posted on 25-Feb-2002 1:50:17 PM by Jasonsgurl310
I'm not sure if I'm doing this right. I'm really new here. So, if I'm doing something wrong just tell me, or if I'm in the wrong place just move my story.
Author:Jasonsgurl310
Rating: PG13
Disclaimer:I own absolutely nothing! Unless I come up with a character on my own somewhere along the way, but as of now I own nothing!
Summary: I'm still working on it, but read what I've got so far(it's not that much). I'll put up a better summary later once I've got my full plot thought up.*happy*
I think that's it...Oh yeah...
Feedback:I would love! My story kinda starts slow ,but it should get better. Don't flame me. This is one of my first fanfictions.
Enjoy...

~*~Part 1~*~
He looked up at the sky and then back down to her. He had never felt so much peace has he did right now in this moment.
"What are you thinking Max?"she asked as she snuggled up against his chest alittle more. He squeezed her hand that was wrapped around her.
"You" he murmured in her hair. Liz looked up at him and smiled. "What are you thinking about?" he asked as he inhaled the sweet strawberry scent of her hair.
"How I never want to leave this place. How wonderful you are. How happy I am when I'm with you." He could feel her blush,"I love you, Liz. I don't want to leave either."
Liz sighed in sweet satisfaction. It had been forever since they had just been together. No more FBI. No more constant destiny. Tess had moved on. No evil aliens had popped up unexpectedly. They were actually able to sit and just be happy. That's what they were right at this moment, happy, pure blissful content happiness.
Gently, Max turned Liz around. She looked at him with wide eyed fasicnation. He caressed her cheek with his thumb and began to trace the outline of her face. She's so beautiful. He leaned in and softly kissed her. It started off soft and almost fragile, but Liz deepened it, begging for more. He pryied her lips apart and mated with her tongue. Both moaned out in sweet satisfaction.
Slowly Max broke apart. Liz whimpered playfully. He pulled her up to her feet and let her back to his car.
"We're not leaving already, are we?" she asked tugging his hand to stop him. He smiled and started the car, "No" he stately simply.
"Then what are we doing?" He didn't answer. He just turned the radio on. Instantly the desert air was filled with music.
Come to me now
And lay your hands over me
Even if it's a lie
Say it will be alright
And I shall believe

"Max" she breathed as she recognized the song.
I'm broken in two
And I know you're on to me
That I only come home
When I'm so all alone
But I do believe

Max came back around the car and wrapped his arms around her. "You remembered." He smiled,"How could I forget our wedding song?"
That not everything is gonna be the way
You think it ought to be
It seems like every time I try to make it right
It all comes down on me
Please say honestly you won't give up on me
And I shall believe
And I shall believe

He held her close as the swayed to the music. This was his dream as much as it was hers. Neither had ever been so happy.
Open the door
And show me your face tonight
I know it's true
No one heals me like you
And you hold the key

"I love you." she whispered.
Never again
would I turn away from you
I'm so heavy tonight
But your love is alright
And I do believe

"I love you too" he whispered into her sweet hair again.
That not everything is gonna be the way
You think it ought to be
It seems like every time I try to make it right
It all comes down on me
Please say honestly
You won't give up on me
And I shall believe
I shall believe
And I shall believe

When the song was over the just stood there. Neither one daring to be the first to break the spell. Moments of silence passed and Max finally broke away,"We need to head back."
Liz sighed in defeat."You're right" He leaned in and kissed her forehead,"I know" he smiled. She lightly punched his side and he laughed,"Watch it."
"Or what?"she challenged.
"You better behave Ms. Parker. You don't want to have to face the consequences." he teased. She climbed into the beat up jeep and held his hand for the rest of the ride home.
They climbed up her ladder and sat on her lawn chair. "It's late. I better be getting home." Max stated. "You don't want to stay?" Liz asked slyly.
"I think we both know the answer to that question." he replied a matter-of-factly. She giggled. He started to head down towards the ladder, but she grabbed his hand, "Stay," she whispered. He didn't object. He didn't respond at all. He just stood there in shock. She had no idea what was running through his mind. "Liz, I really sh-" she silenced him with a kiss.
"Stay," She led him back to the lawn chair and sat on his lap. He stroked his hand and he sat nervously, "Relax Max! I'm not going to force you into bed with me or anything!"
"You really think you'd have to force me?" he blurted out before thinking. He blushed profusely as she laughed.
"Oh," she finally stated. She continued to stroke his hand until he calmed down beneath. He began to stroke her hair. Eventually, Liz snuggled up closer and drifted off to sleep. He continued to watch his angel has her chest rose and fell. He never wanted to leave her. He hoped she was dreaming of him, not that he really doubted.
*********
TBC...only if you like it....
Jasonsgurl...Be honest, is it bad?*angel*

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posted on 25-Feb-2002 2:43:11 PM by Jasonsgurl310
Thanks! I feel better someone is actually reading my story*happy*.
Authors Note: Max knows about FMax. I forgot to mention that. They're still in highschool. It picks up somewhere after EOTW but everything after that never happened. Sorry for leaving outt hat wonderful piece of info.
I'm gonna go work on the next part. It might be a while. I'm getting kicked off my computer...Can you believe it?!?!?!?
I'll be back soon.
Jasonsgurl

