posted on 18-Oct-2002 9:37:26 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
I am restarting this RPG too if anyone is intrested!

Michael Max and Isabel are at the top of the school. Everybody loves them! They are the beautiful people at West Roswell High
Alex and Liz are desperately in love with two of the members in that group. But will they ever recognize them?
Maria doesn't really like them! Isabel is an icequeen and Michael! Well he just infuriates her!
Max is a nice guy he doesn't really bother anyone.
Kyle is also friends with both groups. he and Liz had dated at one point but now they are just friends.
No Tess in this one though. Sorry for those of you that like her. I do want a love intrest for Kyle so those of you who are intrested in making up a character here is your chance!
In the end! I want 4 happy couples!

Liz: Lizzie_Parker17
Alex: TabascoChick
Maria: SweetLilDreamer
Michael: I_LOVE_NICK
Max: jeremiah
Isabel: LizParkerEvans4evax
Kyle: SweetLilDreamer
Pam Troy: qt4167013
Tess: qt4167013


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posted on 19-Oct-2002 9:58:56 PM by jeremiah
can I be Max?
posted on 20-Oct-2002 12:15:18 AM by Lizzie_Parker17
posted on 20-Oct-2002 11:54:10 AM by LizParkerEvans4evax
Isabel? and faith was my charcter before so I could be her or both whatever?

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posted on 20-Oct-2002 2:23:52 PM by SweetLilDreamer
Maria or Alex? I can't choose. You choose for me!
posted on 20-Oct-2002 7:39:43 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
SweetLilDreamer! I gave you Maria!
And Isabel is all yours!
As for Kyles girlfriend I don't know what I am going to do with that! I want to see if anyone else wants that character before I let people double up.
posted on 21-Oct-2002 8:48:11 PM by TabascoChick
Ooooooh...can I play Alex?
posted on 22-Oct-2002 6:32:26 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
Alex is yours!
posted on 22-Oct-2002 11:19:15 PM by kristalynn
posted on 23-Oct-2002 12:29:30 PM by Sugarplum7
Hi Britt!

How are you doing? Well, I hope. I haven't talked to you in a while. Heehee! I was thinking and I still am. Hmm. This sounds like such a cute idea for a RPG. I would so love to join, but I am afraid I will let everyone down. I don't want to do that. I don't want to be the one that never posts. LOL!

Hmm. See I was thinking that Maybe I could be the made up character. Still thinking about it. I guess, that if no one else wants her, I could be her. I still need to formulate her character (name, appearance, background, all that stuff). If no one else comes in to claim it, and you don't mind my parts being a little short or me not posting everyday, count me in.

As soon as you let me know, I'll start thinking about more stuff about her.


posted on 23-Oct-2002 9:08:32 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
Make her up and post her here!
Remember it is Kyles girlfriend!
posted on 23-Oct-2002 10:20:06 PM by SweetLilDreamer
I'll be Kyle too!
posted on 25-Oct-2002 1:01:30 AM by kristalynn
Is Michael still available?

I asked for him already, but didn't get a response.

Let me know!
posted on 25-Oct-2002 9:21:53 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
SweetLilDreamer thank you Kyle is yours!
and I am so sorry I missed you asking for Michael! Sure you can be him!
posted on 26-Oct-2002 9:53:12 AM by LizParkerEvans4evax
when can we start?
posted on 27-Oct-2002 10:28:14 PM by Lizzie_Parker17


Dear Journal
Today is September 1st 2000. I'm Liz Parker. Have you ever felt a certain way about someone and you don't know why. Today I start my senior year and I should be thinking about how much I missed my friends and how I want to get valedictorian this year.
But I'm not.
The only thing that has been on my mind the last few days has been Max Evans.
Yes the same Max Evans that doesn't know I exist.

Liz sighed and shut her journal placing it inside her messanger bag.

She looked up at the front seat of marias red jetta where Alex and Maria were waging a war over the radio station to listen to.

"You guys were almost there" Liz said

A moment later they pulled into the Parking Lot of West Roswell High School. Liz took a deep breath and steped out of the car.

"Our final year guys" Liz said with a smile

She never heard a reply, but then why would she.
Max Evans had just gotten out of his jeep with his sister and best friend.

Liz bit back a sigh. He was gorgeous. Tall, extremely handsome. He had these amazing eyes that she just wanted to look into at all times.

For Liz it felt as though time stood still the moment max Evans walked into her general location. The wind started blowing his hair across his forehead and everything started moving in slow motion like in the movies.

She was pulled out of her trance by a hand on her shoulder.

"kyle!" She said pulling her good friend into a hug.
"I have hardly seen you all summer"


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posted on 27-Oct-2002 10:52:25 PM by jeremiah

Have you ever felt this instant connection to someone that you barely know? Even though you have known them since the third grade. Well If you have You know what I am going through.

Liz Parker.

West Roswell's very own scientist. She is your typical bookworm yet she was breathtaking. Not saying that being smart is unattractive because I dont mean to brag but I am pretty smart. A Lot smarter then some of the people that I hang out with. You see You might ask If I was so into a Girl why not ask her out? Well You see that is were the trouble lies.

We are both in seprate social groups. And as much as It sounds shallow. It is the only thing that makes me feel normal.
posted on 27-Oct-2002 11:16:43 PM by SweetLilDreamer

I smile wide as I enter West Roswell High's parking lot. This is my senior year. You know what that means, one more year in this god forsaken town. One more year of high school. I will miss everyone, but it's about time! I spot Liz Parker. She's one of my best friends now. She's the sweetest person you'll ever meet, we dated once, but that's over, we're just good friends. And I know she has a 'thing' for Max Evans.

I finally reach her and touch her shoulder as to not startle her and she reaches out for a bear hug. I laugh, "Hey Lizzie!"
posted on 28-Oct-2002 1:18:51 AM by Sugarplum7
Hi everyone!

Well, I am here with some really basic stuff for my character. I haven’t gotten any solid ideas about her, like where she comes from. I am leaning to the idea that she is going to be a new student at the school. It just makes more sense that they haven’t noticed her . . . right?

**Edited a whole bunch of stuff out because I didn't like what it originally was.**

All of the parts are really great you guys. I’ll post when some things about where she is from are answered.


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posted on 28-Oct-2002 6:49:38 PM by TabascoChick
As Maria stops the car,I turn off the radio."Oh...come on...I mean..I really think The Strokes is the best thing to listen to in the morning.It's calming,it has a nice beat,it's catchy..tomorrow we are so listening to them!"I say to Maria.She hits me and I get out of the car."'re alot stronger then I remember,"I joke.Then that jeep stops.Isabel Evans.The most beautiful girl in school.The most beautiful girl in the world.She gets out with her brother Max,who Lizzie has a thing going for.I can't take my eyes off Isabel.In my dreams,she walks by me and stops and says something like,"Alex,I love you!" or "Wow...I never realized how sexy you were" and kisses me.Okay...I know that will never happen.I mean how many people come up to me and tell me I'm sexy?Okay...Maria did it once,but it was a joke.I just wish Isabel noticed me.Or maybe I wish I had the guts to ask her out.The problem with that is she'd probably say no and then burst out laughing.I'm the last person in the world that she would go out with.I snap out of it and turn around to see Kyle."Hey..,"I say with a smile.I look up at the high school building.One more year.It's pretty amazing.I follow Isabel with my eyes until and hear someone say something.
Was that okay?*happy*
posted on 28-Oct-2002 11:23:22 PM by kristalynn

I groan loudly as my best friend Max Evans parks his jeep in the school parking and I am rewarded from a "roll-of-the-eyes" from his sister Isabel who is riding shot gun.

I jump out and look around. It's all the same. The same groups of people. The jocks who have no brains. The geeks who have all the brains. The annoying cheerleaders who are so excited that it's their senior year and they haven't gotten pregnant yet. The druggies who smoke pot before class and then use class time to make up for the sleep that they missed the night before due to much partying. And the loser's who no one really notices.

And the thing that is mostly the same is the three of us. The 'popular' ones. The ones who don't really let anyone else inside of their group. The one's that everyone wants to be friends with. And while it may seem great, it sucks. It's just more crap to deal with.

I rub my hands over my face as Max and Isabel get out of the jeep dreading what the first day is going to be like.

"I hate this place." I mutter to them gesturing towards the school.


I have a question:

Can I make Michael as a wealthy kid who has parents that don't really pay attention to him? I think that would fit his character as being envied by the rest of the school population.

And I also want to know if that was okay? That was my first post ever in a RPG.
posted on 28-Oct-2002 11:37:12 PM by jeremiah

As I am about to get out of the jeep, I am granted a reprieve. I can finally get away from my best friend Michael guerins bitching and my sister Isabels little eye rolling. I swear if I hadnt known them my whole life, There was no way I would continue to hang around them. We are all on our way to class. Of course they are not in a hurry to learn. All they care about is how the freshman and sophmores worship us. I have to admit that it makes me nervous. As I try and find my way through this zoo, I cant help but think Were is Liz?
posted on 29-Oct-2002 9:13:14 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
OOC: kristalynn Yeah that sounds great Michael is your character! As long as it goes with the general plot and doesn't leave CC I am fine with it! And that was a great post by the way! Very Michael!


Do we want the pod squad to be aleins?
Let me know?



Liz looked down at her watch. The bell wouldn't ring for 10 minutes but she didn't want to be late for her first class.
Anyways she had AP Bio. Biology was her favorite.

"Guys I gotta go" she said to her three friends.
"Meet me at the Crash after school. There is someone I would like you all to meet" Liz said

Her cousin Allie was coming to see her. She couldn't wait they had always been great friends as children but she hadn't seen her in years.

Liz arrived at her biology classroom. ONe of the first to arrive as usual. There was only one person in the room so far. She couldn't tell who it was, but she felt a few butterflies in her stomach.

"Miss Parker" her Bio teacher Mr. Stevens said extending his hand

"Good Morning Mr Stevens" Liz said shaking his hands

"Its great to see you Liz. Well I decided not to punish you this year with a lab partner I want to learn from you. I know how horrible Paulie was. So I decided to give you the other best student in my class. Max Evans"

At that moment Max decided to turn around

Liz almost couldn't breathe. For a second she thought her heart had stopped

"Um ok" Liz managed
"Thank you Mr Stevens"

"You two will be at the lab in the back left" Mr Stevens said and pointed to where max was standing

Liz slowly made her way to the back of her room, and when she raised her gaze to look at him their eyes met and held.

"Hi Max"


posted on 30-Oct-2002 3:25:14 AM by jeremiah

I cant believe My luck! I get the most beautful Girl as my lab partner! How lucky can a Guy get? I see Liz walking to me in slow motion. The slow and tortous way her slim yet lean figure is coming this way. Liz has a perfect body as a goddess. I cant believ my luck. Her smile, It is breathtaking. And please dont get me started on those eyes. I think Liz is talking to me. I think she is. Wait Yes she is.

"Hey Liz." My voice squeaks. I am such a dork.
posted on 30-Oct-2002 3:12:55 PM by Sugarplum7
Hi Britt!

I was writing Allie the way that we talked about, and I got about halfway through and I didn’t like it. I don’t know what it was, but something didn’t click. I think I am going to go with another idea. One that you threw out that I really liked. After this part I think you’ll know the one that I am talking about. It looked like another interesting one that would give another aspect that others can work with if they wanted.

