posted on 27-Dec-2002 1:20:01 PM by Cominatcha
Since I love writing AU's, this RPG will, of course, be AU.

A few FYI notes: There are no aliens, Max and Izzy aren't brother and sister, Tess and Ava are twin sisters, though they are very different personality wise.

Okay, so, this is how I was thinking it might start:

Maria, Liz, Isabel, Tess, Ava and Serena go to an all girls school in Roswell, New Mexico where they have little freedom. Maria is tired of it because she feels that they always have to play by the rules, and she doesn't want to do that anymore. Liz is tired of it because she wants to get out and see the world, and she feels like she's being caged in or something. Isabel hates it because she wants to fall in love, and that's hard to do at an all girls school. Tess wants to meet new people and do new things, Ava feels like Roswell isn't for her, like it isn't her style, and Serena feels like she is just a face in the crowd, like she has no opinion.

So, one night, when the girls get fed up with their lives, they run away in Maria's little Jetta, thinking that they'll be able to make a great life for themselves or something. But, soon, they find out that living on the run is a lot harder than they like to think.

Soon, they meet up with a group of guys in Santa Fe who travel around in a fancy trailor. The guys are Michael, Max, Alex, Kyle, Terrell, and Jamal. (Jamal and Terrell are two names that I think are really cool, so I used them for made up guys. If you're in my other RPG RIVALRY, you'll know who I'm talking about.) They tell the girls that they've been on the run for awhile, now, and they invite them to come along with them for as long as they'd like.

So, Maria, Michael, Liz, Max, Isabel, Alex, Tess, Kyle, Serena, Jamal, Ava, and Terrell set off together in the trailor. They don't know where they're going, and they really don't care, because they start to develop feelings for each other.

The coupling is:

Michael and Maria
Liz and Max
Isabel and Alex
Tess and Kyle
Serena and Jamal
Ava and Terrell

But it takes time for these feelings to develop, so take things slow!!


Please write using I to refer to your character instead of naming them by name, and please use present tense is possible. If not, no big deal.

Do not apply for a character unless you can post at least four times a week, if not more.

Remember that the girls are in Roswell New Mexico until they meet the guys in Santa Fe. Locations tend to be big problem.

Please, don't rush the relationships. Allow them time to grow and develop.

I'm gonna give the school the girls go to a name, too. Mmm. . . St. Mary's School for Girls. Say it's like a catholic school or something. (Ava will sure be a stand out there, won't she?)

Remember, no aliens.

Tess and Ava are twin sisters.

Max and Isabel are not brother and sister.

Please read over your post before posting so that we can have the least amount of mistakes as possible.

Okay, I think I've set the guidelines as best I can. Time to apply for a character!! To everyone who applies, thanks!!

I'll be Maria.


Maria ~ cominatcha
Michael ~ cominatcha
Max ~ Tabasco Sauce
Liz ~ Dreamer_Dreaming
Isabel ~ Galita
Alex ~ qt4167013
Tess ~ StardustDreamer
Kyle ~ qt4167013
Serena ~ Liz_Parker
Jamal ~ JBehrsGurl
Ava ~ JBehrsGurl
Terrell ~ JBersGurl

Ooh, I know I'm selfish for playing two characters, but I love them both!! I can't help it!!

Once again, thanks everyone!! I'm sure this will be fun!!

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posted on 27-Dec-2002 1:26:20 PM by qt4167013
I love your fics! This will be a lot of fun to write....can I be Kyle and maybe Liz and I seem to be ALWAYS free so if you ever need a temp I can always do it. *happy*
posted on 27-Dec-2002 1:29:00 PM by Cominatcha
Character: Maria DeLuca

Brief Summary:

Maria isn't afraid to speak her mind and tell people what she thinks, but she can't do that in Roswell at St. Mary's School for Girls. She's not even religious, and she's going to a catholic school.

Every since her mom had a near death car accident, Amy DeLuca has been real into religion, so, for the past few years, Maria has been going to that awful school where she feels trapped and caged in.

Maria wants to get away from the only life she has ever known so badly, so she runs away with her friends, but the last thing she expects to find is someone to give her heart to . . .

If everyone could do just a brief summary like this, since it is an AU thing and we might need a little background, that'd be appreciated.

posted on 27-Dec-2002 1:30:20 PM by Cominatcha
thanks qt!! For right now, I'll just be assigning one character, so if you want Kyle, then you can have him. If no one wants Liz, though, she's yours.

Thanks!! Hopefully more people will be interested soon!!
posted on 27-Dec-2002 1:35:43 PM by qt4167013
ok thats fine, but I have a question. If I am Kyle, will I get to write the parts at the begining or do I have to wait till the girls meet the guys? And forget about Liz, she is a popular character and I ll just take leftovers, lol!
posted on 27-Dec-2002 1:36:36 PM by JBehrsGurl
posted on 27-Dec-2002 1:40:48 PM by qt4167013
kyle's character summary:

note: This will probably be similar to my rivalry one but I liked it so...


Kyle's father Jim, is in the military and after his mother died Kyle was forced to follow Jim around every 4 months to a new house. Kyle got fed up with it and the minute he turned 18 he left.

Jim has been searching for Kyle since he left and every time he gets close to getting his son back Kyle escapes but just barely.

Kyle is closest to Alex because of their unique senses of humer and they are usually found jamming their guitars in the back of the trailer. Kyle has also just newly found religion and wears a neckase with a figure of Buddah on it and will not do anything without thinking of Buddah, and he is determined to reach enlightenment this life time.
posted on 27-Dec-2002 1:52:46 PM by Dreamer_Dreaming
did you save me liz?*big*
posted on 27-Dec-2002 2:00:08 PM by Cominatcha
Yeah!! People are getting interested!!

Great profile thing qt!!

JBehrsGurl, of course you can be Ava!! I know you're really good playing her.

Dreamer_Dreaming, Liz is yours.

posted on 27-Dec-2002 2:08:00 PM by Liz_Parker
I'll be Serena *happy* And I'll post my info later *happy*
posted on 27-Dec-2002 2:09:00 PM by Cominatcha
Thanks Liz_Parker!!

posted on 27-Dec-2002 2:24:03 PM by Liz_Parker
yw *happy* Serena is fun to play *big*.

Character: Serena Jade Dessier
Age: 16
Interests: Writing, dancing a little.
Family- Older brother Logan ,little sister Paige, Mom and Dad

Brief Summary:

Serena used to get in trouble alot. So her parents sent her to a Catholic school hoping it would straighten her out. Which it has, and then some.

She thinks she's just another face in the crowd. Just someone stuck in Catholic school for who know how long because her mother has a temper and her father a even worse one. Serena doesn't think she'll ever be able to find someone being cooped up in an all girls school.

But, she keeps her mind and heart open just in case.
Does that sound ok?

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posted on 27-Dec-2002 2:31:30 PM by JBehrsGurl
err! I'm so bad! I'm at work and I'm on here! hahahaha! I dun care either! This is all I have for now! She still has pink hair!

Name: Ava Harding

Age: 17

Hair color: Hot Pink with Black streaks.

Eyes: Deep Aqua Blue

Weight: 125 lbs

Height: 5'6

Siblings: Twin Sister Tess

Hobbies: Flirting, Dancing, and kicking ass…

Style: Rebel without a cause, always gets in trouble for wearing her skirt too high and tying her shirt at the bottom, she got pissed when Britney spears did her video and everyone started copying bcuz Ava did it loooong before Brit! (lol) he loves to wear rugged vintage clothes on casual Fridays and is always applauded for her style. She can make vintage look tres bien.

Summary: Cocky smart-alecky attitude with a bad temper. Ava’s second home is the principals office, cuz she's so bad... She’s tight with her crew, which consists of Tess, Isabel, Maria and Liz. She’s popular because she keeps it real and she never lets anyone push her around, she comes off as a bitch but is actually a real sweet heart.

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posted on 27-Dec-2002 2:54:55 PM by Galita
Hey go a head and put me down for Isabel plz
posted on 27-Dec-2002 3:20:27 PM by Dreamer_Dreaming
name:Liz Anna Parker
Eyes: Brown
Friends:Maria, Isabel, Tess and Ave
Dream: to see the world

Personal life: her parents are very rich but they never really care about her. They never know how to raise one them self. They send Liz to boarding school when she was 5. her parents never call or write, she doesnt even know what they look like.
posted on 27-Dec-2002 3:25:33 PM by Cominatcha
Wow!! great job guys!!

thanks galita!! I'll add you.
posted on 27-Dec-2002 5:07:24 PM by Cominatcha

Okay, I love Michael. He's my fave character from Roswell, so I've just gotta play him for now, too. I know I'm being selfish, but there's just something about those eyes and that chin and that hair and that little mole up by his eyebrow all combined that just gets to me!! lol

Name: Michael Guerin

Summary: Michael Guerin never lived an easy life. In fact, his life has been everything BUT easy. After his mother and father died in a car accident when he was only six, he was sent to live in a foster home. He moved around a lot, so he's good at traveling.

Michael finally ran away from the foster home life in his teenage years and met up with Max and Kyle and Alex and Jamal and Terrell, and they've been best friends ever since.

If anyone else wants to double up, then go ahead. I just like to get started on these things!!
posted on 27-Dec-2002 6:07:59 PM by Galita
Isabel Charcter summary

Name:Isabel Amanda Jacobs
Intrest:Dancing, hangin' with friends, and most of all having a good time

Brief summary: Isabel likes to try everything once. She got put into Catholic school because her grandparents are seriously Catholic and that's who she lived with after her parents passed away. She has a lil sister named Julia-Kate who still lives with their grandmother.

She hopes to some day find love, even though she's not sure she'll ever get the chance to being put into an all girls school and all.
posted on 27-Dec-2002 6:45:36 PM by StardustDreamer
Hey, can I be Tess?

Name: Tess Harding
Age: Seventeen
Hair color: Light blonde
Eyes: Blue
Weight: 110 lbs
Height: 5'3
Siblings: Twin sister Ava
Hobbies: Music and dancing- everything from ballet, jazz and club style grooving
Style: Wears her normal uniform in the proper way (unlike Ava) but also wears sexy lingerie underneath
Summary: She hates private school and the people there, except for her best friends and her twin sister.
She's hella popular (like her friends) but it's all very superficial. No one at the school knows the real her and she likest that way- it keeps people on their toes. She's a bitch and rules with fear. She was one of the ones who wanted to leave the school the most because she was tired of being someone she wasn't. Loves to travel and loves new things. Had an intense relationship with a boy from the their counter all-boy's school, and had to get an extremely secret abortion, that not even Ava knew about. Oh yeah! She hella likes to drink.

Hmm, sound okay? I'll change whatever if this doesn't sound like how you wanted it to be. Thanks!

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posted on 27-Dec-2002 8:23:00 PM by Galita
Hey this are good *happy*
posted on 27-Dec-2002 8:40:27 PM by tabasco sauce
Hey Girls!

Can I be Max? The story looks great, and I'd love to be a part of it. If he's already taken, I'd be happy to play someone else.

posted on 28-Dec-2002 3:30:04 AM by JBehrsGurl
Well shoot! You know I'm gonna want Terrell too than! If its available I want!!! LOL
posted on 30-Dec-2002 11:35:46 AM by JBehrsGurl
posted on 30-Dec-2002 11:57:35 AM by Cominatcha
Thanks for bumping that up!!

I'll add you for Terrell JBehrsGurl, cuz I know you love him.

Tabasco sauce I'll add you for Max, too. Thanks so much for playing him. It's hard to find Max's it seems.

StardustDreamer, Tess is yours.

Thanks everyone. We should be able to start soon.

Okay, so, all we need is a Jamal and an Alex. If anyone wants to double up for them or play them temp. then that's fine.

Btw, I'm just gonna start it off in the next post, just cuz I wanna. lol. Be back with the start soon.

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posted on 30-Dec-2002 12:07:19 PM by Cominatcha

The bell rings, and I slam my locker and hurry off to class. Don't wanna be late. St. Mary's School for Girls is very strict about being prompt.

I run into someone and drop my books on the way. Of course, she doesn't help me pick them up, so I'm stuck alone in the hallway picking up books all by myself and cursing wildly because I know I'm going to be late, and I know that my teachers are going to make it a priority to embarrass me in front of the whole class the way they always do. And then there's that little matter of detention, too, that I'm sure I'll receive. One, small, pink slip that'll cause my mom to freak out and yell at me like the world is gonna end.

"Ms. DeLuca?"

I look up and see that one of my teachers is standing above me, tapping her foot impatiently. She's dressed as the nun she is and ready to start class. I don't remember her name. They all look the same to me.

"What have I told you about being late?" she asks me like I'm in kindergarten. She keeps tapping her foot, and that starts to get annoying.

"Proper girls are always on time." I recite. "SO sorry."

"Is that a hint of sarcasm I hear in your voice?" she asks again as I stand up. "That's two detentions for you, now."

I remain silent, though it is hard, and accept the two pink slips without debate or protest. I follow my teacher into the classroom and sit down in the back.

