posted on 22-Sep-2001 12:44:26 PM by sydniepaige
Parts 1-9 are on the Repost Board.

The Arrangement
Part 10

At five minutes to 7 AM, Liz entered the breakfast room. She was dressed in a white skirt that hit her mid thigh and a light blue, silk tank that she was obviously not wearing a bra under.

"Where are you going so early this morning ... dressed like ... that?" Her mother asked pointedly.

Liz gave Nancy an obvious fake smile and spoke with fake enthusiasm in her voice. "I'm spending the day with my NEW boyfriend. I figure since I'm being whored out, I might as well dress the part."

"You are very close to being grounded, young lady!" Jeff sternly said not looking up from his paper.

"Good, than I won't have to go out with Max!" The doorbell rang. "Oops! Too late, gotta go. Don't wait up!"

Jeff put the paper down and looked at his wife. "She's testing us. She figures that if she starts acting like this, we'll call off the arrangement."


Penny opened the door. She almost drooled.

Max was wearing the tightest pair of jeans she'd ever seen and a VERY tight, thick, cotton, white t-shirt.

"Good morn...morning, Mr. Evans." She barely got out.

"And a very good morning it is. Is my beautiful girlfriend ready?" He asked with a sexy smile.

"I...I'll go see."

"No need Penny." Liz appeared. "I'm right here."

Max moved to Liz and greeted her with a searing kiss.

Penny turned red from embarrassment as the kiss continued. She excused herself and quietly left the room.

When the kiss broke, Liz smiled. "What if my parents had seen that?"

"We'd just tell then we're trying to see how convincing we can be. We obviously fooled Penny." He raised his eyebrow at her. "You ready to go?"

"Yeah." She grabbed her purse and held Max's hand as he lead her outside to his ... JEEP?

He helped her in and then got in himself.

"This is a very ... interesting mode of transportation, Max. Where'd you get it?"

He smiled. "It was my fathers in high school. He gave it to me 2 years ago and told me I could do what I wanted to with it. I finished it last week."

"This is finished?" She said outloud before she could stop herself.

Max laughed. "Let me rephrase. It's running. Besides, I thought we'd be more visable in this. You know, shock the town."

Liz gave him a weak smile. "And in this ... thing, they will definitely be shocked."

He put his hand on hers. "Wanna shift my stick?"

"Excuse me?"

He placed her hand on the gear shift and shoved it down. "Jeez, someone's mind's in the gutter."


Isabel came down to breakfast in a bitchy mood.

"What's the matter, sweetheart? Did you and Alex have a fight?" Diane asked her daughter.

"No, Mom. Alex and I are fine. Max and I are a different story. Sometimes I can't believe that he and I shared the same womb!" She sounded disgusted.

Phillip shook his head. "What happened this time." He sighed.

Isabel sat and took a sip of her juice, then looked at Diane. "It's the whole Elizabeth Parker thing. First you and Daddy tell me that they're dating and that you and the Parkers approve, and then last night when I confronted him, he actually told me that he's falling in love with that bitch!"

"Language, Isabel!"

She humphed. "Sorry Mother!"

"Isabel, Elizabeth isn't our first choice for your brother either, but you have to admit that she's a vast improvement over Tess. At least Elizabeth knows what's appropriate behavior at social functions." Diane readied herself for her daughter's explosive reaction.

"Tess is my BEST FRIEND, Mother! It's not HER fault her family lives on the other side of town!"

Diane clasped her hands in front of her and rested them on the table. "Are you forgetting that I'M from the other side of town as well, Isabel? The girl has absolutely NO social skills. Other than her promiscuity, I don't know what your brother saw in her for so long."

Isabel wiped her mouth and threw her linen napkin on the table. She stood up. "What the HELL is wrong with this family?!" She stormed out of the room.

Phillip smiled at his wife. "That went well."

Diane nodded. "My thought exactly."


The town the university was located in was two and a half hours from Roswell. They rolled in a little after 9:30 AM.

"Okay, I just realized the best part of going to school here." Liz said with a smile on her face.

"And what's that?" Max questioned.

Liz's smile grew wider. "Our parents won't just be dropping by on a whim."

"That's very true. However, I can guarantee that Phillip and Diane will be here on the weekends that there are home games."

Liz was about to make a witty comment, but instead she became mesmerized. "Oh my God! Max, pull over!"

He did as she asked. "Are you okay?"

"Yeah." She pointed to a very large house with a FOR SALE sign in front of it and another that read OPEN HOUSE TODAY. "Let's go look at it."

"Liz, we're supposed to be looking for apartments." He reminded her.

She pouted. "Please?"

He sighed. "Oh why not."

Max got out of the Jeep and then helped Liz out. They walked to the house hand and hand.

Ad they entered the house, the Realtor handed them each a floor plan of the two story house.

"If you have any questions, whatsoever, please feel free to ask." The red head with a name tag that read Carol, told the young couple.

"Thanks." Max winked at her.

Liz rolled her eyes at Max's flirtatious manner and looked at the paper in her hand. "Max, look at this!"

"What, baby?"

"The second floor has four 1 bedroom apartments. Each has a living room, a kitchen like area with a mini-fridge, sink and microwave, a bedroom and a bathroom. This floor has a full-size kitchen, gameroom, 3 bathrooms, formal dining room, breakfast room, 2 guest rooms. This is perfect for us."


She wrapped her arms around his waist and looked up at him with her big brown eyes. "You, me, Maria and Michael." She trailed her finger down his chest.

"Have you been talking to Michael lately?"

She shook her head. "No, I've been with you. Why?"

Max chuckled. "It's just that he had a somewhat similar idea. The only difference was that Izzy and Alex were included."

Liz stood on her tip toes and kissed him sweetly. "Max, not only does your sister HATE me, she's Tess' best friend. I don't think that we could survive 4 years under the same roof."

He held her tighter. "I completely understand. Let's go look around and if we like what we see, we'll talk to 'Red'."


At noon, Isabel was waiting to meet Tess at the CrashDown Cafe for lunch. As usual, Tess was late.

She showed up at 12:25. "Sorry Iz, I was ... detained."

Isabel shook her head and rolled her eyes. "Kyle?"

Tess sighed. "No offense, I mean, I know Max is your twin and all, but Kyle Valenti has so much more..."

The tall blond interrupted. "Max is kind of what I wanted to talk to you about. ... I think when you broke up with him, you really fucked him up."

Tess laughed. "What's wrong? Can't he find anyone to suck his dick now that I have Kyle giving me what I want?"

"Tess, I'm not joking. Max is dating Elizabeth Parker!"

The short, overdeveloped blond laughed again. "Talk about a sexless couple. From what Kyle's told me, she's as frigid as your dear brother."

"Dammit! This isn't fucking funny! My parents are actually condoning this! ... Max told me that he's falling in LOVE with her! They've only been dating since Friday, for God's sake!"

Tess' face went blank. "He ... Max ... said he was in love with her? *In the two years that we were together, he never used the word love with me* She composed herself and appeared as if this didn't upset her. "Oh well, I'm sure she's just his rebound."


"Besides, I know what Max likes and there's no WAY that she'd EVER do for him what I did. I mean, her tits just aren't big enough to get his dick in between." Tess said smugly.

Isabel just looked at her friend. "I really doubt that's where he'll be putting it."


"Max, this place is amazing! We have to live here." Liz was jumping up and down.

He brushed the hair away that had fallen in her eyes. "Let's go talk to the Realtor and see what they're asking."

When they found her, she didn't look happy.

Carol was a very attractive woman in her late twenties. She was professionally dressed and was trying very hard to hide her disappointment that no one had made an offer yet.

"Excuse us. We were wondering what the asking price is."

Carol smiled. "Do you know someone who's interested?"

"We are, actually." Max told her.

"Oh." Her face fell. "The whole house is for sale. There's nothing for rent."

Max smiled. "That's why we're here. The two of us and our best friends are moving here in August. This place is perfect."

Carol shrugged. "I'm sorry, but unless you have a huge trust fund or rich parents, I'm afraid it's out of your league. It's $750,000."

The couple never blinked.

"We have both." Liz told her. "Well, technically I won't have my trust fund until next month, but I'm sure between the two of us we can get the money needed."

"You're serious?" Carol asked with hope in her voice.

Max stuck out his hand. "Maxwell Evans. This is my girlfriend, Elizabeth Parker."

Carol shook his hand. "Evans? Are you related to Phillip and Diane Evans?"

"They're my parents."

The red head sighed and then a genuine smile went across her face. "I met them last year at an alumni event. Your mother is an incredibly sweet woman."

"I agree." Liz said leaning on Max and remembering the comfort that Diane had tried to give her when they were told about the 'arrangement'.

"Have you seen the backyard yet?" Carol said enthusiastically.

Max and Liz shook their heads.

"It's wonderful! There's a heated pool and jacuzzi, a basketball court, and a miniature golf course. Each owner has added their own personality to it."

Liz pulled her phone from her purse. "I'll call my parents and you call yours. If they don't agree to buy it, we can always use your trust fund and when I get mine, I'll pay you half."

Max kissed her and then grabbed his phone from his hip.

Carol watched the teenagers dial their phones. *Oh thank God! I'm finally selling this house. Now I can keep my agency*

Approximately 10 minutes later, Max and Liz closed their phones.

"My father said he'd call me back as soon as he contacted yours."

Max put his arms around her. "That's what my dad said."


An hour and a half later, the Parkers, the Evans, Caitlyn Guerin and Amy DeLuca walked through the door.

"Where's Elizabeth?" Jeff asked not seeing his daughter.

Max was stunned to see everyone. "Um ... she went to the bathroom. ... How did you get here so fast?"

"Son, you and I got our pilot's license together. Do you happen to remember that little purchase we made shortly after?"

"The Wind Angel." Max said shaking his head in embarrassment remembering the Evans private 10 seater plane.

Amy cleared her throat. "I'll go track down Elizabeth and let her know we're here."

Carol stepped up. "Let me show you the way."

After they were out of earshot, Phillip spoke. "What's going on?"

*Think fast Max* "Elizabeth was taunting me with the fact that she gets to live in an apartment off-campus. I told her that the dorms were a hell of a lot less lonely and that she'd be missing out on the whole college experience because her parents had to buy her way in, but couldn't get her into the dorms. She bet me fifty bucks that she could find the perfect place and if she did, I'd have to live there too. If she couldn't, then she'd have to drive the Jeep to school everyday for the rest of the year. I thought it was an easy way to humiliate her. Needless to say, the second she laid eyes on this place I knew I was doomed." *Not bad for something off the top of your head, Max my boy*


As she walked out of the bathroom, Liz noticed a door that she figured must lead down to the basement. She moved towards the door as if she were being drawn to it.

She turned the knob and opened the door. She left it opened to light her way down the steps. She found the light switch halfway down.

Liz gasped when she saw what was down there.


"Where could she be?" Amy asked.

"It's quite a large place." Carol told her. "She could have gotten easily turned around."

Amy noticed the opened door and the light coming from it. "Where does that lead?"

"It's a basement studio." Carol replied.

"Music studio?" Amy inquired.

Carol shook her head. "It's a dance studio. The last owner converted it. She was a very talented dancer. She taught private classes in there. Her mother became very ill and she had to sell the house in order to move closer to her family."

They both heard the music begin.

Amy smiled. "Would you please retrieve the rest of our party and bring them here. After the Mrs. Parker sees this, I can guarantee the sale and a huge bonus."


Nancy was shaking her head. "I really don't think that this is such a good idea. What would happen if the tabloids got a hold of this?"

Max looked at her with an annoyed expression. "They'd think that Elizabeth and I are a real couple."

Caitlyn spoke up. "I agree. It's a great idea, Nancy. RBS will have absolutely no doubts that a truce between your two families has been called."

"Excuse me." Carol said as she entered the room. "If you could all follow me, the other woman in your group wishes for you to join her."

Without speaking, they all followed her.

Amy met them at the door of the studio. "You have to see this." She told them.

They quietly walked down the steps and stood out of line of Liz's vision.

Liz had her shoes off and was dancing to a beautiful piece of music that no one recognized.

Max was mesmerized. He had seen her dance before, but this was different. This time, she was dancing for herself.

Diane noticed the look on her son's face. *He looks like he really could be falling in love with her*

Nancy had tears of guilt in her eyes. *How could we have made our daughter give up her opportunity to attend NYDA*

As the music came to an end and Liz finished her performance, she was startled by the applause that erupted.

"You scared me!" Liz said panting and trying to catch her breath.

"That was amazing." Max couldn't help saying.

"I agree, Elizabeth. You are tremendously talented." Diane told her.

"Thank you Max, Mrs. Evans. What are all of you doing here?"

Jeff walked closer to his daughter. "We were intrigued by you phone calls, so Phillip flew us up here."

"Oh." Liz took a deep breath. "So, what do you think?"

Phillip stepped forward. "I think we should have a look around the place, make sure there's nothing structurely wrong with it and then have a meeting with Caitlyn and discuss making an offer."

*YES* Went through the minds of Max, Liz and Carol.



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posted on 22-Sep-2001 7:38:04 PM by sydniepaige
Okay, so I get the feeling you liked this part. *smile* I am really enjoying the feedback. It makes me feel like writing faster. It's gonna be a busy week for me, but I'll try to get part 11 up as soon as I can. I'm working on it as we speak. Keep on making my ego inflate!


Always be nice. If not for yourself, just to annoy everybody.
posted on 23-Sep-2001 7:07:52 PM by sydniepaige
I'm almost done with part 11. I should have it done by tomorrow. Keep leaving the incredible feedback and you just might get 2 parts this week! *cool* Back to writing!


Always be nice. If not for yourself, just to annoy everybody.
posted on 27-Sep-2001 8:14:47 PM by sydniepaige
Just posting part 11 on this board.

The Arrangement
Part 11

As Liz, Max and the adults were leaving the house, Carol put a SALE PENDING sign on top of the FOR SALE sign. Then she removed the OPEN HOUSE sign from the yard.

The adults got into the limo that was waiting for them and Max and Liz got into the jeep. They were meeting at The Stratford, which was the town's most elite restaurant.

The new couple decided to stop and buy some decent clothes, so they told their parents that they'd meet them in two hours.


Liz looked at herself in the full length mirror that was in the dressing room of the boutique she and Max found. She was wearing a cream colored, linen skirt and jacket with a green silk blouse and cream colored shoes. She had pulled her hair up in a french twist and had reapplied her makeup.

There was a knock on the door. "Sweetheart, we have to be there in 10 minutes. Are you ready?" Max asked.

She walked over the door and opened it. "What do you think? Too stuffy?"

Max was speechless. His only response was a huge smile.

Liz winked at him. "The feeling's mutual. Only you could get a suit tailored in an hour and a half."

He grabbed her hand and kissed her cheek, leading her out into the private viewing area.

The young designer handed Max and Liz their credit cards and receipts for them to sign. Then she handed them the bags with their other clothes in them. "Thank you so much for your business."

Max smiled. "Thanks for the rush on getting them tailored so quickly."

"Yes, thank you. You definitely have new clients when August comes along." Liz told her.

The designer smiled and waved to the couple as they left.

When they walked outside, Liz was surprised to see the top of the jeep. "When did you do this?"

He opened the door and helped her in. "I actually paid a couple of guys to do it for me. I didn't want to get all sweaty."

Max went around to the driver's side, started the engine and headed for the Stratford.


In the two hours that they were waiting for their children, Philip and Diane showed the rest of their party around town.

"It was right ... there, under that tree, is where Philip asked me to marry him our sophomore year."

Amy spoke up. "It's hard to believe that the two of you grew up in Roswell and went to the same school, but never met."

Philip shrugged. "Our families didn't run in the same circles. It wasn't until we met here that her father struck it rich when they found oil on their land. After that, they encouraged me to get to know her." He kissed his wife's hand. "I sure am glad I listened to them."

Caitlyn was sitting quietly in the limo, almost in a trance.

"Caity?" Nancy attempted to get her attention. She gently nudged her. "Hey, what planet are you on?"

Caitlyn shook out of her daze. "Sorry, I guess I got sucked into the past with all of the college memories. ... Is it almost time to meet the kids? I'm starved."

Philip looked at her and smiled as he pushed the intercom to the driver. "The Stratford."

"Yes sir." The driver replied.


Max and Liz walked into the restaurant hand and hand.

"How may I help you?" The snooty head waiter asked.

"Max Evans and Elizabeth Parker with the Evans party."

The man became friendlier all of a sudden. "Ah, yes. The rest of your party was just seated at our best table. I will have Marco show you." He snapped his fingers twice and an incredibly gorgeous, young man in his early twenties responded. "Marco, please escort Mr. Evans and Miss Parker to the Evans table."

"Yes sir." Marco bowed his head and then helf his arm out to Liz, but she refused.

"You may show us the way, but my boyfriend can escort me." She held Max's arm like he was her posession.

Marco nodded. "As you wish."

As they walked up to the table, Jeff and Philip stood as Max pulled out Liz's chair for her.

"The two of you look incredible!" Amy complimented.

"Thank you." They said in unison.

Dian smiled. "Well, it seems that you two are getting along a little better."

"Whatever." Max said, lookinf at his menu.

Liz rolled her eyes. "Yeah, like I'm enjoying it. The only good things that have happened today are I have fifty more dollars in my pocket and if everything works out, my own studio for four years."

The waiter approached the table. "Good afternoon. My name is Kevin and I'll be serving you. May I get you something to drink?"

Philip spoke to Max first. "Would you mind flying home?"

"Sure." Max answered. "But who'll drive the jeep?" He looked at Liz.

"Don't look at me! I'm not driving that piece of sh ... that thing!"

Diane laughed. "I'll drive it. It won't be the first time."

"With that settled, I would like a bottle of Dom." He looked around to everybody. "Will you join me?"

All of the adults decided to share the expensive bottle with Philip except for Diane.

"I'll have a Club Soda." She ordered.

He looked to the kids. "Anf for you two?"

"Arsenic?" Liz smiled.


"We'll both have Cherry Cokes." Max told him.

"I'll have those out to you in a few minutes." The waiter left.

"That was uncalled for, Elizabeth." Nancy chastised her daughter.

Liz ignored her mother and looked over her menu.


Since there was only room enough for five people in the jeep, Amy headed to the campus airport in the limo.

"I have to commend you on an excellent job of deception. I especially loved it when you asked Max if he needed a high chair when Diane wiped the pesto off of his chin." Amy laughed.

Liz took a bow and then leaned back on Max. "She actually beat me to the punch. I was about to say how embarrassing it was to be seen with such a sloppy eater, but when she licked her thumb and wiped his face, I couldn't resist."

Max kissed the side of her head. "The two of you can stop the torture any time now."

"Sorry, sweetie." She kissed him.


During the flight home, Liz couldn't get over how incredibly sexy Max looked.

When they landed, Max taxied the plane to it's spot and then proceeded doing his post flight check.

As Amy went to call for the car, Liz followed him into the hanger.


He looked at her. "Hmm?"

"Do you happen to have one of those long, white scarves?"

"No, why?" He asked.

She shrugged. "Just having a little pilot fantasy."

He gave her his sexy half smile. "I'll get one.



NOTE: I'm still working on 12. I'll try and have it up sometime this weekend. ~~ Sydnie
posted on 28-Sep-2001 10:48:42 PM by sydniepaige
Thanks for all the wonderful feedback! All of your questions will be answered in time. Until then, enjoy! ~~ Sydnie

Part 12 NC-17

Liz walked into her bedroom to find her best friend lying on her bed, reading a magazine.

"Hey, Maria! When did you guys get back?"

Maria sat up. "Uh uh! I wanna know how you guys pulled it off?"

Liz looked innocent. "What?"

"My mother just informed me that she WILL be able to buy me a car for graduation because we're going to be living in the same big ass house ... with the guys!"

The brunette smiled. "Oh, that."

"Oh that? OH THAT?" Maria stood on the huge bed. This is SO fucking incredible! I mean, first of all you're being FORCED to date the guy you've been in love with since I've known you, then you're FORCED to change your school choices, now you're going to be living with the guy 200 miles away from your parents and taking you BEST friend and her boyfriend along for the ride. I owe you like, my first born or something, right?"

Liz laughed. "We'll discuss payment at a later date. The parentals haven't even purchased the dream house yet. BUT, I think that if the dads don't buy it, the moms DEFINITELY will. My mother was sold when she saw the studio."

"I am SO excited! We are going to have the BEST time of out lives!" Maria said jumping up and down.

"And get an education." Liz added.

The blond flopped down on the bed. "Well, there's that too."

Liz's phone rang.

"Watch it be Max." Maria told her.

"Hello?" Liz answered in a sweet tone.

"It's your mother. That contraption broke down before we got a mile down the road. We've all decided to stay here for the night. If you need anything, call Amy. We'll be back tomorrow."

Liz smiled. "Oh, how dreadful." She said with a smile on her face. "I sure hope you're making Mr.Evans pay since it IS Max's gas powered deathtrap."

"Through the nose, dear! ... Remember to take your dance bag with you to school tomorrow. You have to leave directly after school for your rehearsal."

Liz rolled her eyes. "Yes, Mother. I'll remember. Talk to you tomorrow." She hung up the phone before Nancy said another word.

"What's up?" Maria asked curiously.

"You're spending the night. My parents, Max's and Michael's mom are stuck because the jeep broke down and their gonna spend the night there. We're having a party!"

Maria shook her finger at Liz. "On a school night, young lady?"

Liz chuckled. "Like it's the first time. Come on, We are out of high school in a month. It's just going to be the first of many pre-grad functions."

"Ya know, since you've been dating Max these last few days, you've become a wild woman." Maria shook her head.

"And I'm having the time of my life!"


Max knocked on his sister's door.

"Come in."

He entered the room. "Hey, Mom and Dad are away for the night and so are the Parkers. Elizabeth is having a party. You're invited and I'd like for you to go."

She sighed.

"Isabel, look, it will really mean a lot to me. I know that you don't particularly like her, but everyone's going to be there."

"Fine!" She huffed. "Now run along so I can get ready."

He turned to leave, then faced her again. "Thanks, Iz." He left.

"Everybody, huh? Hmm, I wonder if Tess is going. I guess I should call and find out."


Just about every senior at West Roswell was in or around Liz's pool. No one cared that there was a slight chill in the air. The booze was flowing and the music was blaring.

Liz was wearing a red string bikini that was driving Max insane. Especially when they started dancing closely.

He groaned.

Her arms tightened around him. "Whacha thinkin' 'bout?"

"How beautiful you are ... and how lucky I am to be holding you in my arms and not care whos sees."

She blushed and began playing with the back of his hair. "You're not the only lucky one."

Max leaned down and kissed her. They were so involved with each other, that they didn't notice who walked up to them.

"Oh my GOD! I thought Isabel was on drugs when she told me that the two of you were together. I guess I had the wrong twin."

Max and Liz held onto each other.

"What do you want, Tess?" Max asked.

She giggled. "I was just wondering how you get off now days. I mean, she's to prim to suck you, and let's face it, her tits, they're a little small, don't ya think?"

"For your information you bleached blond, skanky whore,Max loves my breast! What's the saying, 'More than a mouthful is a waste'? And by the way, he doesn't HAVE to worry about GETTING OFF! You see, he cums EVERY time he makes love to me. In fact, before we were interrupted us, we were about to go up to my room and fuck to our heart's content. So if you'll excuse us."

Liz grabbed Max's hand and led him into the house, leaving Tess standing there with her mouth hanging opened.


"So, what do you think about us living together in the Fall?" Michael asked his girlfriend.

They had left the party shortly after it started and were in the viewing room cuddled up and watching 'Braveheart', again.


"Of course."

"I'm a little scared." He was about to say something, but she placed her finger over his lips. "What happens if you think I have too many unusual habits or I'm too flaky?"

Michael pulled her onto his lap. "Maria, what did I tell you last night?"

Maria stroked his face. "You told me that you want to marry me and spend the rest of our lives together."

"Exactly. I love you ... even with your flaky, unusual quirky habits. Maria, you're my universe."

Her mouth quickly molded to his.


Amy stepped back into the hallway and wiped the tears from her eyes. It wasn't that she was sad, it was just the opposite. She knew that her daughter had found the person who would love her and let no harm come to her for the rest of her wife.

She composed herself and entered the room Michael and Maria were in. "Hey, you two. I want to talk to you."

Michael clicked off the movie andslowly turned the lights up by remote.

"What's up, Mom?" Maria scooted off of Michael's lap. Amy sat down next to her. "I want to set some ground rules before you move in with each other."


She put her hand up to silence her daughter. "Maria, just hear me out. Rule number 1, you will attend ALL of your classes, 2, you will pass all of your classes, and 3..." She took a deep breath. " will NOT make me a grandmother until AFTER you graduate."

"Mrs. DeLuca, we're. uh ... we, uh..."

Amy laughed. "Save it Michael. I'm not blind, or deaf for that matter. I know you're having sex. I've even heard you on occasion." She sighed. "I was 18 when you were born, Maria and it was a struggle. Now I know that it would be a lot easier for you, but as much as I adore being your mother, I missed out on being young."

Maria grabbed her mother's hand. "Mommy, we're very responsible. I'm on birth control and we use condoms ... mostly."

