posted on 15-Dec-2002 4:09:18 PM by Cominatcha
Okay, this is my first time doing this, but I got this idea awhile back, and I wanted to make a fic out of it, but I thought that this would be more fun.

Okay, so, what I was thinking was that Michael and Maria live on opposite ends of the county, but then they both move to New York, because there is this huge building for sale there, and it used to be a history museum. It's really expensive and stuff, so no one has bought it yet, though there are lots of people interested. They meet up there, but they don't let each other know that they are interested in the building. They kinda start to like each other and wonder if there is a romantic future down the line, when one of them, either one, it doesnt' matter, let's it slip that they are interested in the building. Michael is interested because he wants to make it into an art museum to feature his work. Maria wants to make it into a music club where various acts can perform, and where people can hang out and have a fun time. They get so angry with each other that they just completely forget about anything romantic and just concentrate on getting that building. BUt the only problem is . . . neither one of them has enough money yet. So Michael calls his friends Max and Isabel and Tess back at home and they fly to New York immediately to pitch in. Maria does the same, only with Liz and Alex and Kyle. They fly in as well. You all decide waht happens from there. Who gets the building, and who falls in love? I'd like this to be an all CC fic, and I'd like it to end up happy, too. Please, if you're interested in playing the parts, post it on here!! I'll play the part of Maria DeLuca.


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posted on 15-Dec-2002 4:14:14 PM by Cominatcha
Name: Maria DeLuca
Age: 21
Occupation: Aspiring singer
Hometown: LA, California
Family: Mother, Amy, who disappeared one night and was never seen again. Father, Mark, who left when she was young. No brothers or sisters.
Hair: Blonde
Eyes: Green
Height: 5'5"
Hobbies: singing, dancing, shopping
Friends: Liz, Alex, and Kyle

Maria DeLuca comes to New York seeking a bright future and a new life away from everything and everyone she has ever known, but she ends up fighting for a building way out of her pricerange, but, in the end, she finds more than she ever hoped for.
posted on 15-Dec-2002 6:04:00 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
Name: Elizabeth Anne Parker
Age: 22
Occupation: interior designer(though she is getting her medical degree at NYU. She wants to be a psychiatrist)
Hometown: Roswell New Mexico
Currently lives: In an Apartment near NYU in New York city with Alex.
Hair: Long, Straight and brown.
Eyes: Brown
Height: 5'3
weight: 100 lbs
Friends: Alex Kyle and Maria

Brief Bio:

Liz grew up in Roswell New Mexico. For a long time she had wanted to become a molecular biologist and she went to harvard for a year until she realized it wasn't for her. She recently graduated from NYU with her bachelors degree in Psychology and was just accepted into NYUs med school. Liz curently wors as an interior designer for some of the wealthy New Yorkers. She is single though she and Kyle had tried something before. maria tells her about a club shes thinking of opening in New York and that she wants Liz to decorate. Of course liz agrees!

how was that?

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posted on 15-Dec-2002 6:08:09 PM by Cominatcha
Thanks so much for agreeing to be Liz!! That'll be great!!
posted on 15-Dec-2002 6:12:29 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
no problem I would love to!
Especially since this is your first RPG!
I am one of the mods for this forum so if you have any problems send me a bmail!
posted on 15-Dec-2002 6:57:48 PM by qt4167013
Can I be Kyle??? If you agree, how is this?

Name: Kyle James Valenti
Age: 22
Occupation: Starting quarter back for the New York Jets and reformed Buddahist
Hometown: Roswell New Mexico
Currently lives: Lives In New York but travels a lot
Hair: Short dirty blond hair
Eyes: blue
Height: 6'
weight: 220
Friends: Liz, Alex Maria

Short bio:
Kyle never wanted to fallow in his father's footsteps and be the sheriff so a month after graduation he hopped on a plane to NYU with a full football scholorship. He ended up playing for the New York Jets. After a short fling with Liz, Kyle doesn't feel ready for a relationship yet. When Maria calls him about a music club, he jumps on the bandwagon, all ready to help his friend in need. After all, what goes around comes around.

What do you think??? can I be kyle?

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posted on 15-Dec-2002 9:23:34 PM by Liz_Parker
I like the sound of this *happy* Put, the charachters I would be good at are taken :( Oh well, I'll just read it *happy*
posted on 16-Dec-2002 1:41:50 AM by Roswell428
Can I be Isabel? If so, how is this?

Isabel Evans:
Age: 22
Occupation: A Professional Party Planner/ Organizer (she is known around Roswell as the 'party princess' and the 'planning nazi'). She is the one to call if you want a perfectly orchestrated event- she is busiest at the holidays.
Hometown: Roswell New Mexico
Currently lives: In Roswell, she shares an apartment with her brother, Max
Hair: Long and blonde
Eyes: Brown
Height: 5'9
Friends: Max, Michael and Tess

Brief Bio:

She lives in Roswell, and shares an apartment with Max, so they could stay close. She owns her own party planning organization and is pretty successfull. When Michael calls her about his idea for the art gallery, he tells her that he will hire her to choreograph the opening. Isabel is of course thrilled (this would be one of her biggest parties yet, and in New York no less) and she hops on a plane with her brother and Tess.

What do you think?

posted on 16-Dec-2002 2:26:22 AM by scifidreamer
hi there,

would it be alright for me to be Max?

name: Maxim E. Evans (Max for short)
age: 21 (exactly nine months younger than Isabel)
occupation: aspiring comic artist/inker
hometown: Roswell, NM
family: sister Isabel, father Philp, mother dead
hair: dark brown
eyes: amber
height: 5'10" but of any one asks 5'11" which is as good as 6'0"
hobbies: reading, drawing, inking, sleeping
friends: Isabel, Michael, and Tess

Bio: Max is a quiet and withdrawn kinda a guy. While most people is age are out partying he mostly stays in to draw or write. He and Michael formed their own "art studio" when they were 16; he went to college in (out of state school w/ great art dept that isn't CA or NY) and recently graduated. He's outgoing and loud around his close friends, but is too shy to ever get to know people well enough.

is that okay? should I add anything else? does anyone know the name of an art school? is it okay if I go with a school in NY?

posted on 16-Dec-2002 11:38:19 AM by Cominatcha
Wow, so we're finally getting people interested!! I can't tell you how glad I am about that.

Everything sounds great so far. You guys have all really given these characters good backgrounds and stuff!! I like it.

Okay, so, we have so far:

Maria - cominatcha (me)
Liz - Lizzie_Parker17
Kyle - qt4167013
Isabel - Roswell428
Max - scifidreamer

So that means that we only need a Michael and an Alex and a Tess. And if anyone wants to add any other characters like maybe VaLenti, that'd be fine. But, since this is my first time doing this, I have no idea how to get started once we have all of the characters. Anyone care to give me some advice?
posted on 16-Dec-2002 3:27:32 PM by Cominatcha
Okay, for right now, I'll be Michael, too, but if anyone else comes along and wants to be him, then I'll give him up.

Name: Michael Anthony Guerin

Age: 21

Occupation: Aspiring Artist, along with best friend, Max

Hometown: Originally from Roswell with Max and Isabel, but moved to North Carolina once he became an emancipated minor in search of being discovered as an artist. Now lives in New York.

Family: foster father, Hank, before he became an emancipated minor at 16, but he can't really be called family, now can he?

hair: light brown

eyes: hazel

height: I don't know!! Tall!!

Hobbies: painting

Friends: Max, Isabel, and Tess

Bio: Michael lived in Roswell, New Mexico for much of his life with his close friends, Max, Isabel, and Tess, but soon moved to North Carolina at 16 after becoming an emancipated minor. Michael dreams of becoming an artist someday, and it seems that he is on his way now, so he figures that it is only right to buy his own place to showcase some of his work. But he gets himself into a mess when he fights to buy one of the most expensive buildings in New York and meets Maria DeLuca in the process.

Gee, that really sucked, didn't it? Everyone else comes up with such better bios!!

posted on 16-Dec-2002 4:31:27 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
Alex is another favorite of mine! So if its cool I will temp him until someone picks him up! The I will gladly hand him over!

Name: Alexander Colin Whitman
Age: 23
Profession: Head of an up and coming computer graphics design company called Vibrant.
Location: Shares a large apartment with Liz in New York City
Hair: Short and brown
Eyes: hazel
Height: 6 foot
Weight: 200
Friends: Liz Maria and Kyle

Brief Bio: Alex went to school at MIT and majored in Electrical Engineering, but realized he liked more of the designing aspect. He is CEO of his company. He is single but is looking for a long term relationship. He has been burnt in love in the past. He has a negitive look on women at the moment.
posted on 16-Dec-2002 5:37:39 PM by Roswell428
cool thanks! It should be fun! I can't wait to start!
posted on 16-Dec-2002 6:07:19 PM by Cominatcha
Thank you so much Lizzie_Parker17!! Thank you to everyone who has agreed to take part in this!! Now all we need to do is find a Tess and we should be able to start soon.

I think that this will be fun. Can anyone give me some helpful adivice on how to go about this, though? It's my first time doing this, so . . .

Well, once again, thanks to everyone!! And if anyone wants to play Tess, you can play her right here!!

posted on 16-Dec-2002 6:55:27 PM by scifidreamer

hey there,

if you can't find anyone to play tess I can temp so we can start. but I don't want to take the spot away, so I'll wait a little longer if you prefer.

posted on 16-Dec-2002 7:06:25 PM by Cominatcha
scifidreamer, that would be great if you could play Tess, too!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!

Okay, so here's what we've got:


Oh, yes, there's a Serena now. Liz_Parker pointed it out to me and it seemed like a good idea.

Thank you everyone!!

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posted on 16-Dec-2002 7:18:02 PM by qt4167013
I cannot wait for this to start!!!!!
posted on 16-Dec-2002 7:26:07 PM by Cominatcha

Authors: Lizzie_Parker17, scifidreamer, Roswell428, qt4167013, Liz_Parker, and cominatcha

Disclaimer: We own no one

Category: CC


I'm used to this. I'm used to all of this. It's sad, but, yes, I am used to the city, and New York is nothing new for me. Most people might be a little overwhelmed after completing a big move like I just did. But New York and LA aren't very different. Both cities consist of the same smells and the same types of people. It's nothing different.

I already feel like I belong here. It reminds me so much of home.


What is home? Home is my and my mother's apartment back in some crummy neighborhood in LA. It's never been the type of home I've dreamed of living in. I always wanted one of those 7th Heaven lives with a mom and a dad and brothers and sisters and a dog. I wanted to live in a nice neighborhood where everyone got along, but I didn't get that.

I got LA.

But, now, things have changed. LA is gone. It's behind me now, in the past, and New York City has invaded my future. Maybe I can get a fresh start here. No one knows me. No one knows anything about me. Maybe I can even snag myself a guy.

Oh, but that's wishful thinking. The only boyfriend I've ever had was some guy in 2nd grade. I can't even remember his name now, and I don't want to. I remember he kissed me once and I ran home to my mom and told her all about it, and that I never wanted to kiss boys again.

But I do now. God, what I would give for someone in this rat-infested town to care about me.

Me. Maria DeLuca. No one even knows me.

That could be a good thing or a bad thing.

Well, there's always Liz and Alex and Kyle. I haven't seen them in years ever since they graduated and moved off to New York City to do bigger and better things. They won't even know I'm here. I can just imagine the surprise on their faces when they realize that I'm actually here.

I wonder what they're all doing now . . .

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posted on 16-Dec-2002 7:28:12 PM by Liz_Parker
Can U add in like a Serena or something for me plz? I can like work with Liz and Isabel or something *happy*
posted on 16-Dec-2002 7:29:00 PM by scifidreamer

alright that works for me. and if anyone decides they would like to be her I'll relinquish my control *big* .

name: Tessa Sydney Harding
age: 22
occupation: Junior assistant editor of Advertisement at "Sculpt This" magazine (read gofer)
hometown: Roswell, NM
family: dad Ed, mom Chancy, sister Deva, baby brother Brock
hair: currently platinum blonde
eyes: blue
height: 5'3"
hobbies: cycling, reading, ceramics, keeping busy
friends: Isabel, Michael, and Max

Bio: Tess loves to live life. She's passionate about her causes and beliefs. Loves Impressionist sculpture, especially Rodin. Went to school in Boston and recently graduated with her B.A. Lived at home with family, until recently when she was offered a position in NY and moved there with Isabel. Likes her baby brother Brock more than her seventeen year old sister, who has a crisis every of faith every other day. Parents ot married when they were really young, she was born when her dad was 17 and her mom 18. Has secretly been crushing on Michael since the third grade when he "saved" her from a flock of crazy swans and angry peacocks at the petting zoo.

OOC: but she's not to make him her's or anything. she's michael's friend and firmly believes that his happines is her happiness, so she's not all crazy obsessive. and anyways she falls in love with kyle.

is that okay?

posted on 16-Dec-2002 7:29:33 PM by Cominatcha
Sure. I never thought about Serena. That could be an interesting twist for one of the guys. If you wanna be Serena, she's yours. Thanx!!
posted on 16-Dec-2002 7:31:54 PM by Cominatcha
scifidreamer, you will make a great tess!!

thanx so much!! I've already started it off, so you can post whenever it seems appropriate for either Max or Tess.

Remember everyone, I started it off, so feel free to post!! I think this will turn out really good, becuz I feel like we've got a really great writing staff here.

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posted on 16-Dec-2002 7:41:14 PM by qt4167013
I don't know if this is the right time to post, but I heard "maria" say that she wondered what the others were doing so I am going to say what Kyle is going. Here goes:

Kyle pulled his hot and sweaty helmet off and tossed it aside.

Another game, another win. Thats how it always was.

"Mr. Valenti! Mr. Valenti!! A word please!" A reporter's voice carried over the crowd.

Kyle groaned and plastered on a fake smile.


"Kyle valenti, how does it feel to be the youngest first string quarterback in the NFL?"

"It feels good." Kyle answered firmly.

"Now if you'll excuse me, I have to go change."

"Kyle! Wait!! the readers want to know, is there any love story??"

Kyle gritted his teeth.

"Um, no, I just got through a relationship and don't plan on starting one for awhile, Now if you'll excxuse me."

Kyle pushed his way through and before he could get to the locker room a hand grabbed him.

"KYLE!!!" a voice rang out.

"Pam!" he said turning around.

"Yes sweetie! you never answered me about our date tomorrow..."

"Oh yeah about that. There is no date." he said quickly and ran off to the locker room.

Kyle was fed up.

"I need a vacation. Maybe Liz, maria, ALex and I could go together. I wonder what they are doing know.."
posted on 16-Dec-2002 7:46:23 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
hehehehe like all of us started at the same time! let me adapt to fit yours!

Starting Liz and Alex

Liz walked into the large apartment she shared with one of her best friends.

"Alex I'm home" She called dropping her keys on the table

"Hey Liz" He called from the kitchen where he was busily preparing a sandwich.
"You want one?" He said gesturing to the sandwichs he was making

"Sure" She said

"So how did it go?" Alex said

"Great" Liz sighed
"I got the job. The client was very impressed with my work"

"Thats great Lizziepoo" Alex said pulling her into a bear hug
"In fact why don't we call Kyle and celebrate?"

"I would love to Alex but I have to study. I have a bio midterm on Friday, Also didn't Kyle just have a game?"

Alex stood agape
"Liz since when did you have to study Biology to get an A? You'll do fine! And Kyle will love hanging with us! Now come on go put on something pretty"

"Jeez" Liz smiled
"Yes Maria" Liz said referring to their good friend in high school.

Alex feigned hurt!
"That hurts me right here" He said pointing to his heart

"Drama Queen" Liz smiled

Liz walked up to her bedroom and began to strip. She needed a shower before they went out. If Kyle and Alex had it their way which they would. They would be going clubbing.

Alex picked up the phone and dialed Kyles cell phone
"Hello Kyle" He said into the reciever


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posted on 16-Dec-2002 7:54:09 PM by Cominatcha
wow, this is great you guys!!

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posted on 16-Dec-2002 7:54:31 PM by qt4167013
It might be early to post but kyle has to answere the phone....


"Hey Alex. Yeah, I just finished a game... clubbing?! Sure, just let me change."

I hang up with Alex and pick out what to wear. I have to be stylish but not desperate, calm but casual. After finding the perfect outfit, I jump in a taxi and give him the directions to Alex and Liz's apartment. I whistle to myself. Life is good.
posted on 16-Dec-2002 8:02:25 PM by Cominatcha

She really felt like going clubbing. She hadn't had time to explore NYC yet, but what a better way to get started then to start looking for clubs.

She would find somewhere to hang out tonight, no matter where it was. She didn't care if she got stuck hanging out in a freakin' art museum. She would meet some new people somewhere.

Though she preferred not to go to the art museum. No one there for her, that was for sure.

So Maria got around and got dressed in her best clothes and went out to her car, prepared to drive all night if that's what it took to find a club and some decent, interesting people.

God, she hoped she didn't get stuck at one of the art museums. Nothing there but a bunch of losers . . .

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posted on 16-Dec-2002 8:09:19 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
Lizzie and Alex

Liz looked at herself in her full length mirror.
She had to admit.
She looked hot. Alex was right she needed to have a little fun. Maybe she would even meet a guy tonight. Get lucky.

Liz laughed to herself.
Yeah right how long had it been since That had happened

Liz looked down at her short red skirt and tight black top. Who knows maybe tonight would be her lucky night.

More than likely not...but maybe.

No matter what she was determined to have fun.

She heard the door bell ring
"Must be Kyle" she said to herself

Liz went down the stairs and saw Alex and Kyle sitting on the couch waiting for her

"Wow" Alex said.
"If you weren't like a sister to me I would be having seriously impure thoughts right now Liz. On second thought maybe we shouldn't go clubbing not with you looking like that"

Liz smiled
"Thanks Alex"
"Hey Kyle how was the game? Did you win?"

posted on 16-Dec-2002 8:16:19 PM by qt4167013

I smiled at Liz's question.

"Of course Lizzie, I always win." I say jokingly.

"But I ended up cornered by one of the cheerleaders, Pam Troy. GOD! I know I am sexy but sometimes the gals go a little bit overboard." I say groaning.

They laugh at me and I stand up.

"Ok, now that we have filled the make fun of Kyle quotant for the day lets go!"
posted on 16-Dec-2002 8:37:24 PM by scifidreamer
Max and Tess

Tess knocks on my door and walks in. Glad I said come in. So what if wasn't closed, it's the principle behind it.

She flops herself on my bed, and with one arm dramatically thrown over her eyes, she sighs so loud I'm sure my curtains fluttered. "Max, I'm bored!" she says pitifully. "I'm bored and I'm tired from work. I hate having a real job," I hear her mutter to herself.

"So go out with Isabel," I tell her, turning back to my drawing desk. What am I supposed to do?

"I did. She said to talk to you and Michael. She said we should go out and celebrate life," she says trying to angle her way into getting me to go.

"That's nice," I say not really paying any attention.

"C'mon Max," she says sweetly. I ignore her. She's keeps saying c'mon Max, repeating it over and over. But I've a sister so this is nothing new. It lost its distractionary powers years ago. I hear a squeaky squeak noise and look over my shoulder.

She's jumping on my, arms windmilling. She has a bright smile on her face, "This is kinda fun," she says breathless. "I mean I knew I was going to say something, but now I can't remember," she goes. Squeaky squeak goes my bed.

"Fine!" I shout over the noise "If you can get Michael to go I solemnly swear I'll go out tonight as well. If not, it's a blockbuster night," I go back to drawing. "And it's so my turn to choose!" I say not turning around. See Michael isn't going to want to go. He's been unusually quiet recently. Something's up. I think he has a concept in his head, and is trying work out all the small details he obsesses with in the beginning then totally disregards throughout the process. And whenever he's like this, he is not Mr. Social. I'm willing to bet my best paint set on that.

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posted on 16-Dec-2002 10:27:52 PM by Liz_Parker
Name: Serena Alayne Danier
Age: 22
Occupation: interior designer
Hometown: Roswell
Currently lives: In an apartment
Hair: Just a lil past the shoulders, dishwater blonde
Eyes: Hazel
Height: 5'2
weight: 110 lbs
Friends: Isabel,Liz, and Maria

Brief Bio: Serena use to live in downtown Roswell with her Mom, and older sister....but one day she got into a huge argument with her mom and left and wound up in New York where she met Liz and is now friends with her and Alex.