I really hate this school. Everyone else feels the same way . . .

Sorry. That sucked. I hope that was an okay start, though.
posted on 30-Dec-2002 12:07:30 PM by JBehrsGurl
*jumps up and down* YEAY!
posted on 30-Dec-2002 12:20:17 PM by Liz_Parker
lol, can't wait to start *happy*
posted on 30-Dec-2002 12:26:23 PM by Cominatcha
already started. go ahead and post whenever you think it seems right.
posted on 30-Dec-2002 12:44:19 PM by Liz_Parker

I hate this school. It's so boring. And all the teachers look so much alike, it's hard to tell who's who anymore.

My mom and dad say "It'll do you some good Serena". HA! What good does this school do for me? I just get to sit here and be bored all day.

We have no life. The only places we're allowed to go to is class, then our dorms, and any place we get forced to go to.

My room mates are Tess,Ava,Maria,Isabel, and Liz. It's kinda like having 5 sisters. I miss my real sister though. Which is weird, considering I used to think I hated her. Things change once you get put in a place that seems like jail.

We used to kid around about escaping and never coming back ever again. I wish we could. Get away from St.Mary's.....away from all the evil nuns as we all call them. Away from being in an awful all girls school. I smile as Ava gets in trouble for her uniform yet again. It's her trade mark.

I can't wait for this class to be over. But it's just begun....and of course, none of are paying attention. What's the point? We just get to be bored the whole time while they talk and talk and talk.

I lean back and half listen. This is so boring. Blah-blah-blah I hear from the teachers. Then I hear "Ms. Dessier, would you like to join Ms. Deluca in detention?".

I roll my eyes and shrug, like I care. So I'll get yelled biggy. It's the same thing every week. She hands me a pink slip and I get up and go to detention to be soon followed by almost all my dorm mates.

I laugh in my head. "Looks like we get to have fun anyways", I say smiling.

"Now I wouldn't quite say that", we hear the principals voice.

posted on 30-Dec-2002 12:51:59 PM by JBehrsGurl

Twirling a hot pink strand of hair between my fingers I popped my bubble gum out loud in class. WhOops! Was I not supposed ta do that? Ah well. I snapped my gum again and wiggled my leg as Sister Yolanda Gorelli droned on and on about uh… About… Uh… Gee what was this old bat raggin on about? I raised my hand.

Sister Yolanda sighed, "Yes Ms. Harding?"

"Ava. Please sista. I tolds you dat I dun like ta be referred ta like I'm old. I ain't you." I snapped, "Anyhow-"

"Ms. Harding I do believe you are on probation for that sour tongue." She says, "As with that dress code defying outfit! Ms. HARDING! You will this very instant untie your shirt and pull down your skirt!"

"Why Sister! I don't think pulling down my skivvies is very appropriate!" I gasp.

She sighs and shakes her head, "One of these days Miss Ava… You are going to get a very serious wake up call." She slammed her hand down on my desk, "Until then you have detention."

"Tell me somethin I don't know." I snort.

"How about this," She paused, "You will write me a 12 page essay on the amount of respect your elders deserve. And that's NOT in YOUR opinion. If I do not accept your esay you will rewrite it again and again until I see that it is fit." She scowled, "Are we understood? AVA."

"Clear as glass." I grinned.

F*ckin sh*t!

posted on 30-Dec-2002 12:52:48 PM by qt4167013
ill be alex!
posted on 30-Dec-2002 12:56:40 PM by Cominatcha
Ooh, thanks, you'll make a great Alex.

posted on 30-Dec-2002 1:02:32 PM by qt4167013
thanks! Here is the summary:

brief summary:

Alex is a keep it real guy. Everything is funny and if it is not, he will make it funny. Alex has a exterior as a nerd but inside he is always fighting the constent battle of sanity. He might joke on the outside but he feels like he is going crazy and the only thing that hides that is music which he makes with Kyle.

Alex's family life was non existent. He grew up in Chicago and watched his older brother get shot. His mother had died in the birth of him and his father had never forgiven him. After his brother had died his father blamed him too and would hit him. Alex couldn't stand it and met up with his friends and they ran away.

Note: because of his nerdy exterior he decided to learn Karate and is now a black belt. He also loves going on the computer and is always the one who can hack and help them get things they need.

And just because he is Jewish, doesn't mean he can't have a piece of Catholic girl ass... (what?)

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posted on 30-Dec-2002 1:21:08 PM by Cominatcha
That was great!!


It's gonna be a long day, I can tell. Isabel and Serena and Ava and I sit in the isolated room used often by the Sisters here for detention purposes. I tap my fingers on the table in an annoying pattern, and Ava continues to chew her gum like a cow chewing cud.

Isabel looks as if she's gonna fall asleep. Serena looks like she's deep in thought again, about a life she could have and never will.

It's no surprise that Liz and Tess aren't in here with us. They're a little more on the goody-girl side. That's okay, I guess, but, sometimes, I wish that they'd be willing to take a few risks.

One time, I brough up this idea of running away with Liz, and she totally flipped out! I guess she wants to believe that she still has a future.

I try to tell her that no one is gonna have a future if we're stuck in this shitty school, but she doesn't understand.

Tess, on the other hand, Tess is the direct opposite of Ava. In a way, she and I probably have the most in common out of us girls. At times, we can be good and follow the rules, but, at other times, we just wanna get away and be completely crazy.

I think Tess kinda wants to be like Ava. I think that's who she really is inside, but she doesn't want people to think that she and her twin sister are exactly alike. I think she's different because she wants to be her own person and be recognized for something other than "that girl who looks and acts just like Ava". I guess I would, too, if I had a twin. After all, it's a common belief that identical twins act alike, as well as look alike.

Finally, the bell rings again, signaling the start of lunch period A. Luckily, my friends and I are in most of the same classes, so we have lunch together, too. We bolt out the door and into the lunchroom, unaware that they're serving hotdogs today. The schools idea of a hotdog is a bun with ketchup on it.

Liz and Tess join us in line, and we all begin to talk. My vioce is scratchy, because I haven't used it since I've been in detention with that fucked up principal. I'll never understand what makes him so mean. He's clearly got something up his ass big time.

I'm careful not to bring up the subject of running away, but I have thought about it
often . . .

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posted on 30-Dec-2002 1:27:39 PM by StardustDreamer
I'm working on a part!
posted on 30-Dec-2002 1:31:42 PM by Cominatcha

posted on 30-Dec-2002 1:59:48 PM by JBehrsGurl

Hot dogs. Gross. Like I'm gonna eat something they shit out of a meat processor. Do they even KNOW what the HELL is up in dat mess? No. They do not. Do these punks care? No. They do not. Maria and Serena have to endure the lovely detention room after school with me. At least I don't have to sit with gross Hilary anymore, I swear dat gurl is off her rocker. All she talks about is suicide and acid.

I mean c'mon gurl! Ya either do it or ya don't. Don't come tryin ta intimidate me with that shit. Or you'll get knocked da f*ck out. I don't play games. Not unless they deserve it. Like my ex boyfriend Robert. He liked ta play with my head a lot, so I played him. I played him with his best friend Cody.

When me and da gurls finally sit at the lunch table we ALWAYS occupy outside by the big oak tree, I turn to my sister.

"Yo. Tess. I got anotha respect essay." I say swallowing my strawberry yogurt, "Will ya help me on it?"

She says she will and that I need to start following the rules and blah blah blah. Sheri Renolds stopped by our table and asked if I was gonna attend her bach this weekend. I said sure, as long as all mah gurls can come. She said it wuz all gravy so I guess we all gonna party this weekend,she said hella heads are gonna be up in da mix so this should be good. This should be REALLY good. Da more people, the more boys. The more boys…

The more fun. I grin.

"Ya'll, I have a feelin we gonna meet some fiiiine ass niggas dis weekend." I wink and nudge Maria. She and I always go all out crazy at parties. I hope maybe we'll rub off on the rest of these gurls.

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posted on 30-Dec-2002 2:23:00 PM by StardustDreamer

I swallowed a bite of my fat free yogurt, trying not to grimace at the taste. I flicked a blonde curl out of my face in irritation.
Damnit,I don't even like yogurt, but it's the only thing that fills me up without gaining all the calories and fat grams. I eyed Ava's Strawberry cheesecake yogurt. Why the fuck can she eat all that shit, but yet I feel like I can't? We're twins, it's not like I'm gonna get fatter that her. But's a matter of discipline.

I heard Ava ask me to "help her" write (aka write it myself) another respect essay, no doubt for Sister Gorelli.

"Yeah, sure," I agreed readily, starting to say more to her about follow the rules, but I could tell she wasn't listening. I wanted to slap myself for agreeing so quickly.
What the fuck was I, a homework machine? Nobody would ever dare as me to do there homework- except for Ava. I guess that's the beauty of having a twin sister.
But ya know, that's the way it's always been. Ava's always been this force to reckon with, doing her own thing and not giving a fuck about it, leaving me to kind of just go with the flow behind her, cleaning up the fucking mess. I can't help but feel like the little sister that's playing in big sister's dress up clothes when I'm with her. Which is always. I love her, so much, but she pisses me off to no end. She gets to be the wild one, the crazy one, and happens whenever I try to act the same way? I reap the consequences. Big time. I swallowed another bite of yogurt, but this time is tasted bitter. I don't want to think about the abortion though. That's over and done with, and nobody is
gonna ever know that fun little fact about Tess Harding. Even Ava.

I saw Sheri Reynolds, one of the many school sluts, walk up to my sister and tell her about one of the parties going on this weekend. I narrowed my eyes at her, which were what I was once told were "frighteningly
blue." I saw her glance at me nervously and she started to talk faster about the party details and quickly left.
I perked up. A party? I might be the bitchy, prissy one, but you know what? I sure the hell can dance.

A party right now is just what I need.

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posted on 30-Dec-2002 5:38:28 PM by Liz_Parker

Yuck....their version of hot dogs are gross. I only took 1 bite and pushed it away. It doesn't even taste like a hot dog.

I sigh as Ava gets Tess to help her with yet another respect paper.

That teacher sure can be cruel. You'd think she'd know by now that it's not Ava writing those word for word heart felt things.

I just wish our parents would pull us out of here. So we can have real lifes again.

And I bet we all wish we could have someone. Like a soulmate or something.

But of course we don't...we're stuck.....for who knows how long.

posted on 30-Dec-2002 7:47:25 PM by tabasco sauce
Hey Girls! I've been catching up on everything you've written, and I gotta say, you have an awesome rpg in the works. I can't wait until the guys show up so I can start posting. *happy* But until then, I'll settle for a character summary. Here goes:

Name:Maxwell Phillip Evans
Interests:sports (especially baseball and hockey), reading, and picking up girls.
Background:Max came from a rich, high profile family. When he entered high school, Max's parents forced him to attend a prestigious private school in New York City. Max is fine with the idea, until he realizes it was a ploy to get him away from his long-time best friend Michael Guerin, a kid from the wrong side of the tracks. As the pressure of being the perfect son reaches its peak, Max decides to run away with Michael and his two new friends, Alex and Kyle. Hoping to aid the group financially, Max takes $100,000 from his college fund, just enough to buy a nice trailor and some decent meals for the next few months.


PS: If this post interferes with anything written already, please let me know and I'll change it!
posted on 30-Dec-2002 8:47:11 PM by Dreamer_Dreaming

I am sitting with my friends. Tess, Maria, Isabel,, and Ave, at lunch.

which I never eat the food here cuz it just gross, sometime in the midddle of the night. I sneak out and eat somewhere else.

I really wanna leave this hell place.

Seen I was 5, everyone got to know there parents but I.............I dont even know what they look like or there names.

My biggest dream is to go is the world, to be a tourist.

One time Ave told me she wanna run away and wanted me to come with her.

but I flip out, cuz I would of left Serena, maria and Isabel behind.

There my family and family always stick together, no matter what.

someday I'm gonna leave this place once and for all and that day will come very soon.

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posted on 30-Dec-2002 11:45:38 PM by Liz_Parker

Later on that day, I go to my dorm and grab my journal writing down todays event. I picked this trait up from Liz. I know it's kinda childish, but it's the only way I can get my feelings out in the open without being yelled at or anything.

After I finish my writing I grab a picture from under my pillow and look at it. It's a picture of me and my family. Or anyways "so-called" family.

Tess and Ava are lucky. Their twins, and their in this together. I still never figured out why Tess and Liz were sent here. They seem to be perfect. Or at last they are in the sister's eyes.

I sigh and set the picture back where it was and lay back as the others come in and sit on their beds.

"So 'Rena....whatcha thinkin' 'bout today?", Ava asks me.

I sigh. "The usual....something we know we can't have.".

"Maybe we can....", came from Maria so we all turned and looked at her.

"What are you saying?", Liz asked.

"We can leave! Pack all of your stuff....anything important anyways and we can get in my Jetta and leave this place! What do you say?", Maria asked with a huge grin.

