posted on 2-Mar-2002 2:31:28 AM by care bears
Title: Screaming Inside

Rating: R-NC17

CategoryM/L

Disclaimer: I don't own anything, all of the Roswell characters belong to Jason Katims.

Author note: This story really doesn't follow any of the plot line of the show and there are no alien related things. This involves rape, so if this subject offends you I would recommend you do not read this. But the story's main idea is not about rape and I do not go into great detail about it.

Summary: Liz's little brother, Sam, dies one night after being sick for years. After that Liz's parents no longer want her, so they ship her off to a mental hospital. Where Liz meets another patient there, Max.



Part One


The room was dark. All of the walls were padded. The bed was cold, and I lay there thinking why? I'm not crazy, I did nothing wrong. It wasn't my fault Sam died. I did everything I could, and yet I was still here.

"Please," I screamed. "Please let me out of here." But no one came or answered my plea. Liz fell asleep that night crying for someone just to let her go home.

In the morning I meet my therapist.

"Hello Elizabeth," Doctor Green calmly said to me.

"Don't call me that it is Liz." I said back.

"So are you ready to talk about what happened." He replied back to me.

"Fuck off. It is none of your business. You really don't care as long as my parents give you your money. So when are you planning to release me? When the media forgets about his death? So I can just blend in with the crowd?"

Doctor Green touched me on my leg. I guess it was his way of trying to calm me down. To bad for him, I guess no one ever told him I don't liked to be touched. But he learned his lesson now. His finger tasted bad. He need some lotion or something.

After I bit him I was sent to the black room. A room where they keep all of the "bad" kids. Not that I mined it at all. I got to be by myself or so I thought.

When I first was placed in the black room I started to scream again but was quickly stopped by the other voice in the room.

"You can stop now they really don't care. In fact if you keep it up they will just keep you in here longer." The boy told me.

The black room is kept dark. I could not see his face. I could only see the outline of his body from the dim light in the ceiling.

"Who are you," I asked. "Why do you know so much about this place."

"My name is Max. I know so much because I have been here for almost two years. And as for this place it should not even be considered a place it should be consider hell. What is your name, and why are you here?" Max asked me back.

Now it was my turn to answer. I could not really tell if I liked Max or not. But I thought that if I was going to be here for a while I mint as well try to be friendly.

"My name is Liz. I am here because I bit that son of a bitches finger after he tried to calm me down." I told him.

"Liz that is not what I meant. I mean why are you in here. Why are you visiting the hell most people call Cider Springs?"

"I am here because my parents don't want me, they never had. And ... and ... after Sam died it was the perfect reason to get rid of me. Sam was the only one they wanted. But since we were twins they had to have us both."

"How did Sam die?" Max sadly asked me.

"Well, when we were first thirteen he was told he just cancer. I think that Sam knew that he was never going to beat the cancer. So he never tried to do the treatments. He just tried to stay strong for me. Sam died two weeks after we both turned sixteen. He lived longer then the doctors ever thought he would."

"Liz I sorry you had to go through that," Max told me.

"Stop it Max. Stop it right now. I don't need nor want you pity. I wish I would have never told you. I wish that I was never brought here, and that Sam never died and that..."

After that I could not handle it anymore. I had finally broke down into tears. It was the first time I had cried in a long time. I sank down into the far corner of the room away from Max. But that did not stop Max he just came to me and held me as I cried.

"You will be okay," Max whispered to me over and over again.

Feedback please. I will try to write more soon. If you have any questions just ask.


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posted on 2-Mar-2002 12:00:52 PM by care bears

Title: Screaming Inside

Rating: R-NC17

CategoryM/L

Disclaimer: I don't own anything, all of the Roswell characters belong to Jason Katims.

Author note: This story really doesn't follow any of the plot line of the show and there are no alien related things. This involves rape, so if this subject offends you I would recommend you do not read this. But the story's main idea is not about rape and I do not go into great detail about it.

Summary: Liz's little brother, Sam, dies one night after being sick for years. After that Liz's parents no longer want her, so they ship her off to a mental hospital. Where Liz meets another patient there, Max.


Part Two

I seemed like I cried for hours. I could not help myself. The more I tried to stop the harder I cried.

"Max," I whispered. When I finally got myself under control.

"Yes," he replied back to me.

"Why does life have to be fuck up. Why couldn't I be born to parents who loved me? Why couldn't I just die instead of Sam?" Liz asked him.

"Liz I don't want too hear you talk about that kind of stuff. Things happen, things that maybe should not do. Sam had to get sick, he had to die for you to live. I sorry your life had to be painful. I wish I could take away all of the pain but I can't. I just can't." Max told her.

They both sat there for a couple more minutes before the door open. Standing there looking at them was a very muscular man, in a white scrub suit. With him he pushed a cart.

"Mr. Evan, and Miss. Parker time for your medicine," he told them.

"Fuck off I not taking anything. I don't want my body full of drugs." And with that Liz got up from Max's arms and flung her self at the man. She got in two punches before the man grabbed her.

Liz was in shock as the man pushed her body against the wall. He forced her mouth open with his finger. Liz of coarse bit down on them as hard as she could.

"I hear we have I biting problem Mss. Parker." The man told Liz as he slapped her across the face.

Liz was in so much pain she release her mouth from his finger, and tried to move away from him.

The man went back to the cart and pulled up a cup with Liz's name on it. He walked back over to her. Push her back against the wall and press his body up against her.

Liz could feel him hardening as she tried to get away again. But the man was bigger so Liz stood no chance. He force her mouth open again and pored the liquid in it. Liz just spits it right back at him. His uniform now has yellow all over it.

"We told you ten times the bathroom is down the hall and to the right. I sure Doctor Green would love to know you peed and pants." Liz told the man.

"Shut up," and with that the man slapped her again. "I can do whatever I want to you. You need to remember that. I will be back again tomorrow and we will see how it goes then." With that the man left the room.

Max just looked over to where Liz was standing.

"What were you trying to do. Ian will snap you in half. You will only make it worse on your self. I can't help you. When I first came here I was just like you. And you know what Ian did to me?" Max asked Liz.

"No, I don't." Liz told him back.

"He raped me. And every time I tried to fight him back he hit me somemore. I can't go through that again I just can't. There are other ways to get him without him knowing you just have to be careful." Max replied back to her.

The lights came on and Liz could suddenly see Max's face. It was beautiful. On the bottom of his lip he had a little piercing. Liz found her self wondering what it would be just to touch and kiss it.

Max now could finally see the girl he had been holding. She was beautiful even with the slap marks now reddening on her face.

"God Liz I so sorry I should have said the hell with it and came to help you." Max told Liz.

"Next time. It is okay I understand." With that Liz walk over to Max and sat down by him again.

"Can you just hold me now? Just hold me until the pain goes away?" Liz asked Max.

"Always," Max responded.


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posted on 2-Mar-2002 9:49:34 PM by care bears

Title: Screaming Inside

Rating: R-NC17

CategoryM/L

Disclaimer: I don't own anything, all of the Roswell characters belong to Jason Katims.

Author note: This story really doesn't follow any of the plot line of the show and there are no alien related things. This involves rape, so if this subject offends you I would recommend you do not read this. But the story's main idea is not about rape and I do not go into great detail about it.

Summary: Liz's little brother, Sam, dies one night after being sick for years. After that Liz's parents no longer want her, so they ship her off to a mental hospital. Where Liz meets another patient there, Max.


Part 3

Liz fell slept on Max for two hours. Max could not take his eyes off of her. He knew that they would soon come to take them back to there rooms. So he just soaked in all of her beauty.

Liz woke up to see Max looking down at her. This all feels so right she thought to herself. Liz finally did something she wanted to do since she had first seemed Max's face. She sat up and brought her lips to his. It was not a hard kiss, it was gentle and testing. Liz felt sparks go all the way through her body.

Finally the kiss had to be broken. Max moaned at the loss of Liz's lips from his. He let Liz catch her breath and then brought his lips back down on hers again. This kiss was ruff. Liz sucked on the Max's bottom lip. Tasting the mental from his lip piercing. Liz loved that taste and need more.

Max licked the outside of Liz's lips asking, begging for entrance with his tongue which she gladly gave. Max sucked her tongue into his mouth. Then quickly pulled them a part.

"Liz we can't do this. Once they see us like this it will all be over and I will never see you again." Max told Liz.

"They can't take you away from me I just found you. I think that I am falling in love with you." Liz told Max.

Max quickly took off his necklace. Liz wondered why she had never noticed it before. It was a beautiful cross outlined be purple stones. He placed it over her head and onto her neck. Then kissed the crown of her head.

"Here I want you to have this. So even if we don't see each other for a long time you will remember me. I know it is not much but it is all I have left." Max told Liz.

Now Liz had two necklaces on. One was the one Max had just given her and the other one was from Sam. She took it off. Liz held it for a minute but decided it was still missing something. Liz looked down at her fingers and saw she had two rings on Sam had also given her for her birthday. She took one of the rings off and place in on the necklace. Then she took the necklace and placed it around Max's neck. Mimicking what he did she placed a kiss on the top of his head.

"Here I want you to have this. It was one of the last things Sam gave me before he died. Now a little part of him can watch over you as well. Whatever happens I will never forget you and hope you will never forget me." Liz told Max.

Liz hugged Max fiercely. Not wanting to let him go. But she knew that there time together was almost up. She did not know what was to happen next to her but at least she had been loved.

"Liz I will find away to see you. I will find away even if it means having to come here every single day. I will find away."

"Max I know you will."

They kissed one more time then pulled apart when they saw the door starting to open. Two men came into the room. One took Max and the other took Liz.

Liz was taken to her room. She was slapped down to the bed and the yellow substance she had spit out early that day was injected into her arm.

"Please don't do this. Please stop it I promise I will be good. Please don't drug me. Stop it," Liz screamed.

Liz thrashed around all over the bed. Her wrists were cut open from her pulling so hard. Her legs had bruises from hitting the mental rods connecting the bed. Liz was sweating uncontrollably. The man had no other choice but to inject her with something else to calm her down. After five minutes Liz seemed to calm down a little bit. The drugs were taking it toll on Liz's body.

"Sam," she screamed. "Sam please help me. You promised to watch over me you promised. Why, why would you let them do this to me." That night Liz cried her self to sleep. Hoping that this was all just a bad dream.

Max had it worse then Liz. He knew what would happen to him. When they finally got him to his room Ian was waiting there. The man pick him up and strapped him to his bed. Then left knowing the Ian would need time alone with the boy.

Ian walked slowly over to where the bed was. Ian stared at Max for a couple of minutes and then started to beat him. First it was just slapping Max across the face. But then it became punching and biting.

Max bite his lip pulling the little mental ball on the left hand side of his lip into his mouth. He tried not to think of the pain but it was just to much and finally he cried out in pain.

"You let the little bitch bite me and spit on me now you will pay for her and than tomorrow she will get what is coming to her." Ian told Max.

He finally untied Max. Knowing he could not move from the pain he had just infected on the boy. He pulled down Max's pants. That is when Max blacked out. He knew what Ian was going to do to him but he could not stand it. Max just went into his own little world. Praying all of his pain would be over soon.

