for his pulse, he felt nothing. Max smiled as he looked at the late "Kyle Valenti", before him, then he made the body disappear, and said "Time for Plan B, Maria Deluca". Then he walked off to set up more destruction for Liz Parker.
tbc...... Please let me know what you thought and if I should keep writing this story or not..till then
[ edited 1 time(s), last at 18-Oct-2002 10:16:14 PM ]
posted on 19-Oct-2002 2:09:17 AM by kimmyc
Thanks for all the great feedback I do have two questions for ya'll, 1} What is "Bump" , and 2} What is "OMB" ? Just curious.
posted on 19-Oct-2002 2:12:09 AM by kimmyc
Thanks for all the great feedback I do have two questions for ya''ll, 1} What is "Bump" , and 2} What is "OMB" ? Just curious.
posted on 20-Oct-2002 6:57:07 PM by kimmyc
Look for Chapter 2 of "The Angry King" to be up on the board by Tuesday. Again, thank you for the wonderful feedback