posted on 26-Jan-2002 5:53:01 PM
Title: Love & Tennis
Author: SWEETASPEACHES
Couple: I don’t know yet, but read to find out
Summary- Liz is a tennis player struggling to make it to the top, read the rest to find out the rest of the story.
Author’s Note: I don’t owe anything; I don’t even know much about tennis LOL
Please don’t sue; I’m just a struggling writer.



You must be tired of me, I’ve written a lot of stories, 1 after the other, Well just check this one out PLEEZ AND GIVE ME FEEDBACK
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Liz’s POV at age 17

My eyes got bigger and bigger, I was sweating faster by the minute, I was eager to get this over with, but I couldn’t move. I’m going to be okay, I’m going to be okay, I’m going to be, Oh gosh, I’m not going to win. Liz you got yourself under-control, just hit the ball with your tennis racket to the far left pass her. Just hit it, hit it, hit it, oh gosh here I go. Thought Liz as she was about to hit the ball.
I hit the ball as hard as I could but it couldn’t get passed my opponent, Isabel. Isabel hit the ball with her racket making a small noise coming from her peachy lip-gloss lips. My score was 30 and hers was 40. Focus Liz, Focus, I can do it, just a little bit more strength. Isabel hit the ball to the left, while trying my hardest to hit the ball back, I almost stumbled.
Liz, just hit the ball, just hit the ball. Liz mumbled in her mind.
I was so close to hitting it but my racket missed by 2 inches. I tried to stretch as far as I could, but I couldn’t go any further. That was it, the game was over, done, finished, she won. I could see her brother jump out from the crowd and hug her through my tears. I tried so hard to get there, to the top, and now a model like witch was taking my place. I walked up to the net getting ready to shake her hand, but she was too busy smiling and parading. She had won the trophy I didn’t; I won nothing, nothing but a trip back to my home state Roswell, to face the humiliation. I could almost see Maria’s and Alex’s face, it was crushed, I could see my other friend’s faces too and people that I didn’t even know, their faces had pity on them. Tears started overflowing out of my eyes, I couldn’t control it anymore. I could fell my close getting wet, by not only my tears but also perspiration. Isabel finally came to the net and shook my hand while patting me on the shoulder. I wanted to grab her hand and break it so she could never play again. I walked out of the court with sorrow, emptiness but most of all defeat. Maybe this was how it was supposed to be, the right-handed, model look-alike with her handsome brother were supposed to win. The Left handed Loser Liz with the not at all built body and her, she didn’t even have a brother. I thought about my boyfriend as I walked out, my ex-boyfriend, I know that he would leave me, leave me, not because of me losing, but because of my tennis career, I was never around him much, we would never kiss, hug or even talk. I knew his plan when I reached back to Roswell he would invite me for dinner and he would dump me, right there. I life was now officially over; I would lose my boyfriend, my tennis career and my once respected life.
I took up my bags and tried my best to walk to my limo with out breaking down.
“Liz Parker” said a strong New York accent voice.
“Yea” I said while turning around to see where the voice came from.
It was Max, Isabel’s sister, wait a minute, Max didn’t have his body pierced, didn’t have tattoos and didn’t have that much muscles. He saw that I was staring at his muscles because he faked a cough to get my attention.
“By the look on your face I bet your thinking this isn’t Max.” he said
“By the look on your face, I see that you aren’t a fan of tennis” I said admiring his piercing. I was actually planning to get to pierce my belly later on.
“You did good today,” he said. I had totally forgot about me losing to Isabel until he said that comment. Tears started to well up in my eyes.
“Who are you, Max’s twin or something?” I said trying not to lift my face to him.
“Yea I’m his twin, I’m the poor part of the family, Isabel is the Tennis Star, Max is the future manager of Isabel, my Dad is the millionaire who always got his way, and kicked me out of the house, and my mom is a nurse, who is the only one that contacts me at least once a month.” Said Zan while smiling as he talked about his mother.
“Life can be cruel huh?” I said lifting up my hands.
“Yea, but your life doesn’t have to be, you can still a tennis star,” he said.
“Whatever, my tennis career is over from now,” I said
“No, don’t give up, just follow the letter A” said Zan mysterious.
“What, what letter A” I said, but before he could say anything else the driver of my limo blew the horn causing me to jump.
“I have to go” I said, I didn’t wait for his reply I just wanted to get far away from anything involving tennis.