Britt, if you want to choose pictures of the characters that is fine with me. I have one (I changed Allie’s appearance to make things seem to fit better in my mind) that I can use. Also, if you want there to be aliens that is fine with me. If you don’t, that is fine with me too.

Everyone, I hope you like this.

~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

“Allie,” my mom said with a defeated tone. “You know that we want to stay with you. But we can’t.”

“I can stay here. Look it isn’t that big a deal.”

“No,” Dad interjected. I knew that he was dead set against me staying. I know that he was doing this to keep me safe, but it didn’t make it any easier. I don’t want to go. I like it here. I like my home. “If he comes back, I don’t want you here. You need to stay away from him. You have to go.”

“But, Daddy.”

“You know he’s right Allie. As a precaution we think you should stay with your Aunt Nancy and Uncle Jeff.”

~*~ ~*~ ~*~

So this is my new home. Roswell, New Mexico. I can’t say that I remember being here, but according to Mommy and Daddy I was. I don’t remember much when I was two, so I’ll just have to take their word for it. I do remember Aunt Nancy and Uncle Jeff. They come over for a visit when I was about seven. They brought Liz with them.

I had so much fun with her when she was there. I remember staying up at night and just sitting outside on the deck. She would tell me about the sky at night in Roswell. There were stars as far as the eye could see, noting like it was in San Francisco. I always needed to strain to see the stars.

I wonder where she is. Aunt Nancy was supposed to be here by now. I set my bag down and take a seat on my hardcover suitcase. I find myself wondering about what is going to happen. Will they like me? Will Liz hate me for coming to live with them? Okay, so that thought is farfetched, but I am not thinking in the most logical manner.

I stare out into the vast, dry desert expanse. There is nothing but dry earth and rock as far as I can see. I never imagined that I would miss the ocean so much. Sure I didn’t live on the beach, but I always liked having the option of going.

I hear the crunch of gravel as a car enters the parking lot of the bus station. It rolls to a stop and the engine cuts off before the door is opened and I red-haired woman steps out. Just seeing the hair, I know that this is Aunt Nancy. I pull out the picture that Mommy gave me, and double check.

“Allie?” I hear her ask. I stand and start to pick up my bags. “Allie!” She exclaims as she ran to me. “It’s been so long, but I’d know you anywhere!”

I smile as she closes the distance between us.

“Put that bag down and give me a hug. How long has it been? Eleven? Twelve years?” She pulls me closer and holds me tight, and finally I feel safe. I’m in another state. I am in a place where he has no idea I am. After all the worry and stress it is finally over.

“Hey, Aunt Nancy,” I say as we hug.

She pulls back and really looks at me. “Come on. Let’s get you home. Then we can get something to eat.”

I pulled the bag’s shoulder strap on my shoulder, and she pulled the suitcase to the car. We didn’t talk as we loaded the bags on the car, and she didn’t make a motion to until we were well on our way to Roswell. It was not an uncomfortable silence that some might think.

I relaxed and melted into the soft seat of the car. The soft hum of the engine, and the slight rock of the car as it traveled over the two lane highway must have been enough to get me to sleep because I closed my eyes one second, and the next I heard her say, “We’re here!”

“The Crashdown?” I ask at the large sign resting over the door of the building in front of us.

“Yeah. It’s a little diner that Jeff and I own. It is one of the main places in the town. Liz and her friend Maria work here. If you want a job you are welcome to it,” she said with a smile on her face.

I stepped out of the car and took a look around at the buildings and stores lining the streets.

“A UFO Museum. I can’t say that I’ve seen one of those,” I said quietly before shutting the door and taking a step onto the sidewalk.

“Come on inside, Allie. I’ll show you around. Your room is all set up. It is a little plain, but we thought it would be a good idea. That way you can dress it up.”

She pushed open the door to the diner and held it open for me.


“Hi, Uncle Jeff,” I say as I walk over to him to give him a hug.

“Hey, Jeff. Can you get Allie’s bags? They are in the car.”

“Sure,” he said after he released me from the hug.

“So Liz is going to be by after school, and she is going to introduce you to her friends. Until then you can start unpacking. We can have lunch in about two hours. Sound good?” She said this as she walked me through to the back room of the diner. She proceeded to walk up a set of stairs to what I am guessing is their apartment.


“Jeff will bring your bags up as soon as he gets them out of the car. This is the living room. Liz’s room is here, right next door to yours. Jeff’s and my room is across the hall. When we heard that you would be staying with us this year we went and put another door into the bathroom. So you and Liz share a joint bathroom.” She turned me around and brought me back to the living room. “We have the kitchen and dining room over here, and that is about it.”

“Okay,” I say as I smile at her. I turn and go off to take a closer look at my own room.

So this is my new life. A clean slate where no one knows about what happened. This is a place where I don’t have to worry about Jared coming over unexpectedly. I’m safe here, just like Daddy said.

~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ End Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~


So how was it? Sorry if it was on the boring side. There is not much that I can do when it is just Nancy and Allie. I don’t know if everyone read Allie’s profile, but here it is in its edited version. I changed her appearance because it did not seem to fit.

Name: Alyson Taylor
Age: 17
Height: 5’3”/5’4”
Eye color: Brown
Hair color: Light Brown/Blonde
Weight: 100 lbs.

Where is she from?
Allie is from California (San Francisco to be exact) where her parents still live.

Why is she coming to Roswell?
This is still a little vague in my mind on how bad it was but an ex-boyfriend is presently stalking her. I am thinking along the lines of the relationship grew abusive, and she left. This can add a fun aspect to play with when Kyle starts to “woo” her and when they get together.

Who is she related to and how?
Allie’s mom and Nancy are sisters. They have kept in touch, but the families have not visited one another in approximately 11 years.

She is normally quiet, but she can be loud if she needs to be heard. The quietness throws people off, dismissing her as shy. She is almost always cheerful, constantly optimistic, and very easy to get along with. Friendship is very big with her. Once you become her friend she is there for you through everything.

I think that is all I have for Allie. I am pretty sure that this will be what stays. Sorry about the changing of my mind. I hope it wasn’t a problem.


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posted on 30-Oct-2002 3:32:43 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
I love it!
I thought it was a great part!
I am glad you went with this idea!
posted on 30-Oct-2002 5:08:21 PM by TabascoChick
I watch as Liz walks away."Bye..,"he say,rather loudly as she goes.I look to Maria and then Kyle."So,shall we walk in?"I ask.We walk towards our lockers and I put my stuff in.One more year.That's it.Thank god!I mean,I love Liz and Maria and Kyle somewhat,but I really wanna be away from high school where I'm just known as "The Computer Guy".I'm like that guy from that SNL skit.That was funny.Jimmy Fallon rocks!Maria thinks he's hot.I realize I have English.Ehhh...not my favorite,but not my least favorite."I'm gonna go off to English..k?See ya next period..,"I say,knowing that Maria and I both have (some subject) next period.I start thinking about Isabel.Wow..she's the most beautiful girl I've ever seen.Her eyes and her hair and her legs and her lips and...ok...she's beautiful in general.Suddenly,I bump into someone.God...could I be any clumsier?I look up and see Isabel.Omg...say something Alex!I look at her and try to open my mouth to say something smart,but all I say is,"Uh...I'm...sorry...."God,I'm such an idiot!
posted on 30-Oct-2002 11:24:07 PM by Lizzie_Parker17

He knows my name! Liz thought excitedly.
Of course he could have heard Mr Stevens say it earlier.
What does it matter she was sitting next to Max Evans! All year.

She prayed that she didn't do something completely dorky in front of him.

Just then the first bell rang and other students began to filter into class.

Liz searched her mind for something to say.
"So was your summer?" Liz managed

'How was your summer?' Could she get anymore lame? She could have said anything other than that, but no. It had to be 'how was your summer'
He would probably never speak to her again.

posted on 30-Oct-2002 11:36:56 PM by jeremiah

Man the sound of her voice was beautful.It souunded like an angel. I can sit here and listen to it all day. I think to myself.

"It was Good.I just stayed arounf Roswell and hung out." I say .Then my so called friend Michael Guerin came up to me. What is he doing here?

"Mike, What are you doing here?" I ask. Not Realising that the lunche bell rang. He gives me this look then leaves. Oh well. Cant impress them all. I turn and see Liz looking at me. Man she is Really Beautful. Then I do something I have been wanting to do. I ask her out.

"I will see you at the Crashdown, Later Right. Maybe we can eat together?" I ask. Alright, You can put the max Evans is abig doek sign on my head now!
posted on 31-Oct-2002 6:16:50 PM by kristalynn

The day went by so slow. This year feels different somehow. I think it has a lot to do with Maxwell.

We used to be tight. Best friends. But now he's a stiff. He dosen't want to do nothin anymore. He's got to realize that we have it great. People would kill to be us.

And I'm really concerned now because I went up to him at lunch and saw him talking with that doe-eyed girl with brown hair. I can't think of her name. But I know that she works at the Crashdown, her parents own it.

What the hell is he with her for?

She's a loser. They all are.


Today is a weird day.

It's after school now and I'm walking down the hall. I can't find Max or Isabel. I don't really want to see them. But I need a ride home. But there's something wrong with my BMW.

I scan the hall and spot Kyle Valenti. Not the coolest guy, but he's alright. Makes me laugh.

I'm happy to see him because he can give me a lift home and check out what is wrong with my car.

He's talking to some short blonde chick that is moving her hands wildly in the air.

I don't know her name, but she works at the Crashdown with 'doey-eyed girl.'

I brush past her, pushing her out of the way.

'Kyle, I need your help man.' I tell him.


Just to be clear. I made Michael push Maria out of the way, cause he is supposed to infuriate her.
posted on 1-Nov-2002 4:23:15 PM by SweetLilDreamer

I was standing there, talking to Kyle about.... homework was it? Or maybe... Well, I forget, but I'm just talking and Michael Guerin pushes me out of the way... ME! I feel bad for Lizzie, she wants in that group. Not in persay, she wants Max Evans. And if you hung with Max Evans, you were one of them. She's pretty close too, just watching those two. ::sigh:: They make Romeo and Juliette pale in comparison. But the subject at hand is Michael! ARGH! I was want to... RING HIS NECK! Thinking he rules the world. HA!


When Maria was knocked down, I looked over at the intuder. It was Michael. Forgetting about Maria for a sec, "What do you want?" Then Maria started making her way up, "And why did you knock Maria down?"

posted on 1-Nov-2002 4:33:01 PM by kristalynn

I look at Kyle confused for a moment.

"Maria?" What the hell is talking about? I wonder to myself and then I notice the blonde chick glaring at me.

"Sorry Shorty." I mutter and then turn to Kyle.

"Hey can you give me a lift to my house and check out what is wrong with my car? I know your good at crap like that."
posted on 1-Nov-2002 4:43:40 PM by Lizzie_Parker17

For a moment it almost didn't sink in. Was Max Evans...Did he just...Ask her out?
No It couldn't be! But thats what it sounded like
'Maybe we could eat together'

Liz looked up at him shyly and bit her lip.
"Um yeah sure. I'd like that"

Mr. Stevens was rambling on about something in the front of class but she didn't hear it. The first day of school and already she wasn't paying attention.
She didn't know how she was going to pass if Max kept looking so extremely gorgeous.