"You were conceived on 'mostly'. "Amy chuckled. "Seriously, I just ... I want you to have everything."

Maria hugged Amy. "I love you, Mom."

"I love you too, baby girl."


Liz pulled Max into her bedroom and started laughing.

"Oh my GOD, that felt SO good! Did you see her face?"

Max took her into his arms. "Nope, I was too busy looking at yours. Do you have any idea how beautiful you are when you're possessive?"

She wrapped her arms around his neck. "Hey, she had her chance and blew it. You're mine now!"

"Liz, believe me. In my heart, I've always been yours." His lips met hers.

While they kissed, Liz walked Max towards her bed. When his legs backed into her bed, she pulled away from him and pulled away from and pushed him down.

She looked like an animal about to pounce on its prey.

"What are you doing?" He asked as he scooted back on the bed.

Liz climbed on her bed and crawled on top of him. Her bikini clad body hovered over his stomach. "I believe I told what's her name that we were going to fuck to our heart's content. You don't want me to be a liar do you?"

Max shook his head. "Oh no, we couldn't have that."

He ran his hands up her thighs to her waist. His fingers released the ties on either side of her bottoms, letting it drop on his stomach. He let his fingers slide down her stomach to the neatly kept patch of soft curls.

"Move up to my face." She looked down at him questioningly. He moved his hands to her ass and nudged her forward. "I want you to straddle my mouth."

Her boddy moved faster to its destination. She spread her legs wider to make it more comfortable for him.

Max's nose filled with her erotic scent. His tongue snacked out licked out and licked her folds.

"Mmm..." Her head fell back.

His hands moved from her butt to the lips of her pussy. With his left thumb and forefinger, he opened them and began to devour what was his and his alone. Then he inserted two fingers inside if her as his mouth sucked asnd pulled on her clit.

"Oh God YES!" Liz's body began to writhe. She fell forward, landing on her hands. This made Max suck harder. Within seconds, she came hard. He removed his fingers from her and drank her nector.



posted on 29-Sep-2001 10:38:43 AM by sydniepaige
I decided to add a little more to part 12 because this came to me in the middle of the night.

Part 12B

In the meantime...

Kyle walked up behind Tess and put his arms around her waist. "You look upset." He told her.

"That ex BITCH of yours was trying to convince me that she and Max are already having sex. Yeah right. She wouldn't know what to DO with a cock as big as his!"

Kyle shhok his head. "Just once, I would like NOT to talk about the size of Max Evans dick. I mean, shit, I hear enough about it in the locker room."

She turned to him. "You know, I like yours MUCH better, baby. I especially LOVE it when it's buried deep inside me. ... It just pisses me off that he's in her room as we speak, FUCKING the rich bitch!"

"Who's fucking what rich bitch?" Alex asked as he and Isabel approached them.

"Our exes." Kyle replied. "Supposedly they're upstairs in her room right now, going at it."

Tess suddenly got an evil grin. "I think I'm gonna have a little fun."

Isabel raised her eyebrow. "I know that look. What are you up to?"

She chuckled. "Calling their bluff."


Max remove her bikini top and then they got his trunks off together. They didn't notice the door crack open as she grabbed his long, thick member and guided it inside her heat.

They both groaned as they joined. Then slowly, Liz began to ride him as if he were one of her mother's horses.

Max held his hands up and hers entwined with his. She leaned forward and continued grinding against him.

"Oh God ... Liz ... aw FUCK!"

Liz moved faster. The friction of their bodies was making them both of them dizzy.

"Ooh ... mmm yeah ... ooh..."

"Cum for me baby!" Max coaked her.

That's all it took. Her rhythm became inconsistant. "Oh Max ... oh yes ... oh YEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSS!"

Max didn't give her time to gain control of her senses before he flipped them over and began pounding into her, searching for his own release.

Liz lifted her legs high on his back, wanting him to be as deep as he had just been.

Grunts and moans were coming from the lovers. Minutes laterm the room was filled with cries of ecstasy as they came together.

Max collapsed on top of Liz. He then looked into her eyes. "I love you so much, Elizabeth Parker."

Liz pushed his sweaty bangs off of his forehead. "I love you too, Maxwell Evans."

Tess burst into the room. "What the FUCK do you mean you love her?! Were were together for 2 years and you NEVER FUCKED me and you sure as HELL NEVER said that you LOVED me!"

The couple didn't even cover their their nakedness.

"It's because I NEVER LOVED YOU! Liz is EVERY thing I've EVER wanted! Now, if you would just leave, I can be alone with the woman I LOVE!"

Tears fell from Tess' eyes. "I HATE you! I hate the BOTH of you!"

"And I'm SO sad about that." Liz said sarcastically. Now leave!"

The blond ran from the room, slamming the door behind her.

Max and Liz looked at each other. "You're right. Telling her off really DOES feel good.



Edited by - sydniepaige on 09/30/2001 10:42:35
posted on 29-Sep-2001 8:40:20 PM by sydniepaige

I just wanted to answer a question that keeps coming up...

The only ones who know about the whole arrangement are all of the parents, Max, Liz, Michael and Maria. As of right now, Isabel and Tess have nothing to use against M&L. So, there won't be that kind of friction ... yet.

I want to thank
kittensfor giving me great phrasing to describe Tess. It's too perfect!

I should have the next part up tomorrow or Tuesday depending on my schedule.

Thank you
EVERYONE for the positive feedback. When I first started writing this, I didn't think anyone would like it. Now I'm not even near finshed and I'm planning a sequal.


Always be nice. If not for yourself, just to annoy everybody.
posted on 29-Sep-2001 10:57:32 PM by sydniepaige
This part just screamed at me to get posted tonight. It's a little short though.

Part 13

By the time they arrived at school Tuesday morning, the ENTIRE school knew that Max Evans and Elizabeth Parker were a VERY hot item.

They walked into Chemistry and were met by Dr. Benjamin, their teacher.

"Don't think that just because you're the star pitcher and you have that little dance thing coming up that you will be getting an extention on your project." He snapped.

Liz smiled and then handed him their project folder. "Have you EVER known me NOT to be responsible, Dr. Benjamin? You know how important school is to me."

"I know." The attractive man in this early thirties said with a smile. "I just like to act like an asshole sometimes. Makes me feel like a real teacher. Now, you two lovebirds go sit down so I can act like I know what I'm talking about."


After two classes without each other, the lunch bell finally rang.

Max was waiting at Liz's locker. When she saw him, her face lit up.

"That was a very long 2 hours." She said before giving him a kiss.

He pushed her hair behind her ear. "Yes, it was." He smiled. "At least we have our last 4 classes together."

Max took her books from her as she opened her locker. He put them in there for her, grabbed her brown lunch bag and headed outside.

After getting their drinks, they headed to the table they always sat. Everyone was there with one exception. No Tess.

Max and Liz sat across from Michael and Maria.

"Any word on the house?" Maria asked.

Liz shook her head. "Our dads are meeting with the contractor they hired to check out the house this afternoon. He inspectedit this morning to make sure that there is nothing structurely wrong with it. If it's okay, they're prepared to make an offer."

"Make an offer on what? What is she talking about, Max?" Isabel questioned her brother.

With everything that had happened in the last few days, he'd forgotten to tell his twin about a few changes.

"Oh, uh ... well, you see Iz, Liz is going to go to State in the Fall. Since all of the dorms are full, she and Maria were going to get an apartment, but when we drove down there yesterday to see what they have to offer, we found this house that would be perfect for the four of us."

Isabel crossed her arms under her large chest. "I'm not living with THEM!" She pointed to Liz and Maria.

"Good." Michael smiled. "Because you're not invited to, Izzy. I'm the fourth."

This pissed her off even more. "I'll be damned if you get to live off campus and I don't!" She looked at Kyle. "Where's Tess?"

"She said something about the sight of Max and Elizabeth making her sick so she went home. You wouldn't happen to know what that's all about, would you, Evans?"

Before Max could respond, Liz spoke up. "Yeah, your girlfriend's a voyeristic BITCH! She had the nerve to watch Max and I when we were in MY bedroom, and then started ranting about the fact that he never said he loved her during their ... relationship, but he says it to me."

Kyle's face dropped. "I knew she wasn't over you." He said quietly as he got up and left.

"Poor Kyle." Liz said with genuine compassion in her voice.

"Poor Kyle?" Isabel stood up. "Like you care! Thabks to your little STORY, he's probably going to break up with Tess. You are such a BITCH!"

She turned to walk away, but Max was already on her and spun her around. "Your little FRIEND watched me make love to my girlfriend last night, screamed at us for being in love with each other and for me never fucking her!"

Isabel pushed Max away from her and stormed into the school.

Alex stood up. "Sorry about that, you guys. I knew Tess was up to something ... Tess-like. I should have told her to leave you two alone." He headed the way his girlfriend had gone.

Max sat back down beside Liz. He put his arm around her and she leaned her head on him.

Maria clapped her hands together. "Well, that was the most fun you can have without having any fun."


After school, Max and Michael walked Liz and Maria to Liz's car.

Maria was going out to the studio and then driving the car back. Max was going to meet his love there for dinner and then stay until her rehearsal was over.

"I should be there no later than 6:30." He told her as he wrapped his arms around her. "Okay?"

Her arms went around his neck. "Have a wonderful practice. I love you."

He smiled. "I love you too."

Their lips found one another and a deep passionate kiss began.

Michael laughed and then turned to Maria. You drive safely and I'll see you after practice. You're still coming to my place for dinner, right?"

She held both of his hands. "7 o'clock. I wouldn't miss it. You do know that your mom invited my mom?"

He smiled. "Yeah, that was kind of my idea. After what your mom talked to us last night, I want both of our mothers to know exactly how we feel about each other and what our intentions are."

"And just what ARE our intentions?" She wiggled her eyebrows.

He kissed her sweetly. "To spend the rest of our lives together. Now, you'd better go. I've got practice."

"I love you."

He kissed her again. "I love you too." Michael then looked to his best friend. "I'd better break that up or Max and I are gonna have to run bases for and hour."

They moved over to Max and Liz.

"Maxwell!" He patted him on the back. "We got like 5 minutes to get to the field."

Max and Liz reluctantly parted.

"I'll see you in a few hours." Liz kissed him one last time.

"I can't wait." He said as Michael grabbed his arm, and pulled him away.

"Come on, loverboy." Michael bopped him on the head with his glove.

They took off and sprinted towards the baseball field.

Maria looked at Liz. "Come on, Chica. Let's go."

Liz sighed. "If we must."



posted on 2-Oct-2001 9:21:13 PM by sydniepaige
Part 14 NC-17

After practice, Max had showered, changed and hauled ass to the studio. The coach had decided to keep them 10 minutes longer so Max pulled into the parking lot at exactly 6:30.

He walked into the find Liz arguing with Trina.

"NO! Look Trina, after this performance I have one more recital and then I'm done here. I'm not teaching this summer."

"Am I interrupting?" Max's voice wafted across the room.

Trina threw her hands up in the air. "This is HIS doing, isn't it?"

Liz was beyond frustrated. Trina!" She put her hands over her face to calm herself down. "I'm taking the summer off because I haven't in fifteen years. This summer I want to be a normal 18 year old girl and party for 3 months before I start college."


"Look Trina, Max and I are going to get something to eat and then I will be back to rehearse 'Crazy'."

Trina shook her head. "Fine, whatever. Just don't be late." She turned and went into her office.


Max and Liz sat in his Porche in the studio parking lot after they had eaten.

"Four more days and I get to rest." She stretched and yawned then pulled her hair out of its tight bun.

Max ran his fingers through it, massaging her scalp.

"Mmm ... you're gonna put me to sleep."

He stopped. "Okay, that wasn't the result I was going for. I was kinda hoping it would turn you on."

She laughed. "Max, all you have to do is look at me and I get turned on." She put her hand on his thigh. "You know, we have 30 whole minutes before I have to be in there."

"There's not enough room in here, Liz."

Her hand moved up his thigh to the bulge in his jeans and he groaned.

"Are you forgetting how limber I am? Get out of the car and come around to my side" She told him.

Max looked at her questionly, but did as she said. She got out of the car as well.

"Now, move the seat back and get ... comfortable." When she said that, she unfastened his belt.

"What are you up to, Liz?" He asked with a crooked smile.

She unbuttoned his jeans. "Something I've wanted to do all day." She pushed his pants past his hips so his hardening cock would pop out. "Now, sit!"

"Yes ma'am." He saluted and sat in her seat.

Liz couldn't help but laugh, but then tried to compose herself. "Okay, now, lean the seat back as far as it will go."

His member was now very erect.

She licked her lips and the reached under her skirt between her legs and unsnapped the crotch. "I always knew this would be convenient."

Liz climbed in the car and shut the door. Very carefully, she positioned her heat above his throbbing rod.

"are you sure you want to do this here?" Max asked, just waiting to be sure.

Without a word, she plunged down on top of him.

Liz manuvered herself to where her pelvis was flat against his. She placed her hands on his chest and began moving her lower body against his.

Max could do nothing but allow her to have her way with him ... not that he was complaining.

"Oh FUCK Liz! Where'd you learn to do this?" His eyes rolled back in his head.

"Cos ... MO! Oh yeah ... ooh..."


Trina was looking up at the clock. She had seen Max's car pull into the lot at 7:30, but Liz hadn't come back in yet. She got up from her desk and walked over to her window. The car was still there, but the windows were fogged and it was rocking.

She picked up the phone and dialed a very familiar number.


Nancy and Diane were busy rearranging the seating for the dinner after the performance at the charity event in the Evans dining room. Nancy, being the chairperson for it, recruited Diane for the sake of appearences.

"So with your family, ours, Caitlyn and Michael, Amy and Maria and Trina, that's 12 at our table." Nancy said.

Diane laughed. "You know, I personally can't WAIT to see the looks on Roswell society's faces when we walk in together, and then sit together."

"Yes, well, let's just hope that our husbands don't blow it."

Nancy's phone rang. "Excuse me ... Hello?"

"Nancy, it's Trina. I was just wondering if you knew about Elizabeth's new boyfriend?"

"Of course I do. My daughter keeps nothing from me. What's this about?"

Trina took a deep calming breath. "First of all, Elizabeth informs me that she will NOT be participating in the summer dance program."

"I can understand that. She's wanting to have fun with her friends this summer."

"That's not all. At this very moment, your daughter and her boyfriend are having sex in his car in the parking lot of the studio."

Nancy's eyes grew. "Thank you, Trina. I appreciate you informing me about this." Nancy turned her phone off and looked at Nancy with sad eyes.

"What's wrong, Nancy?"

"Um, Trina just told me that our children are in the studio parking lot at this very moment having sex in your sons car."

Diane laughed. "I'm sorry, but I really don't think it's possible. Max has a 2-seater. It's physically impossible."

"Diane, my daughter's a dancer. She's very ... limber. Oh dear God!"

"I'm sorry, but I refuse to believe that after only a weekend, our children have a sexual relationship."

"Believe me, Mrs. Evans, they are. I saw it for myself." Tess said as she and Isabel intruded on the private conversation as the entered the room.


As Liz's movements became faster, Max could feel the familiar pressure building in his balls.

"Baby, I ... (gulp) can't ... hold it ... SHIT!"

When she felt the hot cum enter her body, she began to convulse with her own orgasm.

She collapsed on top of him. "WOW!"

"That was just..." Max started.

"WOW!" She repeated.

"Definitely." He looked at his watch. "Uh, baby, you're a little late."

She shook her head. "I don't want to go."

Max smiled. "Okay." He wrapped his arms around her and closed his eyes.

A few minutes later, there was a very loud knock on the window.


"What do you mean you saw it?" Nancy asked.

Tess folded her arms under her massive breasts. "Last night there was a party next door. I walked in on them while they were screwing in her room." She laughed. "And people say that I'm a slut."

"You can leave now, Tess!" Diane told her.

"Mother, Tess is MY guest!" Isabel spouted off.

Diane stood up. "And I'm telling your guest to leave. NOW!"

"These Parkers are completely corrupting my family. Come on Tess!" They left.

Nancy looked worriedly at Diane. "We can NOT tell our husbands about this. Jeff will rid your son of his sexual organs. Call me crazy, but I think that might put a crimp in our family's little arrangement. ... We pushed them into this. This is our fault."

"Nancy, please don't take ANYTHING that blond bimbo said as fact. She has done NOTHING but embarrass my family since my children brought her into our lives."

At that very moment, Philip entered the room with papers in one hand and a bottle of champagne in the other. Jeff was behind him with four glasses.

"Well, we had to cut through a LOT of red tape, but Max and Elizabeth are the joint owners of a very LARGE house." Philip told the women.

Jeff took the bottle from Philip and popped it open. "RBS won't know WHAT the hell's going on."

"Whatever it takes to save our families." Diane smiled nervously. "Right Nancy?"

Nancy just nodded her head.


Max lowered the window an inch and saw a very pissed off Trina.

"Elizabeth, please extract yourself from that boy and meet me inside! NOW!" She turned and stormed back into the studio.

Liz sat up and slowly let him slip out of her. "Okay, I'm in deep shit! She's gonna call my mother, Max. Our parents are going to find out what we've been up to and they're going to forget ALL about our arrangement and the reason they needed us together and never let us see each other again."

"Liz, I'm not gonna let that happen. I'm planning the rest of my life with you and..."

"What?" She asked softly.

Max thought about what he had just admitted and he mentally kicked himself. "I'm sorry. I didn't mean scare you."

Liz shook her head. "You didn't scare me, Max. I just wanted to be sure what you said." She stroked his face.

Max smiled up at her. "Liz, I know we've only been together for a few days, but I can't think of my life without you in it. "Will you marry me ... someday?"



You guys are so incredible with the amazing feedback. My story was even 'bumped'. I feel special now. Keep given me the f/b and I'll keep on writing.
posted on 3-Oct-2001 10:01:13 PM by sydniepaige
I am so completely humbled! You have NO idea how much it means to me that all of you love this story so much. I'm almost finished with part 15, but I won't be able to get it up tonight, but the minute I get off of work tomorrow, I'll start typing my fingers off.

Thanks again for all the f/b!


Always be nice. If not for yourself, just to annoy everybody.
posted on 4-Oct-2001 7:03:03 PM by sydniepaige
Part 15

Diane and Nancy had decided not to say anything to their children until after Saturday. So much was riding on this relationship, that Diane bribed Isabel with a trip anywhere in the world with a friend of her choosing, plus when she was in college, she could live wherever she wanted to live as long as she didn't tell her father or Liz's about their children's recent sexcapades.

In true Isabel fashion, she took the deal. She ALWAYS got what she wanted that way.


Even though Liz knew that Trina had told her mother what she had seen in the parking lot, she was nailing every step during the rehearsal with the group on Wednesday. Unfortunately, no one else was.

"Elizabeth, that was perfect! As for the rest of you, you're moving as if you've never performed before. We've been rehearsing this for 3 months and you look as though you've only been at it a day. HIT YOUR MARKS! Now everyone take five. Elizabeth, I'd like to see you in my office"

Liz grabbed her towel and wiped her face as she walked into the office.

"Have a seat." Trina told her.

"I'm not going to waste your time by rehearsing you with the group anymore today. I do NOT want them throwing you off." She handed Liz a CD. "Take this into the White Room and run through the show. Once you're done, you'll be free to go. I have to work with the rest this evening. You also look like you need some rest. I don't need you passing out from exhaustion Saturday night."

Liz got up to leave.

"Elizabeth, by rest I mean actual rest not doing whatever you've been doing with your boyfriend."

Liz turned red and headed to the White Room.


The Varsity baseball team was playing the JV team team in a practice game. Maria was in the stands watching Michael as he crouched down behind home plate awaiting Max's pitch.

Max fired the ball into Michael's waiting mitt. The batter swung and almost fell. The sound of the ball hitting the leather glove was a very loud pop.

"Strike 3, you're out!" The assistant coach yelled.

Michael took his mit off and shook his hand. "Shit man, you just stung the HELL out of my hand. That mother fucker had some heat on it!"

"I'll say." The coach met them on the way to the dugout. "I clocked that one at 101 miles per hour."

Michael threw his catcher's gear off, grabbed a bat and headed for the batter's box.

Maria sat quietly, observing her boyfriend's ass in his tight uniform, when her phone rang. "Talk to me."

"Maria, it's me. I need you to tell Max something for me."

"Sure babe. Whacha need me to tell your studpuppy?"

Liz shook her head. "Just tell him that I don't have to rehearse tonight. So, when he comes and picks me up, we can just go back to Roswell."

"WAY TO GO MICHAEL! WHOO BABY!" Maria screamed when Michael hit a double.

"MARIA!" Liz said loudly.

"Sorry,chica. Michael just hit a double ... and I ever told you how incredibly sexy his ass looks in those pants?"

Liz sighed. "Maria, I need you to focus here! Don't forget to tell Max."

"I'll tell hi... Uh, Liz, I'll have to call you back."

"MARIA!" Liz yelled, but all she heard was a dial tone. She stared at her phone. "I wonder what the hell that was about."


A crowd of people were circled around whomever was hit by the line drive foul ball that was hit by Tommy Newsom.

By the time Maria had made it over to the victim, the trainers and coaches had the people moved back. She couldn't believe who it was. Tess. She was lying on the ground unconscious and bleeding.

When the ambulance came, Kyle would not leave her side. He was feeling guilty over the last time they had spoken was when he was yelling at her for spying on Max and Liz having sex.

As the ambulance was leaving, the coach canceled the rest of practice.


Max arrived at the studio half an hour later. Trina told him where to find Liz and he wasted no time going to see her.

She was just beginning 'Crazy' when he saw her through the 2-way mirror. It still amazed him how incredible she was.

"You're not supposed to be in here." A 15 year old girl told him.

Max smiled at the girl and he noticed her blush. "It's okay. I'm Liz's boyfriend."

"Liz?" She asked.

"Elizabeth Parker. Hi, I'm Max Evans." He held his hand out to the tall, thin, auburn-haired girl.

She shook it daintily. "Marnie Stevenson, and it doesn't matter whose boyfriend you are. NO ONE is allowed in here unless they're a director or a dancer."

"Mr. Evans is the exception, Marnie. He's not only Elizabeth's boyfriend, but his family are one of our newest benefactors." Trina said as she entered the hallway outside of the White Room.

"Are you Evans World, Max Evans?" Marnie questioned.

Max laughed. "No, I'm Max Evans, high school Senior. My father is Evans World."

Marnie looked confused. "Bu...but ... I thought that your family and the Parkers hated each other. Life long enemies."

"Things kind of changed when Max and I fell in love." Liz said when she walked out of the White Room. She moved quickly to Max and kissed him. "You're early." She kissed him again.

"Yeah, well, um, there was a little mishap during practice and coach let us go early."

Liz couldn't keep her lips off of him. "Oh, that must have been why Maria hung up on me. What happened?"

He kissed the tip of her nose. "I'll tell ya later. You need to shower."

She laughed then kissed him again. "Even though you say I stink, I still love you."

Max caressed her face. "Not as much as I love you." He kissed her again, deeper.

Marnie couldn't believe her eyes at the display before her.

"I'll be back in a few." Liz told him as she turned to go to the locker room, a huge smile on her face.


In the car, Liz could NOT stop grinning.

"Okay, I know you're not this happy JUST because of me. What's up?"

Liz looked at him with a glint in her eyes. "You know that girl you were talking to?"

Max nodded. "Margie?"

"Marnie. Marnie Stevenson." She corrected him.

"What about her?" He asked.

Liz rolled her eyes. "STEVENSON! As in RUBIN BRYANT STEVENSON! RBS Global! We were just all over each other in front of his daughter."

Max laughed. "Call your parents. Tell them to meet us at my house. This is going to make our fathers VERY happy."

She grabbed her phone from her bag and dialed her house. After talking to her mother, she turned off her phone and looked at Max in disbelief.


"Tess is the reason you left practice early?"

He chuckled nervously. "Newsom kind hit her in the head with a line drive."

"Max, it's not funny. She's at Roswell Memorial in a coma."

Max's face went blank. "oh my God. Isabel's probably freaking." He shifted gears and sped faster down the highway.


Tess lay in ICU, hooked up to several different machines and monitors. Ed Harding sat on one side of her bed while Kyle sat on the other holding her hand.

The doctor entered the room. "Mr. Harding?"

"Is my daughter going to wake up soon?"

The doctor looked at Kyle and then back to Ed. "I wish I could give you something, anything that would say when she'll come out of the coma, but I can't. There's no telling when or if she'll recover."

Tears slipped from Kyle's eyes. "I'm so sorry, Tess."


posted on 6-Oct-2001 9:49:43 AM by sydniepaige
Just a little spoiler of what I'm working on right now.
Believe me when I say that sympathy for Tess is SO not what I'm going for. I just needed to get her out of the way for a little while. Also look for a major change in Isabel's attitude. And lastly, Michael's father will be revealed after a selfless act.

Thanks for the feedback! You guys Rock!

Always be nice. If not for yourself, just to annoy everybody.
posted on 12-Oct-2001 10:47:07 PM by sydniepaige
Part 16

When Max and Liz arrived at the Evans, Diane was trying to calm down a rather irate Isabel.

"They had the NERVE to threaten me by saying that they would have me ESCORTED out by security! She's my best friend and they wouldn't let me go and see her." Isabel yelled.

