posted on 26-Dec-2002 4:45:59 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax
I remember watchin dis movie with some friendz a while back. It wuz called da princess and da marine. It wuz soo sweet I feel In love with it. I was thinkin bout doing it as a rpg. Its about dis princess(Liz) who lives in arabia(but she ont have ta live in arabia) she's kind of like da rebel. She doesn't like how's she's bossed around. So one day she calls any random number. It happens to be a number to one of the marines. It's for michael, Alex and Max. So she says wanna meet me at the mall. So when Max and Liz meet they like fall in love but it has to be a secret. But her mom finds out, and she isn't alowd to do anything with the boy she isn't alowd to leave the house. Liz writes letters to max, and then for her sister's birthday(maria) shegets to go the mall and when she see max again and she goes to buy her sister a neckless in the mall and she asks the clerk lady to send the max dis note. He gives one back saying will you marry me. She says yes. She sneaks out and they get married and they live life together running but also bein in the army. Max's family luvs Liz. Liz was very rich so she really doesn't know how to do anything so soon she learns everything. U can have a romance between Alex, And Isabel, and Maria and Michael if you want. Just tell me, and we'll do it, it'l be like da sisters fall in love and dey run away together.

Max~tabasco sauce
Liz's Mom~
Max's Parents~
The clerk lady~ Me

*~*Optional Characters*~*

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posted on 26-Dec-2002 4:58:41 PM by qt4167013
can I be Alex? I can probably play other characters if no one else can also!
posted on 26-Dec-2002 4:59:32 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax
sure thanx for joining
posted on 26-Dec-2002 5:00:44 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax
n if u want u can be other characters ill let u know if we need any
posted on 26-Dec-2002 5:08:05 PM by moonbeam4747
I totally LOVED this movie too. If its okay with you I would love to be Maria. It'll be my first time writing her, but I think I might just be able to pull her off. So PLEASE may I be Maria?
posted on 26-Dec-2002 5:36:28 PM by Galita

I want to be Isabel plz. I would really love it
posted on 26-Dec-2002 5:39:47 PM by Liz_Parker
Hi, could U like add a Serena to be Liz's best friend or something? I like the idea *happy*
posted on 26-Dec-2002 6:06:31 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax
sure thanx for joining!

posted on 26-Dec-2002 9:29:23 PM by qt4167013
Hey...just asking, if you have a Serena can Kyle be her boyfriend? I could be kyle. If you check the fic fighter it is a good example of Liz_parker and I having interaction. We both write Kyle and Serena really well. Sorry if it isnt' too much trouble...thanx
posted on 26-Dec-2002 9:34:41 PM by tabasco sauce
Can I be Max? It's been a long time since I've been in an RPG. This one looked to good to resist.

posted on 27-Dec-2002 2:40:45 AM by moonbeam4747
WooHoo! Thanks. I'm just so excited to start posting. This is just gonna be great! Okay, so I had a little too much pecan pie and I'm a little bit hyper. So, I'll go away now, b-bye! Ooohhh, I almost forgot, I'll temp any characters you need me to, so with that said I'm really gonna go this time.
posted on 27-Dec-2002 11:25:54 AM by LizParkerEvans4evax
sure there can be an kyle, and do u still want to be alex?
Sure you can be max thanx for joining!
Glad ur soo exited I can't wait either!
posted on 27-Dec-2002 11:46:13 AM by JBehrsGurl
make me Linda! You beautiful girl you!!! *wink*
posted on 27-Dec-2002 11:48:05 AM by LizParkerEvans4evax
ELENA I AINT BEAUTIFUL! and im makin ya linda!

posted on 27-Dec-2002 11:50:10 AM by JBehrsGurl
Yeay! I'm Linda and You're BEAUUUUUUUUUUTIFUL!

La nina es muchismo belladina!
posted on 27-Dec-2002 11:50:56 AM by LizParkerEvans4evax
JBehrsGurl originally wrote:
Yeay! I'm Linda and You're BEAUUUUUUUUUUTIFUL!

La nina es muchismo belladina!

beautiful mah ass!
posted on 27-Dec-2002 11:54:02 AM by Cominatcha
Do you think that maybe I could be Michael? I love the guy, but I don't know how good I'd be.
posted on 27-Dec-2002 11:54:43 AM by LizParkerEvans4evax
posted on 27-Dec-2002 11:54:48 AM by qt4167013
Yeah, I am still going to be Alex! THANKS!
posted on 27-Dec-2002 11:55:00 AM by JBehrsGurl
Everybody disreguard that last statement by Nya, she's delirious... Too much JBoog I think...


My statement still stands! Thank you and GOOD NIGHT!
posted on 27-Dec-2002 11:56:05 AM by LizParkerEvans4evax
posted on 27-Dec-2002 11:57:17 AM by LizParkerEvans4evax
posted on 27-Dec-2002 11:58:03 AM by Cominatcha
great!! I'm really excited to start. thanks for letting me be michael!! I'll try my best!!
posted on 27-Dec-2002 11:58:19 AM by JBehrsGurl
Good! Than you KNOW you gorgeous you American Idol/Queen Teen America clone! LOL!!!


p.s. very true, you can never have too much JBoog... LOL
posted on 27-Dec-2002 2:57:05 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax
HAHA MAH ASS! Gorgeous LoL! I wish!
posted on 27-Dec-2002 2:59:10 PM by JBehrsGurl
People are we almost ready to start? *looks at beautiful nya* Everyone she's so modest! I saw her pictures! She's soooo pretty! Ignore her when she says shes not!
posted on 27-Dec-2002 3:02:19 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax

My Life is so controlled. I can't do anything! My parents lock me up in this huge house. I never asked to be a princess! Never once! I HATE MY LIFE! I wish I could be like in those movies. The princesses who meet their price charmings. But No My PARENTS have to pic mine. Im under gaurd every single moment when will it stop! I have to call Linda she's the only one that can help!

LoL Elena!
posted on 27-Dec-2002 3:05:00 PM by JBehrsGurl
I'll be back later to post my part!

posted on 27-Dec-2002 3:10:52 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax
NU UH! LOL EVERYONEZ PROBABLY THINKIN WE ARE CRAZY! elena's da crazy one she thinks im pretty! LoL!
posted on 27-Dec-2002 8:44:47 PM by tabasco sauce
Hey Girls!

Thank you so much for letting me in on the party. I can't wait for the RPG to begin! Are we going to be writing character summaries, or are we going straight into the writing? I'm good either way.

And don't worry about the craziness! I'm exactly the same way. *happy* I think I'm going to like you guys.

posted on 28-Dec-2002 12:13:01 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax
LoL! Hey no problem happy to have you well we already started! SOO U can post write away! LoL! Yes It is crazy! But itll be fun too!
posted on 30-Dec-2002 5:04:47 AM by moonbeam4747

Sometimes I feel like I'm going to explode! I have all of these things to say, yet I'm not allowed to speak. The only one that truly understands me is Liz. The rest of my family just sees me as a rebelious pest. I can't help it! I just wasn't cut out for living in this male dominated society. In my dreams I picture a man that is secure enough in himself that he will allow me to speak my mind, without sending me to be stoned in the town square. But that's not the worst part of my life. The fact that day after day I have to watch my sister suffer is. Liz was meant for greater things than what she is offered here. I see her watch movies and I know what she feels, because I feel it too. Will our princesses ever come for us?