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posted on 16-Dec-2002 10:31:28 PM by Liz_Parker

I'm sitting at home again. That's all my life consists of. Maria and Liz are so lucky. They have friends or family to go home to, all I got is this lonely apartment.

I think I need to redecorate here pretty soon. The walls are so white and boring. They need to be "spruced up" in Liz's words.

I go to my room and turn on my radio to low and climb into the bed.

"Another lonely night stuck at home", I think as I slowly drift off to sleep.

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posted on 16-Dec-2002 10:32:32 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
Hey Liz_parker!
Great profile!
But Liz and Alex and Kyle are the only ones who live in New York City. maria Lived in LA until recently and Isabel lives in Roswell with Max Michael and Tess. At least thats what everyone said in their bio. So Its impossible for Serena to know Maria and Isabel unless shes originally from Roswell!
Sorry just wanted to clear this up becaus ethe whole who knows each other presently can be confusing!
posted on 17-Dec-2002 7:40:49 AM by Liz_Parker
Thanks, I changed it *happy* And thanks for adding Serena!
posted on 17-Dec-2002 8:23:16 AM by Cominatcha

Something's not right about this. I know something's not right. I look over my painting again. There's a mistake somewhere, hidden beneath layers and layers of paint and designs.

I finally see it. The girl's hair is the wrong color. I made her a red-head, but that won't do. The tree behind her is a pecuilar shade of orange/red as well, and her hair needs to stand out.

I should have made it blonde. There's something about blonde girls in pictures that always looks nice.

Oh, but it's too late now. Another picture for the trash I guess . . .

The phone rings, so I rush to pick it up. "What?" I asked, not bothering to hide my annoyance with whoever the caller is. I hate it when people disrupt me when I'm working on my art.

It's Tess. She blabbers something about being bored and about wanting to go out and do something. I sigh as I debate what to do. I could stay at home in my lonely little apartment for awhile. I just moved in a few weeks ago, and the walls still need some pictures. I could busy myself with a project.

But I look at the failure currently placed on my canvas and give in. "Fine," I agree. "Where exactly do you plan on going?"
posted on 17-Dec-2002 8:24:57 AM by Cominatcha
okay, I'm confused. are isabel and max and tess all in roswell right now, or are they in new york, because I put Michael somewhere in New york.

Maybe everyone just kinda recently moved to New York? That'd make it kinda easier.

Nice job so far everyone!! This is really going to be great I think.
posted on 17-Dec-2002 5:15:17 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
I was under the impression that Alex Liz Kyle and Michael were the only ones in New York! Maria lived in LA until recently. Serena lives in New York but doesn't know Isabel
Isabel Tess and Max I thought were in Roswell?
Am I wrong?
Well I got my 2 characters down! I know they are in New York!
Since your the founder of this why don't you tell us where you would like our characters to be at?
posted on 17-Dec-2002 5:52:47 PM by Liz_Parker
lol, yeah....before the whole lot of of get confused!
posted on 17-Dec-2002 7:16:23 PM by scifidreamer

OOC: hey,

I thought they were all in NY now, but the two groups don't know of each other yet? Cause I set Max and Tess in NY now, but they grew up in Roswell. is this wrong?

posted on 17-Dec-2002 7:43:38 PM by Cominatcha
Okay, I thought of something pretty simple. Max, Isabel, Tess, and Michael all grew up in Roswell together, and Liz, Alex, Kyle, and Maira all grew up in LA together. Serena could just have been moving around from place to place for awhile, and that's how she got to know Liz and Maria. I guess now we can say that Serena lives somewhere in New York, but she has no idea that Liz and Maria are there as well. We can just say that all of the characters came from different places around the world, but they're all in New York now for different reasons. Maria wants a new life. Liz and Alex and Kyle are all persuing their dreams, and Max and Michael and Tess are all doing their art things, like painting and sculpting and stuff, and Isabel continues as "the planning nazi."

One more thing, no one knows Maria is there, yet, and the two groups haven't yet met. And Serena just all alone in her apartment . . . for now.

Is that okay, do you think? I hope so.

Okay, so, someone else should pick it up now. It seems like they're all kinda starting to go to clubs, so maybe they'll meet up there?

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posted on 17-Dec-2002 8:17:37 PM by Cominatcha
Okay, I'm just gonna start it off some more from here. I hope everyone understand about the locations now. If not, tell me.


Finding a club was not a problem. New York City had just as many as LA did, but finding the people was the hard part.

She first strutted into a club called THE DUNGEON, only to find that it was full of gothics. It wasn't that she minded gothics, it was just that she wasn't a gothic herself, so, when she walked in, they all stared at her like she was an insect, and she bolted out of there as fast as she possibly could.

Then she located another club that sounded interesting called BECOMING X. The music inside was blaring, so she went in eagerly, only to find that no one there was dancing. Maria didn't go to clubs that didn't have dancing. She loved dancing almost as much as she loved singing. Almost, but not quite.

So she left BECOMING X and went to another club. A sign above the door read SINISTER HEAVEN. At first she had to debate whether or not to enter. After all, SINISTER HEAVEN didn't sound exactly like Heaven, but her curiousity got the best of her, and she walked into the club with her head held high.

Now, this was more like it. There was a variety of people there, so surely she could find someone to talk to, and there were people dancing. Maria smiled to herself. SINISTER HEAVEN was definitely the place to meet some new people.

She sat down at the bar and ordered a glass of water. She didn't want to take a chance getting wasted on her first night in NYC. What an impression that would make!!

So she waited for someone to come up and talk to her. . .

And she waited some more . . .

and some more . . .

some more . . .

She put on her best fake smile as she watched everyone walk around in their little groups, wishing that someone would come on inside and make her a part of theirs . . .
posted on 17-Dec-2002 8:20:42 PM by Liz_Parker
Sounds good to me *happy*


I groan and wake up from my alarm going off. I have to go to some club and help the manager figure out what to do with it, to make it look more "professional".

I change into some jeans and a tank top and walk down to the club and almost bump into a group of people. I excuse my self and start to walk past them all. I swear I feel eyes burning into the back of my neck.

So what if I'm not dressed in "club attire" as my sister use to call it. I keep walking and look around for any sign of the manager. "Oh well....while I'm waiting I guess I can make the best of it....." I think and sit down at a stool.

I order something to drink and wait as the group walks over with all smiles. I look down not wanting to get in their way then I hear a humongous laugh and look up to see the jocky looking one making some kind of weird pose. I just sigh and take a long drink.

"Why do I always have to get the bad jobs?", I say groaning.
posted on 17-Dec-2002 8:43:22 PM by Cominatcha
are you really only 14? you're a really good writer, much better than I am anyway.

nice job. keep up the good work. you make a great serena.
posted on 17-Dec-2002 8:54:22 PM by Liz_Parker
lol, yes I am only 14. I don't really think I'm a really good writer. It's probably because when I was lil we had to write so much at school. And my friend and I started doing ff's in like a scipt form on mIRC a year ago so *shrugs*. And my friend, her nick's Galita on here, and me started writing reg stories like the middle of last year. So, in a way, I guess I'm used to it. And Ur a great writer, so don't put Urself down! *big* Did ya look at that link? I don't think I look good in that pic hehe. And thanks for the compliment! Keep up the good work *happy*

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posted on 17-Dec-2002 8:57:42 PM by qt4167013
I'm 14 too!
posted on 17-Dec-2002 9:01:43 PM by Cominatcha
wow, you guys are really good for 14!!


It took her awhile to distinguish the girl across the room. Maria's eyesight had never been that good. But that girl . . . she was so familiar.

"Serena?" she whispered to herself in question. Maria hadn't seen the girl since she had left LA, but the times that she and Liz and her had spent together had been so great.

Maria walked over towards the girl and tapped her on the shoulder. She turned around, and Maria smiled.

"Serena," she said. "Hey, girl!"

posted on 17-Dec-2002 9:07:33 PM by Liz_Parker

"Oh my that really you Maria?!", I say as I stand up and hug her tight.

I haven't seen her in ages! Wonder where's she's been? I pull away and grin. She hasn't changed all that much. Still the same Maria....I hope.

We start talking and I blush as she brings up old boyfriends I used to have and things her,Liz, and I used to do, I smile again. I haven't smiled this much in awhile.

"So, how's life treating you Maria?", I ask her and take another sip of my drink.
posted on 17-Dec-2002 11:31:48 PM by Roswell428
Dude, I feel so old now!

Anyway, if I got this right, Isabel's in New York now. She's living with Max, or with Tess? Right now, I'm going to put Max, but if that's wrong, tell me and I'll edit.

~*~ Isabel ~*~

It had been a long and tiring day. She had gotten a new client, who she had then lost because she and the client had disagreed about taste. 'I mean I know that the "customer's always right" and all that,' she thought to herself, 'but really, can I put my name on a party that's completely tasteless? I don't think so! It would ruin my reputation.' So she had given up the job, and was now in a mild state of depression because of it; she *hated* having to do that.

She walked into the apartment that she shared with Max, and saw Tess on the phone, presumably with Michael. She walked over to Max.

"Hi Max. How was your day? Because mine really sucked," she said to him, in her 'annoyed' voice.
posted on 18-Dec-2002 8:42:58 AM by Cominatcha

He hear the door slam on the other end of the phone and assume that Isabel is home after a long and tiring day.

"So, what's the deal, Tess?" He asked, a bit annoyed. This girl could talk forever on the phone. "Are we going to a club or not?"

"Well, we should go, you know." she said. "Make appearances and stuff like that."

Michael sighed. Tess always liked to appear in places and meet new people. She was very social, the direct opposite of Max. "I don't know," he told her. "I've got this idea in my head, but I just completely messed up, so I should probably start over again."

"Oh, Michael, you have you entire life to paint." she told him. "Come on. I was thinking maybe that place SINISTER HEAVEN."

Michael sighed. SINISTER HEAVEN was fun. "Oh, okay." he agreed. "But only if Max and Isabel come along, too." He wasn't going to spend the whole night in a club with Tess Harding only.

Tess squealed excitedly on the other end of the phone.

posted on 18-Dec-2002 5:19:16 PM by qt4167013
question... how come Liz, alex, and Kyle, arn't out clubbing with Maria??? If some one would tell me, I could write the next part!!! Thanks!
posted on 18-Dec-2002 6:00:40 PM by Cominatcha
Liz and Kyle and and Alex don't know that Maria is there yet. They think she's still in LA, but they could probably run into her at some point.
posted on 18-Dec-2002 6:42:07 PM by Liz_Parker
Yeah *happy* We need to get the gang to the club soon *happy*
posted on 18-Dec-2002 7:08:16 PM by Cominatcha

He didn't really feel like going anywhere. He was tired. He had stayed up late the night before trying to recreate a vision he had seen in his dreams on canvas, but . . . Tess was his friend, and Tess wanted to go out clubbing, so he reluctantly had agreed to go, and Max and Isabel had come along, too. No one had really dressed up or anything. They were all too tired. How Tess had so much energy, Michael would never know.

Isabel clearly didn't want to be out, either. She seemed tired as well, after a long and hard day. Max looked uncomfortable in such a place. The guy wasn't big on clubs. They just weren't his thing.

It seemed as if Tess was the only one that actually wanted to be there. She was all smiles as they entered the place.

Michael sat down in a booth and sighed, wondering what would happen now that he and his friend were there. Nothing new ever happened. It was always just Max, Isabel, Tess, and himself hanging around together. Occasionally, they would meet someone new, but they never saw that person again after that.

This time surely wouldn't be any different . . .

posted on 18-Dec-2002 10:08:06 PM by Liz_Parker

"Oh God....did you HAVE to bring up HIM?!", I groan as she talks about the guy that I was "madly in love with".

As I told everyone else....he was just one mistake of the millions. I look over at the group of people standing near us and sigh. All but the curly haired one seem to be to tired to be here, so, why are they? Sometimes I wonder why I even bother coming to places like these.

I still haven't seen that manager. Hmmmm, maybe I'm down another job. Which is not good considering my rent is due and one more time that it's late I'm in hot water with the land lord.

Maria keeps babbling on which makes me laugh. God, I haven't felt this good in years....not since, L.A.....but, that's whole diffrent story. Then....I see her.

"Oh my God....Maria, that's Liz!", I say to her as I see our brunette friend leaning against the bar.
posted on 19-Dec-2002 8:15:57 AM by Cominatcha
that was really good!!


Could it really be Liz? There are so many people in New York that you never really know. But, after all, she didn't know if it was Serena, and it turned out to be, and now they were sitting there having a nice conversation.

Please, be Liz, she thought silently to herself as she and Serena crossed the club to where the petite brunette was standing. Please . . .
posted on 19-Dec-2002 1:59:59 PM by Liz_Parker


I slowly follow behind Maria. I know it's Liz....I just know it.

Maria starts slowing down....probably from nerves, I gulp myself and stand beside her.

We finally reach the girl and Maria touches her arm which makes her turn around.

I grin, it IS Liz. I kinda stand back and watch as Maria and Liz start hugging. You can definantly tell they missed eachother, I sigh and turn to go but then feel myself get grabbed, I turn around and look to see what seems to be a jock guy grining at me.....what does he want I wonder?
posted on 19-Dec-2002 4:54:28 PM by qt4167013

I watch as Maria and liz greet eachother and notice a hot number standing to my left.

I feel the smile come upon my lips as I grin hungerly at her.

She sends me a frown and my smile grown bigger. I have found my friend for tonight.

the funny thing is I have known her for a while. Serena has been my latest conquest for a while and I was going to get her.

Note: I don't know if you want kyle to be with tess but heres my part and I just figured kyle might START to like Serena. You had said you wanted Serena to be a problem for one of the guys and I figured it could be kyle. Just let me know...
posted on 19-Dec-2002 6:13:14 PM by Liz_Parker


Kyle,Kyle, Kyle.....that guy never gives up.

He's giving me that look, I'm not sure if I like it or hate it. But for some reason it makes me smile.

I sigh wondering what his next move might be. I've known him for a few years now. Now he's some big football player.

I'm surprised he doesn't have a thousand people surrounding him asking for his autograph. I sigh as he grabs my hand and guides me to the back of the club.....what's he up to now?
posted on 19-Dec-2002 7:06:02 PM by Cominatcha
Kyle can be with either Tess or Serena. It doesn't matter to me. Maybe he'll have a hard time choosing?


She was surprised that Kyle hadn't even said a word to her. Surprised and . . . well, she was disappointed, too. Kyle was her friend, wasn't he? They hadn't seen each other for a really long time, and now that they finally were together again, he was going somewhere with Serena, doing God knows what.

Kyle and Serena used to hate each other. Maria remembered all of their little quarrels distinctly. They avoided each other as much as possible back when Serena had lived in LA, and they each tried to pretend that the other didn't exist. Now, though . . .

"Did I miss something?" Maria asked Liz.
posted on 19-Dec-2002 9:18:22 PM by qt4167013

Maybe it was the liquor or maybe just my lust, but whatever you want to call it I had it for Serena.

"Hey sugar mama." I breathe into her ear.

Yup definitly the liquor, but hey, might as well go for it.

She pushes me away and gives me this look. I watch her as she walks away.

"Nice ⊕$$" I say and whistle. I see her tense up but unfortunatly she just walks away.

I see Maria and Liz and feel bad that I never said hi so I waltz over and jump on her from behind.

posted on 19-Dec-2002 9:31:56 PM by Liz_Parker

God....some guys are such jerks! Doesn't help much that he's drunk.

I roll my eyes. Part of me still hates Kyle for all the times he would get mad at me for no reason and start doing crap.

Well, I'm not putting up with it anymore. I tense up as I hear him slur some words and I keep on walking.

It's weird......part if me absolutley HATES Kyle.....but a diffrent part of me....actually....has a crush on Kyle Valenti....what's my world coming to?!

First I leave L.A, so I don't have to be stuck doing something I hate....even though I left my friends there without a goodbye. Which I'm surprised Maria and Liz don't hate me for.

And Kyle was a pain the backside the whole time I was there, so I was sure he didn't miss me at all.

Maybe I was wrong about Kyle?
posted on 20-Dec-2002 8:30:03 AM by Cominatcha

Even though Kyle is hanging around us again now, I still notice the way he's looking at Serena. It's amazing. We've all changed so much. Liz is looking absolutely beautiful, so much different than the perfect little girl back in high-school. Kyle is playing for the Jets, and looking at a girl that I never thought he would have interests in before, and Serena . . . well, Serena is still Serena.

Except for the fact that she keeps casting glances at Kyle, too.

I wonder what's been going on between them while I was back in LA.

"Kyle, just go talk to her." I urge him. "I'll be here later."

"Are you sure, Maria?" he asks. "It's your first time here . . ."

"That's fine." I tell him. "Go talk to Serena. I'm gonna go dance. Liz, you wanna come with me?"
posted on 20-Dec-2002 6:45:00 PM by Liz_Parker

What's wrong with me?! Why am I falling so hard for Kyle?......Take a deep breath Serena, he's just another guy after your affections.

I gulp as he walks over to me. Oh God, go talk to someone else. Don't come talk to me.....stay with Maria, I don't need you...... the reason we always fought back in LA is because we did have a little fling once. We were both drunk one night....and well, you get the picture.

I take another deep breath as he grabs my hands with one of his and tilts my head up. I can't fall for Kyle. He's a jock....he'll always be gone and he'll never have time for me and there's all those cheerleaders.....I keep on rambling on in my head as he pulls me as close as possible.

This can't be happening....not again....
posted on 20-Dec-2002 7:00:52 PM by Cominatcha

What chemistry they have! I find myself out on the dance floor dancing with Liz, but my eyes are fixed on Kyle and Serena. I've never seen anything like it, so deep and intriguing.

I wish I had something like that.

Soon, I lose Liz again. I find that it's easy to lose Liz in places like these. Whenever we went clubbing in LA, she always seemed to slip away from me. I guess it's no different here.

Tired, I get off the dance floor and away from the dancers. I love dancing, I do, but it's streneous.

My body feels so alive for the first time it has in years. I'm with my friends again, in a differnet city. I can't say it's a new city, because it's not. It's almost an exact replica of LA.

Plus, dancing has energized me, and I feel like electirc bolts are traveling through my body. And seeing Serena and Kyle together has definitely made me feel alive.

I'm moving so fast through the club that I hardly notice when I run into a man with spiky brown hair.

"Oh, I'm sorry." I apologize, looking into his eyes. I don't say anything else to him. I can't stay in one place for too long, or with one person for too long. I need to be up and around, no time to settle down . . .
posted on 20-Dec-2002 7:18:10 PM by Cominatcha

Whoa. Now that was a girl.

You don't find too many of those exceptional girls here in New York. There are a few that stand out from the others, but they're generally pretty much the same.

Oh, but not this girl. The blonde that just ran into me. She's the most beautiful thing I've ever seen in my life.

I try to follow her, but she's moving so fast, like she's drunk or high or something. I see her casting sidewards glances at a couple in the corner. I wonder if she knows them.

I make my way across the club to the jock boy and the girl, interrupting a very intimate moment. "Serena,"the guy murmurs, running his hands through her hair. "Excuse me." I say politely to the girl, Serena, mainly. "Do you happen to know a short blonde girl?" he asked. "Full lips . . . um . . . real skinny?" He didn't know how to describe her. He had only caught a brief glimpse of her, but that one glimpse had sure stuck with him.

"Um, yeah. That's Maria. Why?" Serena replied.

"Do you think you can do me a favor?" I ask her.

"What kind of favor?"

"Can you get her to talk to me?"

posted on 20-Dec-2002 7:44:17 PM by Liz_Parker

Wow....looks like Maria's got her own little looker. I look at Kyle who has some weird look in his eyes as he murmers my name and strokes my hair, I look down.

I tell the guy a little bit of info about her,but not alot. If this guy turns out to be some rapist or something,I could be in BIG trouble.

I just tell him her age, and her interest. Where's Maria when I need her?.....

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posted on 20-Dec-2002 7:45:01 PM by qt4167013

I need to get home and have a shower. A COLD shower.

I had never realized how much I liked her. I started towards her until some girl pushed herself into my arms.

"Hi, I am Tess." She said, throwing her head back and laughing.

I look once more at Serena, but in my durnken haze I like the feel of Tess in my arms.

