posted on 30-Oct-2002 11:07:45 AM by Angelic
3-2-2

Title: Story of a girl
Rating: PG:13
Couples: Well this is on the dreamer board....
Disclaimer: All that I own is the concept of this story nothing else
Summary: Max is an exchange student who goes to England for a week, and meets the girl of his dreames...
Authors Note: Ok so this is a sorta real story. This happened to my best friend only 3 weeks ago!!! Not the getting married part (were only 16!) but falling in love! Can you believe it!!!! The fic is mainly through Maria's eyes (So mine!) So Cheryl (My friend) and Joe(the exchange dude!) this story is for you! Also the characters like Alex are based on real people (Alex is gonna be Canadian!)

This is the story of a girl,
Who cried a river and drowned the whole world!
And while she looked so sad in photographs,
I absolutely love her,
WHEN SHE SMILES!...
How many days in a year?
She woke up with hope but she only found tears!
And I can be so insincere,
Making her promises never for real!
As long as she stands there waiting,
Wearing the holes in the soles of her shoes!
How many days disapeer?
When you look in the mirror so how do you choose?
Your clothes never wear as well the next day!
And your hair never falls in quite the same way!
But you never seem to run out of things to say!...
THIS IS THE STORY OF A GIRL,
WHO CRIED A RIVER AND DROWNED THE WHOLE WORLD!
AND WHILE SHE LOOKED SO SAD IN PHOTOGRAPHS,
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE HER,
WHEN SHE SMILES!...
How many lovers stay?
Just to put of with this shit day after day!
(the last line was changed to To put up with every day and all day! for the music video)
How did we wind up this way?
Watching our mouths for the words that we say.
As long as we stand here waiting,
Wearing the clothes of the souls that we choose!
How do we get there today?
When we're walking to far for the price of our shoes!
Your clothes never wear as well the next day!
And your hair never falls in quite the same way!
But you never seem to run out of things to say!...
THIS IS THE STORY OF A GIRL,
WHO CRIED A RIVER AND DROWNED THE WHOLE WORLD!
AND WHILE SHE LOOKED SO SAD IN PHOTOGRAPHS,
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE HER,
WHEN SHE SMILES!...
This is the story of a - girl!
Who cried a river and drowned the whole world!
And while she looks so sad and lonely there,
I absolutely love her,
WHEN SHE SMILES!...
This is the story of a girl!
Her pretty face she hid from the world!
And while she looks so sad and lonely there,
I absolutely love her,
WHEN SHE SMILES!
When she smiles!


Prolouge

Hi! My name is Maria Deluca and I'm 26 years old. I have a best friend called Liz. I have a cat called Nora, two sisters and a brother. Oh and I live in a little rainy place called England. Nothing out of the ordanary there at all! But something happened to my friend. She fell in love, with her soul mate, you know the kinda soulmates that you learn on about on TV or in films. Well today she is getting married!!! But to understand this love, we need to go back 10 years in time. To a time, where I was 16 and at school, getting by with my grades, and very much in love with Michael Gurien, well I still am! To a time where Alex used to anoy me with his Canadianisms, and where Kyle need to grow a little taller. To a place in my life, where the rain ran far and fast, and where Liz was finding love a lost hope. To a time where a story was about to begin.... to the time of a story about a girl!


So what do you think??? Oh and just so you know, the song is by nine days, called story of a girl!

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posted on 30-Oct-2002 1:24:11 PM by Angelic
Thanks for all the feedback!! And just so you guys know, Razeail is Michael in this fic!!! And A_Charmed_One is my best friend!

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posted on 30-Oct-2002 4:31:34 PM by Angelic
Just updating to tell you that I've put on my picture!!!! And Chez you know what I'm like!!!!

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posted on 30-Oct-2002 5:27:51 PM by Angelic
Wow I have quite a bit of feedback!!!! So ok here is Part 1.... this goes out specifical to Joe, who needs to know what happened that faithful morning.... All Max in this has shoulder length hair like future Max!

