posted on 19-Jan-2003 10:24:39 PM by Gaby7tvm
TO MAKE A LOVE

RATING:Nc-17
Disclaimer: I own Roswell but just in my dreams, in reality is another thing...is not mine.
Summary: This is based on a Harlequin book, name To make a marriage, and is my #1 challenge too *big*
Enjoy....
Authors note: I'm thinking about a fanfic, were Max is a priest and Liz is a novice, they break the rules of the catholic church, tell me what you think???



SEX AND CANDY

Hangin' round,
downtown by myself
and I had so much time,
To sit and think about myself,
and then there she was.
Like double-cherry pie,
yeah there she was.
Like disco superfly...

I smell sex and candy here.
Who's that lounging in my chair?
Who's that casting devious stares
in my direction?
Mama this surely is a dream,
yeah, yeah,
mama this surely is a dream.

Hangin' round,
downtown by myself
and I had too much caffeine.
And I was thinkin' about myself,
and then there she was.
In platform double suede,
yeah there she was.
Like disco lemonade...

Chorus x 2



Part 1

THE BEGGINIG

"Oh Nancy that ring is so beautiful"

Nancy kept staring at her new ring, at her engagement
ring...she couldn't believe that Jeff Parker, one of the
most handsome man, and richiest had asked her to
marry him, sure they have been going out for about a month, but she didn't think that he would ask her the big question. Nancy didn't know what to think.

"Nancy you are so lucky" said her best friend and sister Tammy

"Y..yes"

"Nancy???...Are you ok???"

Nancy didn't speak

"Nancy???...yuhoo"

"I just need to sit dawn"

"Sure sister"

Tammy helped her to sit down, then she caressed her face, with all her TLC

"I'm going for mother, ok?"

Nancy didn't answer, she didn't even move.
After like 5 min...Claudia got to the room with out Tammy, with all her care she close the door, and in silence she cut the gap that separate her from her daughter.

"Honeybea???"

Claudia sat down

"Honeybear" in the eyes of Claudia there was worry

"Yes Mama"

"What's the matter, my baby?"

Nancy stared at her mother for long time, she sat down close to her mother, took her hand and squeezed very hard, took one look at her mother then let her eyes fell to her red skirt.

"I'm pregnant"

"Oh...For the love of god" said Claudia scared

"Is Jeff's baby?"

Nancy let fall a tear

"Of course mother" said Nancy looking her straight at the eyes

"So, the baby is the reason that Jeff asked you to marry him"

"N...No"

"He doesn't know about the baby mother"

Nancy let again her sight fall

"Why you didn't tell him"

"I don't know, I just found out"

"Did you went to the doctor"

"Yes mother, I'm not dump"

"is just that, oh mother Jeff, I don't know why but he looks so in love with me, and, you know I feel love for him even adoration, but he scares me, with his, and now I'm more scared with the baby, sometimes I feel I don't deserve him"

"Honey" said Claudia while caressing her hair

"You should talk with Jeffrey, and you deserve all the love that you can have, the birth of a child, is painful but is also beautiful is a miracle of the human heart"

"Oh, mother, I love you"

Daugther and mother hugged each other

****************************************

7 years later

"Nancy come on you can"

"Jeff, I cant"

"Off course you can, this is our third girl, and you could with the other two girls you can with this one"

"Ughhh, it hurts"

"Come on lady one more push"

"Thats what you said 10 minutes ago"

"oh...but this time is for real"

"Ughh, I can, I can, I can, I can, ughh"

"That's it"

The baby came out, and like they knew, the baby was a girl

"Look Nancy, is our Elizabeth"

"Our Elizabeth"

The couple kissed, and they were so happy.
Three little girls.
Maria, Isabel and Elizabeth.


Tbc.

So what do you think???




[ edited 4 time(s), last at 22-Jan-2003 8:43:15 PM ]
posted on 22-Jan-2003 6:01:36 PM by Gaby7tvm
So I'm going to post the complete summary:
Max is Jeff's protégé since he is 14, and Liz is Jeff's litte daughter, Max mets Liz when she is five, Liz adores him, but when Liz turns 16, Max changes his feelings of sisterhood to, well a very sexual way, and Liz while she is growing her feelings change to, let's just say a very adult way




SEX AND CANDY

Hangin' round,
downtown by myself
and I had so much time,
To sit and think about myself,
and then there she was.
Like double-cherry pie,
yeah there she was.
Like disco superfly...

I smell sex and candy here.
Who's that lounging in my chair?
Who's that casting devious stares
in my direction?
Mama this surely is a dream,
yeah, yeah,
mama this surely is a dream.