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posted on 25-Feb-2002 3:35:35 PM by Jasonsgurl310
~*~Part 2~*~
The sun started to creep over Liz's balcony. Liz started to stir. Everything started to come into focus. The desert, the kisses, the dance...
She turned around to find Max soundly asleep. She brushed away some hair that had fallen in his eyes. She smiled as she heard his faint snores.My beloved king snores. She memorized his every feature, the way his long eyelashes encased his gold dusted eyes, the way his lips were slightly parted. Now isn't that a tease. She gently kissed him. He slowly began to come to when she broke apart.
"Good morning," he smiled goofily.
"Yeah it is isn't it?" she teased. He say up to face her," How long have you been awake?" he yawned.
"Not long. Did you sleep well?"
"Of course," She snuggled up into his chest. She almost wanted to be inside him, even then she wasn't sure she would be close enough. "What are you doing today?"Max asked interrupting her thoughts.
"I have to work. I'm sorry."
"All day?" she nodded. He sighed, "Well then I'll hang out with Michael and try to come by later."
"Sounds good. Are your parents going to wonder where you were last night?"
"Probably, but I'll just say I was at Michael's or something. Do your parents usually come check on you in the mor-"
"LIZ! ARE YOU UP YET?" her father yelled across the house. Max and Liz's eyes wided in pure terror. The jumped up out of the lawned chair as if it had burned them. Max started down the ladder but stopped midway.
"What are you doing Max? My dad is gonna be walking through my door any minute!" she whispered harshly.
"I love you." is all he said as he stole one last kiss and flew down the ladder.
"Liz ! What are you doing? Your supposed to be getting ready for work!Your a half hour late!"
"Sorry Daddy, I just over slept. I'll be down there in two minutes." She kissed her dad on the cheek and floated passed him.
***
"Hey Maria," Liz said as she waltzed down the stairs tying her apron on.
"Hey chica! Do you know if Michael is coming in today?" she asked in exasperation.
Liz punched in her card,"No, he's with Max today I think. Why I thought you two weren't on speaking terms after the whole alien/Courtney thing."
Maria let out a long sigh, "I'm not sure why were not together, but I am sure that I won't be the one putting us back together. That's his job."
"Good for you."
"TABLE 2'S ORDER IS READY!!!!!" Jose bellowed over the stove. Liz rushed over and grabbed the two plates of Will Smith Burgers and Maria shot her a sympathetic smile.It's going to be a long day.
***
"Michael!!!" Max bellowed through his apartment. He cautiously stepped into the war zone Michael some how managed to believe was a living room. Michael emerged from his room, "What do you want Maxwell?"
"Nothing. You doin anything today?"
"Yeah, I've to go put in a few hours over at the cafe. Why? I thought you would be with Liz."
"Naw, she's got to work today too. Oh well."
"Sorry man can't do much but work."
"It's cool. I'll see ya later."
"Later Maxwell." Michael hollered as Max started up his jeep and drove off.
***
Max drove down a desert road. He had no particular place to go, just felt like going for a ride. Mile marker 67 flew passed him. I'm not really into going to see the pod chamber, but it's not like I've got anything better to do. He kept on driving.
Suddenly, something atarted to blur the window of his car. *cough* Crap. His car was smoking. He pulled over to the side of the road. He looked at his car.
"I'll deal with you later." and he started walking aimlessly down the side of the road.
His thoughts started to drift to Liz. I wonder what she's doing right now? She's probably running around the Crashdown trying to finish her shift as much as possible, and Jose or Michael keep comingup with more orders for her and Maria. He smiled at the image of her running around with those little antennas coming out of her hair. She always looked so cute to him in the outfit.
Then suddenly he was on the ground.Blinding light was all around him. He couldn't move. Someone jerked him up forcefully to his feet and the light disappeared. He tried to struggle but two very big men had his arms pinned to his back and he couldn't get away.
"What do you want?" he hollered. Neither answered. One came up infront of him and Max tried to use his powers but found he couldn't. The man punched him in the gut and Max fell to his knees. The man from behind turned him over and the other laid into him again in the face. He started kicking his sides. Max never had a chance for escape. He tried to get up but he only made it to swaying on his knees and that was partly from the help of one of the goons. The smaller of the two put his hand to Max's head and instantly he was claimed by darkness...
TBC
I know not that great, but I'm wroking on it. I typed this in a hurry so forget the typos.
posted on 25-Feb-2002 7:41:26 PM by Jasonsgurl310
Even though no one is probably still reading this...
~*~Part 3~*~
Liz rushed around the Crashdown. Whytoday of all days does everyone decide to come here for lunch?
"LIZ! We've got 3 Will Smith Burgers, Orion Rings, and 3 ailen blasts for table 12!" she nodded out of breath. She grabbed it all in her arms and made her way to the door. She was so burned out from running around the cafe all day that she almost ran into Michael.
"Liz, watch it or we'll both being wearing milkshakes!" he scowled.
"Yeah, sorry. Hey, aren't you suppossed to be with Max today?"
"Naw, he came by but I had to come by here to put in some hours so he left." Liz headed for the door again but was suddenly met with a peircing pain from all sides. She started to sway on her feet. She dropped everything and headed for the floor, but Michael rushed to her right in time, "Liz, LIZ! Liz what is it?" She just lolled her head back. Everything hurt, everything was blurred.
She vaguely heard a girl's voice, "What happened? Michael! Is she ok?"
"I don't know she was fine, well sorta, and then she just fell." Liz tried to open her eyes but they were so heavy. Then, someone cradled her head and whispered words to her, but she couldn't make them out, "Max?" she slurred weakly. Her mouth felt like cotton.
"No Liz it's Michael. Max isn't here. We can't reach him." Liz tried to sit up, but was met by Michael's gentle push to lay down, "Stay," he ordered.
"Liz what happened?" Alex asked as he came rushing into the break room followed by Tess,Isabel, and Kyle.
"Max," she whispered her eyes getting wide as she processed what happened.
"Liz, I already told you he isn't here. We ca-"
"No, he's hurt or..." Liz couldn't finish her thought.
"What do you mean?" Isabel interjected.
"I know. He's hurt. I know it. We've got to find him. I'm not sure how I know but I know and you're going to have to trust me. I need to find him."
Michael and Maria looked at each other. They were both thinking the other's thoughts. We need to find Max.
***
Light lots of light. It was every where. Max squinted despite himself. AH! His body was aching everywhere. He tried to focus his vision. He saw the two men but they were this time occupianied by someone.
He was tall, broad shouldered, muscular, and dark. He stepped closer to Max. His eyes were peircing. It was like nothing was behind them.