Part 1

Ok so were 10 years in the past. I can remember it clearly. Liz had twisted my arm into helping take around some American exchange students for the day. Ok so I got a free trip into central London on the Tuesday put still! Any way, where I wasn't going to America the following year, Liz was. Which also meant she had to take around a student. She got someone named Tess Harding. Kinda nice, kinda dappy. In fact me and Liz invented a word for her - Tessisms! It was really funny. The day before school, we took her into town, and was she shocked at everything. I mean pizza hut, red double decker busses, Wimpys for godsake!!!! It was so funny, I just couldn't believe it! Any way, at school, Liz wanted my to take this boy, called Khivar around to my lessons for the day. You know when exchange students get board out of their minds, going to your lessons, to learn what the different culture was like. Really tht is so sad, their on hoilday for gods sake!!!! Well see we were in an awards assembly. Our school has this system, where every subject every half term gives out awards, but ours was "special" as it was a welcome to the American students at the same time. Well Liz, miss all English student, was getting one in IT. But all through assembly, she was begging me to take Khivar round. THe US kids were at the front, so next to Khivar, was the boy with long hair. Kinda a cutie, not really my type, not like my Michael. Ok so Michael used to have long hair but he cut it off. But this boy was so perfect for Liz. You know when you get this feeling deep inside, when you know something so perfect and wonderful is gonna happen to someone close to, and its like having Christmas, without having Christmas? Is so great, but I never thought Liz would understand. I kept asking her to let me take that boy rather than the one she wanted. Ok in the end, my teacher picked a tall blond called Isabel, who was friendly enough. I found out the other boy was called Max, I knew then that he was the one for Liz. In fact I also notice him look really HARD at Liz when she got her award. So he had fallen without out knowing, now all I had to do was get Liz to do the same!


Hope you like, and also longer then the last part, still kinda short though!

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posted on 30-Oct-2002 5:44:04 PM by Angelic
Cheryl you are the story!
posted on 31-Oct-2002 3:10:14 AM by Angelic
Ok guys I will have part 2 up today. And Lindsey, Americans have some cool accents, but Welsh ans Scottish are my fav!
posted on 31-Oct-2002 9:31:58 AM by Angelic
Thanks for the Feed back so far!!!!

Part 2

Ruin It"
I grabbed my coat and grabbed my hat
And walked into the street.
I was walking on my way
When someone I did meet.

He said the Lord was coming,
He'd be back any day.
He threw his dogma on me
And that's when I had to say.

Get the fuck out of my face,
I was having a good day, so don't ruin it.
Get the fuck away from me,
I'm having a good day, so don't ruin it.
I was sitting all alone
And I started to think.
My thoughts got the best of me
And my feelings started to sink.

I took a handful of some pills
And fell out with a thump.
When I woke up I was in E.R.
Getting my stomach pumped.
Get the fuck out of my face,
I was having a good day, so don't ruin it.
Get the fuck away from me,
I'm having a good day, so don't ruin it.
So then you walked up and you said
"You'll never be with me."
You said that I was too fucked up,
To that I can agree.

How does it feel to be perfect?
Smart and beautiful too?
How does it feel to be wanted?
How does it feel to be you?
Get the fuck out of my face,
I was having a good day, so don't ruin it.
Get the fuck away from me,
I'm having a good day, so don't ruin it.
And then a few months later,
I wasn't even there.
But you looked oh so happy,
You had flowers in your hair.
But I stayed home and I got drunk
Like I do every day.
And it doesn't really matter
You don't care anyway.
The guards, they came and got me,
And nailed me to a tree.
They took all of my belongings
And then they did kill me.

And then they placed upon my head
A crown made out of thorns.
It all seemed quite familiar,
Where have I heard this before?
Get the fuck out of my face,
I was having a good day, so don't ruin it.
Get the fuck away from me,
I'm having a good day, so don't ruin it.



Ok so here I was walking from History, to the other side of the school, for my Chemistry class, whilst thinking about what to do about Liz. Next to me was Isabel Evans, who I had discovered was, Max’s twin sister. This shocked me, but all through history, I kinda asked her questions, about her brother. The looks she gave me, made me wonder if she thought I fancied Max! Well to you Isabel, I say NO WAY! So I made it to Chemistry, and sat next to Liz, and started talking to her. Isabel sat next to Tess, god forbid! I was wondering what had happened to Alex, who was taking Max around for the day, in fact I asked Liz what she thought…

“Oh he and Max went down to the shops. Alex said something about showing him our day to day life.”