Once Ian was done with Max he pulled the younger boys boxers and pants up with one quick motion. Tied him back down to his bed and walk away laughing. Then the same man that had carry Max into the room injected medicine into his arm and left.

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posted on 2-Mar-2002 10:17:42 PM by care bears
Author's Note~

This is just a quick note for all of you guys who read the story and gave me some feedback. Thanks a lot I enjoyed reading all of it.

woodwinds- thanks for all of your support. Thanks for reading all of the new parts. I hope you the one I added.*tongue**wink**happy**big*

applebybehr- I enjoyed reading you feedback and am glad you are hooked. I don't know yet if I am going to include the other characters of Roswell yet. There will be a lot of pay back.*big**big**big*

soppysophs- thanks for your wonder feedback. I loved seeing everything jump around.*wink**big*

Lucky Star- I think the doctor is stupid too. But it should be funny with some of the things Liz is going to do to him. Thanks again for writing.*tongue**big*

roswellluver- it is sad that Liz's parents don't want her but thing should be looking up soon. I am glad that you think the story. Thanks for your feedback.*wink**wink*

roswell_chick101- thanks for you feedback. I hope after reading the next couple of parts we still think it is great.*tongue**tongue**big*


Kim_56Emotion- I really like seeing the smile face. That was cool.*big**happy**big*

LegalAlien- trust me Liz and Max will help each other get out of there. Thanks for the feedback.*big**big*

SweetCherryKat- Max is so going to get Ian back for every thing.*big* He also will take Liz's pain a way a couple of time. LOL.*happy**tongue*

Transparent Clear- I will make sure to tell you what Max is in there for later. Right now I really don't have anything in mind but I will be sure to think something up.*tongue*

aZNroSweLl anglgrl- Thanks for your feedback.*wink*

LiLEvEe- I can't really think of what Max is in there for but I will and will try to post something about that soon. Thanks for your feedback.*big*

DreamingOfMax84- I am so sorry but it has to get a little sadder.*sad* But I will try to put more funny and happy part in there just for you.*happy* LOL Thanks for your feedback.*happy*

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posted on 3-Mar-2002 2:32:10 PM by care bears
Title: Screaming Inside

Rating: R-NC17

CategoryM/L

Disclaimer: I don't own anything, all of the Roswell characters belong to Jason Katims.

Author note: This story really doesn't follow any of the plot line of the show and there are no alien related things. This involves rape, so if this subject offends you I would recommend you do not read this. But the story's main idea is not about rape and I do not go into great detail about it.

Summary: Liz's little brother, Sam, dies one night after being sick for years. After that Liz's parents no longer want her, so they ship her off to a mental hospital. Where Liz meets another patient there, Max.


Part 4

Liz woke up the next morning with pain every where in her body. Her face was now puffy and red where Ian had slapped her the day before. Her wrist had bandages on them, but Liz could still see the dark blood that had dried on them. Most of all her legs hurt the most.

Liz remembered that when she had fallen a sleep she was tied up but now she was free. Liz sat up in her bed. Suddenly the door open and a man she had never seem before came into her room.

"It is time to take you medicine Miss. Parker. Please lets not try to cause any trouble today." He pull out a cup and walk over to Liz who was still sitting on her bed. The man stopped right in front of her and handed Liz the cup.

Liz kneed the man in the groin, and dumped the medicine on him.

"I told you I don't want to be drugged. So will you stop trying to do it." Liz replied to the man.

The man still hunch over stood back up push Liz back down on the bed. He then quickly tied her back up. Liz did not like this one bit so she spit in his face.

"Miss. Parker I told you I did not want have to do this the hard way but you have given me no choice. Now I will have to call Ian to give you the medicine."

"No please don't call Ian not Ian." Liz screamed at the man.

"I am sorry it is to late, maybe next time you will learn your lesson," with that the man quickly walked off. Five minutes later Ian walked in. Ian had a smirk on his face.

"Mark, told me you would not take the medicine. He said that I needed to use a little force with you."

Ian laid on top of Liz and started to kiss her. Liz moved her head around and tried to jerk her body but it only made things worse for her. Liz could now feel the newly formed erection coming from Ian. When she finally got her mouth away from Ian's she open it to scream. Ian only took it as an invitation and stuck his tongue down her throat. Liz bit down on his tongue and he quickly removed it.

Ian removed the needle from is pocket and injected the medicine into Liz. Then he started to rub her breasts from the top of her shirt.

"No," Liz finally screamed. But Ian only stuck his hand under her shirt and pinched her nipples from the top of her bra. Liz jerked around more trying ever harder to get Ian away from her. But it was no use he keep pinching.He finally stopped when it was time to see Doctor Green.

"Time to go Liz you have an appointment with the doctor and I would not want you to be late."

Ian stood up and then pulled Liz up as well.

"I trust you can find his office alone? All you do it take a left go down the girls wing, than go right down the boys wing. Past the adults center take one more left and the doctor's office it right there. Did you think you can handle that you little bitch?" Ian asked her.

"Yes, I can." Liz replied coldly back.

Liz found her way to the office just fine. Her sat on the bench outside of his office for a couple of minutes before he finally opened the door and told her to come it.

"First of all Liz we need to move you and a couple other patients in to the adult wing. Since you are planning on make a long term stay, we would like to keep the rooms on the girls side open. Secondly I see you meet Ian. I hope we will not have problems like we had happen yesterday."

Before the doctor could go on anymore Liz cut him off.

"Your a sick son of a bitch, do you know that? I hope you die and rot in hell for everything you have done." Liz said.

"Liz I think it is time you take more medicine." Doctor Green told her.

He got up from his desk. Pulled a needle out of his pocket and started to go toward Liz. Liz would not have that, so she meet the doctor half way. Liz quickly grabbed the needle out of his hand and stabbed in into him.

"You little bitch." Docter Green picked up the phone called someone and there was a knock on the door in less than a minute.

"Mr. Green is something wrong." Ian asked the older man.

"She stabbed me with the new medicine. Take her away to her new room. If another one of the long term patients causes you trouble put them in there with her." Doctor Green told Ian.

Ian grabbed Liz and took her to her new room. He locked the door and went off to find Max.

Max woke up to see Ian above him. His body was sore.

"Max it is time we moved you to where we keep the long term patients. It seems you have a roommate." Ian told Max.

Then Ian pull another needle out of his pocket and gave Max more medicine.

"But first Max it is time we have a little fun."

"No, Ian please don't do this. Please don't do this." Max pleaded with Ian.

Ian bent down and gave Max a kiss on the lips.

"Your right Max this is wrong. I would not want to do this now but tonight is a whole different story. I should have fun with you and your little roommate." Ian told Max.

Ian picked Max up strapped him to the wheel chair he had brought with him and took him to his new room.


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posted on 3-Mar-2002 11:11:24 PM by care bears
Title: Screaming Inside

Rating: R-NC17

CategoryM/L

Disclaimer: I don't own anything, all of the Roswell characters belong to Jason Katims.

Author note: This story really doesn't follow any of the plot line of the show and there are no alien related things. This involves rape, so if this subject offends you I would recommend you do not read this. But the story's main idea is not about rape and I do not go into great detail about it.

Summary: Liz's little brother, Sam, dies one night after being sick for years. After that Liz's parents no longer want her, so they ship her off to a mental hospital. Where Liz meets another patient there, Max.



Part Five
Ian took Max to his new room. Max soon found out that is next roommate was Jim. Another one of a patients there. Jim gave Max an evil grin as he entered the room, Ian pushing him. Ian parked the wheel chair for a second.

"I just wanted to introduce you to the people who will be close by you. I would never let you be Jim roommate. He would tear you apart and I would not want that." Ian whispered into Max's ear. After that he wheeled Max out of the room.

Liz was putting away her things when the door opened. Ian walked in. Liz could see a figure just outside the door way but did not recognize the person.

"Well, Miss. Parker it looks like you have a new roommate." Ian told Liz,

"Fuck off, limp dick. Go cream your pants," Liz responded back.

"I should go get him now." Ian told Liz acting like he had never heard her comment.

He came back in with the mysterious figure. Liz was now looking at Max, but she did not act like you recognized him. Inside she just kept putting her closes away. Ian waited until she was completely done. Liz looked over her shoulder and saw that they were both still in the room.

"What did you want me to say something nice. I really don't care who you put in here with me. You might as well fuck off and take the boy with you." Liz told Ian.

Hurt flashed over Max's facial features. But then he recognized what game Liz was playing. Max looked back at Ian, he saw that their was only a cold stair in his eyes.

"God Ian, don't put me with her. Her butt is to big. Her breast are not large enough, she is to short, and her nose is to big. I will never be allowed to have any fun with this girl. Couldn't you put me with someone else, well, I really don't know how to say this a little less prude."

Ian looked at Max and saw the decsuted in his eyes. God they will be the prefect match up. They should tear each other apart. I can't wait this should make my job a whole lot easier. Ian untied Max. After Max was untied he just sat in the wheel chair and watched Liz.

"Prude, no you are so wrong. But I do think that your Mama was. Your mama was so prude that the only time she ever had sex was when she conceived you. After that she knew it was a mistake. In fact your mama did not even hugged you when you were growing up." Liz yelled over at Max.

Even though Max knew it was a game that comment was just to much for him. He quickly got up from the wheel chair walked over to Liz and slapped her. Liz was in shock. Never in her life did she believe that Max would hit her. She just looked at him with a coldness in her eyes.

"Never ever talk about my mother again. Do you hear me? Never." Max screamed at her.

Ian stood there watching this with an evil grin on his face. Yes, he thought to himself this should be to easy. Now Ian was sure that they were going to kill each other.

"Now, now kiddies play nice. Max I will be back later with your times." Ian told Max.


After that Ian left. On his way out he closed the door and locked it. Now the only to people left in the room were Max and Liz. Liz broke out in to tears and ran to her bed. She jumped on her bed and covered her head with her fairy pillow, then Liz sobbed quietly. Max went over to where Liz was laying.

"I sorry Liz, I did mean to hurt you. I just don't know what came over me. You see the reason I am here is because I have no one left. My dad left when I was little. A couple of days before I turned fifth teen my mom killed herself." Max quietly told Liz.

Then Max went over to his bed and laid down on it. He started to cry so well. Liz could not take it any more. After five minutes she finally went over to Max. Max was laying on his side facing the other side of the room so he had no idea when Liz got up and walked over to him.

She laid down on the bed with Max and snuggled up close against him from behind. Liz rocked Max slowly and stroked his hair. Max still sobbed on so Liz held him tighter.

"Max it is OK. I forgive you. Even thing will be OK. We will both get out of this. Please Max don't cry I promise it will all be okay." Liz whispered to Max.

Max finally stopped crying and rolled over to face Liz. Liz bit her lip and looked at his tear streaked face. Max leaned in and started to kiss Liz. Liz sucked on the ring in Max's bottom lip. They finally broke but only for a couple of seconds before Max deepened the kiss.

