posted on 8-Dec-2001 9:39:40 PM by Gizmo12988
Hi all! This is my first attempt at writing fan fiction so if this suck you'll know why.

title: I'm Not that Innocent
Category: Liz and Max with others
rating:? I am not sure yet
Summary: okay lets just say that the ending scene in MITC never happend and Liz and Max aren't friends anymore. Liz is so hurt by the ending scene in MTD that she changes, but is it for the better

Oh and I'm sorry if someone used this title already.

Part 1- Back to school

Mr. Seligman: Alright Alright settle down people we are going to take attendants. (Just imagine that the kids are saying here okay?okay.) Kelly, Fitzgerald, Evans, Harding, McCauly, Dame, Foley, DeLuca, Donovan, Parker, Parker? Has anyone seen Elizabeth Parker?

Liz: Yeah I'm here.

The class turns around to find a totally different Liz. She is wearing black fish net tights, black boots that go up to her knees, a black fish net shirt with a black sleevless shirt under it. Her nose and eye brows are peirced she has on black lipstick, eyeliner, and nail polish and her hair now has red streeks in it and her chest is much larger (Yes she got implants, it's not that I care that she is small cause well I am a girl it's just to prove she has gone wild).

Maria: What the hell?

Mr. Seligman: Your late Miss Parker.

Liz:And your point is.....?

Mr. Seligman: My point is your late

Liz: Look dude I'll come to class at whatever time I feel like it got it? Now enough with the third degree okay?

Mr. Seligman: I will not be spoken to that way Ms. Parker not in my classroom!

Liz: well it looks like I just did now doesn't it?

Mr. Seligman: Detention! After school!

Liz: Oooooooooooooo I'm shakin in my boots.

The Bell rings.

Mr. Seligman: I'll be seeing you after school

Liz: we'll make a date out of it

She leaves.

Maria grabs Liz's arm while Max and Tess stand behind her.

MAria: Liz what the hell has gotten in to you!

Liz: Whoa! Hands off the merchandise.

Liz brushes her hand away.

Tess: Liz answer the question.

Liz: I just needed a change

Liz starts walking away Maria follows.

Maria: A change? Liz this is a little to drastic! I mean breast implants?

Liz: Ya like?

Maria: What did your parents say?

Liz: They hit the roof! So I moved out.

Maria: YOU WHAT!

Liz: I...Moved...Out

Maria: Where are you living?

Liz: I'm checking out an apartment after school wanna come with?

Maria: Sure I guess, but lose the nose ring.

Liz: K.

Maria: And aren't you losing reputation points by being with me?

Liz: Maria no matter how bitchy I get wit everyone else you and Alex are still my friends

TBC......... More Attitude to come

yeah yeah it was short but the nex parts will be longer....











[ edited 2 time(s), last at 26-Dec-2001 1:32:11 AM ]
posted on 25-Dec-2001 9:48:28 PM by Gizmo12988
Sorry I took so long with this part I haven't had time to write.

Part 2

The Apartment

Liz: I'll take it.

Land lord: You made a wise choice Miss. Remember it's 350 at the end of every month if you don't give it to me you're out.

Liz: Got it.

Maria: 350? Liz how will you afford this.

Liz: Savings Chica and I have a new job.

Liz signs some papers.

the land lord hands her the keys

Land lord: It's all yours.

Liz smiles.

Liz and Maria head out to Liz's new car.

Maria: Okay spill.

Liz: huh?

Maria: What's the new job?

Liz: oh I work at this club on Saturdays, Mondays, and thursdays from 6 P.M.- 1 A.M. at about 15 dollars an hour.

Maria: Liz you're not a stripper..right?

Liz: How did you know?

Maria:WHAT!

Liz: Whoa! chill I was kidding.

Maria: Phew! Okay what do you do?

Liz: Sing and play my guitar.

Maria: (squeals) LIZZY I'm so proud of you! taking up music again! Me and Alex were so bummed when you stopped.

Liz: smiles

Maria: will you play something for Alex and I sometime?

Liz:Tell ya what. The first night in my new pad we'll all have dinner and watch the Breakfast club you know to bless the house and then I'll pkay you a few songs. Sound good?