Diane put her hand to her daughter's cheek. "Sweetheart, they only allow family in ICU."

Isabel humphed. "Kyle was there!"

Philip walked into the room. "I talked to Mr. Harding and he said that he would put your name on the list of people allowed to see her."

Isabel threw her arms around her father. "Thank you, Daddy!"

"Did Mr. Harding say how Tess was doing?" Liz said from the doorway, tightly holding on to Max's hand.

"What do you care?!" Isabel snapped. "You HATE Tess!"

"ISABEL!" Philip, Diane and Max yelled at the same time.

Liz had tears well up in her eyes. "Isabel, I don't HATE Tess. True, we're not friends by any means, but what's happened to her is horrible."

Max's arm went around her shoulder and he squeezed her to him.

"There's been no change. They're not sure when or if she'll recover." Philip informed everyone.

Isabel broke down. Her body just seemed to collapse beneath her.

It was Liz who went to her first. She knelt beside her love's sister and wrapped her arms around her. The harder Isabel tried to pull away, the tighter Liz held on to her.

Isabel finally relented and began to feel comfort as Liz stroked her hair and rocked her.

Diane and Nancy stood side be side and looked at their daughters. Diane then glanced at her son. She nudged Nancy.

When she looked at the young man, she saw something she hadn't expected to see. Max Evans was looking at Liz with complete love shining in his eyes. "When did this happen?" She whispered to Diane.

Diane shrugged with a smile.


Once Liz got her calmed down, Isabel went to her room and fell asleep.

The rest of the Evans and the Parkers sat down in the dining room for their evening meal.

Once dinner was served and the servants left the room, Philip cleared his throat. "So, what was so exciting that we needed this little gathering?"

Max and Liz smiled at each other.

"Well, Dad, Ruben Stevenson's daughter is a dancer at the same studio that Liz is a part of. She struck up a conversation with me. Before I knew what was happening, Miss Parker here attacked me. She kept kissing me and touching my face and my chest." He grinned at Liz evilly as she buried her face in her hands from embarrassment. "Then I told her she needed to shower and before she walked away, she grabbed my ass."

"I DID NOT!" Liz looked at Max in shock. "It was YOUR hands that were on MY backside!"

"Whatever, anyway, when we leave, Liz tells me that the girl I'd been talking to was Margie Stevenson."

"Her names Marnie, you dope." Liz corrected him.

"ANYWAY! The girl was completelywigged. My thought is that she ran to her daddy and spilled the beans about the new bond between the Evans and the Parkers."

Philip and Jeff began acting like old friends. They were patting each other on the back and shaking hands.

Jeff had a big ass grin on his face. "Well, it looks like we have two things to celebrate now."

"Huh?" Liz and Max said together.

Philip laughed. "Well, we were going to wait and tell you about this on Saturday after the performance, but now seems to be a pretty good time. Congratulations you two, you are now the co-owners of a prime piece of real-estate."

Liz squealed. "Are you serious?" She looked at Jeff. "It's ours?"

Jeff winked at her. "It's yours. We had all of the paperwork put in your names. You have from the beginning of summer until school starts to furnish it."

"Thank you, so much, all of you." Liz had tears in her eyes.

Max reached for her hand under the table and squeezed it. This little action did not go unnoticed by the mothers.

Jeff and Philip were completely oblivious.


Isabel woke up crying. She had been dreaming about Tess lying in the hospital.

Liz was walking with Max to his room to show him a homework assignment that he'd missed when the coach had called him to his office. At least that's what they told their parents.

Anyway, Liz heard Isabel crying. "I'm gonna go check on Isabel. I meet you in your room in a few minutes."

He kissed her forehead. "You don't have to you know."

"I know. But her best friend is currently unavailable to her and she needs someone."

Max put his hands on her face and kissed her deeply. "Is there any wonder why I love you?"

"I won't be long."

He turned to go to his room as Liz knocked on Isabel's door.

She wiped her tears. "Come in."

Liz slowly opened the door. "Are you okay?"

Isabel shrugged. "I don't like feeling helpless. It's against my nature." She swallowed and then looked up at Liz. "I want to thank you for calming me down ... and I want to apologize for the way I treat you. We don't know each other and I've been a complete bitch to you."

"Isabel, you don't have to..."

"Yes, Elizabeth, I do. What Tess did to you and my brother was mean and not to mention perverted, but you're genuinely concerned about her. I don't understand that."

Liz walked over and sat on Isabel's bed beside her. "It's like I said I don't hate her, I don't hate anyone. I'm not like that."

"I know that ... now. ... Do you ... Are you REALLY in love with Max?"

Liz couldn't help smiling and she nodded. "Yeah, I do. I am so completely in love with Max." Tears came to her eyes. "He means EVERYTHING to me, Isabel."

Isabel hugged her. "Good. I'm happy he's found someone. ... Even if she IS a Parker."

Both girls started to laugh.

"I'd better go help your brother study."

"Uh huh." The blond said disbelieveing her. "And you're gonna be studying WHAT exactly? Biology?"

Liz got off of the bed and smiled. "Chemistry."


Diane and Nancy were having coffee in the sitting room while their husbands were busy celebrating in the den drink brandy and watching some sporting event.

"Nancy, you have raised such a loving daughter. It was absolutely touching to see her comfort Isabel." Diane took a sip of coffee.

Nancy smiled slightly. "I wish I could take the credit, but that goes to Amy. I wasn't very motherly to Elizabeth when she was little. The only aspect I've ever been involved with in her life is dance. That and taking her to the doctor for birth control when she started dating Kyle Valenti."

Diane laughed. "Oh yes. I can understand that last part. The sherriff's son DOES have quite a reputation. In fact, he started dating Tess shortly after she broke up with Max." She took another sip. "Did you see the look Max gave your daughter when she was holding Iz?"

"Yes, I did. And did you see him grab her hand when our husbands told them about the house?"

Diane nodded. "Do you get the feeling that something was going on BEFORE the whole arrangement was made?"

Nancy shrugged. "I don't know for sure, but I know who would."


When Liz walked into Max's room, she looked around. It wasn't quite as big as hers and it was definitely a guys room. He had posters of women in bikinis, some lying on cars, some wearing what only be described as dental floss, but the one thing that made it Max was the smell. It was intoxicating.

"Are you gonna just stand there or are you gonna join me over here?" Max smiled. He was lying on his bed with books in front of him.

"Shit! My backpack's in your car." She slapped the heel of her palm to her forehead.

Max got up. "Don't sweat it, I'll get it for you." He kissed her sweetly. "Want a drink while I'm down there?"

"Cherry Coke if you got it."

He kissed her again. "I'll be back in a few minutes."

Liz decided to use his bathroom while he was gone. She entered the bathroom and the first thing she noticed was the smell. Even though it was spotless, it didn't smell of a cleanser. It smelled like Max.

After she finished and was washing her hands, she decided to be nosy. She walked back into his room and looked around.

"Hmm... If I were a teenaged guy, where would I keep all the good stuff?" She looked around and snapped. "AH HA! Under the mattress."

She went over to his bed and lifted the bedspread and reached between the matress. She smiled as she felt something like a magazine and carefully pulled it out. "Pay dirt!"

Liz lay down on Max's bed on her stomach with her knees bent and her feet in the air. Leaning up on her elbows, she began looking through the magazine. What she thought was a regular skin mag was actually a porno movie catalog.

"Max, Max, Max." She smiled. "Now, where would you hide these?" She sat up and looed around the room. "Not under the bed, not in the entertainment center." SHe continued to scan the room. "The closet. That's where I hide things." She got off of the bed and went to the closet.

She opened the door and was impressed. It was large like hers and very neatly kept. "Now, for his hiding place." She started searching for a loose board. In a 2 foot by 2 foot space, there was the motherlode of every high school boys fantasy. She grabbed the one on top and went and put it in the VCR.

Liz moved back to the bed, grabbed one of the Max scented pillows, grabbed the remote beside the bed and got comfy by leaning against the headboard.

She pushed play. The music that started and the credits began. The name of the movie was flashed across the screen. ABOUT ELIZABETH. "Interesting." Liz smiled. Then when the girl who played Elizabeth appeared on screen, it excited her. "She looks like me."

A sudden familiar ache began to surface between her thighs as she continued to watch the movie.

Elizabeth was a sraight A high school goody-goody whose secret desire was to have the sexy, dark haired quarterback.

About five minutes into the video, she corners him in an empty classroom and the clothes were coming off.

Liz unbuttoned her jeans and slipped her hand under her thong. The thought that Max watched this movie and thought of her made her very wet.

As the couple on the tv were fucking, she had pushed her jeans and thong down her hips and had 2 fingers imbedded in her pussy.

"Soor it took so long." Max said without looking at her and closed the door. "I got stuck talking to our dads and I think they've had a bit too much brand...y." He turned to see Liz lying on his bed masturbating while she was watching his favorite porno. He dropped the cans of Cherry Coke and the backpack to the floor. "Holy FUCK!"

Liz looked at Max with complete and utter desire. "Come help me!' She beckoned.

He sprinted to the bed to join her.

Max took her shoes off and then removed her jeans and thong.

His hand moved over her thighs and to her hand. He removed her fingers from inside herself the brought them to his mouth.

"Yum." His fingers replaced hers. "How'd you find my stash?" His fingers pumped in and out of her.

Liz's body was thrusting into his hand. "Um ... I ... Oh GOD ... I found your, um ... catalog. ... Ooh, faster! ... You, uh ... oh yeah .... you keep your private stuff ... ooh ... the same place ... ah fuck ... in the same place that I ... YES! ... DO! ... MAX!" Her body began to convulse. "Oh FUCK YES!"

Max removed his fingers, licked them and then placed his mouth on her lower lips. He sucked her nectar into his mouth, savoring it as it flowed over his tongue and down his throat.

Liz went straight into her second orgasm. "MAAAX! PLEASE! I want more!" She grabbed his hair and pulled him up to her. "I wanna fuck. I wanna fuck like he's fucking her!" She pointed to the television.

Max rose to his knees and undid his pants, pushing them down. His cock sprang from its confinement. "Hold on. This isn't gonna work." He skillfully removed his shoes then stood and took his pants off and threw them across the room. His shirt followed.

"You look like a Greek god." Liz said as she sat up and took her top off. Her face was at his crotch. She licked her lips and then her tongue snaked out and licked his erect member.

"Liz, don't!" He dropped to his knees.

She looked into his eyes. "I want to Max. I want to taste you ... all of you." She stroked him.

Max was having to remember his reasoning. "Please Liz, not yet ... I don't want you to feel that you have to..."

She pushed him backwards so that he was lying on his back. "I WANT to Max. I want you to feel the pleasure that you give me. Now, lie back and close your eyes."

Max was still a bit hesitant, but with the way she was looking at him, he relented.

He spread his legs and pulled his knees up with his feet flat on the bed.

"If I hurt you, tell me and I'll stop."

Max chuckled. "It's pretty fucking painful as it is right now."

Liz knelt between his legs and licked her drying lips. Her hand reached out and stroked his long, hard cock. She left her hand at the base and squeezed as her tongue circled the head. Then her mouth engulfed him.

Max gasped. "Oh baby ... yeah ... that's it."

Her head bobbed up and down as her hand squeezed and twisted around the base.

Max's lower body involutarily bucked upwards, puching his rod deeper into her mouth.

Liz began fumbling with his balls and rubbing that sensitive spot she read about in a book that she and Maria had 'borrowed' from Amy. It seemed to be working because Max was moaning and writhing and saying "Oh Liz!" and "Fuck yes!" a lot.

He was feeling dizzy. Every sexual spot on his body was getting tighter. He knew it wouldn't be long before he would cum and he didn't want to gross her out by cumming in her mouth.

Max took a ragged breath. "Li...Liz ... Oh FUCK! ... Baby, I ... I don't want to c...cum in your ... your mouth."

Liz shook her head and continued devouring his cock.

"Baby, I ,,, I don't want to cum in your mouth."

She lifted her head up releasing his dick from her mouth as her hand continued to pump. She smiled the most eritic smile he'd ever seen. "I want to taste every drop of you. Her lips clasped around him again. Only this time she gently scraped her teeth against the smooth, hard skin.

With that one little action, Max's hot cum spewed into Liz's mouth as she continued to suck.

When he was drained, she wiped her mouth and crawled up his body, lying on top of him.

"I could get use to that." She kissed him, her sex rubbing against his.

Max brushed her hair from her eyes. "Liz, the other day, I asked you to marry me. You didn't give me an answer."

"Max, you're the only man I've EVER wanted to marry."

He rolled them over. "So, is that a yes?"

"Yes, I'll marry you." She stroked his face. "However, I do think we should wait until we've been together at least ... a week."

They laughed.

Max sat up, straddled her and reached into the drawer of his nightstand. He pulled out a black velvet box. "I was going to give this to you on your birthday, but I think right now is better."

"Max..." She sat up.

He placed his finger over her lips. "I know you can't wear a traditional engagement ring just yet, so I have this for you. ... Actually, I bought it for you on your 16th birthday, but Michael told me that you don't give the girl you love a ring when you're dating a girl you don't. So, for almost 2 years, it's been in the drawer."

He opened the box.

"It's beautiful." Liz had tears forming in her eyes as she looked at the aquamarine stone.

"It's my birthstone." He took it out of the box and the grabbed her left hand. He slid it on her ring finger. "The diamonds on either side of it represent the two of us."

Liz stared down at the large, light blue stone and diamonds in a beautiful thick gold setting that was now on her finger. "I'll never take it off, Max."

He kissed the ring. "Good, but one day, I'm going to. I'll replace it with a real engagement ring. Then, everyone will know that we belong only to each other."

She felt his penis growing against her leg. She lay back down, pulling him back on top of her. He entered her immediately.

"Mmm ... Oh MAX!" She pushed her body into his.

Max couldn't say anything. He glided in and out of her still in utter amazement that not only was he making love to his Liz, but that she'd agreed to be his wife.


Nancy and Diane walked up the stairs and headed towards Max's bedroom.

"Just let me check on Isabel first." Diane told Nancy. She knocked on the door.

"Come in."

"Sweetheart, how are you feeling?" Diane asked her daughter.

Isabel sat up. "Better. Elizabeth and I talked. I ... apologized to her for the way I've been treating her. I also apologized to her for condoning what Tess did ... spying on her and Max at such a private and intimate moment. ... I asked Elizabeth if she really loves him..." She looked at Diane and then Nancy. "Even though she told me that she does, the look of her face said it is so much more than just a teenage lust thing."

Nancy and Diane looked at each other, nodding.

"Well, I'm glad you're feeling better. If you want, you can skip school tomorrow and go see Tess first thing."

"Thanks Mom."

Nancy looked at her watch. "It's getting late. I should really get Elizabeth and Jeff and take them home. "Good night Isabel."

"Good night, Mrs. Parker." She watched them leave. "I sure hope they're finished ... studying."


Liz was now on top of Max riding him. His hands were on her hips assisting her movements.

"Max ... ooh ... oh yes!"

"Come on Liz, faster! I'm SO close!"

Max moved his hand to her clit when he felt pressure building in his balls, and began rubbing her hard.

Liz put her hand on top of his to add to the pressure and and moved her body faster. That did it. Their joint orgasm hit furiously.

Of course it was at THAT precise moment that their mother's knocked. Not getting an answer, they opened the door and walked in.



Note: Yes Carol, I am the same Sydnie that writes the BtVS: My Way series. I should have another part of that out soon.

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posted on 13-Oct-2001 6:22:40 PM by sydniepaige
Hey everyone, part 16 is complete now. It's the longest thing I've written in a long time. When the board was down, I took the opportunity to get ahead. I'm currently working on part 20 and should be able to get parts out more quickly. Of course, you know, I LOVE ego boosting feedback, so ... well, you know the drill. Remember that part 16 is all on the same post now. Enjoy!


posted on 13-Oct-2001 10:47:26 PM by sydniepaige
Part 17

Nancy and Diane were back in the sitting room. Only this time, the coffee was replaced with scotch.

"Well, I guess we have our answer. ... Never in my wildest nightmares would I imagine that I would EVER see my daughter having ... s-sex."

Diane nodded in agreement. "You said she was on birth control, right?"

"Yes, she takes it when she wakes up in the morning. ... You and I are going to have to talk to them ... without Jeff and Philip finding out." Nancy downed her drink.

"You have to admit, the look on their faces was priceless." Diane giggled.

Nancy laughed as well. "They sure are taking their own sweet time getting down here."


Liz was shaking. The only thing that was going through her mind was that she and Max were never going to be allowed to be alone again.

"Baby, it's gonna be okay. I'm not gonna let them pull us apart." Max said putting his arm around her.

"Max, my mother is NOT as nice as yours. I don't know why she hasn't said anything about what Trina told her yet, but after tonight, she's gonna blow."

He kissed her forehead and grabbed her left hand. He brought it up to her face. "Liz, this ring means we're in this together. Whatever she tries, we belong to each other." He kissed the ring.

Liz nodded. "I love you so much, no matter what."

"I love you too." Max took a deep breath and they walked out of his room.


Slowly, they walked into the sitting room.

"Have a seat." Nancy told them. "I have some questions and I want some truthful answers."

"Mother..." Liz started.

"Elizabeth, please. This isn't easy for me either." She took a breath. "How long has this been going on between the two of you?"

Max squeezed her hand. "Um ... Saturday." She said softly.

Diane's quieter voice asked the next question. "And how long have you two been seeing each other?"

"Friday, after we were told we have to, but..." Max was interrupted.

Nancy loked like she was about to cry. "So, you're telling me that you two just started sleeping together right off the bat? Did you ... did you sleep with Kyle as well?"

Liz shook her head. "NEVER! Max is the ONLY! I'm not ... I'm not a slut, Mother."

"Mrs. Parker, Mom, Liz and I ... we're in love with each other. We always have been, we just didn't act on it because of the hatred that our families had for each other. Friday at school, an opportunity..." He smiled. "...presented itself and I kissed her."

Liz smiled at him. "Then Michael and Maria decided to set us up. We both ended up at the lake house. We told each other how we'd always felt one another and then I kissed him."

Max and Liz continued to tell their mothers the events of the last few days. The entire time, they never let go of each other's hands.

When they were done, Liz looked at Nancy. "You're really angry with me, aren't you, Mother."

Nancy collected her thoughts. "Elizabeth, I'm not happy that you manipulated the situation that was thrust upon you, I'm not happy that my daughter is having sex, but ... I do understand why you did what you did to be with the person you love."

"Mom?" Max asked a silent question.

"I'm not angry either. ... There's just one thing. We can NOT let Jeff and Philip in on the truth just yet. RBS is still a threat. Nancy and I will help you, but you have to promise us no more secrets, no more lies and for God's sake, if you're gonna have sex in a car, park in a secluded spot, not a parking lot."

Liz buried her face in her hands from embarrassment.


Thursday at school, Tess was the buzz. Since the school district was picking up her medical bills because it happened on school property, Liz decided to have a blood drive in Tess' name with all of the donations going to the Roswell Memorial Blood Bank. It was planned for the next Monday.

After rehearsal that night, Max and Liz were at Michael's. He was massaging her feet.

"That feels do good." She said lying back on the couch in Michael's game room with her feet in his lap.

Isabel laughed. "It must be love."

"What Iz, Alex never rubs your feet?" Max teasingly asked his sister.

She looked at her twin and gave him a wicked grin. "He'd rather rub me other places, brother dear."

Liz laughed at the sudden disgusted look on Max's face. "That's what you get for asking. Now, RUB."

"Keep up with that, missy, and your feet are the only thing I'll be rubbing." He wiggled his eyebrows at her.

She sat up and pulled her feet underneath her, Then she sat in his lap. "maybe that would be a good idea ... for a little while anyway."

Maria, Michael and Isabel all sat on the pool table to listen to the conversation.

"You want to slow down." Max stated.

Liz nodded. "I'm just afraid that if we keep going the way we're going that we're gonna burn out. I mean, we've been together for 6 days and we've already had sex 5 times. I think that we should actually start dating."

Max sat quietly for a few seconds. "I guess I understand. We did kind of jump right into bed."

Liz smiled and stroked his face. "And table and car ... I'm not saying that we won't ... at all, lets just cool it down for a little while ... or a few days." She leaned towards him and gave him a kiss.

"This is gonna be hard." He groaned against her lips.

Michael looked at Maria and Isabel. "I got 20 bucks that says that they won't make it 'til Sunday."



posted on 14-Oct-2001 8:21:17 PM by sydniepaige
Part 18

Liz talked her mother into letting her skip skip shcool Friday so she could rest up for the dress rehearsal.

Since getting everything out in the open, she and Nancy had something new in their relationship ... respect.

She woke up around noon, showered and got dressed. When she went downstairs, her mother was on the phone.

"No, Caity, it's okay. ... I know you've been waiting to go out with him for quite a while. Enjoy your lunch and call me later with the details. ... I love you too. Bye."

Nancy noticed Liz as she hung up the phone. "Hello, Sweetheart. My afternoon is suddenly free. How about lunch and shopping?"

Liz smiled. "I'd like that. ... Mother, I love you." She hugged her.

"I love you too, Elizabeth."

Liz pulled back. "I wanted to tell you that Max and I talked last night and we've decided to slow down ... actually DATE instead of having sex all of the time. ... At least for a while." She tried not to smile while talking about it with her mother, but was failing miserably.

Nancy smiled. "Who would have thought that it would take an Evans to bring us together?"

Liz got quiet. "I don't really like hiding my real relationship from Daddy."

"Soon babygirl. Just not yet."


Max was sitting in his Calculus class missing Liz. The really awful part was that he wouldn't see her until the next day. She had her dress rehearsal and he had a baseball game.

"And your answer, Mr. Evans?" Miss Davenport asked him, but he was in Lizland. "Max Evans?" Still nothing. She walked over to him and slammed her hand on the desk, causing him to jump. The entire class, including Miss Davenport, began laughing.

"Sorry." Max said, his ears turning red.

The bell rang.

"Class dismissed."

Isabel went over to her brother. "Max, you're not going to be able to focus on the game if you aren't able to stop daydreaming about your girlfriend."

He scratched the side of his face. "I know. And I know I sound ... pathetic, but this is the first time in a week that we haven't seen each other or even talked."

She smiled at him. "That's not pathetic, Max, it's sweet."

Max gathered his books. "I'm gonna go home. Take a nap before the game. Wanna ride?"

"No thanks. Alex and I are going up to the hospital, then the CrashDown and then the game."

"Okay, I'll see you later."

"Bye Max." She watched her brother leave the classroom and then she headed to her locker to meet Alex.


At 3 o'clock Liz sighed.

"What's wrong, honey?" Nancy asked.

Liz shook her head. "I'm missing Max. He's got a game tonight and I really wanted to see him play."

"Maybe I can talk Trina into letting you leave early." Nancy said as their limo turned on the road for the 30 mile drive. "That way you can go to the game."

"Thanks, but I really doubt Trina will agree. You know how she gets this time of the year."

Nancy laughed. "Trust me, Elizabeth, you'll be at the game."


"Nancy, how are we supposed to have a dress rehearsal if the featured dancer is at a baseball game? I won't allow it."

Nancy shook her head. "My daughter is burning out, Trina. She wants to see her boyfriend play baseball. If she wasn't the best dancer here, I wouldn't even suggest this, but you know as well as I do that Elizabeth will not disappoint you."

Trina breathed hard. "What's so special about this boy?"

"He loves my daughter. I know they've only been dating for a week, but they've only wanted to be with each other their entire lives. They're each other's soulmate." Nancy smiled at her daughter as she warmed up.

Trina sighed. "If, and only if, Elizabeth's performance is flawless the first time, she'll be free to go."


"Thank you SO much. This really means a lot to me." Liz hugged Nancy before getting out of the limo.

"Just have fun. ... And don't be too late. We have so much to do tomorrow."

Liz waved as she headed for the bleachers. This was a first for her. She'd always been so involved with dance in the Spring that she missed out on baseball season.

She spotted Maria, Alex and Isabel in the stands. "Hey guys."

"How the HELL did you manage to come to a game the same night of your dress rehearsal." Maria asked.

Liz smiled, "My mother pulled a few strings after I told her how much I wanted to be here." She looked to Isabel. "Any change in Tess' condition?"

Isabel shook her head. "None. She's hasn't even had an involuntarily twitched."

"I'm so sorry. I was hoping, for your sake, that there'd be an improvement."

"Thanks Elizabeth."