*bounce* Author Note *bounce*

Sorry this is the last part of a couple of days. *sad* I hope it will get you through until Wednesday until I can post more. The next part I post will be very long to make up for the days I cannot post. Most of you know how it is school takes up a lot of time. *big*

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posted on 6-Mar-2002 10:30:12 PM by care bears
Sorry you guys will have to wait longer. *sad* Someone died at the school and I knew them so I can't post right now, let alone thing of more stuff to put in the story. I promise I will post again before the week is over. I think that I will shoot for Friday or Saturday, so check back soon. I really am sorry that is all for now bye.
posted on 9-Mar-2002 12:46:56 AM by care bears
Thanks for all of the time, and thanks you all for caring it really means a lot. I think I have finally found the closure I needed. Now here is the new part I promised on Wednesday.

Title: Screaming Inside

Rating: R-NC17

CategoryM/L

Disclaimer: I don't own anything, all of the Roswell characters belong to Jason Katims.

Author note: This story really doesn't follow any of the plot line of the show and there are no alien related things. This involves rape, so if this subject offends you I would recommend you do not read this. But the story's main idea is not about rape and I do not go into great detail about it.

Summary: Liz's little brother, Sam, dies one night after being sick for years. After that Liz's parents no longer want her, so they ship her off to a mental hospital. Where Liz meets another patient there, Max.

Part 6 (NC-17)

"Oh God Max," Liz moaned when they finally broke the kiss.

Liz climbed on top of Max and straddled him. She placed her hands at the hem of her shirt and pulled it over her head. Max could feel himself growing as he looked at her. Liz had on a white lacy bra, but not for long.

As Liz saw Max starring at her with his mouth open she also felt him harden. Liz was starting to feel her self becoming wet and deiced to step it up a notch. She pulled her hands around her back and unclasped the bra.

Max did not want to take it that fast so moving slowly, he put his lips to the skin of Liz's breasts. Ever so gently Max moved my lips over them. Slowly letting Liz become used to the feel of his mouth on her breast. Liz's nipples were becoming hard, and she shuddered softly as Max's hand traced a path down her side and onto the satin skin of her thigh.

"Max we have to many closes on, we need to do something about that." Liz told Max in a husky voice.

Max sat up a little bit and Liz tugged at his shirt, pulling it over his head. She pushed her nipples against his and felt his nipples harden against hers. Max moaned loudly, then with a quick moment pulled off Liz's jeans and her matching white lacy panties. Max watched Liz blush as he watched her naked form. Liz did not want to be the only one naked and so she helped Max take off his jeans leaving him only in boxers.

Max flipped Liz under him and slipped his hand down and over the dark curls at the junction of her thighs.Then he put his lips to her face. Max carefully placed soft kisses over her closed eyelids.

"Liz, do you want me to stop? I don't want to hurt you."

Liz's arms wrapped around him and pulled his body down onto hers again.

"No, don't stop. Please," she whispered. "This is wonderful, your not hurting me. Please...."

Max smiled as her voice trailed off.

"Okay. Just tell me if I am hurting you. I'd never want hurt you."

Max slowly slid his hand down between Liz's legs and gently slid a finger between her delicate folds. She shuddered and pushed against him. "Shush," he murmured as he kissed her. "All in good time." Max whispered in Liz's ear and then began to suck on her delicate lope.

Long moments passed as he gently stroked her sensitive core. Max was concentrating so much on the feel of her body moving against his that he was momentarily surprised when he felt Liz's hands push at my boxers. Lifting his weight Max helped Liz push them off. Settling back down on the bed Max gasped as Liz took him in her hands. She rolled the top of his dick with her finger and studied it for a few moments

"Oh god my love," Max breathed.

"Max, please...I want..." Liz panted breathlessly.

"Liz tell me, tell me what you want." Max panted back to her.

"I want my first time to be with you Max. I wanted you to make love to me and to never stop. I want to feel like this forever." Liz finally responded

That was all Max need he moved his body over hers again. Then slowly lowered himself until they touched skin to skin, heat to heat, core to core. With one slow push Max felt himself slide he stopped when he reached Liz's barrier. Max held still, allowing Liz to get used to the feel of him.

"I love you," Max said.

He placed small kisses down on her face, slowly moving to the base of her neck. He sucked hard and Liz let out a loud moan of her own. He kept sucking until Liz finally made little bucking movements showing that she was ready.

Liz finally opened her eyes and smiled up at Max. "Show me Max. Show me how much you love me." Liz said as she slid her arms up his back and pulled him against her. Smiling, Max began to move slowly, enjoying the feel of Liz wrapped around me so tightly.

After what seemed like an eternity, Max could hear Liz's breathing quicken and feel her muscles tightening around him. He gasped and quickened the rhythm of his movements, slapping sound filled the room. Liz leaned up and sucked on Max's lip stud, she laid back down pulling Max fiercely down with her. Liz soon shuddered in climax against Max and he soon followed.

In the next few moments that followed Max just laid against Liz, loving the feeling that ran through his blood. In fact they were silent for several minutes, enjoying the new intimacy between them. Rolling onto his back, he pulled out of Liz. Liz did not like that at all and gave out a small cry. Max pulled Liz on top of him and let her lay on his chest. He wrapped his arms around her.

"I love you," Max repeated.

Liz smiled and ran her hand down the side Max's chest.

"Never let Ian touch me again."

"I promise I won't ever let him lay one finger on you. I will protect you with my life." Max could feel Liz relaxing against him and he kissed her forehead.

"Go to sleep now." He told her.

"Hold me?" Liz asked him.

"I'll never let go," Max promised.

"Never leave me?" Liz asked.

"Never not in a thousand years" Max replied back in a truthful voice.

Max started to hum a lullaby his mother had once sang to him. He could finally tell when Liz fell asleep. Max watch Liz sleep until he finally fell a sleep as well.


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posted on 19-Mar-2002 7:33:03 PM by care bears
Title: Screaming Inside

Rating: R-NC17

CategoryM/L

Disclaimer: I don't own anything, all of the Roswell characters belong to Jason Katims.

Author note: This story really doesn't follow any of the plot line of the show and there are no alien related things. This involves rape, so if this subject offends you I would recommend you do not read this. But the story's main idea is not about rape and I do not go into great detail about it.

Summary: Liz's little brother, Sam, dies one night after being sick for years. After that Liz's parents no longer want her, so they ship her off to a mental hospital. Where Liz meets another patient there, Max.

Part 7

Max woke up three hours later. He looked over at the clock and saw it was 4:30. Oh shit Max thought to himself. He had to be picked up in 45 minutes to go see his therapist. If he and Liz did not get up right away Ian would find them like this and they would both be in more trouble then they could handle.

"Liz we have to get up," Max whispered quietly in her ear.

"Come on Liz wake up. Please princess, please wake up." Max whispered a little more louder this time. He also shook her gently.

"Liz if you get up I will make it worth your while tonight." Max told Liz. Liz open her eyes up a little bit, and started to rub the sleepy dirt out of them

"What happens if I don't get up then what will you do to me?" Liz asked Max.

"Just know if you don't up get now whatever I do you will not like at all." Max told her with an evil grin on his face.

"Your bluffing." Liz said while sitting up. Then took the sheet that was covering them and wrapped it around her body. Liz missed the body heat coming off Max right away. Once Liz was off of him, Max got up and put on his boxers, pants, and shirt.

"Oh come on Max I wanted to see more of that show." Liz told Max.

Max didn't think it was as funny as Liz did. He just seemed to ignore her. So Liz sat on the bed and watched Max's every move. Max started to pick up all of Liz's clothes. After he had them all of walked over to the other side of the bed where Liz was sitting. He placed the items next to her on the bed. Then with one quick moment he pull her up to a standing position. Max unwrapped the sheet from Liz which left her standing naked.

He leaned down and placed his mouth on her left breast. He twirled his tongue around her nipple until her could feel it harden. Then he pull away from her. Liz moaned at the loss of contacted. Max looked over at the clock and saw he still had 20 minutes before Ian came and got him. So he put his mouth on Liz's other nipple. Liz put her hands in Max's hair and started to pull at it. Max broke the contact between him and Liz again. He then pick up her bra and held it up to her.

"Can I trust you to get dressed or do you want me to help you?" Max asked Liz in a husky whisper.

"Max this not fair. You can't just leave me like this." Liz saw that she was getting no where with this.

"Max I want you to help me get dressed." Liz finally deiced.

Liz held out her arms and Max pushed the bra straps on her arm. Then he turned Liz around and hooked the bra. Next Max picked up her under wear. Liz picked up one foot and then the other one. Max slid the under wear back up Liz's legs. Liz could not take it anymore and she started to shake.

"Princess it will be OK just hold on to me. It was wrong of me to tease you, but I want to tell you right now that we can't do anything again for two days. You will be sore tomorrow and if we make love again it will only make it worse." Max quietly told Liz. Liz grabbed on to Max and let him put on her jeans. Lastly she raised her hands over her head and let Max put on her shirt. Max stood looking at her, than suddenly Liz pull Max into a tight hug. They let go of each other just as the door was opening.

"Kiddies I am sorry to tell you that we won't be playing any games tonight. In fact I know will miss me, but we can't have any more fun for a couple of days." Ian told them both. Ian walked over to Liz and grabbed her breast through the shirt she was wearing. Max could not stand the site of this so he walked over and punched Ian in the face.

"Max I don't think that would have been the right move on your part." Ian told Max. After that Ian walked over to Max and grabbed him by the arm pulling him out of the room. Liz could not stand to watch this anymore, so she ran over to Max's bed and laid down on it. After a couple of minutes she started to cry and when Max came back he found her still crying on his bed.

"Liz it is OK. Ian did not hurt me he just took me to my therapist then left. After five hours of spilling my guts I left my therapist room. I thought that Ian was going to bring me back here, but Ian never showed up. So I just walked back. I promise I am fine." Max told her. He then quickly got into the bed with her. Max wrapped his arms around Liz pulling her body close to his. Liz still continued to cry. Max did not know what to did so he started to sing the lullaby his mom had sung to him when he was little to him again. Finally Liz fell a sleep at 2:30 am.

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posted on 24-Mar-2002 1:10:32 PM by care bears
Title: Screaming Inside

Rating: R-NC17

CategoryM/L

Disclaimer: I don't own anything, all of the Roswell characters belong to Jason Katims.

Author note: This story really doesn't follow any of the plot line of the show and there are no alien related things. This involves rape, so if this subject offends you I would recommend you do not read this. But the story's main idea is not about rape and I do not go into great detail about it.

Summary: Liz's little brother, Sam, dies one night after being sick for years. After that Liz's parents no longer want her, so they ship her off to a mental hospital. Where Liz meets another patient there, Max.

Part 8

Max woke up at 8:00 am in the morning. He watched Liz sleep in his arms.

"Oh god," Max thought to himself.

"How am I ever going to tell her. I can't put this off any longer. I just couldn't tell her last night. Somehow Liz is going to find out and it needs to be from me. I guess I am just going to have to tell her this morning."

While Max was thinking to himself he never noticed when Liz woke up. She starred at him for a couple of minutes, loving how it felt in his arms. Finally she decided it was time to let him know that she was up. Liz placed a kiss on Max's lips.

"Hi," Liz said quietly.

"Liz we need to talk," Max said.

Liz could see the look of concern on his face so she decided to let him say what ever he needed to say. Liz could only hope it would not be bad news.