"come on sugar lips, lets dance." I say pulling her on to the dance floor, not noticing the hurt look from Serena.
posted on 20-Dec-2002 7:56:09 PM by Liz_Parker

I look down and walk off. I knew it was to good to be true.

He's with another girl. My love life is destined to be trouble. I guess I'm destined to be alone in my old apartment.

I can't believe I'm actually feeling jealous....why are tears swelling in my eyes?

I cross my arms and walk towards the exit of the club. I'll go home,crawl into bed and all of this will be a anybody. God, why do things like this have to happen to me, what did I ever do so wrong to deserve this?!
posted on 20-Dec-2002 9:39:27 PM by scifidreamer

They all sit around the table at the club. She's grateful the cover price to get in wasn't that outrageous. Some pretentious clubs charge up to $20 dollars just as an entrance fee.

She drums her fingers against the table, her other hand holding up her head. "Shit if I knew you guys were gonna be such party poopers about coming I wouldn't have mentioned it," she says sighing and looking away. Just great, she thinks. So much for a fun night out on the town.

"I'm going to go get a drink," she says standing up. "Catch y'all later." She walks off. Fine she'll have some fun of her own tonight. Who needs them anyways?


I scan the place. It's dark, it's loud, and I doubt it's all that sanitary. Tess gets up and says she's going to go get a drink. She sounds a little disgusted. Crap.

"Hey Tess!" I call out. She keeps walking. I jump out the booth and push my way through the crowds to catch up with her. I touch her on her shoulder and she whirls around. I take a step back, "Hey, I'll go with you to get a drink."

We walk in silence for a little longer. This isn't like her, usually she's talking about all and sundry. "What's the matter Tess?" I ask concerned.

"Nothing," she says, not looking at me. "Really?" I ask, disbelief evident in my voice.

We reach the bar, she looks over at me, and I've never seen this look on her face before. It's one of disinterest. "Listen Max," she says like she's talking to someone she doesn't like. Dude, I've never known her to use this tone of voice, "If you didn't want to come, then you shouldn't have. None of you. I don't need you to come out with me due to some misdirected sense of pity or loyality, 'kay? Save your charity for someone else, I don't want it." She turns her back on me. I'm dumbfounded. Is that how she feels?

"Tess we-"

"Save it Max." She cuts me off. She orders her drink, her usual, cranberry juice and vodka. I just stand there next to her stunned.

Where did this come from? "Tess-"

"Max don't," she says, and she sounds tired, "Just go home and take Isabel and Michael with you. Or go where ever you want, do whatever you want. I'll be fine. Go." She puts her small hands on my chest and pushes me back.

I don't know what else to do, so I let her. Where has this Tess been hiding all this time? I wonder.


OOC: hey, tess isn't being a bitch to be mean or stuck up, she's just thought they'd have fun and to her no one seems to appreciate her efforts. *big*

edit to say, I'll fix my post to fit qt4167013's post. hey if kyle doesn't want to dance her then he shouldn't *happy* go after Serena if that's where this is going.

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posted on 20-Dec-2002 10:01:43 PM by qt4167013
It still fits, because Tess is going to get a drink, which might mean she is a little tipsy and will not be so weirded at the fact of throwing herself in someone elses' arms, so alls good!*happy*
posted on 20-Dec-2002 10:44:00 PM by Liz_Parker
*happy* I'm bored....someone post something so I can *tongue*
posted on 20-Dec-2002 11:35:55 PM by qt4167013

After my dance with that girl Tess, I sit walk over to Serena.

"Hey, rina." I say, burping loudly.

She just looks away desgustedly.

"Rina, remeber a few years ago, you said you loooooved me?" I ask singing the love part to her.

"Remember, you sang a song too. How did it go? Oh yeah." I jump on the stage and grab the mic form the preformer.

"There aint no mountain high
and no valley low
ain't no river WIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIDDDDE enough baby."

I said durnkenly. The crowd ate it up and I even saw Liz and Maria hysterically laughing at me. I grinned but I turned and looked at Serena who hung her head and pulled me off the stage.

"What the HELL were you doing?" She hissed.

"Proffessing my love." I say and than I pass out.

Hey Liz_Parker, hows that for material?
posted on 21-Dec-2002 2:45:50 AM by Lizzie_Parker17
Liz and Alex

Liz smiled enthusiatically!
"Maria! Its soo great to see you! What are you doing here? I thought you were in LA!"

"Wow my two favorite girls back together again" Alex said wrapping his arms around the girls.

"I can't believe that in the entire city we all just happened to go to the same one." Liz said

"Maybe it was fate" Alex suggested

"I don't believe in fate, or destiny" Liz argued

Liz looked up and smiled when she saw the looks Kyle was sending in Serenas direction.

That boy had it bad

posted on 21-Dec-2002 1:50:35 PM by Cominatcha

Yeah, Kyle does have it pretty bad. You don't have to be the valedvictorian to see that. I wonder where his head is right now. He seems a little drunk, and he was just dancing with some other blonde, too. Maybe he just doesn't know what he wants.

But when I look at Alex and Liz, it's pretty clear what they want. Liz is staring at a dark haired guy about her age with slightly large ears. He looks like he'd rather be somewhere else, and he doesn't seem to sociable, but, then again, that seems to be something Liz would like.

Alex, on the other hand, is looking at a Barbie doll. Or, at least, the girl might as well have been a Barbie Doll. She was perfect in every outward way, and Alex definitely didn't hide the fact that he thought so. He was practically drooling.

I know I've missed a lot while I was in LA. Kyle is completely different now. He and Serena are actually getting along . . . very well in fact, and Liz and Alex are completely independent now. They're dreaming up their dreams day by day and living them to the fullest.

I kind of wish I could be like that.

My eyes suddenly meet with that of the spiky haired man I ran into a few moments before while glancing around the club. He's staring at me intently, his gaze never leaving mine. THen, slowly, he starts to walk over to me.

"Liz?" I tap my best friend on the shoulder, but she doesn't seem to notice. "Is that guy stalking me?"

posted on 21-Dec-2002 1:51:21 PM by Liz_Parker

" don't mean anything your saying right now and you know that, your drunk!", I say trying to make him calm down.

He just gets this weird look in his eyes,I raise an eyebrow. He's up to something,I just know it.

"And I never sung that....did I?", I don't remember that....

"Yes you were drunk as a skunk", he says smirking.

I shake my head and start walking to the exit, I can't put up with him right now.

*the next day*

I wake up to find arms around me.....what's going on?

I sit up and look next to me and gulp.
posted on 21-Dec-2002 1:54:27 PM by Cominatcha
that was great!! I'll save my part for a little later!!

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posted on 21-Dec-2002 2:40:42 PM by Liz_Parker
ok *happy*
posted on 21-Dec-2002 2:50:35 PM by Cominatcha

I expected to hear from at least one of my friends the next day, but I didn't. Not even Liz. Well, that's to be expected, I guess. Liz is a busy girl with lots of things to do. She actually has a life, unlike me.

I don't hear from Serena, either, which totally blows me away. Serena's life doesn't exactly seem to be booming with activity, either, and we haven't seen each other for years. Liz and I have kept in contact through letters and over the phone a bit, but Serena and I . . . It's like I've met her for the first time again. It's been that long.

But I don't hear from her, so, instead of sitting home alone in my aparment, praying for the phone to ring, I decide to go out. I hear there's a new building for sale, and I know it would be the perfect place for me to start a club.

Then, I might actually have a life.
posted on 21-Dec-2002 3:26:16 PM by qt4167013

I wake up feeling surprisingly relaxed.

"mmmm." I say turning over but than I feel something stopping me from turning over.

"KYLE!" I hear a girl scream.

"Oh no." I say realizing that girl was Serena.

She is in bed beside me almost in tears.

"god, Serena, what happend?" I ask. I cannot remember anything from last night.

"I. Don't. Know." She says sobbing.

"Oh shit." I say, feeling desgusted with myself.

"you can say that agian." She says angerly.

"Oh shit."
posted on 21-Dec-2002 4:09:58 PM by Liz_Parker

Oh God....this can't be happening! Why is Kyle in my bed?!

"Please tell me nothing happened last night.....", I say sniffling.

Why am I acting like this? It's just some kind of misunderstanding. Or one of his messed up jokes.

I get out of bed and start pacing. What if something DID happen between us last night?
posted on 21-Dec-2002 6:00:42 PM by qt4167013

Serena started pacing and mumbeling to herself.

"Serena, if... if something DID happen last night, would it have been that bad?" I asked quietly.

She remained silent and I grabbed my stuff.

"Thats what I thought." I say and leave.

I barely hear her break down in tears as I slam the door.

I lean against her door and slide down it.

"What have I done?" I mumble into my hands.
posted on 21-Dec-2002 6:05:19 PM by Cominatcha
Wow, that's really good you guys!!

posted on 21-Dec-2002 6:16:39 PM by Liz_Parker

He asks me if something DID happen if it would really be that bad. All I can do is stand there.

I'm not really sure of the answer. God, I wish I could remember....stupid drinks leave your mind blank. I can't help but start crying.

I get into my bed and cry into my pillow.....why can't I just remember?! I need some kinda sign to show.....that's when I see Kyle's jacket thrown down at the bottom of the bed, so I reach down and pick it up and run over to the door and open it to see he's still there.

I sniffle and sit next to him and hand him his jacket.

" forgot this....", I hand him back his jacket and start to get up but he pulls me back down to him,I try my best to avoid his eyes.
P.S- Thanks!
posted on 21-Dec-2002 6:51:38 PM by Cominatcha

I survey the building from the outside. It's huge. It's gotta be one of the nicest buildings in New York. I know it would make the perfect place for a club.

"Nice space, isn't it?" a man's voice says, startling me.

I spin around and come face to face with the same man with the spikey hair that I saw in the club last night. "Yeah." I agree.

"I've been looking at it myself for awhile now." Michael says. "It's been for sale for a long time. The only reason no one buys it is because it's so expensive."

"How much is it?" I ask curiously.

He laughs. "More money than you could afford." he says.

"So you think I'm poor or something?" I ask, glaring at him.

"No, I didn't say that." he said. "It's just really, really, really expensive."

I nod in understanding, and then ask the question that's been on my mind ever since I saw him in the club last night. "Why were you stalking me last night?"

He seems taken aback. "Stalking? I wasn't stalking you!"

"Oh, you were."

"Was not!"

"Yes, you were."

Finally, he seems to give in. "Maybe just a little."

I smile and let out a sigh. The guy is good looking, and he seems nice enough. Besides, this is my second day here in New York, and my friends barely seem to know I'm alive right now. They're all busy with their personal lives. This is a new start for me. New people.

"Well," I say. "I suppose that I could let you take me for coffee this morning."

He grins. "Sounds good to me."

"What's your name, anyway?" I ask as we walk away from the desired building and down the street to the nearest coffee shop.

"Michael." he tells me. "Michael Guerin."

Michael. What a perfectly handsome name for such a perfectly hadnsome guy.

God, I feel so pathetic thinking such thoughts about a guy I've barely even known for more than two minutes. But he's so adorble and sweet in his own little way. I can't help it.

I wonder if Serena is feeling the same way about Kyle right now . . .

sorry, that really was stupid

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posted on 21-Dec-2002 6:58:29 PM by Liz_Parker
That was not stupid! It was good.
posted on 21-Dec-2002 6:59:29 PM by Cominatcha

posted on 21-Dec-2002 7:19:43 PM by Liz_Parker
yw *happy*
posted on 21-Dec-2002 9:22:10 PM by qt4167013

impulse. thats what it was that gave me enought bravery to pull Serena down.

She tries to pull away but I grin.

"This time I'm not drunk Rina, and I swear I am going to show you what your missing out on." I say.

I begin putting small kisses on her neck and jaw line. I hear her moan as she gives in.

I grin and keep at it not realizing that Liz and Alex are standing over us in shock.
posted on 21-Dec-2002 9:41:08 PM by Liz_Parker

Oh God.....why is my body not letting me pull away?

I'm wanting to....this isn't right......he's a big famous football player and I'm just a girl originally from L.A that ran away to New York.

"Kyle....", I whimper softly as he keeps kissing my neck and everywhere else.

I can't believe I'm letting him do this to me again. I know he's not drunk....and neither am I, but he's sure making my head feel like it, I tilt my head back and take a deep breath.....this is going to be a long day, I think as he pulls me back into my room.
posted on 23-Dec-2002 2:50:20 PM by qt4167013

I smile. She wasn't resisting.

I continue my trail of kisses along her jaw and she continues her moaning.

I love the sound of her voice.

"Kyle...maybe we should stop." she says still moaning.

"Do you want to?" I asked, not fazed.

"noooo..." She said closing her eyes.


She tasted like apples. Apples are officiallly my new favorite food.

"mmmm..." I begin to moan as well.

We fall on top of the couch and continue kissing. Just as I reach for her shirt the door opens.

I know I am evil... but I don't know who could be the one to scream. I was thinking maybe liz or alex, oh well some one ELSE choose! LOL!

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posted on 23-Dec-2002 3:07:44 PM by Cominatcha
that's real good!!

I'm gonna post a Michael part now, just so we don't fall behind, and becaus I never know when my gay computer will work and when it won't!!


I watch her watch the people outside. Maria DeLuca. God, I don't even know the girl and I'm staring at her.

"So, you said you're interested in that building, too." she says.

I nod. "Kinda."

"For what?"

"For an art museum thing."

She glares at me. "Art?" She begins to laugh. "I should have known it."

"What?" I ask.

"I finally meet someone new," she shouts, "and it's someone who's into art?"

I'm offended now. "What's wrong with art?" I ask.

She shakes her head. "Nothing. It's just, I'm not a big fan of art myself."

"Well what do you want that building for?" I ask in return.

"I wanna make it a club."

"A club? Do you realize how many clubs there are around New York?"

"Yeah, about as many as there are in LA. Look, I don't have to stay here with you!" she shouts. "Michael Guerin, it wasn't a pleasure meeting you." She stands up, ready to leave. "I hope you never get that building!"

What a bitch.

"Oh, yeah? Well, I hope you never get it either!"

"Oh, I'll get that building," she says, "one way or another."

"Really?" I find that hard to believe.

"Oh, yeah. I'll fight to the death for that hunk of concrete if I have to."

"So will I!"

So we each go our separate ways, and my attraction to her is turned into a hatred. I reach into my pocket and grab my cell phone when she is out of sight. I call Max immediately. "Maxwell," I say. "I kinda need a favor . . . Well, you see, there's this building . . ."

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posted on 23-Dec-2002 3:10:12 PM by Cominatcha

When I can no longer see him, that bastard Guerin guy, I pull my cell phone out of my pocket and dial Liz and Alex. No answer. I sigh and dial Serena. No answer there, either.

There's only one person left to call, and I doubt he'll be there. Kyle . . . .

I hear the phone ringing and I think silently, please, pick up Kyle. Please. I really need a favor . . .
posted on 23-Dec-2002 3:27:22 PM by Roswell428
Hey everybody. Sorry I haven't been around for the past few days- my grandmother died unexpectedly and it was quite a shock. Needless to say, I haven't been able to get on for awhile. I haven't had a chance to catch up on any of my fics or the RPGs I'm in yet, but I'm going to try to be on tonight to do that.

I'm just posting this to let everyone know why I disappeared. I'm going to get on tonight (after I get off work) and catch up with everything, so I hope to see you all then.

I'll be posting this in all my fics and the RPGs I'm in. See you all later.

posted on 23-Dec-2002 4:11:36 PM by Cominatcha
Roswell428, so sorry about your grandmother!! Whenever you find the time, go ahead and post. It's fine.

okay, so a few people wanted maria to walk in the door, so I'm gonna do that, but I'm gonna bring Liz and Alex along for the ride. Hope that's okay.


Last night, at SINISTER HEAVEN when he hadn't been sucking face with Serena, Kyle had managed to scribble down his address for me drunkenly. It was a little hard to read, but I ended up finding his place in no time. It turns out that it wasn't that far away from that building that I want so badly for my club.

I find his room quickly, and am surprised to see Alex and Liz standing in the doorway, looking completely dumbfounded.

I'm dumbfounded, though, too, when I look inside to see who it is.

My, my, my, I think.

"Kyle VaLenti," I say, "With Serena. THE same exact Serena who you used to hate in high-school." I smile to myself.

Kyle looks away from Liz and Alex and I, embarrassed, and Serena's face begins to heat up with red . . .
posted on 23-Dec-2002 5:49:49 PM by Liz_Parker

This was so embarrasing. I pull myself together and glare at Kyle.

"What?!", he yells

"This is YOUR fault!", even though it's not....I didn't resist.....but he started it.

I look at Maria and the others and feel myself getting bright red. Why did they have to walk in....I should of locked that door. I sigh. To late now.

I look at them and get a small smile "Enjoy the show?".
P.S- Sorry so short...but I gotta clean and will bbl. Byeee
posted on 23-Dec-2002 5:59:04 PM by Cominatcha
That was good!!
posted on 23-Dec-2002 6:00:25 PM by qt4167013

"Enjoy the show?" Serena asks.

I snort and she shoots me a dirty look.

Alex, Maria and Liz are laughing at me.

"Hey Ria, this reminds me of the time when, oh you remember, when I caught you and Paulie in the eraser room together...." I trail off and She turns bright red.

"So...why is everyone in my apartment?" I ask angerly, noticing they had just barged in.

"Well I have a favor to ask you guys and it involves that old abandond building..."
posted on 23-Dec-2002 6:15:20 PM by Cominatcha

"Okay, so, there was this guy at SINISTER HEAVEN last night, who was, like, stalking me, I swear." I spill. The words fall out of my mouth almost faster than I can talk. "So, today, I saw him again, and, I'll admit, I thought he was hot, and I was kinda attracted to him, but, we started talking, and I found out that he was an artist, and you guys all know how I feel about art."

All of my friends nodded. They felt the same way about art and about the people who did it.

"So, it turns out that he wants this big building for a museum." I get to the point of the matter. "But I won't let him. That's my building."

"Maria, are you talking about the Vinnecies Palace?" Liz asked me.

The name was foreign to me. Palace? No, I wanted a building, not a palace. "Huh?"

"That huge building you're talking about. Is it called the Vinnecies Palace? Is it pretty close by?"

"Um, I guess."

Liz sighed and looked to Alex.

"What?" I ask. "How much does the palace cost?"

Kyle cleared his throat. "Maria, you could save up until your dying day and never get that palace." he tells me.

"Or," I say, "You all could help me . . ."

I'm so sorry, I borrowed everyone's characters there. If it's not okay, tell me and I'll edit.
posted on 23-Dec-2002 6:21:45 PM by qt4167013

I raise my eyebrows.

"Ria...thats a LOT of money..." I say.

"Guys...I NEED this building!"

I frown and wait to hear what everyone else has to say.
posted on 23-Dec-2002 8:37:12 PM by Liz_Parker

My eyes bug out.

She thinks we're gonna help her get that place? It lives up to it's name. It's a palace alright.....and it's a pretty penny to buy.

"Maybe you and him can combine what you want?", I suggest.

They all send me a confused look and I smile.

"Maybe you can make half of it a club....but still make it a could have one floor a club...and another a muesum type thing.....or, you can have a club, and hang his paintings up around so you'll both be satisfied.". I say in one long breath.

They all look at me mortified, I just roll my eyes. Then Kyle for some reason drags me to the hall way.

I sigh. "What now Valenti?"
posted on 23-Dec-2002 9:46:14 PM by qt4167013

I grin to her.

I lean in and kiss her jaw line as I explain why I brought her there.

"Well." kiss "I just." kiss "Needed to." kiss "touch" kiss "you"

Well she sure fell into my trap and I had her exactly were I wanted her.

There we were making out in the hall when I hear Maria screech.


I groan. Oh shit. Another moment killed by hurricane Deluca.
posted on 23-Dec-2002 9:54:14 PM by Liz_Parker

I roll my eyes.

"You know Kyle....we CAN just ignore her....., she can handle her own problems." I see him grin which makes me smile.

"She's a big girl....she can't depend on us to just help her just because she wants something.....she had to earn it....You know, You DO have a room right?.....They can't just barge in there"

I see him smirk, then squeal as he drags me to his room and locks the door, I can't help but laugh.
posted on 23-Dec-2002 10:00:34 PM by qt4167013

Finally! That is all I have to say. Finally I can make her mine.