LOOK OUT FOR CHAPTER 2 OF THE STORY ‘LOVE AND TENNIS’
Spoiler- Liz was 17 when she played tennis against Isabel; she planned to forget about Tennis, until she meets that stranger Zan again.
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posted on 27-Jan-2002 4:35:44 PM
Title: Love & Tennis
Author: SWEETASPEACHES
Couple: I don’t know yet, but read to find out
Summary- Liz is a tennis player struggling to make it to the top, read the rest to find out the rest of the story.
Author’s Note: I don’t owe anything; I don’t even know much about tennis LOL
Please don’t sue; I’m just a struggling writer.



You must be tired of me; I’ve written a lot of stories, 1 after the other, Well just check this one out PLEEZ AND GIVE ME FEEDBACK
I’M Waiting………………………………….


(From Chapter 1 of Love and Tennis)
“Who are you, Max’s twin or something?” I said trying not to lift my face to him.
“Yea I’m his twin, I’m the poor part of the family, Isabel is the Tennis Star, Max is the future manager of Isabel, my Dad is the millionaire who always got his way, and kicked me out of the house, and my mom is a nurse, who is the only one that contacts me at least once a month.” Said Zan while smiling as he talked about his mother.
“Life can be cruel huh?” I said lifting up my hands.
“Yea, but your life doesn’t have to be, you can still be a tennis star,” he said.
“Whatever, my tennis career is over from now,” I said
“No, don’t give up, just follow the letter A” said Zan mysterious.
“What, what letter A” I said, but before he could say anything else the driver of my limo blew the horn causing me to jump.
“I have to go” I said, I didn’t wait for his reply I just wanted to get far away from anything involving tennis.

(Spoiler- Liz was 17 when she played tennis against Isabel; she planned to forget about Tennis, until she meets that stranger Zan again.)

Maria’s POV

Time to pursue my singing career; I’m going to New York. I remember begging Liz to come, but after that match against Isabel Evans a year and a half ago, Liz wasn’t out going any more. After Kyle the jerk dumped her, she began losing it, after her mom and dad gave up hope in her she lost it. I finally got her and my friend Alex to come and help me live my dream, singing. I planned everything, we go to New York, make me a big star, let Liz get back into tennis. I know some people there, and I told them to help me to let Liz go back to Tennis, but that didn’t work
1) When Liz and I were walking down the street in Liz, this boy I knew asked her if she was Liz Parker the tennis star. Of course the sad, Liz Parker said, “yea my name is Liz but I’m not a tennis star”. He tried everything, he tried to convince people on the street that she was Liz ‘Tennis’ girl, but she and everyone else denied it.
2) We were shopping for clothes and as we walked outside these other people that I knew were out there with a poster saying ‘ WE LOVE LIZ PARKER AND SHE LOVES TENNIS’, she just walked by the sign pretending that she didn’t see it.
3) Alex tried talking to her about Tennis, she dropped the subject and talked about something else
4) I tried talking to her, guess what she dropped the subject and talked about something else

I’ve tried everything I just can’t do it, she is never going back to tennis ever, I guess but I do hope she does because she is too depressed without it.

Alex’s POV

“I’ve decided to get a tattoo,” I said to Maria and Liz
“Yea right Alex, you mean a temporary one,” said Maria.
I think I’m going to go through with this, I need a change, and I need to stop being a baby.
“I am going to do it, just watch, anyone wants to join me?” I said while looking at Liz. Of course she was too busy admiring her nails, what is it with girls when they just went to the nail salon.
“I want to see this, I want to see him run out of the place screaming it hurts, it hurts” said Maria while laughing.
“Shut up, I’m going to do it, just watch, I’m going now,” I said feeling shaky a little.
“Chica you coming” said Maria to Liz, but Liz didn’t hear her. “Chica” said Maria louder.
“Yea,” said Liz
I could remember when Liz would be daring me to do things, but now she didn’t even care.
“I’m going to get a tattoo, you coming?” I said.
“Yea, whatever” said Liz disinterested.

I am scared, what if it hurts, a lot, what if I cry when Liz and Maria are there, what if I run out like Maria said screaming IT HURTS, IT HURTS, and the needle didn’t even touch me.
I walked up to the place that Maria said she saw one day when she was walking on the street. Yes, It was closed.
“Oh well, guess we can’t do it today or tomorrow, or ever” I said about to turn around to leave, but Maria stopped me.
“Don’t chicken out yet, look across the street,” Maria said turning her face across the street.
I looked over to Liz but she was starring at her feet, I was really worried about her, she needed some tennis medicine or something.
I then looked across the street, there it was, a tattoo and piercing shop. I gulped taking in a deep breath. It was called ‘A to the Z’ I wonder what that means.
I followed Maria across the street, while Liz followed me.
We entered the store, big tough men, and mean looking ladies were in there.
“Hello every body, my friend here Alexander wants a tattoo, now make sure you hold him in so he won’t run away” I heard Maria say. I blushed at hearing Maria and the people in the shop laugh at Maria’s comment.
“I’ll take good care of him” said a tough, built women with a tattoo on her left cheek. I silently whispered Help to Liz as the women put me in a seat, but Liz was too busy looking at her nails again.