I hope that was ok. I love all the wackiness around here, it's great! As far as the story goes, I'm assuming we have decided to do the whole, Liz and her sisters run away thing. If I'm wrong tell me and I will adjust to suit.
posted on 30-Dec-2002 10:30:31 AM by LizParkerEvans4evax
yup that wus great! And yup they are running away!
posted on 30-Dec-2002 10:57:37 AM by Liz_Parker

I look at Maria and Liz and smile. Their sisters and all, but they are totally opposite eachother. I live with them, even though we are only best friends. We're more like sisters.

I met them along time ago. Our parents were friends, and we gradually gravitated towards eachother.

From then on we were the best of friends, and I moved in. At least I'm allowed to go out in the real world. Since they're so royal, they aren't allowed to. That's why when I do leave,I bring back little things for them. Books, cd's, things like that. Anything to show what "normal" people get to do.

I sigh. At least I have a boyfriend. Of course, no one knows about him. His name is Kyle Valenti and he's a really nice guy. I wish I could take Maria and Liz with me just once.

Well, Maria's birthday is coming up, so maybe I can take Liz to the mall or something. Maybe Liz will find her own prince charming....just maybe.
Sorry if that sucked!
posted on 30-Dec-2002 11:24:04 AM by LizParkerEvans4evax
it doesnt suck! everyone'z doin such a good job! Luvin it!

"So wut should we do?"

I say. Serena's she's got a great life. A nice boyfriend, she's gonna get married to him, her parents aprove.

Me n Maria on the other hand. It's difficult. Im the princess I have to be watched 24/7 my parents have to pick my husband. It sux that they have to do it for Maria too.

I always feel that im responsible for it. Maria should live a happy life. Marry who she wants. But we have to be living a protected life. Never be able to do anything ever.

posted on 30-Dec-2002 11:33:46 AM by JBehrsGurl

My poor princesses are so BORED. I feel so horrible that I havent been around to lift their spirits. How bad am I? Hmmm do I get a spanking for that? Ow! Oh do it again! No! Wait... Focus here Linda! I smack my face and shake my head, here goes.

I knock on the door to Liz's house.

In my hands is a bag. In this bag is the fun stuff. Its clothes that I know Liz and Maria NEVER wear. But tonight. Tonight they will have a taste of what its like to be normal -well... Royalty wise. I plan on taking the girls out on the town. Who knows, maybe they might meet their prince charming... I hate the fact that they wait for their parents to pick for them, they need to be FREE! I roll my eyes, who am I kidding?

I bang on the door, hell, whats taking so long? You'd think with all those damn servants someone would answer the door!

"Hellllllllllllo?! Beautiful Linda's at the door!" I scream and ring the bell several times.

a/n: Yea that was lame... LOL
posted on 30-Dec-2002 11:37:22 AM by LizParkerEvans4evax
lmao Elena! Great post! YES U R BEAUTIFUL LOL!

I hear Linda at da door. Linda'z one of my best friendz, as my otherz of course. She's soo beautiful. She likes to deny it but Im going to losen her up and make her admit it.*wink*

I get the door. "LINDA! MY BEAUTIFUL LINDA!" I say.

We all go into my room.

I notice a bag in her hand it looks very heavy.

"What you got in your bag Linda?" I asked.

She looks at me and smiles.
posted on 30-Dec-2002 11:44:56 AM by JBehrsGurl

I grin at Liz, "As official princess picker upper I am suppossed to show my girls a night out on the town. You will tell your mom's and dad's that I am taking you to a movie. We will all pile up in my SUV and party hardy. Ya'll with meh?" I ask the two doe eyes girls in front of me.

I know Liz is up for anything, I just need ta know if Maria is too. I know Serena's up for fun, this girl used to be a savage b4 she got locked down by Kyle. Not that she aint cool anymore tho.

"Well? What'll it be? Stay home. Or Have fun?" I weight it out with my hands.

I wait for their answer.
posted on 30-Dec-2002 3:21:07 PM by Liz_Parker

I smile softly. Linda always knew how to lighten up anyone's days. I wait for Maria and Liz to answer before I do. I don't wanna wind up being the only one going.

"Maria....Liz? Earth to the princesses?", I say waving my hands in front of their faces.

They snap out of it and quickly smile nodding for their answer.

We go up and change into some "normal" clothes. Maria and Liz go to tell their parents about the movies. They ask all the normal round of questions. "Where will it be?", "WHen does it end?". and on and on.

After they finally give in we leave. I climb into the back seat with Liz and Maria fiddles with her hair in the rearview mirror.

Maybe getting out in the real world will do them all some good.

"Hey Linda? Would it be ok if I invited Kyle to come along? Please?", I ask with a puppy look and she just rolls her eyes.
posted on 30-Dec-2002 4:29:23 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax

"OH HOLLA!" I scream.

Going out with Linda and Serena is the best. They know how to party.

"Wait we gotta stop off at ur house so we can change, My mom would never let me wear those clothes." I said to Linda.

She nodded her head.

I look at Linda she can't stop smiling.

"Soooo how about we bring Kyle, I guess it could be alright," I said looking at Serena
posted on 30-Dec-2002 4:49:05 PM by JBehrsGurl

"I only have one thing to say about this Kyle business..." I looked around at the faces, "Does he have any friends?"

We al burst out laughing.
posted on 30-Dec-2002 4:58:01 PM by Liz_Parker

"Why of course", I say smiling. "They might not all be good for princesses though....", I say trailing off.

They all shrug as we pull up to Linda's and Liz and Maria run out to get dressed.

I sit back and sigh.

"You ok Serena?", Linda asks me.

I just nod and look up at the sky. Sometimes it's weird having 2 princesses for friends. Their parents choose every little thing they do....mine don't care. Which kinda gets on my nerves sometimes. I could kill someone and they'd be like "That's fine dear".

Linda gives me a weird look and I shrug it off as Kyle pulls up, I get up and smile.

"Kyle!", I scream and run over to his car.
posted on 30-Dec-2002 5:04:29 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax

"He'z got serena, aint that right Ser?" I say.

She just looks at me.

Linda looks at her and says," Like thas anygood."

Serena looks at her.

"IM JUST PLAYING" Linda screams.

My mom comes in the room.

"Keep it down in here, the house is gonna break down," She says.

"Mami please, the house is so friggin big, I don't think it possible," I said.

"Don't give me lip Elizabeth, I've had enough of you today now go on with your friends," She said.
posted on 30-Dec-2002 5:22:35 PM by moonbeam4747
Wow! Look at all the posting going on! Well lets hear my two cents worth...


I've been quiet for most of the decision making. It takes me awhile to adjust to not being under my parents scrutiny. But now we're away from them and I CAN TALK!