We all looked around at eachother trying to consume all of it. I think the actual thought of leaving St. Mary's shocked us. Away from the protection of the sisters and the detention room....I think we all wanted that.

"I'm in if everyone else is....", I say dragging off just incase no one else wanted to.

'Oh please say yes! Pleeeaaassseee', I beg in my head as I wait for an answer.
posted on 31-Dec-2002 12:27:51 PM by Galita

I give Maria one of those you must be crazy looks. "We can't just run away. For crying out loud they watch every move we make." I said laying bck on my bed.

"Come on since we have been in here we're not allowed to have boyfriends and I know you Isbael you want a boyfriend again. That's the way we need to get out." Maria said and look around at us all.

"I think it's a good idea." I hear Ava say. I had to nod.

We just sit there.
posted on 31-Dec-2002 2:29:14 PM by Dreamer_Dreaming

I heared Serena wanted to run away.

it was a totally good Idea."I'm with ya" I said.

Ave was totally shock, when I agreed.

I can't wait to get out of this place, this was the place I grow up, and now I am leaving.

I wait for the other for there answer, I hope they will agree.

I am so happy.
posted on 31-Dec-2002 2:58:17 PM by JBehrsGurl

Leavin. Runnin'. Gettin' out this f*cked up school. Of course I was in. But damn. I Neva thought that we wuz actually gonna do it. Not that I wuz scared, I ain't neva scared. I just thought about what it would be like ta be out there in da world. Alone. Not alone. I'd have mah gurls. But we ain't got no money and we ain't got no job.

I've been wanting ta get out this place since my parents sent me and mah sis in this joint. Long ass story short, my mom and my dad like all the other rich preppy kids… They only had us for show. My father is a senator for New Mexico and my mom is an actress for some dumb ass soap opera that she's been in for like years and I stil dunno what the hell it is. She still think she on screen, last year on "Bring your Parents Day" she and my dad got in an argument and she threw her drink in his face and bitch slapped him. I about busted a gut laughing but then I realized that we wuz in public so I jet out that mug like I stole sumthin.

Tess. I knew she wouldn't wanna go. Sincerely. No lie…

I kinda dunno if I'M willin ta just get up and go. Like I said. We ain't got da supplies. We need money, food, shelter, a CAR! Damn. Whut I wouldn't do ta be free. Ta be able ta do what I wanted when I wanted HOW I wanted.

"I say we wait. We gotta get ouir shit tagetha first before we go out and get our freak on." I added to the convo.

I look ta mah sista and she sits still playing with her curls. My fingers atomatically went to my tresses, dyed pink with black streaks. Sometimes as much as I loved being different, I couldn't help but wanna be normal. Everyone wants ta be normal. They wanna fit in, I know I fit in wit da populars bcuz they always kisin my ass en stuff. Those damn posers. But aye, as long as I'm da top of the social latter and I ain't neva gotta look up, I be aight. I'm a bitch baby…

And I'm proud of it.

posted on 31-Dec-2002 4:37:55 PM by Cominatcha

Ava is completely right. She may be a rebel, and, sometimes, people might think the wrong things about her, like she's got no future or something, but she's not dumb. Here we were, ready to just take off without any clue as to where we would go and what we would do. Stupid us, smart Ava.

"I agree." I pipe up. "Maybe we should tough it out for awhile. We could go to that party this weekend together, and we could leave that night. That way, nothin' will seem suspicious. They'll think that some guy came along and picked us up or something and we never made it home."

Ava and Isabel nod, but, surprisingly, Liz seems to be the one who's disappointed that we're not leaving. We haven't been talking much lately, so I don't know what's going on in that head of hers.

"Okay," I say. "So, we go to the party this weekend and leave from there?"

Everyone, except for Liz, seems to think that it's a good idea . . .
posted on 31-Dec-2002 5:15:51 PM by StardustDreamer

I lounged on the bed pretending to read my magazine, listening to everyone debating our so called break-out from this hell hole. I was hella excited at the prospect, but no one seemed to care about my input. I could tell from the look Ava shot me (when she thought I wasn't looking) that she didn't think that I would want to go. I knew everyone else thought the same thing.

I looked up in surprise when I heard Liz agree readily to the idea. I wondered for the first time if maybe we didn't know Liz as well as we thought we did, even after all this time. But then again, I know they don't know me as well they think they do, either.

I was even more shocked when Ava was the voice of reason in escape. I was just fixing to finally voice some concerns about the flaw in our plans when Ava spoke up, practically reading my thoughts. I struggled to maintain my bored and languid expression as she went on about not having food or money, and that we should wait until the time was right. I was almost a little dissapointed, because I was so ready to get out of there. Too many memories of the mistakes I've made and too many reminders of the person I was forced to be by these hyprocritical, uptight assholes that go here. Except for my girls, of course.

I saw Ava look my way when she was finished and I gave her a small ironic smile, raising my diet Dr Pepper in a sarcastic "cheers" gesture. We were alot more alike than people thought.

When Maria asked about the party this weekend, I threw down my magazine. We were going to be ready to leave by this weekend, if I had anything to do with it.

"Hell yes, we definietly need to go to this party, whether we leave from there or not," I nodded, finally giving my opinion. "It can be a sort of one last hurrah for us, to see these people and shake our asses at them all night...then when it's over or we're ready to go, we make like fucking trees and leave. Liz, you work downstairs in the office room, you can gain access to our parents records, with the credit card numbers and information. You know they use them to put money in our dinner and spending money accounts, and our ATM cards?" I smile, flicking a curl out of my face. "We can, uh, alter that to put a significant amount of money in them, and then we can just cash it out right before we leave, so there won't be a paper trail like we would get with using our ATM's."

I nodded at Serena, "You have serious computer skills, I bet Liz could sneak you in."

I thought a moment about the car thing. "And you know, after that, the car and money and food thing would be a sitch, because we'd have hella amounts of money at our disposal. I think our parents owe us anyway, after dropping us off here in this hell hole. I say fuck them, we deserve it," I finish, narrowing my blue eyes.

I finally looked up and saw everyone staring at me in shock at my outburst. What, what did I say?

I went back to reading my magazine, languidly taking a sip of my diet soda.

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posted on 31-Dec-2002 5:35:59 PM by Cominatcha
that was really good, Jess!! I love it when you play Tess!!


So, it turns out that there's another side of Tess that I never knew about. Judging by the sudden quietness of the room, I'm guessing most everyone else didn't know about it, either.

I'm glad Tess wants to go to this party as badly as Ava and I seem to want to, and she's right. This will be a sort of last hurrah. Good-bye to Roswell, good-bye to St. Mary's School for Girls, and good-bye to the life that has imprisoned me and my friends for so long . . .

posted on 1-Jan-2003 1:17:04 PM by Cominatcha
posted on 1-Jan-2003 4:46:40 PM by Liz_Parker

Tess's outburst just about surprised everyone. But she was right, I had good computer skills, so I guess I could do some good.

I can't wait till the party this weekend. As soon as it comes we're outta here!

We scatter off to classes and I'm sure all of us aren't paying attention.

I lean back and doodle ideas down when the bell rings I jump. Time to get together what I need to and be prepared for this weekend.
posted on 1-Jan-2003 4:48:24 PM by Liz_Parker

Tess's outburst just about surprised everyone. But she was right, I had good computer skills, so I guess I could do some good.

I can't wait till the party this weekend. As soon as it comes we're outta here!

We scatter off to classes and I'm sure all of us aren't paying attention.

I lean back and doodle ideas down when the bell rings I jump. Time to get together what I need to and be prepared for this weekend.
posted on 2-Jan-2003 3:43:32 AM by JBehrsGurl

I shook my head, this conversation wuz ova.

“Yo, I’m out. Dis conversation is ova and done. I’ma go take a walk. I ain’t feelin this atmosphere.” I shrugged and left, grabbing my coat.

So I left, walkin out our dorm room I tried my hardest not to slam the door shut behind me. What the hell wuz up wit meh? I neva act rationally. Did I fuckin just say “We ain’t got supplies.” What am I now? A mom? That’s it. I ofically am a cornball. All hail the P!nk cornball named Ava.

“Ava!” I ocassinally haerd the voices of classmates call out but my pace never slowed and never ceased. I had to get the fuck out of this school. I had to get out of this life. I HATE it here. I hate what humdrum life I lead.

Wake up. Go to class. Come back to the dorm. BLAH!

“Hey Ava!”

“Hey gurl!”

“Yo! Pinky!”

Fake ass broads.

They don’t know me. They just say hi cuz I’m who I am. I’m miss “popular” cuz I don’t take no shit and cuz I got skrilla out my ass hole. WE got money. We got all the money we want and more. So why am I stallin? Why am I sayin we ain’t got no dough? Could it possibly be that I, Ava Kenyle Harding, am scared?

“Nah.” I shook my head. Then, “Oof!”

“Whoa there shorty.” I heard a male voice.

I snapped my vision upwards, “You’re a dude.” I said confused. I had just walked off school grounds and Boom! Theres a guy? I shoved out of his arms and straightend myself up. “Who da hell are you?”

“I should be askin you dat same question sweetness.” He looked me over and grinned.

He was tall, really tall. About 5 0r 6 inches more to my height. Making him wha? 6’1 or 2? Yea, I think that wuz it. He look good too. REAL good. Built like a god, bald head. I smirked, he was a cocky bastard. We stood staring at each other for a while until he spoke first, breaking the silence.

“I’m Terrell.” He held his hand out.

“Ava,” I shook it.

Ava.” He repeated it, as if he enjoyed the way it rolled off his tongue like candy. “Where you off to in such a hurry? I’m right here.” He grinned.

I snort, “Full of ya self much?”

“Bitchy much?” He shot.

“You callin me a bitch?” I snapped.

“Nah,” He shook his head chucking, “Damn girl why u ridin me?”

“I ain’t ridin nuthin boi, you da one dat stepped up ta me.” I started to walk off.

He caught up quickly, “You look dope gurl, why you gotta be like dat? I just wanna holla atcha rite quick.” He took hold of my hand and pulled me back ta face him.

His eyes were deep, I was sucked in and there was no turning back, “You dun wanna holla, you wanna hit it and quit it.” I shook my head, “I ain’t like that.” I snuffed, “You a playa an I know it.” I spinned around and walked forward.




“Yo hold up.” He was at my side pulling back.

So predicatable boys were.

I turn to look at him again, “You wanna kick it wit meh? Here’s what you do.” I stepped up to him and trailed my fingers up and down his chest, “You got friends?” I played with his collar.

He gulped, “Uh… Yea?”

I nod, “Good.”

“Uh… Okay…” He touched my hair then moved it out my face, I leaned into his hand.

“Bring ‘em to this party.” I told him where it was gonna be at and then right before he coukd ask for my number, “Yo.” I wrapped my arms around his neck, “I ain’t givin you nuthin unless you work for it.” I nuzzled his nose, “Ya feel meh?”

He nod, “Hell yeah I’m fellin you.” His hands slid down my back to my ass. Typical playa.

“Good.” I buried my face in his neck and pulled my arms tighter around his neck, taking pleasure in his scent, “You smell good…” I kissed his throat.

He groan, “Damn…”

“See ya layta, don’t forget ta bring friends…” I pulled out and walked off…

Always leave ‘em wantin more, that’s when you know you got a playa on lock. He’ll be there, and it ain’t no fun if ya gurls can’t have none…

posted on 2-Jan-2003 12:26:47 PM by qt4167013
yea! I get to post...


"Aww man Terrell. Not another lame ass party." I complain as Terrell tells us about a chick he met.

"It's not like this chick is any different." I say, pulling a root beer out of the little frezzer in our trailer.

mmmm rootbeer.

Terrell narrows his eyes.

"No man, this chick is different."

Alex snorts. He seems to be on the computer.

I look over his shoulder.

"whatcha doing?" I ask eagerly.

"I am checking out this school. Man, this is an all girl catholic school!" He says amazed.

I laugh.

"Woah, looks like Terrell just found himself a goody two shoes catholic girl." I say, recieving a dirty look from Terrell.

"No, listen. I was able to get on to their yearbook. The girl that Terrell likes is named Ava, she has a twin sister named Tess." Alex said as he showed the pictures.

I looked long and hard at the picture on Tess.

"WOW! What I wouldn't do for a piece of that." I whistle.

"Poor Alex here can't date these girls." I say snickering at Alex who has turned off the computer and was staring at me.

"Hes Jewish, and this is a CATHOLIC school." I say.

Alex starts laughing and we find ourselves on the ground hysterically laughing.

"Come on boys. We have a party to crash!" Terrell says and we get ready for a night on the town.
uh....let me know if that sucked. Also, I didn't want to add anyone else so lets just say that max, michael, and Jamal are shopping. Also this scene really had NO purpose. Just showing the guys having fun...
posted on 2-Jan-2003 1:01:07 PM by Liz_Parker
That was good *happy* Now we just gotta get to the party and all us girls can meet all U boys *tongue*
posted on 2-Jan-2003 1:06:04 PM by JBehrsGurl
That was GREAT! I was laughing my ass off when you said Alex cant date them cuz he's jewish! hahahahahahahha!!!
posted on 2-Jan-2003 4:25:05 PM by tabasco sauce I know this is completely out of character for Max. But I didn't think a quiet, shy guy would run off and live with his friends in a trailor. So I decided to spice up his character a bit...but once he meets Liz, he'll tuen into the Max we all know and love.