Liz’s POV

I wanted to get out of the shop and run home to cry in my bed again. I couldn’t stand it anymore; everyone gave up on me, my parents, my friends, except for Maria and Alex. Or maybe they gave up on me too. Alex was getting his a tattoo on his arm, I could see tears in his eyes, but he held it up pretty well. Maria was talking to this guy, with a tattoo on his arm named Michael but everyone called him Rath.
“Do you want anything, little thing, tattoo, piercing” said a man walking up to me.
I was about to say no but remembered that I had wanted my belly pierced for so long. “Umm, how about my belly pierced.” I said.
I looked at Alex, a tear had dropped out of his eye; know one noticed it but me. Some people might of thought that he was weak, but that just made him cuter, to me.
“Follow the A,” said a voice.
“Excuse Me,” I said. It was the man I was talking to early at my belly piercing.
“There are A’s on the floor, it leads to the man Z, he’ll pierce your belly for you.
“Ok” I said now feeling a little scared. I looked down on the floor and followed the A. That was soo Matrix.
It lead me to a dark room, okay I’m feeling a bit too scared now.
I heard a moan from a side of the room.
I tried to look for a switch; I let my hand feel everywhere.
I felt a warm sensation when I felt something. I rubbed all over it trying to see what it was.
The light went on, I immediately turned my head to the entrance I just came from. A man was standing there with his arm folded. “Not again Zan” the man said.
I saw the man’s eyes lead to where he was looking, as I turned around my jaw fell open. There was a naked tattooed back facing me, I was touching a naked tattooed back, and that naked tattooed back was doing some girl. The naked tattooed back turned around revealing his face. It was Max, what a minute Zan. Zan was the naked tattooed back man doing a girl. Right there and then I fainted, leaving behind all that I saw. Zan the naked tattooed man, the girl he was doing, the man at the entrance door, and my life.


LOOK OUT FOR CHAPTER 3 OF THE STORY ‘LOVE AND TENNIS’
Spoiler- Liz realizes that Tennis is her life and so is a certain man.

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posted on 27-Jan-2002 8:17:36 PM
Glad people are liking this I'll post soon
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Thanks for the feedback...
Yes she faintsss.... and yes Zan was doing some girl
I think by doing that it makes it more interesting LOLOLOLOL
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posted on 28-Jan-2002 9:10:32 PM
Title: Love & Tennis
Author: SWEETASPEACHES
Couple: I don’t know yet, but read to find out
Summary- Liz is a tennis player struggling to make it to the top, read the rest to find out the rest of the story.
Author’s Note: I don’t owe anything; I don’t even know much about tennis LOL
Please don’t sue; I’m just a struggling writer.




You must be tired of me; I’ve written a lot of stories, 1 after the other, Well just check this one out PLEEZ AND GIVE ME FEEDBACK
I’M Waiting………………………………


(FROM PREVIOUS CHAPTER)


It lead me to a dark room, okay I’m feeling a bit too scared now.
I heard a moan from a side of the room.
I tried to look for a switch; I let my hand feel everywhere.
I felt a warm sensation when I felt something. I rubbed all over it trying to see what it was.
The light went on, I immediately turned my head to the entrance I just came from. A man was standing there with his arm folded. “Not again Zan” the man said.
I saw the man’s eyes lead to where he was looking, as I turned around my jaw fell open. There was a naked tattooed back facing me, I was touching a naked tattooed back, and that naked tattooed back was doing some girl. The naked tattooed back turned around revealing his face. It was Max, what a minute Zan. Zan was the naked tattooed back man doing a girl. Right there and then I fainted, leaving behind all that I saw. Zan the naked tattooed man, the girl he was doing, the man at the entrance door, and my life.