I throw her on the bed. I let out a possesive growl as I lean in for another kiss.

This one is a different kind of kiss. It wasn't one of the soft tender ones we had always had, this one was passionate and desperate.

Our toungues dueled and she arched her back to make room for me to take off her shirt.

"God Serena, your so beautiful." I say looking at her.

She giggles and takes off mine shirt.

"I see all those weight training classes gave paid off." She said appreciativly.

I puffed up my chest.

"Of course." I say.

"And you, damsel in distress, are going to be my concubine."

She raises her eyebrows at me teasingly.

"Oh, but kind sr.knight. I am but a humble slave." She says.

I laugh and go in for the plunge.
posted on 23-Dec-2002 10:55:33 PM by Liz_Parker
lol, that was great. I'll save my part for later. We'll see what Maria will do first hehe*angel*
posted on 24-Dec-2002 1:21:53 AM by Roswell428
sorry- I know I said I'd post tonight, but I'm too braindead to post right now, but I'll definitely be back tomorrow to. Sorry for the delay. And thanks for all of the support- you guys are awesome!
posted on 24-Dec-2002 9:00:45 AM by Cominatcha

I sigh and walk down the street with Liz and Alex at my side. Those . . . friends, if that's what you can call them, don't care about helping me. All they care about is getting in each other's pants.

"Oh, Maria, I've gotta run." Liz says, checking her watch. "I'm so sorry. I wanna spend some time with you tonight, okay? You, me, and, if at all possible, Serena. A girl's night."

I nod in agreement. She kisses my cheek and is gone in a flash. Alex does the same and follows after her.

Then, once again, I am left alone in the big city with no family and no friends. I know I wanted a new life, but maybe this is a little too new. I feel like my friends don't even know me and they don't even care.

Suddenly, acting on impulse, I turn around and rush back to Kyle's apartment. I climb the steps and locate his room again, and start banging violently on the door. I know it's rude of me, but I deserve some respect around here, don't I?

"Kyle VaLenti!" I shriek. "Put your clothes on and open this door right now! It's my second day here, and you're treating me like I'm invisible!"

The door doesn't open.

Oh, I know this one, I think. You're trying to pretend like I'm not here.

"I won't be ignored, Kyle!" I shout, still banging on the door. "You, too, Serena! Open the door now!"

okay, that was stupid, I know, but I couldn't think of anything, and, besides, it kinda sounded like something maria might do when she's in a crazy state . . .
posted on 24-Dec-2002 9:49:19 AM by Liz_Parker

I groan. We ARE sorta busy Maria.....jeez, can't we ever be left alone?

"Kyle.......maybe we should let her in?", I ask him softly as he keeps stroking my hair.

"But Rina....I wanna be alone with you a little longer", he says pouting making me giggle.

I get up and get dressed then go over to the door, look back to see if Kyle's dressed and open the door.

"Yes Maria? What do you need now?", I ask somewhat annoyed.

She sends me a death glare,I sigh and bite my lip.
posted on 24-Dec-2002 10:08:32 AM by Cominatcha

I can't help but feel a little bad. They were clearly in the middle of something.

I sigh. "Just, go back to whatever it was you were doing." I turn to walk away, but then, I stop. "Oh, do you guys think you could meet me at SINISTER HEAVEN again tonight? I wanna talk to you about that building."

Both of my friends sigh and agree reluctantly. . .
posted on 24-Dec-2002 10:25:24 AM by Liz_Parker

I sigh. We still get pulled into the plan even after we said we didn't want to.

I walk over and sit on the couch next to Kyle."So....what now?", I ask.

"We could always finish off", He says smirking.

I laugh and playfully slap him and start to get up but he pulls me back down and starts kissing me again.

I sigh into his mouth and kiss back.....if you can't beat 'em....join 'em.
posted on 24-Dec-2002 10:50:54 AM by Cominatcha

I look at that building all day, thinking about what it could be. It could be the greatest club around. People could travel miles, just to be at Maria DeLuca's club.

There's no way I'm gonna let that asshole turn it into an art museum.

Finally, it's time for me to go to SINISTER HEAVEN and meet up with my friends. Liz and Alex are supposed to meet me there, too, but you never know with them. They're both so busy lately . . .

I slip on a black mini-skirt and a leopard skin tank top. I put on black boots that go to my knees and roll body glitter all over my arms to finish it off.

Hey, it doesn't hurt to get a little attention.

I strut on into SINISTER HEAVEN with my head held high, searching for my friends . . .
posted on 24-Dec-2002 11:02:54 AM by Liz_Parker

We wave to Maria as she walks in.

She comes running over then Alex and Liz walk over.

"Sorry for being a little late", Liz says and sits down next to Kyle and I.

"So Ria....what's all this about?", I ask, obviously the question on everybody's mind.

"Well....I already told you about my plan for the club", we all nod.

She babbles on and on about what she plans to do with the place and how she can spruce it up.

I sigh. The more she puts into it, the more money she's gonna loose and it's gonna take forever to get it back.

I look around at everyone and they all seem to be thinking the same thing.

"Maria.....can you just calm down and think rationally for moment? I mean....think about it! That building is gonna take all the cash out of your bank account plus some! Even if we do chip far along is that gonna get you?", I ask her cautiously.
posted on 24-Dec-2002 12:25:45 PM by Cominatcha

"I'm not letting that asshole Guerin get my palace!" I shout. "You guys, please, I came to New York to start a new life."

Serena seems to be getting fed up with me. "Girl, why come to New York after LA? They're almost exactly the same."

I can't belive my friends don't even have any faith in me.
"I just don't want that asshole to get it." I say again.

"Oh, look." Kyle points to the entrance to the club. "There comes that asshole and his friends right now . . .
posted on 24-Dec-2002 12:51:28 PM by Liz_Parker

We all look over and sigh. There he is all right.

I hear Maria growl and I roll my eyes.

"Um....I'm gonna go get a drink", I say and pull away from Kyle's embrace and walk over to the bar and order a drink.

After I get it and drink it down which makes me feel somewhat woozy. I just shake my head and sit back down with the others.

"Hey you have a crush on that guy or something?",I ask woozily, Kyle covers my mouth with his hand, I glare.

Maria glares at me for thinking such a thing,I roll my eyes and try to pull Kyle's hand down but have no luck....I pout.
posted on 24-Dec-2002 1:03:18 PM by Cominatcha

"Serena, are you nuts?" I shriek a little too loudly. "That . . . that . . ." Words are beyond me now. "Jerk?" It's a lame word, and I haven't used it for awhile, but it's the only thing I can think of.

"I thought he was an asshole." Alex says.

"He is." I tell him.

Serena and Liz both smile at me. I know that they can see how I feel about Michael Guerin in my eyes. They're my best friends. Of course they'll know.

"Okay, I kinda liked him once." I admit. "And I still think he's hot, but . . . no. He's a jerk. AND an asshole."

"Well, don't look now," Kyle says, "but he's coming this way."

I grab Serena and Liz's hands and we bolt out of there, away from Alex and Kyle and onto the dance floor where we'll blend in with everyone else . . .

sorry, I wrote that fast, and it sucked.
posted on 24-Dec-2002 1:09:56 PM by Liz_Parker
No it did not!
posted on 24-Dec-2002 2:22:55 PM by qt4167013

As Maria and Serena leave I look at Alex.

"Why did we come here again?" He whines.

"Shut up lex." I say as that Michael and his gang came over.

"Hey, we saw you at the club yesterday right?" I say calmly.

The guy, 'michael' smirks and brushes his hand through his spikey hair.

I send Alex a grin, which I don't think he got because of the looks he was sending the tall blond chick.

His other friend, max I think his name was, is staring intently at Liz.

Now even I have to admit that Liz is pretty, beautiful even, but that look Max was sending her seemed like he wanted to eat her up.

I narrow my eyes and unsucsessfully try to drag alex away.

This was gonna be a long night.

Just thought I would let you guys know that if you all can't post tomorrow, because of christmas, ill most likely be on ALL day cause I have no life and I am jewish, so unless I go to the movies, I can make up for the parts you'll all miss!
posted on 24-Dec-2002 3:02:14 PM by Liz_Parker

"Mariiaaa....why are you hiding from him?", I ask

SHe just glares at me and I roll my eyes....gradually we get to the exit and she drags out and into her Jetta.

"So....where we going now? The guys are still kinda in there you know". I tell her.

"They can find their own way home", she growls.

I look at her shocked. All this over one guy? Jeez,I'd never seen her act like this and I sigh.

She suddenly slams the breaks which nearly sends Liz and I flying forward.

"What's wrong with you?!", I scream at her.

"This is your get out and go home!", She says through clenched teeth.

I get out and watch as she and Liz drive away. I look down and turn to walk off. But then I feel someone wrap their arms around me and breathing on my neck. I tense up...."Who's there?", I ask softly.
posted on 24-Dec-2002 4:22:49 PM by Cominatcha

I loosen my grip on Serena's arm and she turns around to face me.

"Oh, you." she says without emotion.

I glare at her. I know I must look like a monster out here in the middle of the night looking at her with a passion in my eyes.

"Wait, how did you get here?" she asks.

"I saw you guys head for the exit, so I got in my car and followed you here."

"So, you just ditched your friends. Well, that's nice."

"Shut up!" I yell. "Take me to Maria . . ."

sorry so short and stupid
posted on 24-Dec-2002 6:26:46 PM by qt4167013
wait? Michael likes Serena? I confused....
posted on 24-Dec-2002 6:53:49 PM by Liz_Parker

"And just why would I take you to Maria? Dude....she hates you! Why aren't you getting that?!", I scream at him and shiver as the wind blows.

He glares at me and starts stepping forward,I step back with each step he takes forward.

For some reason he scares me. Those eyes.....

I run up to my apartment and lock the door. I don't trust him. He might try something. God....where's Kyle when I need him. That's when my phone rings making me jump.

"Hello?", I say nervously then sigh with relief as I hear Kyle's voice say "Hey you".
posted on 24-Dec-2002 8:11:55 PM by qt4167013

Serena breathes a sigh of relief as I talk to her on the phone.

"Oh Kyle, thank God its you!" She whimpers.

I frown as I realize something bad had happend to her.

"Rena, whats wrong?" I ask concerend.

"I need to see you." She says.

"Ill be right there!" I say and almost hang up the phone until her heavenly voice stops me.

"No! Ill...come to your house." She says quickly and hangs up.

I listen to the dial tone and sit and wait for her. I can wait 5 minutes...hell I can wait 5 years. Just to see her.

I look at myself in the mirror.

Man your whipped. I say to my reflection.

I can't say anything more because my door bell rings and its not Serena behind the door.

'YOU!" I say.

who should be at the door....hmmmm
posted on 24-Dec-2002 8:44:17 PM by Liz_Parker

I sneak down the fire exit and run as fast as I can to his place.

That Michael guy creeps me out. I don't get what's gotten into everyone.

Maria kicks me out of her car, for some odd reason....I'm not really sure what.

Then her little "stocker", as she puts it, comes and bothers me about her.

He expects me to just take him to her, like he's her property.

HA! I'm not that it's seems like everyone hates me.

Well....all but Kyle.

What happened to my life? Good question. I use to have the picture perfect family.....then things started going down hill.

I was always in an argument with my mother and I ran, left L.A to never return.

I finally reach Kyle's apartment and rush up to his room.

I hear ruffling noises and then hear someone gasp in pain, I hurridly run in to see Kyle and some guy fighting for some reason.

"Kyle!.....Kyle James Valenti STOP IT!", I scream sniffling until he finally notices I'm there.

"About time", I say anoyed.

"Sorry babe", he says and walks over to me, I look down then at the other person. "What's going on Kyle?"
posted on 24-Dec-2002 8:51:35 PM by qt4167013
wait...who should the other person be?
posted on 24-Dec-2002 9:38:54 PM by qt4167013
I don't know who it should be!!!!!!!!!!!!!
posted on 24-Dec-2002 9:49:47 PM by Liz_Parker
Hmmm....make it like a high school nemesis....or someone from another football team seeking revenge or whatever *shrugs*
posted on 24-Dec-2002 10:05:53 PM by qt4167013

I smirk at Serena as Sean stands up.

"Rena, this is Sean. he is one of my old football buddies." I Say to her, motioning for Sean to stand up.

Serena looks surprised and I muffel a laugh as I look at Sean.

"Please to meet you." She says curtly than looks at me.

I gulp. The look in her were have I seen it before?

"Uh...sean...its time for you to leave now." I say hoarsly ushering him out the door.

I slam the door and practically jump Serena.

"Now where were we?"
posted on 24-Dec-2002 10:16:53 PM by Liz_Parker

I giggle as we go through our routine.

Him kissing my neck and jaw line and you get the picture.

"Rush that Sean guy out fast enough?", I ask him.

He just smirks and I play with his hair.....afterwards,I kinda just lay there and look up at the ceiling.

"You ok Rena?", He asks me.

"Huh?....Yeah,I'm fine....thinking is all", I reply.

He nods and fiddles with my hair until he falls asleep. I kiss his forehead softly and get up wrapping a sheet around me and look out the window at the stars.

So many stars in the sky....yet only one of me on the ground.
posted on 24-Dec-2002 11:31:15 PM by qt4167013
an: Is it just me or is this turning into an all day Kyle and Serena porn fest.... just wondering. LOL!


I wake up and when I notice Serena is gone I sit up right and reach for the phone until I notice Serena asleep by the window sill. It is only three in the morning.

I smile at her peaceful body against the window.

I carry her carefully back to bed and smile when she snuggles into my arms.

I can't believe we didn't do this sooner. It just feels so right.

I sit there and stare at her until I too fall asleep...just to be rudly awakend by the telephone.

I groan as I reach for the phone.

"Hello?" I growl.

"Touchy." A voice that is most definitly Maria answeres.

"Could you two please stop the nookie long enough to listen to my plea?" She whines.

I groan and decide to hear her out. After all, what are best friends for.

I listen to maria yammer on and on and half listen until I feel Serena begin to stir.

"Listen Ria, why don't we all have breakfast together and talk this out tomorrow." I say quickly and hang up.

"Who was that?" Serena mumbles.

I grin.

"Oh you know telephone salesman." I say staring at her hungerly. She giggles and I jump next to her on the bed.

"Sorry, did it wake you?" I ask as I cuddle closer to her.

"Yes." She says moaning.

"Sorry," I say not meaning it.

"But now that iam awake..." She says letting me fill in the blanks.

My eyes glint as I lean in agian...
posted on 24-Dec-2002 11:38:16 PM by Liz_Parker

The next morning we all have breakfast together at some place called Felina's.

Strange name I think to myself.

Maria starts telling us her plan for "her palace" as she keeps calling it. It surprises me that she's actally thought so much out.

"And your sure about all of this Maria?", I ask her

She just nods at me and keeps on talking. I take a few bites of food then keep listening to her. Only queing in on the good parts.

Soon afterwards we seem to have a plan down. Looks like we're on Maria duty.

We get everything set up and I start feeling dizzy, I go over to Maria.

"Um, Maria?", I say softly.

She looks at me.

"I'm gonna sit down for a sec, I'm not feeling to good".

She looks a little conserned and looks at Kyle who just shrugs.

I walk over to a table and sit down putting my heads in my hands.

"God....what's wrong with my head?!", I groan.
posted on 25-Dec-2002 1:09:08 AM by qt4167013

When Maria silently asks me whats wrong, I shrug, because...well I don't know.

I lean down and massage her head.

"Mmmm that feels good." She moans with her eyes close.

"awww...they are so cute together." I hear Alex say softly to Liz who giggles.

I ignore them and continue to help serena. I hope she is ok.

"Kyle...hello??? Anyone in there?" Maria asks in her annoyingly high voice.

I narrow my eyes.

"yes maria."

"Good, because we have over 800,000 dollars to raise, and I can't do it alone."

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posted on 25-Dec-2002 1:29:31 AM by Liz_Parker

I have to suck it all up for Maria. This is important to her, so, we gotta help.

We go around and do what we can, turns out we're stuck doing car washs and such.

I pull out a tylenol and take it. My head and stomach seem to have a mind of their own.

Maria nudges Kyle. "You don't think she's...." She trails off.

"Don't even think that", He mutters to her. She just sighs.

Buy the end of the day we had raised at least $1,000. Hey, it's a start!

We just got $499,000 more dollars to raise. Looks like we're gonna have to do more planning. Maria takes us all out for dinner. Kyle sits next to me and wraps his arm around my shoulder. I push it away, for some reason I just don't feel like having people hang all over me.

Maria proposed a toast in honor of "her palace". That's when that Michael Guerin guy walks in. Maria's eyes glitter in the light.

And she complains about Kyle and me?
posted on 25-Dec-2002 1:35:41 AM by qt4167013
guys keep in mind, I am just 14. I have NO idea how much a huge palace would cost so if I am totally worng here... just tell me to change it.

Oh! and marry christmas guys! Hope you get lots of good gifts!
posted on 25-Dec-2002 2:32:23 AM by Lizzie_Parker17
OOC: I would say probably somewhere in the 700,000- 800,000 range. If its in New York its expensive!

Ok I am lost. Is Liz driving around with Maria in her Jetta?
If so I will post my part later, but man I am confused!

Merry Christmas guys!
posted on 25-Dec-2002 10:41:00 AM by Liz_Parker
Hey. Uh....I think Liz is in the same place as the rest of us. Cuz Alex whispered to her and she laughed. So, she's in there with us *happy* And merry Christmas to ya'll to!

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posted on 25-Dec-2002 4:35:30 PM by qt4167013
YOU SAID YA'll LOL!!!!!!!!!!!

oh and marry christmas!
posted on 25-Dec-2002 8:17:35 PM by qt4167013
since I was ORDERED to write a Kyle goes


My heart is racing and my palms are sweaty.

Serena LOOKS fine but she says her head hurts and her stomach aches. Maria asks if she is pregnant, but I don't think I could bear it. I mean, what kind of father would that make me?

I put my arm around Serena to comfort her but she pushes it away.

I feel like I am being pushed away. I really want to help her, but how can I when I am the only person putting 100% into this relationship.

I sigh, but am broken out of my Serena induced daze by maria's voice.

"What are YOU doing here?" She asks, staring at Michael.

I frown and put my head into my hands. Today is going to be a long day.
posted on 25-Dec-2002 11:12:15 PM by Liz_Parker

I look at Kyle who has a sad look on his face.

I grab his hand "Hey, get that look off your face", I tell him with a half smile.

He sighs. "Rena....I feel like your pushing me away....God, what if you ARE pregnant?", he asks me.

Honestly I don't know the answer.

I bite my lip as Maria and that Guerin guy get into it.

"God Guerin....when are you gonna give up?", She screams.

He just smirks. "Well for your information...I already have half the money saved up".

She looks totally shocked. I think that's the first time I've ever seen Maria completely speechless.

"Maria.....we're in a public place....your embarrassing us!", I mummble softly

"Sure you do! Your just trying to make my back down....well I have news for you may be hot and all, but you will NOT take my palace!" She yelled at storms out.

All of stand there shocked. I grip onto Kyle's hand and give him a reasuring smile. "I'll be right back....I'm gonna talk to her." I say and run out to her.

"Ria! Wait up."

She turns around and looks at me fuming.

"Can you believe the nerve of that guy....", she rambles on and I just smile.

She's definantly the same old Maria we all knew and loved.

Later on that day, I get a test just to make sure.

I get Maria to stay beside me as I wait for the results to show and when it does, I nearly pass out.

"!", I say and hand it to Maria.She just hugs me as I start crying and call and tell Kyle the "good news".

He hangs up obviously in shock.

Maria and I get back to work, just to keep our minds off of everything......but of course, my mind is still racing. That's when Kyle walks in with Alex. Kyle seems to of aged 20 years in the last 20 seconds.

I hope we're all ready for this.....

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posted on 25-Dec-2002 11:57:01 PM by qt4167013

oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god.

I am going to be a father, a father. dad, daddy. da-da.

I feel like I have been sucker punched in the gut.

On the way to Serena's Alex is trying to tell me that everything is going to be fine.

"Right." I say sarcastically as I open the door. Serena looks scared and I am starting to feel horrible.

What if I am a horrible father? I mean, as a football player, I have a huge career, how am I supposed to be able to take care of my child if I am always traveling.

"rena...can I talk to you?" I ask nervously.

She looks positivly terrified but I need to tell her this.