She put her arm around her. "My friends call me Liz."

~~~Max and Michael walked out of the locker room in their uniforms and Varsity jackets and headed for the dugout.

"You gotta focus, Maxwell." Michael told him.

"Iknow, I know."

Michael looked at his watch. "Come with me to give Maria my watch."

Max laughed. "You are SO superstitious."

"Have we lost a game since I've been doing it?"

The darker haired boy shook his head.

"Come on."

They made their way to the bleachers and headed up in the stands. Max's heart stopped when he saw her. She was wearing a green, thin straped tank and a pair of lycra pants.

"What are you doing here?"

Liz smiled at him. "My mother talked Trina into letting me go early so I can watch you play."

He moved closer and kissed her. "You look cold."

"A little."

He took his jacket off and put it around her. "It looks good on you."

She inhaled deeply and then kissed him. "It smells like you. I missed you so much today."

He kissed her again. "I missed you too."

"You can say that again." Alex said. "He was Mr. Mopey all day."

Liz's lips met his in a heated kiss this time.


Liz laughed against his mouth. "I can definitely disprove that."

"I'll see you after the game." He kissed her one last time. "I love you."

Her smile grew. "I love you too. Goodluck."

Michael fastened his watch around Maria's wrist. "Love you, Babe." He kissed her.

She slapped him on the butt. "Right back at cha."

They watched the guys run back down to the field.

Liz was almost drooling. "Max looks SO sexy in his uniform."

"I'm glad my son's body appeals to you, Elizabeth." Diane laughed.

Liz wrapped Max's jacket tighter around herself and turned red as everyone began laughing.


The game was incredible. Both Michael and Max hit homeruns and Max threw a no hitter.

Afterwards, Liz and Maria waited outside the locker room.

"Did you enjoy your first high school baseball game?" Maria asked.

Liz looked dreamily. "Max was so ... WOW."

Maria laughed. "You know, I always knew that once you two got together, you'd be like this."

Liz shook out of her Max induced trance. "What?"

"Babe, you and Max are just goofy when it comes to each other. I'm surprised he hasn't proposed yet." Maria laughed.

She didn't say anything.

Maria's eyes grew wide. "Are you trying to tell me by not telling me that Max popped the question?"

Liz held her hand up showing her best friend the ring on her finger. "He gave me this Wednesday night. He asked me to marry him and I said yes. When we're ready, he's going to replace it with a diamond engagement ring."

Maria squealed.

"That can't be good." Michael said as he and Max came out of the locker room.

Maria made a face at him and walked over to him. "Great game, baby."

Their arms went around each other.

"Thanks." He said, his lips seeking out hers.

Max moved to Liz. "I still can't believe you're here." They kissed.

"You were incredible tonight." They kissed again.

"You inspired me." He couldn't keep his lips off of her.

Michael kissed his way to Maria's ear and whispered. "You and Isabel are gonna be owin' me 20 bucks." He licked her ear.

She took a deep breath. "Let's get going, dear. The party awaits."

"Yo, Romeo and Juliet, it's time to jet."

Max and Liz reluctantly parted.

"Where's Iz and Alex?" Max inquired.

Liz pushed his bangs from his forehead. "They went to visit Tess."

"So, how are we going?" Maria asked.

"Since you brought Liz's car and Max rode with me ... Michael started.

Maria tossed Max Liz's keys.

Max stroked Liz's face. "We'll meet you there later." He grabbed Liz's hand and headed to the parking lot.

"Double or nothing, they don't make it to the party." Michael laughed.


Max and Liz were parked at Buckley Point in the backseat of Liz'a car. They were in the midst of a heavy makeout session.

"Max. I want you so badly." Her breathing was loud.

He kissed down her neck. "I thought ... you ... you wanted to ... to slow down?"

Her legs wrapped around him. "Well, you know ... I ... uh ... did kinda ... spring that on you. ... One more time ... just to get it out of our ... systems."

"Okay." He moved his hand into her lycra pants and his fingers slid in between her wet folds.

She arched into his head. "Oh yeah! ... MMM! ... I want you inside of me, Max!"

"Liz..." He pulled his hand from her pants and got in his knees. He quickly unfastened his belt, followed by his jeans.

She scooted out of her pants as he pushed his to his ankles. He legs wrapped around him once more and he plunged into her depths.

They moved in unison at their joining and Max wasted no time in moving in and out of her.

Liz unlocked her ankles and raised her legs higher, her feet in the air at his shoulders.

"That's it ... oh yeah ... that's it..."

Max moved faster at her words. He had no idea how he would EVER managed to live without being deep inside her. "Oh baby ... UH..." His head was spinning.

It was a good thing that his jacket was cushioning his head because it was the only thing protecting her head from slamming into the door.

Liz started to get that tingly feeling making her pussy begin to clamp around Max's cock.

"I wan... Look at me ... when you cum. Liz!"

Faster and faster, in and out.

"Ooh..." Her body writhed in orgasmic convulsions. Her cunt holding onto his dick like a vice.

But it was the look of passion, desire, love and lust that made him cum.

Max's body fell limp on top of hers. His pelvis sporadically pumping and squirting his last bit of semen into her.

She kissed him. "I don't wanna stop doing this Max. I don't think I can."

Max chuckled. "I was just thinking the same thing."



posted on 15-Oct-2001 8:53:07 PM by sydniepaige
As always your feedback is awesome! I'll try to answer some of your questions soon. Hope you enjoy this part! You guys ROCK!

Part 19

Saturday afternoon, Liz sat in her mother's private salon having her hair braided and pulled into a tight bun at the top, back of her head. She couldn't help herself from yawning.

"Late night, Miss Elizabeth?" Patty, the Parker's personal stylist, asked.

Liz smiled. "Just being a teenager. I've got a new boyfriend."

"I heard. How did you convince your parents to let you date Max Evans?" She continued braiding her hair.

Liz knew to be careful when talking around Patty. She was known to be somewhat of a gossip and the girlfriend of the Stevenson's stylist. She decided to go with the agreed upon cover story.

"Well, Maria and Michael knew how Max and I felt about each other, so they thought it would be fun to set us up on a blind date." She sighed. "Patty, it was magic. At first we were a little scared at what our parents would say, but to our surprise, they thought it was a great idea and now our dad's are actually becoming friends."

"All that and he's scrumptious!" Patty looked around to make sure they were alone. "Just between you and me, Peter was telling me that Ruben Stevenson thinks it's all a ploy."

"For what?"

"Well, little Marnie said that her daddy's business wants to take over both Evans AND Parker. And you just want everyone to think you're a couple."

She looked at Patty as if she'd grown antlers. "If this were some kind of ploy, Max and I wouldn't be engage..." She pulled her hand over her mouth. "Patty, you can NOT tell anyone, especially my parents. If they find out, I don't know what they'd do."


Max and Diane were buzzed into Roswell Jewels. It had been Philip's idea for Max to present Liz with a piece of jewelry along with the roses. Max asked his mother to accompany him to make sure he got just the right thing.

"Mrs. Evans, how wonderful it is to see you again. What may I help you with today?"

Diane gave a polite smile to the woman. "It's nice to see you too, Ruth. My son wishes to find a gift for his girlfriend."

Ruth addressed Max. "What price range?"

Max smile. "That doesn't really matter."

"Okay, well do you have an idea of what you'd like to get her?"

He shook his head. "Not a clue."

"Tell me about her."

Max's smile grew. "She's beautiful and talented and intelligent and sexy and..."

"I get the picture. And who is this lucky young lady?" Ruth asked just being nosy.

"Elizabeth Parker." His phone rang. "Excuse me." He looked at his caller ID. "Hello, my love."

"Hey, baby."

Max's face lit up at the sound of her voice. "I was just talking about you."

"What a coincidence. We have a situation. Patty was doing my hair and she said that Marnie told the Stevenson's stylist, Peter, who happens to be Patty's boyfriend..."

Max laughed. "I'm getting dizzy from all of the circles."

"Sorry. Anyway, Marnie told Peter that her father said that out relationship is just a ploy."

"What did you tell Patty?"

She let out a nervous giggle. "That's where the situation comes into play. I told her about our engagement."

Max smilied.

"Are you mad at me?"

"Baby, I could never be mad at you. I love you."

Liz sighed. "I love you too. I'll see you tonight."

"Bye." Max put the phone in his pocket. "I know exactly what to get her."


Liz was backstage warming up. For the first time in her life, she was nervous before a performance.

"It's time to dress, Elizabeth." Trina said as she entered the dressing room.

Liz nodded. "Okay."

"You've worked really hard and I'm extremely proud of all of the work you've put into this."

Liz smiled. "Thank you. ... Trina, I'm sorry that I've been so ... difficult lately."

"Well, I've been bitchier than usual so we're even. Your mother told me that you won't be attending NYDA."

"I'm going to college. But I'll still dance. I even have my own studio in my new house." Liz boasted.

Trina was nodding. "I've contacted Lucinda Branch. She's the head of the Dance Department and a dear friend of mine. You're in, but you'll still have to go through the audition process to determine which group you'll be placed in." Her voice lowered to almost a whisper. "You've been in one of my classes for almost 16 years. It's going to be quite strange next season with you not there."

Liz was pulling her tights on. "I'm not that far away. If you ever need me, all you have to do is call."

"Yes, well..." Trina wiped her tears. "Have a great performance, Elizabeth." She left the room.

Liz finished dressing then looked at herself in the mirror. "This one's for you."


Max sat in the front row and watched his love perform the most beautiful ballet he'd ever seen. His heart pounded in his chest as she floated across the stage.

By the middle of the program, Max was beginning to get a little nervous. All of the parents knew what he had planned. Of course Philip and Jeff thought it was just for show because of Stevenson's suspicions.

By the time Liz started CRAZY, Max was standing off stage with a bouquet of white roses for her. Maria had told him that they were her favorite and tonight had to be perfect.

As the last note of the song hit, Liz froze in position and the curtain lowered. All of the dancers joined her on stage. The curtain rose and they all bowed. The curtain lowered again and all of the dancers except for Liz left the stage.

Trina handed Max the cordless microphone that he'd requested and he slipped it into the pocket of his Armani Tux.

The curtain rose once more and Liz stood on center stage and curtsied. She received a standing ovation.

Max slowly walked over to her with the bouquet of 2 dozen long-stemmed, white roses and presented them to her. They kissed briefly and she walked forward and curtsied again.

It was when she stepped back, that she noticed that Max was down on one knee.

A smile played on her lips. "Max?"

He pulled the mic from his pocket and the entire audience sat in silence.

"Elizabeth Parker, I have loved you my entire life. Now, that our parents have reconciled and the families and have allowed us to be together, I can't wait any longer. "Liz..." He pulled a black, velvet box from his pocket and opened it to reveal a simple 3 carat round cut diamond ring. "Will you marry me?"

Gasps could be heard throughout the room.

Liz's hands began to shake as tears formed in her eyes. Her smile grew larger and she started to nod until she found her voice. "Yes Max! I'll marry you!"

She held out her hand to her lover and he removed the ring he'd given to her just days before and then placed it on her right hand. Then, very slowly, Max removed the diamond ring from the box and slid it onto her ring finger. "I love you, Liz."

She pulled him up to stand before her. "I love you too, Max."

When their lips met in a VERY passionate kiss, the entire audience errupted in applause.



posted on 16-Oct-2001 7:24:12 PM by sydniepaige
Part 20

After Liz had freshened up and changed into her white evening gown, she and Max made their way towards the massive dining room.

She smiled really big and clutched Max's arm tighter. "You know, the next time we enter this room with me in a long white dress and you in a tux, it will be for our wedding reception."

He kissed the top of her head. "I like the sound of that."

As they entered, they were met with thunderous applause. They manuvered their way threw the crowds, having to stop and talk to people who told Liz how incredibly marvelous she danced and to congradulate the couple on their engagement.

Finally, they made it to their table and Maria grabbed her best friend in a tight hug.

"Let me see, let me see!" She said, grabbing Liz's left hand. "Very nice Max."

His ears turned red. "Thanks Maria."

"You realize that blondie's gonna be pushin' for one now." Michael said as he shook Max's hand.

Liz grabbed Max's hand and leaned onto his shoulder. Both were smiling.

Philip leaned over to Jeff. "Do you get the idea that we're missing something?"

"I was just thinkin' the same thing." Jeff answered.


After dinner, Michael and Maria were on the dance foor. Her head lay on his chest as they swayed to the music.

He kissed the top of her head. "I love you."

She looked up into his brown eyes. "I love you too."

Their lips met.

"Can I ask you a question?"

She caressed his face. "You know you can ask me anything."

Michael tightened his gripp around her and swallowed hard. "When are WE gonna make it official?"

"Michael, just because Max and Liz are in a speed relationship, ... Let me just say that there's no rush. You don't have to feel pressure to..."

He placed his fingers over her lips. "I'm not feeling pressure. Before Caitlyn came into my life, you were my family. You're the one constant in my life."

Her hands went into the back of his hair and she pulled him down into a deep passionate kiss.

When she broke the kiss, she smiled at him. "Baby, let's let Max and Liz have their moment. Then after their thunder has died down, you are more than welcome to make a huge display of your love and devotion for me that will put Max Evans little surprise to shame." She scrunched her nose.

Michael laughed. "DeLuca, you'll get fireworks."

The kissed thoughout the rest of the song.


Around 11:30, Max and Liz were sitting at their table with both sets of parents.

Their chairs were side by side. Max's arm was around Liz and her head was resting on his chest. Her eyes were closed.

"The poor dear. She looks exhausted." Diane observed.

Max kissed Liz's head. "If you don't mind, Mr. and Mrs. Parker, I'll take her home."

"That's fine." Jeff answered.

"We might be a little late." Nancy told him. "The Vanderhoffs are having an after party. Those usually run until 4 or 5 in the morning."

Max stroked his love's hair. "I'll keep an eye on her." He kissed her cheek and whispered into her ear. "Baby, are you ready to go home?"

Her eyes didn't open. "Mm hmm."

He laughed. "Liz, sweetie, wake up." He nudged her gently.

"What?" She said grogily as her head bobbed up.

"Elizabeth, honey, Max is going to take you home." Her mother told her.

"Okay." Her head fell back on Max's chest.

Max sat her back up. "Dad, hold her up for a second."

Philip looked at his son and then placed his hands on Liz's shoulders.

Max stood, put his jacket on and then kissed his mother's cheek. "Good night Mom."

"Good night sweetheart. Drive safely."

He said good night to everyone else at the table and the picked Liz up bridegroom style and carried her out to the valet.

When his Porche was brought around, the young man in the red vest opened the passenger side so Max could place his fiancee inside.

He tipped the valet and then left. As he drove down the lamp lit street, he glanced over at Liz. She was sound asleep. "I love you so much."


"Nancy, why did you tell Max that we're going to the Vanderhoff's?" Jeff asked his wife.

She sighed. "Because you and Philip are bursting at the seams with questions about what's going on. You're as antsy as pre-schoolers that have to use the restroom."

"So, there IS more going on that what we thought." Philip stated.

Diane stood. "Let's go back to our house and Nancy and I will let you in on some of what's been actually been happening."



Okay, I know this is short, but I wanted to get this part out of the way. I'll probably get the next part up tonight or tomorrow. It depends if I get all of my report cards finished.

I want to thank EVERYONE for the feedback. You guys are truly my inspiration!

posted on 16-Oct-2001 10:52:13 PM by sydniepaige
Part 21

Jeff shook his head. "So you're telling us that Max and Elizabeth are REALLY in love and they've been using the arrangement to their advantage?"

Nancy and Diane nodded.

Jeff looked at Philip and both men started laughing.

The women looked confused.

"This doesn't completely piss the two of you off?" Diane asked.

"Diane, we deserve everything they've gotten from us." Philip laughed harder. "Jeffery, my boy, you do realize that we just spent a million bucks so that our kids can shack up?"

Jeff was smiling. "True." He cleared his throat to become more serious. "RBS is still an issue though. I overheard Ruben speaking with his wife saying that it was all for show. I feel a lot better knowing that our kids aren't being forced to do something that they don't want to do."


Max lay Liz on her bed and carefully removed her gown. He gasped when he saw that the only thing she had on under it was a sheer pair of pantyhose.

He slipped her shoes off her feet and then carefully took her hose off.

Max covered her beautiful naked body with her satin sheets.

He took his jacket off, followed by his shirt, shoes, pants and socks, leaving him in his green boxers. He placed his watch on her nightstand and climbed into bed with her.

His hands went to her hair and began removing the pins that held it in the tight bun. Max didn't want her waking up with a head ache. When the bun was unwound, he then took the band that held it in a ponytail, then he proceeded to unbraid her hair.

After he was finished, Max wrapped his arms around her waist and she turned into his embrace.

Liz's hand unconsciously began rubbing Max's chest, down his abs and into his boxers.

Max took a very deep breath when she began fondling his manhood. He knew that if she didn't stop or if he didn't wake her, he wasn't going to be responsible for his actions.

Her fingers glided over the underneath of growing member. It was getting very difficult to concentrate so he decided to wake her. "Liz ... Liz, baby, wake up."

Slowly, her eyes fluttered open.

"Max?" She realized that they were in her bedroom. "What are we doing here?"

He smiled. "Well, at the moment, you're molesting me in your sleep."

"What?" She laughed.

Max pointed to his boxers. Her hand was inside slowly pumping him.

Liz grinned and pumped harder. "So basically, even in my sleep, I can't seem to keep my hands off of you."

He let out a heavy breath. "Liz..."

"Hmm. If I can do this to you when I'm asleep, I wonder what I can do when when I'm wide awake."

She slowly removed her hand from his underwear and pulled the sheet off of them. "Take em off." She pointed to his boxers.

Max did as he was ordered. Liz climbed on top of him. "I wanna play. She placed her heat on the underside of his engorged dick and began to soak it with her wetness.

"Nuh uh ... no games." He sat up and was quickly on top of her. Her knees instinctively drew up. He grabbed his now painful cock and rubbed the head over her pussy. "You're mine, Liz, always and forever. Just as I'm yours. He plunged into her.

"UH!" She bucked up into him as he entered her.


Max picked up the annoying phone that was ringing. "What?" He answered, half asleep.

"Why are you answering Liz's phone at 10 o'clock in the morning?"

Max was confused. "Who is this?"

"Who IS this? Max Evans, you've known me since I was 5 and you have the NERVE to ask me who I am?!"

"Oh, hey Maria ... Wait a minute, what time is it?" He sat up.

Maria laughed. "10 AM."

"Oh SHIT!" Max hung up the phone. "LIZ! LIZ!" He shook her.

"What?" She answered annoyed.

"We gotta get up. I think we're in deep shit!"


"Can you believe that he had the nerve to hang up on me?" Maria huffed.

Michael pulled her back into his arms and covered her naked form with his. "Maybe they've been doing what we have." His mouth quickly found her neck. "They probably don't even know that all our folks are out at the lake for the day."

Maria thought for a second. "That minght explain why Max freaked when I told him what time it was."

"Enough about Maxwell." He began kissing her neck, her breasts, her flat stomach until he finally reached his destination. He placed her legs over his shoulders and buried his face between her thighs. His mouth began making love to her pussy. His tongue pushing in as deep as I could go.

"Oh Michael..." She breathed. *He has the most AMAZING tongue*

He inserted his middle finger into her cunt as his mouth started sucking on her clit.

"MORE!" She demanded.

Michael pushed two more fingers inside her. His hand moved ferociously. Her body, writing, pushed his fingers in deeper. Within seconds, she came.

He drank every drop of her cum. Sucking on her as if she were a juicy piec of mellon.

When he finished, he looked at her and repositioned himself to a sitting position and pulled her up as well.

He began to stroke his engorged cock. "Suck it!"

Maria loved it when he got demanding during sex. Especially when he pleasured her first. She licked her lips. "Fuck my mouth."

Pre-cum seeped from his prick. "You sure?" He didn't want to hurt or choke her.

She lay back down and wiggled her finger at him. Michael got on all fours and positioned his manhood over her mouth. Her tongue snaked out and licked the salty liquid that was on the tip.

"Mmm." She licked her lucious lips. "Now baby."

Michael lowered his prick into her warm, wet mouth, groaning at the sensation.

Even though he was in the position of dominance, it was Maria that was in control. If his thrusts would become too forceful, she'd apply pressure with her teeth. Not enough to hurt him, but just enough to slow him down.

Maria was very skilled at the art of sucking Michael's cock. They had only been with each other and one day she told him that she wanted to experiment. For hours she practiced on his manhood, finding out exactly what he liked. The first time she swallowed, she became addicted to his taste.

She brought her hand to his balls and gently squeezed them. With a few more thrusts, Michael shot his lode into her exquisite mouth and down his throat.

As he slowly pulled out, she still sucked on him and it made a popping sound when he pulled the head out.

He lay beside her, spent. Maria watched as his eyes closed, his breathing evened out and he fell asleep.



posted on 17-Oct-2001 8:54:01 PM by sydniepaige
Part 22

The Evans, Parkers, Caitlyn and Amy were all gathered at the lake house.

"I can't believe that my 17 year old daughter is REALLY engaged." Jeff shook his head.

"She'll be 18 tomorrow." Caitlyn reminded him and then looked away.

Amy pulled out her planner. "That reminds me, I have to call the caterer tomorrow. Since the surprising ending to Lizzie's performance last night, I've gotten 75 more RSVPs."

Nancy pulled the book away from her. "You're not working right now. We're all here to discuss how to surprise the kids for their graduation."

"It has to be spectacular." Caitlyn said looking at Nancy and Jeff. "Michael deserves that." Tears started pouring from her eyes.

Nancy moved over to her and quickly put her arm around her. "Sweetheart, what happened to you and Michael was a tragedy, but you have each other now."

"I know, but ... I've barely had him back for 2 years and he's going off to college in a few months. If my father wasn't dead, I'd kill him!"

Philip placed his hand over his mouth and badly hid his laughter.

"Philip!" Diane smacked his leg.

The rest of the room started laughing.

"Okay, so that wasn't one of my most intelligent statements." Caitlyn laughed. "But, I think you understand."

Jeff was nodding. "I know what we can do for the kids."


Max and Liz were snuggled together watching a movie in the viewing room. Her back was against his chest and his arms were around her. She'd given him some of her dad's sweat pants and t-shirt so he wouldn't have to walk around in just his boxers.

"Hey Liz?" He said softly in her ear.

"What baby?"

He kissed the top of her head. "What do you want to do for your birthday tomorrow?"

She looked back at him and smiled. "I can say that for the first time in my entire life, I've got everything I could ever want ... You're all I've ever wanted, and I've got you..." She looked at the 3 caret rock on her finger. "...for the rest of my life."

"I love you, and that's very sweet, but I asked you wanted TO DO, not what you wanted." He smiled at his love.

Liz put her face in her hands. "Oh, well, my parents and I usually have dinner and then they shower me with crap I didn't ask for and don't want." She sat up and smiled real big, but very fake. "Wanna come?"

"If just to be with you, yes." He put his feet in her lap, stretching out.

She looked at them. "I love your feet. Even they're sexy. I can't wait until we get married and have babies with your ears and your feet."

Max put his hand on her forehead. "Hon, you're getting weird on me. Do you have a fever?"

She pushed his feet off of her lap and bounced into his. "You are such the comedian." She stroked his face and then kissed him."

"So..." He said when he pulled away. "You wanna set a date?"

"I'm 18 tomorrow."

"Liz, I'm serious." He playfully scolded.

Her arms went around his neck and she straddled him. "So am I. I want to be your wife as soon as possible. We've been forced to be apart all of our lives, I don't wanna wait."

"Okay, but we might wanna hold off at least until after graduation." He kissed her.

She then proceeded to kiss and licked and suck on his neck. As her mouth was working on his neck, her lower body was grinding into his.

Max's hips bucked and she knew what he wanted. Her mouth released his neck and she turned and lay back on the couch, taking him with her.

She put her toes in the band of the sweat pants and pushed them down his legs. 'Little/Big Max' hit her damp shorts.

"And this is for..." He started.

Liz looked into his eyes. "Hey, I got yours off, you get mine."

Max grinned wickedly and wiggled his eyebrows. He got up from her and stood beside her. His large dick standing at attention. He took off her father's t-shirt leaving him in all of his glory.

Liz sat up and took her top off, letting her breasts bounce free.

He grabbed her hands and stood her up. Then he dropped to his knees. His hands slid up her legs to the bottom of her shorts and he pulled them down. All she was left in was her green thong. He licked the dampness of her crotch.

"Max..." She breathed.

Max's hands went into the thin waistband and tore her panties from her body. He then parted her thighs a little wider, spread her lips with his thumbs and licked her folds.

"You always taste so sweet." He licked her again and then sat on his ass, pulling her down with him. "Have you ever heard of tantric sex?"

Liz couldn't find her voice so she nodded instead.

Max grabbed his cock in his hand. "I read about it right after I hit puberty and I've ALWAYS wanted to try it with you." He stroked his cock and smiled. "Have a seat.

She moved over him, widened her stance and then slowly, gracefully lowered herself over his tremendous, straining member. Her fingers opened her pussy and she plunged down on him causing both of them to groan with pleasure."

Liz wrapped her legs around his waist as tight as she was able to and he placed his hands on her ass. When he gently squeezed it, she began to grind her pussy into him.

Her breathing had never been so erratic. The tightness of their position had him deeper then he'd ever been. The friction of their pubic hairs rubbing and tangling together made Liz want to move faster.