"Liz yesterday when I went to talk to my therapist I found out some good news. It seems I am finally ready to be release. Tomorrow I will be 18 and they can't hold me here anymore." Max told Liz.

"Oh, Max that is great I am really happy for you." Liz said while moving out of his arms.

Max could see she had tears in her eyes but did not know what to say or how to make it better. Liz could not stand to be in the room anymore with Max so she changed her shirt and jeans. Liz then put her hair in a ponytail, after that she put on her Doc Marten. Finally Liz left the room.

Liz had no idea where she was going but she knew she did not want to be in there anymore. She walked up to the medical table where was saw Ian.

"Ian is there any way to get a pass to walk around outside. "

For some strange reason Ian decided to be nice to Liz. He saw the tears in here eyes and knew Max had probably told her that he was leaving.

"Sure Liz I can get you a pass to go outside. Just wait here for a minute." Ian told her.

"Why did I have to ask Ian for help and why is Ian being so nice to me?" Liz thought to herself.

Ian came back a few minutes later and hand her the pass. Just before she was turning around to leave she heard him talking to her.

"Liz this is the only time I am going to do this for you and if you tell anyone and I mean anyone I will come in your room and rape you every night until you leave. Are we clear about this?" Ian told Liz in a harsh voice.

"Crystal clear Ian. I knew you could never be capable of anything else. Is there any other mean or rude comments you would like to tell me?" Liz asked back.

"You better leave before I change my mind." Ian told Liz.

Liz was almost to the door to go outside when she saw Max coming towards her. Liz walked faster but it seemed like Max was gaining on her, and that she could not walk fast enough.

"Wait Liz we need to talk about this," Max screamed.

"No, Max there is nothing to say," Liz screamed back.

Liz finally got through the doors and ran as fast as she could outside. Max finally caught up to her in a couple of minutes.

"How did you get outside? You need a pass and you do not have one." Liz asked.

"Liz that rule is only for mew patients like you. I don't need one. Liz I need to talk to you." Max said.

"Max I don't want to talk anymore I just want you to leave me a lone." Liz screamed.

"Liz you are mine." Max replied back calmly. Max then grabbed you should with his hand.

"You will always be mine and I will be yours. Liz you can never change that." Max told her again.

Liz turned away from him and started to walk away again. She could hear Max following her.

"Max just go away you have worn out your welcome. Go enjoy your life." Liz said and with that she took of running again.

"Not again" Max said to himself.

When he caught up to her again he pushed Liz so she fell on the ground. Then Max got down and laid on top of Liz pinning her under him.

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posted on 27-Mar-2002 3:42:01 AM by care bears
Title: Screaming Inside

Rating: R-NC17

CategoryM/L

Disclaimer: I don't own anything, all of the Roswell characters belong to Jason Katims.

Author note: This story really doesn't follow any of the plot line of the show and there are no alien related things. This involves rape, so if this subject offends you I would recommend you do not read this. But the story's main idea is not about rape and I do not go into great detail about it.

Summary: Liz's little brother, Sam, dies one night after being sick for years. After that Liz's parents no longer want her, so they ship her off to a mental hospital. Where Liz meets another patient there, Max.

Part 9 NC-17

"Max please," Liz whimpered. "Don't make this any harder than it has to be. Just get off of me."

"Liz stop it. Stop trying to push me away. I already told you that you are mine." Max said.

Then he leaned down and started to kiss Liz. Max slipped his tongue in Liz's mouth. He ran it along her teeth. Liz knew that she had to pull herself together, she could feel her control starting to slip.

Somehow Liz had gotten to attached to Max, and Liz had promised herself never to get attached to anyone again. But what made it worse to Liz was that she had only met Max a week ago. It pained Liz to know that as great as Max felt in her mouth she had to stop him. So Liz bit down on Max's tongue. Max could feel the pain on his tongue but did not know where it was coming from. When he finally realized that Liz was biting him, he pulled his tongue out of her mouth.

"Max please get off of me." Liz told him again.

"No, Liz you can't push me away. So what I am leaving. You are going to have to deal with it. Because after tomorrow I am not going to be here anymore. Then what Liz, then what are you going to do?" Max asked her angrily.

"I'll move on like I always do." Liz replied back in a quite voice. Then she turned her head to the side. Max could not see Liz's face anymore. But little did he know that the real reason Liz turned her head was because she could not stand to look at Max anymore. It just brought back to many painful memories of all of the things that they had shared.

"Liz you never move on, you just run away from all of your problems. Well, Liz you can't run away from me. Why Liz, just tell me why you always run away."

"Just leave me alone." Liz whispered again.

"You tried to help me but you didn't Max. All you did was fail me Max, just like Sam did. You can't help me I should be here. My world is always dark, and for one moment I saw all of the joy a normal person has, but it is gone now. I'm back to the darkness again. That is where I belong, where should be and always will be. I belong to the darkness and you can never change that again. I will never let you change that." Liz told Max.

Then Liz turn her head back to Max and only then could he see the coldness in her eyes. Max have never seen Liz like this before and it worried him. Max bit down at his lip stud as he watched her laying there, still in the grass. Liz's skin suddenly got cold, and all Max wanted to do was bring out the Liz, he had fallen in love with again.

"You want me Max, you want me so bad than you can have me." Liz told him.

Liz flipped herself so she was on top of Max. She reached her hands down and unbuttoned Max's jeans, then pulled the zipper down. Max did not want Liz like this and in his heart he knew that but his body betrayed him.

Liz pulled down Max's pants and boxers. She could see the erection starting to form. Liz ran her hand along Max's dick. Max hardened completely. Then Liz stood up and pulled down her jeans and underwear. She was back down on Max again in a matter of only seconds. Liz placed Max's dick in her entering and started to ride him. They both climaxed together in only a couple of minutes. Liz could feel Max go limp in her and she pulled him out of her and then put her clothes back on. She stood over Max still watching him still with cold eyes.

"There Max is that what you wanted?" Liz asked. Max stood up and put his clothes on before he answered her.

"No, Liz that is not what I wanted. I love you and every part of you. I think you are beautiful and I want to make love and have sex with you forever but not like that. I don't want to do that if you can't give me your heart. Please just let me in again,'" Max told her.

"I can't since I run away so much. Your right I will never be able to deal with this kind of stuff. I want to know the truth why do you love me?" Liz asked. "Because all I can do is find myself in question."

"I love you because you are you. Even thought you may never let me in you will always be mine. Inside your heart somewhere is the love that you want to give me but you can't. That part of you heart is mine. I want to tell you all of the answers but I can't. " Max told her.

"Are you already to go back inside yet?" Max then asked.

"No, you go inside. I really just want to be left alone now." Liz told him with coldness in her voice.

"I won't leave you alone, I will try my hardest not to let you run away from me anymore." Max replied back.

"Max I think it is to late for that." Liz sat down then and watched the sun.

Note* Liz is 16 years old


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posted on 27-Mar-2002 9:49:44 PM by care bears
Hey all of you guys have been great but I am thinking of stopping this story. I am stuck between a rock and a hard place. So basically I want to know if you guys want me to continue it. If you don't that is fine but I would really like to know. Tell me what you think and check tomorrow to see if there is a part 10. If not just know I will be stopping it.

Thank you,

care bears

P.S. if you did not know liz is 16.
posted on 28-Mar-2002 12:50:43 PM by care bears
Title: Screaming Inside

Rating: R-NC17

CategoryM/L

Disclaimer: I don't own anything, all of the Roswell characters belong to Jason Katims.

Author note: This story really doesn't follow any of the plot line of the show and there are no alien related things. This involves rape, so if this subject offends you I would recommend you do not read this. But the story's main idea is not about rape and I do not go into great detail about it.

Summary: Liz's little brother, Sam, dies one night after being sick for years. After that Liz's parents no longer want her, so they ship her off to a mental hospital. Where Liz meets another patient there, Max.



Part 10

Liz sat there and watched the sun. She had not idea what to do or what to feel.

"If only I had friends" Liz thought to her self. But Liz knew that she never would. Liz felt a knew wave of sadness sweeping through her. She quickly pushed all of those thoughts away putting them in the deep dark place of her mind where she kept everything else.

Liz could fell the sun hitting the necklace Max had given and it suddenly felt like it was burning her. She took the necklace off and gave it back to Max.

"Here I want you to have this, and give it to someone who can love you back." Liz told Max.

"Liz I won't take it back you can just keep it yourself." Max said. Then just as quickly as Liz had given Max the necklace back he placed it in her hands again.

"How can you believe in God." Liz asked Max

"I just do, I need to believe in a place to go after I died." Max told her.

"I wish I could believe like you." Liz told him back.

"Liz can I hold you." Max asked her. Liz could hear the fear in his voice and just could not tell him no.

"Sure, Max why not." Liz responded.

Liz leaned back into Max. Max could not help himself, he pulled out the ponytail holder that she was wearing. Liz's hair cascaded down and he stroked her hair. It felt so good to Liz

"Max let's go inside I don't want to be out here anymore, the sun is hurting my eyes. Plus you have to get packed up to leave. I would not want you to forget anything." Liz said.

"Even though you are going to help me pack I will still be forgetting something." Max said to a loud not meaning for Liz to hear but she did.

"What Max, What are you going to be forgetting?" Liz asked.

"You" Max told her.

"Oh Max," Liz sobbed. She cried in her hands. Max could not stand to see her in pain so he put his hands around her. Everything Liz had been holding back hit she. She tried to tell Max but he could only get jumbled words.

"Liz even when I leave it will be OK. I will come to see you again, and as soon as you get out I will take you away. We will live in a house and everything will be great you will never have any pain again." Max told her.

"No, Max, it will never be OK again. In two years you wont love me my parents will take you away for me. Everything I am around I ruin. I will ruin your life to. I am just ... just ... self destructive." Liz told him.

"No, Liz you are not that, who ever told you that." Max asked.

"My mom. Listen Max I don't want to share anymore today. I just don't feel well enough to talk anymore to you." Liz told him. With that they both got up and walked inside. Max pulled out a suitcase and started to park everything. Liz sat on the floor and watch him.

Liz grabbed the sheet off of her bed. Next she jumped up on her bed and tied it to the ceiling fan. She then made a simple knot and tied the rest of the sheet around her neck. Max watched in horror. He was to shocked to do anything. He watched Liz take the step off of the bed and he could hear her neck snap. No, Max kept screaming.


* Feedback always does a person good.*

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posted on 1-Apr-2002 3:28:53 PM by care bears
Title: Screaming Inside

Rating: R-NC17

CategoryM/L

Disclaimer: I don't own anything, all of the Roswell characters belong to Jason Katims.

Author note: This story really doesn't follow any of the plot line of the show and there are no alien related things. This involves rape, so if this subject offends you I would recommend you do not read this. But the story's main idea is not about rape and I do not go into great detail about it.

Summary: Liz's little brother, Sam, dies one night after being sick for years. After that Liz's parents no longer want her, so they ship her off to a mental hospital. Where Liz meets another patient there, Max.

Part Eleven

Max watched as Liz took her own life. He got a peaceful look in his eyes.

"Thank god you are dead." Max told Liz's body. "Now I don't have to choose between you and my girlfriend Tess. I know it is now my destiny to be with her. Now me and her can live a happy life." Max told her body.