"Ok girls, wow, that's Kyle. That boy's been eating his wheaties." At Liz's strange look I explain. I forget sometimes we don't read the same things. "You know the cereal that does a body good. Never mind! I hope I don't drool becuase let me tell you, the only males we see around the castle are the ugly ⊕$$ men our parents approve to be our servents. And those are few and far between. Its like they go to the ugly store and pick the guys you have to squint at just to look them in the face. I hope his friends look as good as him. Do you think my hair looks alright? I've never really fixed it myself before. These cloths are absolutely WONDERFUL! I feel so free..." I finally stop jabbering at Liz and Linda's looks of astonishment. So I don't talk much around my parents. That doesn't mean I don't have alot to say.

Hey, I just thought of something. Did you guys know that Linda means pretty in Spanish?

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posted on 30-Dec-2002 6:23:49 PM by JBehrsGurl
yea, we know what it means. Thats why me and Nya fight all the time. Cuz shes beea-u-ti-ful!!!
posted on 30-Dec-2002 6:46:59 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax
posted on 30-Dec-2002 7:38:48 PM by JBehrsGurl
I'm going to kick your pretty lil ass Nya! LMAO
posted on 30-Dec-2002 7:43:07 PM by qt4167013

I sigh as serena jumps into my arms as I swing her around.

"Hey sweet pea." I say putting her down.

She slaps me.

"I told you, No pet names." She says warningly.

I smile as she lugs me over to meet her friends.

"this is Liz, Maria, and Linda." She says pointing to each one.

"Nice to meet you." I say politly.

I grab Serena and drag her to the car.

"Come on ladies, lets go to the mall." I say and we drive off. I am finding it hard to concentrate with Serena in the seat next to me. She is rubbing her hand up and down my leg.

We reach the mall and I jerk to a stop and wait till everyone has gotton out before I jump on Serena and ravege her mouth.

"thats what you get you big tease." I say, smiling into her mouth.

She giggles and kicks open the door and I fall out, landing on my butt.

"Oww." I whine. She laughs and helps me up.

"come on baby, you get to carry our bags." She says and runs off. I groan. This was gonna be a long day.
posted on 30-Dec-2002 8:19:17 PM by Liz_Parker
That was great *happy*

I smile as Kyle falls down. I get him to carry our bags and then run off.

He soon follows and we go off on a shopping spree.

Liz gets a new skirt and tank top. Maria some leather things....which is exactly what she would look pretty good in for a night like this.

I look at Kyle who seems to be waiting to see what I'm gonna get. "What Mr.Valenti?", I ask teasing.

He just shakes his head as I go to the back and change.

"Is this ok?", I ask as I come back out.

He nods. "Mmm....hmm....perfect".

I giggle. He can be weird sometimes, but I love him. I look over at Maria and Liz who are off in la-la land.

I shrug then raise an eyebrow when Kyle pulls me extra close. "Can I help you?", I ask with a smile.
posted on 31-Dec-2002 12:14:50 AM by qt4167013

I grin.

"Of course you can help me Rena, but I don't think you need to buy anything here..." I say.

She narrows her eyes.

"And where would you like me to shop?" she asks, teasingly.

I raise my eyes suggestivly.

"Well I here Victoria's Secret has some new stuff..." I trail off.

She gasps and hits me.

"why, Kyle Valenti!"

I laugh and she changes back. Before she runs up to her friends she waltzes up to me and whispers seductavly.

"Why would I buy somthing at Victoria's secret when I just maxed out my credit card from my last visit."

She laughs and walks away.

I watch her hips sway as she walks away and I gulp. I am in for a long night.
posted on 31-Dec-2002 12:28:57 AM by Liz_Parker

I giggle as I run off from Kyle and back over to Linda,Liz,and Maria.

"So...did you find everything you needed?", I ask them after they get finished checking out.

They nod and we all hand our bgs to Kyle and groans.

"Your such a baby Kyle!", I say teasing when he groans as we enter another shop.

We get a few more things, get back in the car and follow Linda back to her house to get changed.

We change into some very unroyal clothes then get back into the cars. I'm surprised that the girls didn't protest of me being alone in the car with Kyle.

As soon as we get in the car, Kyle puts the radio up full blast and I cover my ears. "Jeez Kyle! Some people have ear drums!", I say as I try to block mine away from the awful noise.

"That palace is softening ya used to enjoy this stuff", he says as we follow behind Linda's car.

I shrug. "Yeah....and the last time you brought me back to the palace late with your radio blaring I got in royal trouble! Literally!!", I say glaring as he starts laughing.

"It's not funny Kyle James....", I say crossing my arms.
posted on 31-Dec-2002 10:18:38 AM by LizParkerEvans4evax

"Damn, is it kinky over there or is it just me?" I asked Linda.

She just laughed.

"I want to get 3 more tank tops, I was thinking black, red, and help me with the other color," I asked Linda and Maria.

I can't think abut the other color, keep thinking about the fight me and mom had earlier.


"Aiy Mia, I told you don't start with me! I'm sick of it, your idiotic ramblings, and your temper tantrums, your lucky I'm even lettin you 2 go! If your father found out, you know what he would do," Mom said.


"You didn't have to ask, you were born with it, you should be honored!" She screamed back.


"Well Mia it's not going to happen, just go, your giving me a headache, I can't deal with you," She said.


she just looks away. I walk away.

"Oh ya, I want to get some skirts too," I said looking at Linda and Maria.

posted on 31-Dec-2002 12:09:08 PM by JBehrsGurl

Looking at Liz I can tell something ain't right. I know she's thinking about two things. 1.) How much she hates being a princess and 2.) How much she hates how her mom treats her. But I don't say anything. Its one of those don't ask, don't tell type things. Only it hurts my heart to see my best gurl sad.

"Yo. I think we ready ta hit the clubs. What you say?" I eye Liz and Maria.

I turn to see Kyle and Serena tangled with each other and make gagging sounds until they stop and laugh. I smile and tell them the plan. We all going to this new club called The CrashDown. Its supposed to be mad crazy off da hook, this place better live up to its reputation or Ima get violent up in that mug. I need this night to help get Liz and Maria in the mood to feel happy and good about themselves.

"Ya'll ready ta have a taste of what it feels like ta be me?" I wink and usher them in my car.

Oh yea. This is gonna be a night ta remember. I can feel it…

a/n: Nya… Okay. Lets just talk this out. You know you're pretty. Fine. I'll admit it. I'm decent looking and p-p-pre-pret-pretty… Eh! You made me say it! Ahhhh! *pulls hair* NOW YOU SAY IT!!! You said if I say it you will! I'm waiting!!!

posted on 31-Dec-2002 5:52:29 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax
lol, fine I'll admit it too, I'm ok looking, ok ok im pullin mah hair too, im pretty there yah happy!lol


"Iight, I'm for it, lets just tell twittle dee and twittle dumb over there," I said.

Maria and Linda laughed.

I look and Linda and give her a smile.