"Oh my God!" Became her mantra.

Max attached his mouth to her left breast and he suckled it like a newborn, making Liz's body intensify with pleasure.

Her inner walls began to squeeze, clinching around his hard cock. Her body convulsed and before Max realized it, he began flooding her pussy. Instead of stopping oned the wave ended, the lovers continued moving.


That evening when Jeff and Nancy got home, Liz and Max were nowhere to be found.

Penny greeted them. "Good evening, Mr. Parker, Mrs. Parker."

"Good evening Penny. Would you happen to know where Elizabeth is?" Nancy asked her.

"She and Mr. Evans left here about an hour ago in his car, but I'm not sure where they were headed."

"Thank you, Penny. You may have the rest of the evening off." Jeff told her.

Penny smiled. "Thank you, sir." She left the entry hall.

"I'm going into my office for a while." He turned to go.

"Jeff, I know how hard it's been for you..."

"No Nancy, you don't." He continued to his office.



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posted on 18-Oct-2001 10:04:50 PM by sydniepaige
This part is really short because I started it after people asked what Max was doing for her birthday. I kinda forgot to write that part. So, here it is.

Part 23

Bright and early Monday morning, Max picked Liz up for school. He handed her a single white rose when she greeted him.

She kissed him. "Thank you, Max. It's beautiful."

"Not half as beautiful as you are. Happy birthday, Sweetheart." His lips descended onto hers in a much more passionate kiss.

Liz sighed. "Are you sure we can't get married today?"

"We discussed this last night. As much as I hate to wait, we agreed to do it the weekend after graduation."

Liz started laughing. "Our parents are going to be SO pissed that we're eloping."

Max smiled at his love. "I want our wedding to be about us, not about how many business associates they can invite."

"I love you."

He kissed her once more. "I love you too. Now, let's get to school. You've got that blood drive today."

They unwrapped their arms from around each other and clasped hands, He opened the front door and Liz was surprised to see white and red rose petals leading a path to his car.

"Have I told in the last 30 seconds how much I love you?"

"The feeling's beyond mutual, Liz."

Max opened the door for her. Then, after shutting the door and getting in himself, he drove to West Roswell High.


Alex and Isabel were at her locker. They had gotten there early to help set up the surprise Max had for Liz.

"I must say, your brother is very good at this whole romance thing." Alex told her.

Isabel laughed. "I know. It's like Liz brought out this part in him. She really is an amazing person."

Maria ran up to them. "She's here! Let's go spy!"


Max opened the door and she was met with a path of rose petals.

"What are you up to, Max Evans?" She couldn't help smiling.

He just shrugged and gave a little boy grin.

Liz followed the flowered pathway to her locker. There was a sign on it that read OPEN ME! She put in her combination: 3-15-83, and slowly opened it. Balloons popped out. They were tied to a long stemmed white rose. Tied to the rose was as large flat box.

Max was getting anxious for her to open it. "Sweetheart, the bell rings in like, 5 minutes."

Taking a deep breath, she untied the box from the rose, and handed Max the balloons. She carefully unwrapped it and opened it. Inside was two 3 caret diamond earrings and a 3 caret diamond drop necklace. Liz was speechless.

"I wanted you to have a matching set. Something for you to wear when we get married." Max explained.

Liz was almost in tears. "This is the 3rd best gift I've ever gotten." She kissed him. "Thank you."

"What are the first two?"

She closed the box and threw her arms around him. "The first is your love and the second is..." Her hand slid down between them and she grabbed a squeezed his denim covered cock.

His lips crashed down onto hers. "How long until the blood drive?"

The bell rang.

"Two hours."

Max kissed her again. "Eraser room?"

She nodded. "Eraser room."


Michael, Maria, Isabel and Alex watched from around the corner.

Michael laughed. "I got 60 bucks that says they get caught."



See I told you it was short. Anyway, I'm like 4 parts ahead and you would not believe some of the stuff that's coming out of my head. I do believe that you will be shocked, excited and completely amazed that is the insanity that is me. More tomorrow!


posted on 19-Oct-2001 9:10:57 PM by sydniepaige
3-15-83 would be Max's birthdate. You know, if he'd been born instead of hatched. I won't be able to get a part up tonight because I'm doing a MAJOR rewrite of the next part, but trust me, it will be WELL worth the wait!


posted on 19-Oct-2001 10:54:34 PM by sydniepaige
Okay, I'll give you the Eraser Room scene.

Part 24

Max closed and locked the door behind him. "Birthday sex in the infamous Eraser Room."

"Well, it's kinda hard to do that when you're over there. Come here baby, give me what I really want for my birthday." Liz wiggled her finger at him.

He had her pushed up against the wall and was attacking her mouth in a instant. Her right leg wrapped around him.

She was wearing a short cream colored skirt. His hand reached between her legs and tore her thong off of her. His fingers enter her wet pussy.

"Uh uh. You." She pushed him away and unbuttoned his jeans. Pushing them down, his cock popped out and she grabbed it. "This."

Liz rubbed it against her cunt, lifting her leg back up around him and pushing it into her.

"Oh FUCK Liz. You ARE horny aren't you?" Max smiled at her.

She placed both hands behind his neck and basically mounted him by bringing her other leg around his waist.

Once again, Max had her up against the wall. Their lust made this experience even more errotic. He thrusted into her. It just wasn't very comfortable.

"Max, floor ... table ... now!"

He skillfully moved them to the floor.

"I love fucking you, Liz. I love every single thing about you, but your pussy is fucking gold."

Liz thought his attemt at talking dirty was cute, so she played along. "Just keep on diggin' baby, cuz your about to hit the motherlode."

Her little pun made Max move faster. She also started thrusting up into him.

Grabbing her calves, he raised them almost over her head and was banging her into the floor.

Her finger moved to her clit. She wanted to cum badly. He started cumming a second before she did.

With each deep thrust, he spoke. "HAPPY ... BIRTH ... DAY ... BABY!"

"OH MAX! YES!!!" She came.

Her pussy milked his cock of evey last drop.

Max lowered her legs and slowly pulled out of her.

Liz groaned at his departure. "Mmm, no offense, but I DO like that gift best." She picked up a scrap of material that was once her underwear.

"Sorry about that. I'll just have to take you to buy some more. Get you to model them for me."

Liz laughed. "That's okay, I'll just stop wearing them all together. Of course I might wanna buy some longer skirts. You realize that for the rest of the day, you're gonna have easy access."

He hardened immediately. Pushing her legs apart, he entered her again.


In the hallway outside of the Eraser Roon, stood their friends.

"Are you telling me that they're STILL at it?" Alex asked.
"It's been over an hour."

Isabel licked his ear. "How about we try and break their record this weekend?"

When they heard Liz yelling "Oh yeah!" and "Harder, harder!" The foursome decided to head to their second class.



Okay, that was really weak and short, but I hope you enjoyed it anyway.

posted on 20-Oct-2001 9:27:34 PM by sydniepaige
Part 25

Liz was standing at the door inside of the Eraser Room. "I am so..."

"Exhausted?" Max questioned.

She shook her head. "Content. Sated."

Standing behind her, he wrapped his arms around her waist and kissed her neck. The bell rang. "Time to go give blood."

They slowly opened the door and fell into the sea of students walking in the halls of West Roswell.


"I still can't believe that you're doing this on your birthday." Isabel said, shaking her head.

Liz shrugged. "I like the fact that I can do something so important on my birthday."

"And two hours of kinky sex in the Eraser Room wasn't important enough." Michael elbowed Max.

Max's ears turned red. "Wh...what are you talking about?"

"Oh please!" Maria laughed. "First, we saw you go in and second, we heard you."

Liz decided that she wasn't gonna be embarrassed. Instead, she changed the subject. "Isabel, how's Tess?"

Tears formed in Isabel's eyes. "They're going to drill a hole in her skull to relieve some of the pressure. I'm gonna meet her dad at 1 so he doesn't have to be there alone while she's in the OR.

"She's gonna get better Iz." Max rubbed her arm. "It's just gonna take time for her to heal."

"Elizabeth Parker!" The woman in the white coat yelled.

Liz kissed Max. "I'll see you when I'm done."


After giving blood, and finishing the day of classes, Maria and Liz went and sat in the stands during baseball practice.

"I'm amazed that Max has enough energy for practice after your sex-a-thon and giving blood." Maria laughed.

Liz smiled at her best friend. "Believe me, Max has NO problem when it comes to stamina."

Her phone rang. "Hello? ... Yes, this is Elizabeth Parker. ... Okay, sure. ... I'm glad I can help. You too. Bye." She closed her phone.

"Who was that?" Maria asked.

"The lady from the blood bank. Since my blood type is rare, they want me to donate every 6 weeks."

"Michael does that too." Maria told her.

"Really? What's his blood type?" Liz was curious.

Maria looked through her purse and pulled out her organizer.

"You have it written down?"

The blond nodded. "I have all of Michael's appointments written down. If I didn't, he'd forget." She flipped threw the pages. "Ah, here it is. AB+"

"Are you sure?"

Maria put the organizer in her purse. "Yep. Caitlyn said he got it from his father."

Liz grew silent.

"Lizzie, you okay, you look a little pale."

"I'm just really tired all of a sudden. Tell Max I'm waiting in his car. Okay?'' Liz left the beachers and headed for the parking lot.


Forty-five minutes later, Max opened his car door to find Liz crying.

"Baby, what's wrong?"

She didn't answer him.

"Liz?" His voice was full of concern.

She took a shaky breath. When she spoke, it was barely a whisper. "Michael and I have the same blood type."

Max was confused. "Sweetie, a lot of people have the same blood type."

Liz shook her head. "You don't understand. We're AB+. Only 4% of the population has AB+ blood. My grandfather had it, my father has it, I have it ... Michael has it."

"Liz what are you saying?"

She looked at Max with tears in her eyes. "I think..." She began to cry. "I don't think, I know that..."

He rubbed his thumb on her cheek. "What?"

"Michael's my brother."



So, are ya shocked? More to revealed*big*

Thanks for the AWESOME feedback!

posted on 22-Oct-2001 2:19:11 PM by sydniepaige
Hey guys,

I had a really great part written, but due to a MAJOR computer malfunction, I lost it.*sad* I'll re-write it and post it tonight. Sorry about the delay.

posted on 22-Oct-2001 8:26:30 PM by sydniepaige
Part 26

"What?" Max wasn't quite sure he'd heard her right.

Liz sniffed. "The Parkers are the only family in Roswell that have AB+ blood. It's past down from father to child."

"Baby, you can't be positive until you confront your father."

She pulled her phone from her purse. "He'd better tell me the truth." She dialed.

Parker residence.

"Hi Penny. Is my father in?"

Yes, Miss Elizabeth. Just one minute.

Liz grabbed Max's hand for support.

Lizzie, where are you? Dinner's in a couple of hours.

Max squeezed her hand.

"I need to ask you something Daddy and I need you to be completely honest with me."

What is it, Elizabeth.

She took a deep breath. "Are you Michael Guerin's father?"

There was silence on the other end.

"It's true, isn't it? Michael's my brother."


Liz nodded to Max. "Does mother know?"

The things that happened back then are complicated.

"Why the HELL won't you give me a straight answer?! Does she know or not?!" Liz demanded.

Max let go of her hand and ran his fingers through her hair.

Yes, she knows. But Eliza...

She turned her phone off and put it in her purse. "I don't FUCKING believe this!" She twisted her engagement ring around her finger. "Max?"

"What baby?"

She turned in her seat to face him. "Let's get married."

"We are getting married." He grabbed her hand and kissed the ring.

Liz shook her head. "No, I mean, let's get married now. Let's fly to Vegas and get married tonight."

Max's heart began to pound in his chest. He wasn't sure if it was out of excitement or fear. "I don't know if that's such a good idea right now. You're upset."

Her face fell. "Oh."

He lifted her chin. "Liz, if you want to get married tonight, we'll get married. I just don't want you to have any regrets."

She looked into his eyes. "How could I EVER regret doing what I've wanted to do my entire life?"

Max kissed her gently. "Let's call the guys and have them meet us at the airport in 2 hours."

Liz's eyes were shining. "I love you, Max!"

He caressed her face. "I love you too."


"Could someone PLEASE tell me why we're here? Max wouldn't say on the phone." Isabel asked the other three people that were there.

Maria shrugged. "Not a clue. Lizzie just called and said pack a bag, bring my benefit dress and meet them here."

"I've got my tux." Alex said as he strolled up. "Where are we going?"

Michael pointed to Liz and Max as they walked into the small airport lounge. "We're fixin' to find out. What's up guys?"

The couple looked at each other.

"We're getting married." Max told them.

"Duh. We all saw you put the rock on her finger." Maria rolled her eyes.

"Tonight." Liz informed the group.

"WHAT?" The four teens said in unison.


By the time that the group flew into Las Vegas, rented a car and checked into their rooms at the Mirage, they were exhausted.

"We have to wait until tomorrow. The license bureau is closed until morning." Liz sighed.

Max pulled her into a tight hug. "Then first thing in the morning, we'll go get our license, find a tacky Elvis chapel and you'll become my wife." He kissed her.

Maria's phone rang.

"Maria, don't answer it!" Liz told her. "The whole thing about eloping is for the parents NOT to find out."

The blond turned her phone off.

"Let's go get some sleep. We've got a busy day tomorrow."

The group of 6 got in the private, keyed elevator and headed up to the 28th floor.

"We'll see you in the morning." Max led Liz into their Tower Suite and closed the door behind them.


The next morning the group met for breakfast and discussed the days activities.

Liz pulled out her list. "Max and I are going to get our marriage license and then go check out that Elvis chapel we saw advertised at the car rental place and then go pick out Max's wedding band. After that we'll come back here and get dressed. Now, Isabel and Alex, I need you guys to organize a small reception for the six of us in our room. Try and hire a photographer. I know we're doing this behind our parent's backs, but if we don't document it, they'll be even MORE pissed." She ran her hand through her hair. "Maria and Michael, here's the address to the bakery. Go and order our cake. I called them and they said that they can have it done for this afternoon as long as it's NOT ove 3 tiers. You know what I like Maria. Don't let them talk you into something that I wouldn't like."

Maria saluted. "Aye, aye, Captain."

"Liz, you ready?" Max asked kissing her hand.

She took a deep breath. "Beyond,"

"We'll see you guys soon." Michael slapped Max on the back.


By 4 that afternoon, Michael was in his tuxedo walking Liz down the aisle in her white dress from the benefit. Max's eyes were glued on his love as she walked towards him carrying a bouquet of white roses.

Michael gave her hand to Max and took his place beside him.

The couple looked at each other with love in their eyes as the Elvis impersonater started.

"Dearly beloved..."

The ceremony was a blur. All that kept going though Liz's head was that she was marrying Max Evans. After they had said their 'I Do's' and exchanged their wedding rings, Elvis pronounced them man and wife.

"You may kiss your bride." He said with a raised lip.

Max pushed her hair behind her ear and leaned down and kissed her, passionately.



Okay, this isn't as good as what I had written last night, but it's gonna have to do. The computer I was typing it on was my sisters and it completely freaked. I guess that's what I get for not using my own.

Hope you enjoy it!

posted on 23-Oct-2001 9:03:23 PM by sydniepaige
I am SO happy that you all are enjoying this. Here's the next part. It's short, but important.

Part 27

Max carried his bride through the front door of the hotel, kissing her as they got inside.

The people in the lobby clapped for the couple. Max put Liz down and they smiled and waved and then went to the elevator.

As the doors closed, Max had her up against the wall and was kissing her passionately. The kiss lasted from the first floor to the 28th when the doors opened.

"That was just a preview." He wiggled his eyebrows. He opened the door and scooped her up in his arms carrying her into their room.

They were met by their friends throwing red and white rose petals at them.

Isabel went for simple; finger foods, cherry cola and the complimentary champagne from the hotel. (It helped being a Evans).

The cake was perfect. It was a 3 tier white cake with butter cream icing and was adorned with white roses. The top held a dark haired bride and groom.

Liz almost started crying when she saw it. "Oh my God, you guys, this is perfect."

The photographer that was hired was snapping pictures of everything. She got photos of Max and Liz dancing, sharing kisses, cutting and feeding the cake to one another, Max slowly pulling the light blue garter from Liz's thigh, Michael catching it, Maria catching the bouquet and all of the other traditional things.

After the photographer left, Isabel yawned. "I don't know about you guys, but I'm wiped."

Alex put his arm around her waist. "I was just about to say the same thing. ... Max, Liz, congratulations." He shook their hands.

"Thanks." They answered in unison.

"Well, brother dear, thanks for including me on this roller coaster ride. I'm really happy for you." Isabel hugged Max and then turned to Liz. "And thank you, Liz Parker ... Evans, for making Max the happiest I've EVER seen him. Welcome to the family."

Liz hugged her. "Thank you, Isabel. That means SO much to me."

"Well, you two behave tonight ... and if you can't, have fun." Isabel winked. She and Alex left for their room.

Michael stood and grabbed Maria's hand. "I guess that's our cue to get outta here."

"Actually, I ... uh, um ... I kinda need to talk to you about something." Liz stopped him.

"About?" He asked.

Liz grasped Max's hand tighter and looked into Michael's eyes. "I'm..." She started to get nervous. "I'm your..." She looked at Max for help.

"Michael, Jeff Parker's your father. Liz is your sister." He told his best friend and now brother-in-law.

Michael scratched his eyebrow and then rubbed his chin. "How'd you get him to finally admit it?"

Liz, Max and Maria looked at him in confusion.

"Wait a minute, you knew?" Liz questioned.

Michael nodded. "I kinda found a box of letters from Jeff to Caitlyn when I went snooping in the attic. I hadn't said anything cuz I've been waiting for them to admit it. How'd you find out?"

"Our blood type. It's a family trait. I called my fath... I mean our father and got him to admit it. He also admitted that my mother knows. That's when I hung up on him."

"Are you pissed that I didn't tell you?" Michael asked her.

Liz shook her head. "I think I understand why you didn't. ... So, I guess when we get back, we're gonna have to have a family meeting." She smiled.

He winked at her. "Sounds like a plan. ... I guess, Maria and I'll get goin', let you two get to the the honeymoonin' part. See ya later."

"Yeah, you two have fun." Maria grabbed Michael's hand and dragged him out the door.

Then, Max and Liz were alone.

"So, Mrs. Evans, what do you think we should do?" He pulled her flush against him.

She looked like she was thinking about it. "Hmm. Well, Mr. Evans, I think that we should go to bed."

He scratched the side of his face. "Bed huh?"

Liz nodded and then faked a yawn. "I could really use a good night sleep. How 'bout you?"

He pushed his groin into her and she felt his stiff cock against her stomach. His hand pulled the straps of her gown off of her shoulders and let the dress drop to the ground. She stood before him in a white garter belt, white stockings and white pumps.

She smiled. "Let the wedding night begin."



posted on 24-Oct-2001 9:45:17 PM by sydniepaige
Part 28

Liz's hands skillfully unbuttoned Max's shirt and removed it from his body. She couldn't help but lick his chest. "Mmm ... You taste so good." Her hands moved quickly to the button on his pants.

"Wait." He stopped her. "The first time I make love to my wife is going to be in bed." He picked up his love and carried her into the bedroom. Then he tossed her on the bed and started stripping off his clothes seductively.

Liz watched as he moved his hips and she became extremely wet. She pulled her legs up and rubbed her hand over her heat.

The sight of his wife lying on the bed in a garter belt and stockings beginning to pleasure herself, stopped him in his tracks.

"Don't stop. I'm really liking the show." Liz said as she slipped her middle finger inside of her cunt.

Max gave her a sexy half smile. "I like the show you're putting on as well."

"You do realize that the longer you have your pants on, the longer you're missing out on this." She pulled out her finger and brought it to her mouth, sucking her juices off of it.

Max was completely naked before she knew it and was hovering over her.

"That was quick." Liz looked into his eyes.

"I'm very thirsty." He kissed her and than traveled down her body to her juicy pussy. He licked her swollen folds. "Mmm."

She leaned up on her elbows and watched him eat her out.


Michael lay in bed and waited for Maria to get out of the shower. She'd been quite since they'd gotten back to their room and was curious as to why.

Maria exited the bathroom wearing Michael's Metallica t-shirt. She climbed into bed, kissed her boyfriend's cheek and lay on her side facing away from him.

"Okay, what did I do?" He asked, sitting up.

She turned over and looked at him like he was crazy. "Are you serious?"

"Yeah. Why are you acting like you're pissed off at me?"

She sat up and crossed her arms over her chest. "Michael, you've known that you're my best friend's brother for quite a while and you haven't said a word to me. I feel a little ... betrayed."

"Maria, the reason I didn't tell you was because, and I don't mean this to insult you, you're kind of a blabber mouth."

She gasped, taking his words in offense. "Thanks a lot. It's nice to know that the man I love thinks so little of me."

He threw his hands up. "If I had told you that Jeff Parker was my father, what's the first thing you'd have done?"

"I would have told Liz." She got quiet. "Oh, I see what you mean."

He put his arm around her. "I didn't want to mess things up. The true story would kill Liz and I didn't want her finding out."

She leaned her head on his shoulder. "Finding out what?"

Michael raised his eyebrow at her. "Maria?"

"I won't tell. I promise." She sighed.

He scratched his eyebrow. "Fine. Jeff married Nancy because Davis began suspecting him as my father. It was Caitlyn's idea. They had initially planned on still being together, but Davis sent her away until after I was born. The last letter that she received was the one that he sent after I was born. He told her how devestated he'd been since she'd been gone and how one night, he'd gotten drunk and slept with Nancy and she got pregnant."

Maria's face was saddened. "Your poor mother. First she's told that her baby's dead and then she find out that her best friend is pregnant with the man she loves baby. I completely understand why you didn't say anything."

She looked up at his face and saw the tears streak down his cheeks. She wiped his tears and then lay them down. She held him until they both fell asleep.


Max was slamming into his cock into his wife's pussy extreme force and she was meeting him thrust for thust. They'd been going at it for hours and their bodies were slick with sweat.

"Oh God! Max, I'm not ... I can't ..."

He kept going. "Just a little longer, Liz. Come on, do it for me."

Liz's breathing was out of control. Her muscles were aching and when she began to cunvulse in orgasm, she almost blacked out as he shot his lode deep inside her.

He collapsed on top of her. "You okay?"

She didn't didn't answer.

"Baby?" He looked at her with concern.

She was trying to focus. "I'm just really light-headed. That was incredible."

"Married sex is great." Max rolled off of her letting the coolness of the room lower his heated body temperature.

Liz laughed. "Sex with you is just incredible anyway." She rolled onto her side and looked at him. "I'm about to ask you something, but ... I don't want you to think I'm stupid."

He turned and faced her. "Elizabeth Parker, I could NEVER think you're stupid."

"That's Elizabeth Evans to you." She corrected him.

He winked at her. "My bad. So what do you want to ask me?"

She licked her lips. "Do you think, that when we get home, that we could possibly ... go out on a date?"

Max laughed. "You mean now that we're married? I don't see why not."

"We have kind of done things a little backwards, haven't we?" She commented.

He stroked her face. "I'd do it all again and not change a second of it." His lips met hers.

They were interrupted by the phone ringing.

"I can't believe that our friends are calling us ... now." Max picked up the phone. "This better be good. I'm fucking my wife."

There was a gasp on the other end of the line.

"Hello? ... Who is this?"

The voice on the other end was almost a whisper. Well, I guess that it's your mother-in-law. May I speak with my daughter.

Max turned pale.

"Baby who is it?"

He handed Liz the phone. "It's your mother."

Her hands started to shake as she took the phone. "Hello, Mother."

Please tell me that Max was joking and you're just there doing some illegal underaged gambling. Nancy's voice was trembling.

"No he wasn't. We got married." She answered.

Liz heard the phone drop and then heard her mother call for her father.


Did you find them?

They got married.

They did WHAT?!

Liz smiled nervously at her husband. "They're taking it really well." She said sarcastically.


"My name is Liz Evans now, Daddy. And my husband and I will be home when we're ready."

Jeff took a deep calming breath. Sweetheart, just come home so we can talk about everything.

"Like the fact that I have a brother that's been one of my best friends for most of my life? Or the fact that he's known about it and hasn't said anything? Is that part of the everything you want to talk about?"

Jeff was silent.

"I didn't think so." Liz hung up. "That went well, don't you think?"

Max kissed her forehead. "On the bright side, at least now it won't be such a shock to everyone." He unplugged the phone. "Let's get some sleep. I have a feeling that tomorrow's gonna be a LONG day.

She kissed him. "I love you, Max. I can't believe I get to spend the rest of my life with you."

Max smiled and then kissed her. "I know what you mean. I love you too baby."

He wrapped his arms around her and held her until the were both asleep.



Okay, I've rewritten this part about a hundred times and I'm still not that happy with it. Be honest with me and tell me what you think.

posted on 25-Oct-2001 9:27:34 PM by sydniepaige
Part 29 (Jeff & Caitlyn)

Caitlyn sat nervously on the couch in her den listening to the only man she'd ever loved tell her that the child that she gave birth to 18 1/2 years ago knew that Jeff was his father and had apparently known for some time. "Why hasn't Michael said anything?"

Jeff put his arm around her. "Elizabeth didn't say. She was a little too busy emphasizing the fact that Max Evans is now her husband."

"It's our fault, Jeff. You know that. GOD, I wish things could have been different." She put her head on his chest.

Jeff shook his head. "If they were, there would be either no Michael or no Lizzie. I admit I'm no candidate for father of the year, but they're my kids and I do love them. I just hope they can forgive me."