As the bell rang Liz stood up and gathered her things.
"I guess I'll see you later then" She smiled softly
"Bye Max" Liz said accidently brushing against him

posted on 1-Nov-2002 5:12:47 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax

I was walkin to go see Max, and Michael, and waving back to all the people wavin to me. It's all so pathetic, they should get lives, but I guess it's the price to pay to be beautiful. As I'm walking I get bumped into someone.
"Walk much," I say. I look up and see Alex Withman. He's kinda cute in a geeky way. I see him stutter as he says sorry. "Look its alright, no damage, mah hair's fine, everythin's cool," I said to make him feel calm. He smiles. It's the cutest lil thing. Wait did I just say Alex's smile is cute? I give him one of tmy best Isabel Evans, Model smiles. I could see his knees go week. Work's every fuckin time, and I love it.

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posted on 1-Nov-2002 5:21:05 PM by TabascoChick
I smile at her.Oh god..she's smiling at me now.Is that just my imagination?I stand there for a second not saying anything,just admiring her beauty.*Say something Alex!*I open my mouth to say something.But what?"So,did you have a good summer?"I blurt out.Did you have a good summer?What kind of line is that?Wow...I should really write the Dating For Dummies book when I get around to it!
posted on 2-Nov-2002 1:42:46 AM by Sugarplum7
Hey Everyone!

Wow! The parts are so great! I can’t wait until I can interact with the rest of you. It looks like it will just be a little while longer since school has just let out. Yes! Until then I have a little Allie part. I hope you guys don’t mind what I have.


PS. We all know what the characters look like. I just thought that I would put up the picture of the actress that Allie’s appearance is modeled after. *happy*


~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

“You don’t have to do this,” Aunt Nancy said as she passed the hanger that carried the neatly pressed uniform to me.

“You don’t expect me to just sit up here watching TV or blankly staring at the walls . . . do you?” I reply as I take the uniform and hold it against my chest.

“But you should rest. You’ve been—“

“All I’ve been doing was resting. There isn’t much else you can do when you are on a bus,” I say as I smile at her. “Tell Uncle Jeff I’ll be right down.”

She studied me closely in the way most mothers do. I can tell that now that I am living here, under her roof, I am going to be treated that way. It is actually comforting, having someone watching you . . . caring about where you are and what you are doing.

“Okay. Just take it easy. I am telling him that too. I just got you here, and you are not going to burn out when you have been here not even a day.”


“I’ll see you downstairs,” she said as she turned to walk to the stairs to the café.

I lay the uniform on the bed as I walk over to my dresser. I pick up the brush and neatly brush my hair before placing the antenna headband on my head. They bob as I move my head and laugh lightly. This is definitely not the most dignified or glamorous job that I will have.

I peel out of my clothes and toss them in the hamper before I put on the dress and close the line of buttons on the front. Lace up my shoes and put a light layer of lip gloss on before I pick up the apron of an “alien” face and tie it.

Dressed and as ready as I am ever going to be I head down the stairs to start work. I had to do something to keep my mind busy. I was going crazy thinking about what Liz was going to think of me. Thousands of thoughts, some were really ridiculous, kept grabbing my attention. I was barely able to get through packing.

Were her friends going to like me? I don’t know what I would do if they didn’t. It would make everything really difficult. I would be completely alone at home and at school. Was this a big mistake? Coming here?

I look out the door at the small, growing crowd of people in the dining area. It looked like there were high school students coming in. Were they out of school?

I push through the door and walk over to where Uncle Jeff is standing at the register. “Uncle Jeff?”

“Yeah, Allie?” he responded and turned to face me.

“Is school out?” I ask him as I motion to the group of teenagers that just entered.

“Yeah,” he says. “They just got out about . . . oh . . . ten, fifteen minutes ago.”

“Oh,” I say flatly. “Thanks.” He lightly touches my back as he leaves to take a customer’s order. Uh oh. It looks like I am going to find out how the rest of my time here is going to be. It all depends on Liz and her friends. Will they like me?

~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ End Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

posted on 2-Nov-2002 2:41:30 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax
how was my summer?

This boy needs to get pick up lines and fast.

Well so do the other 2000 guys in Roswell who asked me the same question.

"It was great Alex," I said. He just nodded,

He must be havin a heart attack. Isabel Evans talkin to lil ol Alex Wittman.

HaH if anyone could hear what I'm sayin in mah head right now they would think I'm fuckin concited.

Which I am by the way.

Ah I feel bad for him so I ask,
" How was yours?"


posted on 2-Nov-2002 8:58:58 PM by TabascoChick
I look at her.Wow..Isabel Evans is asking ME how MY summer is!Who would've thought?" know how Roswell is in the summer,"I answer.* she thinks you're boring!Great going,buddy!*I think to myself.I pause and say,"So,um...were you going to head over to the Crashdown?I mean..I was..but you know...I was..uh..just asking if.."I sigh at my terrible flirting skills.
posted on 2-Nov-2002 10:27:41 PM by jeremiah

I thought I had died and gone to heaven, For the brief second that Liz's body touched mine. I dont know how but Knowing thst it is from Liz, The smallest things seem a lot bigger. All I Know Is that I cant wait for her to know how I feel. As I continue in my Liz thoughts, I suddenly am pulled out of them by none other then the shool's very own human mattress. Pam Troy. She Runs her hand across my chest trying to cop a feel.

I swear! I think about going to the principal about Sexual Harrasement.

I give her a smirkisk kind of grin, Then I pull her hand off me. I tell her were to go.

I Am Just Glad that Liz didnt see that.
posted on 3-Nov-2002 10:02:15 AM by LizParkerEvans4evax
Aww how cute, he's askin me on a date

It could help his reputation,

if he even has one that is.

"You know goin to Crashdown sounds like a great idea, I haven't ate this morning, you wanna join me?" I asked.

Okay so it's more like me takin him

but hey, he's having trouble with his flirtin skills, and I got everythin down.

He's just starin in awe. My god im good. "I'm just gonna go tell mah brother, and then we're on our way k?" I said he nodded. I walk away and find my lovely brother, and walk up to him, he seems to busy with a girl, oh well. I scream,"Max!"
posted on 4-Nov-2002 3:31:48 PM by Sugarplum7
Hi all!

I had to just pop in and say that the parts are just amazing. You are all super!

posted on 4-Nov-2002 4:26:03 PM by TabascoChick
My heart rate skyrockets and I nod to Isabel as she goes to find her brother,max.This is amazing!It's like 'Seeing Star Wars for the first time' amazing!Wow...I feel so nervous,but at the same time so excited.Then it hits me.What if she's just joking with me?Not that,the real Isabel Evans I think that's different then she is around school would ever do such a thing,but having to watch all those teen movies Lizzie and Maria rented taught me a good lesson.My smile fades alittle and I try to decide if my new idea is stupid or amazingly smart.Why would Isabel Evans ever wanna go out with me if she wasn't making some joke or something?Because she's nice.She's real.I remember seeing her once out of school.Away from everyone.She was reading a book.Which of course I've never seen her do in school.She looked so was hard to explain,but I knew that that was the Isabel I wanted to go out with.I love the Isabel in school who's spunky and sassy,but I want more then that.I wonder if there really is a "real Isabel"...
SugarPlum...thanks so much!That's so sweet!
posted on 4-Nov-2002 5:47:00 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax
I look back at Alex, and smile, he seems sweet, like someone who I can open up too, some one who will like me for me, and not mah looks, or popualrity.

Oh come on Max! I don't got all day, he aint answerin me

My god, Ya I kow he's pissed I inturrupted him, but hey I gotta do what I gotta do, I'm Isabel *wink*

I'm startin to get pissed off, and I don't like when I get pissed off, so I just have to do this

"MAX! HELLO YOU THERE! I know your talkin and shit, it looks really intresting and all, could you shut the fuck up for a minute so I could tell yuo somethin?" I say.

I look at the girl he's with, she's always hanging out with Alex, what's her name agian, shit there are so many god damn faces.

Umm Is it Mary, no Teesy, no, cheesy, no cheesy, the hell is wrong with me, oh no wait that boy cheesy walker never mind.

Lets see oh right! Liz,

"You don't mind Liz do you, I just gotta steal him for a second," I said pullin my annoying but loveable brother aside.
posted on 6-Nov-2002 12:59:12 AM by Lizzie_Parker17
OK I am just going to skip it to after school!

AS the last bell rang Liz sighed.
She liked school, but she couldn't wait to get to the Crashdown.
Max would be there. Her cousin would be there!
She couldn't wait!

She waited outside at the usual spot for Maria and Alex.

posted on 6-Nov-2002 11:58:09 PM by kristalynn

"Hey Kyle! Are you listening to me?" I demand. Man, sometimes I wonder about this guy.

"Can you come check out my car for me? I'll even take you to the Crashdown and buy you some food." I offer. For two reasons.

One being: I really want my car back.

And Two: I can afford to buy the guy some grub. Afterall, not everyone has the kind of money that I do.

I wait for an answer and see that blonde chick still glaring at me. What is wrong with these people?


OCC: LOL. I really wanted to post and I don't know where Kyle and Maria are. I thought that Michael and Kyle could go to the Crashdown afterwards, so he can get his first glimpse of Allie!!!
posted on 7-Nov-2002 7:16:56 PM by Sugarplum7
kristalynn originally wrote:
OCC: LOL. I really wanted to post and I don't know where Kyle and Maria are.

Hmmm. I wonder where they are too. The same person posts for both characters, right?

I thought that Michael and Kyle could go to the Crashdown afterwards, so he can get his first glimpse of Allie!!!

Wahoo!! That sounds like a great plan to me!

Katie (who is eagerly awaiting the next part)
~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

“Hey, Jose?” I ask as I pick up the order.

“Yeah,” he says as he turns to look at me, making sure to flip the burgers on the grill before he takes his attention away from it.

“Thanks.” I smile at him before I walk away. He was really nice about making sure that I was okay, and that things weren’t too much for me. I was not used to someone at work asking me if I was okay. Things so far were beginning to look up in Roswell.

“Here you go,” I say to the booth filled with guys wearing letter jackets. I am not an idiot. I knew that they were the sports people. I was not about to think them jocks. Not all guys who lettered in a sport were jocks. I did learn my lesson the first time around back home. Just because they come off sweet and nice, I am not about to get involved with any of them any time soon.

I have a feeling that you are wondering what I am talking about, but there are a few of you that probably understand. Let’s just say that James was not the ideal boyfriend . . . even if that is what he seemed like when we first started going out. He was very much a jock. I should have known better, but what can you do. The entire school was pushing for us to get together, the head cheerleader and the captain of the football team. To them it was fated, a perfect couple.

It was like that in the beginning, when he was sweet. Before I started to want to do some things without him. It was after the first time I broke a date with him to go out with the girls that I knew it was over. He was so angry. Of course there was a fight—a big one at that. It happened right outside my house. We were sitting on the lawn talking quietly, at first. I felt so safe in his arms, but then his grip grew tighter and his voice grew harsher.

~*~ ~*~ ~*~

“You broke our date, Allie,” he said as he tightened his grip on my arm.

“Jay,” I said through a wince. “Jay, you’re hurting me.” He didn’t even acknowledge what I said.

He stood, but with his strong grip still on my arm I was forcefully brought to my feet. “I told you, when we go out, you need to be ready. I don’t care whether Clarissa called to say that she wanted to go to the movies with you and the rest of your friends.”

