posted on 11-Mar-2002 6:18:04 PM by ChaosTheory
You may have seen this story somplace else. I posted under a diffrent name though. I have 13 of the chapters already so if you read and like reply and if you've read the unfinished version someplace else I will be putting the new chapters here.

P.S- I'n also going to be changing things a bit and if you've already read, please don't give away the storyline.


Liz escaped into the bathroom and lowered her head. Her boyfriend's family was so suffocating, and his sister, there wasn't a word for what she was.

"If I wasn't destined," but she cut that thought.

She was and there was nothing she could about it. She heard someone calling her name through the door and leaned back against it. She put her patented smile in place, "time to go get that Oscar," she said to her reflection, but she couldn't shake the feeling that something was going to happen... *something* that would change everything.

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Max drove to the bus station at a frantic pace. He had to leave now! He looked at his busted bloody knuckles on the wheel and his bloodied nose in the window and felt his resolve strengthen. He parked in front of the station and left his car, he didn't care what the city would do with it, and ran to the teller window.

When she saw the bloody, slightly dirty, handsome man she knew it was none of her business and asked, "name and location?" but he seemed to be far away.

'I have to go to the place I've been dreaming,' he thought anxiously, 'it's pulling me more than ever now.'

He then noticed the woman looking at him and focused on the words she'd just asked him. "Maxwell Guerin and Roswell, New Mexico," he replied.

After the party they went to the Crashdown. Micheal and Isabel Evans on one side Elizabeth Parker on the other.

"But Mich..."

"No Liz," he cut her off.

"We're getting married, leaving Earth and there's nothing you can do about it," he said echoing her earlier words.

He then sat back with a smug smile on his face and she felt he knew that already though.

"Don't fight it," he said in a calming tone, "it's destiny... you won't win, it always does."


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posted on 11-Mar-2002 6:46:24 PM by ChaosTheory

Well, you did say please*big*



Max stepped from the bus into the bright sunlight and squinted his eyes. It'd been a while since he'd seen such direct sunlight. He began walking and since he didn't have anywhere to go he decided to go and eat.

Just then he came upon a resturant named the Crashdown. He pulled up his jeans which immediately fell back down and went inside.

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Liz was in the back of the restaurant doing inventory when Maria ran in looking flushed but smiling.

"Go check out who just came in," she said cryptically.

"I can't, I have work to do," Liz said then tried to start working again.

Maria grabbed her arm and pulled her to her feet, "Go and look," she said.

Something about the look in her eyes made Liz take notice, "O.k," she finally agreed and went to look through the glass in the door.

Liz's mouth dropped open when she saw him.

"Cute huh," Maria mumbled looking at her nails.

"More then cute," Liz whispered back.

Maria laughed and left Liz to ogle the new boy. He was wearing a white T shirt and Blue jeans. She could tell he had a good body too and not just from the fitted shirt he wore. and yes she was staring that hard, But because his jeans were low and she could see his hip bones. She loved that.

She ran for the kitchen and leaned on the pick-up table. She felt herself starting to swoon and tried to stop. That was princesses in fairytales.

"Excuse me," a male voice said from directly in front of her, and there he was.

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He saw a girl in a sea foam green outfit run into the kitchen. He felt his breath catch, she was the most beautiful girl he'd ever seen. He walked up to her and got her attention.

"Hi," he said trying to make conversation, but she just had this horrified look on her face.

"What happened to you," she asked with concern.

He was taken aback by that, why did she care, she didn't know him. Before he could say anything she was around the counter with a damp rag and trying to touch him with it.

He tensed and leaned back involuntarily. He wasn't used to this much attention.

She looked shocked then her face softened into a shy smile.

"You have blood on you," she said.

Max looked down at his bloody knuckles and remembered the night he left New York. She pushed his legs apart and leaned farther into him. She wiped the blood off his face then ran her thumb over his upper lip, all done.

She then looked up into his eyes.

"Well aren't we cozy," Micheal said.


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posted on 11-Mar-2002 8:41:29 PM by ChaosTheory
I'm spoiling you guys and I really shouldn't do this but since you all asked so nicely heres chapter 3. Now this is really the last update for today, No matter how nicely you talk to me now I will not update again today. Maybe late tonight or tomorrow, but not today so savor this.The smile faded from the waitresses face at the guy in the doorways voice. She turned around slowly, "Hey Micheal."

"Who's your boyfriend?" Micheal asked surveying Max with a sarcastic, snobbish, eye.

"You know very well he's not my boyfriend, and if you wanna know his name ask him," Liz said in an annoyed manner.

Micheal's gaze turned toward her angrily.

"Well," he asked Max, still looking at Liz.

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Max had been watching their exchange since this guy came in and was becoming angrier and angrier. It was obvious that behind her annoyed stance she was scared and this guy was obviously her boyfriend but he didn't seem to notice. That made him hate him.

"My name's Max," he said cutting into their staring contest.

He grabbed Liz's upper arm gently and asked for a shake. She looked at him with a grateful smile and walked out without a glance at Micheal.

"What's your name," Max asked after a long uncomfortable silence, Micheal told him and they slipped back into same intense quiet as before until Liz came back.

"That'll be a dollar nineteen," she said and Max went into his pocket.

He pulled out some change and began to count. He was embarassed. For some reason he didn't want this girl to see that he was totally broke. He counted up to 98 cents. "Um... I don't..."

But Micheal cut him off with harsh laughter. "Here," he said and threw a dollar on the counter.

"If you don't have any money, I suggest you don't order food," Micheal said with a superior glare.

Max felt his face heat up in shame and he glanced at Liz and as their eyes met she looked away. He got angry. He never wanted anyone to look at him that way. He didn't want anyone to make *her* look at him that way. He got up with a angry sneer.

"I don't need your money," he said through clenched teeth. He turned toward Liz and his expression softened.

"Can I pay you back," he asked.

"Of course," she said and was rewarded by his soft smile.

"I don't think that's good for business," Micheal said offhandedly.

Max turned toward him aggressively but stopped. This was her boyfriend and she was nice to him. Max glared at him and stalked out.

"Really isn't good," Micheal said refering to his earlier comment.

"He said he was coming back and I believe him."

"Yeah right," Micheal tsked. "He's a thug and they never pay their dues. I bet you he never shows his face again."

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posted on 11-Mar-2002 8:42:30 PM by ChaosTheory
Double Post Sorry!

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posted on 12-Mar-2002 7:06:49 PM by ChaosTheory
Look you guys here the link. Since most of you already have seen or are going to find the story in other places I'm giving the link to those who don't know so they can catch up. I'm not mad though, I was trying to hurry this aong myself. Read and reply if you want the really brand new chapter 14, I want alot of replies too!!!!!

http://jessifanfic.com/roswell/MissUnderstood/ThugsPassion.htm



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posted on 17-Sep-2002 6:06:41 PM by ChaosTheory
You know.

I've been thinking about this story for awhile now. It was one of the first that I've written and I really like the storyline. It's just that I have so many other stories to update. I think I may start this again though.