posted on 7-Feb-2003 7:46:49 AM by tebibehr
*angel*Nothing really, I've been visiting this site for a long time already but just got registered and I wanted to say hi especially to my friend and classmate liz_maria!!!!Oh, and to write a fic! teehee!!! Now I've got this idea for a long time now the title is a song from Britney's album. So I'm very sorry if you don't like her. But please give my fic a chance!!!!! I'll just give you the lyrics and tell me if it's a yay or nay. Tnx!*happy*

Oh baby, oh baby
Oh baby, oh baby

In love no believe I never found inside of me
Built these walls up so high, needed my room to breathe
But oh baby, oh baby you tear them down
Can't believe you changed my mind
Oh baby, oh baby, I saw you smile
Stay with me a while

CHORUS

All things fall into place
My heart, it feels so safe
You are my melody
That's where you take me
With you I get so high
Lost in the crystal sky
You are this melody
That's where you take me

I never fell before, how did you find the door?
The key to my soul, to you forever more
Oh baby, oh baby you make me rise
Never did I once think twice
Oh baby, oh baby you make me smile
Stay with me a while

CHORUS - repeat

Afraid to let it all inside, now I want to hear you'll
Stay with me a while, stay with me a while

La la la la la la, la la la la la la
La la la la la la, la la la la
That's where you take me

CHORUS - repeat



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posted on 7-Feb-2003 6:47:17 PM by tebibehr
*angel*Thanks for the reply.*sad*Isn't anyone else gonna reply? liz_maria? Where are you? Anyway if you want a part, I'll post it later or tomorrow latest. But I'm not really sure cause we'll be having our Unit Tests Mon-Fri.
Thanks anyway!!!!
posted on 7-Feb-2003 8:22:53 PM by tebibehr
Gosh! Thanks for the replies. I still haven't posted the part coz real life got in the way. You see, my folks and I are gonna be US immigrants and theres all these check-ups and interviews. And then, I still have to study. But don't worry I'll have a part up soon. Actually, I already wrote it in paper in case I forget. I just need a banner for my fic. So, anyone over here who can help me with that just tell me.

Oh, and I'm not actually a Filipina. I guess just a small part of me is. I'm actually Chinese. My dad's one, too. But my mom's Filipina. But I'm a citizen coz I was born here. Just in case you wanna know,.
Anyway isn't Manila so polluted? And it's very hard to live here especially if you have foreign blood. A lot of kidnappers. And the people here can be so irritating.

Anyway, I'll have a part up soon. Thanks for the feedback or whatever you wanna call it. Oh, and I really wanna know what you thnk about my fic coz it's my first time and I'm really nervous. thanks!!!!

Bye y'all!!!!!!!*happy*

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posted on 8-Feb-2003 6:23:23 AM by tebibehr
Hey guys! Just wanted to tell you that I 'accidentally' put the new part on another thread but still the same title. Sorry! It was an accident!! Forgive me?*sad*

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