“You go out with Keith and them all the time. I even told you in advance.”

“That’s not the point, Allie!” He screamed at me and shook me. “You always do this!”

With no warning at all I was thrown to the ground with such a force my teeth chattered in my head. I blinked a couple times to clear my vision.

“Then what is the point?” I ask him, my voice quiet. There was no need to fuel his rage with a raised voice.

“You don’t know? Of COURSE! You never know, Allie. I don’t know why I waste my time with you!” He screamed as he threw his arms up for punctuation before heading to his car parked out front.

“Jay, wait,” I say as I run over to him. He is so angry. Driving is not the best thing for him to do. I touch his shoulder to try and get him to stop walking, to get him to turn around, and turn around he does.

It all happened so fast. I don’t know what registered first: that I was lying on the sidewalk, or that Jay had hit me. He hit me. It was at that moment that I knew it was over. There was no way that I was going to stay with him. Not after this.

Cuts and scratches covered my arms and legs and my cheek throbbed. It felt like it was about to explode. I could taste the distinct flavor of blood on in my mouth, and my lip felt like it was just split in half. How could he have done this to me.

~*~ ~*~ ~*~

Things didn’t end as easily as I thought they would. Not easy at all. He started to follow me around, threaten me. It didn’t stop there. He would leave notes and things like that in my locker, in my room. That is why I am here in Roswell. I am here to disappear.

How did that saying go? Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice, shame on me. I was fooled once my sweet words and the beautiful face of the captains of the sports team. I am not about to get into the same situation again. No way.

“Are you new to Roswell . . . Allie?” One of the guys at the table asks as I place down their orders.

“Yeah. Are you new here,” another asks, repeating the question. “Paulie really wants to know.” He drapes his arm over the blonde that asked me first. I look around to try and find a way to get out of this situation. I don’t think I have ever felt so uncomfortable before.

“Yeah,” I reply. It sounded a little too timid. I knew these types of guys. The ate timid up.

“Really, well, then maybe Paulie can show you around when you start school.”

I try to smile through my unease. Please. Someone come. Anyone. Liz. Now would be a great time for you to come. It has been quite a while since school ended. Please.

“Yeah, I guess.”

“You guess,” the friend asked. A fake shocked expression plastered over his features.

“I insist,” Paulie said as he looked at me, a lopsided grin on his lips. “When should I pick you up?”

Please get me out of this. I don’t want the past to repeat itself. Please, Liz. Uncle Jeff. Aunt Nancy. Anyone?

~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ End Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

How did you like it? I just thought that some drama could help the Kyle/Allie side of the story. You know, make Kyle work to get her. It would be so boring for things to just fall right into his lap. Besides, he has Allie’s cousin, and some friends that can help convince Allie to give him a chance. Then, when he is in, he can melt her heart.

It also leaves it open as to which group Allie will be in. If she goes out for cheerleading here then that might put her in with the popular crowd. And since Liz is family, and she is new, she will want to stick close to home. She can be in two places at once. In a way she will be in a similar predicament to Kyle. If you guys want to do this.


posted on 8-Nov-2002 3:43:02 AM by Sugarplum7
posted on 8-Nov-2002 2:50:46 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
OOC: Great part Katie! Very emotional! James is a bad bad man!
Liz is going to come to your rescue ok!


Liz sighed somewhat annoyed. She had been waiting here at this spot for Maria and Alex for 15 minutes.
They weren't coming.

Looks like she was walking home.

The walk to the Crashdown wasn't that bad. Really only 10 or 15 minutes, but today it was the worst!
She wanted to see Allie! And she really wanted to see Max!

As she got to the front of the Crashdown she sighed in relief.
She pushed open the door of the Crashdown only to see her cousin being pushed around by Kyles dumb friends.

“Are you new to Roswell . . . Allie?” One of the guys at the table asked

“Yeah. Are you new here,” “Paulie really wants to know.”

“Yeah,” Allie said

“Really, well, then maybe Paulie can show you around when you start school.”

“Yeah, I guess.” Allie replied

“You guess,”

“I insist,” “When should I pick you up?”

Thats when Liz made her entrance

"Actually guys shes not intrested. I'm her cousin and if anyone is going to show her around Roswell its going to be me. So leave her alone Paulie or I'll tell Kyle."

At the mention of Kyles name they all quieted down

"How are you doing?" I asked as I pulled Allie into a tight hug
"I have missed you!"


posted on 8-Nov-2002 6:28:39 PM by SweetLilDreamer
OCC: Sorry! Life's been spinning around me, I'll try to get it under control soon enough.

Kyle (featuring Maria)

"Sure, I'll fix your car, but you gotta pay me." I look up at Michael with a grim face. I can't be fixing things for free nowadays. Do you know how expensive it is to live right now?

Then I look over at Maria and she's glaring, not good. So, I tap her on the shoulder softly, "WHAT?!" she practially screams at me. I gulp, "Uh, aren't you getting a ride from Alex?"

She perks up, "Oh yea!" She gives me a little wave as she goes off to find one of her best friends, but not before shoving Michael out of the way. I can't surpress my chuckle, "So, my house or do you want to go to the Crash first?"
posted on 8-Nov-2002 11:39:47 PM by kristalynn
I don't reply to Kyle's question right away.

I look as the 'blonde chick' storms off...but not before shoving me out of the way.


Who the hell does she think she is? Who is she anyway?
And most importantly, why does she hate me?

Man, she must want me!

I fell Kyle nudge me.

"Wha- Oh Yeah. Um, let's go to the Crashdown first. I'm starving." I say and turn to walk away.

I notice that he isn't following. I sigh.

"Of course I'll pay you. Let's go." He smiles then and we make our way to his car and to the Crashdown.
posted on 10-Nov-2002 12:19:37 AM by SweetLilDreamer

We make it to my car without anymore drama. I get in the front seat and check the rear view mirror, and chuckle, "You guys so have the hots for each other." I state.

We finally make it to the Crash and take a seat in one of the booths, Liz comes up with her patented waitress smiles. "Hey Lizzie, what's good today?"
~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

“Actually guys,” I hear a girl say from behind me. “She’s not interested.” Liz? Is that Lizzie? It has to be. I knew she’d come in to stop them, just like I remembered.

“I’m her cousin, and if anyone is going to show her around Roswell, it is going to be me. So leave her alone Paulie, or I’ll tell Kyle.” At that they all turned away and focused their attention on the food I just brought them. I wonder who this Kyle guy is. A smart bet would be that he is the leader of this group. Maybe he is a friend of Liz’s. No, there is no way that Liz would be friends with a person who would be with these guys. I haven’t known them that long, but my guess would be that they are a bunch of jerks.

I turn around and come face to face with Liz for the first time in so many years. I can’t help the wide smile spread across my face at seeing her. Liz!

She pulled me into a tight hug as she said, “How are you doing? I have missed you.”

I hold on to her tightly before I let go and take a step back. “I’m doing good. As good as can be expected after the long bus ride over. I missed you too.”

“You’re doing okay. They didn’t . . . did they.”

I guess that Liz knows about Jay. That is the only reason she would ask if the scene that just took place upset me.

“It’s okay. I didn’t think I would get so shaken from something so small.” I shrug my shoulders lightly as I take a deep breath. She looks at me longer just to make sure that I really am okay. “Really,” I say as I look in her eyes. “I’m okay.”

I feel my hair slip from the band I wrapped around it. “I’ll be right back. It looks like my elastic decided to break.”

I run to the back room and take the stairs two at a time as I rush up to my room and pull my hair up into a ponytail as I rush back down the stairs. Liz and I have some catching up to do. I am sure we will get to that later tonight, but a head start never hurt.

I wonder whom Liz is talking to. I must say that he is cute. He has the sweetest smile I’ve ever seen. It makes you want to smile with him.

“Hey, Liz. I’m back.” I say as I walk back to her side. There is no way that I could ignore the way that he was looking at me. I would have to be blind.

~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ End Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

posted on 12-Nov-2002 4:08:57 PM by Sugarplum7
posted on 12-Nov-2002 5:23:23 PM by Lizzie_Parker17

Liz watched as Allie runs up the stairs to get a new band
She turned around when she heared Kyles voice behind her.

"Hey Lizzie Whats good today?" He asked with a smile

She smiled at him as she replied
"Everything especially the waitresses"

Liz and Kyle had dated for a few months but had decided to only be friends, now their relationship was great. They could practically say anything to each other. The were good friends.

Liz felt his attention being diverted from her however when Allie walked down the stairs and said she was back

Liz tried to hide her smile as she made the introduction
"Kyle this is my cousin Allie. Allie this is my good friend Kyle."

Liz smiled.
"Hey Kyle. Paulie and Crew were bugging my dear cousin. Could you talk them out of doing it again?"

With the way Kyle was looking at Allie it didn't look like he would let anyone near her!

"Well why don't I let you two get acquainted. I'm meeting someone here. Allie, you and me tonight!"


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posted on 12-Nov-2002 5:41:12 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax

I return to Alex, without even caring what Max says, whatever, he wants to be an asshole

he could go right ahead and do that

but I can be a hell of a lot more bitchy than he could ever be,

so all I'm sayin is the boy better watch his back.

Cuz imma, oo I'm so pissed off.

I'm not gonna let this ruin my date with Alex,

I'll just deal with Max later.

"Ready to go?" I asked Alex.
posted on 12-Nov-2002 11:10:53 PM by Sugarplum7
Brit! That part was great! Heehee, just one thing though. Her name is Allie. LOL! No big. You are in how many RPGs? Totally understandable. I just went in and edited. I hope you don't mind. The part was awesome!

posted on 14-Nov-2002 11:21:09 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
oh whopps!
What did I call her?
posted on 17-Nov-2002 9:23:13 PM by Sugarplum7
You called her Serena, Britt. It wasn't that big a problem. I loved your part. (I am sure that I told you that already.)

~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

What is Liz doing? I have seen her for less than a minute and she is already pushing me off on some guy. Not that I mind. I understand that she does have a life and I do have to work until the end of the shift. I did give Uncle Jeff my word that I would. But still. She isn’t putting me with someone I know. She isn’t going, ‘Here, Allie. Hang with Maria and Alex.” Two people I know. They are two people who know me . . . sort of.

I just got out of a pretty icky situation with a guy. She knows that. I hope she isn’t thinking that she is going to be like Maria and start pairing me up. Making a friend wouldn’t hurt though. I mean, if Liz is friends with him he can’t be that bad, right? He did get that table of guys off me. I owe him a friendship at least.

And after Jay I don’t think getting together with another “captain of the football team” would be a stroke of genius. I came here to take things slower, to take my time. I came here to step away from things. Who’s to say that this guy isn’t like Jay? That he won’t be the sweetest guy in the world when we first get started, and then after a couple months he’ll just do a complete 180 and become the exact opposite?

He looks at me. I don’t know if he is uncomfortable that Liz just left us alone together and we didn’t even so much as say a word. Oh yeah, I don’t feel uncomfortable.

“So . . . were you going to sit with those guys?” I ask as I motion over my shoulder to the table of guys that were trying to ‘show me the town.’ He has a sort of faraway look, like he is thinking about something else. “Kyle?” I ask, using the name that I heard Liz call him. “Can I get you something to drink?”

“Drink? Yeah. Sure. I’ll go tell the guys to leave you alone and you can get back to work.” Both he and I started to walk away. He walked over to the table of guys, and I walked over to the fountain drinks.