"Beside you had way to much baggage. Me and Chris made a bet of how long you would last in this place and I won. Thanks Liz you are the best. You just won me twenty dollars. Have fun rotting in hell."

And with that the story is done.

THE END

Author note: This is an April Fools Joke. Come on I love you all but I had to do something. Please read the real part eleven below. Plus thanks for all of the feedback. The more feedback I get the faster I write. Oh one more thing don't be mad at me for not posting sooner it was my sister idea to wait.


Part Eleven {THE REAL PART}

Max watched as Liz slept, it was about 4:30 and he knew she was tried. One minute Max looked over and saw Liz was awake and the next minute she was asleep. Liz had a painful look on her face, and Max wondered what she was dreaming about.

Liz woke up for her dream, she could feel the sweat running off of her body. Liz could not believe she killed herself in the dream it was all just so horrible.

"Oh Max I had a bad dream. Please Max, please don't leave me here. Take me away with you." Liz begged him.

"Liz I can't. There is no way to get out of this place without you leaving on your own. I want to take you away with me I just don't know how." Max told her.

Liz looked around the room. It looked so empty without all of Max's things. No, I don't want to be here alone. I want Max to be with me but I don't think he will forgive me. Liz thought to herself. Liz decided it was better not to say anything and just to let Max go, so she went for a shower. When Liz came back Max, was gone and she panicked.

"Max," Liz screamed out. Liz was frantic, she was so use to have him there with her. Max was walking threw the halls when he heard Liz screaming his name. Max took off running and knocked Ian down when he passed him. When Max, finally got to the room she saw Liz looking lost.

"Liz, what is wrong?" Max asked.

"Oh Max, I just don't want you to leave me. I got scared that you were gone and I guessed I just freaked out. I am sorry I did not mean to freaked out." Liz said.

Max walked over and hugged Liz tightly. He could feel her trembling. Liz knees were giving out and she knew that she could not stand much longer. Max pushed them to the bed. Max had them both sitting on there bed, but Max never broke the hug. Max unwrapped one arm and began stroking her hair. Liz was still shaking and Max could not figure it out. Max turned Liz around so she was facing him.

"Liz what is wrong?" Max asked.

"I don't know Max, I just feel so scared." Liz told him. Ian came into the room and Max and Liz did not even notice him standing there. Max brought his lips down to Liz's.

"I sorry to interrupt you two but Liz you have a visitor." Ian told her.

"Who?" Liz asked back.

"The sheet says Mrs. and Mr. Parker." Ian told her.

"Tell them I don't want to see them, I really don't think they should be here and I would rather they would leave me alone." Liz said.

"I sorry but you have to go and see them." Ian told her. "So let's go I don't want to wait all day." Liz got up and turned around to Max.

"Max will you please come with me. I just don't think I can face them alone." Liz asked him.

"Umm. Liz I don't think that is in the rules but I guess it does not really matter if we break one of them" Max told her.

Liz walked into the visiting room with Max right besides her. Liz looked at her parents with hatred in her eyes. She sat down at the far side of the room Max took the seat next to her. Max grabbed Liz's hand squeezed it.

"Elizabeth how are you doing, you look so much better." Liz's mom asked her.

"Don't call me that it is Liz, and mom, I really don't think you care. In fact I know you don't. You did not care when you sent me hear and you don't care now. So let's cut to the chase what do you want." Liz asked.

"Elizabeth we want you to talk to the press. Tell them you are doing fine with Sam's death and that you were never in a mental hospital. The roomer is that you are. If people fine out this is turn it could ruin us. Sam would have wanted you to." Liz's father told her.

"Don't you ever bring Sam into this. First of all you did not know what Sam ever wanted. You used him like you are trying to use me. Second of all hell will have to freeze over before I talk to the press and lie to them. As far as I am concerned you can fuck off." Liz told them.

Liz tied to get up to leave but Ian came in the room and put her back down in the chair she was sitting in. Then Ian left. Liz's parents sat there and looked at her like she was white trash.

"Liz if you do this we will let you out of here." Her parents told her.

"I would rather burn in hell then do anything for you. Now if that was what you wanted I think that we are don't here." Liz told them. Max sat in silence and listen to them talk.

"Liz we will be back tomorrow, we want you to think about this before you say no." With that her parents left.

Author note: THIS IS FOR THE PEOPLE WHO HAVE BEEN LEAVING FEEDBACK. I'M SORRY IF I MISSED ANYONE.

DreamingOfMax84 - The plot does thicken. No, I' m not trying to kill you. Thanks for all of your feedback on everything. I hope I did OK on the new part. I am trying to stay away from the sad.

Pegleg - Sorry I really felt bad for making you wait, thanks for the feedback.

JulietLiz - I loved your feed back it made me laugh. Plus Max and Liz should always be together.

Jassybee - sorry about leaving you in a cliff hanger I hoped you like the new part.

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TrueLoveConquersAll - I am glad you found my story and am happy you like it. Thanks for the feedback.

Wayliz - I am trying to think of a way for Max to get Liz out of there.

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Applebybehr - Thanks for all of the feedback. If you did not get it Liz is 16 and Max is 18.

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ILYMEFOREVER - I am sorry to confused you. I tried to figure out how but you kind of confused me too. I hope it gets clear for you in the next couple of parts.

PS Dreamer - I am happy you read the last three parts again. Thanks for the feedback.

Katmcken - I hope you like the new parts Liz is 16 if you did not find that out before.




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posted on 2-Apr-2002 9:45:50 PM by care bears

Please give me feedback. It is so drepressing not to see any and it makes a person feel like they don't know how to write. I am having a little trouble moving this story along so please just let me know what you think.

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posted on 7-Apr-2002 12:19:50 AM by care bears
Title: Screaming Inside

Rating: R-NC17

CategoryM/L

Disclaimer: I don't own anything, all of the Roswell characters belong to Jason Katims.

Author note: This story really doesn't follow any of the plot line of the show and there are no alien related things. This involves rape, so if this subject offends you I would recommend you do not read this. But the story's main idea is not about rape and I do not go into great detail about it.

Summary: Liz's little brother, Sam, dies one night after being sick for years. After that Liz's parents no longer want her, so they ship her off to a mental hospital. Where Liz meets another patient there, Max.




Part twelve NC-17




"What am I going to do? Max if I lie I can't get out but if I do then it is like I am letting Sam down and I can't do that. I won't, I just don't know what to do." Liz told Max once they had gotten back to the room.

"Liz you have to do what is right for you. I want you to come and live with me but I don't want you to do anything you would hate yourslef for later on. Also I don't want you to kill yourself thinking about this." Max told her.

"Max why do you have to leave me. Can't you see I am in trouble here. I don't know what to do anymore. I think I am losing you more and more each moment and I hate it. When you leave I will be alone. What happens if you forget about me. What happens if I can't do this alone. I mean I have two more years in here if I don't go along with my parents. What will I do without you? I just don't know what to do if I mess up." Liz told Max.

"Well, Liz if you mess up then I will be right here to pick up the pieces and put them all together again." Max told Liz then kissed her on top of the head.

"I just feel like the world keeps on moving and I am being left behind. I just need to stop everything so I can fix things. I feel so lost Max. I just feel so lost. Make me feel like I belong somewhere again. Please Max just let me forget." Liz said.

"Liz what do you want me to do?" Max asked back.

"Make love to me Max. Over and over until you leave. Please I need to feel you inside of me. I need to be sucking on your lip stud. I want to taste the metallic taste in my mouth. I want to put finger marks down you back when you come. I just want to be with you again so I will always have something to remember you by. So when you leave tomorrow I can get threw not being able to see you."

Max stared into her eyes, as much as he wanted to look everywhere else. But he remained at her eyes until she would answer his question. "Are you sure about this? I don't want to hurt you more. I would hate to think of you here crying yourself to sleep, or being raped by Ian. So just tell me you are sure and I will do anything you want me to do."

"Yes," she admitted, "for the first time in my life I sure about this, and I love that." She reached up and kissed him, gently at first but soon with more intensity. Liz sucked in Max's tongue stud like you had done so many times, but this time was hard and different it was ruff and demanding and Max loved it. When Liz finally released Max's stud he ran his tongue across her lips before moving it into her mouth.

They released again but only to get there clothes off. After that Max ran his hands down Liz back memorizing every little thing about her. He reached her ass and cupped his hand on it, pulling her towards him. He felt a moan escape her throat as his cock pressed against her thigh.

He broke this kiss and focused his attention on his hands. Her began to explore between her thighs, softly running his hair throw her hair. Liz tried to force his fingers inside her by leaning even closer, but Max had other planes. He slowly parted her pussy lips and left the thick juices inside her. He pressed against her clit with his thumb, slowly moving it in smaller and smaller circles.

"Oh Max," she said, "oh yes," she continued, her words of encouragement become louder and less coherent as he continued.

"I can do more," he assured her, "if you want me to...."

Her eyes were wide, "Yes, fuck me."

Max laughed at Liz response, "Not right now. Right now I have other plans for you." He gently pushed Liz down on his bed. Max began to trail kisses down Liz's body until he was on his knees before her. Max slipped his tongue inside Liz, savoring the taste of her on his tongue. He lapped at her pussy for a while causing her to give little moans of pleasure.

"Oh god Max please harder. I don't think I will last much longer." Liz cried out.

"Liz you will last until I tell you to cum do you understand me?" Max asked her. He pulled his tongue out and wait for a response.

"Please," Liz begged after a couple of seconds she finally managed to give out a yes.

Max stuck his tongue back in her and made his actions became more focused as he centered on her swollen clit. He was sucking on it, and savoring her with all his senses. Her the softness of her skin, her smell of her, the feel of her hands in his hair, and the moans that escaped from her lips. She was thrusting to him involuntarily as he became more intense. Finally he told her that she could cum and Liz did. Max lapped everything out of her. Then she pulled him back up and joined him in a long kiss again sucking on his stud.

"I need you please Max. I need you inside of me," she whispered to him.

"I know," he whispered back in her ear before sucking on her neck leaving love marks.


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posted on 9-Apr-2002 8:30:50 AM by care bears
OK I am going to try to post again sometime this week but I am still writing the next part. It is taking longer then I thought I would so please just give me a little more time.

I got in this car reck and I am trying to still fix my car. I still need to take it in, and then there is school well you all know the deal. So Please just give me a little more time and THANKS FOR ALL OF THE FEEDBACK. YOU ARE ALL GREAT!
posted on 19-Apr-2002 10:52:09 PM by care bears
Title: Screaming Inside

Rating: R-NC17

CategoryM/L

Disclaimer: I don't own anything, all of the Roswell characters belong to Jason Katims.

Author note: This story really doesn't follow any of the plot line of the show and there are no alien related things. This involves rape, so if this subject offends you I would recommend you do not read this. But the story's main idea is not about rape and I do not go into great detail about it.

Summary: Liz's little brother, Sam, dies one night after being sick for years. After that Liz's parents no longer want her, so they ship her off to a mental hospital. Where Liz meets another patient there, Max.