"Hello Zan," it was a cold tone, "or is it Max?" Max just stared at him. He was restrained to a chair. He tried to use his powers to break them but the weren't wripping.
"You'll find your powers useless. I am so sorry about that. I would have hoped you would have been more cooperative, but you wouldn't be a good little boy. I would like to introduce myself and my compainion." Max noticed a girl step next to the man. She was small compared to the giant, but not as small as Tess or Liz. She had brown hair and deep green eyes. Her ivory skin was shocking. She was very beautiful ,but she struck Max as evil, someone unworthy of trust.
"Do you remember me at all Zan?" He gazed down at what he saw was a pathetic excuse for a king. This was the man that had almost defeated him years ago?
Max remained silent.
"Oh come on dear friend, you don't remember me? You and I were inseperable as young school boys."
He said nothing.
"Does the name Khivar make you tihnk of anything?" Max tried not to flinch as Khivar stooped down and was close enough to feel his disgusting breath, "Do you remember my sister Kylia? You must remember her?"
Max gave no reaction. Khivar looked back at his men and nodded. They were by Max's side in a instant. They unlached him and pushed him to his feet. With one on each side they grabbed him and took him to his quarters.
some hours later...
"WHERE AM I?!?!" Max screamed through his cell. It was cold and damp. It reminded him of the white room. In the sense that no one acknowledged his presence. He had been screaming for answers since they left him in here. His voice was growing hoarse and he was getting tired. He crumpled to the floor. He was tired, cold, hungry, scared, beaten and worried to death over Liz.Liz, oh Liz...you're probably going mad with worry. What if she's looking for him and Khivar sends someone after her too? What if she's hurt? Liz...
And Khivar...he hadn't even processed that information. His enemy that he on some level didn't even believe truely existed now has him locked in a cell.
Liz...
TBC
Is it getting any better? Is anyone still reading it?
*angel*
posted on 25-Feb-2002 7:43:15 PM by Jasonsgurl310
Even though no one is probably still reading this...
~*~Part 3~*~
Liz rushed around the Crashdown. Whytoday of all days does everyone decide to come here for lunch?
"LIZ! We've got 3 Will Smith Burgers, Orion Rings, and 3 ailen blasts for table 12!" she nodded out of breath. She grabbed it all in her arms and made her way to the door. She was so burned out from running around the cafe all day that she almost ran into Michael.
"Liz, watch it or we'll both being wearing milkshakes!" he scowled.
"Yeah, sorry. Hey, aren't you suppossed to be with Max today?"
"Naw, he came by but I had to come by here to put in some hours so he left." Liz headed for the door again but was suddenly met with a peircing pain from all sides. She started to sway on her feet. She dropped everything and headed for the floor, but Michael rushed to her right in time, "Liz, LIZ! Liz what is it?" She just lolled her head back. Everything hurt, everything was blurred.
She vaguely heard a girl's voice, "What happened? Michael! Is she ok?"
"I don't know she was fine, well sorta, and then she just fell." Liz tried to open her eyes but they were so heavy. Then, someone cradled her head and whispered words to her, but she couldn't make them out, "Max?" she slurred weakly. Her mouth felt like cotton.
"No Liz it's Michael. Max isn't here. We can't reach him." Liz tried to sit up, but was met by Michael's gentle push to lay down, "Stay," he ordered.
"Liz what happened?" Alex asked as he came rushing into the break room followed by Tess,Isabel, and Kyle.
"Max," she whispered her eyes getting wide as she processed what happened.
"Liz, I already told you he isn't here. We ca-"
"No, he's hurt or..." Liz couldn't finish her thought.
"What do you mean?" Isabel interjected.
"I know. He's hurt. I know it. We've got to find him. I'm not sure how I know but I know and you're going to have to trust me. I need to find him."
Michael and Maria looked at each other. They were both thinking the other's thoughts. We need to find Max.
***
Light lots of light. It was every where. Max squinted despite himself. AH! His body was aching everywhere. He tried to focus his vision. He saw the two men but they were this time occupianied by someone.
He was tall, broad shouldered, muscular, and dark. He stepped closer to Max. His eyes were peircing. It was like nothing was behind them.
"Hello Zan," it was a cold tone, "or is it Max?" Max just stared at him. He was restrained to a chair. He tried to use his powers to break them but the weren't wripping.
"You'll find your powers useless. I am so sorry about that. I would have hoped you would have been more cooperative, but you wouldn't be a good little boy. I would like to introduce myself and my compainion." Max noticed a girl step next to the man. She was small compared to the giant, but not as small as Tess or Liz. She had brown hair and deep green eyes. Her ivory skin was shocking. She was very beautiful ,but she struck Max as evil, someone unworthy of trust.
"Do you remember me at all Zan?" He gazed down at what he saw was a pathetic excuse for a king. This was the man that had almost defeated him years ago?
Max remained silent.
"Oh come on dear friend, you don't remember me? You and I were inseperable as young school boys."
He said nothing.
"Does the name Khivar make you tihnk of anything?" Max tried not to flinch as Khivar stooped down and was close enough to feel his disgusting breath, "Do you remember my sister Kylia? You must remember her?"
Max gave no reaction. Khivar looked back at his men and nodded. They were by Max's side in a instant. They unlached him and pushed him to his feet. With one on each side they grabbed him and took him to his quarters.
some hours later...
"WHERE AM I?!?!" Max screamed through his cell. It was cold and damp. It reminded him of the white room. In the sense that no one acknowledged his presence. He had been screaming for answers since they left him in here. His voice was growing hoarse and he was getting tired. He crumpled to the floor. He was tired, cold, hungry, scared, beaten and worried to death over Liz.Liz, oh Liz...you're probably going mad with worry. What if she's looking for him and Khivar sends someone after her too? What if she's hurt? Liz...
And Khivar...he hadn't even processed that information. His enemy that he on some level didn't even believe truely existed now has him locked in a cell.
Liz...
TBC
Is it getting any better? Is anyone still reading it?
*angel*
posted on 25-Feb-2002 7:48:06 PM by Jasonsgurl310
Sorry double post...just ignore it....
posted on 1-Mar-2002 7:31:14 PM by Jasonsgurl310
Have I mentioned you guys are wonderful?*happy*
Thanks to clueless I was informed people were actually reading my story.
Okay, I'm off to go work on part four. Thanks for the feedback. I'm still getting used to this whole fanfiction thing*angel*.
Lyns*angel*
posted on 1-Mar-2002 10:09:11 PM by Jasonsgurl310
Sorry for taking so long to update. I'll try to work on it more often as long as people still like. Don't hesitate to tell me when it starts to suck, just do it nicely(is that even possible????*happy*)
Here you go...hope you like....