That was when it hit me. He didn’t even tell me what he wanted to drink. What should I do? Should I turn around and ask him what he likes to drink? Should I just take a chance and get him anything?

I make a split second decision. “Kyle!” I shout out over the loud conversations of the diner, while I turn to run over to him.

“Yeah, Allie?” I smile slightly. I kinda like hearing him say my name.

“You didn’t tell me what you wanted to drink.”

~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ End Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

posted on 18-Nov-2002 5:37:46 PM by SweetLilDreamer

I look over to where Liz disapeared to; she left me alone with Allie. She's beautiful, like Liz, but different. Her hair is lighter than Liz's, but they have the same eyes, almost. Then I turn my head and look at Allie. I open my mouth, then close it, not knowing what to say.
“So . . . were you going to sit with those guys?” Her sweet voice breaks my stupor. I turn toward where she's directing the comment and was about to speak when she calls my name. "Kyle?"

I look over back at her, "Do you want a drink?"

“Drink? Yeah. Sure. I’ll go tell the guys to leave you alone and you can get back to work.” I say, I want to apologize for the asses, but I figured it's not my place.

Once I get to the table and tell the guys to knock it off, Allie yells my name, "Yea Allie?" She asks what I wanted to drink. I laugh and smile at her, "A coke, please."

The door rang and low and behold, Michael walks in. I walk over to him and slap him on the back, "About time you got here," I joke.

OCC: I think I'm going to suck being a guy, but I'll try. If anyone wants to give me pointers, I'm open to ideas! Please help! *big*

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posted on 18-Nov-2002 10:16:03 PM by kristalynn
OCC: Yeah, I suck at as a guy too!!!! lol. (but I think that we are doing a good job!!!)


I give Kyle one of my classic "Guerin" stares.

"Yeah, well I would've got here sooner, but I had to go to the back machine to pay for your sorry ass."

Kyle grins back at me, as if he knows what I am talking about. That's why I like him. He's cool, doesn't really care what other people think. Unlike Max, who has been acting all bitchy and shit lately.

I glance around for him, and don't see him. What the hell is up with that guy lately.

I settle down in a booth with Kyle.

I start to tell him what is wrong with my car, when we are rudely interrupted by some waitress.

She places Kyle's drink down infront of him and asks him what he wants to eat. I see that he smile's really goofy at her.

I then notice that the girl is new and that I have never seen her before.

"Who the hell is she?" I ask Kyle, completely ignoring her presence.


OCC: Remember that Michael is supposed to stuck up and stuff, so I want him to start off as an asshole. Hope I don't affend anyone!!!!!
posted on 18-Nov-2002 10:41:42 PM by Sugarplum7
Hi Girlies!

I don't really know how guys think, but I was reading this thing from Nicholas Sparks (it was at the end of the Notebook). It was this Q&A. The question was how does he write women so well. He answered that he felt that men and women basically think the same (I am thinking that it is true on some level as long as they are mature). It made some sense to me. What about you?

I think both of you are doing a fantabulous, fantastical job in your characters.


PS. Loved Kyle and Michael. It can give me a lot to work with. I bet Allie just wants to melt, but it might take a little more effort. Maybe I can get an Allie out tomorrow . . .

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posted on 19-Nov-2002 4:29:05 PM by SweetLilDreamer
"Who the hell is she?" I ask Kyle, completely ignoring her presence.



I glare and kick Michael under the table. I smile apologetically toward Allie. "Michael," I say pointedly, "This is Allie. She's Liz's cousin and living over here for a while." I turn toward Allie and mouth, "Sorry."
~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

“Who the hell is she?” Wow. This guy totally lacks manners. I don’t know whether it is that he thinks he is the God of West Roswell. Judging by the way he is dressed, I am going to say that he has money or his parents have money. I hope he doesn’t think that I am going to be a little docile girl that is going to take this treatment.

Just as I was about to tear into him for treating me like a second-class citizen Kyle, in a way, comes to my rescue.

"This is Allie. She's Liz's cousin and living over here for a while." I turn toward Allie and mouth, "Sorry."

A small smile tugs at the corner of my lips. I don’t think any one, not even Jay, stood up for me like that. No. I can’t! This is a bad idea Allie and you know it. As much as I want to stay away from Kyle, I have this feeling that it is going to be harder than I think.

I look into his soft eyes, and I mouth, “It’s okay” followed by a “thanks,” to him.

I turn to the other guy. Michael was it? “Can I get you anything, Michael? Start you off with a drink?” Just because he is acting like a complete jerk to me doesn’t mean that I should just disrespect him.

“Coke,” He says curtly.

Getting off on the wrong foot isn’t nice, but just so he knows not to mess with me . . .

I lean closer to him, putting both hands on the tabletop. “And Michael, if you ever disrespect me like that again and I’ll rip into you like you’ve never seen before. I may be new here, but I know I deserve some respect. I am not going to put up with any of your crap. Got it?” I give him a small smile before I walk back to the counter to get his drink.

~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ End Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~


I hope that you don’t mind my borrowing Michael for a second.

I also didn’t think that it would be good to have Allie just shrug off his comment. Considering her background I thought that this reaction would be suitable.

How was it?


PS. SweetlilDreamer, I just deleted your second post. The "double post".

posted on 19-Nov-2002 8:37:27 PM by Sugarplum7
posted on 20-Nov-2002 1:42:16 PM by jeremiah

Why am I so nervous? I mean this is just Liz Right? No. She has to be the most perfect person That I have ever known. I just hope that the others dont find out until I can make them understand.

That I am In Love with Liz Parker.
posted on 20-Nov-2002 4:20:06 PM by Lizzie_Parker17

Liz turned away fromkyle and allie and found herself staring into a pair of Hazel gorgeous eyes

"Max you made it" Liz said with a smile


posted on 20-Nov-2002 4:26:54 PM by jeremiah

"I said I would come. Sorry I was late, I ran into something that needed to be dealt with."

I say as I stare into the most beautful eyes I seen.

"Ready for some fun?"
posted on 20-Nov-2002 10:31:27 PM by Lizzie_Parker17

Liz smiled shyly and tucked her hair behind her ears
"Would you like to go sit down?" Liz asked shyly
"Or we could just stand if you want, or we could-"

"Sitting sounds great" max interupted

Just perfect Liz thought! I sounded like an idiot babbling away like that!

Liz moved towards the booth that max alwasy chose when he came in

"This is my favorite booth" max smiled as he slid into his side

"I know" Liz said without thinking
"I mean. I uh... have seen you sit here before...and it is the best in the house" Liz blushed furiously

posted on 20-Nov-2002 10:38:34 PM by I_LOVE_NICK

"Someone's a little bitchy." I comment to Kyle about the new waitress. I mean who the hell does she think I am?

Well, soon she'll know that people DO NOT dis respect Michael Guerin like that. I mean I am IT!

I look at Kyle for a response, but he's drooling.

"You're pathetic." I sigh.

Speaking of, Maxwell just waked in and completely ingnored me. Now he's sitting over with that loser doe-eyed girl...Jen or something like that, who cares.

What is up with Maxwell? What is up with everyone?

Max is whacked! Kyle's drooling. Doe-eye girl thinks she's like totally popular now, because Max is sitting with her.

Can we say: Charity Case?????

And that blonde chick at school? She like totally wants me...why doesn't she just say something.

I mean maybe, I'll let her take a ride on this!

Hey, I support some charities!

Everyone is acting really weird. I wonder where the hell Isabel is.

Hopefully, she is still the same bitch.
~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

At least now I know why Liz just deserted me with a complete stranger and a table full of lecherous teenage boys. I must say that she does have great taste. Her boyfriend is pretty cute. I can’t believe that I never got an email about her getting together with him. I have always heard about this dark-haired guy in a couple of her classes that she found cute, but I don’t remember her ever saying that either he or she took the first step to ask the other out.

I pull out the pen and pad as I walk over to the booth she is sitting at. My first day in Roswell, and I think I just made an arch-nemesis in that guy Michael sitting with Kyle. What is up with him? It is like just because he has money he feels that he owns everything and anyone. I mean “Who the hell is she?” who the hell does he think he is? I have been treated like crap before, and I am not going to take it. But those that live here, that see him and deal with him on a regular basis just take it. If there is one person in this town that doesn’t take any of his crap, I have a feeling that we will be fast friends.

“Hey, Liz.” I look at her, not expecting that she tear her eyes away from the guy sitting in front of her, but she does.

“Allie!” She says. I don’t think that she has ever looked so happy before. Not even when we were twelve and I got that Barbie dream house. “This is Max. Max this is my cousin Allie.” She says to complete the regular, formal introduction.

“Hello, cousin Allie,” he says playfully mocking Liz.

“Hi,” I say. I know that there is no reason for me to be nervous, but for some reason I can’t help it. I guess I am not used to meeting all these new people. I just hope that I don’t get their names wrong. Maybe I should make a list: Kyle—nice, cute, Michael—jackass, Max—Liz’s boyfriend. I laugh inwardly at that. How pathetic can I get?

“So what brings you to Roswell? I am guessing that you were matriculating from a different, less infamous school than one in Roswell,”

How do I answer that? Yeah. I went to a school in San Francisco, and I am here to run away from a crazy, psychotic ex-boyfriend, who is so out of touch with reality that he things killing me would be better for my well being. Yeah. I am sure that will go over great with, “would you like fries with that?”

“Things were getting a little out of control with my parents completely changing their practice. It was a mutual decision that it would be better if I came here to stay with Liz and her parents.” Okay. That was partly true. And I don’t think that if the truth ever comes out that they will hold it against me. We just met. I think it falls in the column of over-share if I told him the absolute truth of the matter.

“Can I get you guys anything to drink? Did you know what you wanted to order?” I ask changing the subject. I am sure Liz understand the quick subject change off of me and onto well . . . food.

~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ End Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

posted on 21-Nov-2002 3:39:31 AM by Sugarplum7
posted on 21-Nov-2002 11:51:33 PM by I_LOVE_NICK

"So have you seen Isabel around?" I ask Kyle.

He doesn't answer.

He's still looking at that new waitress, who is by the way talking with Max and Liz.

And Max didn't even acknowledge me.

"HEY!" I yell. Kyle, Max and the two loser girls turn to look at me. "Can we get some service over here! Where's my drink!"

Ha! That'll get their attention.


OCC: Sorry for being so obnoxious, but I want Michael to be a real least until Maria and him get together and she breaks the 'ice that is Michael.' That is if Maria ever get's to the Crashdown *hint hint*.

posted on 22-Nov-2002 1:06:32 AM by Sugarplum7
Oh! Loved the Michael part. I think that I will be able to get an Allie up, but I am thinking that I would like to have either a Liz or Max part up before I continue.

posted on 22-Nov-2002 2:44:36 AM by jeremiah

I cant believe Michael sometimes. He can be Damn Right Rude at times. I wish that he woulld Grow up sometimes. I can see Michael looking at me with that look that he gives. I am completely torn. I want to sit here with Liz but I know that Michael can destroy my Rep. As Much as I hate to do this. I have to go over to Michaels table. I turn to look at Liz. The most beautful creature I have ever known.

She is probably going to hate me after this. But not as much as I will hate myself.

But it has to be done.

I look at her and say the words I dread to say.