PS: If this interferes with anything written thus far, tell me, and I;ll change it.

~*Max Part*~

"Common Max. Just one more case of snapple. You know how quickly I consume the stuff." I look over at my best friend of 10 years, clearly pissed. The day I met Michael, he was drinking a bottle of peach snapple. I should have known then and there not to get involved, but somehow, I ended up being friends with a snappaholic.
"Michael...are you the one paying for a god damn case of snapple?" He looks at me and laughs. "Hell no, man. You're the one with all the dough."
I hit his head and proceed to pay the cashier. "Exactly my point. My dough, my decision. End of story."
As we leave the store, my cell phone begins to ring. Answering it, I am greeted by Kyle's voice.

"Max, my man. Terrell got us invited to some party at an all girls Catholic school. Are you game or what?"
I snort with laugher. He's got to be kidding.
"Kyle...Catholic Schools aren't exactly known for their party scenes. I think I'll skip out on this one."
I look over at Michael, rolling my eyes. He caught some of the conversation, and was clearly ammused.
"Hey- I felt the same way, that is, until Terell showed me the year book he swiped. These girls are total hotties. Grade-A, first class, whatever you want to call it. If you don't go, you'll be missing out on some major action."
I begin to ponder his words. Catholic School girls can be hot. Those short skirts and mary jane shoes often mask the souls of some really cool girls. If the party sucks, we can always leave.
"Okay, man. We'll be there. We should be back at the trailor in a few."
I hear Terrell and Alex yell something in the background.
"Awesome. Everyone here is siked. See you in a little while. Bye."

I hang up and turn to Michael. "Catholic School party?" he asks with skeptism. "He said the girls were hot. How could I refuse?"

He looks at me, and raises his eyebrows. "Hopefully these girls don'y know anyone from Beverley Prep, that fancy school you went to way back when. You wouldn't want them to get hold of your past reputation. You were quite the mack daddy, Maxwell."

I roll my eyes. "Shut up, Man. We got some hotties on our hands!"

~*end Max*~

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posted on 2-Jan-2003 4:57:08 PM by Dreamer_Dreaming

I am siting on my bed studying when Maria come in and sit on my side.

She keep sharing at me.

"What?" I ask looking up from her.

"Why you keep sharing at me like that" I question her.

"Maria, just tell me already, it very rude to look at someone like that" I told her.

Why Maria looking at me like she just lost the only friend in the world.

I cant people look at me that way.

Could it be that she know about me being here when I was 5 and my parents dont even give a dam about me.


Could it....

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posted on 2-Jan-2003 6:34:35 PM by JBehrsGurl
NO ONES TAKING JAMAL! ahhh! Itslike you're calling me! *sigh*

Terrell's part is next... Unless Ashley doesn't want me as Jamal...


"Nah baby I tolds you I ain't even in the same state as you anymore. Aye, Aye! C-can I talk?" I waited until she was done yelling, "I dun told you gurl that I wasn't lookin for no relationship. Why actin all emotional for? Kirsten, look. I gotta go babe. It was real. You wuz dope gurl but I gotta cut you off. If I eva cruz 'round central again you be da first ho- gurl I call. One." -Click-

Damn breezies getting all clingy on me. I opened the door to our trailer and the site before me had me weak as hell.

"What you pussies doing drooling ova a playboy?" I grabbed the book from their hands, "Yo…" I did a double take, "Who dis fine honey be?" I pointed to a dark haired booty. "Where you swipe this from?" I said taking a soda out the cooler.

"I have my ways," Terrell grinned, "We goin to ah party dis weekend mah boi!" Terrell wrestled wit me, "Fine honeys every which way!" He play punched my chest.

I socked him back, "Good lookin out son! Aight now tell me the truth." I crossed my arms, I know my brotha better than he knows his own damn self.

He starts to answer…

posted on 2-Jan-2003 7:22:58 PM by JBehrsGurl

"Aight." I sighed, fuckin Jamal always saw through me, "I-"

"He met his next booty call." Alex interrupted me.

I turn to look at him then I turn back to my brother, "Nah it ain't like that. This chicks dif-"

"Don't even say different or it'll fucking kill ya playa status." He shushed me.

I rubbed my hands over my face, "She-"

"Blue balled 'em." Alex interrupted me again.

I turned to him, "Will you shut up before I disconnect your computer?" I snapped. He went back to his machine quietly, "She cock blocked me." I nod.

Jamal whistled, "Where Kyle at?"

"Speak of the devil." I said when Kyle entered, "Yo, I dun wanna hear all ya yappin aight? We goin, I'ma hit that then we out." I walked over to the TV. Why am I lyin?

"Why you lyin?" Jamal said.

Shit. Damn sibling connection, "I ain't lyin." I turn the TV on.

Who m'I kiddin?

I'm lyin…

posted on 2-Jan-2003 8:39:34 PM by Liz_Parker

We all get our bags and get changed into very un-Catholic type clothes.

"God....I can't wait to get outta here!", I say as I fix my hair. "So....uh, who are these guys you invited Ava?"

She just smiles and shakes her head, I sigh and wait for everyone to get changed. When we do, we grab our valuables and go out to Maria's Jetta.

God,I hope this is worth it....
posted on 3-Jan-2003 6:23:57 PM by Cominatcha
Sure you can be Jamal, Elena!! Did you seriously think I'd say no? lol

Great parts everyone!!


I'm not sure about this party thing. It would be different if someone I knew was throwing it, someone I knew that was cool and fun to be around and knew how to throw a party. But, a catholic school girl who I've probably never seen before is throwing this one. I'm not too sure.

Besides, it's been awhile since I've been to a party. The guys and I have all been so busy lately, and we haven't had time to party.

I sigh as Terrell pulls the car up in front of a house that's just beginning to party. It looks like this is gonna be outside. Good. This way, I can get away whenever I want to without having to make some lame excuse like, "Oh, I'm sorry, I have to go to the bathroom."

"Great, a catholic schoolgirl party." I complain. "What're we gonna do, sit around and pray? Or how 'bout take communion? Hell, that should be fun. Oh, I'm sorry, I cursed. Dear Father, forgive me." I made a cross over my chest to exagerate my sarcasm.

Max stared at me in disbelief. "How do you know so much about the catholic religion?"

I shrug. "Let's see, Maxwell, they only go around preaching it 24/7!"

Terrell and Kyle get out of the car almost immediately and go to look for Ava and Tess. Jamal gets out next, looking as wary about this party as I feel.

"You know, Michael," Alex says as he steps out. "Judging by that picture, Ava sure doesn't look like a typical catholic schoolgirl."

I nod. Yeah, I have to agree with him there.

"And, well, if Terrell likes her," he continues, "then you know she's at least a bit of a rebel."

Alex leaves Max and I sitting alone then and tries to act cool as he approaches the punch table. Maybe someone should tell him that cool isn't standing all by yourself.

"Okay," Max says, reaching for his doorhandle. "Let's go party with the chicks."

"Right," I mumble, stepping out as well.

The minute I step onto the grass, I realize something. There are very few guys here. VERY few.

Hardly any guys and tons of chicks . . . hmm . . . this party might not be so bad after
all . . .

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posted on 3-Jan-2003 8:03:47 PM by Liz_Parker

I kinda sit in the back as Ava and Tess talk to some guys. Guess that's who Ava invited.

I sigh and go off into my own little la-la land as I see another guy walk in that doesn't look to bad. I hear one of his friends call him Jamal or something. Maybe this party won't be to bad after all.

He walks over with a couple other guys and smiles.

"Can I help you?", I ask crossing my legs.

He just pulls me up and out to the dance floor. I laugh as he spins me around.

"Hey good lookin'", he mutters and I just smile.

He smiles back and pulls me closer. Then I hear Ava introducing everyone. And I sigh. Looks like we all get buddies for our road trip.

P.S- Great part Ashley *happy*
posted on 3-Jan-2003 8:25:14 PM by qt4167013

I look around the room and smile. GIRLS! I was never very popular at school, ok, I wasn't at ALL popular. Girls snubbed me and I only ever had one date to a dance. With the girl that sat next to me in pre-cal.

I put on my "cocky" smile. This was going to be different. I was going to rule.

Terrell points to that girl Ava. She is with her twin Tess and a blond girl. She is tall and beautiful. I hastilly try to remember the last time I brushed my teeth as I introduce myself.

I look up for a cross neclace. Whew, shes not wearing one.

I grab her hand and kiss it.

"Hello, Alex Charles Whitman at your service."

She laughs and I smile inwardly.
posted on 4-Jan-2003 12:05:37 AM by StardustDreamer
Sorry this is kinda short, but I wanted to get a part out there.


When we got to the party, I could feel the excitement running through me. We were actually DOING it! Our plan was set in motion, and now I was ready just to party and get FUCKED up like WOAH.

I saw Ava wave me over to her where she was talking to two rather fine ass guys.

"Yo sis, dis is Terrell, da guy dat I ran into and invited to this piece. And uh, this here's Kyle," she said, practically shoving me at him.

I glared at her, "Obvious much??" I asked with my eyes.

I turned to apologize to the guy, and was struck by his gorgeous blue eyes.

"Uh, uh, I'm Tess," I stuttered, and then cursed at myself. "I'm Tess," I said again, more confidently this time. "And I swear, I'm not rain man and I usually don't stutter on a normal day basis."

He smiled at me and I almost orgasmed on the spot. This boy was SCORCHING!

I knew going here was a good idea.

posted on 4-Jan-2003 6:40:48 AM by JBehrsGurl
Ooc: I was so ready to go to bed b4 I stopped by here! Lol (also, have any of you guys been to a catholic party? I dunno why ya’ll think they so innocent!!! Lol They not! I’m living proof!) Song is by 3LW “Is You Feelin Me”


Slammin night so far, we all wuz looking hot and ready ta break some hearts. Iwas sportin my black halter and mini leather skirt with knee high boots. Mah sister mirrored my look in deep passionate red. Something about our style was what others always wanted to mimic. They tried, but failed. Me and Tess we the on;y people I knew that could wear the same fuckin thing and look completely different. I loved it. I loved how we could do that, I winked at her and we walked in the hysteria. I knew this party was about to be bangin in about three seconds cuz from my experience, catholic school girl parties are always off the hook.

I turn to my sister, “Yo Te-“

But that’s when he walked in…

Boy you know
You got me really feelin' you
I don't know what you doing to me
But keep it up, keep it up
What you doing to me
Boy you know
You got me really feelin' you
I don't know what you doing to me
But keep it up, keep it up
What you doing to me

He sauntered into the joint like he owned it, his posse followed rather reluctant and I suddenly felt the small smirk pass across my face. Tess oogled the blue eyed boy and I knew it was my mission tonight to hook ‘em up.

“Whut up shortie?” Terrell slid his arm around my waist.

I smiled, “Nuthin…” I shrugged and walked away, teasingly.

“You gonna work me tonight aren’t you baby?” He chuckled.

He introduced the crew and I did the same with mah gurls. Pressing Tess forwards towards her honey.

Terrell pulled me onto the dance floor beside Serena and some hottie. Terrell’s eyes never left me, I was the center of all his attention. I liked this…

I see him almost every day
I wonder if he has a girl
But it really don't matter to me
Cause I've been waiting all this time
Waiting for the day when I can finally make him mine!
He's mine, he's mine
All mine so fine, in due time
I'll be rollin' with him shotgun
Listening to him tell me baby you're the one, yeah

The song that played was exactly perfect. Wuz this playa feelin me? I danced with him, feelin every inch of my body tense up in lust. I danced circles around him first, swaying in a sexy dance and teasing him terribly, I slid my hands up and down him chest, I turn and spun slowly around in a mock gester. Come get it as to say. His hands went to my hips and he pulled my backside to his front, wuz this boi gonna try and break my ass off? Nah, nah, nah. I dun think so baby. I pressed myself up aginst his body and felt his manliness grow harder. I rubbed my ass against it to the beat of the song.

Oh yea. He was fellin me…

Tell me is you feelin' me?
I like what you do
Hope you can feel me like I feel you
Boy you know you really got me going crazy
Forget about them other girls
Come and get with me

“You feelin meh Terrell?” I teased and held his hands on my hips, every so often I would lean my head back against his shoulder.

“Fuckin aye…” He’d whisper when I’d rub him the right way.

I got down low and came back up ass first, it was move that us ladies like to do when we know a male is feelin us. “How ‘bout that?” I grinned and bit my bottom lip.

He spun me around and took my mouth in his. His hands on either side of my face, pulling me in closer.