~*~Part 4~*~

Michael paced the room. He'd been doing that for an hour now. Tess and Isabel had left to go find Max. They said they would call if anything came up.

There hadn't been a call...

Maria and Alex were trying to calm Liz down, but so far they had no success.

That left Kyle and him pacing in the break room, with nothing to do but wait. Sometihng they both hated.

"Do you think something really happned to him, or do you think he's just out?" Kyle asked impatiently.

"I'm not sure. I just don't like the fact that we can't find him and Liz has this soked idea that he's hurt. Personally, that sends up a red flag." Kyle nodded and returned to pacing.

Just then Maria, Alex and Liz all came down stairs.

"What is it?" Michael asked in hesitaion. Alex and Maria didn't say anything. They just looked at Liz. She continued down the stairs and stood in front of Michael.

"I know you don't believe me. I know no one wants to, but I know my instincts when it comes to Max. Something seriously wrong. Now, if you want to sit around and wait all day then fine, wait! But, if you want to make sure Max is alright come with me." Liz ordered softly but there was no mistaking her authority. Nor was there a doubt in anyone's mind that she wasn't Max's equal.

"What do you have in mind, Liz?" Alex questioned. Kyle nodded in agreement. Maria and Michael stared at her for her response.

"We're going to go for a drive. Call Tess and Isabel and let them know we're looking too. We can scan the desert. Maybe we'll see his car or sometihng. Maybe we won't find anything but atleast we won't be sitting around waiting." she told them. No onw objected they just all followed her to the jetta and cramed in.

"Hey, Alex, call Iz and tel her what we're doing." Maria hollered over the wind blowing in their faces as the windows rolled down. Alex gave a thumbsup sing as Michael drove down the road.

***

Isabel and Tess ran all around Roswell, hitting all of Max's local spots. Not that that was alot of places. Isabel let out a sigh of frustration. Tess grabbed her hand,"Everything is fine. Max is just out somewhere. We'll find him. Nothing's wrong. Liz just got spooked and now we're just having trouble locating him, but we will find him!"

"Thanks. Goodness, this feels like White room all over again!"

"I know what you mean, but we got him out then and we'll get him out now."

"I thought you said we just had to find him? No one said he was held somewhere." Isabel eyes her cooly.

"I was justing saying we'll find him. Sorry wrong choice of words."

Isabel ignored it and headed back to Tess's SUV. "We've looked everywhere we'r-" her phone interrupted her.

"Hello?" she yelled trying to hear the other line.

"Isabel?" Alex screamed into the phone.

"Alex?"

"Yeah! Hey we're all piled in Maria's car. Liz couldn't sit still so we're driving around the desert. We just thought we'd clue you in so you don't worry. Found anything?"

"No not yet! You?"

"Naw we just started. Call if you find anything!"

"Okay," *click*

"What's going on?" Tess asked as she started the car.

"They are all looking around the desert. Liz culdn't stay still."

"Figures,"

Isabel looked out the window and prayed Max was alright. Max, if you're not being tortured now, then you better pray someone else finds you and not me. You don't even know what you're in for if you're not in trouble. she thought as a single tear rolled down her cheek...

***

Max awoke from a fittful sleep when he felt someone touch his face. He flinched back in sore pain at the feeling of touch on his now tender flesh. He just laid there as they continued to stroke his hair. Finally he managed to pry open his eyes.

It was her, the girl. Her piercing green eyes were more intense up close. She didn't stop stroking his hair even when they made eye contact.

"Good morning Zan," she stated simply. He tried to move his mouth but his body would'nt cooperate. His eyes betrayed him as the displayed his fear.

"Don't worry Zan. We'll only keep you down here as long as you conitnue to not be a good little boy. She was patrinizing him, but there wasn't much he could about it. He slowly sat up andmoved from her touch. She didn't move closer or reach out. She just sat there.

"What...do you wan..t" he mumbled slowly as he lightly felt his swollen jaw.

Now it was her turn to have her eyes betray her. They displayed actual emotion. Actual sympathy.

"Don't" he ordered.

"Don't what Zan?"

"Don't act like you...have actual ...emotion. I...don't want you pity..."

"Zan..." she moved closer.

"Don't touch me, or call me that! My name is Max." he ordered.

After all these years, after all these years he still holds that aura about him. The sense that no matter what he's still a leader, even when the odds aren't in his favor.she thought to herself.

"Kylia!" someone called. She got up and closed the cell. Max jumped up but was met with a slam in the face. He was now face to face with Khivar.