Part thirteen NC17





Before Max could answer Liz again, her hands quickly slid off his boxers. Liz then glided up Max's body, kissed
him and said, "I want you to be with you now I can't wait any longer Max."

"Liz, this isn't right I don't want to hurt you. I won't be able to hold you tomorrow night. How will you be then," Max protested. Liz push Max onto the bed then lay on top of him.

"I know what I want." Liz slid down until my cock had entered her pussy. Her wetness ran down Max's cock. Max could not let Liz win he wanted her to beg for him. So he went in and out, with just the tip of his cock.

Suddenly Max thought he was going to cum in Liz. He pull out of her quickly to regain his control. Liz was pissed. She screamed at him and came up and bite his lip stud.

Max pushed her back down on the bed. Than Liz begged Max to reenter her so he did. Then he flipped Liz so that she was on top. The pressure was unbelievable, like a tight ring on the tip of his cock. Liz pushed her body lower, drawing in about two inches of Max.

Liz's breathing was fast and heavy when she pushed herself up on her arms and off my body almost to a sitting position. She kept driving. Her eyes were closed, her mouth open. She lowered herself down another inch and let out a a moan of pleasure.

Max's hands cupped Liz's breasts and pinched her nipples. For the first time she opened her eyes and grinned with the look of pride in her accomplishment.
Max sure if it because Liz dominating him and that it gave her the satisfaction.

Max could felt her tiring, so he pulled her to my chest and rolled over on top of her slim body. Max's pole slipped out, but with a deft hand, Liz quickly guided me back into her hole. Now it was his turn, and after reestablishing her rhythm, he gave her the full length
of my shaft. His balls slapped her thighs and our pubic mounds smacked with each drive. Liz's breathing was shallow and rapid. She closed her eyes and slid her hands tightly around my ass.

"Liz, I'm going to cum," Max announced.

"Give it to me now," Liz gasped loudly.

Max's climax erupted and he pumped what felt like a liter of hot cum into her pussy. Liz moaned with satisfaction, then grabbed Max and pulled him to her for a deep soul kiss.

They lay there for a few moments till our breathing slowed. Liz was the first to speak. "Thank you, I needed that."

"Are you sure you're OK?" Max asked with concern in his voice.

"Just exhausted." Liz said

"Go to sleep now." Max said gently.

"No," Liz protested. "Do it again. Fuck me again you make me feel normal. I want to have that normal feeling again. Please Max, fuck me again." Liz begged.

"Liz you are tried I don't think it is a good idea. I won't always be able to make you feel normal." Max told her.

"But Max I need you please. Fuck me again, fuck me until I tell you to stop." Liz said then kissed him.

Max could feel him self getting hard again. He entered into to Liz again and starting slamming into her. His hand went down to her nipples and started to squeeze them. Liz let out a loud moan and Max took one of his hands and put it over her mouth.

Max kept slamming into Liz until they both came again. Max fell onto Liz and laid there on top of her. Liz was now to tried to move, but she managed to wipe his bangs from Max's face. Max tried to roll off of Liz but she stopped him.

"Max your not hurting me. Please just stay on top of me." Liz pleaded with him. Finally Max consented to her.

"Do you feel normal?" Max asked her.

"When I am with you I do but when we are apart I fell my self slipping in darkness." Liz answered him back.

"I love you Liz and so did Sam. I never want to leave you but I know I have to. I will still love you even when I am not with you. I will just be sending you my love from a far." Max told Liz in a whisper.

He watched as one tear rolled out of her eye. He wiped it away for her. Liz grabbed his hand and squeezed it hard and watched as Max fell a sleep. Liz listened to him breath until she finally fell a sleep as well.

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posted on 22-Apr-2002 7:33:06 PM by care bears
Thanks for all of the feedback. I will try to post again soon. I know that I made you all wait a long time for the last part it is because I am kind of having a little bit of writers block. Really the more feed back you give me the easier it is to write. I really like it when you say what you want to happen next. It give me idea's on what to do.

Thanks again for even reading I am still kind of surprised people like this story. It was just something that came to me one night. I don't know where this is going so you will have to what to find out. Please don't be mad if it is a sad ending. I am just warning you now. It may be a happy one but if you don't like sad ones I am really sorry. But I really don't know.

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posted on 4-May-2002 12:13:01 AM by care bears


Title: Screaming Inside

Rating: R-NC17

CategoryM/L

Disclaimer: I don't own anything, all of the Roswell characters belong to Jason Katims.

Author note: This story really doesn't follow any of the plot line of the show and there are no alien related things. This involves rape, so if this subject offends you I would recommend you do not read this. But the story's main idea is not about rape and I do not go into great detail about it.

Summary: Liz's little brother, Sam, dies one night after being sick for years. After that Liz's parents no longer want her, so they ship her off to a mental hospital. Where Liz meets another patient there, Max.





Part fourteen

Liz woke up before Max and started to cry. Max would be leaving today and Liz could not stand the thought of being a lone. She tried to stop her crying because she wanted to watch Max sleep but soon it was out of hand. Her whole body trembled, and her sobs got louder.

Max opened his eyes to see Liz crying. It killed him to see her like that and he did not know what to do. He still laid on top of her, surrounding Liz with his body heat. He brought his hands up to her face and wiped away the tears. But it seemed that Max's hands were never fast enough because they keep rolling down her face.

"Liz please stop crying it will be OK," Max told her in a gentle voice.

"Oh Max, I don't know what to do. Please tell me what I can to do make this better. To make it so I can leave with you to start my life over again with you." Liz said.

Max watched as her tears started to die down. He brought he lips down to hers and kissed her until they were both breathless. Then he moved his moth down to Liz's neck and started to suck. By now all of Liz's tears were gone, and she was having a hard time concentrating on anything. Max's lips traveled down she neck and to her perk nipples. He sucked on one of them causing Liz to moan and then did the same thing to the other one. His lips traveled back up her body and when back to Liz's mouth and he kissed her once more letting her suck in his lips stud. She bit down on it and it cause Max to jump involuntary.

"Do you know what to do now?" Max asked her.

"Yes, I know exactly what I am going to do." Liz told Max.

"Tell me Liz what are you going to do?" Max asked.

'You Mr. Tease will just have to wait to find out," Liz told him. With that she push his body off of hers and got up wrapping the sheet around herself. Then she picked up her clothes and ran out of the room down to the girl bathroom to shower. Max did the same thing but went to the boys bathroom.

Liz could hear Max singing in the shower through the walls. Max was three keys off and never knew that Liz could hear him. Max sang "Rubber Ducky" twenty times before he was finally finished all together with the shower. By this time Liz was already back in the room. When Max walked in she started to imitate Max. Max did not think that it was as funny as Liz did. He jumped on the bed and started to tickle her finally Liz gave up and said she was sorry. Ian walked in the room and it startled both of them. He had a grin on his face and they could only wonder what he was up to. Max and Liz could only hope that he had not found a knew little kid to pick on and rape.

"Parker your parents are here and Max it is time for you to leave your car is parked out side. If you would please vacate the room as soon as possible it would be great. We have another roommate for Liz." Ian told Liz and Max.


Author note:Hey I know that this is not the greatest part but I am posting again on Sunday or Monday and it will be better. This part has been kind of hard for me to write. I am asking all of you readers to please just stick with this story. I now know where I am taking it and it should be really good. Thanks for all of the feedback and keep it coming.

posted on 5-May-2002 9:36:06 PM by care bears
Title: Screaming Inside

Rating: R-NC17

CategoryM/L

Disclaimer: I don't own anything, all of the Roswell characters belong to Jason Katims.

Author note: This story really doesn't follow any of the plot line of the show and there are no alien related things. This involves rape, so if this subject offends you I would recommend you do not read this. But the story's main idea is not about rape and I do not go into great detail about it.

Summary: Liz's little brother, Sam, dies one night after being sick for years. After that Liz's parents no longer want her, so they ship her off to a mental hospital. Where Liz meets another patient there, Max.



Part Fifteen


"Mother I will go along with you plan but I just want you to know that I hate you and that as far as I am concerned I do not but a mother or a father."

'Good Elizabeth, I knew you would." Her father told her.

"Now go get changed into something nice Elizabeth." Liz's mother told her.

"It is Liz and this is the nicest it gets mom." Liz told her mother.

"Look what you have turned into a whore Elizabeth. How dare you talk to your mother like that and your language is horrid." Liz's father told her.

"Fuck off dad not one cares what you think you fuck some man you gay freak." Liz said. That was the wrong thing to say and she was slapped by both her mother and father.

"Max," Liz whispered quietly to herself. But Max was already gone. He was free and waiting for her to find him so they could start over again.

"Elizabeth we have already taken the liberty to had that nice man Ian to gather you belongs. It is time to go now since you refuse to change I think to will do.

With that they left. Liz said everything that they wanted her to at the press conference and remembered to smile. But into side could feel a pain greater than any other. Liz also knew that if she did this that she would be in her parent good graces and that it was just to hard to fight them.

After she was done her parents had her driven back to there house. All of Liz's clothes were already unpacked and put away neatly and Liz hated it. This was not the way things were planed out to be. At this moment Liz had planned to be with Max instead she was with the family that hated her.

Liz heard her phone ring and she answered it surprised that anyone would call her.

"Hello who is there," Liz asked.

"I see how it is now," a voice told her on the other end.

"Max, is that you?" She asked.

"Yes, Liz it is I thought you were going to the right thing. You were going to meet here at my house. But you are just a rich spoiled brat. I can't believe you used me. God I should have known you wouldn't I don't know why I let you have me heart." Max told her.

"No, Max, please..." Liz told him but was only cut off.

"Liz save it for someone who cares cause I just don't." Max told her.

"Max my parents won't let me but I will find a way to be with you." Liz told him.

"Sure you will. I am to you now is trailer park trash." Max told her.

"No, Max, I love you." Liz told him.

"I don't ever want you to tell that to me again you should only say it if you mean it and I know that you don't." Max told Liz and with that he hung up the phone slamming it down.


Thanks for all of the feedback and keep it coming. I will try to post a long part this week but I have to do my homework now. I am not doing to week in a class and I have to hit the books.
posted on 5-May-2002 10:03:04 PM by care bears
Author note: Hey thanks to all of you guys for leaving feedback. If you want a little note to then you will just have to leave some as well. Sorry it has taken me so long to do this. I just have not had the time. Sorry if these are kind of short.


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posted on 8-May-2002 7:27:49 PM by care bears
Title: Screaming Inside

Rating: R-NC17

CategoryM/L

Disclaimer: I don't own anything, all of the Roswell characters belong to Jason Katims.

Author note: This story really doesn't follow any of the plot line of the show and there are no alien related things. This involves rape, so if this subject offends you I would recommend you do not read this. But the story's main idea is not about rape and I do not go into great detail about it.

Summary: Liz's little brother, Sam, dies one night after being sick for years. After that Liz's parents no longer want her, so they ship her off to a mental hospital. Where Liz meets another patient there, Max.







Part Sixteen NC-17






"Max," Liz repeated over and over again to the phone.