“Riiiiiiiiight! And Alex showing Max this, would be to take him off site?” Liz is my best friend, and she is also Alex’s best friend. However, Alex and me…. I don’t hate him, but sometimes his Canadianisms are too much! Thankfully, Michael’s Canadianisms are wonderful… Michael…..

“Maria snap out of it girl!” Liz started waving her hand in front of my face.

“Sorry! Any way…” I thought I bring up Max in the conversation, “what do you think Max listens too, ya know music wise.” From the look of him, he liked some good music, like the Beatles, and Linkin Park at the same time!

“Oh he likes the Beatles. Isn’t that cool!”

“Huh! You talked to him already and didn’t tell me! Your bested friend in the whole world. Humph!”

“Sorry! Me and Alex have second free, so me and Tess, and Alex and Max were in the common room together talking. Tess was all over him. I swear she wants in his pant soooooooooo bad!”

“Sounds like I missed a party in there too bad. Oh look Max and Alex are here!” And the mention of Max, Liz perked up, and straitened her hair. Max gave Liz a sweet smile. Oh what a cutie! Alex said hi to Liz and ignored me, what a surprise, and began talking to Kyle, who I just noticed was there in the room with us! Max and Liz began talking about something, and I felt kinda left out.

“Hey I’m Maria, Liz’s best friend. Your Max right?”

“Yea. Nice to meet you.” He began talking to Liz again. I turned to Liz and noticed her blushing… hmmm my plan began to work, without me lifting a finger. Wow I’m good!

Hope you like it! And the song at the beginning is by Joe Roberts

posted on 31-Oct-2002 12:21:02 PM by Angelic
Guys, just bumping coz I forgot to say I updated in the title!
posted on 31-Oct-2002 1:00:09 PM by Angelic
I couldn't contain myself, so I had to post Part 3 now! I hope you like it! And the song is I will love you by Fisher

Part 3

Till my body is dust
Till my soul is no more
I will love you
Love you

Till the sun starts to cry
And the moon turns to rust
I will love you
Love you

But I need to know
Will you stay for all time
Forever and a day?

And I'll give my heart
Till the end of our time
Forever and a day



Ok so for about 10 minutes, both Max and Liz were talking to eachother. Our teacher Miss Hardy was getting together ingredients to make slim, you see Me and Liz had seen it at an open evening the week before, and boy was it cool! Now all of you people out there are gonna asume that Liz is the brightest out of me and her... well your wrong! I am... sorta. I love science, and Liz likes it. See the differennce, and I'm kinda good at it too! Wait I'm not telling you guys enough about Max or Liz now am I? Well we all stood up at the front of the class for an example on how to make the slimy stuff! Man it looked so cool. Miss Hardy made her's blue, and seemed to slide everywhere. As I stood watching, out of the corner of my eye, I saw Max staring at something. So me being miss curious looked in the direction that Max was staring. Well to no surprise to any of us, he was looking at Liz! "Shocking"... sorry that is a display of a Tessism! Any way you see Liz, being Miss Oblivious to everything, never noticed Max staring longingly at her. To make him blush, I turned to face him straight in the face. He went bright red, and his head whipped away. Man, it wouldn't surprise me if he got whiplash! I was thinking that I might have to have a little talk with Mr Evans!

"Hey Maria?" Liz called me over.

"Yea hun?"

"Would you get me the stuff for the slim, ya know the water?"

"Man are you ever lazy???"

"Please????" Oh god, shes pouting! Ewww! And oh no the puppy dog eyes. There is something you must know about Liz. She gives the eyes, that you can't say no to like ever!!!

"Fine but you owe me!"

"Sure thing!" Of course, she doesn't, but never mind!

"Hey Liz?"

"What do you think of Max Evans?"

"He's nice I guess why?"

"Oh no reason, just wondering..." I was rudely interupted by Tess.

"Joe, honey, will you help me?" I didn't catch the rest, coz I went to make my slim. Now see I'm so impatient, so I made the slim to fast. Which meant that it hadn't set enough. So when I pourd it onto my hands, it stuck. In the end it took me 10 minutes to wash it off. But it wasn't too bad! I went up to the sink with the stuff on my hands, and who happened to be there? Tess!