"Kylia, go up stairs." he ordered. She didn't object, but she gave Max a look that sent chills up and down his spine.

"Where ... am I?" Max asked painfully.

Khivar chuckled in satisfaction as if hegot pleasure out of Max's pain. Which in fact he probably did. This can not be the king that almost once defeated me? Not this beaten little boy.

"Now, Zan you'll know everythng in good time. As for now I'd like you too relax." he put his finger on Max's temple. Max tried to pull away, but was forced to stay by some unseen force. Images blurred both their vision. Seering pain shot through Max's head. Images were being extraced one by one and he was unable to stop it. When the pain became so unbearable that his knees buckled, Khivar finally let go of his hold and Max crumpled to the ground.

He looked at Max and thought to himself,So, her name is Liz...

TBC

******
Sorry again for taking so long on posting. I'll try to do better.*angel*
Feedback please...is it starting to suck?
posted on 2-Mar-2002 8:33:48 PM by Jasonsgurl310
*shy* I'm sleepy*shy*...*happy*
But, I'm here to work on part 5
So here you go....

~*~Part 5~*~

Michael, Liz, Maria, Kyle, and Alex all piled out of the jetta. They were out on the highway. Every few miles they would get out and call Isabel and Tess.

Still nothing...

*Ring* *Ring* Kyle looked down at his cell phone. No one was paying attention to him. He pulled it out, "Hello?"

"Kyle?"

"Dad? What's up?"

"Is Liz with you?"

"Yeah, everyone but Tess and Isabel are with me. Why?"

"Get them all down to marker 67. There's something you all should see..."

"Is everything ok? I mean if it can wait we're kinda busy looking for Max"

"It's important. It's about Max."

"Is he ok?" Everyone was listening now. Michael and Liz were ready to steal the phone.

"Just get down here." *click*

"What about Max?" Liz asked. Kyle didn't answer. Michael grabbed his collar, "What happened?!?!" he screamed in sudden panic. Maria and Alex stood in shock. Maria slowly walked up to Michael and unclenched his hands. He never broke eye contact with Kyle.

"I'm not sure. My dad just said get down to mile marker 67. It's about Max. That's all I know."

Some time later

Liz ran up to Valenti. "Where's Max?" she asked frantically. He didn't have to answer. She saw it. She saw his jeep. Although, it didn't look like a jeep anymore. She ran over too it.

Michael wasn't far behind her. She ran to Max's side of the car. Nothing was there. Just blood and broken glass. She stared in horror. Max!

She left Michael in the dust and ran to the paramedics.

"Where is he?" she cried. Someone in a paramedic's outfit came up to her.

"WHERE IS HE?!?!?" she screamed.

"The body was thrown from the car, or so we think. It was so deformed. Are you family?" the man reported. She nodded yes in shock, What does it matter if were family or not! Just let me see Max.

"Could you come down to the hospital and identify the body?"

"He's dead?" she whispered. NO! He's not! I know he's not. He can't be! Max! Where are you? Max, I know you're alive!

The paramedic nodded silently. He lead her over to a truck. "The body has already been taken to the hospital. We'll take you down there."

"Wait. I need to tell someone." she ran off to Michael and told him. He told Maria and followed Liz back to the truck.

"He's not dead Michael! He can't be dead!" she couldn't wrap her mind around Max's death. It's not true! It can't.

Michael wrapped his arm around Liz. "Everything is going to be ok," he choked out. Liz, I hope you're right..

They followed the paramedic into a hospital and down a few flight of stairs. He took them into a cold room. It had a few lights, but was still creepy. There were bodies on tables with sheet over them. He's not here. He's not here. He's not here... ,Liz coached herself. Michael had a protective arm around her shoulder as he lead her away from one of the bodies and over to the one that the paramedic was standing over.

"You might want to brace yourself. The body is pretty messed up from the crash. We tried to clean him up, but there's still alot of blood and glass left."

"Would you stop saying 'the body'. He has a damn name now use it!" Michael order in pain. Liz braced herself and clung unto Michael's shirt.

Slowly, the man pulled back the sheet. Michael let out a gasp. Liz didn't move.

It was Max. A very pale and bloody Max, but it was him. He had a blood in his hair. glass was almost everywhere. His face was beaten up pretty badly. He had a big gash about his right eye brow. His lips were covered in cuts of glass.

"I thought you cleaned him up?" Liz whispered. The man didn't answer.

"It's Max. Now could you give us a minute?" Michael ordered more than requested. The man didn't respond, he just walked out. Michael and Liz didn't move for what seemed like an eternity. They just stood there and looked at what was left of Max. Finally, Liz stepped closer to him. She eyed him for a moment. Memories were flooding her mind.
*Their first kiss*

*There first date*

*The flashes*

*The dances*

*When she came back from Florida and he touched her arm *

*FMax*
I'll never have a future with Max... With that thought she let her head fall and she let out a wimper that Michael believed should never have to come from her. She slowly kissed his face. Then she leaned back trying to hold back her tears. She saw the glass in his lips and lost it. She let out a blood curtling scream and started trying to pull them out. She walked away and grabbed an insturment off a tabel and threw it across the room. She ran back over to Max and kissed his glass cut lips despite her own safety. She broke away and laided her head down under his chin. He's gone...everything we had is gone.....he left me. Why id you leave me, Max? Why? What am I suppossed to do? How do I live with out you?

She pulled away and fell to her knees and cried harsh sobs. Michael kneeled and cried with her. They stayed there for hours mourning their beloved friend.

****
TBC
Hope you like. I'm off to read instead of write for alittle while. Feedback please...it gets to post quicker*wink*.

Lyns*angel*
posted on 3-Mar-2002 3:27:21 PM by Jasonsgurl310
~*~ Part 6~*~

Maria, Alex, Kyle, Isabel, and Tess all stood in the waiting room of the hospital. Maria was in a corner crying. Tess was leaning on Kyle and Alex was conforting Isabel. No one wanted to speak what they were all thinking.He can't be dead.