"It was my idea for you and Nancy to get married when my father started suspecting you even though I knew that she had strong feelings for you. If anyone needs forgiveness, it's me." Tears began streaming down her cheeks. "You are the only man I've ever loved Jeff and I gave you because I was 15 years old and you were 22. If Davis had EVER gotten proof that Michael was yours, you'd probaby STILL be in jail."

Jeff kissed the top of her head. "I know you made the biggest sacrifice of all, Cait. I also know how much I hurt you by getting Nancy pregnant, but don't for one moment think that I EVER stopped loving you. I mean, I remember the first time I saw you walk into the CrashDown with Nancy and that group. I thought that you were the most beautiful girl I'd ever seen. Of course you all told me that your name was Cait Michaels and that you were 18, and by the time you told me your real name and age I was completely in love with you."

"Jeff..." She started. "...I have a confession to make. I can't believe I'm about to admit this out loud." She sat up and faced him.

Jeff smiled at her. "What?"

Caitlyn licked her dry lips. "You're, um ... you're the only man I've been with ... ever."

He looked at her in shock. "Cait, you're 32 years old. You expect me to believe that you haven't had sex in 19 years?"

She shrugged. "I've kind of become an expert in the art of self love."

Jeff raised his eyebrows at her. Then, without even a thought, his lips descended on hers. She wrapped her arms around his neck and the kiss deepened.

Emotions flooded her body. All of a sudden she was 15 and her father was on one of his trips and she and Jeff were making out on the couch. It was as if nothing was different. Then she realized it was and she pushed him away. "We can't do this, Jeff. Too many people have already been hurt because of us. And as strange as this might sound, I can't betray Nancy."

He shook his head. "I know." He scratched his eyebrow.

Caitlyn gasped and put her hand over her mouth.


"Um, the way that you just scratched your eyebrow." Tears filled her eyes. "Michael does that all the time." She stood and walked towards the doorway of the room. "I think it's time you went home to your wife, Jeff. I can't deal with anymore of this tonight."

"Cait, please..."

She shook her head. "Please just go. I can't take anymore heartache, Jeff. I just can't."

He kissed her forehead and left.



Okay, I realize that this is just back story and very short, but it is necessary to set up the next part. Let me know what you think, because your feedback is SO incredible! Hopefully soon I can find the time to send each of you a shout out to thank each and every one of you.

posted on 26-Oct-2001 9:23:49 PM by sydniepaige
OH MY GOD! You guys give great feedback.

SmileeUk => Thanks for spotting my blunder. You can now see why I have a Masters in English and Literature instead of math.*big*

Blink => 10 parts, oh my goodness, you must be blind by now!

I'm currently working on part 30 so I can't promise it by tonight. But, I'll get it up as soon as I can tomorrow.

Oh yeah, one question... Should I add a tiny bit more to the honeymoon before sending them back to Roswell?*happy*

posted on 27-Oct-2001 10:34:51 PM by sydniepaige
I know I promised a new part today, but that's before I remembered my daughter's school Halloween carnival was tonight. Woohoo lots of fun*sad* Anyway, I WILL get the next part out tomorrow. Promise, promise, promise.

posted on 28-Oct-2001 6:27:52 PM by sydniepaige
Part 30

Liz woke to the sensation of Max buried deep inside her. They'd woken in the middle of the night and began making love, but exhaustion had taken over and they'd fallen asleep.

She took of her position on top of him, sat up and started riding him. As she rocked, she felt him grow harder inside of her. He'd yet to wake.

Liz adored how his body instinctively reacted to her movements. His hands went to her hips and he moaned. This made her move faster.

Max's eyes opened just as his wife was reaching her first orgasm. "Having fun without me?"

She lay on top of him and kissed him. "You were having fun. Trust me."

He flipped them over. "I'll enjoy it more now." He pumped in and out of her.

"Oh MAX!" She breathed.

He looked into her eyes. "How'd I ... EVER ... live without you? ... You're so FUCKING perfect!"

Liz brought her legs up yo his lower back causing the amount of pressure on her clit that she needed. "Oh yeah!"

"You like that, baby?" He grunted.

Her breathing was erratic. "More..."

Max gratefully complied with her requset, moving faster."

The waslls of her pussy squeezed and pulled his cock deeper inside her.

"I'm gonna cum, Liz! Make me cum!"

Liz's body writhed beneath her husband's. Within seconds, they exploded.

After a few minutes, Max pulled out of her and rolled them over.

The phone ran. Liz put her hand gently on Max's arm as he reached to answer it. "Please ... watch what you say this time."

He answered it laughing. "Max and Liz Evans room. Why, might I ask, are you calling."

"Because I just got off of the phone with our mother and she had just gotten off of the phone with your mother-in-law. Do you want to know how upset she is?"

"And a very good morning to you too, Isabell. What'd she say?"

Well, she's disappointed that her only son got married and she wasn't there to see it."

"And Dad?"

"He used language that even I wouldn't use. He and Mr. Parker are having a closed door meeting this morning."

Max looked at his wife. "Our fathers are meeting this morning. I'm thinking that CAN'T be good."

Liz shrugged. "I don't care. We're married and there's nothing they can do about it."

He smiled and began kissing her.

Hello! I'm still on the line here! Suck face on your own time!"

"Sorry Iz."

"When are we going back?"

He looked at the clock. "Well, it's 9:30 now. Let's meet for lunch at noon and then we'll go from there. Sound good?"

"I'll call Michael and Maria and tell them what's going on."

"Thanks, Isabel." Max hung up the phone.

"I guess we gotta go back to the real world, huh?"

He kissed her gently. "Unfortunately." He gave her his sexy half smile. "Of course, you know, we still need to shower."

Liz's eyes lit up. "Mmm ... that sounds promising."

Max jumped up off of the bed, scooped her up in his arms and carried her to the large bathroom.

He sat her on the counter and moved to turn the shower on.

"Uh uh." Liz shook her head. "I'm in the mood for a bath."

"Oh really?" He asked.

She nodded. "I'm thinking with lots of bubbles."

He turned to the huge, marble bathtub and turned the water on. Liz hopped down from the counter and handed him the strawberry scented bubble bath.

He poured it in and her scent filled the bathroom.

As the water and bubbles filled the tub, Liz stepped in and held her hand out to Max.

"How are we going to do this?" He asked.

She smiled. "Have a seat.

He did as he was told and Liz straddled him, plunging down on his hardened member.

She leaned back and dipped her hair in the water. When she came back up, she ran her hands over it removing the excess water.

Max scooped up two handfuls of bubbles and covered her breasts.

Liz arched into his hands pushing him deeper inside of her. "This feels incredible!"

Max leaned back pulling his feet up so they sat flat on the bottom of the tub. He put his hands on either side of the marble and and began thrusting upwards. Moaning and grunting as he went.

Liz placed her hands on Max's shoulder and let the sloshing water splash against her clit. "Oh dear GOD! This feels good!"

Max felt his balls suddenly tighten and then he spewed his hot cum inside her. Her orgasm immediately followed.

She collapsed on top of him. "I suppose we should actually bathe now."

Max laughed. "I'll was yours if you wash mine."


posted on 30-Oct-2001 8:41:35 PM by sydniepaige
I am SO sorry that I haven't posted anything in a couple of days. Been busy getting things ready for my classes party tomorrow. I went back after school with all intent and purpose of decorating and ended up rearranging my entire classroom. After moving 2 bookshelves, 4 computers, 4 tables, my desk and a file cabinet, I'm a little tired. I promise the next part by tomorrow night.

Thanks for all of the encouraging feedback!
posted on 31-Oct-2001 10:15:12 PM by sydniepaige
Part 31

Max and Liz sat in the driveway in front of her parent's home. They'd called their parents from the airport and asked them to meet there.

He grabbed her hand and kissed it. "We're in this together, Baby."

She gave him a weak smile and nodded.

Max got out of his car and then opened her door to let her out. She grasped his hand tightly as they walked ip the steps to the front door.

Liz was going to walk in, but decided to ring the bell instead.

"You're stalling."

"I know."

The door opened. A flustered Penny stood before them.

"Where is everyone?" Liz asked her.

"Um ... they ... they're in the private bar." Penny answered stepping back and allowing them in.

Liz and Max made their way through the house and then down the stairs that led to the private bar.

The bar itself was beautiful. It was 25 feet long, carved out of Redwood and over 100 years old. Jeff had bought it from the owner of a hotel in New Orleans before the hotel itself was demolished. Nancy had insisted that he wanted it, it would have to be out of sight.

"Well, well, if it isn't the happy couple?" Philip raised his glass as the teens entered the room. "So tell me son, did ya knock her up?"

"Philip!" Diane yelled at him and then began laughing.

Max looked at his wife. "They're drunk."

Jeff slapped him on the back. "That we are boy! We're celebratin'."

"The two of us getting married?"

"AW, hell no, Lizzie. Ya see, your father-in-law..." Jeff looked at Philip. "No offense.:

"None taken." Philip lifted his glass and then swallowed the rest of his drink.

"Anyway, he and I had a little meetin' this mornin'. We figured that since there's nothin' we can do about you two screwin' up your lives, we decided now would be a good time to unite Evans World and Parker Unlimited. A little merger so to speak."

"Hopefully, it will over shadow this little marriage thing of yours." Philip tossled Max's hair.

Liz looked at Nancy. She was sitting on a barstool, staring into her drink. "Mother?"

Nancy shrugged. "Hey, you married the man you love." She looked over to Jeff. "At least you won't have to get him drunk to sleep with you."

Max turned to Liz. "This is hopeless, Liz."

She ignored him. "What are you talking about, Mother?"

Nancy silently laughed. "The ONLY reason you're even here is because your father was missing his precious Cait. He got buzzed and you were conceived."

Liz's face went completely blank.

Nancy realized what she said and tried to take it back, but her daughter silenced her by holding up her hand.

"Suddenly, my life make sense. I always wondered why I felt resented at times by Caitlyn ... even Daddy sometimes. I was a constant reminder of their loss and his betrayal."

"Elizabeth, NO! Your father loves you." Nancy protested.

Liz nodded slightly. But he would have loved Michael more. Hell, if Davis Guerin hadn't been such an asshole, I wouldn't even be here." Tears were falling down her cheeks.

"Elizabeth, that is NOT true! You're..."

"MOTHER! I HATE being called Elizabeth!"

Nancy looked shocked. "Since when?"

"Since FOREVER!" Liz shouted. "Elizabeth Parker was a robot. ALWAYS doing what was expected of her to please everyone. "I'm Liz Evans!" She wrapped her arms around Max. "The ONLY one I have to PLEASE is my husband!"

"Eliza ... Liz..." Nancy started, but once again, she was silenced by her daughter's hand.

Liz looked up at Max. "Come with me to pack." She then turned to Diane who was quickly sobered by the shock of what had been said. "May we stay with you tonight?"

Diane nodded. "Sure, Honey."

Liz and Max headed out of the bar.

"Elizabeth, please! Don't run away from this! We need to talk!" Nancy pleaded.

Liz turned slowly to face Nancy. "No MOTHER, I think enough's been said already!"

She pulled Max out of the room. Jeff started heading out as well.

"Where the hell are you going?" Nancy questioned loudly.

He looked as if he was trying to focus. "I gotta go dee Cait and Michael." He left.

Philip chuckled. "We're gonna SO be fucking richer more."

Diane shook her head. "Philip, I think it's time we went home. You're starting to jumble."

He threw his arms around her. "Hmm ... I'd like to jumble you."

Nancy put her hand on her head. "Just get him out of here. Diane."

Diane nodded, knowing that her husband's drunkeness was the last thing Nancy needed. "I'll see if I can talk to her, Nancy, but I can't promise she'll listen."

"Thank you."


Michael walked to the door to answer the bell. "I've got it Teresa." He intercepted the maid. He opened the door to find Jeff. "Hey Pop." He said as if he'd always had.

"Um ... hello, Michael. Um ... I ... I just wanted to, um ... well, um..." He blathered.

Michael stepped back. "Why don't ya come on in?"

Jeff enter the house still not having a clue as to what to say to his eldest child.

"Who's at the door, Michael?" Caitlyn asked as she walked into the foyer. "Oh ... um..."

"God, I hope that's not genetic." Michael laughed. This confused his parents. "Look, now that you're both here, I guess I've got some explainin' to do."

The followed Michael into Caitlyn's office and they both sat on the couch. Michael sat on the desk.

He took a calming breath, "I found the letters. The ones you sent to each other when your father sent you away. I was in the attic looking for stuff for my family tree project for that damn 'Home and Family' class Maria made me take last year. The reason I didn't say anything Was because I didn't want to screw with Liz's life."

Jeff and Caitlyn had yet to say a word.

"This is where you two talk."


Max was lying in his bed holding his sobbing wife in his arms. "I love you, Liz. I know that everything sucks right now, but things WILL get better." He kissed the top of her head.

"Not everything sucks, Max." She looked up at him. "I'm lying in my husband's arms. And I know, in time, things will work out with my parents. It just hurts knowing that I was an accident."

Max positioned himself on top of her and put his hand on her face. "You listen to me, Liz Evans! You are NO accident! You are MY wife and I don't want to EVER hear you say that again!"

His lips crashed down on hers in a heated, passionate kiss.



Sorry it took so long for me to get this small part out. I'll try not to take so long next time.

Tell me whacha think!

posted on 2-Nov-2001 9:55:37 PM by sydniepaige
Part 32

Michael, Jeff and Caitlyn had stayed up all night talking about everything.

Jeff told Michael it was up to him on the kind of relationship they had.

"I'd actually like to talk to Liz first if that's okay. She's the injured party, here." He told him.

"Jeff nodded. "I understand, but I do have one request."

"What's that?"

"Do you think it would be possible for me to hold my som for the first time?" He asked.

Michael stood up. "Your son would like that.

Jeff grabbed ahold of Michael and held on for dear life. Michael hugged him just as tightly.

Caitlyn watched the scene play out before her. She knew that she'd never have a relationship with Jeff, but she was overjoyed that Michael, their so, would.


Liz woke to the sound of the alarm clock buzzing loudly. Max's hand instinctively turned it off.

"Why'd you set that?" She groaned.

He kissed her forehead. "School. We've missed the last 2 days."

She sighed. "Oh yeah, that. ... Do you want the shower first?"

"You take it. ... Just wake me when you get out." He smiled and shut his eyes.

Liz goosed him and his eyes flew open. "I don't think so mister!" She straddled him. "I think that shower is big enough for the both of us."

Max placed his hands on her hips. "If we shower together, we'll NEVER get to school." He felt himself harden.

She lifted her eyebrow and grinned. "And that's a bad reason because..."

"I have a game tomorrow. I've already missed 2 practices. If I miss today, I don't play."

She dropped down to her hands and hovered over his face. "You can ply on my field. You'll never strike out and you're gaurenteed a homerun." She felt the tip of his cock brush against her wetness. "Looks like the batter's up."

"Liz ... we ... can't."

Before he finished, she let her pussy push down and encase his throbbing prick inside of her.

"UH!" Max grunted. "Screw it!" He said as he rolled them over and started fucking her.

Liz brough her legs up to his shoulders and let him go deeper with every thrust. "Oh yeah! ... Faster Max!"

"No problem, baby!" Max slid in and out of her with everything he had.

"Oooh ... oh Max ... oh Max..." Liz moved her hand to where they were joined and began to rub her clit furiously. She could no longer contain herself and came screaming his name. "MAX!!!!!!!!!!"

A few more thrusts and Max spewed his seed deep inside her.


"Mr. Evans, Miss Parker. I'm so glad that you could join us after missing 2 days with 15 minutes left." Dr. Benjamin told the couple. "We'll talk after class."

They smiled and took their seats. When the bell rang, they remained seated as their teacher approached them.

"So, what'd you two do, run off to Vegas and get married?"

Max and Liz looked at each other and then back at Dr. Benjamin.

"Actually, that's exactly what we did." Liz showed him her ring.

"Holy SHIT! ... Sorry, I mean, you guys just started dating."

"Technically." Max replied.

"I don't mean to be intrusive, but..."

"No, Dr. Benjamin, I'm not pregnant. It's just that we were forced to be apart for so long that we decided that we wouldn't let it happen again."

He shook his head. "Well, I wish you luck."


Jeff walked into his and Nancy's bedroom at 10 AM. Nancy was lying on their bed with a wet washcloth on her face.

"Migraine?" He asked.

"Massive hangover. ... Where were you Jeff?"

He hesitated a few beats. "I went to Cait's to talk to Michael."

"And that too all night?" She took the cloth off her face and sat up.

"Could we please discuss this AFTER I've had a shower?"

Nancy pushed her hair behind her ear. "Just tell me what's gonna happen, Jeff!" Her voice was shaky. "I know that you love me, but you've never BEEN in love with me. Not like you are with her."

Jeff sat on the bed next to his wife and took her hand in his. "I wish to GOD I knew, Nancy. I really do, but I just don't know."

Tears trickled down her face. "I've loved you for so long."

"I know, Nance." He took a deep breath and slowly let it out. "I know that the last few days have been hard on you."

She bolted off of the bed. "Days? Try years. In the whole time we've been married you have never ONCE initiated sex. And when we do have sex, it's usually her name that you call out." She wiped the tears from her face. "I'm going for a walk. If our daughter calls, page me."

Nancy slammed the door on her way out.

For the second time in his life, Jeff Parker had one of the most decisions to make in his life and once again it involved Caitlyn and Nancy.


Max and Michael took a LOT of heat from their coach for missing practice. For the first half hour they ran laps.

"Maxwell, you own me BIG for this. First you drag me off to Las Vegas and marry my little sister and then I have to take crap from the coach and run laps." Michael said breathlessly after he'd finished running laps.

Max looked up from the water fountain. "What do you want, my first born?"

Michael drank some water and then patted him on the back. "Nah, just name him after me and we'll call it even."

Max looked up into the bleachers at his wife. She was wearing his green shirt and a pair of faded cutoff jeans. Her hair was pulled up in a ponytail. "God, she's sexy."

Liz saw Max staring at her and waved.

Max let out a low growl.

"Hey!" Michael wacked his arm. "I know she's your wife. but she's still my sister."

"Well brother-in-law, let's get our asses out on the field before Coach makes us run more laps."


Liz watched her husband run out on the baseball field. "Oh my GOD, look at that ass! Mmm..."

Pam troy piped up. "Rumor has it that you get to look at Max's ass 'til death do you part. So, how far along are you?"

"I'm NOT pregnant Pam! Max and I got married because we love each other. You're just pissed because my HUSBAND wouldn't give you the time of day." Liz snubbed her.

Pam was so flustered by Liz's words that she just huffed and walked off.

Liz smiled to herself. "That felt good."


Nancy had been walking around for hours. She finally found herself on the doorstep of the Guerin estate, ringing her doorbell.

Caitlyn happened to be walking by the door when the bell rang. "I'll get it Teresa." She opened it. "Nancy?"
Her heart broke at the sight of the hurt on her best friends face.

"You see, Caity, my, uh, husband's in love with another woman and I really need my best friend right now, but that's a problem because it's my best friend that my husband's in love with and I don't know what to do." Nancy broke down.



Okay, this part is really lame, but it's what came out of my warped mind. For some reason I bawled when I wrote that last part. Color me surprised!

Hope you enjoyed it anyway!

posted on 4-Nov-2001 9:52:47 PM by sydniepaige
This weekend has been a total and complete bitch so I'm sorry to say that there won't be a new part until tomorrow. I will tell you that it will be dealing with Caitlyn and Nancy.

posted on 5-Nov-2001 9:58:03 PM by sydniepaige
Part 33
Caitlyn & Nancy

Nancy looked around Caitlyn's old bedroom as she waited for her friend to come back with the most essential item that they needed for this discussion.

"Okay, vanilla for you and mint chocolate chip for me." Caitlyn said as she handed Nancy a pint of ice cream and and a spoon and climbing on the bed next to her.

"This room is like a time warp. Why haven't you redecorated it?"

Caitlyn shrugged. "Momma decorated it. I just haven't had the heart to change it. It keeps her with me. ... But, that's not why you're here. ... I am SO sorry ... for everything..."

Nancy stopped her from speaking. "Caity, I didn't come here to play the blame game. We all share in it. I came here because ... Jeff doesn't belong to me ... he never has ... and if the two of you want to be together, then I'm ready to step aside."

Caitlyn stared at her best friend. "I have no intentions of taking Jeff from you. I gave up my right to be with him when I allowed my father to dictate my life and steal my son. You and Jeff and Elizabeth are a family. Michael and I are the outsiders."

Nancy swallowed her bite of ice cream. "I don't believe you. I'm telling you that you can FINALLY have what's yours and you're being unselfish as usual."

"Unselfishness has nothing to do with it." She sighed. "You have done SO much for me for as long as I can remember. I remember the day that you introduced me to Jeff. We'd been at the mall and you took me to get my first makeover. Your reasoning was because Momma had died before she could get to all of the girl stuff and you wanted to pamper me." Tears filled her eyes. "We talked about everything that day. Even your crush on Jeff. Afterwards, we went to the CrashDown to meet up with your friends from school. We told everybody that my name was Cait Michaels and that I was 18 and visiting from out of town."

Nancy laughed slightly. "I remember that people who had known you your entire life didn't recognize you. And then I saw the way Jeff was looking at you. I knew right then and there that he'd never look at me that way."

"Even when he FINALLY find out that I was really Caitlyn Guerin 15 year old high school freshman and was ready to dump my ass, it was you that told him how rare it was to find love like we had." She pointed to her window. "When he showed up at my window that night, we made love for the first time. A few months later, I got pregnant. When I told you, you didn't get mad at me or talk down to me, you just held me and told me that we'd get through it."

"Yeah, well, I knew that your dad was gonna give you hell so I didn't want to add to it. I remember wishing it were me instead of you." Nancy put the carton on the nightstand.

"And then I go and ask you to marry Jeff to throw my dad off his scent, knowing how you felt about him." She shook her head. "That's the most selfish thing I've EVER done."

"You know what? Let's not talk about this anymore. What little, if any, that Jeff and I had is over. I'm sorry that I showed up on your doorstep in tears. At first, I wanted to make you feel bad, but I love you too much for that. You're my baby sister. Maybe not by blood, but in my heart."

A worried look came over Caitlyn's face. "When the tabloids get ahold of this, businesswise, we'll be ruined."

"I've thought about that. A friend of mine is a writer with People. If we give her the exclusive and beat the tabloids to it, we can get our story out and gain public sympathy."

"You are so FUCKING unbelievable, Nancy. ... What about the kids?"

Nancy gave a sad smile. "I was thinking that after Elizabeth's birthday party, we can all get togther and talk. Just you, me, Jeff, Liz and Michael."

"Don't forget your son-in-law. I'm pretty sure he won't be leaving his wife's side."

The red head sighed. "My baby girl is MARRIED, Caity. I'f she forgets to take her birth control..."

"You could be a grandmother by the age of 40." Caitlyn stuck her tongue out a her.

"Excuse me, but you DO know that your son is having sex with his girlfriend. You could be a grandma at 35, hon."

The women looked at each other and burst out laughing.

"Will you come with me to talk to Jeff?" Nancy asked her.

"I don't think that's such a good idea. You and Jeff need..."

Nancy grabbed Caitlyn's hand. "I NEED you there. This is between the 3 of us. We need to figure out how to explain to Elizabeth and Michael what we went through back then."

"If we show up at your house together, Jeff will have a stroke. Maybe, we should call first."

"Fine." Nancy sighed.


"What Caity?"

"I love you so much."

"I love you too, Caity-girl. We've been through too much together for me not to. Maybe no we can all be happy."



Okay, I realize that you're probably completely confused now that Nancy didn't blast Caitlyn, but realize that the 3 of them knew what they were getting into when Nancy agreed to marry Jeff. Believe me, I am going somewhere with this.

posted on 6-Nov-2001 10:35:06 PM by sydniepaige
Part 34

Liz slammed her phone up against the wall as Max exited the bathroom in a towel. "UGH!"

"I hope you're not pissed at me, cuz you kinda just killed your cell phone." Max walked over to her and wrapped his bare muscular arms around her waist.

She sighed looking down at what once was her phone. "Amy just called to tell me that the party's still on and that Jenna needs me to try on my dress one more time to make sure everything's in the right place. ... At least I'll get the pleasure of seeing the look on my mother's face when she notices that I'm not wearing her ugly purple dress."

Max kissed her forehead. "What does your dress look like?"

Liz got a devilish smile on her face and looked into her husband's eyes. "For the most part, I'd have to say it's flesh color."

He lifted his eyebrows. "Oh, really?"

She nodded. "Um hmm. See, I picked it out after you kissed me in the Chem lab ... and I was gonna try to get your, uh, attention with my seductive looking dress."

"Exactly how much color will be flesh?" He gave her his sexy half smile.

"A little less then you're showing..." She pulled the towel from his waist. "" She stroked his manhood.

"Liz..." He hissed.

She squeezed him slightly. "I don't wanna talk about my dress or the party or anything else right now."

Desire filled Max's eyes as he lifted Liz in his arms and carried her to his bed. He lay her down and began removing her shorts. "I love it when you don't wear panties." His fingers slipped easily between her folds.

She took a sharp intake of air. "I know you do." Her body started to writhe as Max slid his fingers in and out of her drenched pussy. "Oh Max ... ooh..."

He climbed onto the bed with his wife and replaced his fingers with his mouth. "You taste so good!"

"Oh God, don't stop!"

He didn't. Instead he devoured her. He once again inserted two fingers into her and fucked and sucked her.

Liz was quickily going over. Right as her orgasm hit and she was screaming her husband's name, the door opened. "Max, Elizabeth, sweetie, dinner should be ready ... I am SO..." Diane closed the door quickly.