"Sorry Liz, But I have to go. Maybe I will talk to you later."

I get up and go over to Michaels. With one thing certain.

I hate him.

posted on 22-Nov-2002 4:11:04 PM by SweetLilDreamer
OOC: AHH!! I forgot I was Maria, sorry folks.


Ya know what? Alex stood me up today after school. So, I waited like, twenty minutes. TWENTY MINUTES for that bastard and I saw him get in a car with Isabel Evans! OMG, that boy is going to get a good talkin' with Delucca tonight!

Maybe I should hitch hike? I guess I looked lost because some guy comes up to me. "Um... Ma-Maria?" I look at him confused and a more than a little amused. I bat my eyelashes. The boy is kind of cute. "Yes?"

He looks down at his hands and they're movie around a lot, "Well, um.. You, you look kind of, um.. like, uh, you need.. need a r-r-ride. And, um... I have.. have a car... Ya know, so... if-if you wanted...?"

His sentence drifts. I think he asked me if I needed a ride. I smile, "Um, I'm sorry, who are you?"

He looks a little emarassed and hurt, "Oh, I'm Ron from your English class..."

"Oh, well, I'd love a ride. Do you know where the Crashdown Cafe is?"

He smiles a little and nods, "Y-yea... It's a great place..."

We get in the car and after a few minutes, the car stops in front of the Crash, I get out and he sits there with his hands on the steering wheel. "You coming in?"

His head jerks up and he nods. I smile and wait for him to stumble out of the car.

We walk in and I notice two things, Max and Liz are in a booth, together, talking. They look cute together. AND, Allie is here!!

I run toward the girl and give her a hug. "ALLIE!!"
posted on 23-Nov-2002 3:19:01 AM by Lizzie_Parker17
OOC: I am adding Doug Shellow into the equation! Feel free to use him whenever needed!


Liz was smiling brightly at Allie who had just come over to the table! She introduced her to MAx and was just about to order when Max suddenly excused himself.

"Oh" LIz said failing to hide her dissapointment

"Well maybe some other time" Liz said with a forced smile.

How could she have been so stupid to think that Max Evans! The Max Evans could be intrested in mousey little Liz Parker.

She was just his lad partner. Nothing more.

And thats the way it would always be.

She got up and went over to sit on a stool by the counter.

The bell jingled and Doug Shellow walked in. He saw her immediately and made a bee line towards her.
"Hey Liz" he said flashing her a killer smile.

Doug was a little older than Liz and went to School at University of New Mexico. He was around a lot. He had the kind of dashing good looks that would make most girls swoon to her though he was just a friend.

"Can I buy you a cup of coffee?" He asked with a cheesy grin

Liz couldn't help but laugh. The day the met he asked to buy her a cup of coffee from the Crashdown before she informed him that her parents owned. It had become a running joke

"Doug your too much" She said lightly pushing him.

"So Liz. I was wondering" Doug said brushing his dark locks out of his face.
"Would you like to see a movie with me this Friday? I mean I can understand if you didn't want to or couldn't go or..."

AS he continued to ramble Liz looked longingly towards max who was seated at Micheal Guerins table. Apparently he found Michael much more appealing than her. Doug didn't though.

"Doug" Liz said silencing him
"That would be great"

"Great" He said flashing her his killer smile again
"I'll pick you up at seven. We'll have dinner first"

"ok" Liz smiled

She couldn't wait for Max Evans for ever.

They were just different

posted on 23-Nov-2002 2:07:19 PM by I_LOVE_NICK

Max comes over and he looks pissed.

Well you know what?

I don't care!

He sits down in the booth across from me beside Kyle.

"Hey Max! So nice of you to join us." I say sarcastically.

Max glares at me and Kyle winces as if he knows there's going to be a fight.

Max is about to say something but is interrupted when we hear someone yell "ALLIE!"

WE all turn to look and I see that blonde chick from school hug the bitchy waitress...who might I add STILL has not brought my drink!

"Fuckin losers." I say.


OOC:SweetLilDreamer, it's okay I hope that I didn't sound rude or anything, I was just wondering where Maria was...And I again apologize for
~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

What just happened here? I was sure that Liz and Max were going to sit together. Then suddenly he jumps out of his seat, barely mumbles the words and goes to sit with that jerk! I mean he thinks that I don’t know he still needs his drink, but has he not noticed that the diner is full of customers, and I am the only one on the floor since Agnes went on another fifteen. Not to mention that Liz is sitting down like her heart was crushed into pieces.

“Liz are you okay?” I ask, but I don’t even know if she heard me. She just got up and walked to the counter, choosing to sit on an empty stool.

This is great. My first day here and everything is just getting turned onto its head.

I know it would be prudent to get that jerk Michael his drink, but I don’t really care. He is not going to tip me at all anyways. I might as well just wait on another client. If he does leave without paying, I don’t care either. I just wish that I knew what was wrong with his car. Oh, I would love to show him up if I could fix it. I didn’t take auto shop in high school and help my dad with cars for nothing. I heard the “I don’t want you stranded out in the middle of nowhere because your car had problems” speech too many times from Dad.

I quickly but politely take the order of one of my other clients and clear a booth before I even plan on getting Michael his drink. If he expects good service then he should learn some manners. I am not so sure of Kyle anymore. Yes his is friends with Liz, making him an okay guy. But he is also friends with Michael, and that makes him . . . well, that makes him a not so okay guy. Things are never easy in my life. Maybe I should just forget Kyle and get on with my life without entanglements.

The door rings as yet another customer comes in . . . and he walks right up to Liz . . . and gives her a hug! Okay. What? Can someone come back and tell me what is going on because I am so totally confused about everything happening today. Is everyone in Roswell like this? They lead you to believe one thing and completely do something that counteracts what you previously though? I thought that Liz and Max were, you know. And now there is Liz and this brunette that look to be like they are, you know.

I walk behind the counter and get Michael his coke, and it looks like Kyle needs a refill, so I fill up a glass for him. With the glasses carefully placed on the tray I weave through the tables in between the counter and the booth where Kyle, Michael, and now Max sit, when the bells that hang above the door ring again.

I sigh deeply. This is just what I need: more customers and no Agnes in sight.

“ALLIE!” I hear the excited voice of my second best friend that lives here in Roswell. I don’t even need to turn around to see who it is. I would know that voice anywhere. Maria! I have missed her so much. And she owes me a letter. Knowing that she is going to come bolting to me, I quickly place the tray of drinks on the tabletop of the booth I just cleared.

I look at her as she comes charging to me, both arms open. I don’t think I have been hugged this tightly since . . . well, since the last time Maria hugged me when I left Roswell. This is going to be great. Maria and Liz. I am going to be just fine. All I need to do is get through the next three hours and then we can talk.

“Maria, brain needs oxygen,” I cough out to get her to lessen the tightness of the hug. “Oh my God! I didn’t think I was going to see you today,” I say excitedly as I pull back from the hug.

“Liz said that she had a surprise for us. She wasn’t kidding. You are definitely a big surprise.”

“Us?” I ask. I thought that it was just Liz and Maria.

“Yeah, Alex.”

“Alex?” Yeah. I am still not getting it. “Who’s Alex?”

She looks at me like I am stupid for a minute before realization passes over her features. “That’s right. Alex didn’t come into the picture about two years after you left. Alex is our other best friend.”

I can see the irritated look on Michael’s face. I really don’t want him to yell again. “I would love to meet him. I would even love to continue talking, but I need to get these drinks over there and I am the only one on the floor at the moment.”

“Oh, no problem, chica,” She says as she picks up the tray and hands it to me.

Chica. I never thought I’d hear her call me that. To tell the truth I never thought that I’d be back here.

“Here you go, guys. Michael, here’s your coke. Kyle, I got you a refill. I’ll just take your empty glass.” I take the ice filled glass and put it on the tray. “Max, can I get you something to drink?” I am not even sure if he heard me. He seems too concentrated on sending death glares at Michael.

He looks at me and it was faster than lightning when his expression changed. His features were softer and less rigid than they were earlier and a genteel smile was on his lips. “I’ll have a cherry coke,” he said softly.

“One cherry coke.” I turn and walk over to the fountain and get his drink. I couldn’t have been more than a two, three minutes (I did have to pick up the order that Jose finished) and Max was back to glaring at Michael.

“Here’s your drink,” I say smiling as I place the drink on the table before Max.

~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ End Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

[ edited 1 time(s), last at 24-Nov-2002 3:26:17 AM ]
posted on 24-Nov-2002 3:20:10 AM by Sugarplum7
posted on 25-Nov-2002 3:27:24 PM by I_LOVE_NICK

The new wiatress brings us our stuff, I'm about to tell her to get the hell away from us when she glares at me and walks away.

I notice that she goes back over to that annoying blonde chick and they start talking and looking over here.

Kyle is stealing glances over at them.

"You like her?" I ask.

He takes the liberty to ignore me...

Well fuck you too.

I look to Max. "You can stop crying now. The little dork girl got a new boyfriend." I tell him and guesture over to where doe-eyed girl is talking with some moron.

posted on 25-Nov-2002 3:47:08 PM by jeremiah

Michael pisses me off. I mean how can he be such an ass? I turn to see what the hell he is talking about. And it kills me to see.

Liz is talking with another guy! Another guy that isnt me. It pains me to even look. But it is my bed to lie in. After all I was the one to walk away.

Sometimes I Really hate myself.

posted on 25-Nov-2002 7:57:30 PM by SweetLilDreamer

What crawled up Michael's ass and died? Do you think I'm being a little sensitive today? Because I am not. Michel's just being a bigger ass today! Expecially to Allie! "Michael." I say pointedly, "Just shut up." Then I look over to Max then Liz, "He's just a friend, man. And besides, why'd ya come over here in the first place?"
posted on 25-Nov-2002 8:11:34 PM by jeremiah

"I saw the looks Michael was sending this way. I just didnt want Liz to be put through that. I care for her too much."

posted on 25-Nov-2002 11:36:25 PM by SweetLilDreamer

I nod slightly, "She likes you too. And Michael," I point my head in his direction. "He won't do anything too rash. He's..." I trail off. He's Michael. I wouldn't put anything over him, but I'm reassuring Max right now. "I look over to Michael. "Don't do anything that will make both me and Max beat you up for. It's messy buisness." Then I smile at Max, "Go get 'em tiger!" Woah, way too much time with Maria.
posted on 25-Nov-2002 11:39:45 PM by jeremiah

Kyle is a great friend. Unlike the pompous ass michael. But I am not sure If I should go over. It seems Liz is enjoying the guys company.

God I hate this!
posted on 25-Nov-2002 11:42:42 PM by I_LOVE_NICK

"You care for her too much?!" I repeat in shock. "What the hell are you talking about?"

Seriously, will someone tell me what the hell is goin on here?

Why is everyone acting so different?

I think I'm going insane.

"Listen Maxwell." I say leaning over to him. "That girl is a loser. End of story...she is nobody. But, are somebody. And you got to remember that. You have a reputation to keep, so get your priorities stargiht. Because I will not have you rui mine for hanging out with a piece of trash like that. And Isabel will flip out if she sees you and that girl together."

I watch Max's face grow red with anger and I get a queasy feeling in my stomach. The thought of him killing me goes through my mind and it's kinda scary. Max is a pretty big guy. But, I know he won't.

