Loneliness,Sadness, and First Love 2/? Pt.3 Updated(10/28)
posted on 8-Sep-2001 10:40:12 PM by SoulMatesForever
Title~Loneliness, Sadness and first Love
Catagory~ M/L of course with a lil of L/S but if u know me I'm all dreamer
Rated~ R to NC-17
Summery~ AU The first maybe 2 parts are with Liz and Sean but then it gets to Max and Liz anyway It start off with Liz at the New Mexico fair read more to find out whats goin on wit Sean and Liz and how Max and Liz meet. all guys are 23 and girls are 21
Disclamer~ I own nothing please don't sue
Authors note~ Feedback is my cure of a writers block ;) oh and I changed the title a lil ;)
Liz Parker waited inside the geat of Albuquerque New Mexico's fair grounds. 'Damn it where is he??' She asked her self as she wait for her formal boyfriend Sean Deluca. Thats right juvenile Deluca.
She'd been waiting there for an hour and a half for him to show up. He said right after his shift at work he would be right over.
Liz sighed in defeat and started to walk toward the rides. She noticed the looks she was getting from all the guys that were only looking at her low cut shirt. She shook her head and headed for the Space Spin.
As she got seated all alone in a 2 seated ride she looked around at all the couples. "We got one more seat! One more seat!" The man that was working the machine said.
"I'll take it," A voice said and stepped up. The worker pointed to the seat next to Liz.
Liz looked up to the guy and almost fainted. He was tall, dark and handsome. The guy smiled at her and she smiled back.
"Do I know you from somewhere?? You look really familiar??? I'm Max. Max Evans," He said as he got seated and hooked.
Liz smiled shyly. "No no I don't believe we have. I'm Liz. Liz Parker," She said. "Well, its nice meeting you Liz. Would you mind company on any other rides?? I'd be honored to go on with you. Me and my girlfriend just broke up after I think 2 months," He said proudly.
Liz smiled. "Well, that is very nice of you Max I'd like that. I'm sorry to hear about you ex-girlfriend," She said.
"I'm not," He smiled.*******
"Okay what do u want to go on next??" He asked. Liz smiled and looked around. Her eyes landed on what looked like a plan but it was in a circle. "How about the enterprise??" She asked.
Max looked and chuckled to himself. "All right the enterprise it is," He said. He put his hand to the small of her back and started to walk toward the funny looking ride. ******
"Five tickets," The worker said as he let Max and Liz on. They got seated in one and Liz almost laughed allowed as she noticed you had to sit in-between the person legs. Liz sat down in front of Max and leaned backward. She heard him grunt. Liz smiled and leaned forward again trying not to be to forward.
But then she felt warm strong arms come around her and pull her back. She looked up and saw Max smiling. She relaxed as if she didn't have a boyfriend that didn't give a shit about her. She liked the feel of warm arms around her. Liz closed her eyes and burned this feeling into her memory as if she will never beable to do this again.********
Max kept his moans to himself as she leaned back against to him. There is just something about her that made him feel so forward and that he can do and be whatever he wants to be. Unlike Tess he wanted him for his money. His money his looks, his bed(if u catch his drift ;) )
Max watched as Liz closed her eyes. When we was in line with his Friend and Sister he watched as Liz had gotten seated on the ride. She looked sad, depressed, He could see a dark cloud in her eyes as if she had never seen love before so when the worker asked for one more person he jumped to get the seat next to the beautiful girl.
He sighed in wardly as he could feel the heat of her body coming off of her. But then he could feel her sadness, loneliness. He pulled her tighter to him as the ride started. He leaned in to her ear and started to talk.
"So Liz what are you doing her all alone??" He asked her. He watched her open her eyes slowly. He could feel her shiver as he spoke into her ear. "I was supposed to meet someone here....but they didn't show up," She said in a sadden voice.
He nodded. 'How could someone be so mean to such a beautiful kind person?? I hope to find out more about her and this person,' He thought to himself.********
TBC.........Soooooooo??????? how is it????? Should I keep going?????
Edited by - SoulMatesForever on 09/10/2001 14:33:03
[ edited 1 time(s), last at 28-Oct-2001 7:24:02 PM ]
posted on 9-Sep-2001 2:36:56 PM by SoulMatesForever
Liz looked at her watch. It was 8:30pm. She smiled as she watched Max pay to play the basketball thing.
"And he shoots and scores. Thats one for the young man. Two more and you can pick either a large stuffed animal or a medium stuffed animal and a red rose." Max smiled and shoot again. Got it. Then again. ect...
"Alright, what is it u want kid? Rose, animal, or animal?" He asked. "Can I just have 2 roses and that bear?" Max asked as he pointed to a white small bear. "Sure," He gave the stuff to Max and smiled.
Max took the stuff and walked over to where Liz was. "Ma'am these are for you," He said as he bowed and then gave her the 2 rose's and little bear. Liz smiled grew as he did this. "Why thank u sir," She said. "Your welcome,"..
Liz smiled at Max. She never really thought someone could be so kind. And to her. Liz felt the tears sting her eyes but she blinked them back and swallowed pass the lump in her throat.
"Why don't we go get something to eat and you tell me about yourself," He said as he put his arm around her shoulder and they started out of the mid way.*******
They settled with some Mexican food and sat down in front of where they were having music.
They sat down and started to eat. "So Liz, tell me about yourself," He said. "What do you want to know?" She asked with a teasing glint in her voice.
"Hmm, you live in Albuquerque?" He asked
"Nope I live in Roswell right now but I'm planning on moving to Albuquerque because I go to school here at the UNM and since they have raised the gas prices the extra 400 miles here and back is killing me," She said.