Liz covered her face with her hands as her face turned beet red. "Oh ... My ... God."

Max didn't miss a beat as he laughed against her lower lips.

Liz sat up. "That's enough, Max. The moment's kind of dead." She scooted back. "Your poor mother."

He just looked at her, got off of the bed and went back into the bathroom.

"Max?" She called after him but he didn't answer. She got up and followed him into the bathroom."

Max was standing over the toilet. His left hand was on the wall and his right one was pumping his cock.

"Oh Max, you look so gorgeous doing that."

His eyes met hers. "Help me." He pleaded.

Liz moved to him and dropped to her knees. She took his hand and entwined his fingers with hers and her mouth engulfed his penis.

Max's head fell back as Liz's teeth scraped gently over the smooth, sensitive skin. "Oh fuck!" He breathed.

Her other hand grabbed the base of his cock and started squeezing and twisting it as she sucked harder.

Max's hips started pumping involutarily and Liz began to moan sending vibrations throughout his groin. "Oh yeah, baby ... I'm so close."

She moved her hand down to his tender sac and applied pressure. That's all it took. Max's cum shot down her throat.

When he was dry, he stood her up and kissed her with everything he had. "I love you SO much, Liz."

She smiled. "I love you, too, baby." She looked at the two of them in the mirror. "We make a beautiful couple, don't we?"

"It's like we were made for each other." He stroked her face.

"We're what my Grandma would have call soulmates. Each others other half."

His lips met hers. "We definitely are. I didn't feel complete until you became mine."

"Max, I've been yours forever."


Maria entered Michael's house and went directly to his room. She walked in his door, shut it behind her and moved over to his bed where a heated makeout section insued.

He sucked on her neck for quite a while before he pulled away.

"You just gave me a huge hickey, didn't you?" She narrowed her eyes at him.

Michael's only answer was a smile. Then they rolled over so she could rest her head on his chest.

"How was your make-up test?" He finally said after a few minutes as he ran his fingers through her hair.

Maria pouted. "It sucked! It was all essay and took me like 2 hours. Sorry I missed your practice."

He kissed the top of her head. "Yeah, well, all you really missed was me and Max running laps for the first 30 minutes and then taking shit from the coach for an hour and a half. But, we're still starting tomorrow so it was worth it."

"How was Liz this afternoon? We barely got to talk all day and when I try to call her cell, she doesn't answer."

Michael laughed. "You would of loved it. My little sister went off on Pam Troy."

Maria laughed as well. "It's about time. She's been giving Liz crap for years. ... Have you and Liz had a chance to talk yet?"

"Not really. She needs Max right now. She'll come to me when she's ready. ... Think you can get the kinks out of my back?"

She sat up. "Roll over."

He did as he was told and Maria straddled him. Her hands started at his shoulders. As she moved down to his lower back, he winced.

"It's giving you trouble again, isn't it?"

Michael nodded. "Don't say anything."

"Michael, you need to go and have it checked it out. There could be something seriously wrong."

"Maria, I don't want my mother to find out the real extent of the pain that Hank caused me. She feels SO much guilt even though none of it's her fault. Just keep rubbing, okay."

She continued to massage his back. "Your mom doesn't have to find out. I want you to go to the doctor and find out what's wrong."

He sighed. "I'll think about it."


Max and Liz slowly walked into the dining room hand in hand. He pulled out Liz's chair and sat next to her.

Diane motioned to the butler. "You may serve now."

Liz began to shake uncontrolably.

"Liz, honey, are you okay?" Her mother-in-law asked her.

But she heard nothing. The last few weeks flooded her mind. Max kissing her, the arrangement, making love for the first time, Tess, Isabel, Max proposing to her in front of everyone, the blood drive, Michael being her brother, her parent's betrayal, the wedding, the confrontation. She was a mistake.

Make put his hand on her cheek. "Baby are you alright?"

She looked at her husband. Her face was suddenly very pale. "I'm not feeling too well. Would you please excuse me?"

As she stood, Liz became extremely dizzy and then her world went black.



You guys are so incredibly generous with the feedback. Hope you enjoyed this part.


[ edited 1 time(s), last at 7-Nov-2001 9:44:51 PM ]
posted on 7-Nov-2001 9:46:26 PM by sydniepaige
Part 34 is completed and on page 20.

posted on 8-Nov-2001 8:49:22 PM by sydniepaige
I've decided to completely rewrite Part 35 so I won't have it out tonight. But believe me, it's gonna be a doozy. Thanks for all the feedback you wonderful group of people. You give me inspiration!

posted on 9-Nov-2001 7:39:21 PM by sydniepaige
Part 35

When Liz opened her eyes, she saw Max sitting in a chair next to the bed she was lying. She also saw that she was hooked up to an IV and a heart monitor.


He looked at her and smiled. "Hey, you."

"Why am I in the hospital?" She asked.

Max stood and kissed her forehead. "You fainted and hit your head. When you didn't wake up you had us all pretty worried."

Liz gave him a nervous smile. "Are my parents here?"

He nodded. "Yeah, I called them. You don't mind, do you?"

"No. Would you get them for me?"

He kissed her again on the forehead. "Sure, baby."

Max left the room and Liz's eyes were wide with nervousness. A few minutes later, he re-entered the room with Jeff and Nancy behind him.

"Max, I need to talk to my parents alone, please."

He winked at her. "Okay, sweetheart. I'll tell Dr. Holder that you're awake."

"Thank you."

Max kissed her sweetly and left the room.

Liz looked at her parents who were still by the door. "What was that about?"

"What?" Nancy and Jeff asked together.

*What is with everyone?* "Why is Max Evans acting like we're a couple? Better question, why don't the two of you looked surprised?"

There was silence.

"Mother? Daddy? Could you please tell me what's going on?" She begged.

Right as Jeff was about to say something, the doctor walked in.


Max sat in the waiting room drumming his fingers on the arm of his chair. "What the fuck is taking so long. Dr. Holder told me he'd come get me, but that was an hour ago."

Diane rubbed her son's back. "Honey, he's probably just examining her more extensively. When he's done, he'll come get you. ... Did you call Michael?"

Max shook his head. "I wanted to make sure that she's okay first."

Jeff walked into the waiting room with the doctor.

Max stood immediately. "Dr. Holder, how's my wife?"

"Have a seat Max." The doctor told him.

He sank back into the chair next to his mother and grabbed her hand. "This can't be good."

Dr. Holder pulled a chair directly in front of him. "We've gotten Elizabeth's test results back." He hesitated. "Max, according to the bloof test we ran, she's a little over a week pregnant."

Max shook his head. "She's on birth control."

"It's not one hundred percent. ... That's not all. Your wife is experiencing some amnesia. She doesn't remember anything after the morning of April 24th."

"She doesn't know we're married?"

Jeff spoke up. "I told her. She couldn't understand how she could be pregnant considering that she was a virgin. The psychiatrist said that we could tell her without revealing too much. Lizzie asked to see you."

Tears were threatening to spill from his eyes. What can't I tell her?"

"Nothing to do with what Michael or Caitlyn or any of that situation. Not yet at least." Jeff told him.


Max slowly opened the door to Liz's hospital room. "May I come in?"

Liz looked up at him and nodded. "I guess."

"You must be completely freaked."

She nervously shrugged. "Well, I wake up, I'm 18, married to a guy I hardly know and I'm pregnant by him. Yeah, I'm a little freaked."

He walked to her and stood by her bed. "Why don't I tell you about how we got together and maybe it will help with your memory. But first, let me try something else." His hand caressed her face and he leaned down and kissed her, deeply and passionately.

When the kiss broke, Liz stared deeply into Max's eyes.

"Anything?" He asked.


Max laughed. "Well, you got the reaction right. Did that jog anything?"

She shook her head and looked at him innocently. "Maybe we should try that again, just to see."

He pushed her hair behind her ear and his lips met hers again. Liz didn't know what exactly she should be remembering, but she knew that kissing Max Evans was making her entire body respond. So much so that she pulled him down on the bed with her. When breathing became a necessity, they pulled apart.

"This is like my fantasy." She put her hand over her mouth. "Oh my God. I am so embarrassed that I just admitted that to you."

Max laughed. "Liz, we're married. We've filled all of each other's fantasies."

Her eyes grew wide and her face turned red just thinking about some of the things that she had fantasized about this man beside her. "We have?"

He placed his hand over her flat stomach. "I think we have proof of that, don't you?"

Liz's face grew stoic. "All that me being pregnant means is that we've had sex."

"No." He disagreed. "We made love and we created this baby out of our love for each other. Look Liz, you and I have loved each other our entire lives. On April 24th I kissed you for the first, well, technically the second time, but I don't know if kissing you on a dare from Michael when we were 7 counts."

She remembered that first kiss and smiled.

"Our families got into a businesses became the focus of a take over and our parents decided that our dating would make them back off. What they didn't know, was that we already headed that way."

"Max, I know you're trying to do the romance thing and tell me about our rather brief courtship, but if you'd get someone to bring me my journal, or better yet take me home and I can get it myself, I can just read about all of this."

Max thought about it for a minute. She hadn't taken her journal to Vegas with her and they'd been together just about every moment since, so he was pretty sure that there was nothing in there about Michael being her brother.

He rubbed her cheek again. "I truly doubt that the doctor's gonna release you tonight. Especially with it being almost midnight."

Liz pouted. "I just wanna go home and sleep in my own bed. ... Oh, wait a minute. Where do we live?"

Max was taken aback. "Uh, well, last night was our first night back and we stayed at my folks place. ... Liz, if you're not comfortable with staying with me, I understand."

"NO!" She answered too loudly and too quickly. "I was just thinking that maybe, possibly if we stayed at my house that reading my journal ... together, might help me to remember."

He kissed her softly. "I love you SO much, Liz Evans."

Liz smiled shyly. "You know, it's funny. For as long as I can remember, I've wanted to be Mrs. Max Evans, and now I am. This is weird."

He kissed her again and then rested his forehead against hers. "Let's page the Nurse's station and get Dr. Holder in here. My wife wants to go home."


At 2 AM Max carried Liz into her parent's house. She'd fallen asleep in the car on the way there.

"Do you need any help there, Max?" Jeff asked his son-in-law.

Max looked into the angelic sleeping face of the woman he adored. "No, sir. I'm just gonna put her in her bed and keep an eye on her."

"She's lucky to have you, Max." Nancy said. "Thank you for taking care of our little girl."

He smiled at them and then headed up the stairs.


Liz woke around noon. Max wasn't there. "It must have been a dream." She suddenly became very nauseus. "Or not."

She bolted from the bed into the bathroom, not noticing that the shower was on, and proceeded to empty the contents of her stomach.

She felt her hair being pulled behind her neck. She saw Max standing wet and naked behind her. *How could I have forgotten something so magnificant as that body.*

"Are you okay?" He asked with much concern in his voice.

Liz swallowed hard. "It must be a pregnancy thing." She flushed the toilet, stood and the grabbed her toothbrush.

Max forgot that he was naked as he just stood watching her.

When she finshed brushing her teeth, she shyly looked at Max. "Um, you do realize that you don't have any clothes on, right?"

He snatched the towel off the counter and wrapped it around his waist. "Sorry about that."

She took the sight of him in the green towel. *That really doesn't help much* She turned back to look at herself in the mirror.

He closed the gap between them and wrapped his arms around her waist resting his hands on her flat tummy. "Is everything alright in there?"

Liz looked back at him and gave him a slight smile. "As far as I know. Right now, the baby's still a mass of cells forming into what in a few weeks will resemble a fat seahorse."

"Ever the scientist." He kissed her neck.

She flinched a little and saw the hurt in his eyes. "I didn't mean that. Honestly, I feel really safe with you. I just wish I could remember everything." She turned to face him.

"Liz, why don't you go get your journal and you can at least understand how our relationship progress so quickly."

She wrapped her arms around his neck and kissed him sweetly. "I just kinda wanted to do that."

Max looked so sexy as one side of his mouth curved upward. "Well, I kinda need to do this." His lips returned to hers and begged for entrance into her mouth of which he was granted.

This felt so familiar to her, but then again, he'd kissed her last night. She suddenly felt his lower body come to life as her pressed his body against hers.

He moaned into his mouth and then broke the kiss. "We gotta stop. You're not ready for this."

"Max, my body is burning for yours. My body remembers yours. It wants you ... I want you. Please?" She begged.

Max took a deep breath. There was an inner struggle going on inside his head. She was his wife, pregnant with their child on one hand and on the other, in her mind she was still a virgin.

Liz's hand cupped his face. "How many men get to take the virginity of the woman they love twice?" She smiled. "I want to feel what it was like when this baby was conceived. I want Max Evans, the only man I have EVER loved, to make love to me."

There was no more confusion for Max. He picked her up and took her back into the bedroom.

He knew that this was very important. He couldn't rush it. He slowly removed the tank and shorts that he'd dressed her in when he'd put her to bed, leaving her completely nude.

Her hand then crept to the green towel and yanked it from his sculpted body. "That's better."

Smiling down at her, he picked her up and lay her on the large bed.

She reached out to him. "Show me how much you love me Max. Make me remember."

He crawled up on the bed, moving his body over hers. She looked up into his amber eyes and her legs wrapped around his hips.

"I don't want to rush this, Liz."

She swallowed hard. "Max, please. I want you inside me, NOW!" She lifted her hips off of the bed, forcing his cock deep inside of her. "Oh YES!" She said in satisfaction.

Max's lower body forced her back onto the bed and slowly moved in and out of her. Liz's body moved against his. This action was making him grunt. "We ... need to ... oh GOD ... slow down."

"Uh uh!" Her head leaned back and her eyes shut. "Please, Max, please!"

Max started to move faster. His head said take it slow, but his body wasn't listening. "Wider, spread your legs wider."

She did as he said. Her legs were now completely open to him and her feet were in the air. This caused the friction that they both needed.

Her pussy began clamping around his cock. As they both hit there orgasms, Liz started having flashes.

"OH YES! MAX! YES!!!" She screamed.

He emptied his seed deep inside of her and then his body went limp.


He rolled off of her. "Sorry, I forgot about the baby."

She laughed. "There's not much to squish." She rolled onto her side and stroked his face. "The first time we made love was at the lake house."

"You remember?" His voice filled with excitement.

"Not everything, but I do remember staying up all night talking, waking up in you arms and then making love. ... Is that how it happened?" Liz asked with hope in her eyes.

Max nodded. "All except for one significant detail."

"What's that?"

He leaned forward and kissed her. "The mind blowing orgasm."

She kissed him passionately. "Wanna try some more memory retrieval?"



Okay, that's the end of part 35. Part 36 will either be out tomorrow or Monday. Hope you enjoyed this.


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posted on 11-Nov-2001 9:58:26 PM by sydniepaige
Part 36

After school, everyone with the exception of Max and Liz were gathered at the Guerin's. They listened intently as Jeff and Nancy explained Liz's condition.

"So she doesn't remember anything?" Maria asked.

"Nothing that happened after the morning of April 24th." Nancy said deleting whole pregnancy topic. "The party will go on as planned. We will be announcing the Elizabeth and Max's marriage, but nothing else." She looked at Michael. "The psychiatrist thinks it best that she recover her memories in her own time."

"In other words I'm just her friend, not her brother." Michael bolted up. "This sucks!" He left the room and headed to his bedroom.

Jeff followed him out. "Son, wait!"

Michael turned around. "I gotta get ready for my game."

"As soon as she gets her memory back, you can be her brother again."

The younger man shook his head. "I think the shrink is full of BULLSHIT! Liz has the right to know everything!"

Jeff sighed. "I agree, but in Elizabeth's condition..." He cut himself off.

"What condition?"

His father didn't answer. "What FUCKING condition? What aren't you telling me?

Jeff was struggling with whether or not to tell him.

"She's my sister! I have the right to know if it's something serious!"

"It's not serious, Michael." He blew out a deep breath. "Look, Lizzie's pregnant."

Michael was shocked. "Like as in gonna have a baby pregnant?"

Jeff laughed. "That's the only kind of pregnant I know."

"But she and Max, I mean, it's only been like 2 weeks."

"Well, son, apparently, they weren't using condoms and her birth control failed and oh my GOD I never thought I'd have to say that about my daughter."

Jeff and Michael both scratched their eyebrows.

"Okay, so I won't say anything to her about the fact that she's my sister. But suddenly I have the urge to beat the crap out of my best friend."


"Max, I'm going! I've never seen you play before. ... Have I?" She looked at him seductively.

Max laughed and kissed the top of her wet head. "Baby, if we try to REFRESH your memory one more time today, I won't have any energy left for the game. But yes, you saw me play last week." He turned off the water and turned to get out of the shower.

"Max, maybe going to the game will help me. I promise, I won't over exsert myself. Next Fall when you're off being the big sports hero at State, I'm gonna be all huge, waddling around our massive house. I want to go see you play while I can still sit in the stands and be comfortable." She followed him out of the shower and noticed that Max had turned was staring at her. "What are you looking at?"

"You remember our house?"

Liz thought for a moment then smiled. "Yeah, I do. That and something about a ... a jeep?"

Max took her in his arms and kissed her. "Little by little it's coming back. Soon, you'll remember everything."

She looked into his eyes. "After the game tonight, I want to read you a few things from my journal."

"See what you wrote about us since the 24th?"

Liz shook her head and ran her finger down his chest. "Long before that. I want you to know exactly everything I've ever thought or felt about you."

Their lips met and the bathroom one again began to steam up.


Max had called the coach earlier that day and explained why he hadn't been at school and for once, he was an understanding man.

When he showed up in the locker room, Coach Alexander approached him. "Evans, how's Elizabeth doing?"

"Her memory is coming back slowly. It's only been a day so I guess I have to say she's better."

"I know about her other ... condition, Max."

Max's eyes grew wide. "Other condition, Coach?"

He nodded. "I was on the phone with my wife when she got the test results. She's a lab tech at the hospital and when someone asked her for the blood test results for Evans, Elizabeth Parker, I over heard someone say that the only test came back positive was the pregnancy test."

"Oh." Max got nervous.

"Don't worry son, I'm not gonna say anything. There's only a few more weeks of school left and you two are married. I just want you to know that if you need anything, I'm here for you. I know what it's like to be a father at 18. Emotionally, it's gonna be tough."

Max was touched by the coaches sentiment. "Thank you sir. I appreciate that."

"Good. Now, suit up. We gotta game to win."


Liz sat in the stands and was shocked to see her father walk up with Caitlyn Guerin and take a seat. It made her uneasy for some reason.

She moved down behind them. "Hey, Daddy. What are you doing here?"

"I should be asking you that question. You should be at home getting some rest." Jeff looked concerned.

Liz shook her head. "I've been in bed all day." *Not a complete lie* "I wanted to see Max play baseball."

"Just don't overdo it. I don't want you back in the hospital anytime soon."

About that time Liz heard Maria squeal. "Lizzie, oh my God! I can't believe you have amnesia. Tell me what you don't remember."


That night Max and Liz lay in her bed with an old journal lying on her lap.

"Before I read this to you, have I told you how incredible you were in the game?"

He kissed her sweetly. "Only about a hundred times. Thank you."

Liz opened her journal and began to read.

Today is June 21, 1990. My name is Elizabeth Parker. I am 7 years old. Something happened today. I'm not sure why it happened. Maria and I we're outside playing in the Vacancy. Max Evans from next door ran up to me. He kissed me. Then he ran off. I liked it. He is so cute. One day I am going to marry Max Evans. We are going to have lots of babies. We will be happy.

Max kissed her forehead. "You thought I was cute?"

She smiled. "I still do." She closed her book and put her hands over her eyes.

"What's wrong?"

"My head hurts." Her hands slowly slid down her face.

Max pulled her head down to his chest. "You've had a very long day. Why don't we go to sleep now so we can be well rested for your party tomorrow night."

Liz yawned. "I love you."

And with that, she was asleep.



Hope you enjoyed this part. I'm usually on-line from 6PM to 10PM Central almost everynight. My aol IM is sydniepaige . If you have any questions for me, just ask.


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posted on 14-Nov-2001 10:16:21 PM by sydniepaige
If all goes well, I should have the next part up tomorrow. It's taking me forever to to write it. Real life sucks when it interrupts my fantasy world. Thanks for the f/b. Oh and don't worry about Liz's headache. It was just due to a little too much (cough, cough) memory retrieval.*wink*

posted on 26-Nov-2001 10:25:29 PM by sydniepaige
Part 37

Max drove Liz to Jenna's shop to make sure her dress fit perfectly.

Once they got there, Liz was confused. Jenna brought out a two-piece red silk dress. "That's not my dress."

It was Jenna's turn to be confused. "This is the dress you chose when you decided not to wear your mother's, and I use the term loosely, dress."

"Oh. Well, I kinda hit my head the other day and I seem to have a tiny bit of amnesia."

"Really?" Jenna asked.

Both Liz and Max nodded their heads.

"That's awful! ... Do you still want the dress, because if you don't..."

"No!" Liz said. "It's perfect. I'll go try it on."

A few minutes later, she came out of the dressing room. The skirt sat low on her hips and the top, well, it wasn't much of a top. It was more like a 6 inch strip of silk that covered her breasts, barely. Jenna circled her checking the fit.

"Max, what do you think?" She took a breath and held it.

He was in awe. It hung perfectly on me toned body.


He grinned. "You are the most beautiful woman."

"You look very glamourous, Elizabeth." Jenna added.

Liz's smile grew. "Thank you." She looked at herself in the mirror.

Jenna clapped her hands together. "Go change. I'll have it pressed and sent to your house."

Liz nodded and went back into the dressing room.

"Jenna, I have a project for you." Max told her.

"I don't do men's clothing, Mr. Evans."

He winked at her. "Not for me. How are you with wedding dresses?"


After arriving at the Parker's home, Max insisted that Liz get some rest. She, well, they had overdone it the day before and he didn't want her getting another headache. She agreed only if he'd lie with her.

That's how her mother found them a few hours later.

"Max, Elizabeth, it's time to wake up." She said, trying not to startle them.

Max's eyes opened. "What time is it?"

"3:30. Jeff and I are going to run some errands and then head to the hotel to get ready. I booked a room in your name in case she begins to not feel well. You can stay there this weekend."

"Thank you."

Nancy closed the door and Max began to wake his wife with loving, soft kisses.

"Baby, wake up." He whispered in her ear and the kissed her neck.

She snuggled into him. "Uh uh. Sleep more."

He laughed deeply. "Wake now. You need to get pampered before your party."

Liz shook her head. "You pamper me."

"Liz, if it were up to me, we'd spend the entire day in bed, but if we don't show up at precisely eight o'clock,..." He placed his hand on her flat tummy. "...your mother will be sure that this is our only child."

Liz couldn't control her laughter.

Max sat up and looked down at his wife. "I'm glad my castration amuses you."

"It's not that, Max. ... My life is FINALLY the way I've always wanted it. Okay, not married and pregnant at 18, but I can honestly say that I'm happier than I've ever been in my entire life. ... So, are you still gonna love me when I'm all big and fat?"

He pushed her hair behind her ear. "I love you more every day. How could I not love you when your belly's swollen with our child?"

Max's words caused tears to form in her eyes. He leaned dow and kissed her tenderly.


Liz sat in the chair in the estate's salon as Patty worked her magic on her hair.

She found Patty's silence disturbing. "Why aren't you talking to me?"

The stylist looked into the mirror at her. "Because I had to find out from Peter that you MARRIED Max Evans!"

"How'd Peter find out?"

"Mrs. Stevenson overheard Mrs. Evans and Miss Guerin talking in Neimans."

Liz smiled and then held her hand p so she could look at her rings. "It's still kind of a dream, you know? It's like I woke up and BOOM! I'm Mrs. Max Evans."

Patty laughed. "Did you ever doubt you would be?"

Liz shrugged. "Not really."


At eight o'clock, Liz stood at the top of the staircase with Max by her side. As they slowly walked down the stairs, all eyes were on the beautiful couple.

When they reached the bottom, Max was handed a microphone. "It is with great pleasure and much devotion that I present to you tonight's guest of honor and my beautiful wife, Elizabeth Parker Evans."

Everyone began applauding, but then suddenly stopped. They all looked shocked.

Liz took the mic from her husband and began to speak. "No offense, but this is the first time I've EVER seen most of you speechless."

The crowd laughed.

"Seriously, I know that this seems completely out of the blue, but..." She looked at Max. "...we've been in love with each other, Max and I decided that we would NEVER be separated again. I admit that eloping the day after my 18th birthday was a bit rash, but we don't have a single regret. So tonight, we celebrated not only my birthday, but also our marriage."

Once again, everyone clapped and started to mingle.

Nancy approached her daughter and gave her a curious look.

"Before you say anything about my dress, I would just like to remind you that I have amnesia and had no idea about this."

Nancy just laughed. "You look exquisite, sweetheart." She stroked Liz's cheek. "I'm sorry that I tried to force you to wear that awful purple thing your grandmother made me wear."

As if on cue, a tall, slender woman with auburn hair made her way to them. "Nancy, why osn't Elizabeth wearing my dress?"

"Because it was ugly?" Liz answered her grandmother sarcastically.