Tell me is you feelin' me?
I like what you do
Hope you can feel me like I feel you
Boy you know you really got me going crazy
Forget about them other girls
Come and get with me

I pulled out and gasp for air, “Dayum boi. You tryin ta get me ta jump yas right here?” I pant.

He breathes deep in my ear, “You fuckin tyin ta get me ta bust right here?” He licked my ear and I shiver. “You working me ova time ya know that?” He chuckled.

I looked over to my right, Serena was in the same state as I was, “Who’s ya boi all up on my gurl?” I nod my head in their direction, Terrell shook his head and said he wuz his brotha. Oh great. Anotha playa on our hands.

“C’mon, lets get outta here. I wanna kick it wit yous. Not all these people.” He pulls me close again. I clench my eyes shut, can I resist him?

Now baby tell me what's the deal
Put the games aside
I'm just tryna keep it real
Ready to put in work on a relationship
Trying to end this love search
You're the one for me
Can't you see baby
I ain't trying to sing a little episode
I just want you body, mind, and soul

I fnally let my mind do the thinking, “Nah.” I shake my head, “I dun told you boi. You gotta earn it.” I shimmied around, “You want dis?” I moved up to kiss his lips, pulling his bottom lip out with my teeth.

“Fuck yes.” He muttered in ecstacy.

“I ain’t a hit it and quit it job boi.” I said, “You want dis…” I put his hand on my ass, “ He nod his head vigorously, “Whatchu gonna do for it?”

Tell me is you feelin' me?
I like what you do
Hope you can feel me like I feel you
Boy you know you really got me going crazy
Forget about them other girls
Come and get with me

“I’ll do anything you want me to do with it baby,” He kisses my lips again, I allowed his tongue to wrestle around with mine, “Then after I’m done making you cum all night long I wanna make you breakfast…”

I was taken back. On da real? I needed Tess. No male eva dun said some shit like that. What the fuck do I say now?

Tell me is you feelin' me?
I like what you do
Hope you can feel me like I feel you
Boy you know you really got me going crazy
Forget about them other girls
Come and get with me

I moan in response and he attacks my mouth again, so sensual and luscious. His kissing techinique wuz unlike any otha boi I kissed. He kissed me like he savored my every last taste. He didn’t rush it, he enjoyed every second. Relishing in my every movement.

“Nah playa, back up.” I said pushing him away to catch my breath, “You feedin me some lines…” I shook my head, “Ava Kendyle Harding don’t play like dat.”

“Do I even get ta play at all?” He pouted.

Those lips! Those puppy dog eyes!

All the guys I could have
But I'm checkin' for you
So don't let me slip away
You ain't never had good love
Till you had some of my love
So I'm hoping that you're feelin' me
Like I'm feelin' you, oh

“A c’mon baby you know you want it just as much as I do.” He kissed my neck, “Why you laggin? Don’t pass an opp like dis up.” He kissed my neck again.

I pointed to behind him, “See dat jock ova dere? Da one in that big ass huddle of males?” Terrell nods, “Wull he is da most wanted boi at our male companion school and he wants dis.” I point at me, “Any of them boys ova there…” I swirl my finger around in their direction, “Boy I’m telling you I can have anyone I want. Don’t play me.” I shiver as his hand touches my cheek.

“I ain’t playin ya. I ain’t feedin ya no lies. I swear…”


Tell me is you feelin' me
Want you to be feelin' me
I hope that you feelin' me
Baby is you feelin' me
Want you to be feelin' me
I hope that you feelin' me
Baby is you feelin' me
Tell me that you feelin' me
Uh-huh, uh-huh
3LW, DP, 10-23-99
Now you know

“How come I ain’t neva seen you before?” I snap.

“Is this an interrogation?” He counter attacks.

I cross my arms, “I dun have time for games, you baitin and I ain’t catchin.” I tap my foot, “Be straight wit me Terrell. I play around all da damn time but sumthin keeps telling me ta watch out about yous…”

He rubbed the back of his head, “What of it? I’m passin thro…” He looks away.

“Passin thro?” I snort, “You were gonna hit and quit it afta everything I dun said. You nasty piece of shit.” I snubbed him and walked off.

“Can you blame a nigga for tryin? But aye.” He turn serious, “I want yous for more than a fuck. On da real.”

“Is that supposed ta persuade me to fuckin ya brains out in da back of ya car?” I roll my eyes.

“Nah.” He grins, “I got a trailer.”

“You ass!” I smack him.

Boy you know
You got me really feelin' you
I don't know what you doing to me
But keep it up, keep it up
What you doing to me
Boy you know
You got me really feelin' you
I don't know what you doing to me
But keep it up, keep it up
What you doing to me

He grabs my hands, “I ain’t playin. I ain’t neva been on lock and gurl… You holdin mah key.” He rubbed his thumbs over my hands in his. “We ain’t gotta do nuthin. But I still wanna be wit just YOU.” He looked up into my eyes.

Ahhhh shit.

I sigh, “Aight. Outside, balcony. I ain’t gonna go ta yo nasty ass trailer.” I wrapped my arms around his neck, “Wut I gonna do now? I got the key and you got me…” I winked and kissed his lips.

Tell me is you feelin' me?
I like what you do
Hope you can feel me like I feel you
Boy you know you really got me going crazy
Forget about them other girls
Come and get with me

We talked and kissed and talked. Then we kissed some more. Boi know his game. He most definitely had me in the palm of his hand. I kept passin up every line and he took all my shit in stride. Things turn serious when he told me about how his crew neva stayed in one spot for too long.

“When we leave Roswell, baby…” He lifted my chin up, “I want yous ta come with me.”

I nod my head, “But not without mah gurls…”

Wuz I crazy? Hell fuckin yes.

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posted on 4-Jan-2003 7:55:11 PM by Cominatcha
That was great Elena!!


I feel left out. VERY left out. Emphasis on very. Ava met Terrell. Ava's falling for Terrell. I can see it in her eyes. She might try to deny it to herself, but I know she is. I've known her for a long time, now, and I know that when she sees a guy she wants to fuck, she'll make her move and it'll all work out in her favor. But I know that if she ever sees a guy that she actually likes and wants to be around for awhile, fucking or talking or whatever it is that she feels like doing, then two sides of her will emerge, and she'll find her emotions conflicted. Part of her will want to stay Ava, the other part will want something else.

It's obvious that right now, that part of her wants Terrell.

Serena looks like she's wantin' something, or rather, someone, too. Terrell's brother, in fact. Jamal. Classic.

Tess seems to be flirting up a storm with that jock-guy. What was his name? I forgot. I only met him for a few seconds. Lyle? Kyle? Yeah, Kyle. She's definitely into him.

And Isabel and Liz are casting sidewards glances now and then at the other guys, Max and Alex. Liz is turning bright red as she stares at him, Max, and Isabel is pretending not to be interested in the geeky boy, Alex.

But, none of that matters, because, tonight, after this party, we leavin'. All of us our leavin', takin' off to God knows where, and no one's gonna stop us.

The only problem is, we've never completely been on the run like that before. We've had the dorms to come "home" to for a fuckin' long time now. Everyday has always been the same. It's gonna be a big change.

We don't know what the hell we might be gettin' into. If only there was someone around here who did . . .
posted on 4-Jan-2003 9:43:12 PM by tabasco sauce

I walk into the party, carefully observing my surroundings. Considering it was planned by a bunch of Catholic School Girls, it ain't that bad. The chicks are hot, the music is loud, and the sexual energy is at its peak.
When Terrell stops in front of a beautiful, punky blonde, I recognize her as Ava, the girl from the year book. He don't play. From the looks they're giving each other, you can almost feel the attraction. Leaning toward Michael, I whisper, "How much says that Terrell gets laid tonight?" He laughs in response. "Maxwell, forget Terrell. How much says Kyle hooks up with Ava's sister?"
I roll my eyes, and then look at the rest of the faces before me. In the back of the pack, I see a breath taking brunette, with the eyes of a goddess. The expression on her face screams 'VIRGIN', but I can't help but be intrigued. I look straight into her eyes, and crook my finger.
Slowly and cautiously, she makes her way to my side. "Hey, Sweets. How bout you and me get onto that dance floor and do something dirty?" Her eyes go wide at my statement. Yep, she's definately a virgin.
"Suit yourself, hun. I guess I'll be seeing you later."
I walk away, and grab onto the first girl I see. "Hey, Babe. You're one fine looking lady. Wanna dance?" The blonde looks at me and smiles. "Sure! My name is Courtney...Courtney James. We don't get many guys like you at our parties. I have to say, I'm glad you came."
I look down at her and smile. For now, she'll do. I know her type...looks sweet on the surface, but is really a bitch out to get some. There were plenty of those at Beverley Prep, the school I went to in New York.
I pull her onto the dance floor, and we begin to grind to the music. Looking up, I see the brunette, looking at me with those eyes of her's. Something tells me she's not going to leave my mind for a long, long time.

~End Max~
posted on 4-Jan-2003 10:33:24 PM by Dreamer_Dreaming

I was standing by Isabel when I guy ask me to Dance.

I blush, I am not use to being around guys very much.

When I saw him dance with another girl.

I share at him right in the eyes, something tell me I should'nt get to close.

After all I am leaving after the party.

So why am I disappointment that I am leaving and wont see him again.

Hey! I dont even know him, but I know it for the best.

"Isabel when are we leaving again?" I ask her.

I just wanna get out of here before things get out of hand........

posted on 5-Jan-2003 1:10:20 AM by qt4167013
I am not in the mood for some sickingly sweet 'I love you' look into my soul thing. Here is Kyle's REAL thoughts:


I smile seceretivly at Tess and we jump on the dance floor and grind together to the beat.

I smile inwardly to myself.

oh yeah, tonight I am so getting laid.
posted on 5-Jan-2003 1:14:00 AM by qt4167013
I am not posting alex till isabel posts
posted on 5-Jan-2003 2:01:43 PM by Dreamer_Dreaming
same here!*happy*
posted on 5-Jan-2003 2:25:23 PM by Liz_Parker

I pull away from Jamal before something happens that we'll both regret.

"Uh....I'll be right back", I take a deep breath and start to walk off.

Ok Serena.....he's just a guy. Nothing major. Althought you haven't seen one like him in years. I think to myself as I go to the bathroom. As soon as I get there, I splash some nice cold water on my face.

God.....I really hope we don't run into these guys ever again......

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posted on 5-Jan-2003 4:13:46 PM by tabasco sauce
qt4167013 originally wrote:
I am not in the mood for some sickingly sweet 'I love you' look into my soul thing. Here is Kyle's REAL thoughts:

LOL!!! You did a great job with that last post. Teenage guys are horny...there's no denying it. Most people won't experience that whole 'look into my eyes soul mates thing'. Kudos to you!

posted on 5-Jan-2003 4:33:59 PM by StardustDreamer
Kyle's "real thoughts" are very short...
Yeah. Anyway. I'll post a Tess part later.
posted on 5-Jan-2003 4:47:43 PM by qt4167013
Hey, Kyle doesn't have very in depth thoughts. I will post more though later!
posted on 5-Jan-2003 5:20:08 PM by Galita

I look at Tess, Ava and Maria their having a good time with some boyz Ava met and she wants something to happen between me and Alex or whatever his name is.

"I gotta go out of here." I said and start to walk past Alex but he stops me and kisses me. So I kissed back.

Then I found myself on the wall with Alex's hand touching me everywhere I moaned and lay my head back.

It feels so good to have a guy doing then until he tryed to touch somewhere then I pushed away panting.

"I can't do this." I said and walked back to Serana. "God..some guys are prevs" I said softly.
posted on 5-Jan-2003 5:35:12 PM by StardustDreamer
I could feel Kyle's erection as he bumped and grinded against me on the dance floor.

He danced like such a white boy...I had to stifle back a giggle as he did some elaborate shimmy against me.

"Yo fella, I think you might need to simmer down a little bit," I laughed, raising an eyebrow at some other dance concoction he was making up. He looked at me with an indignant, disgruntled look that boys always get when there manhood is in question.

"No, dance just fine," I lied, leading him off the floor by the hand. I could feel his eyes checking my ass out the entire time, and almost rolled my eyes.

No way was this guy getting any tonight. I could practically hear the wheels turning his head- and as fucking hot as this guy was, I wasn't gonna give it up to some random public school guy (which I could tell he was) until I got to know him a little better. My ex-boyfriend taught me that.

I saw Ava a few minutes ago doing some serious dance-fucking across the room and tried to make eye contact with her, but before I could give her a look she was already moving across the floor and up the stairs, towards the balcony. I felt a twinge of concern, but I knew Ava could handle herself.

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posted on 5-Jan-2003 7:03:25 PM by Liz_Parker
Great Part *happy*
posted on 5-Jan-2003 7:05:01 PM by Cominatcha

I tried to pretend that I was having a good time, but I failed miserably. Not only were Ava and Tess flirting up a mad and crazy storm, (while plaing hard to get at the same time, I might add) but Liz had started talking to that Max guy, and now she was watching in envy as he danced with Courtney James. And Serena seemed to be doing the same with Jamal. You could almost see the word LUST written across her forehead.