She gives me a look sayin we gotta talk.

You that's what sucks about having a best friend so close to you that knows what goes on in your life like you sister.

She knows somethings wrong.

I give her the look sayin you dont know shyt, but she aint buyin it.

We walk over to Serena and Kyle

"Yo Moondogey, we gonna hit the clubs tonight, you twos good enough ta go with us or do ya to wanna get horny all night long, cause if ya'll do I got some cash, ya know give ya a money fo a hotel or somethin," I say looking at them 2.

Maria and Linda just fall out laughing.

What can I say im a comidean( YAH)

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posted on 31-Dec-2002 5:59:33 PM by moonbeam4747

I need a night to remember, because so far every night in my life has been boring. Inside my head I just made a decision. Something's going to happen tonight that I will remember for the rest of my life. I look over at Liz's happy face and I smile. Who would have thought my sister could talk like that?

"Bring on the Crashdown. Only one small problem. I don't know how to dance. Unless you count ballroom dancing, cause I can do that." My smile is hopeful, Linda just shakes her head. How sad is my life?

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posted on 31-Dec-2002 6:05:11 PM by Cominatcha
Wow!! You guys have got a really awesome start on this!! Just to let you know, I'm still alive. I haven't abandoned this RPG or anything, it's just not the right time for me to post, so I don't want anyone to worry about that.

Keep up the great work!!
posted on 31-Dec-2002 6:06:21 PM by Cominatcha
Oops!! I accidently posted that twice. Stupid me. Well, I might as well say something . . .

again, keep up the great work!!

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posted on 31-Dec-2002 6:07:17 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax
post whenever you want, just do what u think, you dont have to wait maybe others are waiting for you
posted on 31-Dec-2002 6:09:01 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax
im goin to b-mail the people who haven''''''''t been posting
posted on 31-Dec-2002 6:30:12 PM by tabasco sauce
Hey Girls-

I am still playing Max...I haven't abandoned you either. Like Cominatcha, I don't think my character is really in the mix yet, so I am going to abstain from posting for a bit longer.


posted on 31-Dec-2002 6:32:15 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax
well jus add in some flavor something in, you know so u dont feel left out, like how it feelz to be in the army

post like

it feelz weird never had a love experince miss my family den talk about ur friends try to get the 3 of u talkin so u have part u know wut im sayn
posted on 1-Jan-2003 6:30:20 PM by Liz_Parker

I roll my eyes at Liz and look at Kyle. He just smiles.

We get back in the cars and I look out the window. "You ok Rena?", I hear from Kyle and I just nod.

We finally get to the club and we all run in, almost getting lost in the crowd of people.

"Jeez, this place is loud!", I yell over the music.

They just nod and we finally find a spot to talk out the plan. Linda explains everything and Kyle drags me over to the bar smiling.

"I'm not really thirsty Kyle.....", he just shrugs and drinks down like 10.

Oh boyfriend is gonna get drunk...just what I need! I think groaning as he drags me out to the dance floor and pulls me closer and closer, I have to look down so I don't have to smell his awful breath.

" about we take a break,hm?", I ask hopefully.

He gets a huge grin and drags me to the back...oh God...
posted on 1-Jan-2003 8:12:23 PM by qt4167013

I don't know what I am doing. I am in no control of my actions as I drag Serena in back.

"Come on Rena." I say.

She refuses.

"RENA!" I slurr and collapse right there.

I am going to have a hell of a hang over tomorrow.
posted on 1-Jan-2003 8:58:48 PM by Liz_Parker

I gulp....Oh God, this really can not be good.

I drag Kyle's body over to the wall and try shaking him to wake him up. I look over for any sign of Maria, Liz or Linda, but see no one.

God, what am I supposed to do with a passed out boyfriend?!

He just lays there. I guess it serves him right for drinking so much.....but still, it's scaring me. It's almost as if he's dead he's so still.

I sigh and lift his head into my lap. "So much for a fun night for me....."
posted on 2-Jan-2003 3:42:20 PM by tabasco sauce
So I decided to take LizParkerEvans4evax's suggestion, and post a part about Max's life in the marines. I'm a little iffy on how this post will turn out, so please bear with me. lol. I don't know much about the marines, so if I totally mess things up, please don't be afraid to let me know. And if post interferes with anything, anything at all, just tell me, and I'll change it.


"Evans, tell me again. What are the three Marine Corps values?" I take a deep breath, hoping to mask the uncertainty that is plaguing my mind. I'm not used to upsetting my superiors. Alex and I leave that for Michael.
"Honor, courage, and commitment, Sir?" He looks at me, is eyes full of white hot anger. "Tell me Evans, is that a question or a statement? A marine should never be unsure of himself. If you're unsure on the battle field, you can get yourself, or one of you comrades killed. Now, that's just not acceptable."
I look at him, my eyes meeting his intense gaze. "It was a statement, Sir. The three Marine Corps values are honor, courage, and commitment."
He looks at me, clearly satisfied. He begins to walk away, much to my relief. Just when I think I am off the hook, he turns around and looks at me.
"Evans, you're a smart kid. Being with a girl is fine, but keep you personal and marine life seperate. If any other officer were caught with a girl in his room, I'd have him pack his bags and return to wherever he came from. I'm giving you a second chance. God knows why, Kid, but I am. Don't you go off telling your friends. I don't need my authority to undermined. Now go off. And remember- honor, courage, and commitment."
I walk away, shocked and angry at myself all at once. I almost got sent home. If I knew then that bringing Tess to my room would be such a big deal, I wouldn't have done it. She's cute and all, but that's where it ends. She wants me to be something I'm not. A corporate CEO, a lawyer, a doctor, anything but a marine.
As I make my way down the dimly lit hall, I reach the hall that I share with Michael Guerin and Alex Whitman, two fellow enlistees.
When I enter the room, they immediately look up, waiting for news. "Soo...what the hell happened?" The question came from Michael. He's never afraid to pry. "God man, you don't want to know. Let's just hit the hay. I'll tell you about it in the morning."

~*End Max*~

posted on 2-Jan-2003 6:24:01 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax
Great start it really good, now hopefully people can have a part in this.
posted on 2-Jan-2003 7:11:11 PM by moonbeam4747
Great Max part! For not knowing much about the marines, you bluffed your way through very convincingly. If I hadn't known better I would have thought you were an expert *wink*.


I'm out on the dance floor with Maria and Linda by my side. For not having a clue how to dance I think I'm doing pretty good. the secret is just letting the music take over and going with your instincts. Its like out here on the dance floor I'm free!

"This is great!" I try to shout over the music so Liz and Linda can hear me. They nod their heads like they understood. So I go back to dancing. After a while I get tired and thirsty. I point where I'm going to Liz and Linda. They nod once again, signalling they got the message. At the bar I ask for a cola. The bartender checks me out, but doesn't say anything. In a minute he returns with my drink. I take a sip. Oooohhhh Tingly. It makes me all warm and fuzzy inside. How come my cola at home isn't this good?