"Kyle, if you don't want this baby ill understand. But I am going to have this baby and love it, with you as the father or not." she says defiantly. It looks rehursed because she doesn't look at me.

"Rena...look at me." I say softly.

"I want this baby so much. Gosh I cannot believe there is part of me growing in there." I say in awe as I place my hand over her flat stomach.

She looks relieved. I let out the breath I am holding and start to tell her my reasoning to come and talk to her.

"Rena, I want this baby to grow up with two loving parents and I want to marry you...God knows how much...but I want you to know, its not just because of the baby. I don't want you to think that I think that I have to marry you." I say nervously.

Serena's eyes light up and she throws herself in my arms.

"We will get married." She says determind and I smile happily.

"I cannot believe you!" Maria's screeching voice breaks our happy moment.

"We better get in there before they kill eachother." Serena says giggling.

I frown when I hear the shattering of glass.

"we might be too late."
Hey guys....does any one else see that this fic seems to be all about Kyle and Serena???? SOme one else has to post!!!!!!!!!!!!
posted on 26-Dec-2002 11:02:26 AM by Liz_Parker

I rush in to see what's going on between the 2 now.

As soon as I walk in there's glass flying.

"Woah! What's going on in here?!", I say trying to make them stop.

"Ask him!", She screeches.

So I look at him and cross my arms over my chest.

"What are you two love birds fighting over now?". I say trying to keep myself from laughing.

They both glare at me, I just roll my eyes.

"Well?.....I'm waiting".

That's when I have to jump to get out of the crossfire of throwing objects, For all I know one might try to throw me next.

"HEY! Can't ya'll just get along for 5 seconds? Jeez, your gonna wreck my house!", I holler at them.

"That's MY palace! And you will never, I repeat NEVER get it Michael!", Maria yells.

I sit down on the couch and put my head in my hands. I think that headache's coming back.
posted on 26-Dec-2002 12:10:22 PM by qt4167013

I see Serena is getting a headache and I feel as if I should be the voice of reason because Liz and Alex are watching the scene while hysterically laughing.

"SHUT UP!" I scream and everything comes to a screeching hault.

"You are all acting like children!" I say evenly.

"Well he started it." Maria grumbled.
posted on 26-Dec-2002 3:22:24 PM by Cominatcha
Ooh, btw, the song in here is by Plumb. It is called Who Am I?


It's true. He did start it. He was the one who came up to me saying that he got all of the money saved, that he was gonna buy it and that there was nothing I could do about it.

I glance at Serena. I want to be there for my friend, but it looks like Kyle is taking care of that. In fact, Serena almost looks happy. Almost.

"You know what," I say. "It's not even that big of a deal to me anymore. Fuck you Guerin." I storm out of the apartment, sending an apologetic look to Serena and Kyle, and make my way down the crowded streets. The tears begin to fall from my eyes unwanted and unwelcomed. I don't know why I'm the one crying. I'm not the one having a baby.

But I came to NYC to start a new life, and, so far, this new life is nothing like I wanted it to be . . .

You there, with your bag of gold
Thought you had it all together
But your hands are empty
Does it matter now?
The pain it caused you cannot measure

But who am I?

Who am I to compare my pain
To yours?
Suffering is sweet angony
Who am I to compare my pain
To yours?
My suffering must mean nothing . . .

sorry so short

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posted on 27-Dec-2002 12:04:04 PM by Cominatcha

I feel out of place with Serena and Kyle in that apartment. They look like they want me gone, like they have something bigger on their minds, so I leave. I walk outside just in time to see Maria a little ways down the street. She's walking with her hands stuffed in her pockets, her shoulders hunched. She doesn't look happy.

She brings her hand up to wipe something off of her face, and that's when I realize that she is crying.

She is crying because of me.

I remember seeing her that first night in the club, running into her and then "stalking" her, as she likes to put it. I remember watching her look over the building, and then taking her out for some coffee, and I remember how quickly everything turned sour.

I have an envelope in my hand that has a check written out to me from a guy in Europe. His name's Veniche Regardo or something, and he's a big artist over there. He's got so much money, and he's agreed to help me pay for the building if I showcase some of his paintings once I get the museum up and going. He wants to become popular in the states.

Because of Veniche, I have enough money to buy the building. I swear, the guy owns a gold mine.

I sigh, trying to drown out what my heart is telling me to do. I don't even know this girl, anything about her.

Why would I even think about giving HER the money? . . .
posted on 27-Dec-2002 12:32:15 PM by Liz_Parker

I sigh as Maria walks out and that Michael guy soon followed her.

I look at Kyle.

"Can you believe how determined she is over that place?", I ask him.

He just nods and sits next to me and takes my hands.

" know soon you gotta go back to work...", I say trailing off.

He just nods. "But what if I have to travel alot? The baby won't even know it's own father, Rena....I don't want that to happen", he looks terrified.

"It's fine Kyle.....besides, if we tell anyone else, then it'll be in the media "Kyle Valenti to be father!", I say giggling.

He laughs. I love when he smiles.

"Besides, there's pictures. The baby will know what you look like.....and there's video camera's. We can tape you for like special events and stuff.....ok?"

He grins and I lean over and kiss him softly.

"All better?", I ask

He nods. "All better."
Sorry if that sucked!

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posted on 27-Dec-2002 12:46:20 PM by Cominatcha
no that was good!!
posted on 27-Dec-2002 1:07:23 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
Hey where is our Max?
I am waiting to RPG with him.
I am the mod of this forum do you want me to bmail the user or do you wanna do it?
I remember my character looking at him in a bar and then I have no idea what hapened. You guys took off and took my character with you!
Sorry I haven't been around much! With Christmas and all!
posted on 27-Dec-2002 1:21:31 PM by Cominatcha
Right now Max is busy, so I think we need someone to temp for him.

Lizzie_Parker, you could just post and bring him along with you like we did with your character if you want. I'm sure scifidreamer wouldn't mind.

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posted on 27-Dec-2002 1:34:18 PM by qt4167013

I new how much I loved her for a reason.

I stare at her stomach and all of a sudden I realize that I really do truly love her.

'Rena...I got to go." I say and kiss her on the forhead. I grab my jacket and rush outside.

Maybe if I wasn's so focused on my mission I would have seen Maria and Michael out side but now I was a man on a mission.

I walk to my car and drive off in a hurry.

When I reach my destination, I hop out of my car and race in to the store.

'Hello mr. Valenti." a man says.

I nod and rush to the counter. After a half an hour of looking I finally have found the perfect one.

"Pierce, can you wrap this up for me?" I ask urgently.

"Yes mr. Valenti. Whats the lucky occasion?" He asks.

I smile and hand him my credit card.

"I am getting married pierce." I say happily and rush out of the store.

Once back in the car I call Liz on her cell phone.

'Lizzie, get Serena busy because I am going to ask her to marry me and I want it to be the most romantic thing she will ever experiance." I say gleefully as I stare at the ring.

she will say ye, I think confidently. she will.
I Have an idea about the engagment, if you want to hear it, cominatcha or Liz_Parker, b-mail me, it will be
posted on 27-Dec-2002 5:50:27 PM by Cominatcha

I'm shocked when I see Kyle looking at rings. I'm even more shocked when I see him purchase one.

I rush into the small store just as Kyle is about to leave.

"Kyle VaLenti, what the hell are you doing?" I ask frantically. . .

sorry so short, but I'm goin' shopping!! lol

posted on 27-Dec-2002 7:10:03 PM by Liz_Parker

Kyle kissed my forehead and ran out in a hurry.

Hmmm....wonder what he's up to?

"Oh well....", I say sighing then my phone rings. "Oh what now?".

"Hello?.....Oh, hi Liz, what's up?.....Sounds good....See ya then", I hang up.

Ok, so I'm meeting Liz in the park down the street in 15 minutes.....everyone seems to be hiding something.

I get changed into some jeans and a t-shirt and a sweater then walk down to the park.

"Hey Liz...." I say as I see her standing there all grins. I know something's up....but what?

I'll put 2 and 2 together soon.

We walk around and talk about nothing important then she starts talking about the names and stuff.

"I don't know....."

She just nods then we stop in front of a really fancy restaurant and she scoots me towards the door.

"No...Liz, I'm not dressed for a place like this!" I whisper softly, she just smiles.

I roll my eyes and look up to see Kyle all dressed up in a tux smiling as he pulls out a chair for me.

"Kyle....what's going on?", I ask a lil confused.

"You'll see soon", he says and grabs my hands.

I sigh....trying to figure out what's going on in that head of his.

He smirks, guess he can tell I'm a little nervous.

"Calm down Rena.....jeez".

I smile softly and look around.

Guess something special was gonna happen....but the question is.....what?

posted on 27-Dec-2002 10:43:28 PM by qt4167013
duh duh duh duh.... and now time for the engagment...


I was nervous. Hell I was more than nervous. My palms were sweaty as I helped Serena into the car. I pat my pocket once more and breath a sigh of relief. Its still there.

Once we get to the restaraunt we are seated in back and the waiter comes to take drink orders. As he is passing I excuse myself to go to the bathroom and approach the manager.

I slip him the ring and he nods.

I smile and slip back in the chair.

'Well that was fast." Serena said looking up from the menu.

I think fast.

'Yeah.. um I went number two." I said lamely.

She raises her eyebrows.

"Well arnt you a good boy." She said sarcastacly looking back at the menu.

We order and throughout the whole meal I am incredibly jumpy and scared.

After the meal, and as we were waiting for desert Serena looked at me in the eyes and I gulped.

"Kyle what the hell is wrong with you? God, we couldn't even carry one a civil conversation! I mean I asked you how your game went and you said that you made a lot of homers. Now I am not stupid kyle and I KNOW that in football you don't make homers you make touchdowns. God Kyle, if we can't even sit here and talk how the hell are we going to raise a baby?" She asks shreeking.

I try to quiet her down.

"Serena...I am sorry, I guess I have been a little out of it. You am supposed to help maria with a" I say lamely.

Serena's eyes widen.

"Your up to something Kyle Valenti, and I will find out what." She said triumphantly.

Soon she let out a squeal as our desert arrived.

I stare at her nervously eating my own pudding.

Just than my pager went off.

'damn!' I cursed silently as I excused myself from the table.

"serena! DON"T EAT ANYTHING!" I told her.

She raised her eyebrows and put down her spoon.

I raced off to use the phone.

I quickly called Maria back and ran back to the table only to see the pudding gone.

"serena..." I say slowly.

"Where is your desert?" I say trying to stay calm.

She laughs.

"The lady behind me wanted it. I said it was ok, after all I am feeling a little sick." She says clutching her stomach.

My heart drops.

Just than we hear gasping noises as a lady behind us grabs her throat.

"Oh my gosh!" Serena says standing up.

"What?' I ask glumly.

"That lady, the one who is choking, I gave her my pudding!" Serena shreeks.

I sit bolt upright.

"WHAT!" I scream and lunge toward the lady. I push the waiter aside who is trying to help her and quickly do the manuver (whats it called, hemilch? donno spelling..) I do it for a while until I see the ring, my 10,000 dollar (what? Hes rich..) fly out of the womans mouth.

I don't see where it lands and push over the sea of people.

I jump to the ground and begin searching.

"Kyle, what in the name of God are you doing?" I hear Serena screech.

Thats it. I have had it. I rush up to the manager and grab his microphone.

"Hello fello restaraunt goers. My name is Kyle Valenti and I came to this restaraunt to propose to my girlfriend with a ring I so CLEVERLY put in her pudding. Than that woman choked on it and, God help me, FIND THAT DAMN RING." I yell into the mike as everyone trys to search for the missing ring.

I step of the podium and look into the shocked eyes of Serena.

"Rena..." I trail off.

A look of understanding comes over her and her eyes shine with love.

"Kyle...I..." She is interupted by a man calling out, "I FOUND IT!"

I leap over the table and take the ring. I quickly waltz over to Serena and take her hand. I go down on one knee.

"Serena, from the moment I first saw you I thought you were the most gorgeous woman in the room. I knew you were special and from that moment on...I made your life a living hell. I have loved you since that moment and even through the teasing I still loved you but was to shy and insecure to tell you. When I saw you at the club that day I knew it was fate and when you told me you were pregnant I knew my dream of that white picket fence in the country could become a reality. I know I won't be the best husband with my traveling and all, and I know we will probably be int the public eye, but Serena, I love you so much. Its taken me so long to realize it but I love you. Serena, will you be my wife?" I say with tears in my eyes.

"YES, KYLE! YES ILL MARRY YOU!" She screams and throws herself in my arms.

I am barley aware that the whole restaraunt is clapping as I grip on to her with all my might.

This has been the best day of my life.

"OH KYLE! we have so much to do before the wedding. Bridesmaids, best men, flowers, where will we have it? There is so much to plan." Serena starts chattering and I groan.

Retract my last statement because I have a feeling this wedding will put a damper on my spirits and my checking account.

But then I see how she is glowing and I can't believe she is going to be all mine. All mine and no one elses.

have fun!
posted on 28-Dec-2002 11:39:12 AM by Liz_Parker
That was great!

~*Serena*~, I'm engaged!

I'm actually engaged to Kyle Valenti!!

That'll be weird though. We used to hate eachother...and now we're engaged and I'm having his child.

But I wonder if we'll have the time to plan? With all the plans with the palace going on.

I'm sure most of our time will be spent with Maria.

I take a deep breath and clutch onto Kyle's hand. He smiles at me....I wonder what all his football buddies will think of this?

I grab my cell phone and call Maria. "Maria....guess what?!", I giggle over the phone.

"What?", she asks softly.

"Ok....what's wrong Ria?", I can tell by her voice something's up.

" what were you gonna tell me?"

"I'm engaged!", I squeal and I can just imagine her pulling the phone away from her ear.

"Maria Alejandra Deluca....what's wrong?!"

She doesn't say anything so I hang up.

"Hey Kyle?"

"Yeah Rena?"

"Can we stop at Maria's please? Something's wrong, I can tell"

He just nods and we go to her apartment and knock on the door.

"Maria! Open the's me!", I say trying to get her to open the door.

No luck, so I lean against the wall and wait....and wait....and wait some more.
posted on 30-Dec-2002 11:36:58 AM by Cominatcha
Oh, those parts were good. Now, what am I going to do with Maria . . . hmm . . . think, think, think . . .


I know that Serena and Kyle want to talk to me. They've got great news to share, after all, right? They're getting engaged. They're going to have a baby. Kyle's gonna continue to play for the Jets and make enough money so that Serena won't even have to work at that crummy old club anymore. They're going to have a perfect life with a nice ranch style home and white picket fences and everything.

Me? What am I gonna have.

I guess, if you think about it, I could have a perfect life, too. After all, Michael Guerin just came over here a few hours ago while Kyle and Serena were out "eating".

And he gave me that money. All that money. There was a huge check made out by some European artist. Now, I'm holding that in my hands.

"I wanted you to have it." Michael had said. "If you promise that you'll showcase some of my paintings as well as the guy who gave you the check."

I had wanted to smile, but I wasn't able to. ''Thank you," I had choked out, but it hadn't seemed like enough.

Now, I'm sitting here on this bed, staring at the check in my hands, and wondering what the hell would have made him do this.

"Maria!" I hear Serena shout. "Let us in! If something's wrong, you should talk about it."

I reluctantly get off my ass and open the door to reveal a worried looking, but happy at the same time for their own engagement, Kyle and Serena on the other side.

"What's wrong?" Serena asks me, placing a comforting hand on my shoulder.

I hold up the check in my hand, and both Serena and Kyle gasp . . .

Gee, I'm sorry, I didn't know what to do there.
posted on 30-Dec-2002 12:00:30 PM by Liz_Parker

I gasp as I see the check. She had the entire amount for the palace/club thing , but where did she get it from?.

"Oh my God.....where did you get all that money?", I ask when I find my breath and voice.

She just smiles. "Michael...." she trails off and keeps admiring the check.

I guess that Guerin guy can be nice. He gave Maria all that money....maybe they do have some kinda relationship going on.

I sigh and look at Kyle, he grips my hand. I just smile and look at my stomach. God, I'm gonna be so huge and ugly.

Kyle seems to of known what I'm thinking because he says "Rena....don't think like that....your gonna be beautiful".

I look at him confused. How DID he know what I was thinking. He just laughs and I shrug.

But we do have loads to plan and maybe now we have the time too.

I grab some magazines and look at the cheap dresses.

"Don't look at those....look at these!", Maria says and turns to the expensive dresses.

That's one thing I gotta get used to. I'm gonna be married to one of the richest men in the world.

I'm used to just picking up things I can I'm gonna be able to afford almost everything.

I sigh as Maria and Kyle go over plans, then walk over to the window and look outside. What do I do while they plan my wedding?
posted on 30-Dec-2002 1:07:04 PM by Cominatcha

I notice that Serena looks a little bummed, and I realize that Kyle and I aren't really consulting her about anything in her wedding. HER WEDDING. Not MY wedding. Not HIS wedding. HER wedding.

"Um, you guys, you know, you two should be alone." I suggest. "I should probably leave."

"Maria, it's your apartment." Kyle reminds me.

"Yeah, I know, but . . ." I stand up and grab my coat. "I feel like goin' to PLANET BANG again." I don't bother to tell them why I feel like going to PLANET BANG, but I think they know. I blush.

I take a look at what I'm wearing. I guess I don't want to look like I'm trying too hard, so blue-jeans and a white spaghetti strap should do fine.

I say good-bye to my friends and walk out the door.

Once I'm outside, I realize how cold it gets in New York. I'm not used to this weather. If there is one differenece between LA and the big apple, it's that LA is much warmer.

I hop in my Jetta and drive on over to PLANET BANG as fast as I can. I need to see him . . .

Tiny request: If, in the next posts, could everyone not use Michael or Maria for awhile? Go ahead and post, I mean, but I've got this smut scene in my head that I've just gotta get written out. *grin*
posted on 30-Dec-2002 1:19:12 PM by qt4167013
fine by me, I am glad you all liked my engament!


I gulp as I stare at Serena. She is so beautiful and she is glowing.

"Rena, I am sorry. This is your big day and I promise to let you plan it." I say looking at her.

"oh kyle!" She said and lunged herself into my arms.

I grip on to her with all my might and breath in her sent of fresh green apples.

"Ok, I want Maria as my maid of honor." She said as we stared at the dresses.

I nod. "I want Alex as my best man."

She stops and looks at me through narrowd eyes.

"Fine, but NO BACHELOR PARTIES." She says.

I smile at her.

I picked a winner.
posted on 30-Dec-2002 1:25:16 PM by Cominatcha
how cute!!
posted on 30-Dec-2002 1:46:03 PM by Liz_Parker

I smile as they finally let me plan for my own.

We start writing things down and planning them out. Maria agreed to be my bridesmaid, thank God.

"So Kyle......what else do we need to figure out? God....I don't want you to waste all your money...", I say trailing off.

He shakes his head. "Don't worry about it. All that matters is that we're getting married and we're having a baby,ok?", he asks and puts his hand on my stomach.

I just nod and sigh as we get just about everything figured out. I picked out a long pretty baby blue dress for my bridesmaids. And for Maria's dress I picked out a magenta type colored dress with speghetti straps. Hope she likes it.

Kyle picked out the tuxes and we picked yellow roses and white roses for the flowers. Now all we needed was a date. But that could wait for now.

I leaned back on Kyle and sighed. "We have all the main things figured out for now we can just take a breath", I said and looked up at his eyes.

He nodded.

"Are you sure this won't cost to much?", I asked worridly.

"Rena....calm down. You don't need to get yourself stressed out.", he says so calm and I just shrug.

I turn on the TV and flip through channels, so many channels....but nothing's on!

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posted on 31-Dec-2002 12:25:17 AM by qt4167013

I watch Serena flip through the channels and I see that something is bothering her.

"Rena, whats wrong?" I ask.

She frowns.

"Kyle, all my life I have never had a lot of money and I have had to watch my buget. Now that I am planning this wedding I can't help thinking that with the Vera Wang dresses and Armani tuxes that it will cost too much." She says scrunching up her eyebrows.

"Rena listen. Number one: I love you and nothing is too expensive for us, number two: if you hadn't noticed I am one of the most well payed football players in the NFL, I am pretty sure I can afford it, and Number three, in being on of the most well payed I am also famous and this wedding will most likely be put in newspapers around the world and if you would like to show up on the cover of People not looking your prettiest than we don't have to spend so much of the wedding. Its your call." I say cautiosly.