CHAPTER 3


Liz’s POV
I woke to be blinded by light. That light was sunlight. My belly was hurting a little. I tried to remember what just happened, I only remembered going into a shop and seeing Alex cry. I was lying on a bed, but it wasn’t my bed. My bed was soft and fluffy, this bed was hard but still comfy, but it still was a little weird laying on it. As I was about to sit up in the bed, I felt a sharp pain around my belly button. I realized I was wearing an oversized T-shirt. I lifted the T-shirt up revealing a ring in my belly button. That’s funny I didn’t remember getting my belly pierced. All the memories flooded back into my mind, when Alex was crying, when Maria was talking to Michael or Rath whatever his name was, The letter A, a naked tattooed back, Zan’s back. I looked around the room feeling a bit of discomfort, I looked at the clock it was 11:00 A.M. I kept looking around until my eyes landed on several pictures, of Zan. I realized that I was in Zan’s apartment; I immediately jumped onto the floor, ignoring the pain in my belly. I was alone in Zan’s apartment, in Zan’s bedroom, where was Maria, where was Alex. I was walking to the door when my eyes landed upon a picture; I went over to the table where the picture was on. It was a picture of me. I remember when they were doing an exclusive of new Tennis players. I was wearing a mini-dress with a tennis racket in my hand. “I see you’ve seen my collection,” said Zan startling me, I knocked over the picture, which revealed a whole lot of pictures of me underneath the first picture of me. “Are you some kind of stalker?” I said referring to the pictures. “What can I say, I like girls in mini-dresses, who play tennis” he said with a cute adorable smile on his lips. “So your saying that the girl you were doing in the shop played tennis, and I guess I didn’t see her in a mini-dress but as a matter of fact she didn’t have anything on.” I said. I could see the blushing coming up to his face. “What am I doing here?”
“I figured you passed out because my back was to good for you, but I still felt sorry about you seeing my nakedness and you didn’t even get some of what I was doing to Sarah, by the way is her name, your friends are in the other room eating breakfast, you can join us if you want” he said in one quick breathe.

Zan’s POV
I was sitting at the breakfast table eating silly rabbit Trix are for kids. I was looking at Liz the whole time, I knew what she could do, but why was I so anxious to bring her life back to Tennis, maybe because 1) I want to show my sister and brother that I am not the loser I’m the man or 2) I have feelings for this girl and don’t want to see her suffer. Whichever one it is, she’s going to be the best goddamn tennis player ever. Melissa, Matilda, Maria or what ever her name is, told me about all the plans that she tried to make Liz come to her senses, but it didn’t work. It was my turn now. I looked over to Maria or Melissa giving her the signal to say that I was ready, I saw her nudge Alexander or Alex, at least it’s easier to remember his name it’s the same as mine Alexander (nickname ZAN) Evans. They both left, Maria or Melissa went to the bathroom and Alex went outside to get some breeze. After they left I could feel Liz getting uncomfortable, she was moving this way and that way. “So you gave up Tennis, why” I said giving it too her direct.
“None of your business” she said not even looking up.

“Your mom and dad shouldn’t have given up on you, and your boyfriend lost something real special”. She looked up at me, at first in her eyes was comfort, and sadness, then that turned into anger, and frustration. “What is this some kind of set-up, how the hell do you know about that?” she screamed. I could see her eyes fill with water. I didn’t want to see her cry.
“Maria and Alex put you up to this huh! Or you just want to do me! Or you just want to make my life more miserable than it all ready is!” She screamed out the last part, sending down millions of tears from her doe eyes. I walked over there and took her in my arms, preparing for my speech I had set up, forget about that speech I thought, how about going straight from the heart, what mushy crap.


“You know what you are incredible, in and outside of that court, you’ve been too long with out tennis and it’s tearing you apart. It’s not only tearing you apart but also your friends. Like Melissa,” “Maria” she said interrupting.
“ Yea Maria and Alex, they love you so much, they care about you, and I know that you are the best, better than the rest, forget about your parents, they gave up on you, show them that your all that and more, show them what their missing especially your boyfriend. So them all, even me. You have to follow your heart.” I stretched out my hand. “If you take my hand, I’ll lead you further than you’ve ever imagined, I’ll help you with tennis, I’ll be there for you, if not then just walk out that door, let me just warn you that if you walk you’ll be what your parents think you are, a loser, a person who gives up.” “SO WHAT WILL IT BE?” I said ending my speech. I pulled her slightly away, lifting her chin with my thumb; I looked her in the eyes.
I looked into her eyes, I saw her hesitantly lift her hand up, she placed it on top of mine, never removing her eye from mine. “Teach me,” she said. It was music to my ears.





Spoiler- Liz is practicing for tennis with Zan, but she realizes that she has tough competition. Tess is one of them, and Zan is flirting with Tess. Can Liz reach up to Isabel the ‘Star’ or be held down by Tess. All she knows is that its’ WAR.

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posted on 29-Jan-2002 4:08:11 PM
Sorry I'll edit it, I'm doing it rite now

Sorry 4 confusion