Finally after thirty minutes Liz hung it up. She sat down on her bed and cried for what seemed to be hours. Liz was sick of crying she could not stand to look at what she had turn into. She went into her bathroom and ran the bath water. She stripped her self of all her closes and got into the bath. The water burned her skin at first but she loved the feeling. Liz ran her hands down her breast and squeezed each nipple hard until that hurt her too. Her hand traveled farther down her body. She stuck a finger inside of herself then another and another. Liz moaned, she moved her fingers faster and faster until finally she climaxed in the bath tub. She cried out and the sound her mouth even surprised her.

Liz drained all of the water from the bath and then ran shower water to get cleaned up. After Liz was done she combed though her hair and left her bathroom naked. She put on a pair of boxers but deiced it was better to sleep topless in case she had another sudden erg.

Max sat outside the Parker Mansion watching Liz's room for any movement. He had been sitting there for two hours when finally he felt so anger toward her he had to tell her. He climbed over the gate and walked over to where her bed room. Max climbed up the ladder that lead him to her balcony then push open the window. He saw her there sleeping topless and felt a member inside of his pant tighten. His anger slowly started to go away. He walked over to her and leaned down to suck on her neck.

Liz trembled in her sleep. Max kissed his way down her body until he reached her breast. He licked one nipple carefully pinching hard on the other one. This cause Liz to moan. Max stopped for a moment making sure that Liz was still a sleep. Then he let his hand travel down inside her boxers to touch Liz's most intimate folds.

Max looked at Liz's face not sure if he should continue or not. He wanted Liz so bad it hurt. Suddenly Max ripped off Liz's boxers. Then he stripped himslef of his pants and boxers. Liz slept on, completely unawar that Max was exposing himself to her. He thrust inside of her, and listened to her moan. Max sped up his pace until he came inside of her. Max watched as Liz still slept on never to know what had just happened. He with pulled out from her and put on boxers and pants back on. He left laying there naked on the bed.

"Good-bye my sweet Liz." Max called down her lawn.

"Max," Liz screamed. Liz woke up get as Max was driving away. She had thought that it was all a dream but realized that it was not. She saw that she was naked and that there were bite marks all over her body.

Two Hours Later


She picked up the phone and dialed Max's number. He answered the phone sounding sleepily but Liz knew that he was just faking.


"Max," Liz said quietly into the phone.

"What do you want Liz? Do you know what time it is in the morning?" Max asked her back he could feel anger rising up.

"I want you." Liz said simply.

"Well, you should.." Max was cut off by Liz.

"I know you were here. Please come pick me up. Take me way from here. I have a razor blade in my hand and I will slit my wrist if you don't." Liz told him.

"You bluffing. If you wanted to kill yourself then you would have already." Max told Liz.

"Are you risking to take that chance?" Liz asked him back.

"No, I will be there in ten minutes just don't do anything." Max said and with he hang up the phone.

Liz put on underwear, a bra, jeans and a sweater. She walked down the steps and out though the front door. Not caring that she had school in the morning. She ran down to the gate and open it. Liz sat in the lawn and waited for Max. When Max showed up Liz jumped in the car and watched him for a few moments. Finally and pulled down the block and parked the car.

"Liz where do you want to go?" Max ask her. Liz started to cry.

"Max please don't be mad at me. I wanted to come to you but my parents they would not let me. I do love you and I can't stand the thought of you being mad at me. If you don't want to see me again that is fine. But please don't stay mad at me. If you want I won't ever say I love you again. I won't even talk to you but just let me be near you for one more day."

"Liz I don't know what I want but I do know that love never has to say it is sorry." Max told Liz.

Max pulled Liz's head on his chest. Liz listen to Max's heart beat and feel a sleep on he. Max drove them back to his house and laid them both into bed. Carefully not to wake Liz. He watched as she sleep having no idea what came next.

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posted on 13-May-2002 12:07:16 AM by care bears
Thanks for all of the feedback. Keep it coming I will try to post again as soon as I write the next part. Umm.. So I should be post again maybe by Wednesday. Happy Mother's Day to all of you, and that it about it. Thanks again for all of the wonderful feedback all of you left.

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posted on 23-May-2002 3:48:51 PM by care bears
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posted on 23-May-2002 3:53:41 PM by care bears
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posted on 23-May-2002 3:54:40 PM by care bears
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posted on 23-May-2002 3:55:04 PM by care bears
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posted on 23-May-2002 3:55:55 PM by care bears
Rating: R-NC17

CategoryM/L

Disclaimer: I don't own anything, all of the Roswell characters belong to Jason Katims.

Author note: This story really doesn't follow any of the plot line of the show and there are no alien related things. This involves rape, so if this subject offends you I would recommend you do not read this. But the story's main idea is not about rape and I do not go into great detail about it.

Summary: Liz's little brother, Sam, dies one night after being sick for years. After that Liz's parents no longer want her, so they ship her off to a mental hospital. Where Liz meets another patient there, Max.

Part Seventeen NC-17

"Max," Liz screamed not knowing Max was right beside her. Max woke up right away to find Liz screaming his name. He did not know weather to let her sleep or to wake her up. He wrapped his arms around her body tightly and she seemed to calm down a little bit. Liz's body still felt so hot to Max and he did not know why. He unwrapped his arms from her and she started screaming again. Finally Max thought that he had no other choice so he woke Liz up.

"Liz what is wrong, did you have a bad dream? " Max questioned her.

"No, Max I don't remember." Liz told Max lying to him. In truth she had remembered the whole thing. One moment Max was in her arms and that next she saw Ian raping him. She saw how much pain he was in and it felt almost real.

Max gently stroked Liz's forehead. He knew that she was lying but would wait until she told him what was wrong. Max felt Liz moving trying to get out of his arms. He did not want Liz to move away from him so he pulled her tighter to him.

"Max, I am fine I have to go to the bath room." Liz told him.

"I will go with you." Max told her back.

"I am perfectly capable of going on my own Max I don't need a baby sitter." Liz replied back.

"Liz you don't know where the bath room is. We are in my house remember." Max told her while laughing at her.

"That is not funny Max." Liz told him picking up a pillow. Liz hit Max in the face with the pillow and then ran off the bed. She was trying to get away from him before he could get her back. But no matter how many times Liz tried to get away Max would always get her with the pillow. Finally Liz was tried out getting hit so she decide to get Max on more time. She took a big swing and forced the pillow around with all of her might. Liz did not know with the pillow she was also hitting Max's alarm clock.

Max had no time to escape the alarm clock. It came barreling strait at him with the pillow close behind. When the clock finally hit Max he went down on the ground.

"My nose, I think you broke my nose Liz." Max said in pain. Liz did not even realize the alarm clock had hit Max yet. She walked around to the door groping the wall for the light switch. When she finally did get the light on she saw Max with blood coming out of his nose still lying on the floor. When look over a little more and saw the alarm clock lying right beside him.

"You may not think this is funny now but it will give us something to tell our children and grand children." Liz said laughing. When she finally stop she realized something she was the one who got the last laugh.

"Well, Max that will teach you from teasing me again." Liz told him. She walk over to him to look at his nose.

"Such a pretty nose it will never be the same again," Liz said.

"Liz it can't be that bad can it." Max told her bad horror spreading around his face.

"No, Max it is not in fact I have some good news for you." Liz told him.

"Well, Doctor Liz what is it?" Max asked.

"Max your nose is not broken but it will be puffy for a while, so I would try to stay out of public you might scare away all of the little children." Liz told him laughing again.

"Funny Liz real funny." Max told her back.

When Liz finally stopped laughing again she had Max sit up. Then Liz put tissue in each nostril.

"Well, I have to say that this is a picture moment." Liz said smile.

While Max was sitting up on the bed Liz was cleaning up the mess. Putting his belongs that had fell or were knock off something where they belong. This was all with Max's direction.

"Liz the clock goes over on the dresser." Max yelled over at her. Tkaing the tissue out of his nose since the blood had stopped.

"No, Max it would look better on the night stand. That is where clocks go." Liz told him.

"I don't care I want it over there." Max told her back.

"Well, since you seem to have all of the answers why do you do it. I am not your slave." Liz screamed over to him.

"Well, I want you to be." Max to her.

"What?" Liz asked.

"If you were my slave right now I would tie you down to the bed. Then I would rip off all of you closes. Then I would bite down on your nipples until you begged me to stop. I would eat out of you pussy and drink you juices."

Max stop for a moment and watch Liz. Her eyes were completely taken over with passion. He could smell her aroused threw the jeans she was wearing and he was sure that her pansy's were soaked. If it was possible her eyes got blacker with passion.

"I would then need you and tease you then finally please you. I would fuck you until you could not take it anymore. Until my seed ran freely out of your body. But since you are not my slave I can't do that now can I." Max told her.

Max watch Liz got a panicked look in her eyes, He knew it was no fair to play with her like this but he like it. Liz down the alarm clock on the ground and start to move toward Max.

"No, my little slave I want you to put the alarm clock on the dresser." Max told her not knowing what she would do. He watched as she turned around and put it back on the dresser. Then she quickly walked over to him.

"Max I need you now. It hurts so bad take away this pain please." Liz begged.

"Not yet I want you to apologies for calling me all of those names. Since you are my little slave I want you to start calling my master. No more Max unless I tell you all right?" Max asked Liz.

"Yes, Master. I am sorry I made fun of you it was wrong of me." Liz told Max.

"Good girl Liz. Now I want you to take off you jeans and panties and throw them on the ground." Max told her.

"Yes, Master." Liz responded back and did exactly what he said.

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posted on 25-May-2002 2:56:04 PM by care bears
Thank you to all of the people who left feedback I am doing this now so I can keep caught up with it. The new part should be posted sometime next week. I hope you all like this one. Remember if you want a little note you have to leave some feedback or you won't get any.


Cinder - Max did not think that Liz loved him anymore because he got scared that she would leave him. Thanks for the feedback and I am really glad that you liked the new part.

Pegleg - Michelle I am happy you liked the new part. I thought it was cute to when I wrote it but I am happy that someone agrees.

Kim_56Emotion - kimmie thanks for you feedback I am glad that you liked the new part

Leigh Anne - Leigh hey thanks for your feedback. Max and Liz really are a cute couple. I am happy you liked my story, and hope you stick with it. I am sorry that you cried.


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posted on 29-May-2002 10:20:44 PM by care bears
I will try to post once a week from now on. You see I just started this other story (Snow on Oak Lane) and I want to it progress a good as this one. Please don't be mad. Thanks you for all of your feedback. You are all great and I hope that you can find it in your hearts to understand.

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posted on 31-May-2002 11:42:26 AM by care bears
Thanks you guys for all of the feedback. New part coming soon.

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posted on 24-Jun-2002 11:48:12 PM by care bears
OK I know what you are all think. What happened to me. Well, my sister got my computer put on safe mode and no one could use it for two weeks. Then finally it had to be completely restarted.

Completely restarted you may be asking yourself what does that mean. Well, it means this I lost everything. All the new parts I had already done. All of my work is gone and that is the part that really sucks.

I know the next thing you are thinking to. You read about this all of the time, and why didn't I just have a back up copy. Well, I thought that it would not happen to me. That I could post all of the parts before it ever did.

So here is some of a new part for this one. I have to go to bed now, and this was all I could do. I know that it is not enough but I have summer school in the morning. I will be updating this week again. With a long part.

Thank You for Reading.