She throws herself into my arms.

"Did I tell you how much I love you?" She asks into my shoulder.

I smile.

"Not in the last five minutes."

"Ok then, I love you." She says and kisses me.

I smile inwordly. This is going to be the best.

"Kyle, where are we going for our honeymoon?" She asks excited.

My grin grows broader.

"I dont care. It doesn't matter, its not like we are going to spend a lot of time out of the hotel room." I say and she slaps me.

I love her.
posted on 31-Dec-2002 12:40:34 AM by Liz_Parker

"Oh good grief Kyle! Since I'm already pregnant....we'll probably spend most of our time exploring the town we're in and NOT eachother's body", I say smiling.

He pouts and I kiss his cheek. "You'll live Mr.Valenti"

He shakes his head. "How will I live if I'm not with you?", he asks.

"Now who said anything about that?", I ask and kiss him softly.

He just sighs.

"Now....what's wrong with you?", I ask and grip his hand.

He shakes his head and I frown. "What aren't you telling me Kyle?"

"Well Rena.....between all the photographers coming on our wedding day and for all we know the news people....our special day will turn into everyone else's special day".

I shake my head and hug tight. "We'll be no more worrying!", I say with a smile and he smiles.

I sigh and lean back on him and sigh softly, now what can we do? I yawn.

"Tired Rena?", Kyle asks me.

I nod and he picks me up and carries me to the bed, I get under the covers and as soon as my head hits the pillow I fall asleep, the only thing I hear is Kyle's breathing against my neck.
posted on 31-Dec-2002 5:49:05 PM by Cominatcha
That Kyle/Serena action is so cute!! I can’t wait until the wedding!!

I know this probably isn’t the right time to post, but I finally got this written out. I tried not to make this to smutty, for those who don’t----for some odd reason----don’t enjoy that kinda
thing . . . lol


I feel my heart start to pound as I see her enter the club. She’s not wearing anything provocative, like most of the girls here do, but it’s not anything like the bums wear, either. It’s simple, but sexy, and I can’t take my eyes off of her.

I’m here along tonight. No Max, no Tess, and no Isabel. I don’t know what’s happened to them, lately. They’re all kind of in their own little world, but I guess that’s okay. They don’t have a responsibility to be there for me all the time when I need them to be.

But I really could use Max here now. My best friend is always there for me when I get flustered and nervous, and, right now, as Maria is walking closer and closer to me, her hips swaying to the music playing in the background, her feet stepping in time with the beat, her eyes, glued on me and only me, I’m definitely getting flustered and nervous, and my best friend is nowhere in site.

“Why’d you do it?” she asks, stepping up close to me so that her face is only inches away from mine. “You wanted that club just as much as I did.”

I nod. That’s true. I can’t deny that.

“Well, why, then?” she asks me again. “It doesn’t make any sense.”

Without thinking, I grab her around the waist and pull her to me, locking my lips onto hers in one swift movement. It’s been a long time since I’ve kissed a girl. I haven’t had time to even think about them. My art has been keeping me so busy.

Now, though, I can’t think about anything else. This girl. Maria DeLuca. I ran into her in this exact same club and now I can’t stop thinking about her.

Our kiss begins to intensify, and she wraps her arms around my neck, her fingers curling into my hair, urging me closer and closer to her. I brush my tongue across her lips and then slide it into her mouth. She does the same.

I hold onto her as tightly as I possibly can. I don’t want to let her go. She feels so right up next to me, her body melding into mine. It’s like we’re two pieces of a puzzle. Together, we make a whole. We fit together perfectly.

My hands start to slide up her shirt, rubbing her back. She moans into my mouth, and her fingers dig hard into my scalp, urging me to kiss her more.

The music echoes in my ears, causing my heart to pound inside my chest. I feel like my entire body is being set on fire. This is all too much. The music, the lights, Maria . . . I reluctantly pull away and look at her. She looks disappointed, like she didn’t want to stop kissing me.

“That’s why I did it, Maria.” I tell her honestly, answering her question at last. “Ever since I bumped into you at this exact club that night, I’ve wanted to do that so bad.”

“But why did you give me the money?” she asks. “Why did you . . .”

I press my index finger to her lips, silencing her. “Shhh,” I murmur. “Come home with me tonight.”

She seems surprised that I would ask her such a question. Well, I guess I didn’t really ask, and it wasn’t really a question at all.

“Okay.” she says, to my own surprise. She grabs my hand and leads me outside. I, in turn, lead her to my car. I open the door for her and she gets in. I go around to the other side and get in the driver’s seat. I start the car and get away from PLANET BANG and the lights and the music that threatens to drive me insane.

But the girl that threatens to drive me insane is still sitting by me, looking more desirable than ever now that I know what it’s like to kiss her.

She asks me about the money twice more as we drive the short distance back to my apartment, but I ignore that and tell her that we’ll talk about it later. “I want tonight to be about you and me.” I tell her, stopping the car in front of my apartment.

She gets out and follows me up to the main entrance. “This is crazy.” she says. “I don’t even know you.”

I smile. “You don’t need to.”

I lead her up the stairs to my apartment. I fumble with the door. I’m nervous in her presence.

Once I finally get it open, we walk inside. I tell her to make herself at home as I close the door.

“Mr. Guerin,” she says, shuffling towards me as I look in my refrigerator for some wine. Wine makes people feel all sexy and stuff, or so I’ve heard.

“You can’t possibly tell me that you invited me over here so I can make myself at home while we drink wine and while you avoid the subject of that money.”

I smile, and close the refrigerator, forgetting about the wine completely. She loops her arms around my neck, and I pull her to me and kiss her again, enjoying this feeling I get with her and only her.

There’s more to this kiss this time. There’s more need, more want, more hunger, more desire. Her hands leave my neck and travel down my chest, toying with the top two buttons, unbuttoning them.

“Maria,” I whisper, leading her slowly towards the bedroom.

She falls back on the bed and seeks out my mouth with hers again. I crush my lips to hers as my fingers start slipping her shirt up higher and higher over her stomach.

She allows me to pull her shirt over her head, and I get a glimpse of her breasts, hidden within the confinements of her bra. I stop kissing her and run my hand over my stomach, around to her back, and find the clasp on her bra. I unhook it, and she arches up to assist me in getting it off of her. I let it fall to the floor on top of her shirt.

Her chest is heaving with every breath of air that she takes, and I can already see sweat beginning to form on her brow. In a hurry, her fingers work on the remaining buttons on my shirt that are actually buttoned, and she practically rips my shirt from me, tossing it to the floor where it joins that starting pile.

She runs her long, delicate fingers over my abdomen and chest, teasing my hardened nipples. I do the same to her, and she laughs.

Then, I replace my fingers with my mouth, running my tongue across her nipple and the areas surrounding it, suckling from her like a newborn baby would to its mother. She tangles one of her hands in my hair as the other travels down to my jeans. She fumbles with the button and the zipper and then, finally, she works them down off of me.

From there, I can’t remember much. I feel like I’m on drugs or something, because everything feels so perfect. It’s hard to recall details. I remember them, but I can’t describe them. What happened between us was indescribable.

I remember tearing her clothes off of her like an animal, and her doing the same to me. I remember kissing whatever part of her skin I could find. I remember running my hands over every inch, just to make sure that I had touched her everywhere. I remember screaming out her name as I pushed into her and exploded, and I remember her steady breathing as she fell asleep in my arms that night . . .

Woo!! I was gonna go into a little more detail than that, but that’s not necessary, now is it? Sorry, I know it sucked, but I’m not a great smut writer, so . . .
posted on 1-Jan-2003 1:15:57 PM by Cominatcha
posted on 1-Jan-2003 7:18:04 PM by Liz_Parker
Great part!!
posted on 1-Jan-2003 8:10:40 PM by qt4167013

I wake up with Serena and feel at peace with the world. Finally I have a reason for being.

I rub my eyes and sit up when I feel my cell phone ring.

"VALENTI! WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU?!" I hear my coach scream.

I glance at my watch.


"SHIT!" I say and grab my stuff. I scribble a note for Serena and jump in my car. Great, the perfect way to start the day.
posted on 1-Jan-2003 9:05:54 PM by Liz_Parker

I wake up and look over to see no Kyle....hmmm, that's when I notice the note.

I reach over and grab it, it says:

Hey Rena,

I woke up 12:30, I am in sooo much trouble! Well, slep tight. I'll be back as soon as I can.


I sit up and get a head rush but try to avoid it. I walk to the other room and start tidying up a little. I don't wanna leave it a mess. much to do and everything. I wonder where that Maria is....she's sure been gone awhile....hmmmm....

She better get back soon....I don't wanna be left here all by myself all day. It does get lonely.

I really need to redecorate....and get a hold of my boss. I pick up the phone and dial the oh-sp-familiar number.

After we talk for awhile, I tell him the whole Kyle and baby situation. He yells for awhile and I push the phone away from my ear just as Maria walks in with a grin from ear to ear.

I smile back. "And just what are you so happy about Ms. Deluca?". I say and hang the phone up.

posted on 3-Jan-2003 2:23:33 PM by Liz_Parker
Ashley, Ur go *tongue*
posted on 3-Jan-2003 4:29:43 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
Lizzie and Alex

I smiled fondly at the happy couples wishing I was one of them. I turned around when I felt a hand touch my shoulder

I turned around and saw Alex
"Hey Alex" I said

"Ah Lizze turn that smile upside down" He said forcing her face into a smile

"I know I should be happy for everyone! Maria and Michael and Serena and Kyle. But I can't help feeling sad. I'm still alone you know"

"Of course I do. Remember your not the only one Lizzie. I'm alone too. But I am happy with that! I am a bachelor!" Alex said with a cheeky grin

"We'll both find someone Lizzie" ALex said kissing her on the cheek

"Well I'm going to go find someone to dance with that is unless you want to dance" Alex said offering his hand

"No thats alright Alex" Liz said
"But thanks for asking"

"Alright Lizzie"

Liz sat there and reached for her wine she took a small sip and the chugged it all down.

"Wow look at you go" A deep male voice said

Liz looked up shocked and was met with the same eyes she had stared into that night at the club.

"Max" he said introducing himself


"Liz" max said cutting her off
"I know. Michael told me"

"Its nice to meet you max" Liz said with a smile

"The pleasure is all mine"
"I wish I would have gotten up the courage to talk to you that night. I haven't stopped kicking myself since"

Liz was stunned.

"Would you like to dance?" He asked offering her his hand

Liz nodded and took it.


posted on 3-Jan-2003 4:53:09 PM by Cominatcha
Oh, that was so sweet!! I loved it!!


I'm glad that Liz is out having a fun time, but I really need her here right now. Serena is busy planning for the wedding, and she's thinking about the baby, too. Now she's starting to worry that the two events my conflict with each other. She thinks that she's gonna have to rush the wedding now and get it over with---get it over with isn't the right term, I suppose---so that she won't be fat on her wedding day. She wants to get married, a nice small wedding, and then have the kid and live happily ever after with Kyle.

She's beginning to stress out now. She leafing through magazines like crazy and tearing out pictures and articles she likes. I tell her that she should just hire a wedding planner, but she says that that would cost too much money. I think she keeps forgetting that KYLE VALENTI is her fiance, and that he has plenty of money to cover all of the expenses.

Serena even sent me to the local library to pick up books on how to plan a wedding. It's amazing. I didn't think I'd find any of those books, but I found five! That should help her, right?

Like I said, though, I really wish that Liz was here, too. She and I haven't gotten a chance to talk much ever since I arrived in New York, and I miss my girl.

I didn't tell Serena about what happened between Michael and I. I told her that we had worked things out and that we might even have a romantic future, but I didn't go into detail about . . . THAT.

I don't want to give her anymore to think about. I know Serena, and I know she'll start worrying about me. She'll say, "Ria, I'm already pregant. You don't wanna end up like this so early in your life with a guy you barely know. Did you use protection? Are you feeling okay? Maybe you should go to the doctor."

THAT is why I'm not telling her.

But if Liz was here right now, I might be able to tell her. I know she'd be happy for me, and she's not as stressed out as Serena, so it might go over better.

But, oh well. Liz is out having a good time, and I'm happy for her, because I know that that's something that she hasn't done for a long, long time . . .
posted on 3-Jan-2003 6:30:53 PM by Liz_Parker

I keep going through everything. Picking out the things I might need for my wedding. Every little thing helps.

Maria suggested I just call my mother, so she can help. No thank you. She'll yell at me for even getting pregnant and engaged in the first place. She'll say "Your to young".

Just because she didn't get married till she was almost 30 doesn't mean anything.

I sigh then jump as I hear Kyle's voice saying "Rena....Rena....Rena! How many times do I have to tell you to not worry about our wedding?", he asks.

"Kyle....I'm trying to get everything we can just get it over with so I can actually fit into my wedding dress!", I say and cross my arms.

He shakes his head and pulls me to his lap. I sigh and lean my head against his.

"This is all just so much Kyle.....".

He nods. "I know, but don't have a cow over it,ok?", he says with a smile.

I laugh softly. "I'm not having a cow.....I'm having a baby, yours in fact....but I'll wind up looking like a cow, and it's all your fault", I say laughing and he soon joins in. Maybe this won't be so stressfull after all.
posted on 5-Jan-2003 1:29:02 AM by qt4167013
BUMP!!!!!!!! something has to happen, this is a little boring


go read a book!

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posted on 5-Jan-2003 2:28:49 PM by Liz_Parker
Yeah....hmmm,wonder if anyone has any idea up their sleeves?

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posted on 5-Jan-2003 7:18:21 PM by Cominatcha
I know what you guys mean. not enough people are posting!!

you guys could do something funny for the wedding maybe.

for now, I've got a slight idea up my sleeve, too for m+m.


I call Maria up the next day and ask her if she wants to do anything tonight.

"Anything?" she asks in return.

I smile on the other end. "Yeah, anything."

I hear her laugh. "Well, I wish I could, but I can't. I've gotta stay here and help Serena out. She's getting married."

I suppose that's for the best. Serena is Maria's friend. "Okay," I give in with a sigh. "I guess I'll just go out to PLANET BANG all by myself. And I can dance . . . all alone with no one to hold onto."

She groans. "You know how hard you're making this on me?"

I smile again. "Very."


We tell each other good-bye and I put the phone down. I can't ever imagine hating this girl. Now, that stupid palace doesn't mean a thing to me, and I'm glad I gave Maria the money. Besides, a club would be much more fun than an art museum.

I haven't really been painting much lately. There's nothing for me to paint. Maybe I've just lost the touch . . . or maybe I've just lost interest . . . or maybe I've just gotten interested in something . . . or rather, someone . . . else.

I get dressed and head to PLANET BANG that night by myself. I wonder if there's something wrong with me, because all I can think about is Maria.

I sit down at the bar and order a beer, but when I can't stop thinking about her, I order another one.

Big mistake.

Soon, one beer turns into too many, and I'm talking to a girl who's name is Mellissa something-or-another. I can't quite understand everything she is saying, because I feel like I'm spinning, and I'm not completely concentrating on her.

God, I am so drunk. I better get home before I make a huge mistake.

But driving could be a problem. Not only could I get pulled over for driving under the influence, but I could put someone's life in danger, maybe even kill someone.

Mellissa agrees to take me home.

But when I wake up the next morning and find her lying naked in my arms, I realize that she did a lot more than that . . .

I figured m+m need some kind of problems, something to spice their storyline up a little.
posted on 5-Jan-2003 8:12:14 PM by qt4167013
Very nice...I agree.

Note: Tomorrow school *shiver* starts for me and I have a lot of work to catch up on as well as studying for finals. On top of that I am in a couple sports with competitions coming up. I am going to be SWAMPED for a while. I will come on and update but not as much as I have been doing. Ill come on in the mornings and maybe nights and I am sorry but ill try to update as much as I can, but if you all can sympethize with me. I am a high school get
posted on 6-Jan-2003 8:55:48 PM by qt4167013

I am ready for this arn't I? I am not rushing into anything right?

I watch Serena's flat stomach go up and down as she breaths and I place a hand on it.

I can't believe something I helped make is in there. I stare in awe.

Serena wakes up and smiles.

"Its amazing isn't it?" She says too, looking at me.

"I am going to be a great daddy." I mumble to myself, pulling a strand of hair away from her face.

"Yes you are." She tells me, her voice husky.

I smile and stare into her eyes.

God I love her.
just some fluff
posted on 7-Jan-2003 5:49:31 PM by Cominatcha
some cute fluff!! when are we gonna have their wedding? I think we should speed things up a little. I gotta admit, I'm getting bored with my own RPG!! lol


Michael must not have remembered that I told him I would stop by the next morning. Or maybe he just didn't hear me. But I told him. I told him that I would stop by and we could spend some time together.

When I walked inside his apartment, though, which wasn't locked, I didn't see anyone. I called his name a few times, but he didn't answer. I cautiously walked around, peeking my head inside rooms to see if he was in there, and then I went into the bedroom.

And I saw him.

And some girl.


In each other's arms.


They were lying in the exact same position Michael and I had been when I woke up with him the day before.

Michael woke up a few seconds later and glanced at the girl in his arms, confused, and then noticed me.

"Maria, this isn't what it looks like." he tried to explain.

"You know what I think? I think it't exactly what it looks like." I don't let him finish. Before he can see my tears, I bolt out of the room and out the door. He tries to run after me down the hall, but I tell him not to follow me.

"Stay away from me, Guerin!" I shout. "I never wanna see your fuckin' face again!"
posted on 7-Jan-2003 6:02:08 PM by Liz_Parker

I smile at Kyle. He defianantly will be a great daddy. Even if he won't be around all the time. Hey, nobody's perfect.

I kiss him softly and lean against him as Maria walks in crying.

"Maria....what's wrong?", I ask pushing away from Kyle and running to her side.

"He....he was with that....that....slut!", she says between sobs.

I look at Kyle, he shrugs and gets up and gides her to the couch.

"Ria....what happened?", He asked.

She told us the whole story and by the time it was over I was hugging her and she was crying her eyes out.

I swear, if I see that Guerin, I'm going to have a little talk with him and he won't be a happy camper.

"Hey....uh, Kyle...can you handle Maria for a sec please?", I ask hopefully

He raises an eyebrow.

"Don't worry....Maria,stay with Kyle,ok? I'll be back in a bout an hour"

She nods and Kyle keeps her calm.

I walk to Planet Bang hoping to see Michael and frown when I don't.

So I'll just wait a while.....that's when I see him, trying to avoid some girl.

"Hey Guerin!", I yell

He gulps as soon as he sees me....I smirk, this guy is so dead.
posted on 7-Jan-2003 6:11:58 PM by Cominatcha

I didn't even know that that friend of Maria's knew my last name . . . I don't even remember her first name. Serenthia? No, it was something like Selena of Selena or something. Serena? Yeah, that's it. Serena.

She walks over to me, and I can tell she's not happy. I heard she's pregnant, too. Great. Rule number 1: Never mess with a pregnant woman after you messed with her best friend.

But I didn't MESS with her best friend. I love Maria. That's why I gave her the money. I was hoping to find her here, but she wasn't anywhere in sight. I can be so stupid sometimes. Like she's really gonna come back to PLANET BANG after she found me in bed with another woman---I can't remember her name, either, and I really don't want to---She's probably at home crying now.

I try to explain to her that I was drunk, that I had one sip too many, that I didn't know what I was doing, but she doesn't seem like she's in the mood to listen . . .
posted on 7-Jan-2003 10:31:58 PM by Liz_Parker

"You expect me to believe that?!", I ask with a glare.

"It's the truth....I swear, that girl was supposed to just take me home....but she took advantage of me", he expects me to take pity for him, HA!

I reach up and slap him. "That's for Maria", I inform him and walk out and go back to the apartment to see Maria asleep.

"Where ya been Serena? You had us were gone for awhile", Kyle says softly.

"Don't worry,ok? I'm fine.....I just had a little adult to adult talk with Michael is all".

"You didn't say anything stupid did ya?", He asks.