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posted on 3-Jan-2003 11:27:20 AM by JBehrsGurl

Everyone was having a good time, the music was kickin the club was hot, I was impressed. Very impressed indeed. This was slamin. We kicked off our heels and danced our asses off, it was great.

Great up until I tried the punch.

"Aye yo! Who spiked the punch!?" I screamed, "Liz, 'Ria, did you drink any of this shit?" I look in both their eyes.


My ass is grass once they get home, and their parents…

The lawn mower.

posted on 3-Jan-2003 4:59:47 PM by tabasco sauce
moonbeam4747 originally wrote:
Great Max part! For not knowing much about the marines, you bluffed your way through very convincingly. If I hadn't known better I would have thought you were an expert *wink*.

awww! Thanks for the complement. To be honest, I thought no one was going to like what I wrote. All I know about the Marine Corps is that their three principle values are honor, courage, and commitment. I tried to stretch it out so it seemed just a teeny bit believeble. I've been reading what you and everyone else has been posting for the girls, and all I can say is 'wow!'. Everyone is doing such an awesome job!

~*Max Part*~
I lay with my eyes open, unable to sleep. I came extremely close to being kicked out of the Marines over a girl I care nothing about. If my superior hadn't had such faith in me, I'd probably be packing my bags right now. If there's one thing I know now, it's not to take what I have for granted. Being a marine is an honor. It's a responsibility. I shouldn't throw away this amazing opportunity I have been given.

Turning on my side, I begin to hear the faint sounds of trumpets in the distance. Is is 5 am already? As they draw near, I get up, frustrated and tired. Might as well get ready. They have no sympathy for late risers around these parts.

"Michael, Alex. Get your asses out of bed. It's almost time for our morning run." I hear Michael groan and Alex mutter something obscene.
"Do we have to? It's a Tuesday for God's sake!" The complaint came from Alex. He goes through the same routine every morning. Not that I blame him, but today I have to be extra careful. I am in no position to piss my superiors off. "Alex, you said that yesterday too, except then, it was monday. Just get up. You've been sleeping like a baby all night."
He gets up and begins to get ready. Even though he's a complainer, Alex has a drive like no one I've met. When he has a goal in mind, he accomplishes it without a problem.
Sliding on my regulation socks, I hear Michael ask me a question. "So's morning now. It's time for you to tell us what happened. Obviously you weren't kicked out. What is it then? Table washing for a week? No free Sundays for the next month?" I look at him, a frown gracing my face. He's certainly blunt.
"Nothing. Stevens let me off with a warning. Don't tell anyone though. He doesn't want his reputation as a tough guy to be tarnished."
I hear Michael chuckle from his seat on the bed. Whenever he gets in trouble with Stevens, he always gets pretty heavy punishments. "Figures, man. That guy has a soft spot for you. He thinks the sun shines out of your ass."
I look at him, and throw my pillow at his head. As much as I like the guy, he can be a total jerk at times.
"Nah, man. He sees something in our Maxie. I think he wants to turn Max into himself."
Both of my roommates laugh, thoroughly ammused at his comment. I on the otherhand, just glare at them in anger.
"Oh, shut up! Let's go to training."
~*End Max*~
posted on 3-Jan-2003 5:20:43 PM by Cominatcha
Okay, I seriously no absolutely nothing about the marines, either, so I'm just kinda gonna fake my way through this.


It's gonna be a helluva day. Of that much, I'm sure. They're workin' us extra hard today, and Alex already looks like he's gonna collapse.

"Drop and give me 20!" our commander orders. I immediately fall to the ground and start to do push-ups.

I don't mind all this work. I know that being a marine is an honor, and I'm proud of that. Besides, I'm strong, both physically and, well, most of the time, mentally, so it doesn't take that much toil on me.

When I'm done, I look over at Alex and find that he is laying on the ground where he dropped. Guess he wasn't able to manage the 20.

Soon, we're moving again. Alex runs close to the back, I run up front, and Max runs somewhere in the middle. See, we're all different.

I can't say that I hate my life, because I don't. In fact, I love it. I can't imagine doing anything else. I certainly can't imagine living in a palace as a royal or something. God, how boring would that be? . . .

Sorry, I know that's short, but I've got so many RPGs to update on!! lol

posted on 3-Jan-2003 11:48:07 PM by tabasco sauce
Cominatcha originally wrote:
Okay, I seriously no absolutely nothing about the marines, either, so I'm just kinda gonna fake my way through this.

I'm glad to see I'm not alone! lol. You did a wonderful job in that last post. I couldn't tell you were faking at all. tee hee. keep up the good work!

posted on 4-Jan-2003 1:17:54 AM by moonbeam4747

I look at Linda, she looks scared. Aaahhh, did something bad happen to her? Because nothing bad here. No I feel nice. Very, very nice. Why is everyone all fuzzy? And there's two of everybody! Now I know why Linda is so scared.

"Help, we've all been cloned!" I shout at the top of my lungs. I grab Liz, at least one of the Lizs, and pull my sister to safety under the nearest table.

"Ssshhh!" I say to her. "We're hiding from the fuzzy clones."
posted on 5-Jan-2003 1:57:42 PM by tabasco sauce
~Max Part~

"Okay, troops. You have a 30-minute break for your morning meal. I expect all of you to be back out here at exactly 0630 hours. Is that clear?" The announcement came from our drill instructor, Captain Marcus. For an old guy, he's certainly tough. With a quick "Yes, Sir", the group heads down to the mess hall to eat breakfast.

Entering the building, I watch as Alex cringes in disgust. "Something wrong, Whitman?" I ask with a laugh. "They're serving us scrambled eggs....again. Those things have the consistancy of rubber. How is a marine supposed to remain fit when he's forced to eat corn flakes every morning, huh?"
I roll my eyes and walk away. Grabbing a tray, I begin to serve a variety of badly prepared food on my plate. I have to be careful though. If I take more than I can eat, I'll be forced to eat it anyway. Agent Marcus believes wasting food is wrong, when there are people starving in places like Somalia, Namibia, and Tuvalu. I don't blame him, but like Alex said, the eggs here taste like crap.

When I reach my seat, I see Michael there, eating his heart out. "Maxwell..." He says with a full mouth. "You didn't look so bad out there. You almost caught up to me in that final stretch. Getting a warning agrees with you. It motivates you. Maybe you can bring another random chick to our room tonight. God knows what it'll do for your performance." I am tempted to throw a roll at his head, but all it'll get me is a stern look from my superior.

"Michael, cut the crap, okay. You know my running has been improving in the last few weeks. It has nothing to do with the warning. Seriously."

He looks at me and shrugs. "Whatever you say, Maxwell, whatever you say."

~end max~
posted on 5-Jan-2003 2:31:37 PM by Liz_Parker

I leave Kyle passed out in the back and walk over to see what the fuss is about.

"Hey guys....what's up?", I ask as I see Linda panicking.

"Their drunk!", she says and points to Liz and Maria hiding, I raise an eyebrow.

How would Maria and Liz get drunk? That's definantly not like them.