I just wanted you to know that I did not proof read this so be kind. It is just a little of the new part. Enjoy.


Title: Screaming Inside

Rating: R-NC17

CategoryM/L

Disclaimer: I don't own anything, all of the Roswell characters belong to Jason Katims.

Author note: This story really doesn't follow any of the plot line of the show and there are no alien related things. This involves rape, so if this subject offends you I would recommend you do not read this. But the story's main idea is not about rape and I do not go into great detail about it.

Summary: Liz's little brother, Sam, dies one night after being sick for years. After that Liz's parents no longer want her, so they ship her off to a mental hospital. Where Liz meets another patient there, Max.


New Part




"Now come here and lay on the bed." Max told Liz.

Liz was suddenly feeling shy and pull her arms up to cover and small breasts while walking over to the bed.

"I did not tell you to cover your breasts up. Now I will have to punish you." Max said.

"But Max," Liz said as soon as she said it she tried to correct herself but she knew Max had heard her.

"Well, Liz this is the second mistake you have made. Now I will have to think of something new to do to you." Max told her.

"NO, I am sorry I did not mean to say that. Please just take way all of the pain you have cause me." Liz said while pointing to her core.

Max watch he could see the juice running free. Even standing the whole way across the room he could smell her. Max could feel himself hardening again.

"Touch your self." Max told Liz simply.

"I don't not understand Master." Liz told Max.

"I want to see you pleasure yourself." Max told her.

"I ... I... have never done that before, and I don't know how. I am sorry master." Liz replied back. She turned and face the other way so Max could not see the look of anguish on her face. Liz knew that she had displeased him and left him down. Liz walked over to where her close lay on the ground and started to pick them up.

"What do you think you are doing." Max asked.

"I am leaving maybe this all was a bad idea." Liz told him with sadness in her voice.

Max walked over to her and throw the close that were in her hands out. He pick her up and then put her gently on the bed. He pushed her hand above her head and kissed her with all the lust he had felt in the moment. Then he took one of his hands off of her and let his other hand catch her now free on. Gripping them again he replace them at the top of her hand. Max shoved a finger inside of Liz. Liz could not help but let out a moan. Then Max pulled it out.

"Now my little slave I want you to stay put." Max told her.

He walked out of his room and went down the steps. Liz had no idea where Max was. A couple of minutes later he came back with rope in his hands to still find a naked Liz Parker on his bed. It looked like she hadn't moved since he had left. In truth she hadn't.

Max walked over to Liz and tried one hand on the mental head board of the bed. Then he did the same to the next. Next he moved to the bottom of the bed and tried her feet down to the bed as well. When he was done he looked at his handy work. Now he knew Liz would not be leaving.

Max took off his shirt, jeans, and boxers with Liz watching his every move carefully. He came and laid beside her on the bed. He took one of his hands and touched her nipple pinching it lightly. Liz arched her back but could not get very far because she was tied to the bed.
posted on 26-Jun-2002 11:56:24 AM by care bears
OK I will be posting in the next couple of days because I am almost finished with the slave part.


posted on 13-Oct-2002 4:32:09 PM by care bears
Title: Screaming Inside

Rating: R-NC17

CategoryM/L

Disclaimer: I don't own anything, all of the Roswell characters belong to Jason Katims.

Author note: This story really doesn't follow any of the plot line of the show and there are no alien related things. This involves rape, so if this subject offends you I would recommend you do not read this. But the story's main idea is not about rape and I do not go into great detail about it.

Summary: Liz's little brother, Sam, dies one night after being sick for years. After that Liz's parents no longer want her, so they ship her off to a mental hospital. Where Liz meets another patient there, Max.

New Part Nineteen

"I control," Max told Liz softly,then without a nother seconds thought he firmly told her, "You obey." He uncuffed Liz hands and she wait to be told what she would do next.

"Give me your hands."

Liz lifted them, giving silently.

"These hands are mine, to do as I will," Max murmured, caressing her palms with his thumbs. He bent as he lifted them to his mouth, kissing each one before straightening and putting her hands where he wanted them.

One thumb glided over her soft lower lip. "This mouth is mine, to kiss, to speak, to lick." His hands framed her face, thumbs caressing over her eyes as they closed. "These eyes are mine, to see what I will." Max's fingers sifted through her hair. "This body is mine. To take pleasure, and to give pleasure....as I will it."

She knew the truth in it. "Yes," she heard herself saying, knowing that his declarations needed no confirmation his will would reign even without it.

He took her face in his hands, tilted it up to look down into hers. "Yes, what?"

"Yes," she whispered back, afraid again she'd made a fatal error, "Master." He nodded once, approving of the tremor in her voice; the way the word sounded on her tongue.

"Look at me," he whispered. There was no need for louder sounds in the small space that separated his mouth and her ears. Her gaze lifted slowly to meet his.


Max pulled Liz forward, until her breasts were pressed to his chest; her hands went up finding his chest, laying there, ready to push away or caress. Max kissed Liz first soft, gentle,. Then firm letting her feel his lips full on hers. Liz sighed and he took the parting of her lips for his entrance, and his tongue went hot and wet into her mouth, kissing her powerfully, until her knees went weak.

When Max had kissed Liz to nearly crazyness, he broke away, and Liz could not tell whose breathing was more disturbed, his or hers. Max released Liz's hand with his left, slid his hand into her hair, and pressed her forehead down, onto his shoulder, kissing her temple. Max pulled her head back by tugging gently on her hair, looking into her face.

"No fear," he whispered, his countenance serious. "Now...kneel before me."

Liz went to her knees. Max's cock thrust out hard, brushing her cheek and lips, and she felt a rush of liquid heat between her thighs.

"Look at me."

He slid fingers and thumbs into her hair, holding her face uplifted as he looked down, and somehow the distance seemed only distance, not some measure of status. She felt equal on her knees.

"Touch me," Max told Liz, and she knew by the sound of the words and the feel of his hands holding her still for the order, that he was not going to give this order again.

Liz moved forward just a little,her hair brushed over the lower half of his cock She swayed forward, subtly, feeling the soft strands of her hair touch his straining shaft. She could hear Max moan above her.

Liz knew that Max watched her, and she was terrified, unsure, and insecure and aroused all at once. Her temple grazed up his dick and she rubbed her cheek against his throbbing flesh, turning her head so that just the very corner of her mouth touched him for a instant. It was hot and swollen against her skin;

Max did not remind Liz that she'd been commanded to touch him. Liz was certain that her hands were not the only means of providing him pleasure through touch and that he was intelligent enough to not only know that, but also to expect more creative things of her.

Liz bent forward, wrapping one hand around the full circle of his cock at the base, lips parting, moving to take one heavy sac into her mouth.

Max's hand tightened in Liz's hair. Gasping, she stopped, hand still around him, she looked up into a face filled with both arousal and fierce disapproval.

"What were you told to do?" he whispered roughly.

She frowned she thought back to his order. "To...touch," she whispered back, her own voice weak and wavering,

"I'm sorry," Liz mumbled, amazed that she could speak at all when there was no breath in her lungs. She hated her own weakness as tears slid down both cheeks, one slithering into the corner of her mouth, giving her a taste of her own fear.

"Remember," he said. Remember that Max was in charge and she was to obey. So simple, and so impossible, all at once.

"Use your mouth," Max told Liz.

Liz felt the root of his cock pressing the skin of her mouth, then released him on a moan, only to slide her tongue, flat, and hot, Max's balls. She slipped one into her mouth, cupping her tongue beneath it, cradling it in heat and moisture, sucking delicately, then honored the other with the same.

"No.....no more," he rasped finally, as she allowed one heavy sac to slide from her tongue. His hand came down to covers her as she stroked him.

Frowning, Liz rose to her feet, seeing the way he raised his brows at her, waiting for her obedience. She sat on the bed as he ordered.

"Now," he demanded. "Touch yourself."

"Cum for me," Max whispered, leaning back, his ass against the wall. He continued stroking his cock and the sight was nearly enough to make her cum without stimulation.

Liz kept her face turned toward Max, watching. Her left hand slid up to her breast, plucking delicately at the nipple; her right glided down against her inner thigh. Even the fact that she knew, in the back of her mind, that she must look horrid did not lessen her desire to give him anything he wanted. Or the excitement of watching him pleasure himself while watching her.

Her fingers slipped in her cunt.

"Yes," Max murmured to her. "That's right. Take pleasure. And while you do, you know that you are giving it as well."

The words made Liz hotter; wetter, if that were possible.

"Do you know what it does to me, to have you like this?" Max whispered. "To have you under my control...to have you giving to me alone?"

The harsh, masculine moan he made when she whimpered, writhing in pleasure, on the bed, was proof enough. She felt every nerve in her body snap and sizzle with electricity.

"You're so beautiful," he rasped.

Liz exploded. Back arching hard off the bed, the words pushed her into the bright abyss where blood imploded and her ears rang and body pulsed, writhing uncontrollably in orgasm. She lay there, spasming, gasping for breaths, as her pleasure rose, broke and ebbed away, and her fingers slowed and her cunt wept; she felt the hot slide of a thick drop of fluid down the channel between her ass cheeks.

Max did not speak again. Instead, he walked toward her, putting one knee on the bed between her thighs, his hands taking her own and holding them above her head. When he left them there, Liz did not draw them back again. Instead, she looked into his face, her chest still heaving for breath.

Liz watched Max's eyes as they raked down her body, felt his hands as they followed suit, touching her hair, her face, her throat and shoulders. When he cupped her breasts, Liz's back arched as if she'd cum once again, and she bit her lower lip, whimpering. He held her breasts, his thumbs between them, then slide his right down her belly. Liz closed her eyes, horrified and ashamed of her body. Max murmured some soft sound that soothed her soul, and slid one finger down along her wet, swollen cunt lips.

"Mine," Max whispered, so softly she almost didn't hear him. Then he bent down, sliding his hands from her breasts to her back, pressing her shoulder blades up toward him; taking one contracted nipple into his mouth.

Liz bit back a scream.

Max's mouth started at her breasts, gently nibbling, licking, sucking, making Liz feel as if she were the universe and he her child, taking of her body to live.

Liz felt alive.

Max pressed the head of his cock into her, holding himself in check with just that swollen, thick part of him inside her, and Liz bucked, wanting more. Max denied her, putting his mouth to her ear.

"Mine," he whispered, and then he was inside her, fully, slamming himself into her in one fast, fluid motion, her passage so wet that she gave no resistance, except to stretch to accommodate his size.

"Mine," he rasped again, withdrawing and plunging again, making her cry out at the pleasure. He took her, beautifully, deeply. Quickly. "Say it," he whispered. "Tell me."

"Yours," she breathed, neck arching, wrapping her arms around him. "I'm yours."

He buried his face in her throat, pressing hard into her body, and came, pouring himself into her in hot, possessive streams. He trembled on top of her, groaned into her skin, and gave of himself, to her.

They lay sated on the bed, his body on top of hers, for long, long silent minutes, and then Max rose above her, his face just above hers, and he kissed her mouth.

"I love you so much Liz, or should I say my slave." Max told her.

Ok I am back and I hope you like the new part. To find out what happens next keep checking. I will be updating soon and sorry about the long wait.