I just shake my head and sit down.

~~~~*****2 month later*****~~~~

I have like a little lump on my stomach. But most things still cover it up.

We'll be ready for the wedding soon. I'm a little nervous.

I'm almost scared I'll get cold feet. Wait, isn't that the groom's job?

I smile and look at my dress that's hanging in the closet.

God....I can't wait to actually be Mrs.Kyle Valenti....It'll be kinda weird....but I'm sure we'll have some fun times.
posted on 7-Jan-2003 11:44:22 PM by qt4167013

As the wedding draws near I grow even more nervous.

What if I am not good enough, what if I can't spend time with the baby.

Maria is happy at her club but I think she secretly misses that Michael guy.

oh well. Notice how much I love my friends.

I am extremly tired from all this wedding planning and just want to relax...

"KYLE! I need you!" Serena hollars.

I groan.

so much for relaxation.
posted on 9-Jan-2003 8:44:42 AM by Cominatcha

I'm happy for Serena and Kyle. I really am. They're starting their perfect life together in a few weeks. They're going to have a child. They're going to have tons of money. They're going to have everything I've ever wanted and never had.

I have my club, yeah. It's called DON'T TURN AROUND. The name just kinda popped into my head one day, cuz I was thinking about how you should never turn your back on something, or it'll come back to bite you.

It's a fun place. Popular as hell. The palace is a well-known place. Therefore, DON'T TURN AROUND is a well-known place and gets lots of visitors.

But there's still something missing from my life.

That something, or rather, SOMEONE, comes to my club everynight and stares at me until he has to leave . . .
posted on 9-Jan-2003 8:22:49 PM by Liz_Parker

I smile as he walks in. "Well actually....I don't really need you....but,I made you a nice dinner", I say with a small smile.

I see him grin as he sits down and I sit across the table. "Listen....I'm sorry for putting you through so much....and I want you to tonight a nice relaxing dinner", I take a bite. " And tommorrow, you go out with your buddies and act liek old times,ok?"

He grins and I lean over and kiss forehead then take another bite of food.
posted on 10-Jan-2003 8:29:09 AM by qt4167013

Serena always knows what I am thinking and as I eat my dinner peacefully I know this will be a good day.

Just than Serena grabs her stomach and runs to the bath room.

I guess morning sickness happens in the night as well
posted on 10-Jan-2003 6:21:33 PM by Cominatcha
do you think we should do their wedding soon?
posted on 10-Jan-2003 6:54:30 PM by Liz_Parker
Sure :D
posted on 11-Jan-2003 2:32:12 PM by Cominatcha

The wedding is barely a week away now, and Serena's starting to flip out. Flipping out is usually something that I can take care of, but now that she's doing it, too, there's two of us flipping out, and Kyle seems to be going slowly insane.

All I can hope for, though, is that Serena and Kyle have a long and happy life together, because I know that that's something that I will never have . . .
posted on 11-Jan-2003 3:19:13 PM by qt4167013

Lately Rena and I can tell that Maria has been down lately. She has been moping around and every time we mention the wedding she winces and stares far off.

Rena and I decided to do something for her. We are taking her out and inviting one of our good friends to set her up with. Hopefully she will hit it off and enjoy life.

posted on 12-Jan-2003 3:41:45 PM by Cominatcha

"Wait a minute, you're setting me up?" I'm not sure about this idea.

Serena nods. "Yep. Don't worry, though. Derek is really nice. I used to work with him and we got along really well."

"What makes you think I'll get along really well with him, though?" I ask. I run my hands through my hair. I can't believe that my friends are suggesting this.

"Because you and I have the same tastes in men." Serena answers.

"May I remind you that Kyle and I have never even kissed." I say.

She sighs. "Okay, fine, we don't have the same taste in ALL men, but, trust me, Derek Renolds is the man of your dreams."

I look out the window with my back to my friends. I know that the man of my dreams is someone I'll never have. The man of my dreams ran into me at that club and started "stalking" me. The man of my dreams went out to coffee with me and made me hate him, and then he gave me all that money to buy that palace and start my life over and he made me fall in love with him. And then, after one passionate night, he made me hate him again, and he's still the man of my dreams.

I listen to myself think. This is pathetic. I'm pathetic. I go out with Serena during the day, and occasionally Kyle tags along, and I manage my club at night. I'm tired and cranky and completely lost within my thoughts and emotions.

"Fine." I agree reluctantly. "I'll go out with what's-his-name."

"Derek." Serena fills in.

"I'll go out with Derek." I say. "But, on one condition. You guys have to go out with me."

"Like a double-date thing?" Kyle asks.

I nod. "Exactly . . ."
posted on 12-Jan-2003 10:03:13 PM by Lizzie_Parker17

Not being able to get on the site is soo very frustrating. I haven't been able to get on at all lately! It seems like every time I try I get a server is down message.

Let me see if I can ry to spice this up a bit.
I am just going to have Liz and max in their own little world.

PS where is our max and isabel?
I am Liz and Alex those are 2 key players right there. Alex needs someone to interact with! So does Liz!


Liz sat alone in the coffee house nervously.

She was supposed to meet Max there. She suposed it was their first date.

Just the thought of that gave her butterflys in her stomach. She really liked him. The night she met him was ranked up there pretty high on the "best night of her life" list

The bell above the door jingled and he walked in. He turned towards her immediately as if he had sensed her.
His lips curled upwards and he began to move in her direction.

Her breath grew shallow and her heart beat sped up considerably

"Hi Max" she said sweetly when he reached her


posted on 13-Jan-2003 7:41:17 AM by Liz_Parker

I smile when Maria finally agrees. "And I promise....if you hate Derek, you can hate me to,ok?", I tell her.

She sighs. "Ok.....".

It's been hard to see her mope around since her and Michael split up that's all she seems to do. She puts up a front but I know better than that.

We talk and a little later I'm helping her pick out something to wear....she decides on leather pants and a tank top.

Then we do make-up and I have to find something to wear. "I don't see why your making us go.....we don't need to go out....besides my he--", I'm cut off by Kyle grabbing me and dragging me to the other room.

"What?", I ask crossing my arms over my stomach.
posted on 13-Jan-2003 6:51:27 PM by Liz_Parker
posted on 13-Jan-2003 7:12:46 PM by qt4167013

"Rena." I start. I really had no reason on pushing her into the room, but I have learned that the quickest way to deal with her is to shut her up. It sounds harsh but Pregnant woman are hard to deal with.

"Rena do you love me?" I ask kissing her.

"yeah." SHe says moaning.

"Than be quiet. This is Maria's big day." I say shortly.

Serena sticks out her toungue at me and I shrug.

THis will be a long day.
posted on 13-Jan-2003 7:54:39 PM by Liz_Parker

I roll my eyes at Kyle. He's to picky sometimes.

We walk back in the room and a little later Derek gets there and we head out.

All of us share a table but Derek and Maria are off in their own little worlds....litteraly. They weren't even talking.

I sigh. I just want her to be happy again. Stupid Michael. If he wouldn't of come along then none of this would be happening.

I lay my head on Kyle's shoulder and look at them. " to him!", I whisper loud enough for only her to hear.
posted on 13-Jan-2003 7:58:58 PM by qt4167013

I frown at Serena. She so wants this to work out.

"Rena, let fate take it's course." I say soothingly to her.

She nods and begins to rip her paper napkin into little parts.

I reach out and grab her hand. I squeeze it lightly and give her a reassured smile.

"Let fate take it's course, let fate take its course..." She mumbled under her breath.

Soon we see Maria's head shoot straight up as we turn and see Michael Gueirn walk through the door.

"I guess fate really is taking it's course." I whisper to Serena.

She sends me a terrified look and I laugh at her.

I just sit back, and let fate take it's course.
I just started a new fic....its on the dreamer board, check it out. Its called THE SPY GAME, I really want people to post on it. I think its good but thats your decision!

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posted on 14-Jan-2003 5:14:01 PM by Liz_Parker

Uh-oh. Guerin can't be here, he just can't, this ruins everything!

"What's he doing here?", I whisper softly

Kyle and Derek shrug and I glare at Michael as he passes....he better not try anything with Maria, or he'll have me to answer to.
posted on 14-Jan-2003 6:50:04 PM by Cominatcha

I feel something start to rise deep inside of myself when I see Maria with that guy. I don't even know him and I already hate his fuckin' guts.

I guess I could have had Maria. Forever. I ruined it. I slept with Mellissa or whatever. Now, I've lost her. Forever.

I walk right by. I don't stop to say anything, not with Serena there. I'm not one to mess with a pregnant woman, especially not THAT pregnant woman . . .
posted on 14-Jan-2003 8:56:03 PM by Liz_Parker

Maria keeps stealing glances at Michael and I sigh, you try to do something nice for someone and they try to get back up to their ex's.

"I'm uh....gonna go to the bathroom", I say and stand up making sure to walk right past does he always wind up exactly where we don't need him.

I walk to the bathroom and splash nice cold water on my face and sigh again. I sit on the couch and think of what it'll be like to actually have the baby and Kyle always gone.


"Shhh....God, I'm a horrible mother.....Where's Kyle or Maria....they can always make you calm down", then breaking down slowly."

Maria walking in and helping but handing the baby back and saying sorry then walking back out and Kyle coming in and out all the time.

*End of thoughts*

I shake my head and walk back out and sit next to Kyle to find Derek sitting on his side alone.

"Uh...guys, where's Maria?", I ask nervously and start ripping up my napkin again.
posted on 16-Jan-2003 1:29:47 PM by Cominatcha

I couldn't take it anymore. Derek and I have nothing in common at all, and Kyle was pushing us together, literally. And it sure didn't help that Michael had sat in a seat where I could see him perfectly and where our eyes always seemed to meet.

I can't take this anymore. This life. I came to New York for a new start, a break from LA, and now I don't know why I did. LA and New York are exactly the same. The same environment, the same atmosphere, and the same stupid people!

That's why, after the wedding, I'm leaving . . .
posted on 16-Jan-2003 8:11:27 PM by Liz_Parker

I sigh as I see Maria with him. I go through all this trouble with Derek and she winds up with him anyways.

We get the ticket and pay for it then I walk right past her making sure she notices I'm mad.

She looks down and I walk off.

The last thing they need is to worry about I'll just give thm something worry over, I think and walk off quickly ignoring Kyle calling after me.
posted on 16-Jan-2003 9:12:45 PM by qt4167013

"Serena! Serena!" I yell after her.

I get up and run after her.

Serena used to be star of the basketball team, but with about 8 pounds extra weight she was definitly slower.

"Rena, let fate take its course." I say warmly.
posted on 17-Jan-2003 8:32:50 AM by Cominatcha

There's no question in my mind who they're talking about. They're talking about me and Maria. Fate. Let it take it's course. If this is the course fate's taking, I'm not so sure I like it.

Maria doesn't say a word to me. She leaves the restaurant and she leaves her friends, and she leaves me.

I wonder if she'll ever come back . . .

Hey, I was wondering if you guys maybe wanted to do Kyle and Serena's wedding next?
posted on 18-Jan-2003 10:01:47 AM by Liz_Parker

"Will you stop saying that?! It's annoying!!", I yell at him and start off in a jog....stupid extra weight really keeps you down.

He sighs and runs after me and grabs me again. "The only reason I keep saying it is because it's the ruth...hey, no more arguing,ok? We're getting married soon", he says and grabs my hand again.

"Fine....have it your way". I sigh and look behind us.
posted on 18-Jan-2003 9:36:10 PM by Liz_Parker
posted on 18-Jan-2003 11:27:04 PM by qt4167013

"Listen Rena. I want whats best for Ria too, but come on. We need to let them live their own lives. We can't babysit Maria forever. We have our own baby coming soon, and when she is grown up, we will have to care for her or him and than and only than will we be able to tell it 'no dates till your 25."

Serena put on a weak smile.

"God I hope so Kyle."
posted on 19-Jan-2003 10:12:54 AM by Liz_Parker

I sigh....why is it that everyone seems to think that just because I'm pregnant that they can boss me around? I am not a child!

A little later on, we get home and I sit down and turn on the TV "There's nothing to watch!!!", I grumble and keep flipping through channels

Kyle grabs my arm. "Your mad aren't you?", he aska and I just shrug and continue looking at the TV.

He then turns it off and makes me look at him. "I know you love stop bieng stubborn right now!", he glares at me and I pull my arm away. "Leave me alone Kyle Valenti", I tell him and start walking to my room.
posted on 19-Jan-2003 6:13:09 PM by Cominatcha
hmm . . . a little trouble in paradise? I'm still here. just wanted to let you know that. I just wanna let you guys continue with the serena/kyle storyline for right now. then we should do the wedding.
posted on 19-Jan-2003 7:28:57 PM by Liz_Parker
Okies *happy* Just gotta wait for Madison to post *happy*
posted on 19-Jan-2003 8:02:31 PM by qt4167013
sorry... here, this should make up for it


I yell out an angry sigh.

"Serena, your pregnant, being pregnant means that people wait on you hand and foot and I go run out and buy you whatever food your craving for at three in the morning. I will not let you subject the baby to any pain." I say angerly.

Serena snorts.

"Just because I am pregnant does not mean I am invalid." She spat out.

"Stress is not good for the baby! I need you to lay down. And yes you are invalid." I say angerly. This is the last straw.

"Don't you love me?" She asks crying.

I kneel down.

"Oh Rena, stop." I say, I know she is faking.

the fake tears stop and now she just looks annoyed.

"Just leave me alone."

"Fine Rena, so be it. But when you need something I am going to just let you know that you told me to leave you alone." I say spitfully.

"Than your sleeping on the couch." She says angerly and slams the bedroom door.

I angerly throw myself on the couch.

Later that night I feel myself being jerked awake by Serena.

"Kyle. KYLE!" She whispers.

"What?" I ask annoyed.

"I need grapefruit." She said loudly.

"Fine." I say gurdgingly.

I go to the grocery store and by grapefruit.

Ok, I know I said I wouldn't do this but I do love her.

I come back an hour later and hand her the grapefruit.

"Whats this?" She asks frowning.

"Grapefruit." I say.

"No, I wanted pink grapefruit, this is yellow. Can't you do anything right Kyle?" She asks angerly throwing the eight dollar fruit in the garbage.

I go out again and come back with a pink grapefruit.

"KYLE! I don't want seeds in my grapefruit! Go out again."

Finally I get her the right one and go off to bed.

I angerly put the blanket around me and fall asleep.

I soon feel myself being jerked awake.

"What!?" I ask angerly.

"I love you." Serena says and plants a kiss on my forhead.

I sigh contently. God I love her.
posted on 19-Jan-2003 9:21:06 PM by Liz_Parker

I sigh as I pull away from him. "I'm sorry....", I say and plop down on the ground.

He kinda nods and sits up. Why does pregnancy have to have you so agitated so much?

Oh well, nothing to do about it.....hormones are bad. And they can really get on your fiance's nerves....the wedding's getting closer and closer and my nerves are on high.

~~~~~~~~~3 days later.....the wedding~~~~~~

"Oh God....Oh can't be my wedding day already......I have so much to do...dresses,hair everything!", I say and start panicking and look at Maria.

"Help!....I can't do this alone.....and the whole groom can't see bride till wedding rule is in effect so please HELP!", I plead with her and she smiles and gives in.

I grin.....thank God for best friends!
posted on 19-Jan-2003 9:28:59 PM by qt4167013

"So, I am getting married today." I say calmly to Alex.

He grins and I imagine Serena.

Shes probably is freaking out right now.

I sigh and grab a beer. The games on.
kyle is just relaxing...believe me when the time comes he'll be freaking out
posted on 19-Jan-2003 10:10:01 PM by Liz_Parker
posted on 20-Jan-2003 8:32:56 PM by Liz_Parker
BUMP! *bounce*

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posted on 21-Jan-2003 12:19:51 AM by Roswell428
I AM SO SORRY!!!!! I am so incredibly sorry that I have been gone for so long- everything has gone wrong over the holidays- first my grandmother died and then right after that my computer broke (the monitor fell and cracked open) and it is now finally back in working order (thank God!). I have been so computer deprived these past couple of weeks (because I had no way of getting on), it is not even believeable! As a result of all of the commotion, I have fallen SO behind in all of my stories and the RPGs I'm in, not to mention all of my emails and bmails and stuff for other sites, so it is going to take me a while to catch up.

I am posting this in all of the RPGs I'm in (that I HOPE I'm still in) just to let everyone know what happened to me. Once again- I am SO sorry- please forgive my long absence. Thank you all for being so patient with me.

Let me just tell you how glad I am to be back up at school, and that the break is finally over!

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posted on 21-Jan-2003 10:25:55 PM by Liz_Parker

Maria and me are in a hurry. Calling everyone, them asking them to help and the next thing I know my apartments just about full of diffrent people.

I betcha anything Kyle's sitting on his butt not caring what's going on. That's so Kyle, I swear. I wonder what he'll do when I go into labor....I'd like to see him all cool and relaxed then!

We get most of the arrangements figured out and we go to the beauty parlor. God, I hate being all dolled up. I'd much rather be in a t-shirt and jeans. But then again,it is my wedding and it might wind up in magazines everywhere. The main disadvantage of becoming Mrs. Kyle Valenti.

Oh well, I love him, what can you do about it? And he does just about anything for me. I smile to myself as I think about him and frown inwardly thnking of how Maria must be feeling right now. A wedding going on around her and she's in the middle of a love rollercoaster.

I wish I could do something, but right now my top priority is the wedding. I have to keep on track. I just hope that I don't wind up getting cold feet, or get sick or anything. I take a deep breath and look at Maria who has on a plastered smile for everyone but I can see right through it. I know her better than that.

My main wish for her is to find someone her equal. Someone she can love for the rest of her life and not have to worry. Like I have with Kyle. Why can't everything have a story book ending?
posted on 21-Jan-2003 10:28:56 PM by qt4167013
I'll post later! this is great!
posted on 22-Jan-2003 7:26:58 AM by Liz_Parker
K....anyone know where Ashley's ben for the past 3 days?
posted on 22-Jan-2003 12:10:22 PM by Cominatcha
Ooh, I'm here!! Sorry!! I've been addicted to the Sims again.


I never thought that this day would come. I feel like a proud mother or something. It's kinda weird, because Serena is nothing like my daughter, but I just can't believe that she is getting married and having a baby. She's getting married to the man she LOVES. She's having a baby with the man she LOVES.

She's IN LOVE.

Serena asked me to be her maid of honor, which I find very flattering. Not only do I get to take part in the wedding, but I get to be the maid of honor. Wow.

Alex is, of course, Kyle's best man. I swear, the two of them are more like brothers than friends.

It's almost time now. Liz is out there with Max. They've been getting really close lately.

Now all I can do is wait . . .

Sorry, it's short, but I'm at school. Lata!!
posted on 22-Jan-2003 1:46:20 PM by qt4167013

OOOOOOOO I love the Sims! I just got unleashed and cannot wait to play it. I am sorry, I'll post later ok? I have to study for my LAST final! yay!!!!
posted on 22-Jan-2003 5:04:14 PM by Cominatcha
good luck with the LAST final!!
posted on 22-Jan-2003 8:40:43 PM by Liz_Parker
posted on 24-Jan-2003 7:41:42 AM by Liz_Parker

I smile at Maria. She's been my rock through everything, it's almost as if we were never parted.

We get the final touches made on the dresses and make-up. Maybe I should call over to Alex's and ask Kyle if he even cares that he happens to be getting married in 3 and a half hours.

Oh well, nothing I can do about it. I look in the mirror and sigh. "God, I hate wearing dresses...." I mutter as Maria walks over. "Yeah....but you look great....that's all that matters", she says with a smile.

I smile back and hug her.

"What was that for?", she asks me through a little laugh.

"For being a sister and a friend and everything else".
posted on 24-Jan-2003 11:56:53 AM by Lizzie_Parker17
Do you know whats up with our max?
Do you want me to B-mail the user.
I haven't seen them in a long time.
Oh and Isabel is abck I see so Alex will have something to do!
posted on 24-Jan-2003 12:45:50 PM by Cominatcha
scifidreamer is both Max and Tess. I bmailed her already but she hasn't posted yet.
posted on 25-Jan-2003 3:49:04 PM by Lizzie_Parker17
alrighty just checking!
posted on 26-Jan-2003 3:33:06 PM by Liz_Parker
posted on 26-Jan-2003 3:34:32 PM by Cominatcha

scifidreamer, where are you?
posted on 26-Jan-2003 3:36:49 PM by Liz_Parker
Haven't seen her in ages *sad*
posted on 26-Jan-2003 4:39:40 PM by Cominatcha
I know, I haven't seen her since page 5 or something.

posted on 27-Jan-2003 7:53:11 AM by Liz_Parker
Hey Ashley....can U post a Maria part plz?
posted on 27-Jan-2003 6:41:01 PM by Cominatcha
Sure, just let me think about where we are for a minute. hmm . . . brb w/ a part
posted on 27-Jan-2003 6:46:16 PM by Cominatcha

Oh, God, this girl knows how to get me to cry, that's for sure. I'm standing right in front of Serena on her wedding day, and I'm supposed to be supporting her, not crying, but she just called me her . . . her sister. Oh, God! Here I go again!