Then Linda sighs and starts pacing. I sigh and sit her down. She can't panick...she's like our leader. So, I go over and wake up Kyle, somewhat anyways. Then get Linda to take Liz and Maria to the car. She drives them home, I put Kyle in the passenger seat and drive half way to his house.

"God Kyle....why did ya have to go and get drunk?!"

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posted on 5-Jan-2003 7:17:47 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax

"SOO FREE, LOOK AN AIRFRESHNER, wait no fuzzy clothes no!" I scream.

I laugh.

"Wow," I say looking up.


"I WANNA DRIVE, NOO My mommy sayz no, well my mommy no here and ta hell with her wooo!" PINKY'Z UP!" I say puttin my pinky up.

Maria and Kyle put their pinky'z up too.

"HEY U 2 NO PINKY UP IM THE PRINCESS!" I scream at Linda and Serena.
posted on 5-Jan-2003 7:27:06 PM by JBehrsGurl

Oh. My. God!

Liz is gone, Maria is about two seconds from take off and if that's not enough... I think Kyle's gonna barf in my car. I'll castrate his ass if he even burps on my leather seats...

I usher everyone in the car and call Liz and Maria's parents to say that we're all spending teh night at my apartment. It was hell trying to convince them that the reason Liz or Maria didn't ask was because they were getting their nails done. So now before I take them home after excessive amounts of hangover therapy, I have to get their nails done! AHHH!

Can't anything eva just work out all good and smooth? Ahhh shit, Liz is talkin 'bout pinky's...
posted on 5-Jan-2003 9:18:51 PM by moonbeam4747

I don't feel so good. No, no, no! Bad tummy. No make food come up.

"Nuh Uh! I'm a princess too!" I know its about five minutes too late, but for some reason I just don't care. My tummy feels better. This calls for celebration. I start to dance around around in my seat. The whole time singing.

"You and me baby ain't nothin but mammals so lets do it like they do on the discovery channel..."

I notice Linda on the phone. Who she talkin too? So I ask at the top of my lungs. "Who's ya talkin to Linda. Tell 'em I'm a mammal, I'm a mammal like on the discovery channel!" I laugh, so funny, he he, oh the world is spinning. Ooohhh, my tummy feels sicky again. Well hello there floor!

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posted on 7-Jan-2003 6:28:39 PM by Liz_Parker

I look out the window. Just great....all 3 of them are drunk and have no idea what their talking about.

I hear Maria singing and I roll my eyes. My 2 best friends are boyfriend is drunk. Linda and I are the only ones who seem to be sane.

"Can you please be quiet?", I ask Maria. "Your giving me a headache!", I say and look out the window again.

"Rena being touchy again....I know how to make her relax", Kyle says with a smirk and pulls me to him.

I try to push away but he just holds me tighter. "Kyle....let go, your hurting me!"

He keeps me there and starts kissing my neck. God, why does he have to be doing this? In front of everybody?

I bite my lip to keep all emotions together.

Then I hear Maria and Liz giggling and saying. "Go Kyle!", which just makes him keep going.....God, somebody help me!!!
posted on 8-Jan-2003 9:11:21 PM by qt4167013

I am in no control of my actions, but I can't stop my self even if I wanted to.

Serena just tastes so good I-

I have to throw up.

"PULL OVER!" I scream and the car screeches to a hault.

I jump out and lose my dinner on the side of the road.

"Better?" Linda asks sarcastacally.

"Ohhh my head." I say grasping my head.

Just than we hear sirens.

"Shit!" Serena says as an officer gets out.

"Hello, is there a problem here?"
posted on 9-Jan-2003 6:58:54 PM by Liz_Parker

I put up a fake smile to hide my nervousness. "No sir....everything's fine".

He looks over everybody suspiciously and walks back to his car.

I look over and glare at all the drunkards and face the other way....Liz and Maria's parents are gonna have a field day over this one if they ever find out.

But, if anyone asks....I was in no way involved.

I sigh as we get to Linda's and the girls wobble inside.

Kyle wobbles over and grabs my hand but I push him away. "Your go take an asprin, and go to bed,ok?", I say and walk inside....I'm not in the mood to talk right now.
posted on 12-Jan-2003 10:48:49 AM by Liz_Parker
posted on 12-Jan-2003 11:01:06 AM by LizParkerEvans4evax
I don't know what's goin on

I feel so free

Not like before

My mom is nothing right now

this moment feels like nothing can take my life away from me


wait wut did I just say


oh what the fuck pinkys!
posted on 12-Jan-2003 3:23:11 PM by Cominatcha
Sorry, I know this isn't the right time to post, but I've only got one part up here, so I figured I'd betta get another one up.


"What the fuck is this shit?" I mumble under my breath as I see Alex reading a magazine back in our bunks about computers and technology. I snatch the magazine from him and flip through it, then throw it on the floor. "Read this." I tell him, handing him a Playboy magazine with the playmate of the fuckin' year on the front showing all she's got to the world.

Alex smiles as he sees it. "Never even thought about it." he tells me as he begins to flip through. He smiles at some pictures, grimaces at others, and just passes on by the other ones that aren't so interesting. Then, when he's done, he throws it back to me. "Nice." he says.

"Nice?" I echo. "That's all you have to say is nice?"

He nods and asks for me to hand him his computer magazine again. I sigh and throw it up to him. Alex and I are two very different people, but I will admit that he is smart. Very smart. Practically a genius.

Yeah, Alex is the genius, and Max is the heroric type that you always see in movies, but what am I?
posted on 12-Jan-2003 9:33:17 PM by qt4167013

I smile at Michael but notice he isn't looking at me.

Sometimes when we are all alone I like to look at the other guys and wonder what they are thinking. Michael has always been...thoughtful? No that isn't right...he has always been...unique. Yeah thats it.

Truthfully I don't even know why I am here. Oh wait. Now I remember. My dad was in the army, my brothers in the air force. So naturally I was expected to be in some branch of the military.

I am smart. Maybe too smart for my own good as it sometimes seems but I can deal. ITs what I have been brought up to do. Deal. Sometimes its hard though. To deal, sometimes...I can't.

I glance at Michael one more time and pick up my magazine.

I am perfectly silent but as soon as I have the magazine open Michael turns to me with his eyes close.

"Put it down Whitman."

I smile and throw it back down.

Hey, I can always wait till he is asleep...
posted on 13-Jan-2003 4:33:16 PM by Cominatcha
great part!!
posted on 14-Jan-2003 10:34:54 PM by Liz_Parker

The next day, when all of us wake up Kyle,Liz, and Maria are all groaning about their heads.

"Serves ya right", I mutter as I take a sip of coffee.

Kyle sits next to me and pulls me onto his lap.

"What Kyle?.....I know your not drunk so you can't try anything.....", I say and cross my arms sighing.
posted on 14-Jan-2003 10:43:37 PM by qt4167013

I sigh warily.

"Rena, I love you." I say, trying to persuade her.