Maria: Great

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The Crashdown

Max,Michael,Izzy, and the gerbil

Tess: I don't know about the rest of you, but I am so not liking this new Liz.

Michael: Okay tess 1 you never liked Liz and 2 you are just jealous that Liz looks way better than you.

Isabel laughs and Max spits his cherry coke out in tess's face at Michael;s remark.

Michael: (throws Tess a napkin) Uh Tess you got a little something on your face.

Liz and Maria walk in just in time to see Tess storm away from the table.

Tess:(looking at Liz) You ...Bitch!

Liz: WOW! Tess now we can promote your sentence spand to 2 words now. GOOD JOB! (Liz claps).

Michael and maria laugh

Max is shocked

Izzy smiles

Tess goes to hit Liz, but Liz grabs her arm to block her.

Liz: No, no, no Tess. You can look, but no touch. Bye now.

Tess storms out of the Cafe.

leaving Liz and Maria in histerics.

Michael: Go Liz!

TBC..................

More some time this week!

Liz will punch Tess!

posted on 26-Dec-2001 1:30:48 AM by Gizmo12988
You know I just realized how short that was. I feel as thought I jipped you so here is your next part.

Part 3

Maria: I can not believe you just did that Liz! I am so proud of you!

Liz: I am proud of myself as well.

Michael: Damn I wanted that on camera!

Liz and Maria walk over to the pod-squads table.

Isabel:Michael when did you become such a tess hater?

Michael: I just can't stand her.

Max: Don't you guys think you were a little harsh?

Michael,Liz,and Maria: NO!

Isabel: c'mon Max you enjoyed every minute of it.

Max:Well....

Michael:c'mon maxwell just say it.

Max:I...I...Okay YES I enjoyed it.

Michael:Now that's my boy.

Liz:Are my parents home?

Michael:I haven't seen them why?

Liz:I just wanted to get a few things.

Isabel:And why would it matter if your parents were home?

Liz:Is that really any of your business?

Max:Jeez Liz it was just a question.

Liz:Sorry Max, but nobody hit your buzzer (I just love bring it on so I wanted to use that).

Liz leaves to get her stuff.

Isabel:God what is up with her?

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Liz's bedroom

Liz pulls bags out of her closet. She begins to pack her bed sheets and pillows. She takes down pictures of her alex and Maria and places them nicely in shoe boxes. She grabs her clothes and shoes.

Liz comes across a picture of Her and Max (not the pic in TEOTW) it was taken at a date of theirs last year. She is sitting on his lap smiling at the camera while he just stares at her lovingly and he is smiling.

Tears begin to form in Liz's eyes as she recalls that date. She touches the picture of max.

Maria:Knock Knock

Liz's head pops up

Liz:Oh...I...Uh

Maria:Thinking of Max?

Liz:Yeah.

Tears trickle down Liz's face.

Maria:Come here babe.

Maria hugs Liz.

Liz:I know I shouldn't be crying over him...

Maria:Liz no it's okay to cry. Crying is good Liz it helps.

Liz:Not being able to be with him...it just...it hurts so much Maria.

MAria:I know.

Liz:When future Max told me all that stuff I didn't realize how much pain it would cause me. I mean I thought we might be able to be...Friends, but he doesn't want that.

Maria:I promise you Liz the pain will go away I promise.

Liz:Maria, can I stay with you tonight? I don't wanna be alone.

Maria:Sure. we'll have alex too and we'll rent Dumb and Dumber. okay?

Liz: Okay. Thank you so much.

Maria: hey what are friends for?

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The first night in Liz's Apartment.

Maria: OKay what is your fav quote from the Breakfast club?

Alex: Hmmmmmm mine would have to be "Alright that's it. If I have to come back in here I'm crackin' skulls!"

Liz:Mine is "See I wanna be just like you I figure all I need is a lobotomy and some tights".

Maria: I like when he does the "Impression of life and big Bri's house".

Alex:So Liz what about that music?

Liz sits down at the keyboard.

Liz:Okay this song is kind of a pop song, but unlike the pop artists I wrote it.

Maria:Hit it.

(The song I'm using is overprotected by Britney Spears)


Say hello to the girl that I am
You're gonna have to see through my perspective
I need to make mistakes just to learn who I am
And I don't wanna be so damn protected
There must be another way
'Cause I believe in taking chances
But who am I to say
What a girl is to do
God I need some answers...