"Tess?"

"Yes Maria."

"BOO!" I shouted whilest shoving my hands in her face! Oh god it was funny! Max and Liz turned to look at me and Tess. Tess looked liked she peed her self. I so made my day! And Max and Liz are looking cozy!


Wow 2 posts in one day??? Aren't I nice?

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posted on 31-Oct-2002 1:28:17 PM by Angelic
I would like to ask a question for something that will happen later on (coz we haven't lived that far on yet...)
do you guys want Max to become a famous performer? Coz he can sing and player a million and1 intruments in this fic (just like Joe)
posted on 31-Oct-2002 6:07:38 PM by Angelic
Lol! I know I'm nice for the double updates!
posted on 1-Nov-2002 3:18:05 AM by Angelic
Guys I''''ll see if I can get part 4 up tonight!
posted on 2-Nov-2002 4:31:22 AM by Angelic
Or rather today! *tongue*
posted on 18-Nov-2002 5:36:47 PM by Angelic
Ok so wow what a long time it has been since the last part!!!!! The song is Video killed the radio star by the buggles! For reference the tube is another word for the underground train that runs in london, and things like the metro are the different lines! So without futher ado here is part 4a...

Part 4a

I heard you on the wireless back in Fifty Two
Lying awake intent at tuning in on you.
If I was young it didn't stop you coming through.
Oh-a oh
They took the credit for your second symphony.
Rewritten by machine and new technology,
and now I understand the problems you can see.
Oh-a oh
I met your children
Oh-a oh
What did you tell them?
Video killed the radio star.
Video killed the radio star.
Pictures came and broke your heart.
Oh-a-a-a oh
And now we meet in an abandoned studio.
We hear the playback and it seems so long ago.
And you remember the jingles used to go.
Oh-a oh
You were the first one.
Oh-a oh
You were the last one.
Video killed the radio star.
Video killed the radio star.
In my mind and in my car, we can't rewind we've gone to far
Oh-a-aho oh,
Oh-a-aho oh
Video killed the radio star.
Video killed the radio star.
In my mind and in my car, we can't rewind we've gone to far.
Pictures came and broke your heart, put the blame on VTR.
You are a radio star.
You are a radio star.
Video killed the radio star.
Video killed the radio star.
Video killed the radio star.
Video killed the radio star.
repeat
Video killed the radio star. (You are a radio star.)


Ok so there is this thing called the dance machine. Liz loves it and I think its ok, but I'm really bad. But its got me hooked on this song by the buggles, and it wont get out of my head. It drives me insane. So here I am, tuesday morning, on the tube, in my way to London singing this song. Don't get me wrong I love the song, I always have, but sometimes people tend to give me some strange looks when I'm on the Metro singing along to different songs! This morning is really doesn't matter though because I'm sitting by myself. Up one end of the carriage is the group that I'm with and up the other end is me, Liz and Max. But for all intents and purposes its really almost like I'm not there. Not that I'm gonna moan coz they looks so sweet, but if I wanted to be ignored all day I would have stayed at school, and sit with Alex in Chemisty. Maybe I should write a poem about them. I do it all the time without Liz noticing. She sits there reading, or talking and I'd right a song, or a poem. Its funny, coz I might start laughing in the middle of a serious confersation Liz might be having! Ahhhh but thats just who I am! So let me think what can I write about.... of course who else Max and Liz...

So soft, so gentle
the wind blows through the trees
it un-nerves me


Liz currently is blushing at Max. Its strange, she was never like this with Alex

So coarse, so harsh
the blood dries on the skin,
it confusses me


Ah yes Alex and Liz dated for a while, but that so did not work! I'm glad she got over him!

So light, so high
the feather floats to the clouds
it blinds me


Max and Liz. Its strange its been only a day. A short time, yet I can see something develop, and I don't know what will happen

So dark, so dangerous
the swan falls below the water.
It terrifies me


True love, I can see it. Like a blossom, it begins to grow, but will it die like in spring, or last forever.

so pure, so innocent
the love grows beyond belief
it sooths me
it calms me
you love me


and will it last beyond all that is through against it?

posted on 20-Nov-2002 10:45:56 AM by Angelic
I'll try to get part 4b out by the weekend!


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