Hangin' round,
downtown by myself
and I had too much caffeine.
And I was thinkin' about myself,
and then there she was.
In platform double suede,
yeah there she was.
Like disco lemonade...

Chorus x 2





PART 2
THE WAITING

1 year later

It was midnight and Nancy couldn't close her eyes, she was in a big empty bed, without her Jeff, oh she missed him so much, that she couldn't help to let a tear caress her cheek, the girls were in bed, Maria and Isabel were so excited, that it was very hard to put them in bed, Maria is 8 years old, Isabel is 5 years old and Lizzi is one.
And the two firsts were very happy cuz soon it was going to be the start of the school.

"Oh, how the time has pass" said Nancy to the empty room

"I just want to close my eyes for a moment, just for one"

Nancy closed her eyes and fell in a deep slumber, 10 minutes it has passed when the telephone rang, and it did woke up Nancy frome her dreams.
Nancy took the auricular with the fancy of a girl that had became acostume of the rich life, and anwered it in the same way.

"hello?"

"Nancy?, it's me, jeff"

"Jeffrey my love, I love you so much and I mis..."

"Nancy, listen to me I have good news"

"ok"

Nancy with the knowlage of a woman 8 years married, knew that sometimes the husband and the wife doesn't share the same happiness for the same things, she knew that Jeff loved his work, but, sometimes the work took him away from her, and it wasn't like he was an workaholic, no, Jeff did spend time with her and the girls, but Nancy was a very selfish woman when it was about her husband, in fact Jeff most of the time he worked in home.

"I'm coming tomorrow"

"Really my love?"

"yes, my piece of heaven"

Nancy always would blush when Jeff called her with pet names.

"Oh Jeff"

"I bet that someone that I love is very red"

"Jeff that is just mean" Nancy giggled

"Well, I called, cuz I been wondering is you could pick me up"

"What time?"

"7:00 pm, Bring the girls would you"

"Of course"

"I have presents, for the girls and of course...for you, I expect a big welcome from you Nancy, I've been dying for your smell and taste"

"Jeff"

"Maybe we could have a little of phone-tease..."

"Jeff..."

But they were interrupted little Lizzy started to cry

"Oh, baby, I have to go to her"

"I know, but tomorrow I will have my vengence"

"Ok, bye"

"I love you"

"Love you too"

Nancy hung up with a smile, Jeffrey was coming back, oh she was so excited...but right now she had to go to her daughter, it was her duty as a mother, oh she was excited.

****************************************

6:00 pm

"Come on Maria, go to dress"

"Ok mom"

"Wait...Where is your sister?"

"Isabel or Liz?"

"Izzy of course"

"Oh, she is complaining"

"about???"

"What??"

"What is Izzy complaining about??"

"oh that, she is complaining about the water is too cold"

"Oh my god not again, can you dress and help Martha with Liz?"

"yes mama"

"Isabel"

**************************************

6:30

"Maria, where are you??"

"Here in the kitchen mama" said maria while giggiling

"Oh MY GOD"

there she was little Liz Parker eating the peanut butter in the kitchen, and had puted all the snack in her new dress.

"MARIA"

"What mama? she said that she wanted it, and that she was going to do it alone"

In the moment where Nancy was going to scream, Isabel entered the kitchen

"I'm ready mama, don't you think I'm cute" and she made a swirl

***************************************

7:00 pm

Jeff was getting out of the gate, when he stood up and started searching for his family with the eyes.
They weren't at the right, they weren't at the left, where could they be.

"Daddy" a pretty girl with a beutiful blonde hair and lips that you knew that when she got older were going to kill, throw herself at Jeff.

"Maria", said a surprise Jeff

"Mi beautiful girl" Jeff hugged and kiss Maria, and when he looked to the direction that she came, he saw his beautiful wife, with tired eyes, but beautiful the same, it wasn't easy to raise three girls. Maria holding his hand, with the most beautiful eyes, green like her mother, and perky as always, Isabel with the big smile, she looked so much like his sister, and that wasn't a good thing but he loved his fanciness anyway, and his beautiful girl, just one year and she already was naughty as hell, and Oh, she had all her drees covered with peanut butter?.
Jeff got closer to his wife, gave Isabel a kiss on the cheek and Lizzy too, but to his wife he kissed her like starving man, a passionate man, who hasn't seen his wife in a week.

"So what happen with Lizzy?"

"You don't want to know honey" and Nancy smiled, she was again with Jeff, everything was going to be just fine.



TBC


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