posted on 22-Jun-2002 7:03:09 PM
Slash-shie:A lot a bit of slash, but a little bit of not.

Disclamier:Don't own em, I just like to play with em.

Rating:NC17

Summery: Don't really have one.

Feedback: I'd like some, even though I know I probaly won't get any:::sigh:::

A/N:Okay, this is kinda AU-ish. Theres not much difference though, hench the AU-ish. The only big change is that Michael did not live in a trailer home. He's filthy freaking rich, his father's still Hank though, just rich Hank.

He and Max are not on the best terms, and after one preticularly nasty fight, he decideds to take up his fathers offer for Private school and leaves Roswell.

I think thats all.

Oh and I don't really have a good excuse for just dropping off the face of the earth a few months ago. I just....did, so I won't bore you with lame excuses.

I'f you've got any questions after you read, just ask*happy*

*******

Part I

Rave on the edge of town


Flickering darkness.

Their bodies, enveloped in a pulsating wave of gyrating bodies, ground together, to close for comfort, to far for satisfaction.

Music rippled in the thick air.

They could barely hear themselves breath.

G*d it was hot.

Their skin, slid easily against each other, hot like fire, slicked with sweat.

Their bodies vibrated as one.

One hand wondered, found skin, a smooth tight abdomen.

Another, more daring, demanding, sought out tight peaked nipples.

Stealthy, his warm tongue darted out the bath the soft soaked skin of the bare neck offered to him.

Suddenly it seemed hotter.

His heartbeat thundered, raced, drummed out it’s own erratic rhythm.

A breath shuddered from his damp lips, pressed against an earlobe, and he whispered, his voice low, heavy, throaty with need.

“Lets get outta here”.


Max Evans awoke early, instinctively aware that he was not alone. Blinking slowly, he turned his head to the side. A tuft of soft, dark brown hair peeked out from beneath the sheet next to him, and he could feel a warm breath tickle his bare skin, although he could not see his companions face.

Frowning, he let his eyes wander along the baseboard and across the pale blue carpet, following a trail of rumpled cloths: shirts, jeans, underware, to the bed.

Condom wrappers, rumpled, discarded and forgotten, littered the floor and the nightstand beside the bed, and a hastily poured tube of lubricant lay uncapped, oozing unto the light wood.

Last night had been a bust, their lead, that led to the rave, having gone dry. To say night had been a disappointment was saying the least, blinking Max eyed the tuft of hair again, at least for the others it seemed.

Yawning, he reached up, rubbed the sleep from his eyes, turned unto his side, “Morning…..”, and eased the sheet down, his face flushing and going slack when his eyes finally found a face.

His heated, and turned red, as his mind raced to recall all of what had happened the night before.

Then, aware that his voice was slowly trailing off, he forced himself to finish quietly,”………………..Michael”.



Second A/N:I had to put it. It was driving me insane. I had to post this somehwere,and low and behold,here I was. Gaby7tvm convinced me to post it so ofcoarse it's dedicated to her*happy*



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posted on 22-Jun-2002 9:01:13 PM
Oh, I forgot to say.

Max, Michael, Isabel, and Tess know they arn't normal, they even know that they arn't human, but they don't know what they are just yet.*bounce*
posted on 22-Jun-2002 9:15:55 PM
quote:
believer_evans originally wrote:
Liking this already.
CAn't wait to read more


Thankyou.

:::blushes:::

I didn't think anyone would.


quote:
Gaby7tvm originally wrote:
Thanks for the dedication...

Wow, so it will be like 4 people having sex, you have to continue, I want to know more, this seems very interesting*bounce*

Ps. Post it too, in the other boards, just to see, how is the feedback, well is just ad advice


Your welcome, for the dedication that is.

Glad you liked.

I would try to explain how it's gonna be, but it's just really......well you'd have to read to see,LOL*wink*

quote:
Rapunzel originally wrote:
*big* Devilish...what's this I see....Max in bed with Michael? *big*

You naughty smut queen, you...

Do tell us some more of the story...

-Kari


Ahhhhhh, Smut Queen. My mother should be so proud,LOL.

Glad you liked my fellow Smut Queen.

I'll be sure to post more.

quote:
jeremiah originally wrote:
you have to continue with this!


Sure thing.

Glad you liked.

quote:
BelevnDreamsToo originally wrote:
"...gyrating bodies, ground together, too close for comfort, too far for satisfaction." FANTASTIC LINE!!!!!!

You fooled me with the dark hair poking out of the sheets!! Good surprise!!

This looks VERY interesting!!! Can't wait to see where you go with it!!

More soon please!! Thanks J *big*


I liked that line too,LOL.

I glad you enjoyed this.

Thanks for replying.*happy**bounce*
posted on 22-Jun-2002 9:40:04 PM
quote:
behrstars originally wrote:
please post more soon


'Kay, Glad you liked. Major thanks for the bump.*happy**bounce*
posted on 22-Jun-2002 10:02:23 PM
quote:
Eraser Room originally wrote:
Ahhh!!!!!! I knew it was Michael! I knew it! *big*

*is obviously proud of self*

That description was too non-gender specific. He didn't seem surprised by the tub of lub (yep, I'm a true poet) so maybe he's into kinky stuff with girls? Or is he just surprised that it's Michael...like he knows Michael from his past. Hmmmmm.

I can't wait for more of this...but then I really didn't have to say that did I? You know me too well. *wink*



I was wondering when you and your keen sense of observation would show,LOL.

I knew you wouldk now.

'.......tub of lub',LOL, a true poet indeed.

Glad you liked.

And of coarse I've gotta say, I'm going to post more soon*happy*


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posted on 23-Jun-2002 6:11:31 PM
quote:
Teresa originally wrote:
I thought from your summary that Max and Michael weren't on good terms. I think they are making up pretty good. **giggles**More soon please.....I'm hooked to your stories...what was the NTBT or something to that extent. I want to read everything.*bounce**bounce**bounce**bounce**bounce*
Whatcha think about HH?????????????????????????????


Glad you liked.

They arn't on good terms, but you know how out of controll and wickedly fun things can get at Raves.

Glad you liked.

Much thanks for the bump.

Oh and NBTB is Nothing But The Blood, thats just a refular story thought. Of coarse it's got smut, I mean, comeon it is ME who's writing it, but it's not in the least bit slashie.

Thanks again*bounce*
posted on 4-Jul-2002 5:22:02 AM
quote:
Eraser Room originally wrote:
MORE!


MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE


MORE!

*big*


OKAY!!!!!!!!*happy*LOL

I promise to have more soon.

Actualy I already have part of chapter two written for this but I didn't post. My damn system you know.

NBTB,Slash,Fucked,and then Original Sin.

Man I wanted to skip past the others so bad.

But what can I do?

*Insert Evil Grin*happy**

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posted on 24-Nov-2002 11:01:33 PM
Well, don't I feel like shit. It's been months, MONTHS since I updated I know, and I honestly don't have an explaination cause I posted this then, I don't know, I just need, like really NEEDED a break from everything. But I havebeen slowly but surely putting together a chapter 2.

Then, as my luck goes, my sister, ChaosTheory, told me the board might be shutting down, so while I'll still be putting together this chapter and trying to get myself back used to writing, if anyone knows of a good place I could put this, if the unfortunate happenes and the board does close, I'd really be appreciated, cause I'd hate to start writing this again, only to have no place to put this.

Anyway, my most sincere apology with a healthy dose of guilt on the side, to you all, and I'll try to update again soon.

Sorry*bounce*