posted on 22-Feb-2002 5:23:46 PM by PhoenixStar24
Title: THE LAST DON II 'THE RETURN'
Author: Shana
Disclaimer: As much as I love Roswell, I do not in anyway own it or its characters.I do own the names.
I don't own The Last Don. Just this story and it's direction.
Summary:Ok this is so long over due but if you read 'The Last Don' you will understand this part. It longer and not really developed but hopefully I will get to some good part before you lose interest.

Chapter 1: BOOM!!!!!!

9:00 A.M.

Groaning as the buzzer went off, she tried to find the off button or the plugg. unable to find either

one she pulled the alarm off her nightstand and sent it flying into the wall. Even than the annoying machine

refused to shut up. Not want to wake anyone, she opened her bedroom window and threw the alarm out.

Knowing she have to get a move on it she ran and took a shower and then got dressed in her climbing suit,

short, a t-shirt, and boots. She had packed her things for the climb yesterday. Pulling her hair in a loose

ponytail, adding lipgloss she left her room. While walking to the stair she smelled food. Running down the

stairs she went into the kitchen. "Morning Derrick " she said. "Morning to you to Liz" said Derrick.

"What are you doing up?" she asked. Looking at her , "I just woke up early so I thought I would make

you some breakfast" he said. "Thanks, I was just going to get a fruit to go" she said. As she sat down

eating he continued to cook. "Are you going climbing today?" he asked. "Yeah, why?" she said.

"I just don't have a good feeling about today. I don't think you should go climbing" he said.

"Derrick, I will be fine I'm just going climbing in the country. There is nothing to worry about, but if it makes

you feel better I'll care my gun with me" she said as she got up and started washing the dishes. "I love you,

Derrick. I'm going to be fine. besides the fast I go the fast I will be back to pick up Cassie" kissing him on the

cheek she grabed her pack, a water bottle and left. As the door slam, Derrick began running around packing

bags,and brought them all to the door. Taking all picture and such he left the apartment and put everything

in he's caravan. That was Derrick Owen day packing and moving.

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2:15

Liz have went climbing in the mountains an hour outside of Rome. It had been a year and a few months

the last she saw her family. At times she missed them badly, but she loved her life here. It was peaceful.

She was 20 mintues from the apartment when her cell rang. "Hello" she answered on speaker phone.

"Hey Liz" said Derrick. "Oh hi. what's up I'm almost home. I'm going to show then go pick up Cassie" she

said. "Can you get some stuff a the store?" he asked. Anytime he asked her to get food at the store it meant

he wanted her to cook. Derrick wasn't a bad cook. It's just he didn't see why he should cook when his best

friend was a five star chef. He took to making breakfast because he left for work normally after both she and

Cassie ate. "Sure. How about I make Chocolate deluxe strawberry stuffed with whipped cream" she said. It

was Derrick and Cassie favorite desert. "Sure, that would be great..." he said. "Derrick is something wrong?"

she asked. "No! I mean no I was just looking for the T.V. remote" he said. "Okay, I'll be there in about an

hour then I guess" she said and hung up. Derrick had been acting wierd since this morning. Come to think

of it all week. 'It probably nothing' she thought as she pulled her car in front of the store.

One hour later she pulled into her parking space across the street from her apartment complex. As she

walked up to the elevator her cell rang. after moving the groceries to her other arm she answered her phone.

"Hello?" she said. one more any she would be on her floor. "Hey, what did you get?" asked Derrick. "I'm

almost at the door, but tell me about your day." she said. As he talked she exited the elevator. Their

apartment was 10 feet in front of it. As Derrick kept talking, a bone chilling feeling came over Liz. She looked

at the door for a while, when she heard Derrick tell her how much he loved her and Cassie. "We love you

too Derrick" she said as she stared at the door that when she saw it. Just before the door opened. "NO!

Derrick don't- " she started . Derrick opened the door like he always did to greet her, then suddenly BOOM!

Liz was thrown back into the elevator as the bomb took out the whole floor........

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TBC.

Tell me if you like it and want me to continue.

This is to everyone who has read my story and encouraged me to keep writing.

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Now leave me some feedback or I will sent MoonliteLizz on you. LOL. Joking.
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~" You know this can never be normal" ~ Max
~" What's so great about being normal" ~ Liz

MAX&LIZ
0] Dreamer: Shana



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posted on 27-Aug-2002 4:15:16 AM by PhoenixStar24
Title: THE LAST DON II 'THE RETURN'
Author: Shana
Disclaimer: As much as I love Roswell, I do not in anyway own it or its characters.I do own the names in this story.
I don't own The Last Don the movie part 1 or 2. This story is loosely based on it as well as
The Godfather. I just own this story and it's direction.
Catagory: Max and Liz (M/M, A/I, K/T)
Rating: NC-17
Summary:Ok this is so long over due but if you read 'THE LAST DON' you will understand this part. It longer and not really developed but hopefully I will get to some good part before you lose interest.


Chapter 2: Waking Up

'My bloody head is killing me. Where the hell am I. I need to get up, but for what?

If only I could remember'. Slowly opening her eyes, she saw a man holding a needle

to an IV that appeared to be attached to her. The man didn't seem to notice her waking

up. She spotted his gun in the back of his pants. Moving slowly so he didn't notice, she

grabbed his gun with one hand, while the other swung around his neck.

"If you value your life at this given moment, you are going to tell me exactly what is in

that needle and what your going to do with it" she whisper deadly into his ear.