"Look Maxwell you're my best friend and I don't want to be the one to break this to you but she looks like she is fine without you." I tell him looking at that Liz-girl before he can punch my face in. "And you don't need her."

posted on 25-Nov-2002 11:45:20 PM by I_LOVE_NICK
OOC: Sorry about that SweetLilDreamer and Jeremiah!!! I started to wirte my post and then I had to run to do something, so I didn't notice that you guys had posted while I was gone!!!!!!

Should I delete it???? SORRY!!!!!!
posted on 26-Nov-2002 2:11:37 AM by jeremiah

I am pissed.

No I take that back. I am FUCKIN Pissed! How dare Michael say that about Liz! before I know I punch Michael in the face.

"Dont you EVER say that again! Do you understand? I will Not let you talk about her thatr way. I know you are a snob but I didnt know that you are a heartless asshole! Now I know why no one other then what is in our precious circle dosent like you. Right Now Michael I am ashamed to be your friend. Call me when you get some balls."

I leave. I am too angry to stay around.

~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

This is nice, talking with Maria again. It is nice to actually hear her voice and not just see the words that she typed up on a screen.

“It looks like you already have a fan club,” she says as she looks over my shoulder to the table where Kyle was sitting at.

“Yeah right,” I say as I start to place the dishes for the table next to theirs on the tray. “Besides, I don’t think that a boyfriend would be the greatest thing in the world.”

“The plot thickens. It looks like my Allie has been burned.”

I look at her and immediately she knows that I am not joking around. That was one thing Maria was always good at, telling if you were lying or downplaying the truth.

“Allie, what happened?” She places her hand on my arm and looks deeply in my eyes.

“There was this guy, Jay. To say the least, things turned sour.”

“Come on, Allie. You owe me this. How long have we been going out.”

“No, Jay. Stop. Come on, let’s go take a walk.”

“You know what? The guys were right! I’m sick and tired of waiting!” He yelled before I felt the firm grip of his hands on my wrists.

“Jay, you’re hurting me.”

“Shut up you fucking bitch.”

“Can we talk about it later?” I ask.

She narrows her eyes and looks carefully at me. “Okay, girl, but when we talk you better dish about this mystery man.”

I smile gratefully and pick up the tray of food and proceed to walk over to the table, but not before I notice the slight tremble in my hand. I take a deep breath and try to push the thoughts of the past to the back of my mind. I hate how I get like this. I hate how he still affects me. I hate how I can’t do anything without fear plaguing me.

"Don’t you EVER say that again!” I hear a voice yell out, scaring me half to death. I drop the tray of food and plates crash into pieces at my feet. Oh God, not again. Please not again. I wanted to move, to pick up the fallen mess of broken plates and food. But I can’t. I stood frozen in fear as the yelling continued.

“Do you understand? I will not let you talk about her that way. I know you are a snob but I didn’t know that you are a heartless asshole! Now I know why no one other then what is in our precious circle doesn’t like you. Right Now Michael I am ashamed to be your friend. Call me when you get some balls."

~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ End Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

posted on 26-Nov-2002 3:15:42 AM by Sugarplum7
posted on 2-Dec-2002 3:10:00 PM by Sugarplum7
Just bumping it back in sight.
posted on 3-Dec-2002 10:28:41 PM by I_LOVE_NICK

That asshole punched me!

My best friend just punched me right in the face!

"Fuck you and the horse you rode in on Maxwell! I don't need you! You're a little fucking pussy!" I scream at him while holding my cheek where he hit me.

It feels like half of my face exploded. I've never been punched before...and to think that my own best friend did it.

Everyone in the Crashdown is looking at me. A lot of kids from school are there and they all looked shocked.

"Take a fucking picture!" I yell at them and they all turn back to what they were doing.

They know what's good for them.

Kyle comes up beside me.

"Kyle." I state holding up my hand. "Don't say a word."

I walk over to where Maria *hey I remembered her name* is standing with Allie *two points for Michael*.

"Can I get some ice?" I mutter holding my face.

It's not easy for me to ask for help, but face hurts like a son of a bitch.


OOC: Hey maybe Maria can offer to take him in the back and get some ice...*hint hint* LOL

Sorry this part took so long!
posted on 4-Dec-2002 12:21:40 AM by SweetLilDreamer

::slam:: I look over to the rucus, and almost fall over laughing. Seems like Big Bad Stonewall Guerin just got punched, and by Max at that. That's good. Oh, that's real good. Don't look at me like that, he deserves it! Allie thinks so too, ::sticks tongue out:: So there!

I look over again, he looks likes he's hurt, "Some ice please?" he asks us. I mutter a "fine, follow me." I don't like the guy, okay. He's a jackass. Simple as that. And he treated Allie like shit. Allie is like, the bestest person in the world! Well, besides me, and tying Liz and Alex.

OCC: *grin* Sorry, Maria isn't going to be easy on tough and rumble Michael. This is war! *wink*
posted on 4-Dec-2002 11:38:51 PM by I_LOVE_NICK

I follow Maria into the back room and throw myself on the couch.

She goes and grabs some ice from the freezer and puts it in a plastic bag.

"So I guess you saw what happened. Can you believe that asshole?" I ask as she makes her way towards me.


OOC: Don't worry, bring it ON! Michael deserves it!!!!
posted on 6-Dec-2002 2:11:56 PM by Lizzie_Parker17

Liz saw Max walk out of the Crashdown.
She sighed. She was right he was never going to look at her they way she looked at him.

"Oh well" She sighed and walked over to Allie

"So how are you doing" She said trying to keep a smile on her face.

She knew Maria would see thourgh her real quick but maybe she could hide it from Allie


~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

I sigh deeply. I traveled here, to another state, to get away from Jay physically, but I hate that he still haunts me mentally. There was no reason I could give for dropping the food other than clumsiness. Eventually I was able to go back, re order the food, apologize to the entire table, and clean up the mess. By then I was ready to just go upstairs and fall into the bed. I should have known that it would be a bad day since Michael walked into the Crashdown.

I walked up to one of the empty stools at the end of the counter and hunched over on the counter. This is all after Michael needed to be a jerk once more and ordered us to get him some ice. I could tell that Maria knew that I was not up to dealing with him, so she went and took him to the back.

At least with Michael being in back with Maria, I don’t have to deal with him.

“So how are you doing?” I hear from someone to my right. I can tell that it is Liz, and I don’t know how I could still know this, but she was pretending to be happy and cheerful, and I know that she wasn’t. There was something going on with her that she wanted to ignore and not tell me.

“I’m doing okay . . . I guess. Michael was giving me a hard time for some unknown reason. I am thinking that he is just—Hold on one second. I know that we haven’t “talked” in years, Liz Parker, but I think I know my cousin well enough to tell that something is wrong.” I sit up straighter on the stool and turn to her as she looks down.

“So are you going to sit on this stool,” I say as I pat the stool to the right of mine, “and talk to me or will I have to bother you all night and well into the early morning?”

~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ End Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

posted on 6-Dec-2002 3:22:06 PM by Sugarplum7
posted on 6-Dec-2002 4:22:51 PM by Lizzie_Parker17

Liz debated telling her all her feelings I mean because they were stupid anyways. She was just some mousy girl with a school girls crush on a boy who was so far out of her league it wasn't even funny.

Liz sighed

"Its a boy huh?" Allie asked

Liz nodded her head
"Its Max Evans. That guy that just left. He wanted to meet me here today, but I guess he changed his mind. Maybe he needed tutoring in some class or something and wanted to get me to help him." Liz said nodding her head

"Yeah thats probably why" Liz concluded
"I'm just some nerd and hes just this..."

"Liz maybe he had a good reason" Allie rationalized

"I don't know. Comfort me" Liz said leaning her head on Allies shoulder


~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

“Comfort me,” Liz said as she put her head on my shoulder. I simply placed my own on hers before I spoke.

“I will if you will.” Together we sat like that just enjoying the comfort of having someone there. “I am having such a bad day Liz. First is was such a long bus ride, and then your Mom and Dad wanted me to just sit around upstairs doing nothing.”

Liz laughed a little. “That sounds like them.”

“And then I come down here and that Michael guy acts like the customer from hell. Is it just the way that he treats people, or am I getting special treatment? You know the treatment where you are worse than dirt?”

“Don’t worry about it. That is just Michael. He is like that to everyone, but at least you have a friend in Kyle.” She moved her head and turned to the booth where Kyle sat alone. Why don’t you just go over there and talk to him.

“Because unlike you, I am not ready to start looking for a boyfriend. And it looks like that is what Kyle is looking for. What is wrong with me? I might be the only sixteen year old that doesn’t want a relationship with someone that you say is a great guy.”

I sigh deeply as I try to understand something that I don’t even know.

“Don’t feel bad, Allie. After what happened I don’t blame you. I think you just need some time. That’s all.”

“Yeah, I guess,” I say as I put my head on her shoulder this time. “And you don’t worry about Max. I am sure that there is a really good reason as to why he left. To tell you the truth, I think it has to do with Michael. And. If you really want to know you can just talk to Kyle. Right?”

“Yeah, I guess.”

“When did I develop and echo?” I ask her. We look at each other and laugh lightly before she pulls me to my feet.

“You have to get back to work, and if you want I can clock in and help you?”

How much do I love my cousin? I don’t think I can ever put it into words.

~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ End Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

Hi Brit!

I didn’t know if it would be okay, but if you want I can edit that last part out. If you had something else you wanted to do with Liz just let me know and that last segment of the part is gone.


posted on 6-Dec-2002 5:54:04 PM by Sugarplum7
posted on 6-Dec-2002 11:24:02 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
Nope its good!
posted on 7-Dec-2002 2:42:57 PM by SweetLilDreamer

I walk to the backroom not bothering if Michael follows or not because truthfully, the ass is grating my lastr nerve today. I hurry up to gather the ice and put in a ziplock while he flops down on the employee couch.

"...Can you belive that asshole?" he asks as I walk towards him.

Oh. My. God. He has no right to call Max that. Damn, that boy is dense. I throw the bag of ice at him and smile sweetly. "What I can't believe is you! Max has never done anything like that before, and if it anyone's fault, it's yours. Think about it."

I say as I turn on my heels to walk back out of the back, "I have orders to take," I holler back "Make yourself comfortable."
posted on 8-Dec-2002 11:44:29 PM by jeremiah

I am a complete idiot! I mean I had my chance to talk to my dreamgirl, But what do I do? I back out like a chicken! I let the influence of popularity steer me off in a direction that might of cost me a friendship with Liz.

And Michael. What happened to him? He isnt the same Michael Guerin that I remember. He has become a total asshole. pardon my language. he had No Right to say anything like that about Liz. I mean Liz is a kind and sweet person,She is not what Michael says she is.

I use to love being popular. I admit. But after what just happened. I am not too sure.

posted on 11-Dec-2002 7:08:18 PM by jeremiah
posted on 11-Dec-2002 10:40:42 PM by I_LOVE_NICK


What the hell is her problem?

She doesn't even know me!

And she sure as hell doesn't know Max.

Last year, he was the same as me...but now, he's changed and I don't like it.

I lay on the couch and place the ice bag on my face.

I grab my cell phone and dial Isabel's cell.

"Iz! You're not going to believe what your asshole of a brother just did." I say as soon as she answers.
posted on 15-Dec-2002 7:14:07 PM by Lizzie_Parker17

Liz lay awake in her bed.