Me? I'm not the type of person to meet a guy at a party. Call me crazy, but I really believe that it takes time to get to know someone before you just fall madly in love with them.

Obviously Isabel doesn't feel that way, though, because she and Alex are kissing right now, and a few people are even staring at them. A couple of the other guys at the party that go to our companion school are cheering Alex on, too. Sickening.

When I notice Isabel and Alex kissing, I draw the line and decide that I should just go wait in the car and listen to some rap for awhile until we're all ready to go. I don't know how much more of this I can take. All of my friends are hooking up. All of them are finding someone here, and they're actually have a good time. But I still feel very left out. Emphasis, AGAIN, on VERY.

I snag a few chips on my way out even though I know that I shouldn't eat them because they're so unhealthy, and I head for my car. I'm about to get in when I see that guy with the spikey hair---wasn't his name Michael?---standing by his . . trailor . . . smoking a cigarette.

"Why do you have a trailor?" I ask him. I'm surprised that I didn't notice it before. It's actually pretty big. Definitely big enough to live in if you lived on the road.

"Didn't you hear us when we told you we traveled around a lot?" he shot back, inhaling some more smoke.

I shrug. "Guess I wasn't listening."

"Guess not."

I haven't even said two complete sentences to this guy and I can tell that he's the type that could easily get on my nerves.

Then it hits me. I repeat his sentence over and over in my head again and something clicks. "You move around a lot?" I echo in question.


"Like, you kinda live on the run or something?"

"Yep." he says again.

I smile outwardly. "How big is that trailor?" I ask, running my hand along one side of it.


I look up into his eyes and try to lay on the charm. "Got room for six more?"
posted on 5-Jan-2003 8:00:58 PM by qt4167013

I watch, dumbfounded as the chick walked away from me.

I frownd and narrowed my eyes.

Who needs her. I thought to myself and grabbed the nearest girl.

"You wanna party?" I asked in her ear. She giggled.

As I danced with the red head I couldn't help but think about that blond haired girl.

I have got to have her.
posted on 5-Jan-2003 8:18:58 PM by qt4167013
Note: Tomorrow school *shiver* starts for me and I have a lot of work to catch up on as well as studying for finals. On top of that I am in a couple sports with competitions coming up. I am going to be SWAMPED for a while. I will come on and update but not as much as I have been doing. Ill come on in the mornings and maybe nights and I am sorry but ill try to update as much as I can, but if you all can sympethize with me. I am a high school get I will post more tonight and everything. sorry to inconveinience you.
posted on 5-Jan-2003 9:21:43 PM by tabasco sauce

Walking out of an upstairs room, I can't help but grin. This party wasn't so bad after all. I may have not gotten any from the doe-eyed brunette, but I did get some from Courtney. Three times no less. Yep. It was definately a good night for Max Evans.

As I am about to go down the stairs, I see Alex leaning against the banister. "Yo, Whitman? Shouldn't you be getting some ass from that hot blonde?" He looks at me and rolls his eyes.

"Nah, she turned me down. I'm about to go into a room with Pam...the cute red head with the short skirt?" Poor Alex. I know the feeling. When that brunette turned me down, I felt like shit. I've never been with a virgin before. It would have been a night of firsts.

"Where are Terrell and Kyle? Michael and I had some bets going." I see Alex try to hold back a laugh. "Terrell...well, we lost him awhile back. Kyle's still on the dance floor with that Tess chick. He's trying to get her upstairs, but she's resisting him. Smart girl."

I nod my head, and begin to walk away. "Hey, Max? Where ya going? This party is still the shit." I shrug my shoulders in response. "I think I'll be heading back to the trailor. If I drive tomorrow, I'm going to need to hit the hay. Plus, that Courtney chick wore me out. Boy was she wild." Alex slaps me on the back, as if to congradulate me.

Walking away, I dodge a number of hot and sweaty bodies, all lost in some sort of sexual haze. When I pass Kyle, he gives me the thumbs up. He must have seen me take Courtney upstairs. It's too bad his girl is stiff. She's hot and all, but one can easily see that she has a head on her shoulders. She ain't going to give it up in one night.

I walk outside and breathe in the night air. Right before I enter the trailor, I feel a pair of arms encircle my waste. I turn around, and come face to face with Courtney. "Hey Stranger. Want to give me a tour of your trailor?" I look at her and grin. Maybe I won't be getting that sleep after all.

~end Max~
posted on 7-Jan-2003 6:10:37 PM by Galita

I watch Alex dance with some chick then look at Maria.

"I'm outta here Maira." I said and walk out not knowing what to do. I really do like that Alex guy he is cute and all. But not my type of man.

I walk to the car and grab for Maria's purse and pull out a smoke. Hell yeah just what I needed right now.

I light it as some guy grabed it and took a drag. I glare to see Alex. Whoa he smokes cool. Then I smiled
posted on 7-Jan-2003 6:19:12 PM by Cominatcha

Isabel didn't seem like she was in the mood to hear what I had to say, but I really had great news. Instead, she told me she was outta here and went to go smoke. I sigh, and follow her.

I see Alex with her, too. They're both smoking, staring at each other with a passion in their eyes. They're into each other, I can tell. But Isabel isn't the type of girl to just give it away like that. I know she won't do that.

I didn't want to interrupt them---I mean, it wasn't like they were doing anything inappropriate for me to describe, but the attraction was practically radiating off of them in waves---but I had to tell her something.

"You ready to go, Izzy?" I ask.

She looks at me curiously. "Huh?"

"To LEAVE?" I emphasise my last word and send her a look through my eyes.

"Oh, I see." She glances at Alex. "Yeah. But we gotta find the girls."

"I'll find them." I volunteer. "Just get your stuff outta the car and pack it in the trailor." I motion to Michael and his friends' trailor parked behidn ours.

Alex coughs the cigarrette out of his mouth unwillingly. "MY trailor?" he asks me.

I nod. "Michael said we could come with you."

"Who?" he asks. "It's a big trailor, but not big enough for your entire school, sweetie."

I smile. "Not the entire school. Just me, Liz, Tess, Ava, Serena, and, of course, Isabel."

That's when I notice Alex smile . . .
posted on 7-Jan-2003 7:13:22 PM by Liz_Parker

I'm still somewhat dancing with Jamal as I see Maria run in.

"Serena....come on, time to go!", She says and grabs my arm.

I sigh and look at Jamal who just shrugs.

Then Maria grins. "Don't worry....we're all going together! In that trailor."

I look at Jamal who by now is grinning.

"But Maria.....are you sure we'll have enough room?"

She shrugs and we walk towards the exit then Jamal whispers in my ear. "You can always share a bed with me".

I laugh and pop him then see Maria roll her eyes as we get outside.
posted on 8-Jan-2003 3:18:04 AM by JBehrsGurl

Fine as this boi wuz… I had to keep my guard up, boys like dis are used to getting what they want –however, so wuz I.

“Lemme check out dis trailer of yours,” I sat up, “Is that aight?”

He nodded, “You check anything yo0u want honey, ‘slong as you givin it up.”

I rolled my eyes, “Boi shut up ‘for I stomp yous.” We walked out the party. Almost to the door before I was bombarded with posers.

“AVA!!!!” Stephanie Pierson stumbled over, “I-I’m sooo happay! Hahaha! I can’t believe you already bounced back from Bret!” Her words stagger over one another in drunken chatter. “I’m kinda glad tho, cuz without you then he’ll come to me. And everyone knows that once you’re Bret’s gurl then you’re the most popular.”

“C’mon.” I took Terrell’s hand, “Aye Steph. When you go back ta school…” I looked her over, “You gonna have ta wear sunglasses for the next week…”

“Huh? Why?” She laughed.

My fist flew out and connected with her left eye, “Dats why bitch.” I was about to pull her ass back up and deck her again when Terrell literally carried me out the house. “You neva gonna take my place ya damn hoe!” I shouted, people watched as Terrell’s huge arms wrapped around me and lifted me up over his shoulder, “You lucky he holdin me back! Else I’d give you a fat lip ta go with that eye!”

“Yo calm down gurl, you gonna ware ya self out before I can.” He chuckled, “Home sweet home.” He took a key from his back pocket.

“Whut else you got in those pants boi?” I teased.

He looked at me and grinned, “I can give you a personal tour baby, all you gotta do is say da word.”

“Word.” I nod.

“On da real gurl?” He seemed taken back.

I shrug, “Maybe it’s da adrenaline from an unfinished fight…” I moved in closer, “Or maybe it’s cuz you so fuckin fine…” I kissed him.

posted on 8-Jan-2003 8:18:48 PM by Dreamer_Dreaming

After I say that dark hair guy was dancing ,I decide to go find the others.

I spotted maria with Isabel, so I walk over to them.

"Hey, so Are we leaving now?" I ask

"Yes we are leaving with those guys who own that mode a be home" Maria said.

I just nod.

Now I'm gonna have to see those guys again.

What if they rape us abuse us, do something we dont like.

Maria look at me"Dont worry they wont do anything , about what your think" Maria said.

"Huh" I was speechless that she read my mind.

"I know what your think, and you dont have to worried" She said to me.

"Oh ok if your sure, then I wont worried" I reply to her.

"Have I ever been wrong" She ask me.

"No not that I can think of" I said.

"Ok it's done" She said.

"So where are the others" I ask her.......
posted on 9-Jan-2003 8:39:38 AM by Cominatcha
Shit, my ride for school is here and I've got finals today, so I better make this short . . .


I point in the direction of the party. "Right over there." I say as the whole group approaches us. I look over everyone's faces to see if I can tell what they're thinking. "So, ready to go?"

I see them all smile, and I know that we are. We're MORE than ready . . .
posted on 9-Jan-2003 6:34:18 PM by Galita

I look at Alex who has his hands around my waist and smile. I think I'm gonna like this guy.

"I hope we don't get chought Maria" Liz said. She has always been a good girl. I mean she never smokes or drinks.

"Hey Alex do you have any beer?" I ask and he nods.

Let's get drunk and have a good time. I like to say to all my friends and the would say yeah but Serina, Liz and Tess.

We get into the trolier. I wonder where Alex's room is. "Alex mind taking me to your room?" I said with a smirk.
posted on 9-Jan-2003 9:21:19 PM by Liz_Parker

I watch everyone chit chat for a while and sigh. Why do I always gotta be so bored?

Everyone seems to be planning everything around me. Figures.

I never get a word on anything. So I sit down and listen to them chat about things then Jamal walks over and sits on my lap making me smile. "Yes?"
posted on 12-Jan-2003 10:46:20 AM by Liz_Parker
posted on 12-Jan-2003 3:28:00 PM by Cominatcha

Is it getting hot out here or is it just me? Hmm . . . seems like everyone's flirting up a storm with someone. I smile to myself. Typical.

I watch as Isabel flirts with Alex and as Jamal and Serena start to get a little closer. They all seem happy. Really happy. And I'm happy for them, because they're my friends.

"I hate to break the romantic mood," I say, "but we really need to get going. The parties almost over, and we've gotta be home soon, so it's not or neva."

My friends all smile at me and get in the trailor. I get in, too, with my suitcase---yeah, I only have one suitcase cuz I don't have that much shit to take---and I sit down at the kitchen table. Alex goes up front and starts off down the street.

I watch as my little red Jetta disappears from sight, along with the only life I've ever known . . .
posted on 12-Jan-2003 5:24:41 PM by tabasco sauce

This has been a crazy night. The virginal brunette may have turned me down, but I still had Courtney. That girl sure knew which buttons to push. If the guys hadn't bombarded the trailor, we'd probably still be going at it.

Which brings me to my next point. We now have six more people living in our trailor. And these six people happen to be some of the hottest girls in the state of New Mexico. Under other circumstances, I may have complained. I don't know if the cash I took out of my college fund could support twelve people. But something about the look in the girls' eyes reminded me of myself before I decided to run away with Michael and his friends. These girls were trapped, and they needed to get away.

Before putting the key into the ignition, I turn around and look at the group of people settling down behind me. "Hey- I hope you guys are sitting down back there, because I am about to start this baby up!" I hear someone snicker from behind.

"Maxwell, stop bein such a prick and start drivin!" The comment came from Terrell. I laugh in response, and pull out of our parking space.

Seconds later, I see the brunette sit down beside me. "I hope you don't mind my sitting here.They're getting all couplely back there. I felt kind of out of place." I don't say anything, and choose to nod. "Umm...where are we going anyway? I've always wanted to go east. Chicago...Boston...Miami...New York! I mean, I'll go anywhere, but I'd really like to go east."

I look at her and nod. "Okay, hun. We can go out east. But we're skipping out on New York. There some memories there that don't need to be resurrected."

She only smiles at me. It looks like this leg of our trip is finally beginning.

~end max~
posted on 12-Jan-2003 9:13:43 PM by qt4167013

I jump down next to the blond girl from before...who now happens to live in our trailor.

I belch really loud and while Kyle leans over and hi fives me I see her roll her eyes.