"Ria, don't cry." she tells me. "This is gonna be a happy day."

"I know." I say. "But, Rena, after the wedding, you know that . . . you know that I'm leaving, right?"

I see a horrified expression come across her face. Maybe she didn't know after all . . .

Sorry, it's short and sweet, but that's all I had in my tiny little brain at the moment.
posted on 27-Jan-2003 9:38:10 PM by Liz_Parker

"Your....Your leaving?", I ask. No one told me about this!

I'm supposed to be happy, this is my wedding day after all, but how am I supposed to be happy when I was just told my best friend is leaving?

I back up and sit in a chair and put my head in my hands. I can't help it but I start crying.

"Aw Rena, don't cry please....not over me", I hear her say.

"How can I not cry when I'm pregnant and getting married, and your leaving me to fend this place al by my self?!", I ask through tears.

She looks down and I lean back and close my eyes.....I'm not so sure this day is so happy after all.
posted on 28-Jan-2003 8:41:07 AM by Cominatcha

I hear the music begin to play, and I know that's my cue. I tell Serena that everything will be okay, that we'll still keep in touch and stuff through the phone and email and letters and all of that stuff, and that this is going to be the happiest day of her life no matter what.

I pat her on the back and then give her a quick hug before it's my turn to walk down the aisle as her maid of honor. I put on my best smile, but it fades when I notice who's there.


Who invited him?

I walk past him and take my place next to Liz and we wait for Serena to walk down the aisle next and marry the man she loves . . .
posted on 28-Jan-2003 5:34:17 PM by Liz_Parker

I take a deep breath and fix my make up real fast and pull myself together.

I walk down the aisle slowly and take another breath. So many people are here, I didn't think that there would be this many. Maybe their Kyle's football buddies or something. Oh God, cameras!

I get to the alter and smile at Kyle. Here goes nothing.
posted on 28-Jan-2003 7:16:57 PM by Cominatcha
Where's Madison?

Great part!!

BUMP *bounce*
posted on 28-Jan-2003 8:12:34 PM by Liz_Parker
Dunno, hopefully she'll come on later
posted on 28-Jan-2003 8:26:28 PM by qt4167013
I am here! I am here!


I wasn't nervous. I swear.

Only know I am.

I see her smiling and I feel like running away.

I feel the sweat drip down and now I am nervous.

Oh crap I am getting married.
posted on 28-Jan-2003 8:36:40 PM by Liz_Parker
lol, nice!
posted on 29-Jan-2003 5:54:27 PM by Liz_Parker
posted on 29-Jan-2003 9:47:48 PM by Liz_Parker

I take a deep breath and grab on to Kyle's hands. He's nervous, I can tell. He may be able to hide it to the others.....but I can see right through him.

I take one last look at everyone behind us and smile. I know Maria's leaving....but I have to be strong for right now, like Kyle said, no stressing out the baby.

Well, the baby might not be getting stressed, but I sure am.

I feel Kyle's hand gripping mine so I look up and put on a small smile....time for the vows.
posted on 30-Jan-2003 7:21:21 PM by Liz_Parker
posted on 1-Feb-2003 11:14:10 AM by Cominatcha

I'm so happy for Serena, I am. This is going to be the most important day of her life. Getting married to the man she loves but never thought she would. Starting a new life where she'll have plenty of money and a daughter and a ring on her finger. She's going to be so happy. She'll live a life of bliss, I'm sure.

Even if I'm not here, she'll still have my life.

As Kyle and Serena exchange their vows, I feel my heart break, because I know that's something I'll never have now. I've been damaged. The very man who damaged me is sitting in the middle of the church all by himself now, watching me instead of the wedding.

I put on my best smile, though, because no one needs to see a sad-looking maid of honor . . .

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posted on 1-Feb-2003 5:15:00 PM by Liz_Parker
Waiting on Madison....I know she's, I'm waiting hehe
posted on 1-Feb-2003 6:45:33 PM by Cominatcha
Yeah, I remember Freshman year. It was kinda hectic, you know, starting high-school.

We're gonna be able to post this on one of the boards soon when it's finished!! Omg, we could be the first ever finished RPG!! Setting records!! That should be really interesting to see what people think of it. When I do post it up there, what board do you think I should put it on?
posted on 2-Feb-2003 11:06:58 AM by Liz_Parker
lol, I'm a freshman to, yeah it's hectic...but I'm making all A's *happy* (at least on 3 weeks progress report).

That would be cool if whenever we finished U posted it on a board...maybe U can post it on the UC/Slash, dunno
posted on 2-Feb-2003 1:27:48 PM by qt4167013
I am soooo here! gosh I am really sorry! And thanks for understanding. Mandy- your such a show off ms. all a's!


Once we start, my nervousness floats away.

I stare into the face of the woman I love and I know that I am doing the thing I want to and that I love her.

We go through our vows and I began to feel my eyes well up with tears.

God. This is it.
posted on 2-Feb-2003 2:30:55 PM by Cominatcha
Yeah, I probably should post it on the U/C board because Kyle and Serena really aren't a C/C couple. But, then again, Michael and Maria are, and so are Liz and Max. More people might read it on the C/C board. I think I'm going to post the first couple of parts on the C/C baord right now, so you might wanna check out what people have to say about it!!


The vows have been said. Oh, my God, it's time now. I just can't believe it! My little Serena! She's getting married! She's going to be someone's wife! Oh, my God!

I now pronounce you husband and wife . . .

Here it goes!

You may kiss the bride . . .

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posted on 2-Feb-2003 5:18:31 PM by Liz_Parker
Great part *happy*
posted on 3-Feb-2003 11:03:29 AM by Cominatcha
Thanks!! I posted about the first three parts of it on the c/c board yesterday, but only one person has responded. Check it out, though!! I think she liked it!!
posted on 3-Feb-2003 8:23:15 PM by Liz_Parker

Wow.....I'm actually officially Mrs. Kyle Valenti. Who would of ever thought that would happen?

As I pull away from Kyle I smile. He actually had tears in his eyes. I reach up and stroke his cheek softly before we turn to walk back down the aisle.

Who ever woulda thought? Kyle can actually cry. We walk down the aisle hand in hand and everyone's clapping.

I look at husband and smile. A new husband,a new life, and a new baby. Just one thing's gonna be more Maria.
posted on 4-Feb-2003 12:33:52 PM by Cominatcha

The church begins to clear out as everyone heads for the reception. I was going to head on out, too, when I realized that I had lost my necklace. I sigh and then head back on into the church to look for it, find it, and still make it to the reception before the cake's picked over. What can I say? Cake is my weakness.

Well, I have one other weakness, too, but I don't wanna talk about him right now.

I rush back into the what I thought was an empty church and stopped dead in my tracks when I saw that there was still one person left in there.

Michael Guerin.

I feel my knees start to give way underneath me, but I force myself to stand as he gazes at me. I can't do this. I just can't.

God, where's Serena when you need her?
posted on 4-Feb-2003 5:14:33 PM by Liz_Parker
Great part *happy*
posted on 4-Feb-2003 5:54:58 PM by Cominatcha
posted on 4-Feb-2003 6:29:26 PM by Liz_Parker
Ur welcome *happy*
posted on 4-Feb-2003 9:12:53 PM by qt4167013

Its over. And I am still alive.

Serena looks happy but I know she is bummed out. She needs Maria.

I sigh and look over at Maria. She is hovering by the cake. Her one weakness.

I lean over and whisper in Serena's ear.

Her eyes get big and she stands up.

"Hey everyone! Its boquet(sp?) time!" She says happily.

I watch Liz happily bounce behind Serena.

"Come on Ria!" I tell her.

She gives me a wary smile and stands behind Liz.

Serena grins evily and throws the flowers.

posted on 4-Feb-2003 10:26:22 PM by Liz_Parker

I smile softly. I deserve to have some fun right? I secretley hope Maria catches my flowers. Might do her some good.

I turn around and plaster on a smile as Maria and Liz start play fighting over the bouquet.

Kyle seems to be more relieved now. God, if he's like this at our wedding who knows how he'll be when I actually have the baby.

We walk over and sit at a table. I can just see how high of a bill this is gonna be. I know Kyle told me to not worry, but I can't help it....I was raised to worry.

I can just imagine how it'll be when word seeks into the media about the baby....and when it's born how much camera's are gonna be around.

Oh well, I don't need to worry about the past or future right now....all that matters at this very moment is that I'm happy,Kyle's happy, the baby's healthy....and that Maria is most likely leaving tonight.

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posted on 4-Feb-2003 11:10:29 PM by qt4167013

I smile when Maria gets the bouquet.

I give Serena's hand a squeeze. Please God, don't let Maria leave. please.
posted on 5-Feb-2003 12:39:02 PM by Cominatcha

I'm leaving! Don't you understand that? Nothing is going to stop me.


No one.

But even as I tell myself that, I know I'm lying, because the thoughts of leaving my friends and this "new" life are starting to kill me . . .
posted on 5-Feb-2003 6:23:18 PM by Liz_Parker

I pull my hand away from Kyle's and look down. I know he can tell something's wrong.

He keeps on squeezing my hand. But god, I'm scared that if Maria leaves then everything will fall apart. Her club and everything.

Sure, her and Michael have had their ups and downs, but maybe....just maybe, he can talk some sense into her.
posted on 5-Feb-2003 6:27:09 PM by Cominatcha

I want Serena to enjoy her wedding. I want Kyle to enjoy it, too. But, how can I do that?

I know there's only one way to ensure that Kyle and Serena have a happy wedding.

I have to be happy, too. That's how great of friends they are.

But the only way that I'll be happy is if I talk to Michael.

And that's something that I really DON'T want to do.

But I will . . .
posted on 5-Feb-2003 7:29:51 PM by Liz_Parker
Great part *happy*
posted on 6-Feb-2003 8:28:28 PM by Cominatcha
posted on 6-Feb-2003 9:10:25 PM by Liz_Parker
Ur welcome *happy*
posted on 7-Feb-2003 8:37:18 AM by Cominatcha

I'm surprised when Maria grabs me by my arm and pulls me away from the busy reception, back into the church. I don't say anything. I only follow her.

"What the hell are you doing here!" she asks me when we're out of earshot of everyone else. "No one even invited you!"

"I invited myself." I reply simply.


"Because I wanted to come." It's a complete lie. I've always hated weddings. The only reason I came was so that I could see her. I watched her walk down the aisle and pretended that she was the bride and I was standing up there as the groom.

"I don't understand it." I tell her. "Kyle and Serena are happy. Why can't we be?"

I see tears welling up in her eyes. "Because what we have is not as special as what they have."

I pretend not to feel hurt. "How can you be so sure?"

"Because you slept with that . . . that other girl!" she shouts at me, the tears spilling over.

"It was a mistake," I tell her, "just one big mistake."

I hope she'll understand me . . .
posted on 7-Feb-2003 8:39:26 AM by qt4167013

I smile happily as Maria and Michael dissapear from the party.

I lean over to Serena.

"Phase one complete. Now on to phase two."

Serena grins at me evilly.
posted on 7-Feb-2003 12:47:01 PM by Cominatcha
posted on 7-Feb-2003 6:43:59 PM by Liz_Parker

"And just what would that be?" I ask with a smile and he just pulls me closer to him.

I sigh softly. All of this went by so fast....I wonder what my mom would say about this.

We slowly walk away from the crowd. "So, Mr.Valenti...what now?" I ask grinning, I am now officialy Mrs. Valenti. God,I can't wait to get out of this's gorgeus and all, but it's just a little bit tight.

I sit down on the curb and take a deep breath. Fresh air....thank God!

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posted on 7-Feb-2003 11:17:03 PM by qt4167013
I think you misunderstood me Mandy. I didn't mean sex! you dirty minded girl! lol!
posted on 8-Feb-2003 2:03:56 PM by Cominatcha
posted on 10-Feb-2003 9:36:58 PM by Liz_Parker
lol, I know *tongue* They could just talk hehe
posted on 10-Feb-2003 9:44:19 PM by qt4167013


"Phase two, my Juliet, is you say? Add a little music, than wine, and than bam! Perfect couple?"

"Not so fast Romeo! Maria is going to kill us." Serena said laughing.

"Nope, were going to show her all the reasons not to leave. Starting with Michael."
posted on 10-Feb-2003 9:52:41 PM by Liz_Parker

"Kyle...I want her to stay....but I just don't want to lose her friendship in the process", I say with a frown.

"Don't worry....everything will come out happily ever after,ok?", he says and grabs my hand.

"Ok.....but if anything bad happens, I'm blaming you!", I sigh and lean back on him.....dear God, let this work.
posted on 11-Feb-2003 8:37:27 AM by Cominatcha

I realize what he's trying to say. In fact, I think I've known it all along. The reason why he's been hanging around me since that incident now is because he wants to make things right.

And, God . . . it was just a mistake!

But something's not right about this. He can't just invite himself to someone else's wedding. He'd have to be invited by either the bride or the groom and . . .

Oh, my, God!

"Serena! Kyle!" I run out of the church in search of my scheming and manipulative friends . . .
posted on 11-Feb-2003 8:38:40 AM by Cominatcha
You know, we should finish this in time for the move. You know? The board move.
posted on 11-Feb-2003 6:51:37 PM by Liz_Parker
Yeah...but should Serena at least have the baby first?
posted on 11-Feb-2003 6:57:09 PM by Cominatcha
yeah, that's what I was thinking. a happy ending . . . aww . . . kodak moment! *happy*
posted on 11-Feb-2003 7:00:56 PM by Liz_Parker
hehe, can U write some kidna part so my wheels ill get moving? lol
posted on 11-Feb-2003 10:07:05 PM by qt4167013
I'll make a banner! it will be great! it will be done tomorrow if thats ok
posted on 12-Feb-2003 6:57:38 PM by Cominatcha
Ooh, yea! A banner!
posted on 12-Feb-2003 6:59:15 PM by Cominatcha

I don't want Maria to run out of the church after her friends, but I gotta admit that this should be pretty funny. She's gonna scream at them like crazy, I know that. I haven't known Ms. DeLuca very long, but I do know that she's not the type that likes to be fooled so easily like that.

Yeah, this is gonna be funny . . .
posted on 12-Feb-2003 7:13:18 PM by qt4167013
I'll make the banner tonight k? what do you want on it? I can't make manips (when I put Liz's face on like, someone elses) so I can't put Kyle and Serena's faces on a body. sorry but I ll promise to still make it good! who do you want for Serena? I might just go google search for pictures of pregnant brides...hmmm lets see if I can find one
posted on 12-Feb-2003 9:51:56 PM by qt4167013
ok, there are no pictures of serena or kyle, iam sorry. I had a great picture for the club but it was invalid. This ones ok, but it was great! I am really sorry. I'll try, but this one looks good too.


oh, and the quote is,
"How do you choose between the thing you have always wanted, and the thing you never thought you would."

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posted on 15-Feb-2003 2:49:15 PM by Liz_Parker
Bump!.....How we gonna get going?
posted on 15-Feb-2003 4:28:30 PM by Cominatcha
Hmm . . . My little brain is spinning with all of the possibilities here . . . I'm gonna jump forward a bit . . . okay, a lot . . .


It's amazing how time flies, isn't it? I mean, it seems like just yesterday that I was watching two of my best friends get married while watching this guy watch me. Now, things are different.

Michael and I found each other again, and I've decided not to leave New York, because, truth be told, I have found a new life here in New York. I've found Michael, and that's something I'll never find back in LA. I've even given him half of my club, since he gave me all of the money that famous artist gave him. Now, that palace isn't just a club, it's an art museum, too. We both got something out of it.

What lies ahead for Michael and I? I don't know. I don't believe that I'll ever have the kind of life Serena and Kyle do. I might. Maybe.

As for Serena and Kyle . . . she looks like she's about to burst, and he looks like he's about to crack from waiting around on her hand and foot. It's kinda funny.

I've just gotta keep hoping that we might all have a storybook ending after all . . .

posted on 15-Feb-2003 5:32:30 PM by Liz_Parker

God I hate being pregnant. The only advantage of it is being waited on.

Sure, Kyle hates it, well...that's because he's the one doing the waiting.

I look down at my stomach and sigh. The baby should be here any day now.

We finally went to the doctor to find out what is a few weeks back. A little girl. We've been thinking up names.

We're pretty much set on Elise Marie Valenti.

Not really sure where we got Elise from, but Marie is from Maria.

I'm planning on asking Maria to be her godmother. And I hope she'll accept.

The baby kicks which makes me wince. God, the sooner the baby comes out the better.
posted on 15-Feb-2003 5:34:23 PM by qt4167013
iam just waiting for the baby to come
posted on 15-Feb-2003 6:11:41 PM by qt4167013

"Honey, I'm home!" I scream, throwing my gym bag on the floor.

"Honey?" I ask.

"KYLE!!!!!" I hear a scream and I run to Serena's room.

"RENA!" I scream, panicked.

"Kyle! I" She said from the bed.

"Oh god." I say and I pick her up. I run out of the room.

"Kyle? Where are you going?" A old lady's voice rang out.

"Mrs. Johnson!!!! Please lock up my apartment." I say out of breath, as I run down the hall.

I carry her to the elevator and push all the bottons.

We reach the floor and I shove Serena in the back seat.

"Kyle!!!!!!!!" She says irritably.

"One sec." I get in the drivers seat.

I reach the hospital and run into the waiting room.


posted on 15-Feb-2003 6:22:11 PM by Liz_Parker

Oh God,oh God,oh God!! Is all that's going through my head right now.

Kyle just ran inside. Who knows what kinda people are in there. I see Kyle run out and he helps the doctrs get me out of the car and onto some bed thingy.

" now!", I yell at him as we get inside.

He just nods as they pull me into some room. God this room is so big. I wish I could just be at home right now.

I wince softly as they put an IV in my arm.

"Just get this kid out!", I scream as I feel a big boost of pain.
posted on 16-Feb-2003 1:16:54 PM by Cominatcha
Great parts! *happy* I was laughin' when Serena was like, "Just get this kid out."



Michael and I were out hittin' a few clubs before it was time for my own to open up, but we traveled way south of New York City. We're so far away, and he's speeding down the highway now. He told me that he better drive cuz he knows how to get me there fast. I believe him now. He's driving so fast, I feel like I might throw up.

Isn't it Serena's job to throw up during this time, not mine?

Well, at least I'm prepared. I've been prepared to rush to the hospital for my chica for weeks now. In the backseat, I have a balloon that says CONGRATULATIONS on it, though it is very much deflated now. Oh, well. The balloon can wait. I've got chocolates, though, for when she gets hungry, and I've even got a hallmark card and a camera. And a book, just in case she gets bored while waiting for the baby.

I doubt that'll happen.

Yep, I'm ready for Serena's baby to be born. I hope she is . . .
posted on 17-Feb-2003 11:31:44 AM by Cominatcha
BUMPING *bounce* !
posted on 17-Feb-2003 9:49:24 PM by Liz_Parker
posted on 18-Feb-2003 9:17:27 PM by qt4167013

I am going to be a daddy! I am going to be a daddy!

I am so delieriously excited.

I stop in the hall and grab a random person.

"I AM GOING TO BE A DADDY!" I tell them.

They walk away and I open the window.

"I AM GOING TO BE A DAD!" I scream.

posted on 18-Feb-2003 9:23:06 PM by Liz_Parker

"KYLE!", I scream.....God, why does he have to go around acting like a child now?!

He runs into the room. "Yeah?", he asks.

I grab his shirt and pull him down. "Kyle James Valenti....if you go off on a "I'm gonna be a daddy" fit again....I will personally kill you,got it?"
posted on 21-Feb-2003 6:09:25 PM by Liz_Parker
BUMP!....Where is everybody? :(