She had helped Allie finish her shift and then had called it a night. She had taken a long bubble bath and was now in her comfiest PJs

There was a knock at her door

"Come in" She said

It was Allie
posted on 15-Dec-2002 7:32:30 PM by qt4167013
I like this fic SOOO much, I am going to ask if I can be Pam Troy. Yes, that is right, I am stooping down to play the lowest of low. but I can make it good... can I be Pam???
posted on 15-Dec-2002 8:44:00 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
But if your Pam Troy would you also want to play Tess?
YOU could make her good though!
Pam will be the bitch!
And Lke tess could become friends with Liz and the others!
What do you think?
posted on 15-Dec-2002 11:10:12 PM by qt4167013
Fine by me!*happy*
~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

Ugh. Today was a hard day. At least I made some good spending money in tips. Although I could have gone without that Michael guy and his mistreatment of just about everyone in the café. It was great getting to know Maria and Liz all over again. And Alex does seem like a really nice guy. It looks like I’ll be okay here. Just do what Mom said. “All you have to do is take it one day at a time.”

I had already taken a shower and let Liz have the bathroom. I think she said something about wanting to take a bath. I might as well just go to bed. I am going to need it. First school, then work, then homework. It is going to be a hard day to say the least.

I don’t know how long I have spent laying here, staring at the ceiling. But just by doing this It is just making me feel how far away from home I really am. My mom and dad are in another state, hundreds upon hundreds of miles away from me. It isn’t that I want to sound like a baby, but I had never thought that I would be this far away from them before, not even when I was thinking about college. Sure the colleges on the east coast are great, and it would have been great going there, but there are awesome schools in California.

Everything had to get thrown off because of Jay and how wrong everything got. That is not mentioning the Kyle aspect of this all. He is a really amazing guy. And if things were different, if I was different I might have said yes, but I didn’t. And now I feel . . . awful. I know I shouldn’t, but I do. He tried his hardest not to seem hurt, like he understood, but I don’t think he could.

I just couldn’t take it anymore. I got out of bed and adjusted my pajama pants and my camisole top before I walk out of my room and walk down the hallway to Liz’s room. I know I could have just taken the bathroom door, but it just doesn’t seem right.

I knock on her door lightly, and just when I was about to turn around and go away because I thought that she didn’t hear me, she answered.

“Come in.”

I open the door slowly and stand at the threshold. I toy with my fingers, suddenly uncomfortable about standing there. She smiles at me and says, “Hey, Allie. What’s going on?”

I take a step in the room and close the door behind me. “Hey,” I say quietly as I stand in her room. “Uh, never mind. It’s nothing. It was a mistake.” I turn around and walk back to the door, but before I even reach it I hear Liz throw the sheets off before she spoke once more.

“Uh-uh. No way. You come in here in the middle of the night, and then walk out saying nothing. Not in this house, Allie.” She takes my hand and pulls me back over to her bed.

“Now, what were you going to say?”

“I don’t know. I am feeling bad, confused, worried, or maybe a combination of all of the above.” I take a deep breath as I lean against the headboard of the bed.

Liz did the same and we sat in silence for a while. I am guessing that she was trying to figure out everything.

“Let’s see, feeling bad. That has to do with Kyle. Confused, Kyle again. Worried, that must be about school tomorrow. Am I right?”

“Yeah,” I say quietly. “I just. I don’t know. I know that Kyle is going to be nothing like Jay. And I know that he asked me out more like a friend thing than a date, but I don’t know why I said no, if I knew everything that I said already. You said Kyle was a great guy. Maria said that Kyle was a great guy. Kyle even got that table of guys off me. So what gives?” There is another pause before I spoke again. “I am a complete idiot.”

~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ End Allie’s Part ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~

posted on 16-Dec-2002 12:58:36 PM by Sugarplum7
posted on 16-Dec-2002 6:58:54 PM by Cominatcha
Where did you come up with the idea for this? I like it. I haven't gotten a chance to read it, but I will soon. It sounds really neat!!

posted on 16-Dec-2002 7:51:41 PM by qt4167013

I walk into the crashdown just as Max walks out. Max is a nice guy and I even used to have a crush on him but now we are just friends.

"Hey Max, whats wrong?"

"Nothing" He says and walks away quicker.

I sigh and trudge into the crashdown. I sit at a booth and make myself comfortable.

I hear noise and notice Michael and the girl from school named Maria. Michael has a bruise.

"Ah-ha! So thats why Max was so mad. Someone punched micheal!" I say triumphantly to myself. I pat myself on the back for my great detective work and order a drink.

I lean back in my chair and wait for something to happen. Something always does happen when you wait long enough for it. Something eventually does.

what do you think??
posted on 16-Dec-2002 7:52:50 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
great post!
You'll be a good tess!
posted on 16-Dec-2002 7:55:36 PM by qt4167013
posted on 17-Dec-2002 12:06:44 AM by SweetLilDreamer
OCC: Amy mutters, "I hate Tess, always have, always will. I don't care what she does!"



Damn, that boy needs to get some brains, or maybe some balls. As I walk through the doors to the Crash, I spot Tess ('I-Need-A-Fuck') Harding coming through. I wait until she sits down before making my way to her table.

"Hi! Welcome to the Crashdown Cafe. I'm Maria and I'll be your waitress today, do you know what you would like to order or do you need more time?" I say in one breath with a cheesy waitress smile. Which, if I do say so myself, I have perfected after two years of working in this place. My eyes roll up a little and I notice my antaenne are bobbing and my head starts nodding before I remember I am supposed to be serving a customer and reach on my head to stop the bob. I look over at Tess again and smile sheepishly. "So, ready?"

OCC: Sorry the () is just me thinking, I swear I won't do it again.
posted on 17-Dec-2002 12:16:49 AM by I_LOVE_NICK
Anyone know what happened to Isabel...I've been waiting for her for like five days...LOL!
posted on 17-Dec-2002 3:10:28 PM by Sugarplum7
Hmmm . . . I guess we went back in time, back to earlier that afternoon?

It has been a while since we had an Isabel part, and the same goes for Kyle. We haven't had one of those parts in a while. And Alex. Hmmm. Where did they all go?

I guess we can wait a little longer, or if Britt wants I can help knock on a few doors (so to speak).

posted on 17-Dec-2002 3:22:15 PM by I_LOVE_NICK

I don't know what is going on!!!!

Last thing I posted was Michael in the back with the ice pack and Maria walked out on him and then he picked up his cell phone to call Isabel...

Well that was six days ago and then the next thing I know is that Liz and Allie are gone I'm guessing that the Crashdown is closed...



I don't know what to post...
posted on 17-Dec-2002 3:30:57 PM by Sugarplum7
I think I know what happened. Since it took so long for someone to continue with what was happening in the cafe, Britt decided to take it into her own hands and fast forward. I thought it was a good thing to do. This way we can just *flashback* to what happened earlier, without having to wait for what happened to happen.

At least that is what I think happened. ::shrugs::

Go with what you think would be better. That is what I did.

posted on 17-Dec-2002 5:18:06 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
yeah I did!
Sorry if I confused you!
yeah Katie that would be awesome if you could b-mail some people!
I always feel like the meany cause I do it so much!
And I am majorly busy tonight!
posted on 17-Dec-2002 8:18:20 PM by SweetLilDreamer
Hey, sorry about the Kyle absence, I just didn't know what to say! Or, did he just leave and go home? Um... ::scratches behind ear:: I'll post.... in the 'morrow. I have some homework to finish tonight.

posted on 17-Dec-2002 9:02:26 PM by qt4167013

I see that Marissa girl come take my order. Or maybe its marina, oh well who cares.

She seems out of breath as she gives me the whole "hi I am a happy waitress speech."

I roll my eyes and place my order.

"Um, do you think I could have a salad?" I never liked the alien names they gave their foods so I always just order whatever I want.

I see her narrow her eyes and leave. I have to admit that I don't really like being bitchy but I have a reputation to uphold and can't have that slip. It's the only tie that I have to being normal. and I can NEVER EVER let that slip, 'cause if I do.... who knows what would happen.

Is tess an alien??? I sort of wrote her as one But I can always change it
posted on 18-Dec-2002 4:07:46 AM by jeremiah

I lie on My bed thinking about what took place at the Crashdown. I was such an Ass to Liz. I still cant believe that I Acted like that, Just Because Michael was there.

"I Just wish I can go back in time to fix things." I say out loud. yeah Like I am in some some sci fi drama!

But I Just wish there was something I can...

Someone knocks on My window, God that better not be Michael! I say to myself as I go to open it.

posted on 18-Dec-2002 6:58:03 PM by SweetLilDreamer

Yeesh, can you say BI-TCH-Y? What crawled up her ass and died? And salad?! I almost laughed in her face, how can someone live on salad? It's like, impossible! But ya know, she does have enough fat rolls for someone her height.

I saunter my way and call "Queen Tess'" salad out. I take a few more orders and Jose tells me Table 4 is up. Table 4 - Tess. Queen Tess- Table 4. I grimace before taking the salad and toss it slightly on Tess' table, "Enjoy," I say sarcastically before getting someone's order up.

posted on 22-Dec-2002 9:23:15 PM by SweetLilDreamer
posted on 23-Dec-2002 4:11:24 AM by Sugarplum7
I guess we are trying to figure out where in the time stream we are at. It is just confusing to me that some of us are post-Crashdown, and some of us are at the Crashdown. I agreed with Britt in making it post-crashdown. It just made it easier so we can just create what happened in a flashback or reference. Kinda like what I did with the Kyle thing, asking me out and I said no (now I think I am regreting it).

Well, I'll talk/play with you all later.


PS. If no one posts anything soon, I am going to bmail our wonderful actors.
posted on 27-Dec-2002 1:14:55 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
Wow this RPG has been slacking.
Even by me.
Christmas was hectic!
I am posting my part tonight!
posted on 27-Dec-2002 5:41:31 PM by I_LOVE_NICK
OOC: Okay so should I just post MIchael at home...because he was on the phone calling Isabel, but she hasn't shown up yet and I've been waiting awhile!!

posted on 6-Jan-2003 10:38:16 PM by Sugarplum7

Britt, what did you want to do? It looks like people have abandoned this. I really don't want to let this die. I really liked writing in this RPG. So let me know what you want to do. Bmail me or whatever, Kay?


PS. Where did you all go?
posted on 7-Jan-2003 12:27:42 AM by I_LOVE_NICK
I'm still here, I just don't know what the hell I am doing!

LOL! *happy*
posted on 7-Jan-2003 1:44:40 AM by Sugarplum7
I am fine if we made it later that night, the way Britt had . . . right before everyone went to bed.
posted on 7-Jan-2003 9:31:39 PM by jeremiah
I still want this to continue!
posted on 12-Jan-2003 10:20:44 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
Sorry I haven't been around!
I haven't been able to get on this site! It seems like evertime I try its down.
I deff want this to continue!

I say we have this at the night time! Like what me and Katie were posting.

I am dead tired though tonight!
I will post for Liz tomorrow evening!

I went snowboarding today and I am dead tired!
I need sleep, and I ache in parts of my body I didn't think I could ache in! Man I have snowboarded a lot before and I work out on a regular basis and I am STILL in so much pain!
Snowboarding is rough yo!

posted on 16-Jan-2003 12:28:05 AM by Sugarplum7
tra la la . . . Bump!