After waiting two hours, Michael slowly walked out with a protective arm around Liz's shoulder. It was evident they ahd been crying.

Maria looked up an ran too Michael. He threw his arms around her and buried his head n her hair. Isabel looked at Liz and turned to Alex. He held her close then helped her sit down. Tess slid to the floor and Kyle put his arm around her.

Liz looked at all of them. They each had their other half. She was alone. Her other half was gone. She stared at them all. He was gone. She had to get away from them. From her memories. She ran passed them. She didn't stop running until she was on a balcony. She ran into the fencing that kept her from jumping off.

"Why Max? Why did you leave me? After everything, you had to get into that stupid car. That stupid car..." she screamed as if he could hear her. She felt an arm wrap around her. They pulled her into a hug. She didn't look up at first. She just cried into their chest.

"Shhhh. We'll get through this Liz. We'll find out what really happened. Everything will be ok. Shhhhh..." Alex whispered into her hair. They both knew he was lieing. Max was gone. Nothing would be the same. Nothing would be alright...
***

Kylia walked aound the hospital. She knew Khivar would have her head if he knew she was wandering around alone. Anyone could see her. ot that they would know who she was. She had to see this girl. She had to see the girl that had won the heart of her king.

After hearing Khivar talk to his men about this girl she had to see for herself.

She walked around the hospital. She came to the waiting rom ad took a deep breath. She saw a group of people crying.

Her eyes widened in fascination, Vilandra?...then she broke her gaze and swept across the rest of the group,Rath.... She didn't recognize the others, but they were here. Two of the royal four. She let out a breath that she didn't even realize she had been holding. None of them noticed her presence, even when she left.

She walked out of the hospital. Upset that she didn't find the girl. She'd find her another time. She had seen enough for now. She hadn't even thought about the rest of the royal four. Just Zan. Yet, two of them were right there...
***
I'm making this one kinda short. I'm still working on the rest of the plot. Behr with me. It might not make alot of sense now, but it will in the end.

Lyns*angel*
PS...Feedback makes the world go round*wink*

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posted on 4-Mar-2002 11:36:13 AM by Jasonsgurl310
Roswelluver: Max isn't dead. I'm just making it look like that to everyone else, but no if you read previous parts you know he's still alive.

On Tess being evil, well I'm not gona answer that quite yet. Keep reading.

Thank you all so much for all the wonderful feedback. It really helps me get the new parts out faster;).

I'm off to work on part 7.*angel*

Lyns
posted on 4-Mar-2002 9:00:20 PM by Jasonsgurl310
I'm not sure if anyone is still reading, but if anyone is stll reading here you go...

~*~Part 7~*~

Khivar watched from afar as men would take rounds beating Zan. He got pleasure out of watching his once was conquerer beaten an inch away from death. This is becoming too easy. He watched his enemy's weak excuse to fight back. He held up a good fight for one who had lost of their powers. Too bad he didn't have to put up an actual entertaining fight...Oh well.

Max looked up from the ground when the beatings stopped coming. They were gone. He pulled himself and leaned against the wall. How long have I been here? He had stopped keeping track after awhile. If he could just get enough strenghth to get his powers working. Why aren't they working? He crawled over to the bars of his cell. No one was on the other side. He looked to his sides....no one. He layed down. Liz...what are you doing? Please....don't let him get to Liz.

Liz looked around her room. Michael had taken Maria home. Alex had dropped off Kyle and Tess and was on his way to Isabel's house. Maria and Michael dropped her off.

She continued her scan of her room. Images flooded her mind. When Max would come to her balcony. All those stupid times he needed to take a step back. She laughed at that thought He could never stay away. The time she and future Max had danced. When she caught Kyle and Max in there drunk, now that's a memory. She smiled sadly. She couldn't get the image of Max's body out of her head. Something was still off. She couldn't get her mind wrapped around that.

Maria and Michael sat in the car in silence. Neither one of them needed to say anything to the other. She looked over at him. He was trying so hard to stay strong. Strong for everyone. She wanted to hold him in her arms and just make all of the problems in the world go away. Her head was telling her to get out of the car and just give him a goodbye hug and leave it at that. But her heart was breaking for him. She searched his eyes, but they were to clouded notice her questions. She leaned over and took his hands off the steering wheel. He broke off his staring contest with the road and looked at her in confusion. She kissed the palm of his hand. He didn't move. She climbed out of the car and walked to his door and pulledhim out. He acted as if in a daze. He didn't protest. He just watched her.

She led him to her room. What are you doing Maria?!? You two aren't together. His best friend just died! What are you doing?

"Maria what a-" she silenced him with her finger.

"You shouldn't be alone tonight. I know where we stand, but I'm not leaving you alone. Got it?" she could tell he was still fighting for courage.

"Hey Michael it's just me. Maria...I know you better than anyone else. Don't do this to me, okay? Don't shut me out. Let me help you. It will help me. Help me Michael..." she let her tears roll freely. He was still listening but had yet to break down. "Today is day I would never wish upon anyone. Espcially Isabel, Liz and you. It's okay to feel pain, hurt, anger...just feel something. Michael it's okay to feel. You don't have to be strong for me. Let us be strong for each other." He looked at her for a moment and fell into her arms. He let it go. He cried heart wrenching sobs. She sat there and held him for hours. When he started to shake she held him tighter.She didn't loosen up her grip until she heard his sobs cease and breath even out. He was far from being okay, but in her heart she knew they'd figure out what really happened and they'd be together to figure I out.