Max nodded in understandment. "I live here. I work with my dad at his firm," He said.
"Evans cooperation??" Liz asked
Max nodded and took a bite of his taco. A piece of lettuce hanging from his mouth. Liz giggled. Max looked up confused. "What??"
Liz pointed to her mouth and giggled more. She leaned forward and took the piece off his lip. She let it fall as she got lost in his eyes. She reached up and rubbed her thumb on his bottom lip.
Max looked into her beautiful eyes and as if he could see it, there was a brick wall covering her heart. Pain was in her eyes, sadness, loneliness, then he saw it a crack in the brick wall was forming. He smiled to himself.
Liz leaned in farther to him and her lips brushed against his. She felt a shock go through her body all the way down to her toes.
Max finally was able to move. He moved his hand to the small of her back and pushed her to him. Liz put her hands on his shoulders pulling him closer. His tongue pushed against her bottom lip. His other hand caressing her cheek.
A loud voice cut into Lizs heart. "What the hell is going on!?"
TBC.....Feedback please and I might be able to get part 3 out later on today ;) feedback PLEASE
posted on 28-Oct-2001 7:23:01 PM by SoulMatesForever
(pick up from where I left off) Part 3
Liz and Max jumped apart and looked to see Sean there. "Sean what are you doing here??" She asked. Max looked over at Liz. His eyes went to hers and he saw the brick wall form again. He looked back to the guy that intrupted them.
"What do you think I'm doing here Liz, hunny, you were supposed to meet me at the gate. Where have you been Liz?? Scopping out guys??? Well enough is enough we're leaving," He said.
Liz closed her eyes brefly before looking at Max. Her eyes saying shes sorry. Liz got un idea. She pulled out a pen and grabbed Maxs hand.
call me please I could always use someone to talk to my cell is 818-4223. Thank you for the wonderful night I never thought I could have so much fun.
She put the pen in her pocket and followed Sean.*******
They road home in silence. Liz looking out the window. Sean gripping the wheel tight.
Once they got home she walked inside and put her stuff on the table. Unexpecticly someone pushed her against the wall. He grabbed her shoulders and slammed her against the wall.
"What the hell were you doing Liz?! With that guy kissing him! Your with me remember!" He yelled as he slammed her against the wall again. "I'm..I'm sorry," Liz said choking on her sobs. "Fuck you Liz I'm otta here," He said and left with a slam.
Liz slid down to the ground sobbing her eyes out.*********
Maria Guerin walked up to her best friends house and rang the door bell. When no one answered she started to knock. Again no one answer she opened the door and looked around.
"Liz????" She yelled. She quiet her self as she heard noises coming from the kitchen. She saw Liz sitting on the floor her knees to her chest. "Liz?? Liz baby whats wrong??" She asked as she sat down next to Liz and put her on her lap and rocked Liz back and forth.
"Sean left. He saw me kissing a guy I met at the fair Maria, but Maria I'm not sad that hes gone," Liz started to say.
"The guy I met, he, he made me happy. He made me smile Maria. Me smiling again," Liz chuckled.
"Maria tell me? Do you believe in love at first site??" Liz asked. Maria nodded. "Well I think I fell in love with a guy named Max Evans today," Liz said.********
"Maxwell, Hell we've been looking all over for you!" Michael Guerin said to his best friend.
"Here," Max said emotionless. "Well, Max since you had your fun and we had our fun with out u we would like to go home now," Isabel Evans told her brother. Max only nodded and they started for the car.********
1 week later
"Just give me the damn coffee!! I'm only 2 cents short!!" Liz screamed at the guy that was holding her nice coffee that could keep her up for the rest of the night.
"I'm sorry lady but you need 2 cents to get your 'damn coffee'," The guy said. "I want to speak to the manager!" Liz said harshly. "I am the manager ma'am," He said and pointed to his name.
"Here is your damn 2 cents mister," A familier voice said behind her. Lizs eyes widened and a smile crept upon her lips.
She turned around and saw him. Max yes. The guy she thought, no knew she was in love with after one night.
Liz thanked him with her eyes. Max nodded in understandment. She grabbed the drink from the jerk and started for a table. "So, Liz hows it going??" He asked as he sat across from her.
Liz tucked a piece of her hair behind her ear. "Fine. and yourself?"
Max nodded. "Fine. Been real busy at work you know," Liz nodded in agreement.
"Liz, I'm sorry. I should've called but-" Liz cut him off. "Its fine Max. No need to explain yourself. We both had a great time at the fair, and I really didn't think you'd call anyways after....after that," Liz said looking down at her coffee.
Max nodded. "Yeah. You never told me you have a boyfriend though. You should've said something,"
Liz nodded. "I know I'm sorry. Sean. Sean is Sean. We broke up though,"
Max smiled at Liz. Liz looked up at Max and smiled back a bit. She heard a horn honk outside. "Shit," Max said. "what?"
"My sister. We're supposed to have a big meeting at work today,"
Liz's smile faded. "Oh," Max looked at Liz for a moment then smiled again. "Hey why don't you come with us. I'm sure my dad won't mind," Max offered.
Liz shook her head. "I can't, I brought my car and I have some papers to grade for my students," Liz rambled. Max gave her the puppy eye.
"Max. Maaaaax!!" Liz giggled. He kept it up. Liz growled. "Fine," Max smiled and stood up.******************
TBC. lol!! I'm sorry! I forgot I had a new part for yall!!! feedback!