"yo I grossing you out?" I ask, batting my eyelashes.

"As a matter of fact yes." She says proporly.

I grin at Kyle and take another swig of pop(I am from chicago...its called

I lean close to her and burp once more.

"Jerk." I hear her mumble and turn away.

I turn to Kyle and we decide its time to jam. We grab our guitars and start playing one of the songs we had just wrote. Soon that Maria girl runs up to us.

'You guys play! I do too! I also sing." She says happily.

Kyle turns to me and grins and I look at her and hold out my hand.

"well, if you would like to be our lead singer welcome to the Whits!"
posted on 13-Jan-2003 4:31:05 PM by Cominatcha

"Like?" I shriek. "I'd love to!" I can't believe this. These guys just happen to play the guitar and they just happen to be good enough at it that I can sing along! This is turning out a lot better than I thought it would.

Kyle and Alex smile, and I plop down in between them on the couch and I start to sing while they play until Ava yells at me to shut the fuck up. It's this little thing Ava and I have. She tells me to shut up and stop singing and I tell her to stop getting body piercings. Sort of like an inside joke.

"Seriously, guys, shut up!" Liz shouts back towards us. "We're driving by the school now and Sister Teresa is outside."

I zip my lips and duck down inside the van. I can't have Sister Teresa seeing me running away with 6 guys I just met. If I do, this entire plan is screwed . . .

posted on 13-Jan-2003 8:25:10 PM by Dreamer_Dreaming

After we made it pass the old boarding school, everyone start doing there only thing.

I start to get bored, then fall asleep.


I at 5 and my parents drop me off.

"Mommy! Daddy!, why you hate me" I cry in my dream.

"Nooooooo, Mommy, Daddy dont leave me"

*End of Dream*

I scream and everyone look at me.

"Had that dream again" Maria ask.

I nod.

"You been having that dream, seen I meant ya" Maria reply.

I try to lgnore her.

"Ya" I said.

She went back what she was doing but I know everyone was still looking at me.

"Exuse me!" I ran to the back, and curl up in a ball of a dark corner.

I sat there for hours.

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posted on 14-Jan-2003 5:30:15 PM by Liz_Parker

I sigh and look out the window. It's gonna be weird sharing a place with 11 other people.

I mean, when it was just us girls I was used to it, but now...I'm not sure.

Liz starts fussing and I roll my eyes. She whines about her parents to much. She's not the only one that was abandoned by her parents. We all were. We're practically orphans.

Nothing for us but the long road and these guys we just met. I look at Jamal whose joking it up with the guys and sigh. I dunno if he's exactly the right one for me....but maybe miles of open space can open up our hearts to.
posted on 14-Jan-2003 6:35:09 PM by Cominatcha

I'm stuck on a bus with 5 other guys I've known for what seems like forever and 6 girls who I haven't even known for a day.

Worse, the brunette seems to be going through something a little emotionally draining, because she's laying down at the back of the bus in one of the bedrooms---Max's bedroom, by chance---curled up in a ball with tears falling down her cheeks. I peak inside and sigh. The last thing our fun crew needs is a girl like this.

Her friends seem a little more concerned, though. I wonder if this girl isn't all upstairs, if you know what I mean. Maybe she's a little crazy. Maybe they're a little worried she'll do something crazy?

I give up on the brunette and sit down at our kitchen table across from the Isabel girl. She's smiling and laughing and talking to everyone. Typical. She's gonna fit right in.

In fact, Serena and Jamal are trying to avoid looking at each other as much as possible, and Ava and Terrell aren't even going anywhere near each other. Ava's sister, um . . . Tess is flirting it up with Kyle. And Alex is practically drooling over Isabel.

Pure lust . . . I'm sure that's all it is . . .
posted on 15-Jan-2003 7:09:16 PM by tabasco sauce

When Liz walks to the back of the bus, I can't help but feel a bit concerned. She may have not given me any tonight, but it doesn't mean that I don't like the girl. She's an innocent. She's vulnerable.

If she doesn't toughen up soon, the guys won't like her all that much. A life on the road can get need to be able to deal with the hard shit. You can't start bitching every time things get bad.

I look in the rearview mirror, and watch as Liz enters my bunkroom. Why ain't that an interesting twist of fate? Of all the rooms in the bus, she chooses mine. Maybe she isn't as virginal as I thought...

"Terrell! Michael! Jamal! Will one of you fruitcakes answer me?" Michael looks up from his spot across Isabel and laughs. "What's up your ass?" He asks in a shout.

"Nothing, man. I'm just sick of driving, that's all." He nods and gets up. I pull over, and he takes the driver's seat.

Walking to toward my bunk, I am immediately stopped by Maria. "Listen, dude. You probably shouldn't be going in there. Liz...she can get pretty emotional. I'd leave her alone. She'll come out when she's ready."

I look at her and nod. "As sweet as that sounds, it's my room. I'll go in any time I want."

I pull open the curtain, and grow shocked at the site before me. It's Liz, sitting on my bed, curled up in a ball, crying. She looks up at me, and I become freaked. I close the curtain as quickly as I opened it.

"You should have listened to Maria" Isabel tells me with a knowing smile. "Liz...she's worried about this trip. She needs her space"

I peek inside my bunk again. This girl needs someone who knows the ropes. It's not like I want to have sex with her. I'll just comfort her, that's all. ]

"Well, she can have her space when I'm through talking with her."

I pull open the curtain and get ready to talk to Liz.

Fuck. What the hell did I just get myself into?

~end Max~

posted on 15-Jan-2003 8:02:24 PM by Dreamer_Dreaming

I wripe my tears fast. and got out Bump.

When I see Max, it look like he wanted to talk to me.

"Wanna talk"he ask.

"No I'm fine, sorry not good ledding ppl in" I said

He share at me and study me.

"Can you stop looking at me like that" I ask him.

"Like what?" He answer.

"Like some kind a freak" I told him.

He grab be like he was about to give me advice.

The truth is I dont want it, No-one knew about this, well just Ave!

She understand me..........
posted on 16-Jan-2003 12:44:57 PM by Cominatcha
posted on 16-Jan-2003 12:59:12 PM by JBehrsGurl
I'm lost, since I've been MIA for so long I have no clue whats going on. Can someone give me the lowdown? Please?

posted on 16-Jan-2003 1:05:35 PM by Cominatcha
Assuming I have this right, once the party was almost over, the group took off together after Maria talked Michael into letting the girls go along with them since they basically had no idea what the life of a runaway would be like. They were all on the bus and Liz fell asleep and had a dream about her parents sending her away to that school or something, and then it got to her and she went back in Max's room to cry. Max tried to talk to her, too. That's basically what I got out of all of this.
posted on 16-Jan-2003 3:02:03 PM by Liz_Parker
Yeah, that's pretty much it.
posted on 16-Jan-2003 8:00:12 PM by Liz_Parker
~*Serena*~ second he's all over me and the next it's like I don't exsist.

Boys! Why don't they ever make a commitment, especially with girls who havn't exactly seen the light of day in ages.

It's hard to not have someone. When your in a place like that it's just about enough to drive you crazy!

I sigh and lean back.....the school was more exciting then this!

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posted on 18-Jan-2003 10:10:54 AM by Liz_Parker
posted on 20-Jan-2003 8:38:47 PM by Dreamer_Dreaming
waiting for our Max!
posted on 22-Jan-2003 7:51:22 PM by Galita
I'll post I promise! I just been thinking about my parents lately and I haven't posted on a story I am doing with a friend (Sorry for that Ashly!) But I will post really soon.
posted on 22-Jan-2003 8:06:01 PM by tabasco sauce

When Liz declines my offer to let out steam, I feel pretty relieved. The girl is intense. I don't know if I would have been able to handle her story.

"Will you stop looking at me like that?" she asks in a huff.

"Like what?" I reply nonchalantly.

"Like I'm some sort of freak!"

I look at her and shrug. "The only reason I'm looking at you funny is because you're invading my turf. That's my bed you're on, sweets."

Her sobs subside and are replaced with a glare. I knew I could stop her crying.

"Well, Max. There happens to be 6 bunks on the trailor, and 12 people. Since everyone else is already shacked up, you're just going to have to deal with me. I refuse to sleep on the floor!"

I can't but grin. Who would have guessed that Little Miss Virgin had a fiery side?

"Fine. No arguing there. Just so you know, I call the left side."

She continues to glare at me.

"So...are we still heading east? I really want to see the Empire State Building...and the Statue of Lib-"

"I told you before. We're NOT going to New York."

I watch as she trembles. I didn't mean to scare her.

"Listen...I'm from New York, okay? There things that happened back there that I just want to forget."

She only nods.

"Why don't you get some sleep? I'll go out and talk to Kyle or something. It's obvious that he won't be getting any from Tess."


"Oh and Liz? Stay on the right side of the bed."

~end Max~
posted on 22-Jan-2003 8:33:32 PM by Liz_Parker
Great part!
posted on 24-Jan-2003 12:49:13 PM by Cominatcha
great part. BUMP!!*bounce*
posted on 26-Jan-2003 3:40:42 PM by Liz_Parker
posted on 26-Jan-2003 4:11:13 PM by Dreamer_Dreaming

I roll my eyes at Max.


I get up and wounder if I should go back and join my friends.

I peek into the door.

I saw everyone laughing,And Fliring.

I go in and sat by Maria, she looked at me with saddness.

"You never did tell me why your sad?" She ask me.

I looked at her, and turn away.

"I dont want you to cry for me or feel sorry" I told her.

"try me, plase I am your best-friend" Maria said.

"ok.......When I was 5 my parents send me to that school. And I dont even know who they are, what they look like, or even what their name's" I said.

She looked at me and gave me a biggest hug and say" I'll always be here you need me" she said in my ear.

I smile at her......
posted on 26-Jan-2003 4:34:15 PM by Cominatcha

My heart's breaking for Liz. I always thought I had it bad because I didn't know my father, but at least I've always known my mother. I see her every month at least, and we keep in touch by the phone and interenet and letters and stuff. But poor Liz . . .

Now that Liz is running away with us, I have a feeling she'll never have a chance at seeing her parents again, but I can't bring myself to tell her that . . .
posted on 26-Jan-2003 6:09:54 PM by Liz_Parker
Great parts!
posted on 27-Jan-2003 7:57:13 AM by Liz_Parker

I look over at Maria and Liz and sigh. I swear Liz acts like such a baby. So what if her parents left her at the doorstep? We've all been treated the same way. And at least she's had the school for a shelter and food.

And that's better than nothing, so why does she keep having to bring up her parents? We get the point, and trust me, after awhile it gets old hearing her cry over the same thing. Trust me, if we missed our parents as much as she does....we'd all be bawling like babies.
posted on 27-Jan-2003 6:35:43 PM by Cominatcha
Great part!! BUMP *bounce*
posted on 27-Jan-2003 10:32:12 PM by Liz_Parker
Bumpity Bump *bounce*
posted on 28-Jan-2003 8:36:45 AM by Cominatcha
BUMP again!!
posted on 28-Jan-2003 5:39:13 PM by JBehrsGurl
Ava and others…

"Stop lookin at me like I'm some type of damn display." I snap.

Terrell snorts, "Dayum baby why you blow hot and cold so much?"

Jamal walks in the back of the bus, "Yo, your gurl Liz is trippin big time. I think you better go see whats up." He juts a finger towards the bunks.

I shryg, "She'll be aight. She does this when she gets nervous, it makes her think of… past experiences." I look down at my feet sadly. "Maybe I should go talk-"

"Nah, you gonna stay right here and talk to me." Terrell says pulling me back.

"Like hell I-"

"Oh -hooo! Fiesty now ain't she?" Jamal nudges his brother, "Hope ya gurl Serena got that pazaz goin on fer 'er too." He nods.

I roll my eyes, "Do all guys think about sex?" I snap.

"YES." They reply.

I groan, "Wull, guess ya'll don't know catholic gurls den huh?" I wink, "We're virginal…" I press my hands together in a prayer, "See ya layatas." I shimmy up front wit mah gurls.

posted on 28-Jan-2003 5:41:58 PM by Liz_Parker
Great part, welcome back Elena *happy*
posted on 28-Jan-2003 5:51:09 PM by JBehrsGurl
thanks Mandy! *wink*
posted on 28-Jan-2003 6:07:36 PM by Liz_Parker
Your welcome *happy*
posted on 28-Jan-2003 7:21:36 PM by Cominatcha
Yeah, Elena, excellent part!!
posted on 28-Jan-2003 8:06:02 PM by Liz_Parker
posted on 29-Jan-2003 4:47:05 PM by Dreamer_Dreaming
let you all know I am sick and I will post when I am long better
posted on 29-Jan-2003 9:13:33 PM by Galita

I pull Alex to his room.

"Listen buddy next time you do that to my girl I beat your butt to the ground, you got me?" I snaped at him.

"Yeah sure babe." He said.

Ok I have never slept with a guy. Got closed to it but my best bud Tess walks in and that got me pissed. So I guess things can change on the road with 5 guys.