"I do NOT believe this! It's no wonder. I always knew that she'd end up like you!"

"And what's wrong with the way Liz turned out? I happen to love her just the way she is." Max kissed his wife's hand.

The older woman shook her head. "This is unacceptable, Nancy!"

"No, Mother! WHat's unnacceptable is the way you're speaking to my daughter and my son-in-law. This has NOTHING to do with you!"

Liz was very proud of her mother. She'd never heard her stand up to her grandmother before.

Nancy's mother turned around in a huff.

"Oh and Mother, Elizabeth's pregnant."


Michael was sitting at a table by himself when Maria placed her hands on his shoulders.

"Have you even said two words to Lizzie tonight?" She sat next to him.

He shook his head. "I tried. I really did, but I just can't do it. ... If she weren't pregnant..."

"Liz is PREGNANT?"

Michael realized his slip. "Maria, I'm sure she was just waiting until things settle down."

"And how do you know about it? Who told you?" She was pissed.

He sighed. "Jeff did. He didn't want me upsetting Liz in her condition by telling her about our sibling status."

Maria looked over to where Liz and Max were standing across the room. His arms were wrapped around her from behind and his hands were resting on her bare stomach. "They sure worked fast didn't they?"

Michael put his arm around her. "Better them than us."

Maria looked at him very seriously. "Then I guess now's not the time to tell ya, huh?"

His face went blank. "What?!"

She started laughing. "Kidding. I was just getting back at you for not telling me about Liz."

He took a deep, calming breath. "You scared the shit out of me."

"I'm so glad that the thought of me having your baby scares you so much." There was a bit of hurt in her voice.

"Maria, having children with you doesn't frighten me. Your mother on the other hand does. You do remember the speech we got that night at Liz's, right? Amy DeLuca would show no mercy."

Maria laughed and brought his lips to hers. "I love you so much, Michael Guerin."

"Right back attcha babe."


As Liz watched her father and Caitlyn talk and laugh and slightly touch each other, she felt uneasy.

Max leaned down and kissed her neck. "Dance with me, my love."

She smiled and let him lead her to the dancefloor. SHe noticed that all eyes were on her. "I'm suddenly feeling very naked in this dress."

He pulled her into his arms and they started to sway. "I think you look incredibly sexy."

Liz shrugged. "Okay." She lay her head on his shoulder and closed her eyes. His cologne was intoxicating.

Then the memory flashes hit her fast and furiously.

Max kissing her in the chemistry lab

Picking out her new dress

Driving up to the lake with Maria

Hearing Max's voice behind her

Kissing on the pier

Popping popcorn

The arrangement

Staying up all night talking

Making love the first time

The house

Sex in the eraser room on her birthday

The blood drive

Michael's her brother

"Max?" Liz said befor her body went limp in his arms.



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posted on 27-Nov-2001 10:03:27 PM by sydniepaige
Part 38

Liz woke in a daze. She was lying in the bed of the hotel suite her parents had reserved. "Max?"

"I'm right here, baby." He sat beside her and brushed her hair from her face. "Do you remember what happened?"

She nodded. "We were dancing. Your cologn smelled SO good when I closed my eyes, all of my memories flooded my mind." She looked up at him. "I remember everything, Max. Every moment that we've shared together, my birthday, our wedding..."

Michael stuck his head in the door. "Can I come in?"

Liz smiled. "Sure big brother."

Michael looked at Max. "You tell her?"

"Nope. She smelled me and it and it all came back to her." Max said with a cocky smile on his face.

"Whatever." He looked back to Liz. "Your mom just got off the phone with Dr. Holder. He's on his way over."

She sighed. "I'm fine. My brain was just on overload."

Michael shook his head. "He's comin' over to make sure the baby's okay."

"You know?" Max and Liz asked in unison.

"Your da..., our da..., Jeff told me so I wouldn't blurt out my paternity."

Liz sat up. "I need to go see my mother."


Nancy's mother, Judith, was ranting at her in the living room of the suite.

"I am so happy your father was called away because this news would absolutely kill him! We NEVER should have allowed you to stay in New Mexico when we moved to Florida!"

"Judith, would you sit down and shut up! You're giving me a headache." Jeff said rubbing his temples.

Caitlyn comforted him by rubbing his arm. "Calm down, Jeff. All of this arguing is not going to help Elizabeth."

"Nancy, shouldn't it be YOU consoling YOUR husband instead of her?" Judith looked down her nose at them.

Nancy rolled her eyes and got up from the chair she was sitting. "'m going to check on my daughter."

As she headed to the bedroom, the door opened. Liz slowly walked out with Max and Michael escorting her.

"Liz, you should get up until Dr. Holder examines you. You need to rest."

Liz smiled. "I'm fine, Mother. Besides, it's a little hard to get rest with Grandmother's voice piercing the sound barrier."

"My, my." Judith looked at the teens. "Don't you three look cozy. Are you quite sure Mr. Evans is the child's father? I mean, you and Mr. Guerin do seem awfully close."

"Could you possibly BE any more of a bitch?"

"Michael!" Caitlyn scolded her son's rudeness.

He looked to his mother. "Sorry, Mom, but the old hag's insinuating something gross between me and my little sister."

"This boy is demented! Liz is my daughter's only child."

Nancy grabbed Michael's hand. "Jeff's his father."

Judith pulled her phone from her purse.

"Who are you calling, Grandmother?" Liz inquired.

"My driver. I'm leaving, now."

Liz sat on the couch next to her father. "What's wrong? Is it getting too tabloid for you around here? Let's see ... 18 year old granddaughter marries a man after dating him for all of eleven days and she's also pregnant by him. Then there's the daughter..." She looked at Nancy.

Nancy began to speak rather dramatically as if this were a sort of farce. "Yes, the daughter who married her best friend's boyfriend so he would no longer be suspicioned as the father of the 15 year olds baby. Then, one drunken night, the daughter seduced her husband and became pregnant with her own intelligent, kind and beautiful daughter."

Max popped up. "But what became of the first child."

"The best friend was told by her father that her baby had died. When in actuality..." Caitlyn was interrupted by Michael.

"I was put into a foster home. For over 16 years I was shuffled from one another. The last one I was at was the worst. I was there for 3 years. He'd beat me with belts, sticks, his fists. He'd throw empty beer cans or wiskey bottles at me, flick lit cigarettes at me... And the state paid him to do it. Then one day, my mom rescued me." Maichael walked over to Caitlyn, wrapped his arms around her and kissed the top of her head. "Thank you."

Liz continued the tale. "Then on a warm Spring day, there was a blood drive at school. Low and behold, the granddaughter discovered that she and the boy had the same rare bloodtype. Her father confirmed his parentage and she did what she'd wanted to do since she could remember." She stood and walked to Max. "Her lover flew her and their friends to the kingdom of bright lights and were married the very next day by the king himself..." She looked at her grandmother. " an Elvis chapel. Then, a couple of days later, she fainted, hit her head and lost part of her memory." She looked back to her husband. "But thanks to some intense ... therapy, her memory swiftly started to return to her."

Jeff laughed.

Judith scowd at him. "What could you possibly find amusing in all of this?"

"You're gonna be a great-grandmother."

The room erupted in laughter all except for Judith.



posted on 29-Nov-2001 8:57:13 PM by sydniepaige

I'm finally stumped. What would you like to see happen next?

posted on 2-Dec-2001 6:09:30 PM by sydniepaige
Sorry it's taking so long to get the next part out. I've been shopping all weekend and now that I'm broke, I can finish it. I'll have it out tomorrow night. Thanks for the great ideas and feedback!

posted on 3-Dec-2001 9:26:41 PM by sydniepaige
Part 39

Ed Harding sat in his daughter's hospital room. Tess had yet to come out of the coma.

He grabbed the remote and clicked on the television and the financial report was on the news.

After the rather shocking announcement of the marriage between eighteen year old Maxwell Evans and eighteen year old Elizabeth Parker and the end of a family feud that has gone on for decades, the rival corporation's stock have soared. Spokesmen for both Parker Unlimited and Evans World have confirmed that both families couldn't be happier for their children and that there has yet to be talks of consolidation of the two corporations. In other news...


Ed's head turned quickly to his daughter's bed. "Tess! Baby, you're awake!"

"My head hurts." Her voice was hoarse.

"You've been injured, sweetheart. Do you remember?"

Tess seached her fuzzy mind. "I remember being at a baseball game ... and that's about all."

Her father sat on her bed. "You were hit in the head with a baseball. You've been in a coma."

"Has Max been here?"

Ed shook his head. "Only Isabel ... and Kyle. He's been here everyday."

"He probably just feels guilty for breaking up with me." She smiled wickedly. "I'll show him. I'll just tell Max how big of a mistake I made and he'll dump that mousy little Elizabeth Parker and take me back."

Ed scratched the back of his neck. "I need to get the doctor and tell him you're awake. I'll be right back." He rushed from the room.


Isabel walked into her bedroom right as the phone began to ring.

"Hello?" She answered.

"This is Ed Harding. Tess is awake."

"I'll be right there." She hung ther phone up and bolted from her room.

She ran into Max on the stairway.

"Where's the fire, Izzy?" He asked.

"Mr. Harding called. Tess came out of the coma. ... What are you doing here?"

"Clothes. I'm running low." He moved a few steps upwards. "Hey Isabel, call me when you get back. There's something I want to do for Liz and I believe that it's something that you'd really enjoy helping me with."

Isabel smiled at her twin. "Sure Max. "Can I get a hint?"

Max shook his head. "Sorry, Sis. Go see Tess and then I'll inform you of my plans when you call."

"Oh fine. If you see Mom or Daddy, tell them where I went."

She was gone.


Tess had a bandana around her head to cover the rather large bald spot on her head from where the doctor had drilled into her skull to relieve the presure. She was putting makeup on when Isabel entered her room.

"Oh my God, Tess! I'm SO glad you're awake!" Isabel said seeing her friend conscious.

"Me too. Now, I have a task for you."

"Already? You've only been awake for an hour."

Tess looked at her best friend like she should expect any less from her. "I want you to help me convince Max that he belongs with me and not that bitch, Elizabeth Parker. I know once he fucks me, he'll never want ANYTHING to do with her again."

Isabel couldn't believe what she was hearing. "Um, Tess, I hate to tell you this, but that's never going to happen. Max and Liz..."

"So you're calling her Liz now?"

"Tess,..." She ran her hand through her hair. "...there's something that's happened while you were unconcious. Um, Max and Liz are ... well, they're married."

Tess began laughing. "That's very funny, Isabel. The next thing you're gonna tell me is that she's pregnant."

Isabel took a deep breath and as she exhaled, she nodded. "She's pregnant."

Tears filled Tess' eyes. "This is a joke, right?"

"No, Tess. It's no joke. Max and Liz got married last week and they found out a couple of days ago that they're having a baby. It's due in January."

"We can't allow this Isabel. First we have to get her to lose the baby and then we brake them up for good."

This pissed Isabel Evans off completely. "What the FUCK are you talking about, Tess? How hard did that ball hit you? You want to cause Liz to lose her baby?"

"It's not like it's even a real baby yet. Besides, once it's gone, Max won't want anything to do with that whore."

"I can't believe I EVER called you my best friend. That's the life of my niece or nephew you're talking about ... about murdering! My brother LOVES his wife and his child. And as far as being a whore, well, you're the ONLY one I KNOW that lives in this town!"

And with that, Isabel left Tess without another word.

"What a bitch!" Tess huffed.



This just came to me so I made it up as I went along. Let me know if you like it.

posted on 5-Dec-2001 10:07:23 PM by sydniepaige
Thanks once again for the great feedback! I'm working on part 40 so it should be up tomorrow night. You guys have given me some AWESOME ideas!

posted on 6-Dec-2001 8:49:52 PM by sydniepaige
Part 40 NC-17

"I need to talk to about something before you tell me what you want my help with." Isabel told her brother.

Max wasn't sure he liked the tone of her voice. "Is everything okay?"

She shook her head. "Not really. When I went to see Tess, she told mein no uncertain terms that she was gonna get you back."

"I'm married to Liz."

"I told her that. It didn't seem to phase her so I told her that Liz is also pregnant."

Max loved the very thought that the girl that he'd always loved was having their child. "I bet that floored her."

"Not really. She said that she wanted to make Liz lose the baby and then break the two of you up for good."

Isabel saw rage building up in Max.

"That BITCH said she was gonna WHAT?!"

Isabel swallowed. "She said that it wasn't even a baby yet and then called Liz a whore. In response I told her that I could't believe that we were ever friends and that she was the only whore in town."

Max was taking deep breaths. "Do you really think she'll do something to Liz and the baby?"

She shook her head. "I'm not sure, Max. Tess has done a LOT of things to get what she wants. If I were you, I'd take it as a threat."

He hugged his twin. "Thanks, Iz. I appreciate you coming and telling ME about this instead of going to Liz."

She kissed his cheek. "She's been through a alittle bit too much lately. Telling her wasn't even an option."


Liz was lying in her bed. She was supposed to be studying for her finals, but she just couldn't concentrate. All she could think about was how complete her life seemed at the moment. She closed her books and turned over to lay on her back and placed her head on her pillows. Her hands rubbed over her bare stomach.

"Hi, baby. It feels like it's gonna be forever before I get to hold you in my arms. I wonder who you'll look like. I can pretty much guarentee that your hair will be dark. ... I wonder if you'll have you're daddy's precious ears ... or his dreamy eyes..."

Her one-sided conversation when her husband entered the room.

"We're you just talking to yourself?" He said with a curious look.

She laughed. "I guess you could look at it that way. I was talking to the baby."

He nodded slowly. "And does the baby answer?" He was teasing her.

"Oh yeah, all the time." She joked.

"That's good to know." He crossed the room and entered the bathroom.

When he re-entered the bedroom, he found his wife lying naked and opened to him. An immediated surge of desire went straight to his groin.

"Are you going to just stand there staring or you going to come over here and make love to me."

Max blinked a couple of times and then stripped as he made his way to the the large wooden bed. Within seconds Max hovered over his wife as naked as she was.

"I love you, Liz. You are the ONLY woman that I have EVER wanted to spend my life with. You're the only woman I will." His lips descended on hers.

Liz moaned as the kiss became heated and his cock brushed against her moist heat.

Max broke the kiss and looked deep into her eyes as he began rubbing his ever hardening manhood between her legs.

"Fill me, Max."

With those three simple words, Max entered her slowly and gently moving in and out of her.

Her legs raised high on his hips and she moved faster, moaning and grunting as his pace also quickened.

"MAX ... oh baby ... harder, PLEASE!"

Max gave her a seductive have grin as he obliged. He couldn't believe the slickness of her pussy as he glided in and out of his love. "You feel so good, sweetheart. ... oh yeah...''

There love making continued and after an hour, they both came sreaming the other's name.


Isabel was talking her father in his office after dinner. "Daddy, I know that you do not practice, but I need some legal advice."

He became concerned. "Are you in trouble, Isabel?"

"No, sir. But Max and Liz might be. Tess told me that she wanted to make Liz lose the baby so that Max would be hers. I was wondering if there was away to get a restraining order against her or something."

Philip scratched the side of his face. "Let me call Caitlyn and see what she thinks."


"I'm not sure, Philip. Tell you what. There's a new attorney at the firm and this is right up his alley. I'll set up an appointment for Isabel with him tomorrow at four o'clock. Will you she be available then? ... Okay, I'll call him and let him know that she'll be there."

She hung her phone up. It rang again instantly.

"Caitlyn Guerin."

"Hi Cait. It's me."

Her face lit up. "Jeff! What's up?"

Nothing. I was just sitting here and I couldn't get you off my mind.


"Nancy told me that she's filing for divorce after the kids graduate. She also told me that she wasn't going to stand between us."

Guilty pleasure soared throughout Caitlyn's body.

"I don't want to hurt her, Jeff."

"May I at least come over and talk to you in person?"

Her gut instinct was to say no, but she couldn't stop her mouth. "Sure."


Liz and Max lay tangled in each other's arms.

"I've been thinking about names for the baby."

She smiled. "Really? That's so cute. What do you have in mind?"

He ran his fingers through her long hair. "Well, I'm not sure about the first name because we don't know if it's a boy or and girl, but I was thinking that the middle name could be Parker."

"Parker Evans. I love it!" She pulled his lips to hers. "If it's a girl, would you mind if we named her Claudia?"

Max smiled. "I think that your grandmother would be honored."

"Claudia Parker Evans. I love the sound of that."

"So what if it's a boy?" He asked.

"What do you like?"

He shrugged. "I'm not sure. It's a good thing we have a long time to come up with one." He put his hand on her tummy. "If you don't like the name we pick out, you be sure and let us know, okay?"

Liz busted out laughing. "And you had the nerve to tease me about talking to our baby?"



I'm not really sure about this part, but I'm trying begin to wrap up this part of The Arrangement so I can start on the sequel. However, this story is not over just yet.

posted on 13-Dec-2001 4:37:43 PM by sydniepaige
I just want to let you know that part 41 will be up either tonight or tomorrow depending if I get everything done that I need to.

posted on 14-Dec-2001 10:48:33 PM by sydniepaige
My apologies for not having part 41 up yet. I'm having a little difficulty with a piece of it. Hopefully, I'll figure it out soon. Thanks for your patience.

posted on 16-Dec-2001 9:00:32 PM by sydniepaige
Part 41

Isabel was exhausted. She had gotten all of her review material for her final paper in her English class and then had a meeting with the young, very good looking, latino attorney that Caitlyn had set up the appointment so she could discuss the Tess situation.

Lying on her bed, letting her mind wander, her peaceful state was disturbed by a knock on her door. "Enter if you have something to offer me."

Alex walked through the door. "Hello, gorgeous."

She smiled. "Make sure you lock the door."

His face blushed with excitement. "that sounds promising."

"Maybe later. I'm in serious need of a massage and there's only one person I know who can do me the right way."

Alex joined her on the bed and slowly unbuttoned her blouse.

She sat up and removed it.

"On your stomach!" He ordered.

She kissed him. "Just a minute." Isabel moved off of the bed and went into her massive closet.

When she came out, she was dressed in a short, red, satin robe and was carrying a bottle of massage oil and a large cotton bath sheet.

Alex took the sheet from his girlfriend and covered her bed with it.

Isabel untied the belt and let the robe drop to the floor leaving her in a red thong. She climbed onto the bed and lay on her stomach.

As his hands began kneading the tension from her, she moaned with pleasure.

"Do you like that, Isabel?" He asked with a confident smile.

"Oh God yes." She replied.

The scent of the lavendar oil was filling the room as Alex's hands moved down her back.

Isabel was about to fall asleep when she felt his han begin to rub between her thighs. She rolled over quickly to see the lust and desire in his eyes.


Liz was lying on her bed working on her homework when her phone rang.


"Elizabeth, I have the most fantastic news!" Trina's voice sounded extremely excited.

Liz had completely forgotten that she had her final recital after graduation. "Trina, I don't know if I'm going to make the recital this year."

"Screw the recital. This is so much more important. I sent a copy of your benefit performance to Lucinda and explained that you'd been ill and would not be able to make the auditions."

For some reason Liz was nervous. "What'd she think?"

"You are not going to believe this. She asked me how you were as a choreographer and if you had ever taught classes."

Liz was confused. "What does that have to do with getting assigned to a class in their program."

"They don't want you to be a student, they want you to be an instructor. They have an unexpected departure from the staff. Lucinda was quite impressed with you and showed your tape to the entire department. They all agreed that you should be offered the job."

"Trina, I'm only 18."

"With 16 years of experience."

Liz took a deep breath. "I'm pregnant, Trina. The baby's due in January."

"I know. I heard about that at your party. I did inform Lucinda about that and she said that it shouldn't be a problem. You'd only be teaching 2 classes a week and you'd have an assistant."

"Whoa. Um, what do I need to do?"

Trina was smiling so big that Liz probaby could hear it through the phone. "Call Lucinda tomorrow when you get home from school and she will give you more details."

"I can't believe this is happening. Thank you, Trina."

"Make me proud, Elizabeth."

"I will." She clicked her phone off and screamed at the top of her lungs.


Max was in the kitchen getting a snack for he and his wife when he heard the scream. He dropped what he was doing and quickly headed out of the room and up the stairs. On his way up he met Liz on her way down.

"I heard you scream. Are you okay?" He was looking her over head to toe.

"I'm fine. Where's my parents?"

He was dazed. "Um, they're in ... um your dad's office talking with Michael's mom."

Liz grabbed his hand. "Come on. I have something I need to tell you."


Liz refused to tell them anything until everyone was there. Everyone encluded her parents, his parents, Amy, Maria, Michael, Caitlyn, Isabel and Alex.

"Now that everybody's here, will you please tell me what's going on? You're kinda freaking me out."

She rubbed his leg and then stood. "Sorry about that sweetie, but this is something that I wanted to tell everyone I love at the once."

As Liz told them what Trina had told her, excitement filled the room. When she looked at her mother, she saw tears brimming Nancy's eyes.

Nancy stood and walked over to her daughter and embraced her. "I am SO proud of you. Are you sure this is what you want."

Liz nodded. "As long as it doesn't interfere with Max, the baby and my education, it is."

Max waited for his mother-in-law to release his wife and then embraced her himself. "You amaze me."

"If this starts to mess things up, you tell me and I'll quit. My family will ALWAYS come first."

With those words, Max's lips quickly found hers.

Michael was standing behind Max waiting to congratulate Liz. "Max, my boy, I also would like to tell my LITTLE sister how proud I am of her so could you get your tongue out of her mouth for a few minutes."

The room erupted with laughter.



Sorry this was so long in getting out and so short. I'm eagerly awaiting Christmas vacation so I can get some actual work done. Hope you liked it.

posted on 18-Dec-2001 10:55:53 PM by sydniepaige
Part 42

Isabel had explained to Max everything the lawyer had told her. He'd yet to tell his wife because he didn't want to put a damper on her good news.

Two days later, he decided it was time to let her in on what was going on with Tess.

She was lying on her stomach on the couch in the family room reading a book on pregnancy when he found her.

"Liz, there's something going on that we need to talk about."

She closed her book, turned over and sat yp, bringing her knees to her chest protectively. The tone of his voice made her nervous. "What about?"

He sat next to her and took her hand in his. "You know that Isabel went to see Tess ther other day, right?"

Liz nodded.

"Tess was going on about how she was going to get me back so Iz told her that we're married and having a baby. She then told Isabel that she'd find a way to make you lose the baby and then break us up."

Liz placed her free hand over their child. "She threatened our baby?"

Max nodded. "Isabel talked to an attorney the other day to check out our options. He told her that because Tess threatened you with bodily harm, we can get a restraining order against her."

She couldn't believe what she was hearing. "Why didn't you tell me right away?"

"You were so excited about your job offer that I didn't want to bring you down."

Liz put her head on his shoulder. "Before we file that, I want to talk to her face to face."

"No, Liz."

"Don't say no to me like I'm asking permission from you to do this. If you want to, you can stand outside of her door while I'm with her, but I AM going!"


After finding out that Tess had been moved to a regular, private room, Liz had decided that it was time for she and Miss Harding to have that little talk.

Max had insisted that they have the restraining order in place and only have her served if or when Liz said to do so.

With Max and Deputy Hanson outside of the room, Liz entered.

"Well, well, well, look who we have here. You know, it amazes me that people call me a slut when you're the one that's knocked up. Or did you just say that so Maxie would marry you?"

Liz couldn't believe that Tess' near-death experience hadn't changed her at all. "I just have one thing to ask you. Did you say that you'd make me lose my baby so you'd get Max back?"

Tess looked pissed. "Who told you that? Oh, wait a minute, let me guess, you're new best friend Isabel?"

"No, actually, my HUSBAND did!"

"You know, the minute that little bastard's gone, he's mine again."

Liz gritted her teeth and called for Max.

Max walked in with the officer behind her.

"What's this, armed escort? Scared of little ole me?"

Liz moved beside Max and grasped his hand as Deputy Hanson stepped beside Tess' bed.

"Tess Harding, I am here to officially serve you with a restraining order. It states that you are to stay no less then 150 feet from both Elizabeth Parker Evans and Maxwell Evans at all times. If you violate this order you will be fined and/or incarcerated."

As Liz, Max and Hanson left, Tess was seething.

A few days later, when she was released from the hospital, she violated it three times. Two days after that, Ed and Tess Harding moved to Boston.


It's May 24th and for the first time in my life I have everything I've ever wanted. Max Evans for my husband, a baby on the way, a way to keep dance in my life without it consumming my every moment and most of all, peace.


***THE END***

... of The Arrangement. The sequel will be started in the next few days. I really need a title though. It's going to deal with all of the changes that will happen like college, the house, the divorce... you know the fun stuff.*wink* Let me hear your ideas!

posted on 23-Dec-2001 11:14:23 AM by sydniepaige
I just want to let you know that I'll have "The Arrangement Wedding" up sometime today or tonight. "The Re-Arrangement" (thanks for the great title, asterisk8) should be starting up in the next few days.

I really want to thank all of you for supporting me through this story with all of the wonderful feedback. You're the reason I'm writing this story.