"No way kyle. Your sweet talking will get you no where." She said crossing her arms.

posted on 15-Jan-2003 7:40:28 AM by Liz_Parker

I roll my eyes, he's gotta think of better lines then just "Rena,I love you.".

I mean, I know he loves me and all, but he can't expect to just resolve things by saying I love you or kissing or something. It just doesn't work that way.

He starts pouting and forces me closer to him. "Come on Rena....if won't hurt anything....we're practically engaged anyways.....", he says smirking.

"KYLE!......Jeez, we're in royal presence".

"We don't care", comes from Maria and Liz.

I glare at them and try to get away from Kyle.
posted on 15-Jan-2003 7:22:54 PM by tabasco sauce

I roll my eyes as Michael gives Alex a copy of the latest issue of Playboy. How does Michael pull it off? If I snunk in any porn, my ass would be so caught.

And why risk it? If I violate the code again, I'll be kicked out. Naked girls aren't worth it.

Hoping to avoid a potentially awful situation, I decide to leave the room.The rec room has some stuff to offer...right? I mean, I can always play darts with one of the new recruits. Okay, so it may sound a little pathetic, but it's time for some good, clean fun.

"Guys, I'm going to head out. Maybe there's something to do in the rec room"

Michael looks up and grins.

"You...the rec room? Hold up, Maxwell. I'd love to see this!"

~end Max~
posted on 16-Jan-2003 1:01:02 PM by Cominatcha

Alex and I tag along with Max as he heads to the rec room. Rec room. Short for Recreation room. I often find myself wondering how we're supposed to get recreation in a room that's practically the size of our bunk room.

There's a few guys in there right now. A couple are watching TV, and two are playing pool.

The rec room. Home of the bums, as I'd like to call it. Personally, I'd much rather be back in my room right now looking at that Playboy magazine. Nice . . .

That magazine! That fuckin' magazine!

"Oh, shit!" I shout. I push past Alex and Max and out the way we came. If the commander finds that magazine, he'll be sendin' my ass outta here. I already got a huge lecture on it on my first day for possessing it in my bunk. Now, I hide them under my pillow, but I forgot to hide it before I left with Max and Alex.

I throw open the door and breathe a sigh of relief when I see that no one's in there. I stuff the magazine under my pillow and fall down on my bed.

Welcome to my life . . .
posted on 18-Jan-2003 10:14:18 AM by Liz_Parker
posted on 19-Jan-2003 6:18:24 PM by Cominatcha
posted on 19-Jan-2003 7:41:14 PM by Liz_Parker
*sigh* Where is everyone?
posted on 20-Jan-2003 10:35:30 AM by JBehrsGurl

Well the damage was done, and yet we lived to see another day. Next time I take these ladies out...


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posted on 20-Jan-2003 10:42:53 AM by LizParkerEvans4evax

"Hey Linda! Letz make sum callz to strange ppl im so bored I want excitement, Not from Chuckie Cheeses," I said. What I can read Linda I know everything she thinks.! LINDA!!
posted on 20-Jan-2003 12:52:48 PM by Liz_Parker
Great parts *happy*
posted on 24-Jan-2003 12:54:06 PM by Cominatcha
BUMP *bounce* BUMP *bounce* BUMP
posted on 26-Jan-2003 3:44:42 PM by Liz_Parker
BUMP! *bounce*
posted on 26-Jan-2003 4:36:06 PM by Cominatcha
Where's everyone, this was getting so good!!

BUMP *bounce* BUMP *bounce* BUMP
posted on 26-Jan-2003 4:41:40 PM by qt4167013
I am here. but where is everyone else?
posted on 26-Jan-2003 6:00:15 PM by Liz_Parker
Hey Madison, can U post a Kyle part involving Serena plz? I'm bored!
posted on 26-Jan-2003 10:22:17 PM by qt4167013

now that I have sobered up I feel ready and willing to grovel at serena's feet.

"I'll walk your dog." I say, pleadingly.

She turns to me with narrowed eyes.

"I don't have a dog."

"I'll water your plants, do your laundry. clean the dishes." I say.

She pretends to think.

"six months" She says finally.


"Do I have to spell it out for you? six months. Do it for six months."

I groan.

what have I got myself into?
posted on 26-Jan-2003 10:30:00 PM by Liz_Parker

I giggle at Kyle's face. "Aw.....poor baby, you get what you deserve"

He pouts and I get on my tip toes and kiss him. "Fine, 2 weeks and your off the hook,ok?", I ask with a small smile.

He smiles. "Thank God"

I sigh "Just promise me one thing?".

"What?", he asks.

"Don't EVER get drunk again,ok?" I ask and kiss him again.

He just nods and wraps his arms around me.
posted on 27-Jan-2003 7:17:14 AM by Liz_Parker
posted on 27-Jan-2003 7:01:22 PM by Cominatcha
When are they all gonna meet? We gotta have some M/L and M/M, etc. here, don't we?
posted on 27-Jan-2003 7:51:18 PM by Liz_Parker
Dunno *sad*
posted on 28-Jan-2003 6:27:22 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax
srry im trying to make it work but I cant get everyone together
posted on 30-Jan-2003 7:24:52 PM by Liz_Parker
posted on 30-Jan-2003 9:50:28 PM by moonbeam4747
I'm here, I'm willing, and I'm ready. Bring on the meeting, I say. Sorry I haven't been posting, my mummy's been in the hospital. But everything is fine now, and I'm here ready to do some RPGing. SO on with the meeting!
posted on 31-Jan-2003 5:43:12 PM by tabasco sauce
First off, I'd like to apologize for not posting more frequently. I'm beginning to start that grueling college process, so I've been pretty swamped. Between getting my grades up and studying for the SATs, I totally forgot I was even in this RPG. I felt awful. I promise it won't happen again. I feel like such a dork. I hope out dreamer and candy couples hook up soon. tee hee.


I walk into the Rec Room, and can't help but gap. Do guys actually spend their free time in this dump? I mean, I know I am, but I have a good reason....right. A minute later, I watch as Michael and Alex enter the room, trying hard to hide their laughter. They crack a joke or two, when Michael's face goes completely pale. I hear him mutter something obscene, and then he bounds out of the room.

"What the hell was that?" I ask Alex. He only shrugs.

"So, you want to play ping pong?" I ask awkwardly. He breaks out into fits of laughter. " pong? Are you trying to make me piss in my pants?" I roll my eyes. "I'm serious, man. Let's play. It's better than playing connect four."

He finally agrees, and we begin to play. That's how Michael found us.

~end Max~
posted on 1-Feb-2003 11:02:18 AM by Cominatcha

I found Alex and Max playing ping-pong. Ping-pong! God, if you go to the Rec-Room, isn't the point to do something recreational, not just stand around and wack a ball around a few times? I shake my head as I watch their childish behavior as they laugh hitting the ball back and forth between them.

"Hey." I say, out of breath from running all the way back to the room in an effort to hide that oh-so-unappropriate-for-someone-who's-a-marine-magazine.

"Hey." they both say. "So, where'd you go?"

"Had to hide my girls." I tell them.

They nod in understanding.