"Don't call me that please." I said softly. He just looks at me. I get a little nervous as he pulls me closer and kisses me deeply. I try o pull away.

"No please don't...Ava might kill me." I said.

"Is that all you can think about?" He ask.

"They are my family the only people who can uderstand me for who I am." I said looking down.

Hey sorry it took so long!!! I'm alive now lol
posted on 30-Jan-2003 1:59:32 PM by Dreamer_Dreaming
OCC: I am almost better. I can post for now


I was sitting by the window looking out.

I just decide to let go of my parents.

I have a family right in front of me that cares about me.

"Girls? Let do something we always wanna do?" I said looking at Tess,Ave,Serena and Maria.

"Like what?" Said Tess.

"Like we always talk about, remember" I said.

She smile

I nod.
posted on 30-Jan-2003 7:18:16 PM by Liz_Parker
posted on 1-Feb-2003 6:57:53 PM by Cominatcha
Whoo!! I gotta go a little crazy with this!!


I know exactly what she's talking about. See, Ava was telling us once about how she flashed this whole group of guys during her freshman year. We had never known about it, cuz she did it without us. But we were all thinking that it would be really fun, even Liz, so we've always talked about doing it sometime, but, well, being in a catholic school kinda limits the opportunities.

But we're out on the highway now flying fast away from our old lives and heading straight for our new ones.

"Let's do it!" I say exicitedly.

When the van is pulled to a stop, all six of us head up to the windows to see a group of young guys parked beside us. With smiles on our faces, we pull up our shirts and start laughing as we go completely wild for the first time in years . . .
posted on 2-Feb-2003 9:49:46 AM by Galita

I giggle at the looks those guyz had. This was funny.

"OMG.......look at their faces!!!" I laughed evan harder then turn around and Alex was looking at my chest I cover up.

"Oh....sorry" He said. I can't beleive that I have to share the same room has him and the same bed.

I loo at the girls who are having fun. I smiled.
posted on 2-Feb-2003 3:16:46 PM by Cominatcha

The Isabel chick seems to be having a lot of fun, especially around Alex. Wonder what's going on between them? Maybe something might start up, huh?

God, this is like some fucked up soap-opera.

I see her smile at him. Yeah, fun. She's having fun. Maybe a little too much fun.

Maybe I'm just having a little too much fun thinking about all of the NC-17 rated things I could do with Maria . . .
posted on 2-Feb-2003 4:17:29 PM by Dreamer_Dreaming

I take off my shirt and dancing alot.

If one of the num see me now.

They would be in shock.

I starting laughing alot......

I turn to maria.

"they like this" I said to her.....

posted on 2-Feb-2003 5:14:37 PM by qt4167013

I am in love.

I stare adoringly at Isabel and lick my lips.

oh yes. Definitly oh yes.

She sees my stares and shoves me playfully.

"Oh Alex."

I smile and can't help waiting till she says my name under different circumstances.

Oh God yes!
little alex is thinking something naughty!
posted on 2-Feb-2003 6:51:16 PM by Liz_Parker
lol, great parts!
posted on 3-Feb-2003 11:01:51 AM by Cominatcha
That was so funny Madison!! I was laughing out loud, literally!! Great parts, all!! BUMP!!
posted on 4-Feb-2003 7:35:58 PM by Galita

I walk up to Alex.

"Hey Alex. What are you staring at?" I ask him the I tease him by biting his bottom lip.

" that's all" He mummbles. I hear my girls giggling so I drag Alex to his room.

"I'm not sure Isabel. What is I hurt you?" He said.

"You won't hurt me" I said to him. He nods and start to kiss my neck. Whoa! This is weird. Isabel Jacobs having sex! Hell yeah baby!!!
posted on 4-Feb-2003 7:56:44 PM by qt4167013
posted on 4-Feb-2003 8:10:55 PM by Liz_Parker

I can't believe we're doing this! Sure, were "allowed" to do this...but for some reason it just feels weird.

I hear the guys gasping and I can't help but laugh. "You sure we can last with these guys Maria?", I ask smiling.

She just shrugs and I put my shirt back down and turn aorund to Jamal. "Enjoy the show?", I ask with a grin...his mouth is open from shock.
posted on 5-Feb-2003 8:00:16 PM by Dreamer_Dreaming

I was laughing my ass off.

I saw Max looking at my top.

I blush and pull it down.


I look at him.

Then started laughing and catch the giggles.
posted on 5-Feb-2003 9:35:11 PM by tabasco sauce

"Are they doing what I think they're doing?" I ask Kyle, with a laugh. "Uh huh...don't talk to me Max. You'll make me miss the show."

Can't argue with him there. These girls are fine. Every one of them has substantial assets....but Liz. Wow. Little Miss Virgin has a wild side. Who would have guessed?

I look up at her, and watch as she sways her hips and reveals more and more skin.

She looks over at me, and catches my gaze. She immediately turns red, and pulls down her shirt. Oh well. This won't be the last time I see that much of her. I promise you, it isn't.

~end Max~
posted on 6-Feb-2003 8:34:53 PM by Cominatcha
Great parts!! BUMP!!
posted on 6-Feb-2003 9:09:15 PM by Liz_Parker
Great part *happy*
posted on 7-Feb-2003 8:30:03 AM by Cominatcha

What a show! I mean, really WHAT A SHOW! Six very hot girls, one of which I think is a little hotter than the others, lifting up their shirts on our bus while we drive away from their lives . . . literally. Nice.

I'm trying not to look at Maria when I notice that Alex and Isabel are nowhere to be seen.

Oh, God . . .
posted on 7-Feb-2003 8:40:53 AM by qt4167013
I'm here I promise...just let me find my muse....
posted on 7-Feb-2003 7:53:13 PM by tabasco sauce
Everyone please go to the announcement board and read the thread about the board's fate. It's important that all of us active users learn about RFF's financial situation. If we don't start to donate money, come march, this community may no longer exist. Even if it is moved to another server, there will still be costs.
If the board is moved, our rpg threads will most likely deleted. Even if the mods decide to move them, the new threads will be frozen, meaning we can no longer post in them. If the move in announced, I urge all threadmasters to save all posts in the thread. That way, they can be reposted without being frozen.
Wendy and Heidi (the admins) are amazing, as are Katie and Britt (the mods of the rpg board). Please vote, donate, and offer to help to make their lives just a little bit easier.

posted on 8-Feb-2003 2:04:56 PM by Cominatcha
I'll make sure to check it out right away!!
posted on 10-Feb-2003 8:48:54 AM by Dreamer_Dreaming
posted on 11-Feb-2003 12:51:33 PM by Cominatcha
posted on 11-Feb-2003 7:25:19 PM by Galita

I look over at Alex as he sleeps. I pull my clothes on and go to Maria.

"Hey chica!" She said to me.

"Shhh....Alex is asleep damnit Maria." I said to her.

"What happen to you?" She asks me.

"Me and Alex slept together." I said looking down.

"Your first time, right?" She ask and put her arms around me.

I nod softly.
posted on 12-Feb-2003 4:46:22 PM by Dreamer_Dreaming

I went back to max bunk.

but this.

I sat near his bed.

I writting poems.

I can write poems for hours.

I saw some pick one page up and start reading.

it was Max

"hey put that dont" I said.

trying to get it back.

He start wreastling with me.

So I did back.

I laugh at lot.

and he did too.
posted on 13-Feb-2003 9:11:20 AM by Dreamer_Dreaming
posted on 14-Feb-2003 10:38:34 PM by tabasco sauce

When I return to my bunk, I see Liz sitting on the edge of my bed, furiously writing in a leather bound book. She looks so cute when she's concentrating.

I quietly pull the curtain closed, and snatch the book from her grasp. "Hey! Give that back!" She cries, reaching toward me.

She falls atop my body, and tries to get her book back, but I give her no slack. Before I know what hit me, I was wrestling...and giggling. Max Evans does not giggle. This is turning waaay to sexual. I can't pounce on little-miss-teen virgin on her first night in the trailor. She'd probably hate me.

"So what is this anyway?" I ask, flipping through the pages.

"It's a book of poems. MY poems. And they happen to be private!" She explains with mock anger.

"Amber spheres guide me,
captivate me.
His gaze falls upon me,
making me weak at the knees-"

"It doesn't say that, and you know it!"

I look down at her and grin.

"Yeah well, it's what you want to be writing, ain't it?"

~end Max~
posted on 16-Feb-2003 1:20:19 PM by Cominatcha
Great parts!
posted on 16-Feb-2003 1:26:34 PM by Dreamer_Dreaming


"you happened to be attacked,

But I would'nt write that" I told him.

"And why not?" He ask

"well, I need this feeling if someone I feel is the one?, dont you wanna find the right girl" I ask.

He look at me and smile.

"I think I have" He told me


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posted on 17-Feb-2003 12:00:21 PM by Cominatcha
JUST BUMPING.*bounce**bounce**bounce**bounce**bounce**bounce**bounce**bounce**bounce**bounce**bounce**bounce**bounce**bounce**bounce**bounce**bounce**bounce**bounce**bounce**bounce**bounce*
posted on 17-Feb-2003 12:24:39 PM by tabasco sauce

"Don't you want to find the right girl?" Liz asks me, with a cute pout.

"I think I have," I replied, grinning at her.

"What?!" She asked, wide eyed.

I rolled my eyes and fell back on the pillow. There was no need to tell Little-Miss-Teen-Virgin that she wasn't going to be a virgin at the end of the month. On top of that, I didn't have to let her know that I liked her personality. By keeping that information from her, I had an edge.

"Well, who is she?" She asked, her eyes bright with laughter.

"Courtney. Now that girl sure knew how to please a man. Do you know if she's single."

Liz fell back, her expression blank.

"Courtney? As in Courtney from school. You've got to be kidding me. That girl is the villiage bicycle. Everybody gets a ride."

I looked up at her and laughed.

"You're right, Liz. Courtney isn't the girl for me. But I'm not going to tell you who it is. What would be the fun in that?"

~end Max~
posted on 17-Feb-2003 5:43:12 PM by Dreamer_Dreaming

I grab and pillow.

I start hitting him with it.

I was laughing.

He grab someone else pillow and start hitting me.

He was smiling, and laugh.

He took the pillow away from, me and grab me in his arms.

What is he doing?

I thought he was in love with someone else

Could she

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posted on 18-Feb-2003 12:08:51 AM by JBehrsGurl
This is to everyone (esapecially Liz_Parker),

Now I'm not one to start conflict but I was terribly upset with the constant bickering coming from a certain person in this RP. I posted that I had no time, well apparently this wasn't enough to get that person off my back. So I decided to give up my part. And even THAT wasn't good enough. I can't express how much stress from real life and now that I'm taking on more responsibilities at another site.

What I'm trying to say here is that I loved posting in this Role Play. Yet I soon lost the time to be able to post, I also lost inspiration. I DO NOT like to be rushed. So now that I'm pretty pissed off (excuse my lanuage) I'm leaving this RP and at Rivalry. I don't like being harrassed and then scolded for something that I had explained before. Maybe the person didn't read my a/n but.... Read it now.

I love you Ashley, you're one cool ass chica and this has NOTHING to do with you. *hugs*

Have fun,

p.s. This is me writing while I'm still mad so... Nuff said.

posted on 18-Feb-2003 7:36:00 AM by Liz_Parker
Thanks for letting us know Elena *happy* And as U know I already took over Jamal on Rivalry ut *sigh* I'm no good at him! Well, hope you can get everything worked out.
posted on 18-Feb-2003 8:36:31 AM by qt4167013
I am really sorry to hear you say that! Were all going to miss you so much! You brought so much to your characters and I am sad to see you leave!

posted on 18-Feb-2003 11:11:25 PM by tabasco sauce
We'll miss you, hun!
posted on 19-Feb-2003 8:31:12 AM by Cominatcha
So, I'm a cool-ass chica, huh? lol. Well, I'll miss you Elena, but I understand that life can be very stressful.

Anyway . . . hmm . . . what else was I gonna say? Oh, yeah, the parts have been great, and I would post, but I wanna see where this goes with Max and Liz.

So . . .BUMP!*bounce*
posted on 19-Feb-2003 6:14:16 PM by Liz_Parker
Hmmm....I wish we had someone for Jamal now :(
posted on 20-Feb-2003 7:20:10 PM by Cominatcha
Okay, I'm gonna post, just because I haven't for a long time!


I hear laughing in one of the bedrooms and go to check it out as the van zooms on. Isabel seems to be a lil hyped up still! Sugar rush or something! Or maybe she's just a little high.

I strut past Michael, noticing that he's looking at me. He obviously can't resist a plate of temptation when it's laid out in front of him.

I open the door to the bedroom to find that Max and Liz were the two I heard laughing. They look so comfortable around each other, almost as if they'd known each other their whole lives instead of a few hours.

It's not fair! How come Liz can find a friend/possible love interest on this trip and I can't?
posted on 20-Feb-2003 7:45:54 PM by Liz_Parker
Great Part Ashley!