Isabel laid in Alex's arms. She had fallen into a fittful sleep about an hour ago. His heart went out to her. Even more so to Liz. No one was with Liz. Who's with Liz? Panic gripped his heart. He couldn't leave Isabel now. He just hoped Maria was with her. He fell asleep stroking Isabel's golden hair. What are we going to do?

Liz looked around the accident sight. It was the middle of the night, but she had to know. She had to know if sometihng paranormal happened. The hair on the back of her neck stood up. She knew she wasn't alone...

***
TBC

I know it's short and really sad, but I'm kinda gettng kicked off the computer. I know it's really sad but this will have a happy ending. Just behr with me*wink*.

Lyns*angel**tongue*
posted on 18-Mar-2002 6:07:54 PM by Jasonsgurl310
I know I'm absolutely horrible. I'm sorry about not posting any new parts. I'm gonna go reread my work and then post. I'm sorry guys. My house has been a war zone. I'll go work on Part 8. Thanks for being patient.

Lyns
P.S. I'm really really sorry, but don't worry I am still alive*angel*.
posted on 26-Mar-2002 3:44:48 PM by Jasonsgurl310
Author's Note: I know I'm horrible. I hang my head in shame. This part has taken the longest time. This is try two to work. As Roseblossom told you I had part 8 written then my computer shut down entirely. Part 8 was lost. Then, I got sick. So, this is try two and hopefully my computer won't shut down.Crosses fingers.

Special Note to Clueless: You have been the one reader that has stuck with this ridiculous story and actually waited through my long breaks between parts. I'm really sorry I'm so bad at updating. Thank you for reading. If it hadn't been for you I probably would have quit after part 3 *happy*. So, thank you. If nothing else I will finish this story for you*happy*. Am I forgiven?*big*
PS: I appreciate everyone who actually reads this story. Everyone's feedbacks means so much to me. You have no idea how encouraging it is.

Now for the long awaited part 8...

Part 8

Maria laid on her bed. Michael had finally fallen asleep again. He had woken up about three times since she had gotten him to lay down. This time he wasn't tossing and turning. Hopefully dreams had claimed him. She turned to face him. She had always wanted to wake up in the middle of the night and find Michael asleep next to her, but the death of Max was not how she wanted to get here. The death of Max...death... She shut her eyes hard and thought of the summer they had spent together. They had grown close. He was her girlfriend. No, they hadn't grown as close as he was with Michael, Isabel and certainly not Liz, but he was still her friend and now he was gone. A single tear escaped her eyelashes. She breathed in a deep breath and tried to compose herself. She couldn't break down. What if her bad vibes seeped into Michael's dreams.

She got up and walked into her bathroom and shut the door. She wanted to be strong for Michael and Liz, but she couldn't be strong all the time. She fell to the side of the tub and laid her head on her knees. She let her tears over come her. She didn't hear the door open. Her tears subsided for a moment when she felt arms wrap around her.

"Michael, you should be asleep. I'm sorry I woke you, but you need to go back-"

He looked into her eyes and she saw the glistening in his own eyes that threatened to escape. He sat down on the floor in front of her. He didn't say anytihng at first. They just sat there.

Finally, he broke the silence," I was lying there sleeping. Actually, dreaming. I was in thord grade again. Isabel was playing with Max on the playground. Max wasn't paying Isabel alot of attention. He was staring at Liz. Some things never changed." he smiled at his own remark," Liz was on the other side of the playground stealing glances at Max. Then, there was you. You were wearing those red sneakers. You had your hair in these cute little little pigtails. You were playing some stupid hand game with Liz. I was watching you from behind a tree. You didn't see me at first. Max called out my name. I turned around to see him, but he was gone. I turned around to look for you and then you were gone. I started screaming for the two of you, but no one seemed to notice. Then, Liz and Isabel disapeared. I started to run. I screamed for you. Then, I woke up. I turned to your side of the bed and you were gone. I heard you crying. So, I came in here. Maria, you said that you wanted to take care of me. I know you want to be strong, but we're forgetting that he wasn't just my friend. He was yours too. So, don't hide from me Maria. You said you wanted us to take care of each other and yet you won't let me see your tears. You have no idea what I thought when I woke up and you weren't there. I can't even think of loosing you too. I love you."

Maria blinked back more tears. She sat there in shock. He brought his thumb up to her cheek and wipe the lonely tear that ran down it.

"I love you too," she whispered, "we'll get through this." He brought her to him and kissed her lightly. They broke apart and they led each other back to bed.

***

Liz stood completely still, "Hello?" No one answered.

"Hello?" She started to turn around. She let out a quick scream," Tess! You scared the crap out of me! Why didn't you say something?"

"Liz, what are you doing here? It could be dangerous." she replied, ignoring her question.

"I don't care."

"Liz, Max died in a car accident. It's alot to take in I understand. But, you walking around in the middle of the night is not going to help matters. What if someone had seen you? What if it wasn't me that had found you?"

"I don't care." she said matter-of-factly.

"Like hell you care! You just can't accept the truth. Max died in an accident. It will be in black and white in the morning. I'm sorry, but the group can't afford you getting hurt too. Now, could we please just go home?"

Liz let out a heavy sigh," Fine."

***

Max let out a raspy breath. He had spent his last drop of energy trying to reach Liz, but he couldn't. He shut his eyes and drifted off to sleep. Before darkness had claimed him he heard the door of his cell open. He was too tired to care. Whoever had come in sat down next to him.

"She's very beautiful." Kylia stated. Max opened his eyes. He instinantly regretted it. Her eyes were locked with his. They still weren't cold and deadly as Khivar's. They were almost trusting and in this certain situation that scared him the most.

"Who?" he asked playing dumb.

"The girl you spend hours crying out for in your mind. I checked up on her. She's beautiful and very strong. She doesn't believe your dead."

"Dead? What do you mean dead?"