"So," I begin. While I was in my room, I had a few minutes to think, and I came up with this idea. It's risky, but I know that Max and Alex are a little bit tired of running all day, so, I figured I better voice it to them, but I have no clue how they'll respond.

"Just come out and say whatever is on your mind, Michael." Alex says.

"Why, yes, Dr. Whitman." I joke. "In fact, yes, there is something on my mind that'd I'd like to voice to you."

"What're you up to now?" Max asks me, losing his concentration and letting the ball fall to the ground behind him.

I clear my throat. "Tomorrow," I say, "I was thinkin' we might blow of training and get outta here for awhile, you know?"

I wait to see what they will say . . .
posted on 1-Feb-2003 6:52:20 PM by Cominatcha
posted on 1-Feb-2003 10:57:34 PM by qt4167013

No way! Thats what I want to say. But the words can't come out.

I look frantically around at Max and look pleadingly at him. Silently I will him to tell Michael no.

Max smiles and I feel my hopes and dreams go down the toilet.
posted on 3-Feb-2003 11:07:00 AM by Cominatcha

I knew Maxie would need a little break. The commander's been given' him alotta shit lately. And Alex will do whatever Maxwell and I do.

My brilliant mind has just come up with a brilliant plan, and my brilliant friends have silently agreed to go along with it . . .
posted on 3-Feb-2003 6:11:14 PM by tabasco sauce

The only reason I've agreed to go with Michael on his little escapade, is because I seriously need a little time away from this shit hole. I may be risking a lot by skipping out on training, but for once, I'm going to have fun.

"So, where are we going anyway?" I ask curiosuly.

"The guys told me about this club a couple miles south of here. From what I hear, they have great music, great drinks, and great girls!"

I can't help but laugh.

"Great girls? Do you remember why I got on our superior's bad side?"

I watched as Alex rolled his eyes.

"Max...I don't know how to break this to you, but Tess isn't what one would call...great. Slutty, yes. Gerbilish, yes. But not great. Never great."

Michael nodded in agreement. "Can't argue with him there Maxwell. We're leaving at midnight, after the hall monitors are conked out."

~end Max~

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posted on 3-Feb-2003 6:19:06 PM by Liz_Parker
Great parts U guys *happy*
posted on 3-Feb-2003 6:19:17 PM by Cominatcha
Great part!!
posted on 4-Feb-2003 7:39:56 PM by Galita
I am like so sorry I have not post yet. Stupid family problems just what I need to make a day. It's been 3 months now and it's stressful I'll post I promise. Plz don't give my part away. I promise I'll post!
posted on 9-Feb-2003 1:09:07 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax
ok I thought maybe I'd get this fiic back up so here my next post so hopefully everyone will follow after me lol.


"Im hate mah mom so fuckin much she pisses me off, she just controls my life and she thinks that I want it dat way, but I dont! I want to have some freedom do what ever I want it aint fair!"I scream.

Linda looks at me," Liz calm down it's gonna be alright," She said.

But I knew it wasn't.

I look at the phone, I go up to it.

"What are you doing?" Maria asked.

"I I don't know," I said.

I starting dailing a number I don't know what number just any number, it just came to me the numbers that felt rite.

And den it rang, it was still ringing, them dere was someone who picked up a man.

(Hopefully dat'll work it suppose to go to max's palce so one of the guyz pick it up in the movie it was a friend so I think it was michael who picked up but in that part everyone interacted)

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posted on 9-Feb-2003 6:13:49 PM by Liz_Parker
Great part *happy*
posted on 10-Feb-2003 5:29:45 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax
COME ON PPL U GOTTA POST WE GOTTA KEEP THIS PLACE ALIVEE!!! COME ON DONT LET IT GO DOWN! IT SHOULD BE ALIVE N ROLLING! IT AINT FAIR TO THE PPL WHO WANNA POST THEY GIVE THE EFFORT SORRY FOR SOUNDIN LIKE A BITCH but I want da ppl who want to play in this to be able too if u have problems n can't update den ok that's fine but try to contact us so we can have someone temp fo u cuz it really aint fair n yes I know I did it myself n I feel stupid and I give props 2 all ppl tried

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posted on 16-Feb-2003 1:36:20 PM by Cominatcha


What the hell? I swear to fuckin' God, I hate these people who do these prank phone calls. Or maybe it's just a telemarketer, but how many telemarketers call the base?

Maybe I've won a major award!

Oh, but I never win anything. I hand the phone to Max. He's probably the one that's won a major award . . .
posted on 16-Feb-2003 4:12:38 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax
Thanks for posting *happy*

I hear as they hand it to another guy. Everyone is looking at me.

Linda's like what's going on I shurg

Then I hear it the voice that made my heart spin

this was the moment that started it all
posted on 16-Feb-2003 8:49:53 PM by tabasco sauce

"Hello?" I ask, skeptically. These telemarketers can be so annoying. How did they get this number anyway.

"Umm, hi...You're the winner of a very special prize."
Her voice sounded like smooth velvet. Almost angelic.

"Oh, and what would that be?"
I heard someone giggle in the background. This sure as hell better not be some sort of twist prank call.

"You my friend, have been given the opportunity to hang out with a group of gorgeous ladies. So what do ya say?"

"Where do I meet you?"

~end Max~
posted on 16-Feb-2003 11:01:26 PM by moonbeam4747
Sorry I haven't posted in awhile.


I can't believe my sister is doing this! First she picks up the phone and dails a random number, and then she invites them to meet us. I hope she doesn't think I'm on board with her little scheme. because I certainly am not. I mean these guys could be murderers or rapists or worst of all they could be ugly. Not that looks matter to me that much, but I don't want to be caught with a pack of dog-face boys all night!

In a harsh whisper I communicate my disapproval. "Liz, you don't even know who you're talking to. We can't meet them anywhere. Mom would kill us if she ever found out we were meeting random guys. I mean we're princesses, we have an image to uphold." She sends me a death glare. Oh hell, looks like we'll be partying with who ever it is on the other end of that phone tonight.
posted on 17-Feb-2003 11:41:49 AM by Cominatcha
Moonbeam4747 originally wrote:

I mean these guys could be murderers or rapists or worst of all they could be ugly.

I loved that!

All parts were great! BUMPING!

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posted on 17-Feb-2003 8:20:55 PM by LizParkerEvans4evax
haha ur parts were amazing!


"Oh come on loosen up a little what's life without some meaning you know lets have some fun I mean ya Linda's chuckie cheese thing sounds dandy but how about some real fun if they're rapists or ugly do what we do best RUN!" I said
posted on 17-Feb-2003 9:45:03 PM by Liz_Parker

I raise an eyebrow at Liz.

"Lizzie....your nuts! Maria's right....they could try to kill us....and everyone would come to our funeral and it would all be because you made a stupid phone call", I say and cross my arms.

I mean, I'm up for meeting new people as much as the next girl...but I do have Kyle and we're sorta engaged. But, these guys she's just "meeting" over the phone and she's inviting them over?!

God, who is this, and what had she done with Liz?