When he didn't answer she said "May I be so kind as to remind to that I have your gun and

it's pointing in the middle of your back". "Let's just say it's a permanent sleeping drug" he

said. "Ah, and who is your boss and why does he want me dead?" she asked.

He turned his head and looked at her as if she was crazy. "Alright that was a dumb

question" she answered. He just looked at her. With the gun still planted in his mid back

she fired one shot. When he dropped to his knees, she fired another into the back of his

head. Waping the gun of her prints she dropped it on the man's dead body, as she opened

the ambulance door she said "Shouldn't try to be a smartass, it gets you killed".

Knowing someone must of heard the shots, she looked around to see where she was.

It was late afternoon.

Just a block away was her apartment and what appeared to be a crowd of people.

Her fast pace quickly because running. What she saw horried her. The floor that

had once held her apartment was gone. Suddenly the day's events came

back to her.

~Flashback~

As she walked up to the elevator her cell rang. After moving the groceries to her

other arm she answered her phone.

"Hello?" she said. One more any she would be on her floor. "Hey, what did you get?"

asked Derrick. "I'm almost at the door, but tell me about your day." she said. As he

talked she exited the elevator. Their apartment was 10 feet in front of it. As Derrick

kept talking, a bone chilling feeling came over Liz. She looked at the door for a while,

when she heard Derrick tell her how much he loved her and Cassie. "We love you

too Derrick" she said as she stared at the door that when she saw it. Just before the

door opened. "NO! Derrick don't- " she started . Derrick opened the door like he

always did to greet her, then suddenly BOOM! Liz was thrown back into the elevator

as the bomb took out the whole floor........

~End of Flashback~

"NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOO" she screamed.

She grew the attention of the people around her. She started ran up to the building but

an arm caught her around the waist. "LET ME GO!!!!!!" she screamed.

Seeing the commotion the captain of the Paris police force walked over.

"What's going on!" he demanded. "I've got it under control captain" said the officer.

"Derrick!, Cassandra!" she screamed. "Madam do you know the person who was

in the apartment?" asked the Captain. "Of course, that my apartment" she snapped.

"Madam, I am very sorry for you loss. We have retrieved your husband's body-"

started the captain. "Wait! You said person. That means one. So where is my daughter?"

she asked. "The little girl with dark hair and eyes?" said the officer. "Yes, where is she?"

she asked. "I take it you were the one on the way to the hospital? An elderly woman named

Mrs. Kurtis say she would pick up the little girl and keep her until her mother returned.

Hearing that Cassie's piano teacher had her she rushed to where her car was parked avoiding

the policemen trying to stop her. With the extra key she kept in Cassie cd case in her car she

sped off.
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15 minutes later,

She pulled up into Mrs. Kurtis's small apartment complex. Jumping out she ran into the

building and straight to Mrs. Kurtis's door. Knocking gently as so not to frighten anyone

she waited. The door opened and the smell of Mrs. Kurtis's pasta hit her like a welcoming

home smell. "Elizabeth, I'm glad your here Cassie has bein wanting to know what happen

to you when you didn't pick her up" said Mrs. Kurtis. "I didn't have the heart to tell her what

happened" she continued. Nodding, Liz asked quietly "I know, I haven't excepted it

as of yet. Where is she?" "She's in my room napping, please come in" said Mrs. Kurtis.

Entering the room, with a nod she took off to see her daughter. Opening the door of the room

that held her daughter. She prayed for the strenght she would need. Going over to the bed she

gently shook her little girl. "Baby wake up,it's Mommy" she said. "Mommy" said a sleepy

Cassie. "Baby, Mommy needs you to wake up" she said. "I'm up mommy" said Cassie.

"Baby, earlier today your daddy died in a fire" said Elizabeth slowly while rubbing Cassie's

back. She didn't know if it was for Cassie or her. "No, that not true, daddy wouldn't leave us"

Cassie said after a while. "He gone sweetie and we have to live with that" said Liz. She and

Cassie soon began to cry. Shortly after they fell a sleep holding each other.

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Next day

Waking up to someone tapping her, Liz nodded to Mrs. Kurtis and covered Cassie with a

blanket. Pushing some of Cassie's hair behind her ear, she then got up and left the room. In the

hallway Mrs.Kurtis stopped her and said that a gentlemen was waiting for her in the living room.

Thanking her, Liz continued on. As she enter the room a man she had known all her life stood

in front of her. "Jim Valenti?" she asked before rushing to give the man a hug and kiss.

Standing back she asked "Uncle Jim what are you doing here?" "I came for you" he replied.

"What?" she asked

"I came to take you home. It time to come home Cross" he said.


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~Hey I'll start writing the next chapter 3: Going Home today.

~Again if anyone sees the stories: Princess Elizabeth or Being Famous chapter 1

please let me know.

~If in my disclaimer I forgot to mention something and you know the name and

author please tell me so I can correct it.
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Leave me some feedback so I know what you think.
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~" You know this can never be normal" ~ Max
~" What's so great about being normal" ~ Liz

MAX&LIZ
0] Dreamer:Shana
posted on 28-Aug-2002 12:44:15 AM by PhoenixStar24
Hey,
Thanks for the feedback.
A new chapter would be up now but my friend hasn't read it yet. It will go up tomorrow even it she hasn't read it.About my other stories, they should be update soon as well. Please keep the feedback coming, I love hearing what you guys think of my story. The good and the bad.

Shana



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