What am I to do with my life?
(You will find it out don't worry)
How am I supposed to know what's right?
(You just gotta do it your way)
I can't help the way I feel
But my life has been so overprotected

I tell them what I like, what I want and what I don't
But everytime I do, I stand corrected
Things that I've been told, I can't believe what I hear about the world
I realize I'm overprotected
There must be another way
'Cause I believe in taking chances
But who am I to say
What a girl is to do
God I need some answers...

What am I to do with my life?
(You will find it out don't worry)
How am I supposed to know what's right?
(You just gotta do it your way)
I can't help the way I feel
But my life has been so overprotected


I need time... love... I need space

I don't need nobody telling me just what I wanna
What I what what what I'm gonna do about my destiny
I say no, no... nobody's telling me just what I wanna... do do
I'm so fed up with people telling me to be someone else but me...

What am I to do with my life?
(You will find it out don't worry)
How am I supposed to know what's right?
(You just gotta do it your way)
I can't help the way I feel
But my life has been so overprotected


I don't need nobody telling me just what I wanna
What I what, what, what I'm gonna do about my destiny
I say no no... nobody's telling me just what I wanna... do do
I'm so fed up with people telling me to be someone else but me

What am I to do with my life?
(You will find it out don't worry)
How am I supposed to know what's right?
(You just gotta do it your way)
I can't help the way I feel
But my life has been so overprotected

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Wednesday-The Mall

Liz and Maria a shopping for Liz's Apartment.

Tess walks up behind Liz.

Tess:Nice outfit Liz. Where did you get it Liz? The Garbage?

Liz:Try they contempo. And well, at least my hair color doesn't come from a bottle.

Tess:You know Liz Max and I get along quite well. He is so sweet. I am so happy you are a prude cause well I got to be his first.(Don't worry she is lying).

Liz turns around and punches Tess in the face she then kicks tess in the stomach, punches her nose and pushes her to the ground.

Liz:Oops sorry did I hurt you? You know Tess you look a little hot, maybe if you wear my drink you'll cool down.

Liz poures her coke on tess;s head.

Liz:I hope you like coke.

TBC........



posted on 26-Dec-2001 12:43:10 PM by Gizmo12988
Thanks for the feedback!!!!!!!!!!

Part 3

School

Everyone is talking about Liz kicking Tess's ass.

Tess:(Walks down the halls of west Roswell High with two black eyes, a fat lip, and I broken nose. She couldn't heal them and now that everyone has seen them no other aliens can either).

Michael:Tess what's with the mask? Whoops my bad that's your face. So how does it feel?

Tess:Excuse me?

Michael:Knowing that "little Lizzy Parker" kicked your ugly ass?

Tess:(growls and walks away).

Max:Michael you shouldn't be so hard on Tess.

Liz,Maria,and Alex walk into school.

Liz is wearing a maroon lace up corset type shirt and tight leather pants and her hair is crimped.


Guys whistle at Liz.

Kyle:Lookin good Liz.

Liz:Eat your heart out.

Max:Liz can I talk to you?

Liz:We're not friends remember? Or did the King change his mind?

Max: I never said anything about being friends Liz I just wanted to tell you to leave Tess alone she never did anything to you.

Liz:Excuse me?

Max:She told me how you jumped her while she was walking home last night. You had no right to do that Liz you can't just beat up people whenever you feel like it.

Liz:Trust me max that is not what happend.

Max:Well I don't trust you Liz.

Liz:Now I know why you made such a sucky ass king in your day, You don't trust the people you should and you trust the people you shouldn't. OPEN YOUR EYES MAX!

Max: My eyes are open and you know what I see?

Liz:What Max?What do you see?

Max: A slut who has fucked every guy in Roswell for all I know.

Alex:(Walks up to Max and punches him right in the face) Don't you ever say that to Liz! Ever!

Maria:I don't know what Liz ever saw in you.

Liz, Maria, and Alex walk away.

Isabel:(Helps Max up) Are you okay?

Max:Sorta

Michael:Kills like hell huh? I know he punched me too.

Tess:(smiles) great mindwarp Tess. Now Liz thinks that Max hates her.

TBC.......

Short I know, but I gotta go sorry.