"Ummm, yeah. Do you honestly think my brother would let your followers actually hold onto the idea you were alive. After everything you've done, you don't een deserve someone like her."

"Stay away from her. Touch her and I'll kill you." he threatened. He was standing up now and had his fist wrapped around her collar.

She closed her eyes and send a jolt through Max's head and he instinantly fell against the wall. "Now see my king, you've already done that once before and that obviously didn't work. I'm still here and appartanly stronger than you are! You hurt me once. It's a wonder I've haven't returned the same pain."

She left him there. He finally sat up. What was she talking about? Has she hurt Liz?

He closed his eyes one more time and reached out once again to Liz.

***

Liz sat on her balcony. There were white roses sprinkled everywhere. Wherever a rose petal didn't touch there was a vanilla candle glowing. Music played softly in the background. A blow of chocolate covered strawberrys were next to her chair. She heard someone climb up her ladder.

"You like my little surprise?" Max asked with a smile. She smiled back and met his lips before he was fully on her balcony.

"It's wonderful. Thank you." She kissed him again. They made their way to her lawn chair and never once broke apart.

"Excuse me." Liz and dream Max broke apart. Liz looked up and did a double take. She looked at the man on top of her, Max. Then, she looked at the man standing, another Max. Suddenly, the one on top of her disappeared.

"What's going on?" she eyed him skeptically.

"Liz, it's me, Max. I'm really here. I'm alive."

"No, you're a dream! Don't say you're alive." Tears ran down her cheeks. She wanted to believe him, but it seemed too easy.

"Liz, please believe me. I'm really alive. I swear to you I am. Liz, they made you all think I'm really dead so you wouldn't want to come find me. Liz, believe me."

He knelt down in front of her and cupped her cheek, "Liz, you have no idea how good you feel to me. Liz, I love you. How could you believe I'd leave you. You're everything to me. Don't you know that by now? Don't you know how much you mean to me. How you being in my life is the only reason I'm still breathing. Liz, I'm nothing without you." He slowly graced her lips. She shivered slightly as the electricty ran through them. He deepened their kiss as a flood of images roared between them.

Their first kiss. The night the went to look at stars. Khivar. The accident. The dead body. The beatings. Khivar and Kylia.

Liz broke apart and fell into his arms,"Max. It's you. You're alive."

"Listen to me Liz, I don't have much time. Tell Michael and Isabel what you know. I don't know much more than you do. I love you Liz." He started to fade.

"No! Max don't!" She tried in vain to keep ahold of him but he slowly disappeared, "I love you, Max."

Liz shot straight up in bed,"MAX!"
***


*Ring*

*Ring*

Maria groped for the phone. "Hello?"

"Maria? Is Michael there? Put him on the phone!" Liz cried into the phone.

"Liz? Do you know what time-"

"MARIA! Put Michael on the phone now!" Maria stared at the phone in shock. Michael sat propped on his elbows and yawned, "Who is it?"

"It's Liz. She wants to talk to you." she said as she handed him the phone.

"Hello?"

"Michael, he's alive. Max, he's alive!"

***

TBC

Okay, I'm a crumby updater, but I tried to make this part long to make up for it. So, it's a little different from my original part8, but I like this one better. So, I hope you like it. Part 9 is gonna have to wait till I get back from Daytona. Sorry about that, but I'll try to work on it before I leave.

Lyns*angel*
posted on 26-Mar-2002 3:57:42 PM by Jasonsgurl310
*bounce*Claire!*bounce* Hey girl! Are you having trouble getting onto FF? I am. That's why I haven't pmed you lately. I'm glad you liked the fanfiction. How did you find it? I know I told I was writing, but I didn't tell you what or where I was posting. Oh well*happy*. Glad you like it.

Hope you all liked part8.
posted on 31-Mar-2002 10:16:05 PM by Jasonsgurl310
Hey people! I'm back! The beach was absolutely beautiful.

Part 9

"Liz, stop! We've all been through alot today. You need to go to sleep. Give this all -"

"Michael! Shut up and listen to me! I'm coming over. I'll explain when I get there." *Click*

Michael stared at the phone. She's crazy! Maria stared at him in confusion.

"What did she say?" Maria asked. He didn't say anything for a moment.

"She's gonna be here in a few minutes."

"Why?"

"It's Max. She says he's alive."

Michael jumped out of bed and put on his shirt. Maria pulled on a sweatshirt. She was so happy her mother wasn't home.

They jumped out of their skin when liz knocked on Maria's window.

"Liz! It's the middle of the night!" Maria lectured. Lz ignored her and climbed through the window. She brushed herself off and stared at both of them.

"I understand neither of you are going to believe me. I know you think I'm just crazy and it's grief or something, but you need to listen to me. You know how Isabel can go into people's dreams? You all can do it! Max did it to me. He came into my dream tonight. "
"He told me that we were led to believe that he was dead. He's really alive. He's being held somewhere. I saw everything. I saw this girl and this man. They had been torturing him. the girl was about Maria's height. Emerald eyes, with auburn hair. The man was Khivar I think."

Maria couldn't believe her. It was too much. Khivar...torture...a girl...Max, alive... She hugged her. Tightly she clung to her. "Liz it's okay. It's okay." Liz pushed away from her.

"Don't patronize me, Maria. I'm a big girl and I know real from fantasy. Max is alive! Do you understand me!" She turned away from Maria, but Maria grabbed her arm. She gasped and almost fell away as images assaulted her mind.

Liz's dream. Max coming to her. Their connection. Liz clinging to Max as he disappeared.

She fell back onto her bed. "What the...How did you do that!?!?!"

Michael stared in shock. They looked as though they had been locked into a connection,"What happened?"

"She connected with me..." Maria whispered.

***

Okay I know it's short, but I'm getting kicked off of my computer. I'll try to post tomorrow.

Happy Easter!

Lyns